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Hmm.. shall I map a Hard? :)
Topic Starter

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

Hmm.. shall I map a Hard? :)
Sure! :D
>< can i make another hard diff? i liked the song ...
Topic Starter
hmm...
Okay, you can make Hard diff as well :D

Start doing it...
Sorry for long wait. Finally finished! Here you go:
http://puu.sh/18tzS
Topic Starter
Okay, ed BeatofIke's Hard diff.
well xD it's harder then hard but it's up to you if you want it as hard or insane wwwww

http://puu.sh/18vMX

don't forget to add "Sekai, -Sekai- and Sekai-nyan" on tags ><
Topic Starter
Okay, ed Sekai's Insane diff, and move to Pending Beatmaps.
Since you it as insane so..... changed some settings :3

http://puu.sh/18Mqw
Topic Starter
Ok, updated...
Hm. I think Sekai's diff as hard + would give a better spread :3
no i think it fits as insane then hard + ><// orz
Then it's fine :3
Source→-Puregirl-
Topic Starter
Thank you, No_Gu :D

Changed source name...
hi hi as requested from my Mod Queue (๑╹ω╹๑)

[General]
looks all fine :3

[breaktimes:]

Easy 00:40:541 - 00:42:639
Normal : none
BeatofIke's Hard : 00:41:170 - 00:42:639
Sekai's Insane : none
Insane : none

you should fix it >u<

[kiai time:]

you should fix it:

Easy :
00:59:422 - 01:06:135
01:09:492 - 01:27:953

Normal :
00:59:422 - 01:06:135
01:09:492 - 01:12:743
01:12:848 - 01:27:953

BeatofIke's Hard :
00:59:422 - 01:27:953

Sekai's Insane:
00:59:422 - 01:06:135
01:09:492 - 01:12:743
01:12:848 - 01:27:953

Insane :
00:59:422 - 01:06:135
01:09:492 - 01:12:743
01:12:848 - 01:27:953

[Insane]
00:13:268 (4) - Nc

sorry for a noob mod Q___Q
Topic Starter
I fixed in Insane diff. But Breaktimes and Kiai time, I'm not sure that are Konei and BeatofIke fix it?

So waiting for fix of them...

Thank you for mod, Lally ;)

Updated the Insane diff...
It's okay for break times to be different in all difficuties, but not the kiai times. Although, guest difficulties ususally have exceptions. To keep things less complicated, I shal fix. Anyways, thanks for the mod!
KOTOKO !!!
rank this,please \:D/
Topic Starter

DarknessAngel wrote: 635qj

KOTOKO !!!
rank this,please \:D/
Go for rank! :D
Hey nich95 :DD

Thanks for your mod. So now it's my turn ^.^

Lets start then.. but remeber, these are only my suggestions, no need to change it :)

Konei's Easy

00:08:233 (1) - Don't know if it's allowed (because of the spinner) - but if yes, maybe add a circle
01:03:618 - add a circle?
01:07:184 (2) - 1 more reverse?
01:07:184 (2) - add a circle, i think the flow is broken (same as 01:03:618) if you just make a "break" here :/

Konei's Easy

00:21:450 (2) - add a circle?
00:36:974 (6) - i would delete it
00:37:184 (6) - and add one here
01:21:869 - add a circle

BeatofIke's Hard

00:14:736 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/1aNxx, http://puu.sh/1aNxM maybe make it like this?
00:17:254 (5) - delete this and make 00:16:625 (4) - 1 tick longer
01:12:743 (6) - add one
01:14:946 (3) - make 1 tick longer while deleting 01:15:576 (4)

this beatmap looks really nice btw!

Sekai's Insane

00:42:743 (1,2,3) - make it like http://puu.sh/1aNIl?
00:44:317 (1) - same
00:52:604 (7) - add a circle
01:05:506 (1) - new combo
01:10:121 - why this break?
01:33:513 (3,4,5,6,7) - thats a bit weird o.o

Insane

00:08:862 (7) - new combo
01:12:534 (9) - delete this

can't find anything more, its just awesome :D


so, thats it :)

i hope that i could help you a little~ good luck :)
Fixed the Kiai Time. Didn't like Irreversible's suggestions. Sorry!
http://puu.sh/1aUaF
Thanks Fixed some :3

Sekai's Insane
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: KOTOKO & Satou Hiromi - One-Chance!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59008
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:One-Chance!!
Artist:KOTOKO & Satou Hiromi
Creator:nich95
Version:Sekai's Insane
Source:-Puregirl-
Tags:FrontWing opening eroge visual novel Konei BeatofIke Sekai -Sekai- Sekai-nyan

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Pure Girl OP.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo3 : 255,128,0
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Nothing changed~

For the breaks at 01:03:618 and 01:17:044 -> I leave them because I think a break here is nice for Easy and it sounds really cool to me at this place.

Thanks for mods anyway~ =w=
As promised, I come to mod this.

[General]

- About source, I personally think Pure Girl was fine, keep in mind ピュアガール = Pure Girl. Good explanation of English loanword in Japanese can be found here http://www.japan-guide.com/e/e2051.html. So I think they write -puregirl- to make it oblivious that the title is from English. If you want to be 100% accurate with the title, then it should really be Pure Girl -puregirl-, but weird to write pure girl two times right? Alternative, you can write the romaji of the kanji which is Pyuagaaru, but looks really weird. So after considering all this, I find Pure Girl to be the best choice for source and it looks the nicest styling wise too. If you really prefer -Puregirl- then uncapitalize the p so it should be -puregirl- instead since it's not capitalized in the logo that No_Gu gave. After this, you should add pure & girl to tags since I couldn't find this song when I search with this words. I was wondeirng why I couldn't find this beatmap. Same thing if you decide to change the source to Pure Girl, add puregirl to tags.
- Tags, you should definitely consider adding Elements Garden to tags as this group compose so many songs including popular anime songs. Composer should also be considered so Fujita Junpei, since this person have written lot of songs, a list can be found on vgmdb http://vgmdb.net/artist/110. Lastly, sometime, the company frontwing is spaced out so, front wing, I will not find this song if I search front or wing so consider this. English sources like wikipedia does this http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Front_Wing.

[Easy]

00:00:681 (1,2) - Consider this hitsound pattern instead. Finish/whistle at begin of (1), whistle on begin of (2), whistle on both sliders repeat and remove the whistles from the end of both slider. The reason is simple, the end of the sliders don't follow the piano properly so whistle sound weird on it, but the begin & repeat follow piano perfectly so it sound great to have whistle on them.
00:09:911 (2,3,1,2,3) - The weird notes here are 00:12:848 (2,3). Try this http://puu.sh/1bkXX. Everything is still 1/1 space out from each other but follow the song much better. Be sure to put finish on begin of 00:10:750 (1) -
00:14:107 (1) - Finish at begin for a new section?
00:17:464 (1) - I won't put finish at repeat and end since it make it really oblivious that this doesn't follow the cymbal in background. They are playing 1/2 earlier on the red tick so I recommend removing them.
00:32:569 (4) - Whistle fits at begin and repeat here or finish instead, maybe finish is a better idea then whistle.
00:34:247 (1,2) - Similar to above, whistle/finish at end of these sliders.
00:39:701 (1,2,3) - I don't recommend doing hit circles like this for this song as the song has lot of rhythms on red. Basically, patterns like this relies on reading the approach circle and not listening to the song. I wouldn't mind this if there was no sound on the red ticks, but they are and quite emphasized too. My best suggestion is to do a repeating slider instead.
00:40:750 - Such a short break, consider just removing it.
00:43:058 (2) - Should add a clap on the repeat consider all the others clap follow the drum here.
00:44:317 (1) - Should consider clap here as it's the same sound as on 00:44:736 & 00:44:946 which you put clap on.
00:46:415 (2) - Same as 00:43:058.
00:47:674 (1,2) - Consider finish on (1) and end of (2) with perhaps reduced volume. Consider clap on the repeat of (2) because you put one at end of 00:44:736 (2).
00:52:708 (1,2) - I prefer this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/1bldV (replace with long slider) since the end of (1) doesn't really follow the song. Yes I can hear a sound, but it's a very quiet sound and I think Easy shouldn't follow such sound.
01:00:261 - Song is quite slow, I don't think this need 2 white tick pause after spinner. Consider adding a note here. Since the song is slow, the 2 white ticks feel too long, so it felt empty. Adding hit circle there seem to work fine for me.
01:00:261 (1,2,3) - Should consider adding whistle on 1st & 3rd white tick.
01:04:457 (3) - Whistle on begin & end sound quite nice
01:06:555 (1,2) - Finish at end of (1), replace clap at begin of (2) with finish.
01:07:184 (2) - Also, I don't agree with this, I think you need something on 01:07:813 since a strong sound is on there. Best solution is do slider starting here and ending it there. Another reason to do this is because you have hit circles afterward. Not too nice to play 3/2 rhythm unless the sound in the music is extremely prominent to warrant one, in this case, it doesn't. Be sure to add a finish on 01:07:813.
01:08:653 (2) - Feel better to me with whistle, but I don't have any real reason for you to add it.
01:12:009 (2) - Finish here?
01:12:848 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:00:261.
01:17:883 (3) - Whistle at end
01:25:855 (1,2) - Consider finish on repeat of (1) and on (2).
01:33:408 (2) - Whistle pattern sound better to me if you add whistle at end.

