Just a random check.
Remove from tags: burst the gravity altima accel world <-- they are useless since they are already searchable (title, source, artist).
Add to tags: opening black lotus silver crow cyan pile lime bell (if you want more ppl to comming, add: kuroyukihime, Warner Bros. and Sunrise too).

No kds~

EDIT: I know Warner Bros. is sounds funny here, but: http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/anime/11759/Accel_World its in the producers list and I guess some ppl will search after it. :3

Mamosora wrote: i3h1t

做好囉 晚點給你一些建議><
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0ByWNdiL2gBmXZk9tMGdMaTZVaDA/edit

打不开网页..

Kurokami wrote: 3j5016

Just a random check.
Remove from tags: burst the gravity altima accel world <-- they are useless since they are already searchable (title, source, artist).
Add to tags: opening black lotus silver crow cyan pile lime bell (if you want more ppl to comming, add: kuroyukihime, Warner Bros. and Sunrise too).
OK.I have already noticed that before my latest updated, I'll added that in my next update.

No kds~

EDIT: I know Warner Bros. is sounds funny here, but: http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/anime/11759/Accel_World its in the producers list and I guess some ppl will search after it. :3

I prefer to added ASCII Media Works...Not Warner Bros

抱歉重發><""
http://puu.sh/Waac

Blackshane wrote: 3tx2a

I prefer to added ASCII Media Works...Not Warner Bros

I just added a few more choices. They weren't must added anyways that's why I put them in parenthesis. It is your choice to add them or not. :3 But I guess ASCII MW will work too since its a well known producer.

Mamosora wrote: i3h1t

抱歉重發><""
http://puu.sh/Waac

要个背景么=w=？

@Blackshane
Ts8aiko
00:14:011 - 帮我把这里改成这样 http://puu.sh/WoxV
No kd for sure

Blackshane wrote: 3tx2a

ts8zs wrote: 552536

http://puu.sh/W65O comboburst 话说这个overlay不是我做的会有版权问题的……我也不清楚谁做的……所以旋转一下比较好（还符合silver crow的面罩）= =b

score的那个9是怎么回事- -那个我就不加上去了

本来要做score的结果太麻烦了忘删了= =
本来想做像战斗界面那种score的..还有scorebar...没有素材^你去找sherrie__fay问问?(不要把麻烦推给别人啊喂)

ts8zs wrote: 552536

@Blackshane
Ts8aiko
00:14:011 - 帮我把这里改成这样 http://puu.sh/WoxV
No kd for sure

为什么我找不到那个位置..你还是把修改好的osb传上来吧..
还有..我图昨天已经加上去了..重下一下就有了

Blackshane wrote: 3tx2a

ts8zs wrote: 552536

@Blackshane
Ts8aiko
00:14:011 - 帮我把这里改成这样 http://puu.sh/WoxV
No kd for sure

为什么我找不到那个位置..你还是把修改好的osb传上来吧..
还有..我图昨天已经加上去了..重下一下就有了

oni 的话用那种不太好吧……把原图给我做个正统的=w=？

ts8zs wrote: 552536

oni 的话用那种不太好吧……把原图给我做个正统的=w=？

好吧。。等我上电脑了发给你吧。。暂时我只能说我是在百度找的图，在满后面的。。（我PS技术渣爆。。）

Blackshane wrote: 3tx2a

ts8zs wrote: 552536

oni 的话用那种不太好吧……把原图给我做个正统的=w=？

好吧。。等我上电脑了发给你吧。。暂时我只能说我是在百度找的图，在满后面的。。（我PS技术渣爆。。）

话说那居然是ps……我以为是系统画图= =
我觉得我那个不是不错嘛=3=

ts8zs wrote: 552536

话说那居然是ps……我以为是系统画图= =
我觉得我那个不是不错嘛=3=

我会告诉你我是用美图做的么。。
你那个做的真的蛮不错了。。至少我是做不出来。。
话说我用渣2G手机很烧流量的。。如果可以的话最好用QQ聊（你貌似也加了华语Mapper群吧。。我也加进去了。。）

http://puu.sh/Ws8Q http://puu.sh/WsaR
原来那个背景名字有点挡住了……

@Ts8zs taiko原图

Blackshane wrote: 3tx2a

@Ts8zs taiko原图

画质渣爆……不过没关系=3=
http://www.1zoom.net/Anime/wallpaper/303600/z1236.2/ 高画质找到=3=
背景太那个了吧……换成这个？ http://www.1zoom.net/big2/144/302748-aliya06.jpg

抱歉 可以的話我是希望可以有我的全名@@
下面的圖要做什麼都沒關係

Mamosora wrote: i3h1t

抱歉 可以的話我是希望可以有我的全名@@
下面的圖要做什麼都沒關係

你自己做啊- -
http://puu.sh/WuDI

ts8zs wrote: 552536

Mamosora wrote: i3h1t

抱歉 可以的話我是希望可以有我的全名@@
下面的圖要做什麼都沒關係

你自己做啊- -
http://puu.sh/WuDI

這樣就OK了
抱歉添了麻煩..

