Leader wrote: 4e6a22

I testplayed Another and I have something to say before it's totally ready to go.

[Another]

1. 00:08:157 (4,5) - I'd stack them i think it plays better with the spacing
2. 00:10:490 (4,5) - What about changing pattern rhythm to this one http://puu.sh/456Lk.jpg? I think it fill well one of these 1/1 breaks. seems to work out nicely
3. 00:33:157 (1) - A 1/1 slider will works great after that tough pattern, i think a minor break fits well - it's also fitting considering the full stop-feeling of this moment in the song
4. 00:46:990 (4) - Can you curve it a bit while keeping the same direction? Nicer to see sure
5. 00:51:990 (6,1,2,3) - That really breaks map flow in my opinion: even if it's a calm part of the song, I found it awkward to play. I'd replace circles with sliders, in this way http://puu.sh/456XV.jpg i'd rather keep this part as is, following the piano with circles is the only way i can get in more fun patterns in a hectic song like this
6. 00:58:990 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, but since rhythm here is different from general one, you can keep it ~ same reason
7. 01:00:323 (5) - Replace with a 1/2 slider, you are missing a quite loud sound in 01:00:490 i see, added
8. 01:06:490 (5) - I'd replace with a triplet or a 1/2 slider i don't think that fits all that well with the style i'm going for in this spot, though
9. 01:25:323 (1,2,3) - Well, kinda bad to see, at least stack (1) on (2) functionally this just changes the direction and cuts the spacing between the notes in half - i don't think it's weird looking at all, plus it makes the 1/4 1/2 1/4 hits easier to read
10. 01:29:157 - There's a sound which needs to be mapped imo, so you can fix this as I said in 01:00:323 (5) that works
11. 01:51:323 (4) - 1/2 slider suggestion as above i think the stream fits better with a 1/1 space in front of it, just like 00:47:323 (5,1)
12. 01:51:657 (5,6,7,8,1) - well, they are really bad to see in my opinion ;~;, it would be cool if they were stacked to slider or more spaced (I'd choose the first one) they're basically just a stack in a reversed direction, i think stacking them wouldn't change anything but rather look weird
13. 01:57:490 (6) - You can try this http://puu.sh/457KO.jpg i added one, but pointed it towards the left more so it wouldn't overlap with the next (4)

Map is really good, it reminds me of Shiirn's style, and I think I'm not be the only one who will notice that haha. that's what i wanted to convey - he was a great inspiration!
I've just pointed out what I felt while playing: all these 1/1 breaks (or even more) which can interrupt flow badly, care of checking this stuff through the map and it'll become even better as it is, in my opinion. So, good luck~ gotta say i disagree there - i think a map can flow even without constant pressure! but i guess it's a matter of style - thanks for the mod, though!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 211,211,209
Combo2 : 158,152,137
Combo3 : 112,109,103
Combo4 : 194,175,107
Combo5 : 147,118,64
Combo6 : 217,177,119
Combo7 : 215,199,162

Jenny wrote: 656v3l

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Mod request by Dizco o:
Just a little polishment before you get this ranked o3o

[General]

Combo Colours 1 and 2 are very similar to each other (same for 3,4,5), please distinguish them a bit more? It's confusing as it currently is. minor changes only, the colors are somewhat close to each other for the sake of a gimmick - taken a bit more care to use different combo colors adjacent to each other where i want it, though

box

[Beginner]

01:02:657 (1) - you can balance this slider more out, fairly easy changed a little bit so it resembles your positions, but to be honest i don't really see much of a change but whatever
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01:38:990 (2) - this slider feels too close to 1, you can simply move it up a bit (move to 27|248 and take 3 and 4 along with it) done
01:47:323 (2) - feels a bit too close to previous 2 that was the original intention, i screwed up somewhere during the last mods i think
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01:57:990 (2) - add another sliderpoint before the red one so you can make this blanket 1's end better yeah i see, changed
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02:14:323 (2) - just me but i feel like you should move this elsewhere, as where it currently is, there have already been so many objects... 303|297 looks about fine to me the 180 degree flip jump is a recurring feature in the ending that i'd like to keep consistent - i rotated the previous combo so that it's not cluttered anymore, however


[Light]