Not bad, this song seem hard to map an Easy for, but you did quite nicely. Mainly suggestion on how to make hitsound better.

[Normal]

00:00:681 (1) - Consider finish at begin instead of whistle
00:04:037 - 00:07:184 - I cannot hear the hitsound here, seem like you want to do a cresendo effect, but I think you lower the hitsound volume way too much. Consider these two timing points volume suggestions. 40% > 50% > 60% or 50% > 55% > 60%.
00:13:478 (5) - Raise the volume (50% maybe?) and add whistle to begin and the slider body. Sound better than not having anything to me.
00:23:338 (1) - I prefer low volume finish instead, but your choice.
00:24:177 (2) - Finish at end.
00:25:855 (2) - ^
00:32:569 (3) - ^
00:35:925 (4) - Same as 00:23:538.
00:39:282 (4) - Whistle at end?
00:40:121 (5) - Consider clap here too.
00:42:639 (1) - Personally think this should be a finish at begin instead.
00:47:674 (3,4) - Consider finish instead of clap at begin of (3) & on (4).
00:51:030 (4) - Same as 00:23:538.
00:53:128 - I think this finish should be higher volume than 00:54:387.
00:56:485 (3) - Clap at end, listen to drums in the background
00:57:743 (5) - Whistle on repeat & end. Whistle sound nice with piano.
01:01:939 (6) - Whistle on begin and end.
01:04:457 (4) - ^
01:06:764 (2) - Finish at end.
01:08:443 (5) - Finish at begin
01:12:009 (6) - ^
01:13:687 (2,3) - Quite empty without whistle here, add whistle to begin of these two sliders.
01:17:044 (2,4) - Whistle on (2) & begin + end of (4). Also sound nice if you add to 01:18:932 (5).
01:20:401 (1) - I prefer finish instead of clap at begin.
01:22:079 (4) - No hitsound on this? Definitely do clap at repeat (be sure to use s:c2) then finish at begin if you do for above. Don't add anything to end.
01:29:212 (3,5) - Whistle at end of (3), begin of (5)?
Actually, 00:07:813 (2,4,5) - Do whistle at end of (2) & (5) add to (4) then do above suggestion and add to 01:28:792 (2) as well.
01:33:827 (3) - Finish at begin or at the very least whistle.

Overall, it's a good diff, but I'm curious about your finish logic. Need some whistle through, I gave suggestion on the places that need it.

[Hard]

00:09:072 (1) - Whistle begin & end.
00:21:660 (2) - Add clap here atleast, hitsound sound really empty here since you didn't have anything on 00:21:240.
00:25:436 (3) - Prefer clap over whistle.
00:29:527 (2) - Whistle pattern sound nicer to me if you add a whistle here.
00:41:170 - Short break, consider just removing it.
00:52:708 (1) - Whistle at end, similar issue to 00:21:660. Consider adding on (2) as well.
00:54:387 (5) - Finish at begin
01:07:813 (1,3) - Consider finish at begin of these two sliders
01:09:492 (1,5) - Whistle on (1), begin of (5).
01:12:009 (2) - I hear the drum, consider adding clap.
01:19:562 (1) - Finish at begin
01:12:848 - 01:19:352 - What happen to the whistle? Your whistle hitsounding is quite good, so don't see why you didn't try to put some here. Here's a quick suggestion. 01:13:687 (3) - Whistle on begin 01:14:527 (1) - Whistle here 01:14:946 (3,5) - Whistle at these two sliders end 01:17:044 (1) - Whistle here 01:17:883 (1,2,3) - Whistle on these three hit circles. Sound better than nothing I think. I don't really like how the whistle sound on 01:14:527 (1) much, but maybe you'll like it, if not just remove it. Same thing for 00:59:422 - 01:05:086.

Pretty good, but unsure why not much whistle at certain part in kiai. Also, I personally think patterns like this 00:23:338 (1,2,3) fits better as jump patterns in an Insane diff rather than anti jumps in Hard. Not impossible to get 300s on, but doesn't feel comfortable to me.

[Sekai's Insane]

00:01:729 (4,5,2) - I don't mind the current whistle pattern too much, but I feel you should have whistle on the piano so 00:01:729 (4,5,2) - on (4) & (2), end of (5). Almost forgot, also on begin of 00:03:408 (4)
00:04:667 (5,6,8) - And here, on (5) & (8), end of (6), should remove from (7).
You may want to remove all whistles that doesn't follow piano, I think it sound better that way, but your choice
00:08:233 (2,5,8) - Whistle on (2,5), end of (8).
00:11:380 (2) - Add finish
00:12:219 (7,2,3) - Finish end of (7), on (2), begin of (3)
00:12:639 (1) - Should be on 00:12:848, be sure to add finish to it
00:17:464 (1,3) - I'm sure you can make a better blanket then this
00:18:093 (2,4) - Finish at these two hit circles.
00:19:352 (7) - Clap at begin
00:19:771 (8) - Finish at begin
00:20:191 (9) - Add clap
00:20:820 (1) - I think reducing the volume of this finish a bit would be better
00:21:240 (3) - Finish at end
00:22:499 (1) - Clap at begin
00:23:967 (4) - Add finish
00:26:275 (2,3,4) - Clap at end of all sliders. Alternatively, finish at end of (2,3) then clap at end of (4).
00:29:212 (3) - Add clap
00:30:051 (7) - ^
00:33:198 (2) - Add finish
00:36:345 (2) - Clap at end
00:44:317 (1,5) - Add clap
00:45:366 (6) - Finish
00:47:044 (3) - ^
00:51:869 (4) - ^
00:56:065 (5) - Finish at begin
01:06:764 (3,5) - Finish
01:07:813 (1) - Finish at begin
01:09:492 (1) - ^
01:17:883 (1,3) - Finish at begin of (1), whistle on (3)
01:22:079 (3) - Finish
01:31:939 (2) - ^
01:33:198 (2,3) - Move 1/4 right and add finish
01:34:457 (7) - Finish

Just add whistle on 1st & 3rd white tick in kiai, not all place of course and not if there is finish so 00:59:422 - 01:04:457 - and 01:12:848 - 01:17:044 -
Focused on mainly hitsound, but didn't notice a problem wit placement.

[Insane]

I won't mention hitsound anymore as I mention enough, just check other diffs suggestion. I feel Hard has the best hitsound right now so you can follow the hitsound pattern of that diff if you wish.