Mamosora wrote: i3h1t

ts8zs wrote: 552536

你自己做啊- -
http://puu.sh/WuDI

這樣就OK了
抱歉添了麻煩..

嘛 举手之劳我抱怨下而已

Hi ~ Blackshane ~

Random mod for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions







Hope this can help you ~

Good luck and fight ~

Hi~这里是野生mod
[General]

• 01:15:024 - 第一段kiai time在这里结束比较好
  建议降低normal音效的音量,音效音量有点大,盖过了音乐本身就显得有点吵了

[Ash Roller]

• 00:18:470 - 多余的绿线
  00:18:572 - 多余的绿线
  01:02:254 (1) - 不建议放在中心位置，spinner结束的皮肤会挡住下一个物件，导致新手读图困难

[Ardor Maiden]

• 00:18:470 - 多余的绿线
  00:18:572 - 多余的绿线
  00:22:525 (2) - 移动到(272,36)和前面的在同一直线比较好看，改了的话就调整00:23:335 (3) - 和前面的距离

[Sky Raker]

• 00:00:633 (1,2,3,4) - 修整了一下，这样会美观点
  

  96,192,633,5,2
  156,117,835,1,0
  248,145,1038,1,0
  188,222,1241,2,0,B|164:145,1,80

  00:01:849 (1,2,3,4) -
  

  416,186,1849,5,2
  356,261,2051,1,0
  264,233,2254,1,0
  324,156,2457,2,0,B|348:233,1,80

  00:21:207 - 这里不加一个note么
  00:43:808 (5,6,7) - 建议放在别的地方,太难读了
  00:44:416 (1,3) -
  
  01:27:389 (1,2) - 这里太难看清楚了
  建议把(1)和(2)合成一个
  

[Black Lotus]

• 01:00:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 换成soft音效比较好

非常喜欢这首歌,加油~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Hi ~ Blackshane ~

Random mod for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y

1. Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events: Fixed
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)

2. You are missing add 'reversearrow.png,spinner-background.png' skin file.

Fixed

[Black lotus] 4m644e

1. 00:21:410 - Why not add circle to here? Fixed
2. 00:27:085 (4) - Move to 00:26:984 - sound better to me. Changed
3. 00:36:308 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't stack this stream,really bad and confused. Fixed
4. 00:49:889 (7,1) - Spacing error. Fixed
5. 00:50:092 (1,2) - Exchange rhythm,like this. Fixed
   
6. 01:28:301 (1) - Remove finish sound better to me.

Fixed

[Sky Raker] ->Blood Leopard 5x3j2o

1. AR+1 much better with play. I have made it AR7.
2. 00:11:882 (1) - This spinner should start to 00:11:984. Fixed
3. 00:32:254 (2,3,4) - Just change 1/2 here pls,3/4 is no fit. Fixed
4. 00:43:808 (5) - Pls move 00:43:200 (3),hidden by 00:43:808 (5) - repeat point,this is unrankble. Changed
   
5. 00:59:822 (5,6) - Spacing error. Fixed
6. 01:15:024 (7,1) - ^ Fixed
7. 01:28:301 (1) - Same as Black Lotus diff. Fixed

[Ardor Maiden] ->Lime Bell 4y4y4f

1. 01:26:579 (1) - Same as Black Lotus diff. Fixed

[Ash Roller] 3w5i73

1. 00:11:173 (5) - Pls don't use 5% on entire slider,that will be unrankble. Fixed
2. 01:26:781 (1) - Same as Black Lotus diff. Fixed

[Mamo's Taiko Oni] 716s51

1. Pls resnap all note. Fixed

Hope this can help you ~

Good luck and fight ~

I have made too many changes on those beatmap. I hope you can recheck it, or better, give me a bubble very soon. 4k134w

thou bad wrote: 2lp5u

Hi~这里是野生mod
[General]

• 01:15:024 - 第一段kiai time在这里结束比较好
  建议降低normal音效的音量,音效音量有点大,盖过了音乐本身就显得有点吵了已改

[Ash Roller]

• 00:18:470 - 多余的绿线 这些绿线基本是每个难度都一样的，有几个难度因为音效问题稍微修改了一下。这些多余的绿线个人认为影响不大姑且不会删掉..后同
  00:18:572 - 多余的绿线
  01:02:254 (1) - 不建议放在中心位置，spinner结束的皮肤会挡住下一个物件，导致新手读图困难

确实可能白色的圈可能会有影响不过暂时不打算修改

[Ardor Maiden->Lime Bell]

• 00:18:470 - 多余的绿线
  00:18:572 - 多余的绿线
  00:22:525 (2) - 移动到(272,36)和前面的在同一直线比较好看，改了的话就调整00:23:335 (3) - 和前面的距离

已改

[Sky Raker->Blood Leopard]