00:33:157 (1) - i'd say remove this new combo because this is just the end of the musical pattern you mapped before, no new one i'd like to keep this emphasis on the finish, it's present everywhere else
00:33:657 (1) - you can improve this blanket here done, checked with cs7 and it seems ok
02:06:657 (3) - this is very picky, but you can improve this aswell without major effort tried, did same thing


[Hyper]

00:26:157 (4,5) - i find this jump a bit sudden, as you didn't have any before, but I suppose it's bearable if you don't want to change anything about it i think it plays well, but i guess it's a bit sudden - reduced the spacing a little, though
00:51:990 (6) - as this note has quite an impact in the music (and ed by the normal-hitnormal on it), i'd say it would do better right in the middle of 1-5, as that's directly connected to a sharp turn in angle and therefore help it stand out even more well, i guess that works
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00:55:157 (1,2) - having these two normal-hitnormals 1/2 from each other, it feels more like they should be one object, so I'd recommoend you to melt these two and just make a 5*1/4 slider out of them because currently, it's confusing to play, as only the scond slider has an impact on its start and that's not very optimal, especially when playing this map the first time better than what i had, i think - it solves the weird playability of this part so applied
01:34:323 (3) - you can make a better slider without a red point ok, removed red point and rearranged the
01:55:823 (2) - i am not okay with this slider, as it starts on a weaker beat than it ends on; if you want to use a slider in this combo, do it on the white tick before, but do not start it on the red one here, that's rhythmically incorrect and bad to play changed
02:00:907 (3) - considering that this is 1/2 after 2, the distance is very little and it currently will very likely be missinterpreted as a 1/4 distance, so... i'd advise you to move this further away from 2 because of the unpredictability of the song at this point, i reduced the distance by half so that it would leave some room even if you held the 1/8 slider a bit longer than you should have - i checked and tested this specific part with doubletime, and reducing the distance seemed to be easier to sightread. i increased it by a little bit again, but i'm a bit unsure whether this will be problematic for first-time players still.


[Another]

Drain 8, uh? Sounds a bit high, but the map doesn't seem too demanding, so that should be okay. intended to be a high-pressure map, with some control and stamina needed to . no spamming here

00:22:490 (6,7,1) - these notes may be overlapped by hitbursts from 00:20:490 (3,4,5,6,7) - so maybe move them away to be absolutely certain no issue with either new or old default hitbursts, no change
00:24:156 (4,5,6,7,8) - i don't like how you have to play 4 1/4 notes after this slider, while it should be 5 actively played notes (because that's what it's mapped like), consider removing the reverse arrow and just mapping it as a 1/2 slider + 5*1/4? i can't find any solution that would look alright and not be very flow-breaking in this part - no change here
00:28:990 (9,10,11) - ^similar case you've pointed out a lot of these - i think these are good for both playability and aesthetics. i'm denying them all simply because i don't see the point of changing them and i believe it'd detract from the fun of the map
00:34:323 (1,2,3) - ^
00:34:990 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:45:157 (2,3,4) - this, however, is okay, as the emphasis is put on the actively played notes (-> 3,4) by hitsounding 3
01:08:823 (3) - similar thing as with 00:24:156 and other mentioned cases
01:10:657 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:323 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^
01:26:657 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:157 (1) - this slider is put the wrong way around, rhythmically: you start it on the weak sound and end it on the strong one, while it should be the other way around - the start of the slider is its strong part, not the end, and therefore you should change this in order to emphasize the song properly changed this as well as its counterpart 00:17:323 (1), with a slight variation considering the old version's improbably convenient location
01:32:823 (5) - ^ ^
01:37:657 (3,4,5,6,7) - similar case as with 00:24:156 again
01:38:823 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
01:44:323 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:45:157 (8) - similar as 01:32:157 this is a mistake in hitsounding on my part - the strongest sound is the middle circle, but with a whistle at the end to represent the piano sound(you can hear the other piano sounds in this part). it would not matter if i made this a triple ending on a slider or made a repeating 1/4 slider like i do now - but personally i think this flows better
01:55:490 (1,2,3) - similar to both 00:24:156 and 01:32:157 changed into two circles instead, it adds a bit to the pattern after
02:09:323 (1,2) - this is wrong. either map it as one one-time reverse 1/3 slider+ circle/slider or map it as 4 hits (3 circles + 1 slider or 4 circles). currently, you are mapping this in two sliders, resulting in a 1-2-1-2 pattern, in which each "2" is a ive hitsound because there is no active participation of the player required, while the music practically goes 1-2-3-4 or 1-1-1-1, and can be mapped only in either of these ways, so please redesign this i had a bit of a hard time figuring out just what to put, but i decided on a small square and that seemed ok
02:13:101 (2,3) - ^ (you even map this as 2-1-2-1 here and that's even more wrong :<) ended up having to do 2-1-1-1, removing the slider felt too awkward and harder to read(the stack) so i left it at that

