DarknessAngel wrote: 635qj

KOTOKO !!!
rank this,please \:D/

merchat7 wrote: 314x2

[Easy]

00:00:681 (1,2) - Consider this hitsound pattern instead. Finish/whistle at begin of (1), whistle on begin of (2), whistle on both sliders repeat and remove the whistles from the end of both slider. The reason is simple, the end of the sliders don't follow the piano properly so whistle sound weird on it, but the begin & repeat follow piano perfectly so it sound great to have whistle on them. yeah :3
00:09:911 (2,3,1,2,3) - The weird notes here are 00:12:848 (2,3). Try this http://puu.sh/1bkXX. Everything is still 1/1 space out from each other but follow the song much better. Be sure to put finish on begin of 00:10:750 (1) - ok~
00:14:107 (1) - Finish at begin for a new section? yup
00:17:464 (1) - I won't put finish at repeat and end since it make it really oblivious that this doesn't follow the cymbal in background. They are playing 1/2 earlier on the red tick so I recommend removing them. ok
00:32:569 (4) - Whistle fits at begin and repeat here or finish instead, maybe finish is a better idea then whistle. I thought I did them o.o added~
00:34:247 (1,2) - Similar to above, whistle/finish at end of these sliders. also thought I had them o.o added~
00:39:701 (1,2,3) - I don't recommend doing hit circles like this for this song as the song has lot of rhythms on red. Basically, patterns like this relies on reading the approach circle and not listening to the song. I wouldn't mind this if there was no sound on the red ticks, but they are and quite emphasized too. My best suggestion is to do a repeating slider instead. I added repeat to the Slider and beginned break earlier :3
00:40:750 - Such a short break, consider just removing it. It's fine imo
00:43:058 (2) - Should add a clap on the repeat consider all the others clap follow the drum here. yep
00:44:317 (1) - Should consider clap here as it's the same sound as on 00:44:736 & 00:44:946 which you put clap on. yep
00:46:415 (2) - Same as 00:43:058. yep
00:47:674 (1,2) - Consider finish on (1) and end of (2) with perhaps reduced volume. Consider clap on the repeat of (2) because you put one at end of 00:44:736 (2). awkey~
00:52:708 (1,2) - I prefer this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/1bldV (replace with long slider) since the end of (1) doesn't really follow the song. Yes I can hear a sound, but it's a very quiet sound and I think Easy shouldn't follow such sound. awkey
01:00:261 - Song is quite slow, I don't think this need 2 white tick pause after spinner. Consider adding a note here. Since the song is slow, the 2 white ticks feel too long, so it felt empty. Adding hit circle there seem to work fine for me. awkey~
01:00:261 (1,2,3) - Should consider adding whistle on 1st & 3rd white tick. sounds nice :3
01:04:457 (3) - Whistle on begin & end sound quite nice Sounds cute to the high tones ~ added :3
01:06:555 (1,2) - Finish at end of (1), replace clap at begin of (2) with finish.
01:07:184 (2) - Also, I don't agree with this, I think you need something on 01:07:813 since a strong sound is on there. Best solution is do slider starting here and ending it there. Another reason to do this is because you have hit circles afterward. Not too nice to play 3/2 rhythm unless the sound in the music is extremely prominent to warrant one, in this case, it doesn't. Be sure to add a finish on 01:07:813. okay~
01:08:653 (2) - Feel better to me with whistle, but I don't have any real reason for you to add it. It's on third tick, so yeah
01:12:009 (2) - Finish here? It sounds too early to me so no
01:12:848 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:00:261. yep~
01:17:883 (3) - Whistle at end awkey~
01:25:855 (1,2) - Consider finish on repeat of (1) and on (2).Yeah, nice
01:33:408 (2) - Whistle pattern sound better to me if you add whistle at end. awkey~

Not bad, this song seem hard to map an Easy for, but you did quite nicely. Mainly suggestion on how to make hitsound better. thanks :3