• 00:00:633 (1,2,3,4) - 修整了一下，这样会美观点 已改
  

  96,192,633,5,2
  156,117,835,1,0
  248,145,1038,1,0
  188,222,1241,2,0,B|164:145,1,80

  00:01:849 (1,2,3,4) -
  

  416,186,1849,5,2
  356,261,2051,1,0
  264,233,2254,1,0
  324,156,2457,2,0,B|348:233,1,80

  00:21:207 - 这里不加一个note么 已改
  00:43:808 (5,6,7) - 建议放在别的地方,太难读了 已重做
  00:44:416 (1,3) -
  已重做
  01:27:389 (1,2) - 这里太难看清楚了
  建议把(1)和(2)合成一个
  已重做

[Black Lotus]

• 01:00:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 换成soft音效比较好 个人觉得还是normal好听..

非常喜欢这首歌,加油~

感谢支持~~

You got Mamosora's Diff two Times.
Remove one of them. Also, you should disable the Videos for the Taiko Diffs.

Stefan wrote: 72304b

You got Mamosora's Diff two Times. Fixed.
Remove one of them. Also, you should disable the Videos for the Taiko Diffs.

Ash Roller:
00:21:714 Maybe here you can distribute the circles =),
00:56:984 Here is a circle would fit well =)

Blood Leopard:
00:16:038 Maybe try it with normal circles =)

Black Lotus:
01:13:808 The distance to Circle is a little bit to big...

Sky Raker:
01:24:754 The Same like Black Lotus

That was all, good map and btw nice Skin ;D

Sky Raker
Circle Size 2 isn't really socializable. please use Cricle Size 4

00:04:889 (6) - this is not good place so i recommend other pattern and move place
00:05:295 (7) - not good place. move to 288, 172
00:06:308 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1KlbY like this?
00:08:943 (6) - 184, 292 is more better then previous coordinate
00:10:362 (1) - this is unrank slider because return arrow was hidden
00:13:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - i don't like this slider stream. if you don't know how to change this pattern with notes, please refer other beatmaps
00:22:119 (2) - don't overlap with 00:21:714 (1) -
00:40:970 (5,1) - so hard and strange
01:06:105 (3) - move to 144, 164
01:07:727 (8) - don't overlap with previous slider
01:13:605 (1,2,3,4) - how about this rhythm and pattern?? http://puu.sh/1KlmV


Black Lotus
SV is so fast to me....
better then Sky Racker but some of Note patterns are really simple so i recommend that use many pattern

I really dont' know what is hard among Sky Racker, Black Lotus and Blood Leopard. These diff are making me confused
If you really want for rank, please remake Hard and Insane.

Taiko mod:
[Mamo's Taiko Oni]
00:10:971 (1,1,1,1,2,3) - kkd k d k
00:50:903 (2) - k
00:51:714 (7) - k
00:52:525 (12) - k
00:52:727 (13,14,15,16) - dk kd
00:58:200 (1,2,3,4) - dk dk
01:02:254 (1) - k
01:09:045 (1) - d
01:20:599 (1) - d
01:22:119 (2) - K
01:26:984 (7) - d
01:27:389 (11) - d
01:27:795 (15) - d
對了,這個難度的kiai跟其他的不一樣，統一一下比較好。　　
[Ts8aiko]
00:01:444 (6) - d
00:07:525 (34) - K
01:09:146 (319) - K
00:28:809 (122) - d
00:30:633 (132) - d
00:52:525 (239) - k
01:22:119 (381) - K

祝Rank:D

TMAstraf wrote: 27283d

Ash Roller:
00:21:714 Maybe here you can distribute the circles =), fixed
00:56:984 Here is a circle would fit well =) fixed

Blood Leopard:
00:16:038 Maybe try it with normal circles =) fixed

Black Lotus:
01:13:808 The distance to Circle is a little bit to big... I think it is not difficult for it is Insane, so I won't change it

Sky Raker:
01:24:754 The Same like Black Lotus The same

That was all, good map and btw nice Skin ;D

Asgard wrote: 352a1o

Sky Raker
Circle Size 2 isn't really socializable. please use Cricle Size 4 Ok, I forget to change it...fixed

00:04:889 (6) - this is not good place so i recommend other pattern and move place I have remade the first 12s.
00:05:295 (7) - not good place. move to 288, 172
00:06:308 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1KlbY like this?
00:08:943 (6) - 184, 292 is more better then previous coordinate
00:10:362 (1) - this is unrank slider because return arrow was hidden
00:13:605 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - i don't like this slider stream. if you don't know how to change this pattern with notes, please refer other beatmaps changed
00:22:119 (2) - don't overlap with 00:21:714 (1) - fixed
00:40:970 (5,1) - so hard and strange changed
01:06:105 (3) - move to 144, 164 fixed
01:07:727 (8) - don't overlap with previous slider fixed
01:13:605 (1,2,3,4) - how about this rhythm and pattern?? http://puu.sh/1KlmV it sounds better...fixed


Black Lotus
SV is so fast to me....
better then Sky Racker but some of Note patterns are really simple so i recommend that use many pattern

