sjoy wrote: 35404l

我觉得我以后还是不摸的图了感觉没什么用纯粹凑数，浪费我的时间也浪费你的时间对吧 我觉得mod是modder对mapper进行提建议的单向的过程，除非是rank向的图违反了rank规则，否则mod本身其实是没有什么交互性的。mod的过程在我眼里对于modder和mapper都是一种历练，我是不觉得浪费时间的。不过如果你觉得这是在浪费你时间的话，那我只能抱歉了。

mintong89 wrote: 4y5840

Hello, mod from PM request.
渣Mod抱歉啦~

[Mysterious Myth]
前奏有点小声...感觉没打击感 我觉得需要加强点. 故意的
soft-hitfinish2 是不错...但是加在歌曲后就像破音的drum kick...建议换成kick (参考No_gu的就知道啦) 本来是想用那个的，想想看还是这个好。snare的选择我犹豫了很久，最终还是选择了太鼓

01:35:260 (5,6,7,8) - 其实我感觉(各自)CTRL+G Flow会比较好. 无flow mapper无压力。顺便我终于发现大多数人对flow的理解太过狭隘，短滑条不管是哪个方向都算是顺手flow，这个打不了鬼畜图的人还真无法理解。
01:49:654 (15) - 和 01:48:267 (15) - 这比较会不会太弯了点? 还好
02:01:619 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - 弄个比较好的星星形状? 那个不好
找不出了... orz

音效很棒! 不过虽然我打不了这图但是我还是得说...怎么说呢, 感觉你的图的梗一直用来用去, 造成玩家感觉有点Boring. 对不起但是我想说这根本就是好像靠着音效来排排列...根本没创新感...如果说重了对不起, 但是节奏和音效很棒!!!特别还是自创音效的 没事，该喷就喷不用在意。我这图不是按着音效下排列，我从来都是先节奏再排列再音效的，这图我下完排列前音效完全不知道怎么弄，之后我的音效是根据排列来下的。至于排列本身，那是我很久以前就有的想法，不想有所改动。至于创新什么的，我觉得创新不是我的属性啦，我的属性是猎奇，猎奇≠创新。

加油, 根本mod不到什么 QvQ 还是多谢啦
别给kd了 ;w; 嗯好，毕竟什么都没改

sjoy wrote: 35404l

这么说把
我看了看其他人的MODER 你也大部分都是拒绝的
不光是我，还有其他人都不清楚你到底所要MOD方向是啥？
这样MOD就好像水底摸虾根本没有一个目的性
不是纯粹为难MODDER么
既然说只要不违反RANK规则的话 这图不就是没必要MOD了吗？
我已经说了，mod是一个单向的过程，你不用考虑mapper本人怎么想，只需要看图怎么表达，然后给意见就行了，mapper接不接受跟你这次的mod本身毫无关系。既然你不用考虑我是否会接受，你又何必去考虑需要mod什么？水底摸虾之类的更是无从谈起，我在你给我mod之前也不会知道你到底会给出什么mod。我拒绝mod是因为我不接受这个mod的建议，但并不表示任何人需要因此影响到自己给我提出意见。比如rlc就说了很多意见我都改了，说不定哪个人说的某个mod我也就改了，mod不就是这么回事么？——modder单向提建议，mapper单向选择是否接受——所谓的mod方向那只是因为大家都进入了一个自己习惯的mod模式里，很少有人会真正从图的作者的角度出发去考虑怎样可以让图更完善，能做到这点的modder寥寥无几，因为大多数人还是偏向于懒比凑sp骗kd，或者很直接地以自己的主观标准去对图进行判断。进入了这个模式的modder在面对我这种图的时候就会明显地和具有优秀mod能力的人区别开来。虽然有句话说只有mapper知道自己的理想modder是谁，但其实一个真正好的modder应该能做到成为任何人的理想modder，在我眼里，445和NTR就是其中的典型。

sjoy wrote: 35404l

这么说把
我看了看其他人的MODER 你也大部分都是拒绝的
不光是我，还有其他人都不清楚你到底所要MOD方向是啥？
这样MOD就好像水底摸虾根本没有一个目的性
不是纯粹为难MODDER么
既然说只要不违反RANK规则的话 这图不就是没必要MOD了吗？

imoutosan wrote: 585uc

sjoy wrote: 35404l

这么说把
我看了看其他人的MODER 你也大部分都是拒绝的
不光是我，还有其他人都不清楚你到底所要MOD方向是啥？
这样MOD就好像水底摸虾根本没有一个目的性
不是纯粹为难MODDER么
既然说只要不违反RANK规则的话 这图不就是没必要MOD了吗？

