This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 11 พฤศจิกายน 2555 at 21:15:36

Artist: KOTOKO & Satou Hiromi
Title: One-Chance!! (Short Ver.)
Source: pure girl
Tags: Front Wing FrontWing opening eroge visual novel Konei BeatofIke -puregirl- puregirl Elements Garden Fujita Junpei nich95
BPM: 143
Filesize: 13752kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

1. BeatofIke's Hard (4.74 stars, 249 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 350 notes)
3. Konei's Easy (2.23 stars, 91 notes)
4. Normal (4.29 stars, 156 notes)

: KOTOKO & Satou Hiromi - One-Chance!! (Short Ver.)
: KOTOKO & Satou Hiromi - One-Chance!! (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd ranked beatmap

Opening from pure girl

Easy - Done by Konei
Normal - Done by me
Hard - Done by Sekai-nyan
Insane2 - Done by me

Thank you for~
Konei, BeatofIke, and Sekai-nyan for their guest diff
Fuyune for new BG
merchat7 for fixing video


Enjoy!

I'll definitely come mod this when you finish, this and Lovely Quest are the two visual novels I'm looking forward to this month.

If I make this map finish, you can mod my map at any time.

Thank you in advance.

Lol~ May I do Easy?

Konei wrote: 451331

Lol~ May I do Easy?

Sure

http://puu.sh/17bdo

:3

Okay, ed the Easy diff.

Hmm.. shall I map a Hard?

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

Hmm.. shall I map a Hard?

Sure!

>< can i make another hard diff? i liked the song ...

hmm...
Okay, you can make Hard diff as well

Start doing it...

Sorry for long wait. Finally finished! Here you go:
http://puu.sh/18tzS

Okay, ed BeatofIke's Hard diff.

well xD it's harder then hard but it's up to you if you want it as hard or insane wwwww

http://puu.sh/18vMX

don't forget to add "Sekai, -Sekai- and Sekai-nyan" on tags ><

Okay, ed Sekai's Insane diff, and move to Pending Beatmaps.

Since you it as insane so..... changed some settings :3

http://puu.sh/18Mqw

Ok, updated...

Hm. I think Sekai's diff as hard + would give a better spread :3

no i think it fits as insane then hard + ><// orz

Then it's fine :3

Source→-Puregirl-

Thank you, No_Gu

Changed source name...

hi hi as requested from my Mod Queue (๑╹ω╹๑)

[General]
looks all fine :3

[breaktimes:]

Easy 00:40:541 - 00:42:639
Normal : none
BeatofIke's Hard : 00:41:170 - 00:42:639
Sekai's Insane : none
Insane : none

you should fix it >u<

[kiai time:]

you should fix it:

Easy :
00:59:422 - 01:06:135
01:09:492 - 01:27:953

Normal :
00:59:422 - 01:06:135
01:09:492 - 01:12:743
01:12:848 - 01:27:953

BeatofIke's Hard :
00:59:422 - 01:27:953

Sekai's Insane:
00:59:422 - 01:06:135
01:09:492 - 01:12:743
01:12:848 - 01:27:953

Insane :
00:59:422 - 01:06:135
01:09:492 - 01:12:743
01:12:848 - 01:27:953

[Insane]
00:13:268 (4) - Nc

sorry for a noob mod Q___Q

I fixed in Insane diff. But Breaktimes and Kiai time, I'm not sure that are Konei and BeatofIke fix it?

So waiting for fix of them...

Thank you for mod, Lally

Updated the Insane diff...

It's okay for break times to be different in all difficuties, but not the kiai times. Although, guest difficulties ususally have exceptions. To keep things less complicated, I shal fix. Anyways, thanks for the mod!

KOTOKO !!!
rank this,please \:D/

DarknessAngel wrote: 635qj

KOTOKO !!!
rank this,please \:D/

Go for rank!

Hey nich95 D

Thanks for your mod. So now it's my turn ^.^

Lets start then.. but remeber, these are only my suggestions, no need to change it

Konei's Easy

00:08:233 (1) - Don't know if it's allowed (because of the spinner) - but if yes, maybe add a circle
01:03:618 - add a circle?
01:07:184 (2) - 1 more reverse?
01:07:184 (2) - add a circle, i think the flow is broken (same as 01:03:618) if you just make a "break" here :/

Konei's Easy

00:21:450 (2) - add a circle?
00:36:974 (6) - i would delete it
00:37:184 (6) - and add one here
01:21:869 - add a circle

BeatofIke's Hard

00:14:736 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/1aNxx, http://puu.sh/1aNxM maybe make it like this?
00:17:254 (5) - delete this and make 00:16:625 (4) - 1 tick longer
01:12:743 (6) - add one
01:14:946 (3) - make 1 tick longer while deleting 01:15:576 (4)

this beatmap looks really nice btw!