I really dont' know what is hard among Sky Racker, Black Lotus and Blood Leopard. These diff are making me confused
If you really want for rank, please remake Hard and Insane. I have remade Hard (Blood Leopard), I want to make Sky Raker more to jump and Black Lotus more to stream...Thank you for your mod and i will soon mod for you

kg2161012 wrote: 2x5xe

Taiko mod:
[Mamo's Taiko Oni]
00:10:971 (1,1,1,1,2,3) - kkd k d k
00:50:903 (2) - k
00:51:714 (7) - k
00:52:525 (12) - k
00:52:727 (13,14,15,16) - dk kd
00:58:200 (1,2,3,4) - dk dk
01:02:254 (1) - k
01:09:045 (1) - d
01:20:599 (1) - d
01:22:119 (2) - K
01:26:984 (7) - d
01:27:389 (11) - d
01:27:795 (15) - d
對了,這個難度的kiai跟其他的不一樣，統一一下比較好。　　已调整
[Ts8aiko]
00:01:444 (6) - d
00:07:525 (34) - K
01:09:146 (319) - K
00:28:809 (122) - d
00:30:633 (132) - d
00:52:525 (239) - k
01:22:119 (381) - K

祝Rank:D
好吧 我玩太鼓玩得很差，所以我只是把所有你的建议都修改进去了，或许我还得找这两位GD的作者看看他们的意见
十分感谢你的太鼓mod~

kg2161012 wrote: 2x5xe

Taiko mod:
[Mamo's Taiko Oni]
00:10:971 (1,1,1,1,2,3) - kkd k d k
00:50:903 (2) - k
00:51:714 (7) - k
00:52:525 (12) - k
00:52:727 (13,14,15,16) - dk kd
00:58:200 (1,2,3,4) - dk dk
01:02:254 (1) - k
01:09:045 (1) - d
01:20:599 (1) - d
01:22:119 (2) - K
01:26:984 (7) - d
01:27:389 (11) - d
01:27:795 (15) - d
對了,這個難度的kiai跟其他的不一樣，統一一下比較好。　　
[Ts8aiko]
00:01:444 (6) - d
00:07:525 (34) - K
01:09:146 (319) - K
00:28:809 (122) - d
00:30:633 (132) - d
00:52:525 (239) - k
01:22:119 (381) - K

祝Rank:D

http://puu.sh/1MngB
感謝Mod~ 已經修好

I like the map. Star. Good luck and i hope this get approved.

Hi, from the Queue!

Ash Roller

00:24:957 (6) - NC
00:37:930 (5) - ^
00:39:146 (6) - Put this circle in the direction of the slider before, flows better
00:39:551 (7) - Rotate this a bit and then move to the preview circle
01:00:227 (1) - Players need time to prepare for the incomming elements, you need to give them at least a white tick space
01:05:498 (4) - NC
01:11:984 (5) - ^
01:18:471 (4) - ^

Lime Ball

General
This is almost identical to the Easy diff, its meant to be harder

00:03:876 (6) - NC
00:10:362 (6) - ^
00:53:335 (4) - Circle isnt visible enough, move it a bit away
01:00:430 (1) - Players need time to prepare for the incomming elements, you need to give them at least a white tick space
01:05:498 (6) - NC
01:11:984 (7) - ^
01:13:606 (1,2) - Dont overlapp these please, its not readable and doesnt play right, move them
01:14:417 (3) - Make a 1/2 slider repeat, since its better to play and not so good to use such a repeat slider in Easy or Normal
01:18:471 (6) - NC
01:24:957 (7) - ^

Blood Leopard

00:05:497 (7) - NC
00:36:105 (5,6) - Dont do this please, it breaks the song and flow fully, and doesnt fit at all try to find some other pattern
00:37:119 (8) - NC
00:49:889 (7) - ^
01:00:430 - Vocal ends at 01:00:430 - so make two more repeats and move the spinner a bit later
01:10:362 (6) - I dont suggest to put this slider how it is now, its overlapping and feels wrong
01:09:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These are too close to each other, it becomes blind
01:14:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Shouldnt be in a Hard diff, make it shorter or use a other pattern or make a reversed slider
01:22:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like 01:09:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
01:27:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Like 01:14:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

Black Lotus

00:02:051 (6) - NC
( 01:00:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Nice idea ^-^ )

Sky Raker

00:02:051 (6) - NC

Everything else is ok. me once you updated so i can recheck

BounceBabe wrote: 5w6

Hi, from the Queue!