就算知道了差不多还是水底摸虾（耸肩
HW的图本来就老不按现在的mapping规律来 而且说实话我觉得他是不是有时候不跟曲子
反正你也看不见他 脑袋脑洞里的理想模样 意思意思不就得了 看到啥写啥不就得了 再说改不改两可的建议有的mapper就倾向于不改 也没啥
hhh，你不帮我摸图还在这对我本人指指点点，nnd，一拳打爆

Hollow Wings wrote: 2b62y

就算知道了差不多还是水底摸虾（耸肩
HW的图本来就老不按现在的mapping规律来 而且说实话我觉得他是不是有时候不跟曲子
反正你也看不见他 脑袋脑洞里的理想模样 意思意思不就得了 看到啥写啥不就得了 再说改不改两可的建议有的mapper就倾向于不改 也没啥
hhh，你不帮我摸图还在这对我本人指指点点，nnd，一拳打爆

Colored wrote: 4or5w

can somebody rank this map plse?

ColdTooth wrote: 6e551j

if this gets ranked i'll just quit this game

ColdTooth wrote: 6e551j

Colored wrote: 4or5w

can somebody rank this map plse?

ColdTooth wrote: 6e551j

if this gets ranked i'll just quit this game

Colored wrote: 4or5w

can somebody rank this map plse?

imoutosan wrote: 585uc

谁指指点点了 不就是说一句而已嘛 小气 哼 结果不还是要摸了 切切切~
嘛 我是个很好的人 不会因为被误解就生气啦
--- 角色扮演到此为止 忘了吧 ---
这次我学滑头了 本着学脑洞的原则看的图 估计mod没啥意思了 抱歉 我觉得你好认真啊，我只是随口一说orzzz我不应该这么调戏纯真的小正太的OVQ

From request

[General]

下回来点新花样吧 又是 健谈的左手和胡来的右手长长长长stream和直线拉回跳 我还是更喜欢cs2爱丽丝 对你来说，这图难道不是所谓的新花样吗？作为猎奇党的我只是在尝试各种可能性，这种你喜欢，那种你不喜欢而已
[啥来着 忘了]

长stream没啥可说的 我是觉得你下了音效不如按音效拆开 那样不好
短滑条从来都不懂 跳过

00:11:330 (1) - crtl+g 头的音高比尾高 不过我估计你不会改 老实说改了确实更好点，但我不改
00:44:451 (15) - ctrl+g更有甩出去的感觉 你是说尾巴往右边拖吧？问题是没地方放了orz，这里还是先这样
00:45:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - 甩出个新音色 用同样的梗不够炫酷 改间距逐渐加大吧 不要。。。逐渐增大似乎很好但是不要。。。
02:03:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 另外addition normal不加音效有啥用 hitnormal本身变了
04:49:827 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 嘛 不过这个倒随便了 233
01:12:198 (2) - 1转向了很合曲也挺不错 2为啥不这么来…… 没看懂233这里似乎没啥问题啊噗
01:18:873 (1) - 这必要？我觉得你能搞个更好点的东西 你高估我了hhh这里我柑橘挺好，你觉得能改成啥样。。。
02:36:561 (1) - ^ ^
02:20:347 - 我倾向于在这里就加回原速 不好
03:53:469 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 老实说滑条角度有变化后没有了那种折来折去的感觉 所以不如和前面一样…… 我当然也考虑过啦，但测试后发现，这么搞的话由于sv很高，导致这样会更难读以及更难玩，所以就这样不动好了