Sekai's Insane

00:42:743 (1,2,3) - make it like http://puu.sh/1aNIl?
00:44:317 (1) - same
00:52:604 (7) - add a circle
01:05:506 (1) - new combo
01:10:121 - why this break?
01:33:513 (3,4,5,6,7) - thats a bit weird o.o

Insane

00:08:862 (7) - new combo
01:12:534 (9) - delete this

can't find anything more, its just awesome


so, thats it

i hope that i could help you a little~ good luck

Fixed the Kiai Time. Didn't like Irreversible's suggestions. Sorry!
http://puu.sh/1aUaF

Thanks Fixed some :3

Nothing changed~

For the breaks at 01:03:618 and 01:17:044 -> I leave them because I think a break here is nice for Easy and it sounds really cool to me at this place.

Thanks for mods anyway~ =w=

As promised, I come to mod this.

[General]

- About source, I personally think Pure Girl was fine, keep in mind ピュアガール = Pure Girl. Good explanation of English loanword in Japanese can be found here http://www.japan-guide.com/e/e2051.html. So I think they write -puregirl- to make it oblivious that the title is from English. If you want to be 100% accurate with the title, then it should really be Pure Girl -puregirl-, but weird to write pure girl two times right? Alternative, you can write the romaji of the kanji which is Pyuagaaru, but looks really weird. So after considering all this, I find Pure Girl to be the best choice for source and it looks the nicest styling wise too. If you really prefer -Puregirl- then uncapitalize the p so it should be -puregirl- instead since it's not capitalized in the logo that No_Gu gave. After this, you should add pure & girl to tags since I couldn't find this song when I search with this words. I was wondeirng why I couldn't find this beatmap. Same thing if you decide to change the source to Pure Girl, add puregirl to tags.
- Tags, you should definitely consider adding Elements Garden to tags as this group compose so many songs including popular anime songs. Composer should also be considered so Fujita Junpei, since this person have written lot of songs, a list can be found on vgmdb http://vgmdb.net/artist/110. Lastly, sometime, the company frontwing is spaced out so, front wing, I will not find this song if I search front or wing so consider this. English sources like wikipedia does this http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Front_Wing.

[Easy]

00:00:681 (1,2) - Consider this hitsound pattern instead. Finish/whistle at begin of (1), whistle on begin of (2), whistle on both sliders repeat and remove the whistles from the end of both slider. The reason is simple, the end of the sliders don't follow the piano properly so whistle sound weird on it, but the begin & repeat follow piano perfectly so it sound great to have whistle on them.
00:09:911 (2,3,1,2,3) - The weird notes here are 00:12:848 (2,3). Try this http://puu.sh/1bkXX. Everything is still 1/1 space out from each other but follow the song much better. Be sure to put finish on begin of 00:10:750 (1) -
00:14:107 (1) - Finish at begin for a new section?
00:17:464 (1) - I won't put finish at repeat and end since it make it really oblivious that this doesn't follow the cymbal in background. They are playing 1/2 earlier on the red tick so I recommend removing them.
00:32:569 (4) - Whistle fits at begin and repeat here or finish instead, maybe finish is a better idea then whistle.
00:34:247 (1,2) - Similar to above, whistle/finish at end of these sliders.
00:39:701 (1,2,3) - I don't recommend doing hit circles like this for this song as the song has lot of rhythms on red. Basically, patterns like this relies on reading the approach circle and not listening to the song. I wouldn't mind this if there was no sound on the red ticks, but they are and quite emphasized too. My best suggestion is to do a repeating slider instead.
00:40:750 - Such a short break, consider just removing it.
00:43:058 (2) - Should add a clap on the repeat consider all the others clap follow the drum here.
00:44:317 (1) - Should consider clap here as it's the same sound as on 00:44:736 & 00:44:946 which you put clap on.
00:46:415 (2) - Same as 00:43:058.
00:47:674 (1,2) - Consider finish on (1) and end of (2) with perhaps reduced volume. Consider clap on the repeat of (2) because you put one at end of 00:44:736 (2).
00:52:708 (1,2) - I prefer this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/1bldV (replace with long slider) since the end of (1) doesn't really follow the song. Yes I can hear a sound, but it's a very quiet sound and I think Easy shouldn't follow such sound.
01:00:261 - Song is quite slow, I don't think this need 2 white tick pause after spinner. Consider adding a note here. Since the song is slow, the 2 white ticks feel too long, so it felt empty. Adding hit circle there seem to work fine for me.
01:00:261 (1,2,3) - Should consider adding whistle on 1st & 3rd white tick.
01:04:457 (3) - Whistle on begin & end sound quite nice
01:06:555 (1,2) - Finish at end of (1), replace clap at begin of (2) with finish.
01:07:184 (2) - Also, I don't agree with this, I think you need something on 01:07:813 since a strong sound is on there. Best solution is do slider starting here and ending it there. Another reason to do this is because you have hit circles afterward. Not too nice to play 3/2 rhythm unless the sound in the music is extremely prominent to warrant one, in this case, it doesn't. Be sure to add a finish on 01:07:813.
01:08:653 (2) - Feel better to me with whistle, but I don't have any real reason for you to add it.
01:12:009 (2) - Finish here?
01:12:848 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:00:261.
01:17:883 (3) - Whistle at end
01:25:855 (1,2) - Consider finish on repeat of (1) and on (2).
01:33:408 (2) - Whistle pattern sound better to me if you add whistle at end.