Ash Roller

00:24:957 (6) - NC
00:37:930 (5) - ^
00:39:146 (6) - Put this circle in the direction of the slider before, flows better
00:39:551 (7) - Rotate this a bit and then move to the preview circle
01:00:227 (1) - Players need time to prepare for the incomming elements, you need to give them at least a white tick space
01:05:498 (4) - NC
01:11:984 (5) - ^
01:18:471 (4) - ^

Lime Ball

General
This is almost identical to the Easy diff, its meant to be harder

00:03:876 (6) - NC
00:10:362 (6) - ^
00:53:335 (4) - Circle isnt visible enough, move it a bit away
01:00:430 (1) - Players need time to prepare for the incomming elements, you need to give them at least a white tick space
01:05:498 (6) - NC
01:11:984 (7) - ^
01:13:606 (1,2) - Dont overlapp these please, its not readable and doesnt play right, move them
01:14:417 (3) - Make a 1/2 slider repeat, since its better to play and not so good to use such a repeat slider in Easy or Normal
01:18:471 (6) - NC
01:24:957 (7) - ^

Blood Leopard

00:05:497 (7) - NC
00:36:105 (5,6) - Dont do this please, it breaks the song and flow fully, and doesnt fit at all try to find some other pattern
00:37:119 (8) - NC
00:49:889 (7) - ^
01:00:430 - Vocal ends at 01:00:430 - so make two more repeats and move the spinner a bit later
01:10:362 (6) - I dont suggest to put this slider how it is now, its overlapping and feels wrong
01:09:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These are too close to each other, it becomes blind
01:14:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Shouldnt be in a Hard diff, make it shorter or use a other pattern or make a reversed slider
01:22:119 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like 01:09:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
01:27:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Like 01:14:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

Black Lotus

00:02:051 (6) - NC
( 01:00:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Nice idea ^-^ )

Sky Raker

00:02:051 (6) - NC

Everything else is ok. me once you updated so i can recheck

All your suggestion has been fixed. Thx for modding~

Perfect now how it is! Will tell him to check

HI~

._.

ts8zs

00:18:065 - k
00:19:687 - k
00:26:984 - d
00:54:146 (249,250) - reverse
01:18:268 - k

Mamosora

00:05:295 (4,1) - reverse
00:07:119 - d
00:20:700 - k
00:21:714 - d
00:41:781 - d
00:50:700 (1,2) - reverse
00:51:106 (3,4,5) - kdk?

nothing to say, both of taiko diffs are great, just Mamo's taiko oni i think its a little overmapped. if you listen to the song, there are patterns in this diff that are unnecesary.

i really enjoyed playing Ts8aiko, Good Luck!!!

差幾個字完成post的時候電腦死機了(望

簡略總結一下我剛才有寫過的:

1. 依照規則, 凡有太鼓的mapset裡必須要有一個比較簡單的難度, 目前來看現有的兩個難度都是Oni, 請加一個Muzukashii
2. 太鼓BG在最近更新中被列為unrankable要素, 請移除
3. Insane+(Black Lotus)可以說是overmapped, 部份連打與音樂沒有關聯度
4. Clap與Finish的下法不敢恭維, 以個人角度看需要重做一遍音效…不過這只是我的個人意見

不需kds, 因為實在沒精力重新寫一遍寫過的東西…如果有不明白的地方可以從PM問我 (forum/in-game)

Pokie wrote: 4yz25

差幾個字完成post的時候電腦死機了(望

簡略總結一下我剛才有寫過的:

1. 依照規則, 凡有太鼓的mapset裡必須要有一個比較簡單的難度, 目前來看現有的兩個難度都是Oni, 請加一個Muzukashii Mamosora正在修改
2. 太鼓BG在最近更新中被列為unrankable要素, 請移除 已移除
3. Insane+(Black Lotus)可以說是overmapped, 部份連打與音樂沒有關聯度 正在修改
4. Clap與Finish的下法不敢恭維, 以個人角度看需要重做一遍音效…不過這只是我的個人意見

不需kds, 因為實在沒精力重新寫一遍寫過的東西…如果有不明白的地方可以從PM問我 (forum/in-game)

等我觉得改的差不多了再PM你

http://puu.sh/1ZGCL
Muzu圖做好了~
至於我的Oni圖可留可不留啦(笑

新年快樂^^

Hi

Now that i know a few more things i think i can help you.

[General]
Just a comment: In 3 diff you made C&P at the chorus pattern. I don't say it's wrong but how about a little more creativity?

[Ash Roller]

1. Too big notes. CS +1
2. 00:03:876 (1) - These repetitions don't follow music or vocal. Try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Add a note at 00:05:092 (2) - Start slider at 00:05:497 (3) - finish slider at 00:06:308 (3) - and add a note at 00:06:714 (4) -
3. 00:22:524 (3) - Make this slider straight please
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:632 (2) - Add a note there. Newbies can get confused with that empty spot and also follows vocals better imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:47:660 (1) - This overlap looks ugly. Please, fix it.
6. 00:56:579 (4) - This note is not stacked properly. Fix it or remove the stack. I would remove the stack but it's up to you.
7. 01:00:632 (1) - Another ugly overlaped slider, please fix it. Suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:07:119 (2) - This slider has too many repetitions, can confuse newbies and also, it doesnt' follow vocals very good. I Suggest you to change it. Something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Add a note at 01:07:119 (2) - Start slider at 01:07:524 (3) - finish at 01:07:930 (3) - and add a note at 01:08:335 (4) -
9. 01:14:416 (3) - Place this slider properly. It's touching the HP bar.
10. 01:20:092 (2) - Confusing repetitions. Try this, fits better imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Remove one repetition so slider will finish at 01:20:903 (2) - and add a note at 01:21:308 (3) -