耸耸肩 我感觉我看到了一位画龙的宫廷御用画师 你来雇我有工钱吗hhh我其实也没摆的那么好orz

mod之前刚推完一个致郁的gal 语气不对请多多包涵 都说你太认真了啦233

ColdTooth wrote: 6e551j

im really not liking these maps anymore, so dont be mad that i am going to rant, but i'll mod w/ my ranting

apologies if i insult your mapping in any way shape or form, these are my suggestions, and you can ignore me anytime

if this gets ranked i'll just quit this gameany suggestions r welcome. i've already recieved lots of "f word" and "s word", ur rant r harmless lol.

BOX OF RANT, DO NOT LOOK AT THIS IF YOU DONT WANT TO SEE RANT

00:11:937 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - With this funky transition from earlier, this really doesn't flow right. It's also very confusing call them patterns maybe? and call them another kind of flow maybe?

00:23:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - and for the rest of the streams. I can't even see these as streams. Infact I don't hear alot of 1/4ths in this part. then listen it again, and again, we will see.

00:34:566 (1,2,3,4) - ugh. I dislike spaced streams after streaming i like

00:34:827 (4,1,2) - I really also streams that are on another stream cool right?

00:43:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - isn't this overkill? I mean, come on... lol

00:45:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh my gosh... i have no words as well

00:51:214 (2,1) - Gets old that sliders are overlapping like this, it doesn't fit in right it doesn't fit to almost all of players' reading skill, only

01:09:596 (1,2,3,4) - Another overkill pattern this is easy, i mean that easy, not another one

01:19:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I know it's nice. But do we really have to have a loooong stream throughout this kiai that most of the time it doesn't flow? i wanna have it, that's all. hmm, and they're always set with flow.

01:20:521 (15,1) - (spacing here is 4.20 haha) Oh my god... 1/4 jump halfway across the screen right

01:26:070 (15,1) - holy shit that's what it tastes like? xddd

01:27:283 (13,14,15) - This is a really bad overlap if you ask me. overlaps like this r always the best ones in my dictionary

01:27:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what is this composing maybe?

01:31:619 (15,1) - Another jump that isn't appreciated

01:35:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This can get REALLY confusing in between comboes ok

01:45:665 (1,2,3,4) - I like 00:27:977 (1,2,3,4) - these better nope for they're set like this on purpose

01:59:884 (5,6,7,8) - Again w/ the overlapping streams w

02:00:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Starting to realize why I hate spaced streams lol

02:06:128 (2,1,2) - This should be banned from mapping. One, the triplet is below where 2 has began, and two, both sliders are overlapping actually, u can see lots of patterns like this in ranked maps nowaday, check them by urself

02:07:515 (2,1,2) - Here as well ^

02:11:677 (2,1,2) - Another one of those triple far away from the end of a slider, although this one isn't as painful as the others ^, and in fact, they're the same to players

02:36:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - These streams are really confusing and are hard to follow in shape not really if u can stream a bit in this map

02:50:174 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - Why. why why

02:59:191 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3) - I think it's better if the shapes actually lined up w/ one another, or in symmetry i hate symmetry

03:43:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Somewhat less overkill of those streams, although annoying to hit it's easy, u know what i mean

03:51:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Getting really annoying, and confusing after a while after lots of testing, this is acceptable

03:56:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Somewhat overlap hmm?

03:58:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can't even read this, or maybe it's just a lot of sliders in an odd shape best part in this map imo

04:00:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and the other two streams like this after it, is very confusing they come from feeling

04:05:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Overlapping stream so?