00:08:443 (4,5,6) - Unstack? To keep the flow going and emphasizing 00:08:862 (7) better. Also feel less clustered.
00:08:862 (7) - New combo
00:09:911 (11) - Prefer if you snap this to 1.5x as well.
00:12:219 (7) - Stack with (5)? I find you map this in quite a clean way and this make the diff feel a bit messy.
00:13:058 (3) - Easier to read the stream after this note for me if you place at x:64 y:240.
00:16:625 (4) - Jump on this note, maybe place where 00:18:093 (1) is, jump is justified by vocal.
00:18:513 (2,3,4) - I don't see why the spacing is different from 00:19:352 (1,2,3)? Pattern feel better to me with 1.1x with (4) stacked on 00:17:254 (7) -
00:21:660 (2) - Feel like this need a jump, place at x:472 y:168 maybe?
00:23:653 (2,3) - Hmm, stack (2) on begin of 00:22:499 (7) and snap (3) to 1.5x distant snap?
01:02:359 (5,6,1) - Consider doing a jump pattern here or simply, snap to higher spacing. Try moving (6) to x:208 y:48 maybe.
01:16:415 (1) - There isn't anything here that justify such a big jump, I think you should reduce to something like 1.6x instead.
01:17:674 (6) - Similar to what I suggest for 01:02:559.
01:19:352 (1) - Similar to 01:16:415, nothing to really justify this jump so feel weird to play, try to reduce.
01:30:471 (6,7,8) - 1.3x spacing to this stream because 01:29:422 (1,2,3). This stream is spaced out 1.3x from previous note. Hope you understand what I mean, but try placing 01:30:261 (5) at x:280 y:264.
01:33:827 (3,4) - Try something a little different maybe? Nothing wrong with the pattern, but maybe more interesting to do for example this http://puu.sh/1bndI

Definitely try to improve the hitsounds, sound quite empty at some parts, like during kiai time, need some whistle there.

Too much hitsound issue for my taste, so I'll hold my star for now, feel free to me at a later time when you think hitsound is better. I may star your map then. Since hitsound requires a lot of concentration to mod, I didn't manage to catch other issues. I decide not to check hitsound in Insane to help polish the map a little, hopes it help.

hmm, well good luck, this mod took a bit longer than expected to finish.

merchat7 wrote: 314x2

[Easy]

00:00:681 (1,2) - Consider this hitsound pattern instead. Finish/whistle at begin of (1), whistle on begin of (2), whistle on both sliders repeat and remove the whistles from the end of both slider. The reason is simple, the end of the sliders don't follow the piano properly so whistle sound weird on it, but the begin & repeat follow piano perfectly so it sound great to have whistle on them. yeah :3
00:09:911 (2,3,1,2,3) - The weird notes here are 00:12:848 (2,3). Try this http://puu.sh/1bkXX. Everything is still 1/1 space out from each other but follow the song much better. Be sure to put finish on begin of 00:10:750 (1) - ok~
00:14:107 (1) - Finish at begin for a new section? yup
00:17:464 (1) - I won't put finish at repeat and end since it make it really oblivious that this doesn't follow the cymbal in background. They are playing 1/2 earlier on the red tick so I recommend removing them. ok
00:32:569 (4) - Whistle fits at begin and repeat here or finish instead, maybe finish is a better idea then whistle. I thought I did them o.o added~
00:34:247 (1,2) - Similar to above, whistle/finish at end of these sliders. also thought I had them o.o added~
00:39:701 (1,2,3) - I don't recommend doing hit circles like this for this song as the song has lot of rhythms on red. Basically, patterns like this relies on reading the approach circle and not listening to the song. I wouldn't mind this if there was no sound on the red ticks, but they are and quite emphasized too. My best suggestion is to do a repeating slider instead. I added repeat to the Slider and beginned break earlier :3
00:40:750 - Such a short break, consider just removing it. It's fine imo
00:43:058 (2) - Should add a clap on the repeat consider all the others clap follow the drum here. yep
00:44:317 (1) - Should consider clap here as it's the same sound as on 00:44:736 & 00:44:946 which you put clap on. yep
00:46:415 (2) - Same as 00:43:058. yep
00:47:674 (1,2) - Consider finish on (1) and end of (2) with perhaps reduced volume. Consider clap on the repeat of (2) because you put one at end of 00:44:736 (2). awkey~
00:52:708 (1,2) - I prefer this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/1bldV (replace with long slider) since the end of (1) doesn't really follow the song. Yes I can hear a sound, but it's a very quiet sound and I think Easy shouldn't follow such sound. awkey
01:00:261 - Song is quite slow, I don't think this need 2 white tick pause after spinner. Consider adding a note here. Since the song is slow, the 2 white ticks feel too long, so it felt empty. Adding hit circle there seem to work fine for me. awkey~
01:00:261 (1,2,3) - Should consider adding whistle on 1st & 3rd white tick. sounds nice :3
01:04:457 (3) - Whistle on begin & end sound quite nice Sounds cute to the high tones ~ added :3
01:06:555 (1,2) - Finish at end of (1), replace clap at begin of (2) with finish.
01:07:184 (2) - Also, I don't agree with this, I think you need something on 01:07:813 since a strong sound is on there. Best solution is do slider starting here and ending it there. Another reason to do this is because you have hit circles afterward. Not too nice to play 3/2 rhythm unless the sound in the music is extremely prominent to warrant one, in this case, it doesn't. Be sure to add a finish on 01:07:813. okay~
01:08:653 (2) - Feel better to me with whistle, but I don't have any real reason for you to add it. It's on third tick, so yeah
01:12:009 (2) - Finish here? It sounds too early to me so no
01:12:848 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:00:261. yep~
01:17:883 (3) - Whistle at end awkey~
01:25:855 (1,2) - Consider finish on repeat of (1) and on (2).Yeah, nice
01:33:408 (2) - Whistle pattern sound better to me if you add whistle at end. awkey~

Not bad, this song seem hard to map an Easy for, but you did quite nicely. Mainly suggestion on how to make hitsound better. thanks :3

Thank you for mod~ >.<~

http://puu.sh/1btTR
merchat7 for MAT
Thanks for the mod! Fixed Everything (I think)
http://puu.sh/1bR3p
Thanks for the nice hitsound mod merchat =w= fixed everything

http://puu.sh/1cbeW
Topic Starter
@Irreversible, fixed something

@merchat7, fixed everything, maybe?
And I may have something additional in my diff.


Thank you for their mods and merchat's comment, Irreversible and merchat :)

Change source is "Pure Girl" again.
Add "-puregirl- puregirl Elements Garden Fujita Junpei", and change "FrontWing" is "Front Wing" in tags.
Update all diff.
http://puu.sh/1cgaG

Spinner missed in my diff orz

Update onegai~
Topic Starter
Okay, Update again~
Nice map 三☆
Good Luck
Topic Starter

Yusura Sakurae wrote: 6s56j

Nice map 三☆
Good Luck
Thank you, Yusura :)
Hi M4M here ~

Konei's Easy :

00:10:750 (1) - maybe you tried to make a red point for keyboard ? then when this ball is here 00:11:380 - , the ball turn a bit earlier.
00:44:317 (1) - remove clap
01:12:743 - there is 2 inhertered points here

Normal :

01:09:911 (1) - add clap
01:10:750 (3) - ^

Hard :

00:04:667 - add whistle ?
00:05:086 - ^
00:05:506 - ^
00:27:114 (3) - add clap

Sekai's Insane :

00:12:848 (1) - move this here ? 00:12:743 -
00:17:464 (1,3) - they look a bit strange for me, maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/1d0J0
code
224,172,17464,6,0,B|196:156|168:96|192:48|224:36,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0
268,104,18093,1,4,0:0
312,36,18303,2,0,B|343:47|368:104|344:156|312:172,1,160

Insane :

01:19:981 - add clap ?