[Lime Bell]

1. CS +2. Notes are too big.
2. 00:44:416 (1,2,3,4) - First two sliders are good but the other two are not following anything. Try this, it follows vocals much better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Add note at 00:45:835 (3) - , start the last slider at 00:46:038 (4) - and finish it at 00:47:254 -
   If you want the x and y points for slider's cube:
   
   SPOILER

   x:400 y:180
   x:320 y:320
   x:200 y:320
   x:120 y:180

3. 00:47:660 (1) - This slider is touching the HP bar. Fix it.

[Blood Leopard]

1. 00:05:497 (1) - To follow vocals with combos, remove NC
2. 00:06:105 (2) - NC
3. 00:07:119 (1) - Remove NC
4. 00:08:538 (4) - NC
5. 00:09:957 (4) - NC
6. 00:10:362 (1) - Remove NC
7. 00:21:511 (4) - Remove this note. The previous slider follows music perfectly.
8. 00:35:295 (2) - Remove the repeating slider and add notes at 00:35:295 (2) - and at 00:35:497 (3) - It feels less confusing and follows music better.

[Sky Raker]
01:13:910 (2) - Delete this note. Add a note at 01:13:808 (2) - and at 01:14:011 (3) - It feels much better that way.

[Black Lotus]
It's overmapped but only in some parts. Some streams fit with the music , and some streams don't. Leaving streams away, this diff isn't much harder than Sky Raker so i suggest you to make some other changes like increaing slider speed or trick rate, changing the cs, using different patterns, etc. It's up to you.

Well, i guess that's all. I hope this helps. Any doubt you have about my mod, ask me anytime in-game and i'll answer you. Great song. Good luck and i shoot you another star. Bye ^_^

Mamosora wrote: i3h1t

http://puu.sh/1ZGCL
Muzu圖做好了~
至於我的Oni圖可留可不留啦(笑

新年快樂^^

这个oni留下来的话就8个难度了，unrankable
新年快乐~

Black Lotus

只是個人玩的感受
^o^
01:14:720 (4) - 可以刪掉 感覺重疊強行弄的連打有點不舒服.. 換成兩個三連反而打擊感覺要好一點 然後兩個三連打不重疊 放兩個位置
01:26:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這串連打很好 不過貌似音效可以再改改？ （平緩一點的 畢竟感覺結尾了 聲音調小 連打用這個音效好像也有點不合適
其實音效可以再改改 （個人感覺 sky raker也一樣
01:20:903 (1) - 這個地方可以考慮和最後連打01:26:578 (1) - 一樣的？ （感覺直接弄連打有點強行的感覺 然而先一個單點玩著感覺好一點

（哈哈 隨便試了會
新年快樂哈

還有另外 Blood Leopard 難度
00:59:822 (5) - 在01：00：328就停止比較合適0.0 ？
01:28:301 (1) - 轉圈是不是紅線開頭好點

Blackshane wrote: 3tx2a

Mamosora wrote: i3h1t

http://puu.sh/1ZGCL
Muzu圖做好了~
至於我的Oni圖可留可不留啦(笑

新年快樂^^

这个oni留下来的话就8个难度了，unrankable
新年快乐~

目前難度數量沒有限制, 要說最高應該是在12

Hi, M4M, actually more advising!

Blood Leopard

00:38:741 (3,4,5) - this is too closer to each other and too overlapped, it doesnt play well and you cant see it good, you should make this more obvious
00:47:660 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - These streams dont fit, due to the song getting calmer and not more active! At least remove the unnecessary streams to match the song

Nothing else i could say now, checked this 3 times now. The map is after that truthfully fine

[MOD QUEUE REQUEST (Taiko only)]
[Ts8aiko]
I saw some rythem is looking good
but I think need to change pretty lots of things
please have a check fully again~

[Mamo's Taiko Oni]
Properbly can delete some notes at some parts

[Mamo's Taiko Muzukashii]
Try to balance some parts for example
quiet part should be much less notes compare to kiai
exept some speciall case



[GENERALLY]
Please all taiko mappers in here
check own maps fully and carefully
I saw some is bit wierd
Thanks for seeing ~

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]

1. Missing Skin Files:
   spinner-background.png
   
2. Skin Dimensions
   spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 50x50).
   
3. Unused Image Files:
   spinner-background.jpg
   
4. BTW, this BG is a bit HHHH > < （要考虑到家长冲进房门的时别人的感受..当然不换完全没问题）

[Ash Roller]

1. 00:18:470 and 00:18:572 - Two needless green timing sections, just remove them :3
2. 00:42:389 (2) - Move it 1 grid left will be better, since it can overlap the tail of 00:39:551 (3), looks better then.
3. 01:09:551 (2) - Maybe there is a missing whistle on the start of slider? I guess it is necessary, it can keep consistent for these whistle.
4. 01:16:443 (2) - Make the beginning of this slider overlap on the beginning of 01:14:416 (3) - , I guess it will look better.