04:17:920 (13,14,15,16) - Why is this stopping in the middle of the stream? pattern+feeling=this

05:00:925 (2,3,4,5,1) - hnnnngg welcome to osu!

no kds btw

again i am sorry if i insult your mapping style i'm still have fun with ur lol

ZZHBOY wrote: 505360

今天玩了下发现02:24:162 (8,9,10,11,1) - 这里好像因为那个自动调stack的玩意让前几个圈碰到血条了你看看要不要改一下 看的真仔细呢，很不错哦。这个应该没事，就这样吧
no kds

Irreversible wrote: 4i6z36

i think i need a second cursor for the last part play this in tag game? www

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote: 3m1n5z

new mapping style


I want to mod this
But I never modding standard before , sorry sorry for late reply orz

Noob Mod

03:00:579 (2) - good, changed, but with a bit differences
03:06:128 (2) - ^
because i see you did 03:01:966 (1,1) - that blue slider inside pink slider alright lol

04:02:313 (9) - remove clap hitsound or 04:00:925 (9) - add clap hit sound hs work r all done in a general system, and these r set on purpose. i know what u mean here, but no change, sorry ;w;

04:27:631 (1) - new combo here and 04:32:139 (1) - new combo with red color ~ gooood, changed

If this not help no kds please

Good Luck ~

ok ... enough star WHAT, THE, FARK...... orzzz thx... ;w;

Sharlo wrote: 6q13l

从玩的角度上来说 我觉得这图有点无聊
一堆stream 短滑条基本没什么变化
打了1/3就已经开始感到闷了
音效的话觉得很棒
比较喜欢感伤摩天楼 玩起来很有趣
夏罗妹子怎么来看我图了orzzz，至于这图嘛。。。猎奇党的世界观是扭曲的，不用太在意啦
一定要给个解释的话，你就理解成：一定要用各种梗堆出来的图才是好图吗，我就不信并且要试着反其道而行，于是我就只用一个梗堆出一张图来，大概是这个意思

Hollow Wings wrote: 2b62y

Well, firstly, to all people noticed this map: thx for taking care of this, whatever how u feel about it, the map is just like this.

(thou i'm a bit curious about why lots of people know this map except those testers who i request to... lol

Soarezi wrote: 1z211g

If this gets mapped, i don't know what to do with my life anymore

Pizzicato wrote: 3x5je

rank this so we can get to see how many dislikes it will get!

1. The transition between 00:23:295 (3) - and 00:23:469 (1) - is pretty big, just saying. in the majority of cases, the player will end up with a 100/slidebreak because of the massive spacing and ankward movement. Consider making it more simple to play. For example, making 00:23:295 (3) - only a circle would be nice.
2. 00:31:966 (15) - I recognize where you want to place the slider's end, but the curve of the slider itself looks ugly :<. Try to move this slider end elsewhere.
3. 00:45:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - WHOA
4. 00:52:255 (3) - I think nobody would ever able to read this on sightread. I mean, try it yourself, you'll se that the jump between 00:52:255 (3) - and 00:52:428 (1) - is pretty big and unintuitive.
5. 01:05:434 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - This is also pretty unintuitive :/.
6. 01:40:983 (3) - Here, i will take a moment. Unlike 00:23:295 (3) - , this is just a circle , and that makes the pattern more simple to read and play. Hope you have understood.
7. 01:49:654 (15) - just like i said a few lines above, i don't particulary like the slider body :/
8. 02:22:428 (3) - maybe a little hard to read, but not that pain.
9. 03:52:168 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Think how difficult is for the player to click on the circle and then on the slider with that distance between, for example, 03:52:168 (2) - and 03:52:255 (3) - . Just reduce a bit the distance between the circle and the slider.
10. 03:56:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can understand this, the vocals get more acute, so increasing the spacing too,but honestly ii think these are just too much to handle.
11. 04:49:827 (1) - BIGGER WHOA
12. 05:00:925 (2,3,4,5,1) - Gratz if you manage to get the map ranked with these,i'm thinking of how much players will be able to FC. Oh well, it will be fun >.<!

ThEBonzi wrote: 1z4c4b

:> Some suggestions.

