10:53 ztrot: alright looks as if you have the taiko okay
10:54 -GN: yeah, took a bit of discussion but we got it bubbled still
10:55 ztrot: 00:41:319 (3) - the easy diff I would new combo here it works with the 1,1,1, combo pattern you have
10:56 ztrot: other than that every thing seems fine on this map 01:47:319 (2) - oh this one too.
10:56 -GN: i'm not so sure, i find it links with the two sounds before that
10:56 -GN: the same thing was done in Light, though
10:56 ztrot: hmm
10:56 ztrot: well lets hold off on those then and look it over in each set
10:57 -GN: agreed on #2 however
10:57 ztrot: okay
10:58 ztrot: light 00:18:986 (3) - this is a bit on the nazi side but do you think you could improve on this blanket the sliders after this one are blanketed so snug seeing this one out of place a bit is jarring not affecting gameplay as much but makking the map set look as clean as possible.
11:00 ztrot: http://puu.sh/4dWAA.jpg like that if possible
11:00 -GN: hm yeah i see
11:00 ztrot: smooth out the edges
11:01 ztrot: http://puu.sh/4dWDo.jpg 00:52:819 (3) - I don't suggest having a overlap like this on a eaiser diff
11:02 ztrot: due to low ar and sv patters like that can be confusing
11:02 -GN: hm you're not the first to point out that
11:02 -GN: i'll try to construct the pattern in a different way
11:02 ztrot: Thanks
11:03 ztrot: 01:02:653 (1) - this is so sexy very nice work!
11:03 -GN: thanks o:
11:05 ztrot: also this is just a pre of mine but I think you should avoid using colors that resemble the fail colors when playing in a multi game that can confuse players
11:05 ztrot: normally I suggest to stay away from gray or white combo colors unless they are offset with the next combo color being very vivid
11:06 ztrot: but your combo color choice seems to be very light based
11:06 -GN: hm yeah
11:06 -GN: they're all arranged in a gradient of sorts
11:07 ztrot: of course this is just a personal tip nothing that would hold it back feel free to change it if you want
11:07 -GN: i'll try to saturate the most gray colors a little more, but i don't think i want to change it very much from what i have
11:08 ztrot: That diff seems to be more or less good lets move on to the next diff shall we?
11:08 -GN: sure
11:10 ztrot: 00:57:153 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this kinda threw me off at 1st just looking at it but after testing it twice it seems to be fine just keep on the look out that modders might try and say something about it.
11:10 ztrot: advanced btw
11:12 -GN: well, the whole map is basically a blanketfest so getting accustomed to the style at that point should make the fact there's a slider there obvious... enough
11:12 ztrot: 01:21:319 (1) - I was gonna say this was off then I saw the slider under it and was like
11:12 -GN: yeah it has that effect
11:13 -GN: it's kind of a weird thing but it's such a surprise which i think is neat lol
11:16 ztrot: well it looks like this diff has been fine combed for errors
11:20 ztrot: hmm
11:20 ztrot: seems like there are some unsnapped notes possibly
11:21 -GN: well about those
11:21 -GN: it's kind of complex
11:21 -GN: but the song has a quite dominant piano pattern at that part
11:21 -GN: which does not follow any kind of pattern or snapping
11:21 -GN: so i had to assign millisecond values to every note to get the timing just right
11:22 ztrot: has it been confirmed with any other BAT?
11:22 ztrot: I think stuff like that is supposed to be aligned with redsections
11:22 ztrot: no matter how goofy it may look
11:22 -GN: it's been discussed rather extensively with CXu and Saten
11:23 ztrot: also I can't help but notice a error in you SB
11:23 -GN: i fear that would screw with other difficulties which map it slightly different, though, but hm
11:23 ztrot: http://puu.sh/4dXtC.jpg
11:24 ztrot: it does that during the transition of colors
11:24 ztrot: it cuts off part of the image
11:24 -GN: oh yeah the small box is to imitate the letterboxing
11:24 -GN: previously the red flash.png appeared on top
11:24 -GN: it's not visible in-game, though
11:24 ztrot: ahh
11:25 ztrot: alright then
11:27 -GN: (it's slightly... hackish but it works so i guess it's alright)
11:27 ztrot: well everything looks okay for the most part I'll give a bubble but I'm going to ask that the ranking BAT look in to that a bit more.
11:28 ztrot: that okay?
11:28 -GN: hm alright

