A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.
Song: capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime (Syadow-)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 2 - 4K Normal and 4K Hard
Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.
[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: To have a better background ratio, It should be atleast exact size of one of the following: 800x600 (4:3) / 1024x768 (4:3) / 1366x768 (widescreen)
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|
[NM]
SPOILER
00:00:372 (372|1) - move to 1? same as sound as 00:01:783 (1783|0) - and 00:03:195 (3195|0) - . It is for consistency so it can get the same feeling as 00:01:783 (1783|0,1960|3,2048|2,2136|0) -
00:04:607 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN0pA/70384e7f86.png for pitch relevancy. The stair pattern fits for the high to low pitch and the alternative for the last stair pattern.
00:09:548 - add note for cymbals since you made cymbals as doubles on 00:11:136 (11136|2,11136|1,11489|3,11489|1,11842|1,11842|2) -
00:15:195 - ^
00:16:254 - add note to 4 like you always did for every end-1/4-snare like 00:13:430 (13430|3,13430|2,14842|0,14842|1) -
00:16:783 (16783|0) - quite awkward on left hand, suggesting to move to 3 for hand balance.
00:23:489 - add note for cymbals same as you did on 00:29:313 (29313|0,29313|3) -
00:40:254 - ^ to 3
00:41:313 (41313|1) - remove since you only made single on the same sound at 00:41:666 (41666|3) -
00:44:136 (44136|2) - ^
00:46:077 - add note to 4 for cymbals.
00:46:607 (46607|1) - change to LN for the drum roll like you did at 00:43:783 (43783|3) -
00:47:666 (47666|0,47842|3) - add note to make them doubles like you did at 00:44:842 (44842|2,44842|1,45019|3,45019|0) -
00:48:548 - add note to 2 it fits for the guitar-like sound + for the percussion as well.
01:04:077 (64077|3) - remove as the HD doesnt even have mini LN here. Also 2-note presses occured here while HD only has single note here.
01:05:489 (65489|0) - Change to single note. Same reason as above about mini LN.
01:06:901 (66901|1) - ^
01:09:724 (69724|1) - ^
01:11:136 (71136|2) - ^
01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - move to 3 and 4 respectively for better and comfortable note arrangement.
01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - add note for cymbals.
01:27:901 (87901|0) - remove as there is no cymbal here to make it double press.
01:31:430 - add note for cymbals.
01:34:254 - ^
01:37:254 - add note so the starting flow of notes won't break. feels empty here. It is the same as 01:40:077 (100077|2) -
01:42:901 - ^
01:47:489 - must add note as strong sound occured here which is the cymbals.
01:58:254 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN1oL/12031b6483.png which focuses more on cymbals by doubles. With the doubles, it emphasizes the strong sound which is comfortable.
02:05:313 - add note to 2 for cymbals.
02:10:607 - ^ to 3
02:28:077 - add note so the flow won't break just like 02:33:724 (153724|1,154077|3) -
02:28:430 - ^
02:43:430 - add note for cymbals.
02:43:960 - ^
02:45:371 - ^
00:04:607 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN0pA/70384e7f86.png for pitch relevancy. The stair pattern fits for the high to low pitch and the alternative for the last stair pattern.
00:09:548 - add note for cymbals since you made cymbals as doubles on 00:11:136 (11136|2,11136|1,11489|3,11489|1,11842|1,11842|2) -
00:15:195 - ^
00:16:254 - add note to 4 like you always did for every end-1/4-snare like 00:13:430 (13430|3,13430|2,14842|0,14842|1) -
00:16:783 (16783|0) - quite awkward on left hand, suggesting to move to 3 for hand balance.
00:23:489 - add note for cymbals same as you did on 00:29:313 (29313|0,29313|3) -
00:40:254 - ^ to 3
00:41:313 (41313|1) - remove since you only made single on the same sound at 00:41:666 (41666|3) -
00:44:136 (44136|2) - ^
00:46:077 - add note to 4 for cymbals.
00:46:607 (46607|1) - change to LN for the drum roll like you did at 00:43:783 (43783|3) -
00:47:666 (47666|0,47842|3) - add note to make them doubles like you did at 00:44:842 (44842|2,44842|1,45019|3,45019|0) -
00:48:548 - add note to 2 it fits for the guitar-like sound + for the percussion as well.
01:04:077 (64077|3) - remove as the HD doesnt even have mini LN here. Also 2-note presses occured here while HD only has single note here.
01:05:489 (65489|0) - Change to single note. Same reason as above about mini LN.
01:06:901 (66901|1) - ^
01:09:724 (69724|1) - ^
01:11:136 (71136|2) - ^
01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - move to 3 and 4 respectively for better and comfortable note arrangement.
01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - add note for cymbals.
01:27:901 (87901|0) - remove as there is no cymbal here to make it double press.
01:31:430 - add note for cymbals.
01:34:254 - ^
01:37:254 - add note so the starting flow of notes won't break. feels empty here. It is the same as 01:40:077 (100077|2) -
01:42:901 - ^
01:47:489 - must add note as strong sound occured here which is the cymbals.
01:58:254 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN1oL/12031b6483.png which focuses more on cymbals by doubles. With the doubles, it emphasizes the strong sound which is comfortable.
