Sey wrote: 2k481v

Light

1. 01:02:657 (1) - Just don't like the shape of this slider so much uguu... Maybe it looks better if you do it as here: http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/928369. Not 100% like that but it would be cool if it surrounds (4) a bit. changed it to a blanket for (4), but made it a long s-like shape.
2. 01:55:990 (4) - could have a similar shape as 01:54:323 (2) - maybe? good point, changed it so that it looks like the shapes in Beginner(but not aligned the same, sadly)
3. 02:03:990 (2,3) - This part could be mapped far more interesting to create a better ending feeling. For example you can make two sliders. The first one from 02:03:990 - to 02:04:323 - , the second one from 02:04:657 - to 02:04:990 - . But don't make it too difficult cos it's still a Beginner diff. i did this - somewhat iffy on the placements, but i tried several solutions and i liked this the best so ehh
4. 02:10:157 (3,1,2,1,2,1) - Wow I find it very risky only using the 1/2 sections here. Highly suggest you to use 1/1's here instead because the rhythm sounds pretty off here with the drum voices in the background. I wouldn't do that in a Beginner difficulty at least. this is made to sound like the piano in the background, but done inituitively in 1/2 beats instead of a perfect fit - as well as putting a slightly higher strain on the player, because of difficulty progression. it should be ok
5. I really don't know what else to mod here ._. This difficulty is far more than just perfect.

._. Sorry but I checked the other diffs and found absolutely nothing. No KDS please, this was just a slight recheck. Do me the favor and find a BAT for this, please. i'll do so immediately. thanks a lot, again. e: http://puu.sh/42ZzM.jpg is it happening?

Itachi_Uchiha wrote: 432f30

Beginner

1. 00:17:323 (1) - These Sliders look wether straight nor curvy / Try to make a noticable shape ok
    
2. 00:18:657 (2) - ^
    
3. 00:25:323 (4) - I give you a quick tutorial how to make a S Slider - The Startpoint and Endpoint should be on the same high - The 2 Middlepoints should be the same space away from Start/End - For Example | Startpoint - First Middlepoint 7 grids up/down and 10 grids right/left | The same with the other Middlepoint and the Endpoint | BUT the 2 Middlepoints should not be directly above each other | After that you can rotate the Slider how much you want | Here is an example for your Slider - slider.png i swear, this slider gets exponentially more retarded the more i look at it. slider made into a more curvy shape
    
4. 00:26:657 (1,2) - I would suggest to adjust it like this to avoid an overlap with the S Slider - adjustment.png the (4) slider was moved slightly, no more overlap now
    
5. 00:27:657 (3) - I would suggest to make it like this. This way you get a Burst on the new Slider together with the Piano. Also you can start a New COmbo there - replacement.png reversed circle and slider, but removed the repeat and made it a 2/1 length instead
    
6. 00:31:157 (4) - This one is a tiny little bit too low - Get to Grid:Tiny and adjust it one osupixel, actually, but yes
    
7. 00:31:157 (4) - Also there is an Clap on this one, which, in my opinion, doesn´t sound right - You may want to change it? changed to whistle
    
8. 00:32:823 (1) - The New Combo there doesn´t fit - You may want to change it? i kept this for emphasis on the finish beat. it's been done like this in most other diffs
    
9. 00:44:823 (1,1) - So it does on these 2 this is a reference to Light's system for this part
    
10. 01:27:990 (1) - Blank this with the previous (2) for a better flow i assume you mean "stack", but done
     
11. 01:45:323 (2) - This one single sharp/curved Slider comes out of nothing - Try to make it to a straight/curved one too i'd like to keep it, it's subtly blanketed around the next (2) - it also doesn't feel out of place. i'll consider it if others think it's wrong, though
     
12. 02:10:823 (1,1) - Here again - Delete the New Combos this is one of the combo color gradients present in other parts of the mapset - it's an aesthetical, unifyingl feature and i'm not going to remove it until i get an actual reason for it, sorry
     
