Hello, Sorry for the delay, and sorry that i have to pop this first because of unrankable snap issues. don't worry, you can ask lamb meat to rebub, and smoothly go qualif :3
[Snap issues in MX diff]
01:56:577 (116577|3,116666|2,116754|1) - There's 2 sound occured over here, either sound you try to follow, it still wrongly snapped, let me explain:
1. If you try to follow the main sound which is more audible, then the note at 01:56:577 (116577|3) - should be at 1/8 at 01:56:621 -
2. If you try to follow the less audible piano sound like one you originally follow like 01:55:783 (115783|3,116136|0,116489|1) - , then it supposed to be 1/3 at 01:56:607 - and 01:56:724 -
Feel free to pick either one I mentioned there, but you can't really keep the snap as it is now. (You might can get away for simplification if only you don't keep other snap as precise as possible, but since you did try to keep other snap precise, then this one should be too.)
[Snap Issues in All Diff]
02:49:166 (169166|3) - this should be 1/6 at 02:49:195 - , the sound really comes later.
02:49:871 (169871|3) - This one also should be 1/6 at 02:49:901 - , it's quite obvious the sounds also comes later.
Please address regarding the snaps.. or you can ask other for confirmation too. I already ask other people and they also agree with these snap issues.
[General Thing]
01:37:077 - the Kiai should be here instead of 01:36:371 - , feels really awkward you started it much earlier.
[MX]
00:03:195 - I think you can put a lil' bit more structure by doing
http://puu.sh/vgKPC/070e3ad35a.png instead, this way, you will stressed this section more with 3 consecutive 2-3 double which contains the same musical composition as 00:00:372 (372|3,372|0,724|0,724|3,1077|0,1077|3) - , doing it at 00:03:901 - is awkward and inconsistent since it's already different instrument music.
00:09:371 - Quite sure this should be double, look at how you layer the one at 00:15:019 -
00:12:019 (12019|0,12195|3) - I kinda don't understand how HD is harder than this diff (with HD have more LN although not that much), also the same with other same part.
00:12:371 - Quite sure this should be triple for finish, it won't be too dense either in the layering, because you even brave enough to do 00:11:313 (11313|0,11666|0,11842|0,12019|0,12195|0) - this xd
00:18:019 - Should be double if following the white snap layering consistently like 00:18:371 (18371|2,18371|3) -
00:22:077 (22077|3,22254|0) - better be at col 1 and col 4, otherwise, you break the jacking consistency that you did at 00:20:489 (20489|0,20666|0) - 00:19:077 (19077|3,19254|3) - ,etc.
00:27:195 - this is literally the only inconsistent pattern i see in this section. why? because look at 00:21:548 - 00:32:842 - 00:38:489 - . every "third" pattern, you will make stairs pattern. but for this one, you still use trill pattern, which is inconsistent.
00:46:077 (46077|0) - Should be move to col 2 here. you should make this triple have different pattern with 00:46:254 (46254|2,46254|3,46254|0,46430|3,46430|2,46430|0) - , similar with what you did at 00:44:666 - ,etc.
00:48:901 (48901|0) - personally felt the flow will be much better if this one moves to col.3.
00:59:666 (59666|1,59754|3,59842|0) - better at col 4 col 1 and col 3 to avoid stacks at col.1
01:08:136 (68136|3) - Better move to col 1 here to limiting the anchor at col 4 here.. i know you will think that col 1 will get the anchor that way, however, notice that col 1 have more LN there, it means more break time to not press note before the note at the same column.
01:13:960 - Should add another note at col.1 , the additional hithat drum sound already started here.
01:18:901 (78901|1,79077|0) - It would be more fitting if you switch column here making the jack, flows well with the vocal here.
01:28:871 - Instead of repeating the one at 01:26:048 - , I do think you can make 42-31 double instead, lot more versalite and complement the reverse vocal better.
01:35:136 (95136|3) - This really need to be at col.1 , otherwise, the weight at the col 4 feels really heavy.
01:49:607 (109607|3) - should be at col 2 to differentiate instrument with 01:49:783 (109783|3,109783|2) -
01:50:313 - It's much better if you try follow the PR more adequately
http://puu.sh/vgSzZ/2471c2827c.png
02:09:371 (129371|3,129548|1,129724|2,129901|0) - 2-3-1-4 feels more approriate and more reasonable to hit here.