Not bad, this song seem hard to map an Easy for, but you did quite nicely. Mainly suggestion on how to make hitsound better.

[Normal]

00:00:681 (1) - Consider finish at begin instead of whistle
00:04:037 - 00:07:184 - I cannot hear the hitsound here, seem like you want to do a cresendo effect, but I think you lower the hitsound volume way too much. Consider these two timing points volume suggestions. 40% > 50% > 60% or 50% > 55% > 60%.
00:13:478 (5) - Raise the volume (50% maybe?) and add whistle to begin and the slider body. Sound better than not having anything to me.
00:23:338 (1) - I prefer low volume finish instead, but your choice.
00:24:177 (2) - Finish at end.
00:25:855 (2) - ^
00:32:569 (3) - ^
00:35:925 (4) - Same as 00:23:538.
00:39:282 (4) - Whistle at end?
00:40:121 (5) - Consider clap here too.
00:42:639 (1) - Personally think this should be a finish at begin instead.
00:47:674 (3,4) - Consider finish instead of clap at begin of (3) & on (4).
00:51:030 (4) - Same as 00:23:538.
00:53:128 - I think this finish should be higher volume than 00:54:387.
00:56:485 (3) - Clap at end, listen to drums in the background
00:57:743 (5) - Whistle on repeat & end. Whistle sound nice with piano.
01:01:939 (6) - Whistle on begin and end.
01:04:457 (4) - ^
01:06:764 (2) - Finish at end.
01:08:443 (5) - Finish at begin
01:12:009 (6) - ^
01:13:687 (2,3) - Quite empty without whistle here, add whistle to begin of these two sliders.
01:17:044 (2,4) - Whistle on (2) & begin + end of (4). Also sound nice if you add to 01:18:932 (5).
01:20:401 (1) - I prefer finish instead of clap at begin.
01:22:079 (4) - No hitsound on this? Definitely do clap at repeat (be sure to use s:c2) then finish at begin if you do for above. Don't add anything to end.
01:29:212 (3,5) - Whistle at end of (3), begin of (5)?
Actually, 00:07:813 (2,4,5) - Do whistle at end of (2) & (5) add to (4) then do above suggestion and add to 01:28:792 (2) as well.
01:33:827 (3) - Finish at begin or at the very least whistle.

Overall, it's a good diff, but I'm curious about your finish logic. Need some whistle through, I gave suggestion on the places that need it.

[Hard]

00:09:072 (1) - Whistle begin & end.
00:21:660 (2) - Add clap here atleast, hitsound sound really empty here since you didn't have anything on 00:21:240.
00:25:436 (3) - Prefer clap over whistle.
00:29:527 (2) - Whistle pattern sound nicer to me if you add a whistle here.
00:41:170 - Short break, consider just removing it.
00:52:708 (1) - Whistle at end, similar issue to 00:21:660. Consider adding on (2) as well.
00:54:387 (5) - Finish at begin
01:07:813 (1,3) - Consider finish at begin of these two sliders
01:09:492 (1,5) - Whistle on (1), begin of (5).
01:12:009 (2) - I hear the drum, consider adding clap.
01:19:562 (1) - Finish at begin
01:12:848 - 01:19:352 - What happen to the whistle? Your whistle hitsounding is quite good, so don't see why you didn't try to put some here. Here's a quick suggestion. 01:13:687 (3) - Whistle on begin 01:14:527 (1) - Whistle here 01:14:946 (3,5) - Whistle at these two sliders end 01:17:044 (1) - Whistle here 01:17:883 (1,2,3) - Whistle on these three hit circles. Sound better than nothing I think. I don't really like how the whistle sound on 01:14:527 (1) much, but maybe you'll like it, if not just remove it. Same thing for 00:59:422 - 01:05:086.