13. 02:13:657 (1) - Here too ^
     
14. 02:14:490 (1) - Start the Spinner here - 02:14:990 (1) - And let it End here - 02:18:657 (1) - So that New Players have more time to react that there is a Spinner i think it should be alright, it's four seconds long and does not require more than a 160-170 average spin to 300

Light

1. 00:22:990 (1,3) - These 2 End/Start way out of the grid - Try to put them more up
    
2. 00:50:990 (1) - I would suggest that you start that Slider on the red tick - That way it starts with the Piano which is the main instrument you mapped on in this Part good point
    
3. 01:02:657 (1) - It would be too awesome if you could add a note in the upper Space in the Slider seems to work out nicely, did that
    
4. 01:10:656 (1) - No need to New Combo there emphasis on the finish is a valid reason imo
    
5. 02:14:490 (1) - Same as in Beginner same reason

Disco's Advanced

1. Are all these Inherited Points needed? well, it's his hitsounding style and i don't really think i should mess much with that
    
2. The Placing and blanking is stunning - I would recommend AR=8 so that you can better play the hidden notes under some sliders AR8 is total overkill considering Hyper is quite a bit harder and that one uses AR8 - put AR7 instead because of a suggestion by Maddy earlier

Hyper

1. AR+1 would be perfect on the map^^ AR9? are you suuuure that's a good idea, because i'm not
    
2. 00:15:907 (1) - Why is this SPinner starting on a blue? Move it to the white and adjust the size it's mapped to the breathing sound which starts on the blue tick
    
3. 00:41:323 (3) - Make the Middlepoints a bit more up/down so that the Slider don`t have these sharp curves slight change
    
4. 00:43:323 (1,2) - Spacing is incorrect - Adjust it please yeah i screwed up the snapping somehow, it should be ok now
    
5. 00:51:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make it a 6 Point Tornado so that the (6) is not on the same place as (1) for better flow i disagree, i like the full circling better
    
6. 01:08:990 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - All these New Combos D: dem gradients explained in Beginner
    
7. 01:17:323 (1,1) - Here too
    
8. 01:51:990 (1,1,1,1,1) - Again >.<
    
9. 02:03:990 (1,1,1) - Ahh I´m in New Combo Land xD :D

Another

1. 00:15:990 (1) - Here too - Why on the blue? mapped to breathing sound
    
2. Not much to say here - The diff is good - Except some New Combos - These New Combos are on the same places as I mentioned them in the other diffs - Just look over it again and adjust them^^ i think i denied all the NC suggestions with explanations, so i find every instance fitting here

Konei wrote: 451331

Yo, I was asked to check hitsounds here. i mentioned it to Irre so yeah


[Another]

1. 00:15:907 (1) - Tho I wanna check hitsounds, this irks me. I don't see any reason to start this on the blue tick, it's also too sudden and unfiting the music and it just doesn't follow the beat correctly. Starting this on the downbeat feels a lot better. it's mapped to the breathing sound in the background - it's not the reversed cymbal people are talking about. is it really that inaudible?
2. 00:19:657 (7) - Try to add a whistle here aswell to catch the high patch? Feels better. yeah
3. 00:22:490 (6) - I don't feel very comfortable to have the heavy beat on a repeating Sliderend, I'd rather change this to a triple and start a Slider on the downbeat. i see, changed
4. 00:24:990 (2) - Same thing as on the other drum tone. you mean adding a whistle? did that
5. 00:25:240 (4) - I wouldn't use a whistle here because it sounds offbeat and gives a wrong emphasis to the drums, I'd move the whistle to the downbeat or leave it completely out. it was put there because of the higher pitch in the music on that note - but considering i put a whistle on 00:24:990 (2), removing it sounds better
6. 00:27:323 (1) - NC placement here is really wry; I'd rather remove the NC here as it is pretty useless and spliting the combo while it's just strange. good point
7. 00:32:657 (5) - I'd move this a bit farther away from 4, it looks a bit untidy while they look as if they'd overlap. i don't get what you mean by looking as if they'd overlap, they're clearly spaced - it's also hard enough as is while conveying the feeling of a very small loop
8. 00:32:990 (7) - Is it just me? I don't mean to hear a sound on the blue tick, according to this you should replace this kick Slider by a note. there is an audible sound at the blue tick, listen closer
9. 01:34:323 (7) - Same thing as on the previous spots. still assuming you mean whistles here, added
10. 01:39:657 (2) - And here again. ^
11. 01:43:323 (6) - You could try to use a whistle here in order to follow the piano; but you may aswell leave it because it follows the drums aswell, see what you prefer. first four sound alright
12. 01:43:990 (10) - Whistle for the same reason as above, but I would really add it here to prevent this note from sounding empty.
13. 01:44:657 (4) - Same here.
14. 01:45:157 (8) - Same on the end here.
15. 01:45:823 (10) - And the start here, I guess you get the idea of following the piano with whistles, so if you find them fiting you can use them accordingly. i feel like this should be left empty instead - as for your suggestion, i'll take a look.