02:10:607 - Quite sure this should be double and 02:10:695 - should be single. the impact differences is huge here.
02:16:871 - really feel that this is missing.. compared it with 02:18:901 - and you probably notice the difference a bit.
02:20:136 - quite sure should be triple following the main instrument at 02:19:783 -
02:29:313 (149313|0) - pretty sure this can be moved to col 4 to alleviate the left hand biases.
02:35:842 - 02:36:019 - should be triple with that really obvious finish sound.
[HD]
00:06:901 (6901|1,7254|1,7607|1,7960|1,8313|1) - Although the gap between stack is still quite huge, kinda find that this resulting in inconsistent structure that kinda "suddenly there" , I recommend try approach it in a more casual way like
http://puu.sh/vgUKV/894a5da393.png
00:12:019 (12019|0,12107|1,12195|0,12371|1) - Really awkward to hit, not sure why it get keeped like that, breaking the flow you made earlier.. suggest to rearrange to something like
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/7803148 , it helps with the flow as well.
00:13:077 (13077|2) - kinda find moving to col 1 a much better, the notes composition kinda leaning towards right hand which is kinda unsightly.
00:14:842 (14842|2,14842|3,15195|3,15195|2,15548|2,15548|3,15901|2,15901|3) - Don't really understand why these double at the same column when the pich literally moving kinda chaotic. Recommend split the double to make mirror and making it overall more sense like
http://puu.sh/vgVbd/7d775929a8.png (starting at 00:14:136 - )
00:20:313 (20313|0) - Suggest move to col 2 here, feels more fitting have 3-2-3 trill instead of 1-4-1 trill here for the current pattern.
00:25:607 (25607|2,25783|3,25871|2) - Better make these 4-3-4 here, i kinda find that 00:25:342 (25342|2,25607|2,25871|2,26136|2,26489|2,26754|2,27019|2,27283|2,27548|2) - as unnecessary.
00:37:430 (37430|0,37430|1,37783|0,37783|1,38048|1,38136|0,38313|1,38489|0,38666|1,38754|0) - The left hand kinda stacking by a lot here, try making 00:37:783 (37783|1,37960|2,38048|1) - 3-2-3 to counter that.
00:49:783 - You should make this double for consistency with 00:49:077 -
00:54:724 - 00:57:019 - Should be triple if following your layering at 01:39:901 - 01:42:195 -
01:05:136 (65136|0,65313|1,65489|3,65666|0) - try 2-4-1-3 here, it's better flow compared if you have extended right one hand trill.
01:12:724 (72724|1,72724|0,72901|0,72901|1) - Kinda find that the double shouldn't be for left hand considering you already have 3 consecutive left hand double before at 01:11:313 - , i suggest
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/7804154 to follow the flow better.
01:15:195 (75195|2,75371|1) - Should be at col 1 and col 3 , you are consistent with the jack at the second double and the third double like what you did at 01:16:430 (76430|2,76607|2) -
01:29:577 - 01:32:401 - Should be added note for consistency with 01:26:754 -
01:59:489 (119489|1,119489|2,119666|3,119666|0) - Should be 14-23 here.. the instrument pitch is obvious here.
02:02:666 - I do think you can make this a bit more right hand oriented by Switching column between 02:02:666 (122666|2,122754|1) - , it will also make anti flow with 02:03:371 (123371|3,123460|2) - which is good in flow .
02:09:371 (129371|1,129548|0) - Recommend to move this to the right one time because of the PR quite ascending high here.
02:20:489 (140489|3) - better to move to col.3 .. felt really awkward with that kind of pattern.
[NM]
00:04:607 - Since the instrument kinda repeating by itself, It would be good if you make repeating pattern with only the back one had differences to accenting a bit of different PR, like
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/7804224
00:12:019 - I think there's a bit mistake here, this should be double, while the one at 00:12:195 - should be single.
00:18:901 (18901|1,19254|2) - Kinda wonder why you mapping the bell sound here, but not at any other parts such as 00:20:313 - 00:21:724 - , etc?
00:22:960 (22960|3) - Better be at col 2 to form 2-3 trill instead of 4-3 trill thingy..