Sorry for poor mod but that all I can find .__.
Well good luck and go go rank ~
Topic Starter
Fixed everything for my 2 diffs

Thank you for mod and star, Kin :)

Updated my diffs
Nothing changed, Kin~
Thanks Kin fixed them :3

http://puu.sh/1dily
Topic Starter
Updated Sekai's Insane diff
Sorry for the delay! Updated!
http://puu.sh/1dGfB
Topic Starter
Updated BeatofIke's Hard diff
Halo~

Konei's Easy:

00:00:681 (1) - Whistle+Finish at the first sounds a bit weird to me.. Use only one
00:45:576 ( ) - Add a note? Feels empty
00:55:646 (2) - A finish seems good as your pattern
01:19:562 (1,2) - All Finishes? Use only in the heads.. Sounds a bit noisy
01:33:408 (2) - Delete Whistle at the head
01:34:247 (3) - Delete Whistle

Normal:

00:34:247 (1) - 1 Grid up?
00:35:925 (4) - 1 Grid down?
00:40:121 (5,1) - Set Combo as (1,2)
00:41:799 (4) - Delete Whistle at the end
00:47:674 (3,4) - Delete Finish
01:12:639 (7) - Make a curve?
01:33:827 (3) - Start with a Clap instead of Whistle

BeatofIke's Hard:

-- Check the kiai time, which is different from other difficulties~

00:18:513 (4) - Delete Whistle
00:34:876 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Is this pattern a Symmetry? If yes, 00:35:716 (7) - 1 Grid up
01:01:729 (4,5) - I prefer a symmetry here. Similar with ^
01:04:771 (2) - Delete Whistle
01:08:443 (3) - Delete Finish at the end

Sekai's Insane:

00:04:562 (4) - A 1/4 beat here doesn't fit, but actually goes well in 00:04:352 So move here, also the distance..
00:20:820 (1) - Delete Finish
00:21:240 (3) - Add Finish at the head, and delete it in the end
00:27:743 (6) - Start a combo here (Change your own the next combos..)
00:34:247 (5) - ^
00:37:604 (1) - Delete Finish and stacking perfectly on (2) would be better
00:42:848 (1) - I don't think this is a good place for a note.. Consider placing notes at 00:42:639 and 00:42:953 instead of here
01:11:904 (5) - Delete this, and place a note at 01:11:485 Stream fits better like this
01:14:527 (6) - Just opinion, but stacking on top of (7) will be better
01:33:198 (2) - Hard to read the rythm here.. place it in 01:33:303, and Delete Finish
01:33:618 ( ) - Consider adding a note here

Insane

00:16:625 (4,5) - Rather jumping (4), a jump with (5) will be better
00:25:226 (4) - NC?

Good luck ;)

Sonnyc wrote: 491l5w

Halo~

Konei's Easy:

00:00:681 (1) - Whistle+Finish at the first sounds a bit weird to me.. Use only one sounds fine to me, besides, in taiko it will be better to play as K also
00:45:576 ( ) - Add a note? Feels empty I prefer starting on the downbeat
00:55:646 (2) - A finish seems good as your pattern sounds noisy to me
01:19:562 (1,2) - All Finishes? Use only in the heads.. Sounds a bit noisy sounds weird for me if a finish misses
01:33:408 (2) - Delete Whistle at the head I want to keep because of the high tones
01:34:247 (3) - Delete Whistle ^



Sorry nothing changed u.u
Thanks for mod anyway~
Thanks for modding and fixed most of those. And remapped the last confusing part~

http://puu.sh/1eiZw
Fixed Everything! I like all the suggestions. Updated!
http://puu.sh/1ejT6
Topic Starter
Fixed mostly

Thank you for mod, Sonnyc :)

Updated all diffs
please change this background ><
http://puu.sh/1el3V
Topic Starter

Fuyune wrote: 2b3s24

please change this background ><
http://puu.sh/1el3V
Okay, thank you :)

Changed BG & updated again
Noone mods? o.o

Then I''m gonna do some mod here ~


must fix

should fix

I wanted to mention

Suggestion


[Normal]

00:04:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you make this a star? http://puu.sh/1fKPe
00:07:184 (7) - Delete this note and extend 6 to the blue tick (with the repeat), sounds much better
00:13:478 (5) - This whistle sounds noisy, removing it is better imo :< Or at least reduce the volume
00:17:044 (6) - This looks a bit random placed imo, moving it like http://puu.sh/1fKSi would give a more reasonable pattern
00:19:352 (3,4,5) - Try some whistle on them for the piano
00:35:925 (3,4,5,6) - Also looks a bit random http://puu.sh/1fKTR
00:51:869 (5) - Could be hard to read for beginners, consider moving it elsewhere
01:19:771 (7) - NC really should start here due to the vocal
01:20:401 (1) - Remove this NC ofc if you followed^
01:33:827 (3) - Try whistle at end?


[BeatofIke's Hard]

00:05:296 (4) - 1 grid down for they stop touching and consistent spacing between 1 2 3 and 4
00:18:722 - Add note here, the beat seems strong on this place
00:20:610 (6) - Consider starting new combo here due to the vocals starting
00:21:660 (2) - I think finish instead of clap sounds better
00:25:855 (1) - I don't understand why this NC is here, remove it? It seems pointless to me
00:52:499 (5) - Start NC here, the music is starting to shift from this point
00:55:016 (6) - Why no NC here? Vocals are starting here again and on 1 NC doesnt really makes much sense
00:56:065 (1) - Remove whistle from this Spinner? Sounds unfiting to me
01:25:436 (1) - remove NC to keep your consistency?


[Sekai's Insane]

00:55:646 (4) - Try whistle for the piano
01:00:890 (8,1) - Switching the places of the note and this Slider fits much better with vocal and music http://puu.sh/1fMhE
01:16:205 (1) - Finish at start?
01:21:240 (1) - This finish sound is too early for music, it should be on 01:21:030


That's all for those diff I could find currently :3

Let's have good luck o/
Sekai~
00:09:072 (5,6) - this two, try to move to 00:08:967 - should be like this: http://puu.sh/1fOaV
00:10:331 - missed clap
00:11:590 - delete this note, sounds weird to me..
00:12:743 (1) - 2 grids left? for symmetry
00:17:464 - i hear rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/1fOhr
00:17:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i have changed some of those objects. if you want here's a code
SPOILER
256,176,17464,6,0,B|228:152|204:104|228:56|256:36,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,100,18093,2,0,B|332:124|356:172|332:220|304:240,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,264,18722,1,8,0:0:0
228,264,18827,1,0,0:0:0
228,264,18932,1,4,0:0:0
372,336,19352,2,0,B|336:356|296:348,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,272,19771,2,0,B|190:254|229:266,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,240,20191,1,8,0:0:0
244,164,20401,1,8,0:0:0
00:32:569 (1,3) - hmhm.. http://puu.sh/1fOmn
00:42:848 (1) - move this note to 00:42:639 - and if you hear the rhythm, you know why.
00:42:953 - add a note here
00:56:904 (8,9) - try to move this notes to 00:56:799 -
00:57:114 - and remove this one
00:57:219 - then move this spinner to 00:57:009 -
01:02:359 - add clap?
01:21:030 - finish should be here, remove 01:21:240 -
01:22:918 (6) - NC

[BeatofIke]

Pretty nice done~ really liked you style ;_;
00:59:841 (2) - ctrl + g?
01:05:086 (3) -
152,164,65086,2,0,B|220:176|256:124|256:124|292:176|364:164,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
and stack next notes ><

Insane and Normal is pretty good~
Konei.. i see again your an Easy and just want to say one important thing: look at other Easy diffs and you will understand what i mean. Just that

Good luck ~~ i want to make an insane ;_; love this song<3
http://puu.sh/1fP5g

Thanks Liz and Konei for modding :3
Fixed Some! Updated all mods!
http://puu.sh/1fPts
@Lizellota: Lol, what the fuck? XD Can't you even point out if you think that something is wrong? :3

It's really difficult to improve something if you are only told "look at other easys, you'll understand" xDD You made my day.