Well, that's pretty much it.

In my opinion, hitsounding is pretty good, fiting the song and is more than solid.

Good luck :> thanks!

Irreversible wrote: 4i6z36

My tuuuurn! From QAT-Queue~ you're all fantastic

[General]

About the combo colors, sometimes i think they are too similar, for example the brown. Sometimes it is brown, NC, and you can barely tell that it is another combo color. You should fix that, to see the difference more easily. alright - made the lighter colors somewhat shinier(+saturation and brightness), and added more contrast to the three golden colors

There are some unsnapped things, no need to snap the green lines, just mentioning them. [/color]

[Beginner]

Snapping Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 02:18:474 - snap to 02:18:490 sure
00:50:157 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. sure
01:54:323 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. sure

00:11:323 (1) - Do you think this NC is needed? Because I'm not sure about it, I can't hear anything like a new part. i've put emphasis on this part because it's a short 1/4 stream, see Another
00:22:657 (1,2) - Add a whistle on both slider ends? For consistency ok
00:29:157 (2) - This bothers me a bit, and I'm not sure how good a beginner can follow this red tick. If you think it's fine, leave it. But if you're worried as well, you could place it on a white tick I suppse. i think it's fine - anything else would make the beat placement weird

00:32:823 (1) - This NC is not needed as well, it lets the beginner recover too much HP what makes it boring, i'd remove it. it's for emphasis on the finish, but the point you're making is an interesting one. increased HP drain by 1, to put higher focus on doing well to pressure the player
00:35:990 (3) - Add some silent hitsound here? Seems so empty without. added clap
00:43:490 (1) - Move this one to the red tick? The white on is quite missleading. i think it's alright, the player is going to look at the approach circle anyway because it's hard to understand the song in this specific part
00:44:823 (1) - Also, i'm not sure about this NC. i don't think the piano+heavy finish should be counted as the same parts - this also helps alleviating the problem the previous point had
00:52:490 (1) - I have another rhythm suggestion here. http://puu.sh/44Oe0.jpg Try this! i don't think i should put the emphasis on the sliderend with the clap here, no change
00:59:323 (3) - http://puu.sh/44Ofg.jpg This would lead in the next circle way better. indeed, changed
01:23:157 (2) - Move this slider to 01:22:657 - and reverse it. It'd give everything a nice rhythm consistency. The rhythm is also easier to get! not sure what you hope to accomplish by making that big of a jump - i added a circle, though, it seemed fitting

01:34:490 (1) - NC? I mean combos shouldn't exceed 5 or something, but 2 is a bit leass. alright, changed
01:37:657 (1) - What is this following exactly? Quite missleading as well, i would use a rhythm which you can clearly follow. instead of closely following the piano at this specific part, which would probably result in uninituitive beat placement, i decided to do a simple 2/1 rhythm following the upbeats - the sounds are audible so it should be ok

01:30:323 (3) - Move this one a bit to the top, to it shows a nice triangle pattern. it was already a triangle - however, the space between the slidertrack and (3) was a bit less than it should have been, so rotated (2,3) a bit
01:45:323 (2) - Make the slider start a bit louder, it might cause problem because of that rule that it's not audible hm, ok
01:47:490 (3) - Same as above, you should use a little slider from the red tick here. (there is the same rhythm above!) i don't get what you mean
01:57:990 (2) - Could you improve that blanket? //nazi :3 alright, rechecked it and it seems ok now
02:07:157 (4) - Again a blanket, just move it a tiny bit. i had to check this with CS7, haha - it's okay now though
02:08:657 (1,2,1,1,1) - This NC spam is not needed, I really can just advise you doing that different that's one of the combo gradients, an aesthetic feature which exists in all the difficulties of the map - i'm keeping them

Pretty solid diff!