[Mysterious Hymn]

1. The transition between 00:23:295 (3) - and 00:23:469 (1) - is pretty big, just saying. in the majority of cases, the player will end up with a 100/slidebreak because of the massive spacing and ankward movement. Consider making it more simple to play. For example, making 00:23:295 (3) - only a circle would be nice. that's just a sign to spread the map into two parts, u can see completely different stuffs before and after this. just consider this as the map's "true start" with the song's track as well
2. 00:31:966 (15) - I recognize where you want to place the slider's end, but the curve of the slider itself looks ugly :<. Try to move this slider end elsewhere. agree, changed
3. 00:45:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - WHOA lol
4. 00:52:255 (3) - I think nobody would ever able to read this on sightread. I mean, try it yourself, you'll se that the jump between 00:52:255 (3) - and 00:52:428 (1) - is pretty big and unintuitive. i can read it without any pressure, so nearly 2/3 of testers as well. it require reading skills in playing, thou the map can't be played by noobs anyway.
5. 01:05:434 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - This is also pretty unintuitive :/. just emphasis the vocal
6. 01:40:983 (3) - Here, i will take a moment. Unlike 00:23:295 (3) - , this is just a circle , and that makes the pattern more simple to read and play. Hope you have understood. i understand, and hope u have understood mine.
7. 01:49:654 (15) - just like i said a few lines above, i don't particulary like the slider body :/ changed as well thou
8. 02:22:428 (3) - maybe a little hard to read, but not that pain. people who can't read this pattern will feel pain when play this map at the start
9. 03:52:168 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Think how difficult is for the player to click on the circle and then on the slider with that distance between, for example, 03:52:168 (2) - and 03:52:255 (3) - . Just reduce a bit the distance between the circle and the slider. i can full combo this pattern with no break myself. any pro prove that? r they noob to me? idk, still, i think this is just no issue in playing...
10. 03:56:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can understand this, the vocals get more acute, so increasing the spacing too,but honestly ii think these are just too much to handle. follow THE song with THE pattern, that's what i did there
11. 04:49:827 (1) - BIGGER WHOA orz
12. 05:00:925 (2,3,4,5,1) - Gratz if you manage to get the map ranked with these,i'm thinking of how much players will be able to FC. Oh well, it will be fun >.<! there's nealy no one can fc this, but have lots of players can full combo these big spaced stream, who've been tested with my request

Good luck \:D/

Tasha wrote: 4q5r3n

If this gets ranked... I guess it'd be perfectly okay to go rank something like even this (taiko difficulties) seeing as we'd be perfectly okay with ranking maps that aren't of very high quality, rely on gimmicky things, and are overmapped for the sake of being overmapped.

I wouldn't want to be part of ranking or bubbling something like this in its current state (though if I was a standard BAT I'd of course want to help fix issues (ex: lots of copy/paste)), and I sincerely hope that the quality of ranked standard maps by the standard BAT hasn't fallen so low that they would want to be part of this in its current state either.

(Disclaimer: The maps I linked are great as unranked maps for high level taiko players to practice on, but in a ranked system they would be incredibly bad. I feel this map falls under the same scenario, except for standard.)

Sugoi-_-Desu wrote: 3s1s19

Also stop being mad at HW he's also a living person with feelings so people teaming up against him is not the fair way to go at him in this situation

Stefan wrote: 72304b

Sugoi-_-Desu wrote: 3s1s19

Also stop being mad at HW he's also a living person with feelings so people teaming up against him is not the fair way to go at him in this situation

Oh look, someone with common sense. sry for late reply (2 mounth late lol

Some things I want to mention:
01:53:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I honestly dislike the Hitsounding here. I see your intention here but it just doesn't fit well to the music here. i can partly agree with u, thou i set those hs in original style which still following beats, so i think keeping them is fine.
01:59:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^ ^
03:18:613 (3) - Move the red Sliderpoint at 488;328 to have a better curve transition with 03:17:226 (2): http://puu.sh/aXHOc/3d8592e012.jpg sure, fixed
04:15:665 (3) - I find the Clap not really fitting here, it sounds a bit too random. this is a special part in that long death stream, so i set different hs here, u can check that duo to the original song's part from 04:05:781 (1) - to 04:26:590 (1) -

Goonychan wrote: 2g322x

Sorry for the extremely long post(and if i made a formating mistake), it's basically me repeating the same suggestion at various points in the map, but i wanted to get them all. sry but i've checked ur mod and reject almost all... coz ur mods r mainly give hs suggesion, which i've worked in a really general system or style. so i'll leave most of them and give a tiny change and adjustment to some part... still thx for taking care of this.