Yusura Sakurae wrote: 6s56j

Nice map 三☆
Good Luck

Sonnyc wrote: 491l5w

Halo~

Konei's Easy:

00:00:681 (1) - Whistle+Finish at the first sounds a bit weird to me.. Use only one sounds fine to me, besides, in taiko it will be better to play as K also
00:45:576 ( ) - Add a note? Feels empty I prefer starting on the downbeat
00:55:646 (2) - A finish seems good as your pattern sounds noisy to me
01:19:562 (1,2) - All Finishes? Use only in the heads.. Sounds a bit noisy sounds weird for me if a finish misses
01:33:408 (2) - Delete Whistle at the head I want to keep because of the high tones
01:34:247 (3) - Delete Whistle ^

Fuyune wrote: 2b3s24

please change this background ><
http://puu.sh/1el3V

256,176,17464,6,0,B|228:152|204:104|228:56|256:36,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,100,18093,2,0,B|332:124|356:172|332:220|304:240,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,264,18722,1,8,0:0:0
228,264,18827,1,0,0:0:0
228,264,18932,1,4,0:0:0
372,336,19352,2,0,B|336:356|296:348,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,272,19771,2,0,B|190:254|229:266,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,240,20191,1,8,0:0:0
244,164,20401,1,8,0:0:0

152,164,65086,2,0,B|220:176|256:124|256:124|292:176|364:164,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Konei wrote: 451331

EDIT: Sekai: 01:23:023 (1) - Missplaced, should start on downbeat ~

Lizellota wrote: 3e431c

[Konei]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 fixed
First of all: Why you used Normal Custom? sounds awful. Heh..okay. And Easy this is 2\1, not 1/2 according to the song, this is fine. And changed to soft sampleset
00:20:820 - Remove finish k
00:21:660 - ^ k
01:19:562 (1,2) - hard for begginners imo some challenging part wont kill them imo
00:09:911 (2,3,4,5) -

120,272,9911,2,0,B|216:272,1,89.9999999999999
256,192,10750,2,0,B|344:192|440:264|440:360,1,270
352,376,12429,2,0,B|352:328|312:296,1,89.9999999999999
184,256,13478,1,0,0:0:0

00:14:107 (1,2,3,4) -

304,192,14107,6,0,B|288:152|288:152|296:96,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,216,14946,2,0,B|352:264|352:264|344:312,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,320,15785,2,0,B|464:248|464:248|464:136,1,180
376,128,17044,1,8,0:0:0

Changed placement changed this
00:17:464 (1) -

00:32:569 (4) - remove repeat nope, plays good imo
00:34:247 (1) - x:328 y:80
01:01:939 (3) - ctrl + j? kay
01:03:198 (1) - x:128 y:112(if changed^)
01:04:037 (2) - x:264 y:232(if changed^) changed in another way
Heh..some useless mod :> anyway, i think MATs will find more, good luck~ and sorry my poor english yeah =w=

Sekai-nyan wrote: 5a4f1v

nich o.o you can remove my diff if you think it's really that bad.....

1. 00:42:639 -
2. 01:12:743 - (two inherited points?)

1. 01:09:492 -

168,68,60890,2,0,B|200:44|256:56|272:104|256:148,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:3:0

Kiiwa wrote: 3n2x5o

General
Is this video allowed? It's pretty.... R18 If MAT or BAT said to remove the video because this, I will remove it.