[Light]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 02:18:474 - snap to 02:18:490

00:17:323 (1) - Move to 264 204 to fix the blanket~ http://puu.sh/450fV.jpg i disagree - that looks wrong. i did change it a bit though, it should be right now
00:21:657 (2,3,1) - Well, the overall pattern looks good but it bothers me that it looks like it has a different DS. http://puu.sh/44Psm.jpg This would be better. changed a bit, but i'm worried it might be slightly off-grid
00:24:323 (3) - Fix the symmetry if you applied ^ ok
00:33:157 (1) - NC? Same reasons as above~ same reasoning, emphasis on the finish
00:36:323 (2) - Blanket should be ok
00:42:657 (4) - You probably missed a hitsound here. It sounds quite quiet! added whistle, clap is a bit too heavy
00:53:490 (5) - Uh, the pattern is nice but I doubt a normal player can play this without problems. It's really hidden, I suggest another placement. i think this is alright, seeing as the circle fades in first - the only reason you'd not be able to see this was if you had invisible combo numbers or something like that
01:08:323 - I would use a reverse slider instead, to avoid the player getting stressed too much. i disagree, i want difficulty progression here - and putting a reverse slider would make it more difficult than it should be to read that this triple starts on a white tick, not a red one
01:18:990 (2,3,4) - The DS between the slider ends aren't the same, fix that please! done
01:27:490 (3,4) - The fact that this goes down like it currently does, 01:28:323 (1) - doesnt flow well with this. I suggest: http://puu.sh/44PLu.jpg http://puu.sh/44PLP.jpg http://puu.sh/44PM0.jpg I think you can recognize the parts, i replaced the two circles with a slider to remove a bit of the current difficulty. I hope that's ok! i think the second half of the suggestion was really nice - i kept most of the first pattern as is, however the last half of that was blanketed around the 1/2 sliders
01:38:157 (1) - http://puu.sh/44PNJ.jpg The other direction would cause a better flow, wouldn't it? good point

That's all for now, the only problem that could occur is that people can't get the red line things, but except this and some blankets, it's pretty nice. i believe that's the reason why i had to make Beginner, though

[Dizco's Advanced]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:42:271 - snap to 00:42:323
02:18:474 - snap to 02:18:490

AR + 1? Makes everything more readbale. ha, the irony. AR7 is enough, though

00:11:323 (2) - Move that to 160 26 to fix the blanket. this part was redone by me, but not submitted - i doublechecked every blanket still, though!
00:07:823 (3,1,2,3,4) - Is a bit messed up. Let me give you the coordinates to fix it:
00:07:823 (3) - 222 236
00:08:323 (1) - 199 304
00:08:490 (2) - 250 354
00:08:657 (3) - 322 354
00:09:157 (4) - 299 285
00:12:157 - Snap the break please! (Snap ALL the other break too err... inserting break time again in every existing break should work for everything, right?
00:18:323 (4) - If you would ctrl + G this, it would have a nicer flow, because you have something round. But the problem is, that the patterns next to it would be a flow killer, so it's up to you whether you want to rework that little part, or leave it. Just saying! redid this part a bit instead
02:13:323 (2) - Ctrl + G would make a really nice finish because it's a bit trickier~ already addressed


Good diff!