1. Add ZUN to tags

1. 00:02:486 - i may choose to add a note her, also 00:03:873 - 00:08:035 - 00:09:423 - if you agree with the prev
2. 00:05:434 (1) - 260:343?
3. 01:09:943 (3,4) - ctrl+g? also 01:10:290 (1,2) - ctrl+g separately if you agree with the prev
4. 01:17:226 (1) - a 3/4 slider might be better
5. 01:44:972 (1,2) - ^

Scorpiour wrote: 2pj3z

Mod for request

[General]

1. Add ZUN to tags fixed

[Mysterious Hymn]

1. 00:02:486 - i may choose to add a note her, also 00:03:873 - 00:08:035 - 00:09:423 - if you agree with the prev ??!?!?!?!!!? i still wanna keep the normal ones ;w;
2. 00:05:434 (1) - 260:343? good but i prefer the current one.
3. 01:09:943 (3,4) - ctrl+g? also 01:10:290 (1,2) - ctrl+g separately if you agree with the prev wow i'll be too diffcult if i change this orz
4. 01:17:226 (1) - a 3/4 slider might be better ;w; all stream blablablabla
5. 01:44:972 (1,2) - ^ ^

就先写到这里了，后面的快速看了下也是大同小异没什么本质性的地方，照着前面这几条参考愿意改的都是一个路子，不愿意也随意了。

平心而论，我还是不太赞同在这种曲子上用这种方式到处甩stream，同样的脑洞大开式的mapping style一次两次可以，但总是一个样子而且这张图还在不停的就绕着1、2个梗转来转去就让人觉得有些无聊了。

至少在看过一次之后，我暂时还没有那种“看到就认为值得给泡”的程度。我需要仔细想想，同时认为你也需要稍微认真想一下你的Mapping。

有所成名之后很容易被环境的吹捧和赞美带到里的，请不要固步自封。我美酒了OVQ

[Nemesis] wrote: 311c6s

umm... i dont know if it was told before but... if its going for approval, it cant have less than 5.00 minutes D:
try to make it 1 second longer

Mei wrote: 3h1f57

这sb，服了

Tess wrote: 191a2j

O It's not like the mapper punched you in the face.

Tarrasky wrote: 2d1w7

make a map for 0.2% of the players play, gratters

handsome wrote: 483w1s

jesus christ is it happening

Tarrasky wrote: 2d1w7

make a map for 0.2% of the players play, gratters

CSLMVenezuela wrote: 2r5k5t

it's happening!! :O

Genocide wrote: 554z1

hype !

10nya wrote: 3r5zd

CSLMVenezuela wrote: 2r5k5t

it's happening!! :O

Minakami Yuki wrote: 2m156v

Although I also have a pressing hope to push this map forward, I have to pop it first, sorry.

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

The following hitsounds are unused: removed both.

1. soft-slidertick2.wav
2. drum-hitwhistle3.wav

I'm not sure whether the rule contains spinnerspin.wav, but you'd better fix the delay about 30ms of it. fixed.
soft-hitclap.wav has a 3ms delay, although it's ok for rule, consider to fix it. fixed.

Mysterious Hymn 4z6y4q

1. 00:44:625 (1,2,3) - compare with other similar patterns, so you can make it a bigger jump? very good, changed.
2. 01:22:688 (5) - if you can nc here... also same to the following as 01:33:873 (5) - not necessary.
3. 04:10:289 (5,6,7,8,9) - why? that 7 uhh. regular heptagon right? not necessary as well.
4. 04:25:116 (16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this in a curve is better, since such a long stream will be end soon. changed to another style.
5. 04:27:110 (4,5,6,7,8) - enlarge the ds? very good, changed.

Not so much issues on the map, although it's so crazy.
You can call Scorpiour to have a recheck before poking me back.