Frostmourne wrote: 4k533o

okay

Beginner
00:46:153 (1) - This slider tail needs to be finish with a clap. I'm sure it's missing because they were introduced around 00:43:319 (1,1) - done
01:46:986 (1,2) - This spacing looks a big out of place, shouldn't they look like 01:38:986 (2,3,4) - or something like this? slightly reduced spacing down to 1.00x again, and made it slightly prettier
02:10:819 (2,3) - Some new combo like this on other parts were ok to me (looking past) but for this one, I guess they aren't that necessary. one of them gosh darned gradients found in every map sans Dizco's Advanced
Cool Beginner, everything is on music nicely.

Light
00:51:153 (1) - nazi, I suggest you remove this NC and add NC at 00:52:486 (3) - , they look in order more than before that works

Stopped now, I will continue later. o:

EDIT: what a surprise ztrot you bubbled it O_o
too ninja

Frostmourne wrote: 4k533o

ok, let's continue lol

Light
01:26:653 (1) - this slider needs clap on both head and tail in order to maintain the sound along with 01:27:653 (4) - and 01:29:319 (1,2) - only applied to head. if you listen to it again you can hear i use emphasis on three beats 3/2 from each other, so tail would be inconsistent.
01:37:653 (4,1) - well, this spacing is completely error and hard to notice for normal diff like this indeed, i think that's the byproduct of a remap - changed
01:50:653 (2) - finish only head of this slider as you did something similar in Beginner ok

Dizco's Advanced
01:59:653 (5,6) - This sounds rhythmically wrong. Problem,which lies on the certain point, is the piano sounds blatantly on 01:59:486 but you have no note here. (according to piano, you can clearly hear that as well)
It can cause confusing with your current spacing as well (1.2 -> 0.6) on 1/2 beat placements .
This screenshot is what is supposed to be.[/color]
decent diff.

Hyper
01:40:985 (5) - unsnapped no idea how that happened but fixed!

Another
As ztrot mentioned about unsnapped things, let me input something and I will consult with Nymph either
02:04:439 (2) - This should be 1/6 on 02:04:431 i give up
02:04:653 (1) - This should end 1/12 (object ends at 02:04:847) i give up
02:05:060 (2) - This should be on 1/6 (object is at 02:05:042) i give up
02:05:903 (2) - This starts on 1/6 (at 02:05:875 to follow piano sound which is the most obvious in this section) and then ends at 1/4 on 02:06:069 (use 1/12 signature to help making them) this is snapped, though, i think? it does at least fit now

That's all, I will rebubble after this.

Nymph wrote: 2w2f1l

Maybe take a look at my mod too so I don;t have to post it after it is rebubbled

Ahh and I need to post this image <3
o:

[General]
02:17:319 - since the volumn of the music is becoming lower and lower now, maybe you can make the sound of the spinner lower too,from 90 to 70 50 30 -->5 and the spinner ends. (if you decide to change this you may wanna to do it in every diff) woah, that's a fair point. done this for every diff


[Hyper]
00:51:986 (6) - the overlap is kinda ugly here, maybe increase the spacing between these note 1-5 then get enough room for note 6? done

01:40:985 (5) - aimod said it is unsnap here 0_0 just click the resnap all it would be fine yeah, frostmourne said the same


[Advanced]
01:59:653 (5,6) - the spacing is kinda hard to read, I didn't realize the spacing suddenly change from 1.2 to 0.6 so.. I think maybe keep the 1.2spacing is better ^ - something weird happened i think, pretty sure the spacing wasn't supposed to be like that