[Hyper]

02:03:990 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). snapped to 1/12 for accuracy in that one piano part. no change
02:05:323 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
02:06:240 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

00:08:323 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/44Q7S.jpg Looks better and flows better! did a bit of blanket action instead of following yours completely - it looks alright now though
00:34:157 (2,3,4) - Your DS failed here, it's 1.16 1.19 and 1.21. You better choose only one! fixed
00:55:407 (2) - Move this one a bit to the bottom, it looks a bit crumpy currently. Just a little bit this was redone but not submitted
00:58:157 (1,2,3) - The DS bothers me, I think the player will assume a jump here, but at the end it's just a gap between the rhythm. I would space it out definetly. http://puu.sh/44QiT.jpg Maybe like that=? that looks pretty cool - somewhat worried about the distance snap i ended with, but i guess it'll do just fine as a jump
00:59:990 (3) - 335 117 will create a nice triangle pattern~ i had to move this because of the distance snap the above change gave, so no triangle i guess
01:01:157 - I would add a circle here and 01:01:490 - , and delete the slider instead, because like this it creates some tension, and sounds less random.
01:01:990 - Follow the 1/8 in the background? (or 1/4) alright, works
01:16:657 (5,6) - Press CTRL + G, and check the rhythm. You might like it more, because sometimes adding a slider on the red tick sounds terribly weird and not enjoyable. I recommend it! in this case, however, the slider is accurate to the music
01:19:657 (1,2,3,4,5) - What happened with the spacing? This pattern looks quite.. forced idk, you better use the same DS between the circles. the jumps fit the song imo, but you're right, the pattern looks weird - changed it into a star instead.
01:28:823 (3) - A reverse fits the background much better! Just reverse it to follow the background. rearranged the part a bit - not sure if i got exactly what you meant, though
01:55:157 (5) - CTRL + G will create a really funny jump and flow pattern. indeed, did that


The diff itself is okay, but sometimes the rhythm is a bit unconsistent because you wanted to follow the background. Still, the diff is cool to play! complex song, complex rhythm, complex map!

[Another]

02:05:323 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). same reason as hyper
02:09:532 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:13:115 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

00:08:157 (4) - What about a stack with 5? It avoids the weird pattern (i don't like these kind of circle to slider pattern, just my opinion) i disagree, i think it looks and plays nice
00:17:323 (1,2) - Mh, not sure about this pattern. The circle is at the bottom, the slider goes up, the triplet goes down again. http://puu.sh/44QJM.jpg I prefer things like this in general, but that's fully up to you. good point, changed
00:20:323 (2) - 1 - 2 grids to the right to fix the blanket o.o fixed
00:20:490 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/44QPr.jpg Just a suggestion, i think it's funnier if the stream is spaced out, but up to you~ the stacking makes it spaced in the other direction of your picture, i think it works just fine
00:31:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Looks funny but i always keep mes this part. Maybe make it a little easier, but you can leave it. Just some idea~ i screw up a lot too, but i like the pattern a lot \:D/
01:32:157 (1) - Avoid the overlap please, just aesthetics fixed like 00:17:323 (1,2)
01:26:657 (1) - They look a bit tight together as well, just move 1 a bit to the bottom. alright
01:38:823 (4) - A blanket wouldn't hurt here i suppose, would look more polished. i guess i can move (1,2,3) a bit
01:44:323 (2) - Same here.

Rest looks fine! I've asked some people to testplay it as well, and they said they enjoyed the diff!

Alright, now we need to get 1-2 mods for the Taiko's, because nobody had taken a look at them yet. I'm currently arranging it, KanaRin will take care of the Taiko's afterwards, while Nymph will go on with the Standard diffs. It has been mentioned that it might need 1 or 2 more red timing sections! oh boy. you guys are really great <3

Leader wrote: 4e6a22

I testplayed Another and I have something to say before it's totally ready to go.