Pretty good, but unsure why not much whistle at certain part in kiai. Also, I personally think patterns like this 00:23:338 (1,2,3) fits better as jump patterns in an Insane diff rather than anti jumps in Hard. Not impossible to get 300s on, but doesn't feel comfortable to me.

[Sekai's Insane]

00:01:729 (4,5,2) - I don't mind the current whistle pattern too much, but I feel you should have whistle on the piano so 00:01:729 (4,5,2) - on (4) & (2), end of (5). Almost forgot, also on begin of 00:03:408 (4)
00:04:667 (5,6,8) - And here, on (5) & (8), end of (6), should remove from (7).
You may want to remove all whistles that doesn't follow piano, I think it sound better that way, but your choice
00:08:233 (2,5,8) - Whistle on (2,5), end of (8).
00:11:380 (2) - Add finish
00:12:219 (7,2,3) - Finish end of (7), on (2), begin of (3)
00:12:639 (1) - Should be on 00:12:848, be sure to add finish to it
00:17:464 (1,3) - I'm sure you can make a better blanket then this
00:18:093 (2,4) - Finish at these two hit circles.
00:19:352 (7) - Clap at begin
00:19:771 (8) - Finish at begin
00:20:191 (9) - Add clap
00:20:820 (1) - I think reducing the volume of this finish a bit would be better
00:21:240 (3) - Finish at end
00:22:499 (1) - Clap at begin
00:23:967 (4) - Add finish
00:26:275 (2,3,4) - Clap at end of all sliders. Alternatively, finish at end of (2,3) then clap at end of (4).
00:29:212 (3) - Add clap
00:30:051 (7) - ^
00:33:198 (2) - Add finish
00:36:345 (2) - Clap at end
00:44:317 (1,5) - Add clap
00:45:366 (6) - Finish
00:47:044 (3) - ^
00:51:869 (4) - ^
00:56:065 (5) - Finish at begin
01:06:764 (3,5) - Finish
01:07:813 (1) - Finish at begin
01:09:492 (1) - ^
01:17:883 (1,3) - Finish at begin of (1), whistle on (3)
01:22:079 (3) - Finish
01:31:939 (2) - ^
01:33:198 (2,3) - Move 1/4 right and add finish
01:34:457 (7) - Finish

Just add whistle on 1st & 3rd white tick in kiai, not all place of course and not if there is finish so 00:59:422 - 01:04:457 - and 01:12:848 - 01:17:044 -
Focused on mainly hitsound, but didn't notice a problem wit placement.

[Insane]

I won't mention hitsound anymore as I mention enough, just check other diffs suggestion. I feel Hard has the best hitsound right now so you can follow the hitsound pattern of that diff if you wish.

00:08:443 (4,5,6) - Unstack? To keep the flow going and emphasizing 00:08:862 (7) better. Also feel less clustered.
00:08:862 (7) - New combo
00:09:911 (11) - Prefer if you snap this to 1.5x as well.
00:12:219 (7) - Stack with (5)? I find you map this in quite a clean way and this make the diff feel a bit messy.
00:13:058 (3) - Easier to read the stream after this note for me if you place at x:64 y:240.
00:16:625 (4) - Jump on this note, maybe place where 00:18:093 (1) is, jump is justified by vocal.
00:18:513 (2,3,4) - I don't see why the spacing is different from 00:19:352 (1,2,3)? Pattern feel better to me with 1.1x with (4) stacked on 00:17:254 (7) -
00:21:660 (2) - Feel like this need a jump, place at x:472 y:168 maybe?
00:23:653 (2,3) - Hmm, stack (2) on begin of 00:22:499 (7) and snap (3) to 1.5x distant snap?
01:02:359 (5,6,1) - Consider doing a jump pattern here or simply, snap to higher spacing. Try moving (6) to x:208 y:48 maybe.
01:16:415 (1) - There isn't anything here that justify such a big jump, I think you should reduce to something like 1.6x instead.
01:17:674 (6) - Similar to what I suggest for 01:02:559.
01:19:352 (1) - Similar to 01:16:415, nothing to really justify this jump so feel weird to play, try to reduce.
01:30:471 (6,7,8) - 1.3x spacing to this stream because 01:29:422 (1,2,3). This stream is spaced out 1.3x from previous note. Hope you understand what I mean, but try placing 01:30:261 (5) at x:280 y:264.
01:33:827 (3,4) - Try something a little different maybe? Nothing wrong with the pattern, but maybe more interesting to do for example this http://puu.sh/1bndI

Definitely try to improve the hitsounds, sound quite empty at some parts, like during kiai time, need some whistle there.