EDIT: Sekai: 01:23:023 (1) - Missplaced, should start on downbeat ~
Topic Starter
Fixed some in Konei's mod

Thank you for mods, Konei and Lizellota :)

Updated all diff

Konei wrote: 451331

EDIT: Sekai: 01:23:023 (1) - Missplaced, should start on downbeat ~
http://puu.sh/1fQrX

Thanks >< for checking it
Modding time =3=

Konei's Easy
00:00:681 (1) - Grab the slider's end and move it one grid to the left =3=
00:28:373 (1) - I think this is randomly placed,,, please make something else out of it =3=

Normal
nothing~

BeatOfIke's Hard
00:08:233 (5,1) - these sliders are kind of ugly... :c could you make them curved or something?
00:23:338 (1,2,3) - Put finishes here because you can hear those in the music too >3<
00:35:925 (1,2) - ^
00:41:799 - This empty place should be filled~

Sekai's Insane
00:12:219 (7,1,2) - Fix DS ><
00:44:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sorry but what is this following? Not the vocals, neither the drums nor the other instruments,,, fix this
00:53:967 (7,1,) - make 7 more curved or place it a little bit more to the right because 7' is overlapping the beginning of 1 a little bit (sorry dont know how to say it)
00:58:583 (1) - Did you meant to let the slider stop at 00:58:687 - ? (thats where her vocals stop)
01:23:023 (1) - Place it 1/4 earlier
tbh this diff has some really randomly placed notes, as if you didn;t know what to do,,,

Insane
00:20:820 (7) - NC due to SV changes
00:23:338 (1,2,3) - finish >3<
00:42:639 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:317 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:995 (3,4) - ^
01:08:443 (6) - NC because of SV changes
01:25:436 (2) - ^
01:31:939 (4) - ^

Good luck >3<
http://puu.sh/1fUZq

Thanks SkyDevil ~ :D
[Konei]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999
First of all: Why you used Normal Custom? sounds awful. Heh..okay. And Easy this is 2\1, not 1/2
00:20:820 - Remove finish
00:21:660 - ^
01:19:562 (1,2) - hard for begginners imo
00:09:911 (2,3,4,5) -
120,272,9911,2,0,B|216:272,1,89.9999999999999
256,192,10750,2,0,B|344:192|440:264|440:360,1,270
352,376,12429,2,0,B|352:328|312:296,1,89.9999999999999
184,256,13478,1,0,0:0:0
00:14:107 (1,2,3,4) -
304,192,14107,6,0,B|288:152|288:152|296:96,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,216,14946,2,0,B|352:264|352:264|344:312,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,320,15785,2,0,B|464:248|464:248|464:136,1,180
376,128,17044,1,8,0:0:0
Changed placement
00:17:464 (1) -
00:32:569 (4) - remove repeat
00:34:247 (1) - x:328 y:80
01:01:939 (3) - ctrl + j?
01:03:198 (1) - x:128 y:112(if changed^)
01:04:037 (2) - x:264 y:232(if changed^)
Heh..some useless mod :> anyway, i think MATs will find more, good luck~ and sorry my poor english yeah =w=
nich o.o you can remove my diff if you think it's really that bad.....

Lizellota wrote: 3e431c

[Konei]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 fixed
First of all: Why you used Normal Custom? sounds awful. Heh..okay. And Easy this is 2\1, not 1/2 according to the song, this is fine. And changed to soft sampleset
00:20:820 - Remove finish k
00:21:660 - ^ k
01:19:562 (1,2) - hard for begginners imo some challenging part wont kill them imo
00:09:911 (2,3,4,5) -
120,272,9911,2,0,B|216:272,1,89.9999999999999
256,192,10750,2,0,B|344:192|440:264|440:360,1,270
352,376,12429,2,0,B|352:328|312:296,1,89.9999999999999
184,256,13478,1,0,0:0:0
00:14:107 (1,2,3,4) -
304,192,14107,6,0,B|288:152|288:152|296:96,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,216,14946,2,0,B|352:264|352:264|344:312,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,320,15785,2,0,B|464:248|464:248|464:136,1,180
376,128,17044,1,8,0:0:0
Changed placement changed this
00:17:464 (1) -
00:32:569 (4) - remove repeat nope, plays good imo
00:34:247 (1) - x:328 y:80
01:01:939 (3) - ctrl + j? kay
01:03:198 (1) - x:128 y:112(if changed^)
01:04:037 (2) - x:264 y:232(if changed^) changed in another way
Heh..some useless mod :> anyway, i think MATs will find more, good luck~ and sorry my poor english yeah =w=

Thanks ~

http://puu.sh/1g38r
Topic Starter
Fixed some in SkyDevil's mod

Thank you SkyDevil for mod, and thank you Lizellota again :)

Sekai-nyan wrote: 5a4f1v

nich o.o you can remove my diff if you think it's really that bad.....
I think it isn't bad for me >< So I will don't remove your diff.

Updated~
http://puu.sh/1ghEm
Updated! Thanks for mod.
Topic Starter
Updated again~
Hi 'w'

[General]

offset +9 (690). now is so fast

[Konei]

unused inherited points
  1. 00:42:639 -
  2. 01:12:743 - (two inherited points?)
clear :3

[Normal]

00:27:324 (4) - add Finish at end of slider
01:22:079 (6) - add Finish at start of slider
;_;

[BeatofIke]

unused inherited points
  1. 01:09:492 -
00:41:380 - can you mapped this interval? this is so awkward
01:03:408 (3) - don't overlap with 01:02:359 (8) - . Can you replacing 01:02:988 (2,3) - this notes?

[Sekai-nyan]

00:14:527 (3) - last point of slider 1 grid right?
00:19:352 (1) - NC?
00:42:639 (1) - add Finish?
00:44:317 (1) - ^
01:00:890 (8) - can you make try like this?
168,68,60890,2,0,B|200:44|256:56|272:104|256:148,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:3:0
01:04:876 (9) - move to (332,284)?
01:15:366 (9) - move to (300,156)? and adjust next notes
01:22:079 (3,4) - why don't you make try the rhythm like this?0
01:22:813 - add a note?

[Insane]

HP drain -1? I think that's high for this map. players can died at the spinner in last of map when they have low HP
nothing good map ._.

wow what's this good map?

Have a nice day
Topic Starter
Fixed some

Thank you Dark Fang for mod :)

Note: Remove Sekai's Insane diff in my map.
@Darkfang: All inherited points are used, thanks for checking :3
Hi~

General
Is this video allowed? It's pretty.... R18
You can make your Kiai time better?
SPOILER
Following the pattern of where your first Kiai time finishes, the second one should be as follows:
00:59:422 - Start, 01:06:135 - Finish.
01:12:848 - Start, 01:19:562 - Finish
or
SPOILER
Change your Kiai time into this:
00:59:422 - Start, 01:12:743 - Finish.
01:12:848 - Start, 01:27:953 - Finish.
Second one is a lot better
Insane
00:09:387 (4) - This should actually start 1/4 later, also you can now add a custom clap at 00:09:492 -
00:12:219 (7) - I think this note is better without overlap, consider making 00:11:799 (5,6,7,1) - into some kind of square shape?
00:11:170 - Extend slider till here or add a note with custom clap.
00:21:240 (2) - New combo to help indicate speed change.
00:27:324 (7) - Delete, 00:26:904 (6) - Extend 1/4 (there is no sound in the song at 00:27:219 - )
00:33:513 (4) - Delete note.
00:33:618 - Add finish.
01:31:729 - Need clap. Add note or extend slider to here please~

BeatofIke's Hard
Hmm, I think the OD of this diff is too low for a Hard. Maybe raise by +1?
00:22:499 (1) - Add finish.
01:27:534 (2) - Move this note to 01:27:743 - sounds better~ (If you do this you may want to stack with 01:27:114 (1) - to fix spacing)

Normal
01:25:016 (1) - Remove new combo, 01:26:275 (3) - Add new combo is better.

Konei's Easy
oh hi//
00:12:848 - Clap here is wrong, should be at 00:12:743 - It's probably best not to have one here at all because I think a blue tick slider is too hard for an Easy...
00:13:268 (3) - Is better at 00:13:058 -
00:38:443 (2) - Remove reverse please!
00:40:121 - 00:42:639 - I don't agree with this break. Too short for Easy.
01:19:562 (1,2) - Wrong rhythm. 01:19:562 (1) - Remove reverse and extend till next white tick. Start second slider at 01:21:030 (2) - no reverses please, and then end at 01:22:079 - >_<!