[Another]

1. 00:08:157 (4,5) - I'd stack them i think it plays better with the spacing
2. 00:10:490 (4,5) - What about changing pattern rhythm to this one http://puu.sh/456Lk.jpg? I think it fill well one of these 1/1 breaks. seems to work out nicely
3. 00:33:157 (1) - A 1/1 slider will works great after that tough pattern, i think a minor break fits well - it's also fitting considering the full stop-feeling of this moment in the song
4. 00:46:990 (4) - Can you curve it a bit while keeping the same direction? Nicer to see sure
5. 00:51:990 (6,1,2,3) - That really breaks map flow in my opinion: even if it's a calm part of the song, I found it awkward to play. I'd replace circles with sliders, in this way http://puu.sh/456XV.jpg i'd rather keep this part as is, following the piano with circles is the only way i can get in more fun patterns in a hectic song like this
6. 00:58:990 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, but since rhythm here is different from general one, you can keep it ~ same reason
7. 01:00:323 (5) - Replace with a 1/2 slider, you are missing a quite loud sound in 01:00:490 i see, added
8. 01:06:490 (5) - I'd replace with a triplet or a 1/2 slider i don't think that fits all that well with the style i'm going for in this spot, though
9. 01:25:323 (1,2,3) - Well, kinda bad to see, at least stack (1) on (2) functionally this just changes the direction and cuts the spacing between the notes in half - i don't think it's weird looking at all, plus it makes the 1/4 1/2 1/4 hits easier to read
10. 01:29:157 - There's a sound which needs to be mapped imo, so you can fix this as I said in 01:00:323 (5) that works
11. 01:51:323 (4) - 1/2 slider suggestion as above i think the stream fits better with a 1/1 space in front of it, just like 00:47:323 (5,1)
12. 01:51:657 (5,6,7,8,1) - well, they are really bad to see in my opinion ;~;, it would be cool if they were stacked to slider or more spaced (I'd choose the first one) they're basically just a stack in a reversed direction, i think stacking them wouldn't change anything but rather look weird
13. 01:57:490 (6) - You can try this http://puu.sh/457KO.jpg i added one, but pointed it towards the left more so it wouldn't overlap with the next (4)

Map is really good, it reminds me of Shiirn's style, and I think I'm not be the only one who will notice that haha. that's what i wanted to convey - he was a great inspiration!
I've just pointed out what I felt while playing: all these 1/1 breaks (or even more) which can interrupt flow badly, care of checking this stuff through the map and it'll become even better as it is, in my opinion. So, good luck~ gotta say i disagree there - i think a map can flow even without constant pressure! but i guess it's a matter of style - thanks for the mod, though!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 211,211,209
Combo2 : 158,152,137
Combo3 : 112,109,103
Combo4 : 194,175,107
Combo5 : 147,118,64
Combo6 : 217,177,119
Combo7 : 215,199,162

Jenny wrote: 656v3l

whoop.png

Mod request by Dizco o:
Just a little polishment before you get this ranked o3o

[General]

Combo Colours 1 and 2 are very similar to each other (same for 3,4,5), please distinguish them a bit more? It's confusing as it currently is. minor changes only, the colors are somewhat close to each other for the sake of a gimmick - taken a bit more care to use different combo colors adjacent to each other where i want it, though

box

[Beginner]

01:02:657 (1) - you can balance this slider more out, fairly easy changed a little bit so it resembles your positions, but to be honest i don't really see much of a change but whatever
pic
01:38:990 (2) - this slider feels too close to 1, you can simply move it up a bit (move to 27|248 and take 3 and 4 along with it) done
01:47:323 (2) - feels a bit too close to previous 2 that was the original intention, i screwed up somewhere during the last mods i think
pic
01:57:990 (2) - add another sliderpoint before the red one so you can make this blanket 1's end better yeah i see, changed
pic
02:14:323 (2) - just me but i feel like you should move this elsewhere, as where it currently is, there have already been so many objects... 303|297 looks about fine to me the 180 degree flip jump is a recurring feature in the ending that i'd like to keep consistent - i rotated the previous combo so that it's not cluttered anymore, however


[Light]

00:33:157 (1) - i'd say remove this new combo because this is just the end of the musical pattern you mapped before, no new one i'd like to keep this emphasis on the finish, it's present everywhere else
00:33:657 (1) - you can improve this blanket here done, checked with cs7 and it seems ok
02:06:657 (3) - this is very picky, but you can improve this aswell without major effort tried, did same thing