Too much hitsound issue for my taste, so I'll hold my star for now, feel free to me at a later time when you think hitsound is better. I may star your map then. Since hitsound requires a lot of concentration to mod, I didn't manage to catch other issues. I decide not to check hitsound in Insane to help polish the map a little, hopes it help.

hmm, well good luck, this mod took a bit longer than expected to finish.

merchat7 wrote: 314x2

[Easy]

00:00:681 (1,2) - Consider this hitsound pattern instead. Finish/whistle at begin of (1), whistle on begin of (2), whistle on both sliders repeat and remove the whistles from the end of both slider. The reason is simple, the end of the sliders don't follow the piano properly so whistle sound weird on it, but the begin & repeat follow piano perfectly so it sound great to have whistle on them. yeah :3
00:09:911 (2,3,1,2,3) - The weird notes here are 00:12:848 (2,3). Try this http://puu.sh/1bkXX. Everything is still 1/1 space out from each other but follow the song much better. Be sure to put finish on begin of 00:10:750 (1) - ok~
00:14:107 (1) - Finish at begin for a new section? yup
00:17:464 (1) - I won't put finish at repeat and end since it make it really oblivious that this doesn't follow the cymbal in background. They are playing 1/2 earlier on the red tick so I recommend removing them. ok
00:32:569 (4) - Whistle fits at begin and repeat here or finish instead, maybe finish is a better idea then whistle. I thought I did them o.o added~
00:34:247 (1,2) - Similar to above, whistle/finish at end of these sliders. also thought I had them o.o added~
00:39:701 (1,2,3) - I don't recommend doing hit circles like this for this song as the song has lot of rhythms on red. Basically, patterns like this relies on reading the approach circle and not listening to the song. I wouldn't mind this if there was no sound on the red ticks, but they are and quite emphasized too. My best suggestion is to do a repeating slider instead. I added repeat to the Slider and beginned break earlier :3
00:40:750 - Such a short break, consider just removing it. It's fine imo
00:43:058 (2) - Should add a clap on the repeat consider all the others clap follow the drum here. yep
00:44:317 (1) - Should consider clap here as it's the same sound as on 00:44:736 & 00:44:946 which you put clap on. yep
00:46:415 (2) - Same as 00:43:058. yep
00:47:674 (1,2) - Consider finish on (1) and end of (2) with perhaps reduced volume. Consider clap on the repeat of (2) because you put one at end of 00:44:736 (2). awkey~
00:52:708 (1,2) - I prefer this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/1bldV (replace with long slider) since the end of (1) doesn't really follow the song. Yes I can hear a sound, but it's a very quiet sound and I think Easy shouldn't follow such sound. awkey
01:00:261 - Song is quite slow, I don't think this need 2 white tick pause after spinner. Consider adding a note here. Since the song is slow, the 2 white ticks feel too long, so it felt empty. Adding hit circle there seem to work fine for me. awkey~
01:00:261 (1,2,3) - Should consider adding whistle on 1st & 3rd white tick. sounds nice :3
01:04:457 (3) - Whistle on begin & end sound quite nice Sounds cute to the high tones ~ added :3
01:06:555 (1,2) - Finish at end of (1), replace clap at begin of (2) with finish.
01:07:184 (2) - Also, I don't agree with this, I think you need something on 01:07:813 since a strong sound is on there. Best solution is do slider starting here and ending it there. Another reason to do this is because you have hit circles afterward. Not too nice to play 3/2 rhythm unless the sound in the music is extremely prominent to warrant one, in this case, it doesn't. Be sure to add a finish on 01:07:813. okay~
01:08:653 (2) - Feel better to me with whistle, but I don't have any real reason for you to add it. It's on third tick, so yeah
01:12:009 (2) - Finish here? It sounds too early to me so no
01:12:848 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:00:261. yep~
01:17:883 (3) - Whistle at end awkey~
01:25:855 (1,2) - Consider finish on repeat of (1) and on (2).Yeah, nice
01:33:408 (2) - Whistle pattern sound better to me if you add whistle at end. awkey~

Not bad, this song seem hard to map an Easy for, but you did quite nicely. Mainly suggestion on how to make hitsound better. thanks :3

Thank you for mod~ >.<~

http://puu.sh/1btTR

merchat7 for MAT
Thanks for the mod! Fixed Everything (I think)
http://puu.sh/1bR3p

Thanks for the nice hitsound mod merchat =w= fixed everything

http://puu.sh/1cbeW

@Irreversible, fixed something

@merchat7, fixed everything, maybe?
And I may have something additional in my diff.