[Lime Bell]

1. 00:00:734 - It can be merged to the previous red timing section, since you only change the volume.
2. 00:03:876 (1) - According to the music, I think putting a slider here is the best way. So why not prepose the next slider here? And also do not forget to put this circle to 00:05:092.
   00:18:470 and 00:18:572 - Two needless green timing sections, just remove them :3
3. 00:33:065 (3) - Also according to the music, why not draw a slider such as below? It fits the music better imo.
   
4. 00:43:605 - Since vocal "a" here, so I suggest resolve this slider into a circle and a 1/2 slider.
   
5. 01:18:774 - Wait.. It is a bit difficult to some beginners, and it is discordant in the whole "Lime Bell" diff. 01:18:470 (4) - so it should be a 1/1 slider and following a circle.

[Blood Leopard]

1. Try CS+1? This is a Hard diff but its settings are so low.. You'd better also HD6 AR7 OD5 :<
2. 00:03:470 (2) - I feel a bit weird about this slider, a 1/2 slider is enough to map here in my view. Tripple 1/4 sounds really strange here.
3. 00:14:619 - Needless green timing sections, just remove it

[Black lotus]

1. 00:09:754 (4) - Overlapping on the (3) is better in my view, then (2) and (5) can keep symmetrical.
2. 00:21:916 (1) - I think newcombo here is better than yours, since it can show the newcombo clearly and it is close to 00:21:714 (9).
3. 00:46:849 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Since when you overlap something, it will have skewing. (You can push F5 to inspect this). So move them to x:304 y:136 to correct this.

[Sky Raker]

1. 00:07:119 (1) - Try jump since the vocal has emphasis.
2. 01:20:092 (6) - Tooooo close ! Where is your spacing? I would rather do jump on this :<

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Wonderful!

Snowy Dream wrote: 746d

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]

1. Missing Skin Files:
   spinner-background.png
   
2. Skin Dimensions
   spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 50x50).
   
3. Unused Image Files:
   spinner-background.jpg k now i can't find probable skin file.. i will fixed it this weekend
   
4. BTW, this BG is a bit HHHH > < （要考虑到家长冲进房门的时别人的感受..当然不换完全没问题）

[Ash Roller]

1. 00:18:470 and 00:18:572 - Two needless green timing sections, just remove them :3 k
2. 00:42:389 (2) - Move it 1 grid left will be better, since it can overlap the tail of 00:39:551 (3), looks better then.k
3. 01:09:551 (2) - Maybe there is a missing whistle on the start of slider? I guess it is necessary, it can keep consistent for these whistle.k
4. 01:16:443 (2) - Make the beginning of this slider overlap on the beginning of 01:14:416 (3) - , I guess it will look better.k

[Lime Bell]

1. 00:00:734 - It can be merged to the previous red timing section, since you only change the volume. i think it is ok
2. 00:03:876 (1) - According to the music, I think putting a slider here is the best way. So why not prepose the next slider here? And also do not forget to put this circle to 00:05:092.k
   00:18:470 and 00:18:572 - Two needless green timing sections, just remove them :3k
3. 00:33:065 (3) - Also according to the music, why not draw a slider such as below? It fits the music better imo.k
   
4. 00:43:605 - Since vocal "a" here, so I suggest resolve this slider into a circle and a 1/2 slider.k
   
5. 01:18:774 - Wait.. It is a bit difficult to some beginners, and it is discordant in the whole "Lime Bell" diff. 01:18:470 (4) - so it should be a 1/1 slider and following a circle.k

[Blood Leopard]

1. Try CS+1? This is a Hard diff but its settings are so low.. You'd better also HD6 AR7 OD5 :<k
2. 00:03:470 (2) - I feel a bit weird about this slider, a 1/2 slider is enough to map here in my view. Tripple 1/4 sounds really strange here.k
3. 00:14:619 - Needless green timing sections, just remove itk

[Black lotus]

1. 00:09:754 (4) - Overlapping on the (3) is better in my view, then (2) and (5) can keep symmetrical.k
2. 00:21:916 (1) - I think newcombo here is better than yours, since it can show the newcombo clearly and it is close to 00:21:714 (9).k
3. 00:46:849 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Since when you overlap something, it will have skewing. (You can push F5 to inspect this). So move them to x:304 y:136 to correct this.k

[Sky Raker]

1. 00:07:119 (1) - Try jump since the vocal has emphasis.k
2. 01:20:092 (6) - Tooooo close ! Where is your spacing? I would rather do jump on this :<k

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Wonderful!