[Hyper]

00:26:157 (4,5) - i find this jump a bit sudden, as you didn't have any before, but I suppose it's bearable if you don't want to change anything about it i think it plays well, but i guess it's a bit sudden - reduced the spacing a little, though
00:51:990 (6) - as this note has quite an impact in the music (and ed by the normal-hitnormal on it), i'd say it would do better right in the middle of 1-5, as that's directly connected to a sharp turn in angle and therefore help it stand out even more well, i guess that works
pic
00:55:157 (1,2) - having these two normal-hitnormals 1/2 from each other, it feels more like they should be one object, so I'd recommoend you to melt these two and just make a 5*1/4 slider out of them because currently, it's confusing to play, as only the scond slider has an impact on its start and that's not very optimal, especially when playing this map the first time better than what i had, i think - it solves the weird playability of this part so applied
01:34:323 (3) - you can make a better slider without a red point ok, removed red point and rearranged the
01:55:823 (2) - i am not okay with this slider, as it starts on a weaker beat than it ends on; if you want to use a slider in this combo, do it on the white tick before, but do not start it on the red one here, that's rhythmically incorrect and bad to play changed
02:00:907 (3) - considering that this is 1/2 after 2, the distance is very little and it currently will very likely be missinterpreted as a 1/4 distance, so... i'd advise you to move this further away from 2 because of the unpredictability of the song at this point, i reduced the distance by half so that it would leave some room even if you held the 1/8 slider a bit longer than you should have - i checked and tested this specific part with doubletime, and reducing the distance seemed to be easier to sightread. i increased it by a little bit again, but i'm a bit unsure whether this will be problematic for first-time players still.


[Another]

Drain 8, uh? Sounds a bit high, but the map doesn't seem too demanding, so that should be okay. intended to be a high-pressure map, with some control and stamina needed to . no spamming here

00:22:490 (6,7,1) - these notes may be overlapped by hitbursts from 00:20:490 (3,4,5,6,7) - so maybe move them away to be absolutely certain no issue with either new or old default hitbursts, no change
00:24:156 (4,5,6,7,8) - i don't like how you have to play 4 1/4 notes after this slider, while it should be 5 actively played notes (because that's what it's mapped like), consider removing the reverse arrow and just mapping it as a 1/2 slider + 5*1/4? i can't find any solution that would look alright and not be very flow-breaking in this part - no change here
00:28:990 (9,10,11) - ^similar case you've pointed out a lot of these - i think these are good for both playability and aesthetics. i'm denying them all simply because i don't see the point of changing them and i believe it'd detract from the fun of the map
00:34:323 (1,2,3) - ^
00:34:990 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:45:157 (2,3,4) - this, however, is okay, as the emphasis is put on the actively played notes (-> 3,4) by hitsounding 3
01:08:823 (3) - similar thing as with 00:24:156 and other mentioned cases
01:10:657 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:323 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^
01:26:657 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:157 (1) - this slider is put the wrong way around, rhythmically: you start it on the weak sound and end it on the strong one, while it should be the other way around - the start of the slider is its strong part, not the end, and therefore you should change this in order to emphasize the song properly changed this as well as its counterpart 00:17:323 (1), with a slight variation considering the old version's improbably convenient location
01:32:823 (5) - ^ ^
01:37:657 (3,4,5,6,7) - similar case as with 00:24:156 again
01:38:823 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
01:44:323 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:45:157 (8) - similar as 01:32:157 this is a mistake in hitsounding on my part - the strongest sound is the middle circle, but with a whistle at the end to represent the piano sound(you can hear the other piano sounds in this part). it would not matter if i made this a triple ending on a slider or made a repeating 1/4 slider like i do now - but personally i think this flows better
01:55:490 (1,2,3) - similar to both 00:24:156 and 01:32:157 changed into two circles instead, it adds a bit to the pattern after
02:09:323 (1,2) - this is wrong. either map it as one one-time reverse 1/3 slider+ circle/slider or map it as 4 hits (3 circles + 1 slider or 4 circles). currently, you are mapping this in two sliders, resulting in a 1-2-1-2 pattern, in which each "2" is a ive hitsound because there is no active participation of the player required, while the music practically goes 1-2-3-4 or 1-1-1-1, and can be mapped only in either of these ways, so please redesign this i had a bit of a hard time figuring out just what to put, but i decided on a small square and that seemed ok
02:13:101 (2,3) - ^ (you even map this as 2-1-2-1 here and that's even more wrong :<) ended up having to do 2-1-1-1, removing the slider felt too awkward and harder to read(the stack) so i left it at that