Thank you for their mods and merchat's comment, Irreversible and merchat

Change source is "Pure Girl" again.
Add "-puregirl- puregirl Elements Garden Fujita Junpei", and change "FrontWing" is "Front Wing" in tags.
Update all diff.

http://puu.sh/1cgaG

Spinner missed in my diff orz

Update onegai~

Okay, Update again~

Nice map 三☆
Good Luck

Yusura Sakurae wrote: 6s56j

Nice map 三☆
Good Luck

Thank you, Yusura

Hi M4M here ~

Konei's Easy :

00:10:750 (1) - maybe you tried to make a red point for keyboard ? then when this ball is here 00:11:380 - , the ball turn a bit earlier.
00:44:317 (1) - remove clap
01:12:743 - there is 2 inhertered points here

Normal :

01:09:911 (1) - add clap
01:10:750 (3) - ^

Hard :

00:04:667 - add whistle ?
00:05:086 - ^
00:05:506 - ^
00:27:114 (3) - add clap

Sekai's Insane :

00:12:848 (1) - move this here ? 00:12:743 -
00:17:464 (1,3) - they look a bit strange for me, maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/1d0J0

Insane :

01:19:981 - add clap ?

Sorry for poor mod but that all I can find .__.
Well good luck and go go rank ~

Fixed everything for my 2 diffs

Thank you for mod and star, Kin

Updated my diffs

Nothing changed, Kin~

Thanks Kin fixed them :3

http://puu.sh/1dily

Updated Sekai's Insane diff

Sorry for the delay! Updated!
http://puu.sh/1dGfB

Updated BeatofIke's Hard diff

Halo~

Konei's Easy:

00:00:681 (1) - Whistle+Finish at the first sounds a bit weird to me.. Use only one
00:45:576 ( ) - Add a note? Feels empty
00:55:646 (2) - A finish seems good as your pattern
01:19:562 (1,2) - All Finishes? Use only in the heads.. Sounds a bit noisy
01:33:408 (2) - Delete Whistle at the head
01:34:247 (3) - Delete Whistle

Normal:

00:34:247 (1) - 1 Grid up?
00:35:925 (4) - 1 Grid down?
00:40:121 (5,1) - Set Combo as (1,2)
00:41:799 (4) - Delete Whistle at the end
00:47:674 (3,4) - Delete Finish
01:12:639 (7) - Make a curve?
01:33:827 (3) - Start with a Clap instead of Whistle

BeatofIke's Hard:

-- Check the kiai time, which is different from other difficulties~

00:18:513 (4) - Delete Whistle
00:34:876 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Is this pattern a Symmetry? If yes, 00:35:716 (7) - 1 Grid up
01:01:729 (4,5) - I prefer a symmetry here. Similar with ^
01:04:771 (2) - Delete Whistle
01:08:443 (3) - Delete Finish at the end

Sekai's Insane:

00:04:562 (4) - A 1/4 beat here doesn't fit, but actually goes well in 00:04:352 So move here, also the distance..
00:20:820 (1) - Delete Finish
00:21:240 (3) - Add Finish at the head, and delete it in the end
00:27:743 (6) - Start a combo here (Change your own the next combos..)
00:34:247 (5) - ^
00:37:604 (1) - Delete Finish and stacking perfectly on (2) would be better
00:42:848 (1) - I don't think this is a good place for a note.. Consider placing notes at 00:42:639 and 00:42:953 instead of here
01:11:904 (5) - Delete this, and place a note at 01:11:485 Stream fits better like this
01:14:527 (6) - Just opinion, but stacking on top of (7) will be better
01:33:198 (2) - Hard to read the rythm here.. place it in 01:33:303, and Delete Finish
01:33:618 ( ) - Consider adding a note here

Insane

00:16:625 (4,5) - Rather jumping (4), a jump with (5) will be better
00:25:226 (4) - NC?

Good luck

Sonnyc wrote: 491l5w

Halo~

Konei's Easy:

00:00:681 (1) - Whistle+Finish at the first sounds a bit weird to me.. Use only one sounds fine to me, besides, in taiko it will be better to play as K also
00:45:576 ( ) - Add a note? Feels empty I prefer starting on the downbeat
00:55:646 (2) - A finish seems good as your pattern sounds noisy to me
01:19:562 (1,2) - All Finishes? Use only in the heads.. Sounds a bit noisy sounds weird for me if a finish misses
01:33:408 (2) - Delete Whistle at the head I want to keep because of the high tones
01:34:247 (3) - Delete Whistle ^