Frostmourne wrote: 4k533o

okay

Beginner
00:46:153 (1) - This slider tail needs to be finish with a clap. I'm sure it's missing because they were introduced around 00:43:319 (1,1) - done
01:46:986 (1,2) - This spacing looks a big out of place, shouldn't they look like 01:38:986 (2,3,4) - or something like this? slightly reduced spacing down to 1.00x again, and made it slightly prettier
02:10:819 (2,3) - Some new combo like this on other parts were ok to me (looking past) but for this one, I guess they aren't that necessary. one of them gosh darned gradients found in every map sans Dizco's Advanced
Cool Beginner, everything is on music nicely.

Light
00:51:153 (1) - nazi, I suggest you remove this NC and add NC at 00:52:486 (3) - , they look in order more than before that works

Stopped now, I will continue later. o:

EDIT: what a surprise ztrot you bubbled it O_o
too ninja

Frostmourne wrote: 4k533o

ok, let's continue lol

Light
01:26:653 (1) - this slider needs clap on both head and tail in order to maintain the sound along with 01:27:653 (4) - and 01:29:319 (1,2) - only applied to head. if you listen to it again you can hear i use emphasis on three beats 3/2 from each other, so tail would be inconsistent.
01:37:653 (4,1) - well, this spacing is completely error and hard to notice for normal diff like this indeed, i think that's the byproduct of a remap - changed
01:50:653 (2) - finish only head of this slider as you did something similar in Beginner ok

Dizco's Advanced
01:59:653 (5,6) - This sounds rhythmically wrong. Problem,which lies on the certain point, is the piano sounds blatantly on 01:59:486 but you have no note here. (according to piano, you can clearly hear that as well)
It can cause confusing with your current spacing as well (1.2 -> 0.6) on 1/2 beat placements .
This screenshot is what is supposed to be.[/color]
decent diff.

Hyper
01:40:985 (5) - unsnapped no idea how that happened but fixed!

Another
As ztrot mentioned about unsnapped things, let me input something and I will consult with Nymph either
02:04:439 (2) - This should be 1/6 on 02:04:431 i give up
02:04:653 (1) - This should end 1/12 (object ends at 02:04:847) i give up
02:05:060 (2) - This should be on 1/6 (object is at 02:05:042) i give up
02:05:903 (2) - This starts on 1/6 (at 02:05:875 to follow piano sound which is the most obvious in this section) and then ends at 1/4 on 02:06:069 (use 1/12 signature to help making them) this is snapped, though, i think? it does at least fit now

That's all, I will rebubble after this.

Nymph wrote: 2w2f1l

Maybe take a look at my mod too so I don;t have to post it after it is rebubbled

Ahh and I need to post this image <3
o:

[General]
02:17:319 - since the volumn of the music is becoming lower and lower now, maybe you can make the sound of the spinner lower too,from 90 to 70 50 30 -->5 and the spinner ends. (if you decide to change this you may wanna to do it in every diff) woah, that's a fair point. done this for every diff


[Hyper]
00:51:986 (6) - the overlap is kinda ugly here, maybe increase the spacing between these note 1-5 then get enough room for note 6? done

01:40:985 (5) - aimod said it is unsnap here 0_0 just click the resnap all it would be fine yeah, frostmourne said the same


[Advanced]
01:59:653 (5,6) - the spacing is kinda hard to read, I didn't realize the spacing suddenly change from 1.2 to 0.6 so.. I think maybe keep the 1.2spacing is better ^ - something weird happened i think, pretty sure the spacing wasn't supposed to be like that