Good luck!
Topic Starter

Kiiwa wrote: 3n2x5o

General
Is this video allowed? It's pretty.... R18 If MAT or BAT said to remove the video because this, I will remove it.
Fixed mostly

Thank you Kiiwa for mod :)
Pm me if that happen, I'll censor the video

Also about tags, Front Wing, I didn't mean to remove frontwing, I just mean to add front wing incase people decide to search with the space so I think you should add frontwing back, keep front wing in tags of course.

Just randomly notice the beatmap, maybe I'll randomly recheck this later.

Kiiwa wrote: 3n2x5o

Konei's Easy
oh hi// o/
00:12:848 - Clap here is wrong, should be at 00:12:743 - It's probably best not to have one here at all because I think a blue tick slider is too hard for an Easy... right, fix :3
00:13:268 (3) - Is better at 00:13:058 - Extended Slider to red tick and removed note
00:38:443 (2) - Remove reverse please! Yeah D:
00:40:121 - 00:42:639 - I don't agree with this break. Too short for Easy.I think without this repeat it's even better :3 It kinda fits to the video and melody for me
01:19:562 (1,2) - Wrong rhythm. 01:19:562 (1) - Remove reverse and extend till next white tick. Start second slider at 01:21:030 (2) - no reverses please, and then end at 01:22:079 - >_<! You're really right, fix ~

Good luck!
Thanks for great mod Kiiwa o/

http://puu.sh/1hzdm
Topic Starter

merchat7 wrote: 314x2

Pm me if that happen, I'll censor the video

Also about tags, Front Wing, I didn't mean to remove frontwing, I just mean to add front wing incase people decide to search with the space so I think you should add frontwing back, keep front wing in tags of course.

Just randomly notice the beatmap, maybe I'll randomly recheck this later.
Okay, Thank you for check, and I'll pm to you when I want.

Added "frontwing" in tags again and updated Konei's Easy diff.
Fixed some! Updated!
http://puu.sh/1hNtJ
Topic Starter
Updated again~
hi

[General]
  1. 00:35:191 - I think this is not allowed....
[Konei's Easy]
  1. Many 2/1 and long slider does not have clap in slider tick. try [url=http://puu.sh/1iRlo]this wav[url]. This wav volume is adjusted.
    If you need rename this wav, do it yourself.
  2. 00:08:653 (1,1) - This overlap detract from the cleanly.
    try this
  3. 00:14:107 (1,2,3) - I think this note is able to clean
    240,284,14107,6,0,B|216:244|216:244|240:204,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    328,208,14946,2,0,B|350:245|350:245|326:285,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    408,324,15785,2,0,B|448:252|448:252|448:140,1,180
  4. 00:42:639 - unnecessary green line.
  5. 00:48:093 (2,3) - not like this flow. I think this placement makes harder to hit.
    If this placement, will be easy to hit.
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:478 (5) - remove whistle slider start. but do not remove in entire
  2. 00:38:653 (3) - put in center. this note has deviation.
  3. 01:09:911 (1) - this note makes confuse for beginner. you should reset circle.
[BeatofIke's Hard]
  1. Stack Leniency change to 0.5
    00:09:911 (2,3,4,1) - these note is affected stack leniency. If you do not like to change it, add to deviation for note.
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:764 (4,6) - add finish
  2. 00:52:708 (3) - add finish in slider start.
  3. 00:56:904 (8) - add finish? will be able to follow a more vocal.
gl
[General]
Source should be "pure girl"
http://puu.sh/1iTLK
Cant approve this video because of the scene at 00:34:247 - . remove it or do something else to solve this
Change "Creator" to your new name and add the previous one in tags

[Insane]
00:07:394 - Better to increase volume by 20% or so because the previous notes are really loud.
00:19:771 (3,4) - Considering that 00:19:142 - is blank, (4) should be removed. or at least change (3) to 1/2 slider
00:25:226 (1,3,4) - not stacked well
00:37:604 (9) - Speed down?
00:42:639 (1,2,3) - 3/4 rhythm needs to be spaced at higher DS
00:44:317 (1,2,3) - ^
00:53:128 - Accent is not here but at 00:53:023 -
01:09:282 (4,5,1) - Awkward flow imo
01:32:988 (1) - Clap at the beginning

[Hard]
00:21:240 - There should be a note here, this point should be more emphasized
00:53:023 - Finish sounds nice here

a bit too hard, but this is still nice one.

[Normal]
00:38:653 (3) - Move this note downward by 1 gird
01:01:939 (6) - Weird rhythm imo
01:34:562 (1) - Considering the level of this difficulty, This spinner appears too suddenly. you should make (3) end at 01:34:142 - and spinner start at 01:34:667 -

[Easy]
6 spinners are too much for 1:40 long
00:13:478 - Feels empty here, how about adding a note here?
00:17:464 (1) - I think you can make this more exciting. A better rhythm would be;
http://puu.sh/1iUtF
00:21:240 - There should be a note here
00:43:687 - ^
00:45:366 - ^
00:47:044 - ^
01:22:499 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:22:918 - instead? long vocal is more suitable for the beginning of spinner imo

This diff needs more work. and you need to make it much harder for a better spread. Better to use more redticks and try to follow music better.

Find more mods for Easy first; rhythm can be much better imo. And call me back for a recheck afterward

NewRulerNA wrote: 276nw

Stack Leniency change to 0.5
...but that's unrankable XD

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

a bit too hard, but this is still nice one.
XD
Forgot to mention this; Offset 696 (+15)
Topic Starter

NewRulerNA wrote: 276nw

hi

[General]
  1. 00:35:191 - I think this is not allowed....
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:478 (5) - remove whistle slider start. but do not remove in entire
  2. 00:38:653 (3) - put in center. this note has deviation.
  3. 01:09:911 (1) - this note makes confuse for beginner. you should reset circle.
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:764 (4,6) - add finish
  2. 00:52:708 (3) - add finish in slider start.
  3. 00:56:904 (8) - add finish? will be able to follow a more vocal.
gl
Fixed some in my diffs.

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

[General]
Source should be "pure girl" Fixed to lowercase.
http://puu.sh/1iTLK
Cant approve this video because of the scene at 00:34:247 - . remove it or do something else to solve this Okay, I will ask merchat7 to fix something in the video.
Change "Creator" to your new name and add the previous one in tags Fixed

[Insane]
00:07:394 - Better to increase volume by 20% or so because the previous notes are really loud. hmm, I reduced volume volume the previous by 10%, and I increased volume by 10% instead. Likewise, I will increase volume 01:27:935, too.
00:19:771 (3,4) - Considering that 00:19:142 - is blank, (4) should be removed. or at least change (3) to 1/2 slider Fixed
00:25:226 (1,3,4) - not stacked well ^
00:37:604 (9) - Speed down? Ok, reduced speed.
00:42:639 (1,2,3) - 3/4 rhythm needs to be spaced at higher DS Fixed spacing.
00:44:317 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:53:128 - Accent is not here but at 00:53:023 - I think it's fine, and I heard something in 00:53:128. So I don't change.
01:09:282 (4,5,1) - Awkward flow imo Fixed them to stack.
01:32:988 (1) - Clap at the beginning Added

[Normal]
00:38:653 (3) - Move this note downward by 1 gird Oops, I don't intend to miss. Fixed.
01:01:939 (6) - Weird rhythm imo Okay, fixed and changed hitsound.
01:34:562 (1) - Considering the level of this difficulty, This spinner appears too suddenly. you should make (3) end at 01:34:142 - and spinner start at 01:34:667 - Fixed

Find more mods for Easy first; rhythm can be much better imo. And call me back for a recheck afterward

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

Forgot to mention this; Offset 696 (+15) Okay, moved offset to 696.
Thank you for mods :)
Then I will call you for recheck after I'm ready, Melo :3

Change source is "pure girl".
Add my previous name in tags.
Remove the video temporarily, to fix somethings.
Move offset to 696.
IRC modded aaaaa