Kiiwa wrote: 3n2x5o

Konei's Easy
oh hi// o/
00:12:848 - Clap here is wrong, should be at 00:12:743 - It's probably best not to have one here at all because I think a blue tick slider is too hard for an Easy... right, fix :3
00:13:268 (3) - Is better at 00:13:058 - Extended Slider to red tick and removed note
00:38:443 (2) - Remove reverse please! Yeah D:
00:40:121 - 00:42:639 - I don't agree with this break. Too short for Easy.I think without this repeat it's even better :3 It kinda fits to the video and melody for me
01:19:562 (1,2) - Wrong rhythm. 01:19:562 (1) - Remove reverse and extend till next white tick. Start second slider at 01:21:030 (2) - no reverses please, and then end at 01:22:079 - >_<! You're really right, fix ~

Good luck!

merchat7 wrote: 314x2

Pm me if that happen, I'll censor the video

Also about tags, Front Wing, I didn't mean to remove frontwing, I just mean to add front wing incase people decide to search with the space so I think you should add frontwing back, keep front wing in tags of course.

Just randomly notice the beatmap, maybe I'll randomly recheck this later.

1. 00:35:191 - I think this is not allowed....
   
   

1. Many 2/1 and long slider does not have clap in slider tick. try [url=http://puu.sh/1iRlo]this wav[url]. This wav volume is adjusted.
   If you need rename this wav, do it yourself.
2. 00:08:653 (1,1) - This overlap detract from the cleanly.
   
   
   try this
3. 00:14:107 (1,2,3) - I think this note is able to clean
   
   

   240,284,14107,6,0,B|216:244|216:244|240:204,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   328,208,14946,2,0,B|350:245|350:245|326:285,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   408,324,15785,2,0,B|448:252|448:252|448:140,1,180

4. 00:42:639 - unnecessary green line.
5. 00:48:093 (2,3) - not like this flow. I think this placement makes harder to hit.
   
   
   If this placement, will be easy to hit.

1. 00:13:478 (5) - remove whistle slider start. but do not remove in entire
2. 00:38:653 (3) - put in center. this note has deviation.
3. 01:09:911 (1) - this note makes confuse for beginner. you should reset circle.

1. Stack Leniency change to 0.5
   00:09:911 (2,3,4,1) - these note is affected stack leniency. If you do not like to change it, add to deviation for note.

1. 00:36:764 (4,6) - add finish
2. 00:52:708 (3) - add finish in slider start.
3. 00:56:904 (8) - add finish? will be able to follow a more vocal.

NewRulerNA wrote: 276nw

Stack Leniency change to 0.5

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

a bit too hard, but this is still nice one.

NewRulerNA wrote: 276nw

hi

[General]

1. 00:35:191 - I think this is not allowed....
   
   

[Normal]

1. 00:13:478 (5) - remove whistle slider start. but do not remove in entire
2. 00:38:653 (3) - put in center. this note has deviation.
3. 01:09:911 (1) - this note makes confuse for beginner. you should reset circle.

[Insane]

1. 00:36:764 (4,6) - add finish
2. 00:52:708 (3) - add finish in slider start.
3. 00:56:904 (8) - add finish? will be able to follow a more vocal.

gl

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

[General]
Source should be "pure girl" Fixed to lowercase.
http://puu.sh/1iTLK
Cant approve this video because of the scene at 00:34:247 - . remove it or do something else to solve this Okay, I will ask merchat7 to fix something in the video.
Change "Creator" to your new name and add the previous one in tags Fixed

[Insane]
00:07:394 - Better to increase volume by 20% or so because the previous notes are really loud. hmm, I reduced volume volume the previous by 10%, and I increased volume by 10% instead. Likewise, I will increase volume 01:27:935, too.
00:19:771 (3,4) - Considering that 00:19:142 - is blank, (4) should be removed. or at least change (3) to 1/2 slider Fixed
00:25:226 (1,3,4) - not stacked well ^
00:37:604 (9) - Speed down? Ok, reduced speed.
00:42:639 (1,2,3) - 3/4 rhythm needs to be spaced at higher DS Fixed spacing.
00:44:317 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:53:128 - Accent is not here but at 00:53:023 - I think it's fine, and I heard something in 00:53:128. So I don't change.
01:09:282 (4,5,1) - Awkward flow imo Fixed them to stack.
01:32:988 (1) - Clap at the beginning Added