Frostmourne wrote: 4k533o

okay

Beginner
00:46:153 (1) - This slider tail needs to be finish with a clap. I'm sure it's missing because they were introduced around 00:43:319 (1,1) - done
01:46:986 (1,2) - This spacing looks a big out of place, shouldn't they look like 01:38:986 (2,3,4) - or something like this? slightly reduced spacing down to 1.00x again, and made it slightly prettier
02:10:819 (2,3) - Some new combo like this on other parts were ok to me (looking past) but for this one, I guess they aren't that necessary. one of them gosh darned gradients found in every map sans Dizco's Advanced
Cool Beginner, everything is on music nicely.

Light
00:51:153 (1) - nazi, I suggest you remove this NC and add NC at 00:52:486 (3) - , they look in order more than before that works

Stopped now, I will continue later. o:

EDIT: what a surprise ztrot you bubbled it O_o
too ninja

Frostmourne wrote: 4k533o

ok, let's continue lol

Light
01:26:653 (1) - this slider needs clap on both head and tail in order to maintain the sound along with 01:27:653 (4) - and 01:29:319 (1,2) - only applied to head. if you listen to it again you can hear i use emphasis on three beats 3/2 from each other, so tail would be inconsistent.
01:37:653 (4,1) - well, this spacing is completely error and hard to notice for normal diff like this indeed, i think that's the byproduct of a remap - changed
01:50:653 (2) - finish only head of this slider as you did something similar in Beginner ok

Dizco's Advanced
01:59:653 (5,6) - This sounds rhythmically wrong. Problem,which lies on the certain point, is the piano sounds blatantly on 01:59:486 but you have no note here. (according to piano, you can clearly hear that as well)
It can cause confusing with your current spacing as well (1.2 -> 0.6) on 1/2 beat placements .
This screenshot is what is supposed to be.[/color]
decent diff.

Hyper
01:40:985 (5) - unsnapped no idea how that happened but fixed!

Another
As ztrot mentioned about unsnapped things, let me input something and I will consult with Nymph either
02:04:439 (2) - This should be 1/6 on 02:04:431 i give up
02:04:653 (1) - This should end 1/12 (object ends at 02:04:847) i give up
02:05:060 (2) - This should be on 1/6 (object is at 02:05:042) i give up
02:05:903 (2) - This starts on 1/6 (at 02:05:875 to follow piano sound which is the most obvious in this section) and then ends at 1/4 on 02:06:069 (use 1/12 signature to help making them) this is snapped, though, i think? it does at least fit now

That's all, I will rebubble after this.

Nymph wrote: 2w2f1l

Maybe take a look at my mod too so I don;t have to post it after it is rebubbled

Ahh and I need to post this image <3
o:

[General]
02:17:319 - since the volumn of the music is becoming lower and lower now, maybe you can make the sound of the spinner lower too,from 90 to 70 50 30 -->5 and the spinner ends. (if you decide to change this you may wanna to do it in every diff) woah, that's a fair point. done this for every diff


[Hyper]
00:51:986 (6) - the overlap is kinda ugly here, maybe increase the spacing between these note 1-5 then get enough room for note 6? done

01:40:985 (5) - aimod said it is unsnap here 0_0 just click the resnap all it would be fine yeah, frostmourne said the same


[Advanced]
01:59:653 (5,6) - the spacing is kinda hard to read, I didn't realize the spacing suddenly change from 1.2 to 0.6 so.. I think maybe keep the 1.2spacing is better ^ - something weird happened i think, pretty sure the spacing wasn't supposed to be like that