SPOILER
16:47 Fumika: เอะ นางเอกคุ้นๆ
16:48 Nichiyouki: กำ
16:48 Fumika: อ้อ pure girl
16:49 Fumika: โหลดมาเล่นเมื่อหลายวันก่อน
16:49 Fumika: 555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555
16:49 Nichiyouki: อ๋อ เพิ่งปรับเปลี่ยนชื่อเรื่องน่ะ
16:50 Fumika: เเล้ว video ไปไหน
16:51 Nichiyouki: เอาออกไปก่อน เห็น Melo บอกมีภาพที่ติด R18
16:52 Fumika: ก็ทำ SB เซ็นเซอร์
16:52 Fumika: lol
16:53 Fumika: not necessary
16:53 Fumika: lol
16:53 Fumika: Normal
16:54 Nichiyouki: okay พร้อม
16:54 Fumika: 00:00:696 (1,2) - ลองแบบนี้สวยกว่านะ http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/474779
16:55 Fumika: 00:05:730 (5) - NC มัน up beat ตรงนี้อะ
16:56 Nichiyouki: รู้สึกว่าจะใช้แฮะ
16:57 Fumika: 00:20:206 (6) - NC ตัวนี้แล้วลบ NC ตัวข้างหลัง
16:58 Fumika: เพราะเสียงเริ่มตรงนั้น
16:58 Nichiyouki: อืม ได้
17:00 Nichiyouki: แต่ฟังจากเสียงร้อง รู้สึกแปลกๆน่ะ
17:00 Fumika: wม่หรอก
17:00 Fumika: เอาจริงๆเราว่า Hit Sounds เสียงเบาไปนะ
17:02 Nichiyouki: ตอนนี้ดัง 70% จะให้เพิ่มประมาณเท่าไร
17:02 Fumika: สัก 85
17:03 Nichiyouki: มันก็เท่ากับเสียงในช่วง kiai time น่ะสิ
17:04 Fumika: อืม
17:10 Fumika: กำ ต่อ
17:10 Nichiyouki: อืม
17:15 Fumika: 00:04:891 (8) -
17:15 Fumika: เราว่านะ
17:15 Fumika: ไม่ไปเริ่ม slider ตรงนี้แทนหรอ 00:04:682 (6) -
17:15 Fumika: เสียงเปียโนเริ่มตรงนี้
17:16 Fumika: ประมาณนี้ http://puu.sh/1jeFZ
17:16 Fumika: เวลาเล่นมันลื่นมือกว่า
17:16 Fumika: 00:12:024 (7) - clap
17:17 Nichiyouki: okay
17:18 Nichiyouki: เสียงดี
17:19 Fumika: 00:26:919 (6) - ตรงนี้เราว่าลบเส้นเขียวออกดีกว่าไหม
17:19 Fumika: เวลาเล่นอยู่เเล้วมันช้า
17:19 Fumika: ลากวืด
17:19 Fumika: ไม่ก็ NC ตรงนี้เพราะมันเปลี่ยนสปีดสไลเดอ
17:20 Fumika: like this 00:20:835 (1) -
17:20 Fumika: 00:37:619 (9) - NC
17:21 Nichiyouki: จะเพิม nc ทีกล่าวมาทั้งหมดเลย
17:22 Fumika: 00:58:807 - เราว่าจบสปินตรงนี้ดีกว่านะ เพราะว่า vocal มันจบตรงนี้
17:25 Fumika: 01:01:535 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/1jeLw เสียงมันฟังดูดีกว่านะ
17:27 Fumika: ถ้าเปลี่ยนตังนั้นลองใส่ clap ตรงนี้ 01:01:849 (3) - 01:02:059 (4) - 01:02:374 -
17:28 Nichiyouki: ได้ แต่จะไม่เพิ่ม 01:01:849 (3) - ละกัน
17:28 Nichiyouki: เสียงมันแปลกมาก
17:30 Fumika: 01:06:150 (1) - ตรงนี้ไม่น่า slow เลยนะ
17:30 Fumika: มันดูแปลกๆเวลาเล่น
17:32 Fumika: 01:18:633 (4) - add note
17:33 Fumika: หมดละ
17:33 Fumika: แค่นั้นเเหละ \:D/
Topic Starter
Thanks เน็ท \:D/ แก้เป็นส่วนมาก...
Here's the video http://puu.sh/1jwyx. Just the one scene at 00:34:247 right? Since nudity is the only thing suggestive, just used white effect. Hopefully nothing else since I didn't keep backup of the files used.

And recheck/mod as well

[For all diffs]

00:11:814 - (Normal/Hard/Insane only) finish here?
00:20:820 - Consider finish at 40% volume here
00:36:764 - Finish here (Normal & Insane, consider changing 00:36:989 to whistle instead but finish>finish sound good to me as well)
01:12:009 - (Already mention for Easy) Finish here

[Easy]

This need to follow the song better right?

00:00:681 (1) - 50% volume at begin like Normal & Hard, 60% feel just a bit too loud.
00:08:233 - Don't really think you need 2 white ticks recovery time since song is not that fast anyways. How about adding a hit circle here?
00:13:478 - Add note here with finish, this is a pretty prominent sound.
00:15:785 (3) - Finish sound pretty good at begin
00:17:464 - Do this rhythm http://puu.sh/1jwW7. Finish on begin and end of (1) Finish on begin of (3), clap on end of (3), finish at begin of (4), anything I didn't mention mean don't put anything on it. I didn't mention this in my earlier mod since white > red ticks sliders doesn't look good with how the slider ticks are placed, but this rhythm follow song much better.
00:22:918 (2,3) - Hmm, would definitely be better if 1/4 is used here, but maybe not for Easy. I'm thinking of this rhythm with clap on begin of (2) finish on (3) http://puu.sh/1jx3b Long slider to make it feel more like you're following bass drum and not cymbal (which is in 1/4) and hit circle to emphasis the vocal. Actually, I notice at for example 00:56:065 - You didn't put a hit circle on the white tick but start the spinner there. This is the only place where you put a hit circle on the white tick then spinner, so perhaps for consistency, you should remove (3) and start spinner on white tick.
00:28:373 (1) - I personally don't have a problem with this, but if rhythm need to follow song better, try this? http://puu.sh/1jx7Q. Clap at end of (1) and on begin + end of (3). New combo here 00:30:890 (1) -
00:38:443 (2) - Shorten by 1/2 and put on the red tick with finish at begin (keep finish at end of course)? Doesn't bother me too much like this through.
00:42:639 - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/1jxjP Finish on the hit circles (1 & 3). Clap at end of sliders. Do this rhythm and hitsounding for 00:45:995 (1,2,3) - as well, but instead do a slider starting from (3) [00:47:044] and end it on (1) [00:47:674) with finish at begin & end. New combo on this slider.
00:48:093 (2) - I don't really mind this, but I prefer a slider instead of a repeating slider (remove repeat, extend by 1/2)
00:52:708 (1) - I would shorten by 1/1 and add a hit circle on 00:53:548 with finish on begin and end of the slider and on the hit circle.
01:03:198 (1,2) - I think a slider starting where (1) is and (2) is flow better and fits with what you're trying to do.
01:08:233 (1,2) - Remove these two hit circles, add a hit circle with finish at 01:08:443. OR add a repeat to 01:07:184 (2) - Move the slider at 01:09:072 back 1/2 so it should be at 01:08:862 and extend it by 1/2 so it end at same spot. Keep finish at end for slider, I prefer no clap at begin for the slider, but your choice. Should follow song better now.
01:09:911 (1,2,3) - This is where you should have done what you did for 01:03:198 (1,2) so remove a repeat from (1) then this http://puu.sh/1jxCt with finish on the hit circles and be sure to re add the claps on the slider.
01:16:625 (1,2) - Same as 01:03:198
01:27:114 (2,3) - Hmm, prefer slider, but just preference.

Rhythm should be nicer after this. I didn't mention most in my earlier mod to respect mapping style, but if rhythm does need work, here are some suggestions which may help you. I don't really think this diff need much work through and I'm fine with it as it is.

[Normal]

00:13:493 (5) - Can barely hear the slide-slide sound, I suggest changing the timing point on here to 50% instead of 40% (+10%)
01:01:954 (6) - I would add a whistle at end too
01:15:800 (5) - Whistle at end
01:17:059 (2) - Remove whistle
01:30:486 (5) - Remove whistle at begin and add to repeat instead.