00:24:019 - the diamond pattern felt out of place with other pattern as well here, recommend to have something like
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/7804259
00:29:313 (29313|3,29666|1) - Personally felt that if you switch column between these notes, you will get right one hand trill that kinda mirroring the one at 00:30:371 (30371|0,30724|1,31077|0) -
00:33:901 (33901|1,34254|0) - Move this to the right one time, don't really see the reason for one handd trill pattern here.
00:40:254 - This is finish orz, at least have double here..
00:43:077 (43077|2,43254|1,43254|0,43430|2,43430|3,43607|1,43607|0,43783|3,44136|0) - It's better if you Ctrl+H this pattern so that you will mirrored the previous pattern at 00:43:077 - which is awkward if you make them the same column when suddenly you changed structure at 00:45:901 -
00:50:313 - Missing note for main instrument here.
00:55:430 - Don't understand why is this double.. look at how you layer at 01:01:077 - , it's single..
01:04:254 (64254|1,64430|0) - This can be made much neater if you place it in col 4 and col 2.
01:10:254 (70254|0) - Better move to col.2 , i don't really see a reason for col 1 stack there.
01:12:371 - if you decide to have one hand trill at 01:12:724 (72724|0,72901|1,73077|0,73254|1) - , you might even try having sort of pattern that mirror both to promote gimmick that still retains the balance like
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/7804311
01:19:430 (79430|3,79607|2,79783|0,79783|1,79960|3,80136|1,80136|2) - Oh cmon, you can really follow PR by just Ctrl+H this.. felt more reasonable for balance too..
01:27:019 (87019|3) - Felt that this is much better at col.3 , you already have many notes at 01:26:048 (86048|3,86313|3) - anyway..
01:38:666 (98666|1,98842|0,99195|1) - Try 1-2-1 pattern to counteract col 2 stack here..
01:42:195 (102195|3,102371|1) - Switch column here to differentiate the double at 01:42:195 - with 01:42:724 - that have different emphasis.
01:44:313 - one thing i notice is that... the notes really filled left column by a huge margin.. (it can be even felt by me..) just take a look at 01:44:489 (104489|1,104489|0,104842|1,105019|0,105371|1,105548|0,105901|0,105901|1,106254|1,106607|0,106783|1,106960|0,107136|1,107313|0,107489|1) - .., moreover, the direction also went to the left, which makes it kinda improper.. it can be made more balance with
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/7804396
02:14:489 (134489|0) - should be at col 3 if following your jack sequences at 02:12:371 (132371|2,132724|2,133077|2) -
02:25:783 (145783|1) - move to col 4 fit much better due to this kind of movement at 02:25:342 (145342|1,145607|0,145783|1) - felt kinda forced when you already have 02:26:489 (146489|1,146754|1,146842|0) - as the adjacent pattern that coming forward.
02:36:195 (156195|1,156371|0,156548|1) - Recommend to make this col 1-2-1 here, the long 2-3 trill felt unnecessary here.
[EZ]
00:01:254 (1254|0) - Should be at col 4 to alleviate the biases here. (that col 4 so empty omg)
00:15:195 (15195|2,15548|1) - Better switch column here, the movement of 00:14:136 (14136|2,14666|2,15019|3,15195|2) - felt really awkward in EZ..
00:17:136 (17136|1,17489|3) - Switch column here too, i don't really see reason of alienating col 4 here when it only promotes more stack pattern at certain column.
00:18:724 - If following your LN layering here, this should have LN too, seems like you use LN every 4/1 line interval (or for the simple , thick white line)
00:47:842 (47842|0) - Move to col 3 here, col 3 felt really empty at this section.
01:03:195 (63195|1) - Move this to col 3, i don't see why this have to be jacked with 01:03:548 (63548|1) - , it resulting in awkward flow.
01:13:254 (73254|3,73430|0) - Since the instrument here has been changed (also the change of instrument pace), i recommend make this into col 2 and col 4 for anti flow towards previous pattern.
01:19:430 (79430|2,79607|1) - recommend to switch column here, otherwise it felt un-sync try to make it connected with stairs, but in truth, the pace of instrument changed at 01:19:430 -
01:34:960 (94960|3,95313|0) - You can basically change into col 2 and col 4 for having 1-2-4-3 sort of pattern, and accenting high note at 01:35:313 -
02:07:430 (127430|2,127783|3) - Basically, the instrument here kinda repeating in melody, so here, you can make these into col 4 and col 2 to accenting that.
quite solid map here, please address the mod accordingly :3