Sorry nothing changed u.u
Thanks for mod anyway~

Thanks for modding and fixed most of those. And remapped the last confusing part~

http://puu.sh/1eiZw

Fixed Everything! I like all the suggestions. Updated!
http://puu.sh/1ejT6

Fixed mostly

Thank you for mod, Sonnyc

Updated all diffs

please change this background ><
http://puu.sh/1el3V

Fuyune wrote: 2b3s24

please change this background ><
http://puu.sh/1el3V

Okay, thank you

Changed BG & updated again

Noone mods? o.o

Then I''m gonna do some mod here ~


must fix

should fix

I wanted to mention

Suggestion


[Normal]

00:04:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you make this a star? http://puu.sh/1fKPe
00:07:184 (7) - Delete this note and extend 6 to the blue tick (with the repeat), sounds much better
00:13:478 (5) - This whistle sounds noisy, removing it is better imo :< Or at least reduce the volume
00:17:044 (6) - This looks a bit random placed imo, moving it like http://puu.sh/1fKSi would give a more reasonable pattern
00:19:352 (3,4,5) - Try some whistle on them for the piano
00:35:925 (3,4,5,6) - Also looks a bit random http://puu.sh/1fKTR
00:51:869 (5) - Could be hard to read for beginners, consider moving it elsewhere
01:19:771 (7) - NC really should start here due to the vocal
01:20:401 (1) - Remove this NC ofc if you followed^
01:33:827 (3) - Try whistle at end?


[BeatofIke's Hard]

00:05:296 (4) - 1 grid down for they stop touching and consistent spacing between 1 2 3 and 4
00:18:722 - Add note here, the beat seems strong on this place
00:20:610 (6) - Consider starting new combo here due to the vocals starting
00:21:660 (2) - I think finish instead of clap sounds better
00:25:855 (1) - I don't understand why this NC is here, remove it? It seems pointless to me
00:52:499 (5) - Start NC here, the music is starting to shift from this point
00:55:016 (6) - Why no NC here? Vocals are starting here again and on 1 NC doesnt really makes much sense
00:56:065 (1) - Remove whistle from this Spinner? Sounds unfiting to me
01:25:436 (1) - remove NC to keep your consistency?


[Sekai's Insane]

00:55:646 (4) - Try whistle for the piano
01:00:890 (8,1) - Switching the places of the note and this Slider fits much better with vocal and music http://puu.sh/1fMhE
01:16:205 (1) - Finish at start?
01:21:240 (1) - This finish sound is too early for music, it should be on 01:21:030


That's all for those diff I could find currently :3

Let's have good luck o/

[BeatofIke]

Pretty nice done~ really liked you style ;_;
00:59:841 (2) - ctrl + g?
01:05:086 (3) -

152,164,65086,2,0,B|220:176|256:124|256:124|292:176|364:164,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

and stack next notes ><

Insane and Normal is pretty good~
Konei.. i see again your an Easy and just want to say one important thing: look at other Easy diffs and you will understand what i mean. Just that

Good luck ~~ i want to make an insane ;_; love this song<3

http://puu.sh/1fP5g

Thanks Liz and Konei for modding :3

Fixed Some! Updated all mods!
http://puu.sh/1fPts

@Lizellota: Lol, what the fuck? XD Can't you even point out if you think that something is wrong? :3

It's really difficult to improve something if you are only told "look at other easys, you'll understand" xDD You made my day.


EDIT: Sekai: 01:23:023 (1) - Missplaced, should start on downbeat ~

Fixed some in Konei's mod

Thank you for mods, Konei and Lizellota

Updated all diff

Konei wrote: 451331

EDIT: Sekai: 01:23:023 (1) - Missplaced, should start on downbeat ~

http://puu.sh/1fQrX

Thanks >< for checking it

Modding time =3=

Konei's Easy
00:00:681 (1) - Grab the slider's end and move it one grid to the left =3=
00:28:373 (1) - I think this is randomly placed,,, please make something else out of it =3=

Normal
nothing~

BeatOfIke's Hard
00:08:233 (5,1) - these sliders are kind of ugly... :c could you make them curved or something?
00:23:338 (1,2,3) - Put finishes here because you can hear those in the music too >3<
00:35:925 (1,2) - ^
00:41:799 - This empty place should be filled~

Sekai's Insane
00:12:219 (7,1,2) - Fix DS ><
00:44:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sorry but what is this following? Not the vocals, neither the drums nor the other instruments,,, fix this
00:53:967 (7,1,) - make 7 more curved or place it a little bit more to the right because 7' is overlapping the beginning of 1 a little bit (sorry dont know how to say it)
00:58:583 (1) - Did you meant to let the slider stop at 00:58:687 - ? (thats where her vocals stop)
01:23:023 (1) - Place it 1/4 earlier
tbh this diff has some really randomly placed notes, as if you didn;t know what to do,,,