[Hard]

01:10:136 (4,5) - Something like this looks nicer to me http://puu.sh/1jy3T and the jump fits as well.

If you need to simplify some stuff, you can always remove the stream and change these pattern 00:23:353 (1,2,3) - to a simple repeating slider. Be sure to check what I mention for all diffs above.

[Insane]

*00:42:654 (1) - Finish here instead of clap?
*00:44:961 (3) - Finish at begin?
** Hitsound just sound a little empty to me even when the hitsounding make sense, adding these two finish make it feel less empty atleast for me.
00:51:045 (1,2) - Prefer finish over clap
01:01:535 (2) - Whistle at end
01:03:633 (4) - Whistle on begin
01:06:779 (3) - I think you should do finish instead
01:07:828 (4) - Finish here
01:08:458 (1) - Forgot finish at begin?
01:08:877 (2,4) - Whistle on these two hit circles
01:15:276 (4) - Whistle at begin
01:16:430 (1) - Add whistle and reduce this jump a bit more? Still feel a little too much for me so 1.4x-1.5x?
01:20:416 (6,7) - I prefer finish over clap

Better, but rhythm is a bit hard to catch at some parts but overall, I think it's good enough for rank.

Since my main problem with the map (hitsound) is now gone, I can star this beatmap.

Good luck on rank, me again if there's anything else wrong with video.

Edit: Feel free to kudosu this post if you feel it deserve a kudosu
Topic Starter
Thank you merchat for your everything :) Fixed mostly

And waiting for Konei and BeatofIke are fix.

Add new video.
Forgot to mention video offset :/ Video offset is 110.

Looks like I was tired, sorry :(
Topic Starter
Okay, thank you again =w= fixed
http://puu.sh/1jQtK

Sorry for delay orz

Fixed nearly all from merchat and all things of Melo.

I don't think rhythm can get much better without making this too hard for newbies, so I did my best now ~ :)

merchat7 wrote: 314x2

[Hard]

01:10:136 (4,5) - Something like this looks nicer to me http://puu.sh/1jy3T and the jump fits as well.

If you need to simplify some stuff, you can always remove the stream and change these pattern 00:23:353 (1,2,3) - to a simple repeating slider. Be sure to check what I mention for all diffs above.
I will have to find a way to reduce the difficulty somehow. I'll try to update this later.
Fix Everything and Reduced the difficulty!
Updated! :D
http://puu.sh/1k5tL
Topic Starter
Updated my map~
[General]
  1. nothing~!
[Easy]
  1. 00:17:479 (1) - Make it more curved~?
  2. 00:27:968 - Add a note?
  3. 00:39:507 - Strange short break.
  4. 00:43:702 (3) - Maybe move the end point to x340y101?
  5. 00:54:821 (4) - No need to newcombo,remove it.
  6. 01:32:584 (1,2,3) -A bit strange rhythm for the music.Maybe change like this http://puu.sh/1oujr
    Some finish sounds is confused,changetgem would be better:
    SPOILER
    00:15:800 (3) - remove
    00:17:479 (1) - add at the end,you can also use whistle instead
    00:18:947 (3) - ^
    00:20:835 (1) - remove at the start;add at the end
    00:25:870 (3) - add at the start
    00:43:702 (3) - ^
    00:44:751 (2) - add at the end
    00:46:430 (2) - add at the end
    00:52:723 (1) - remove at the start;add at the end
    00:53:563 (2) - remove
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:206 (6) - Add clap at the start and the reverse?
  2. 01:21:465 (4) -Newcombo maybe
    nice normal~
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:975 (2) - Move to the blue tick.
  2. 00:12:654 (2) - Same.
    00:29:437 (2) - Same.I dont want to point out all,check it yourself
    00:41:290 - Place some thing here please orz..
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:758 (2) - maybe add clap as normal diff!~
nice map~ :D
Topic Starter
Thank you Kotone for your mod :) Fixed some stuff on my diffs.
http://puu.sh/1oDN4

Thanks Kotone ~

Fixed some :3
Meh!
http://puu.sh/1oEp8
Updated!
Topic Starter
Updated my map~
Hi ~ Nichiyouki ~ :)

Random mod for #modreqs ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y


  1. Add (Short Ver.) in tittle,this song already have Full Ver.

[Insane] 3j432i


  1. 00:13:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try make more curved stream parttern.
  2. 00:45:381 (4,5) - This sound a bit stiff,change a 3/4 slider on 00:45:381 is better.
  3. 00:48:528 (4) - Add new combo,looks more readable.
  4. 00:51:884 (4) - ^
  5. 01:20:416 (6) - ^
  6. 01:12:549 - Add a circle to here,sound better with stream.
  7. 01:34:472 - Add clap really fitting with music.

[BeatofIke's Hard] 4z6n1


  1. 00:19:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a symmetry to here.
  2. 00:22:409 - Add a circle to here,follow with lyrics.
  3. 00:23:668 - Remove finish,sound better to me.
  4. 00:33:633 (4) - Make more symmetry slider.
  5. 00:35:101 (4) - Add new combo,looks more readable.
  6. 00:36:779 (4) - ^
  7. 00:38:668 (1,2,1) - Try change like this(00:39:297 - Add finish),sound much better.
  8. 00:59:856 (2) - Try Ctrl+G,flow much better.

[Normal] 2mh6e


  1. HP-1,OD+1 is better IMO.
  2. 00:22:094 (2) - Move 1 grid right,symmetry with 00:21:675 (1).

[Konei's Easy] 6e5w6y


  1. 00:00:696 - Remove whistle,sound better to me.
  2. 00:39:716 - Remove break time,really no need.
  3. 00:42:654 (1,2,3,1,2) - More better rhythm and easy playable,like this.
  4. 00:53:143 - Add finish and Remove finish on 00:53:563.
  5. 01:32:584 (1,2,3) - Sound really weird,you should change like this.

That's all ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

[BeatofIke's Hard] 4z6n1


  1. 00:19:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a symmetry to here. This was intentional.
  2. 00:22:409 - Add a circle to here,follow with lyrics. Fixed
  3. 00:23:668 - Remove finish,sound better to me. Fixed
  4. 00:33:633 (4) - Make more symmetry slider. I wanted to do this originally, but it would mess up the blanklet.
  5. 00:35:101 (4) - Add new combo,looks more readable. Fixed
  6. 00:36:779 (4) - ^ Fixed
  7. 00:38:668 (1,2,1) - Try change like this(00:39:297 - Add finish),sound much better. Fixed
  8. 00:59:856 (2) - Try Ctrl+G,flow much better.
Fixed
Thanks for the mod moe Rika :3
I will fix later!
Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Hi ~ Nichiyouki ~ :)

Random mod for #modreqs ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y


  1. Add (Short Ver.) in tittle,this song already have Full Ver. Added

[Insane] 3j432i


  1. 00:13:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try make more curved stream parttern. Fixed
  2. 00:45:381 (4,5) - This sound a bit stiff,change a 3/4 slider on 00:45:381 is better. I will change them is 1/1 slider instead.
  3. 00:48:528 (4) - Add new combo,looks more readable. This may be appropriate to use it for me. So added it.
  4. 00:51:884 (4) - ^ I think that it's fine.
  5. 01:20:416 (6) - ^ ^
  6. 01:12:549 - Add a circle to here,sound better with stream. Added
  7. 01:34:472 - Add clap really fitting with music. ^

[Normal] 2mh6e


  1. HP-1,OD+1 is better IMO. Okay, fixed
  2. 00:22:094 (2) - Move 1 grid right,symmetry with 00:21:675 (1). Moved

That's all ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Thank you Rika-chan for your mod :)
Then if I'm ready, I will call you for recheck

Add "(Short Ver.)" in title.
Thanks Rika ~

All done but your first rhythm suggestion. Because I think it's harder than mine :3

http://puu.sh/1p1p3
Topic Starter
Updated~
OK ~ Good job ~

Here you go :3


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