02:05:313 - add note to 2 for cymbals.
02:10:607 - ^ to 3
02:28:077 - add note so the flow won't break just like 02:33:724 (153724|1,154077|3) -
02:28:430 - ^
02:43:430 - add note for cymbals.
02:43:960 - ^
02:45:371 - ^
[HD]
SPOILER
00:01:342 (1342|2,1430|1) - ctrl H so it can be more comfortable and counter part of 00:03:371 (3371|3,3460|2,3548|1,3548|0) -
00:05:577 (5577|2,5666|1) - ^
00:06:371 (6371|3) - move to 2, both hands fits more.
00:12:195 - add note cymbals.
00:23:313 (23313|2,23489|0) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern.
00:40:342 (40342|1) - remove, no sound and MX do not have note in this 1/4 blue line.
00:48:636 - add note as there is snare drum here. Add in MX as well.
00:51:195 (51195|1,51195|2) - move to 1 and 4 as it fits more than index fingers.
00:53:577 (53577|1,53666|2,53666|0,53754|1) - I would like to suggest to rearrange this pattern as it gives awkward feeling.
00:56:666 (56666|2) - move to 4
01:05:930 (65930|2) - remove, no sound here. MX doesn't have a note in this line.
01:13:607 (73607|3) - move to 2 as following the pitch.
01:27:813 (87813|1) - remove no sound and no note at MX here.
01:30:548 - add note for the beat sound.
01:33:019 (93019|3) - remove, no sound here. No note at MX as well.
01:33:283 (93283|3) - ^
01:34:077 - add note for cymbals.
01:56:136 (116136|3) - move to 3 so it can be a stair pattern for 01:55:430 (115430|0,115783|1,116489|3) - which gives pitch relevancy for the guitar-like sound.
02:09:548 - add note for the beat.
02:09:901 - ^
02:10:254 (130254|3,130342|2,130430|1,130519|0,130607|1,130695|2) - change to single note. MX's notes are non-LN
02:17:489 (137489|2) - move to 1 just like 02:18:548 (138548|0,138636|1,138724|3,138724|2) -
02:30:195 - add note for cymbals.
02:35:842 - ^
02:40:077 - add note for snare emphasis
02:42:107 (162107|1,162283|3) - remove, no sound and no notes for MX here.
02:42:019 - and 02:42:195 - add note, it should be the same double notes as 02:40:783 (160783|0,160783|3,160960|2,160960|1) -
02:43:519 (163519|2,163695|0) - remove. same reason as previous.
02:43:430 (163430|3,163607|1) - add note to make double.
02:44:930 (164930|3,165107|3,165283|1) - remove. same reason as previous.
02:46:254 - add note to 1, strong sound cymbals.
02:44:842 (164842|1,165019|2,165195|0) - add note to make it double.
00:05:577 (5577|2,5666|1) - ^
00:06:371 (6371|3) - move to 2, both hands fits more.
00:12:195 - add note cymbals.
00:23:313 (23313|2,23489|0) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern.
00:40:342 (40342|1) - remove, no sound and MX do not have note in this 1/4 blue line.
00:48:636 - add note as there is snare drum here. Add in MX as well.
00:51:195 (51195|1,51195|2) - move to 1 and 4 as it fits more than index fingers.
00:53:577 (53577|1,53666|2,53666|0,53754|1) - I would like to suggest to rearrange this pattern as it gives awkward feeling.
00:56:666 (56666|2) - move to 4
01:05:930 (65930|2) - remove, no sound here. MX doesn't have a note in this line.
01:13:607 (73607|3) - move to 2 as following the pitch.
01:27:813 (87813|1) - remove no sound and no note at MX here.
01:30:548 - add note for the beat sound.
01:33:019 (93019|3) - remove, no sound here. No note at MX as well.
01:33:283 (93283|3) - ^
01:34:077 - add note for cymbals.
01:56:136 (116136|3) - move to 3 so it can be a stair pattern for 01:55:430 (115430|0,115783|1,116489|3) - which gives pitch relevancy for the guitar-like sound.
02:09:548 - add note for the beat.
02:09:901 - ^
02:10:254 (130254|3,130342|2,130430|1,130519|0,130607|1,130695|2) - change to single note. MX's notes are non-LN
02:17:489 (137489|2) - move to 1 just like 02:18:548 (138548|0,138636|1,138724|3,138724|2) -
02:30:195 - add note for cymbals.
02:35:842 - ^
02:40:077 - add note for snare emphasis
02:42:107 (162107|1,162283|3) - remove, no sound and no notes for MX here.
02:42:019 - and 02:42:195 - add note, it should be the same double notes as 02:40:783 (160783|0,160783|3,160960|2,160960|1) -
02:43:519 (163519|2,163695|0) - remove. same reason as previous.
02:43:430 (163430|3,163607|1) - add note to make double.
02:44:930 (164930|3,165107|3,165283|1) - remove. same reason as previous.
02:46:254 - add note to 1, strong sound cymbals.
02:44:842 (164842|1,165019|2,165195|0) - add note to make it double.
[Overall]
Great Miku song pick~
Please vote here as for my M4M modding performance: t/372334/
Thank you so much for the contract, until next time~
Good luck! Here have a star