Insane
00:20:820 (7) - NC due to SV changes
00:23:338 (1,2,3) - finish >3<
00:42:639 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:317 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:995 (3,4) - ^
01:08:443 (6) - NC because of SV changes
01:25:436 (2) - ^
01:31:939 (4) - ^

Good luck >3<

http://puu.sh/1fUZq

Thanks SkyDevil ~

[Konei]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999
First of all: Why you used Normal Custom? sounds awful. Heh..okay. And Easy this is 2\1, not 1/2
00:20:820 - Remove finish
00:21:660 - ^
01:19:562 (1,2) - hard for begginners imo
00:09:911 (2,3,4,5) - 00:14:107 (1,2,3,4) - Changed placement
00:17:464 (1) - 00:32:569 (4) - remove repeat
00:34:247 (1) - x:328 y:80
01:01:939 (3) - ctrl + j?
01:03:198 (1) - x:128 y:112(if changed^)
01:04:037 (2) - x:264 y:232(if changed^)
Heh..some useless mod :> anyway, i think MATs will find more, good luck~ and sorry my poor english yeah =w=

nich o.o you can remove my diff if you think it's really that bad.....

Lizellota wrote: 3e431c

[Konei]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 fixed
First of all: Why you used Normal Custom? sounds awful. Heh..okay. And Easy this is 2\1, not 1/2 according to the song, this is fine. And changed to soft sampleset
00:20:820 - Remove finish k
00:21:660 - ^ k
01:19:562 (1,2) - hard for begginners imo some challenging part wont kill them imo
00:09:911 (2,3,4,5) -

120,272,9911,2,0,B|216:272,1,89.9999999999999
256,192,10750,2,0,B|344:192|440:264|440:360,1,270
352,376,12429,2,0,B|352:328|312:296,1,89.9999999999999
184,256,13478,1,0,0:0:0

00:14:107 (1,2,3,4) -

304,192,14107,6,0,B|288:152|288:152|296:96,1,89.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,216,14946,2,0,B|352:264|352:264|344:312,1,89.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,320,15785,2,0,B|464:248|464:248|464:136,1,180
376,128,17044,1,8,0:0:0

Changed placement changed this
00:17:464 (1) -

00:32:569 (4) - remove repeat nope, plays good imo
00:34:247 (1) - x:328 y:80
01:01:939 (3) - ctrl + j? kay
01:03:198 (1) - x:128 y:112(if changed^)
01:04:037 (2) - x:264 y:232(if changed^) changed in another way
Heh..some useless mod :> anyway, i think MATs will find more, good luck~ and sorry my poor english yeah =w=

Thanks ~

http://puu.sh/1g38r

Fixed some in SkyDevil's mod

Thank you SkyDevil for mod, and thank you Lizellota again

Sekai-nyan wrote: 5a4f1v

nich o.o you can remove my diff if you think it's really that bad.....

I think it isn't bad for me >< So I will don't remove your diff.

Updated~

http://puu.sh/1ghEm
Updated! Thanks for mod.

Updated again~

Hi 'w'

[General]

offset +9 (690). now is so fast

[Konei]

unused inherited points

1. 00:42:639 -
2. 01:12:743 - (two inherited points?)

clear :3

[Normal]

00:27:324 (4) - add Finish at end of slider
01:22:079 (6) - add Finish at start of slider
;_;

[BeatofIke]

unused inherited points

1. 01:09:492 -

00:41:380 - can you mapped this interval? this is so awkward
01:03:408 (3) - don't overlap with 01:02:359 (8) - . Can you replacing 01:02:988 (2,3) - this notes?

[Sekai-nyan]

00:14:527 (3) - last point of slider 1 grid right?
00:19:352 (1) - NC?
00:42:639 (1) - add Finish?
00:44:317 (1) - ^
01:00:890 (8) - can you make try like this?

168,68,60890,2,0,B|200:44|256:56|272:104|256:148,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:3:0

01:04:876 (9) - move to (332,284)?
01:15:366 (9) - move to (300,156)? and adjust next notes
01:22:079 (3,4) - why don't you make try the rhythm like this?0
01:22:813 - add a note?

[Insane]

HP drain -1? I think that's high for this map. players can died at the spinner in last of map when they have low HP
nothing good map ._.

wow what's this good map?

Have a nice day

Fixed some

Thank you Dark Fang for mod

Note: Remove Sekai's Insane diff in my map.

@Darkfang: All inherited points are used, thanks for checking :3