Hi there
NM here
1|2|3|4
HD
00:08:489 (8489|2,8666|2) - I suggest to move them on 4 and 1. Because i think 4 jacks didn't fit nicely in this part
* 00:12:195 - I would suggest something like this https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757202
* 00:16:607 - I would suggest something like this https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757210
* 00:18:636 (18636|2) - i hear no instrument for this, i suggest to move it here 00:19:695 - you missed a hit hat there
* 00:21:107 - I suggest https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757248 3 jacks aren't fit imo
* 00:22:519 - you missed a hit hat too here
* 00:22:960 - and 00:23:136 - i prefer make them in different column because the pitch is different
* 00:23:313 - I think it should be double too for clap and organ thingy sound. Example both with^ : https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757241
* 00:29:313 - you could double here for cymbal
* 00:30:107 - missed a hit hat
* 00:32:136 - and 00:32:489 - i suggest to add a note for kick since you add too here 00:32:842 - also it kinda suddenly blank without that kick
* 00:34:254 - ; 00:34:430 - ; 00:34:607 - make them double like you did on 00:28:607 -
* 00:35:048 - I suggest something like this https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757283 because 00:35:048 - and 00:35:401 - aren't really clear (unclear) sound that prefer not to be added. 00:35:666 - and the LN here should be stop on 00:36:019 - also you missed hit hat here 00:35:754 -
* Well i think i would stop ;-; i won't ruin ur map more qq
* 00:12:195 - I would suggest something like this https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757202
* 00:16:607 - I would suggest something like this https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757210
* 00:18:636 (18636|2) - i hear no instrument for this, i suggest to move it here 00:19:695 - you missed a hit hat there
* 00:21:107 - I suggest https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757248 3 jacks aren't fit imo
* 00:22:519 - you missed a hit hat too here
* 00:22:960 - and 00:23:136 - i prefer make them in different column because the pitch is different
* 00:23:313 - I think it should be double too for clap and organ thingy sound. Example both with^ : https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757241
* 00:29:313 - you could double here for cymbal
* 00:30:107 - missed a hit hat
* 00:32:136 - and 00:32:489 - i suggest to add a note for kick since you add too here 00:32:842 - also it kinda suddenly blank without that kick
* 00:34:254 - ; 00:34:430 - ; 00:34:607 - make them double like you did on 00:28:607 -
* 00:35:048 - I suggest something like this https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5757283 because 00:35:048 - and 00:35:401 - aren't really clear (unclear) sound that prefer not to be added. 00:35:666 - and the LN here should be stop on 00:36:019 - also you missed hit hat here 00:35:754 -
* Well i think i would stop ;-; i won't ruin ur map more qq
Nice song, take my star and good luck :3 sorry can't help much
a little note from me, if there're voice and instrumental sound together.. try to pay more attention to the instrumental