[Normal]
00:38:653 (3) - Move this note downward by 1 gird Oops, I don't intend to miss. Fixed.
01:01:939 (6) - Weird rhythm imo Okay, fixed and changed hitsound.
01:34:562 (1) - Considering the level of this difficulty, This spinner appears too suddenly. you should make (3) end at 01:34:142 - and spinner start at 01:34:667 - Fixed

Find more mods for Easy first; rhythm can be much better imo. And call me back for a recheck afterward

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

Forgot to mention this; Offset 696 (+15) Okay, moved offset to 696.

merchat7 wrote: 314x2

[Hard]

01:10:136 (4,5) - Something like this looks nicer to me http://puu.sh/1jy3T and the jump fits as well.

If you need to simplify some stuff, you can always remove the stream and change these pattern 00:23:353 (1,2,3) - to a simple repeating slider. Be sure to check what I mention for all diffs above.

1. nothing~!

1. 00:17:479 (1) - Make it more curved~?
2. 00:27:968 - Add a note?
3. 00:39:507 - Strange short break.
4. 00:43:702 (3) - Maybe move the end point to x340y101?
5. 00:54:821 (4) - No need to newcombo,remove it.
6. 01:32:584 (1,2,3) -A bit strange rhythm for the music.Maybe change like this http://puu.sh/1oujr
   Some finish sounds is confused,changetgem would be better:
   
   SPOILER

   00:15:800 (3) - remove
   00:17:479 (1) - add at the end,you can also use whistle instead
   00:18:947 (3) - ^
   00:20:835 (1) - remove at the start;add at the end
   00:25:870 (3) - add at the start
   00:43:702 (3) - ^
   00:44:751 (2) - add at the end
   00:46:430 (2) - add at the end
   00:52:723 (1) - remove at the start;add at the end
   00:53:563 (2) - remove

1. 00:20:206 (6) - Add clap at the start and the reverse?
2. 01:21:465 (4) -Newcombo maybe
   nice normal~

1. 00:10:975 (2) - Move to the blue tick.
2. 00:12:654 (2) - Same.
   00:29:437 (2) - Same.I dont want to point out all,check it yourself
   00:41:290 - Place some thing here please orz..

1. 00:12:758 (2) - maybe add clap as normal diff!~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

[BeatofIke's Hard] 4z6n1

1. 00:19:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a symmetry to here. This was intentional.
2. 00:22:409 - Add a circle to here,follow with lyrics. Fixed
3. 00:23:668 - Remove finish,sound better to me. Fixed
4. 00:33:633 (4) - Make more symmetry slider. I wanted to do this originally, but it would mess up the blanklet.
5. 00:35:101 (4) - Add new combo,looks more readable. Fixed
6. 00:36:779 (4) - ^ Fixed
7. 00:38:668 (1,2,1) - Try change like this(00:39:297 - Add finish),sound much better. Fixed
   
8. 00:59:856 (2) - Try Ctrl+G,flow much better.

Fixed

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Hi ~ Nichiyouki ~

Random mod for #modreqs ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y

1. Add (Short Ver.) in tittle,this song already have Full Ver. Added

[Insane] 3j432i

1. 00:13:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try make more curved stream parttern. Fixed
2. 00:45:381 (4,5) - This sound a bit stiff,change a 3/4 slider on 00:45:381 is better. I will change them is 1/1 slider instead.
3. 00:48:528 (4) - Add new combo,looks more readable. This may be appropriate to use it for me. So added it.
4. 00:51:884 (4) - ^ I think that it's fine.
5. 01:20:416 (6) - ^ ^
6. 01:12:549 - Add a circle to here,sound better with stream. Added
7. 01:34:472 - Add clap really fitting with music. ^

[Normal] 2mh6e

1. HP-1,OD+1 is better IMO. Okay, fixed
2. 00:22:094 (2) - Move 1 grid right,symmetry with 00:21:675 (1). Moved

That's all ~ Nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~