Well, I'm not free now.. I'll check tomorow..
对于背景问题…雪梦酱真纯洁啊…不过这个是没有问题滴因为我母上看到这个也没有说什么哟（我是性取向正常的男孩纸）
还有用本子封面做背景都是可以滴@ http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/50988
本来用这张图做背景就是微福利哟哟～当然也不是不能换啦要换就换张福利度低一点点的

hi

as request from a new mapper

General
would like to know what do the diffs' name mean ? .. it would be nice if you just can follow the formal patter "Easy normal hard insane" something like this is definitely acceptable more than this, if you have the reason , please let me know
wonder why spinner-background.jpg has this resolution. I think it should be 1024x768 to make it proper ratio (because you will see some blank black color on the top and bottom of the screen
You have the video in the folder but you haven't added it. Please add it properly to all osu standard diff (don't add into Taiko diffs)
change Accel world to Accel World in the source for every diff

Ash Roller
01:07:119 (1) - remove NC here , it's too short compared to the rest in this diff
01:20:092 (1) - ^

Lime Bell
00:11:984 (1) - should have finish sound here as you add in Ash Roller
00:33:065 (3) - clap on the first point of slider plzz , this feels empty cuz you add on every first down beat before
01:02:254 (1,2) - ,00:46:038 (4) - , 01:15:227 (1,2,3) - some sliders like this are hard to read by beginner (the spinner that has repeat more than one)
I hope you will not bring this kind of sliders into the next map in the future

Blood Leopard
change to HP 5 , it's quite unbalance here
00:48:268 (2,3,4) - these notes are under the hitburst of stream from 00:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and it looks really hard to read, hopefully see you avoid something like this in the future too

Black Lotus
this diff is overmapped , it's bad thing when you put something like
00:23:437 (2) -
00:23:639 (4) -
00:24:247 (7) -
00:24:653 (10) -
00:26:882 (3) -
00:27:288 (5) -
00:35:396 (3) -
and so many on the point that the music doesn't sound in the reality
keep in mind that I'm not sure if you can get ranked with this overmapping but I know this is the first map and Insane+
hope you won't do something like this in the future
01:07:119 (5,6) - this distance is just ridiculous , you have to move 01:07:119 (5) - and 01:07:322 (6) - to other position far away from this right now because it is confusing , as you see , (5) is really close to (4) which has the almost same distance as (3) to (4)

Sky Raker
HP-1 OD-1 , as this diff is supposed to be an Insane , Black Lotus should have the greater setting of difficulty
00:45:430 (2,3) - similar problem to the Black Lotus diff , the distance looks totally the same as 00:44:416 (4,5) - so it is really confusing you should move 00:45:835 (3) - far away from (2) to adjust the proper spacing
01:26:578 (1,2,3,4) - move these whole notes to x:180 y:224 , 01:26:578 (1) - this note will completely stack with 01:25:565 (3) - and the overlapping at 01:26:984 (3) - will look better

for all Taiko diffs
reduce all volume in the timing mode to around 60-70 % because the music is not that loud but the whole notes sound really noisy if you compare them

It's good enough for the 1st map.. , let me know when you're done fixing!

Frostmourne wrote: 4k533o

hi

as request from a new mapper

General
would like to know what do the diffs' name mean ? .. it would be nice if you just can follow the formal patter "Easy normal hard insane" something like this is definitely acceptable more than this, if you have the reason , please let me know
My diffs include no GD in osu mode so I decided to use this diffs' name
There is one ranked song of Accel World use diffs' name like this: http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/48438
I choose these diff's name because characters correspond to those diff: 1.They are all appear in anime. 2. They are all Sliver Crow's good friends. 3. They are all girls in reality. Then I roughly place them with levels from novels and animes mentioned
wonder why spinner-background.jpg has this resolution. I think it should be 1024x768 to make it proper ratio (because you will see some blank black color on the top and bottom of the screen
Well, all skins made by Ts8zs and i change little about them.
I also find it unsuitable about spinner's skin so I decided to delete spinner's part
Now i turn to Kuria for a permission of using his spinner's skin from his ranked copy of the same song
You have the video in the folder but you haven't added it. Please add it properly to all osu standard diff (don't add into Taiko diffs)
fixed
change Accel world to Accel World in the source for every diff
fixed

Ash Roller
01:07:119 (1) - remove NC here , it's too short compared to the rest in this diff
01:20:092 (1) - ^
All fixed

Lime Bell
00:11:984 (1) - should have finish sound here as you add in Ash Roller
00:33:065 (3) - clap on the first point of slider plzz , this feels empty cuz you add on every first down beat before
01:02:254 (1,2) - ,00:46:038 (4) - , 01:15:227 (1,2,3) - some sliders like this are hard to read by beginner (the spinner that has repeat more than one)
I hope you will not bring this kind of sliders into the next map in the future
All fixed

Blood Leopard
change to HP 5 , it's quite unbalance here
00:48:268 (2,3,4) - these notes are under the hitburst of stream from 00:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and it looks really hard to read, hopefully see you avoid something like this in the future too
All fixed

Black Lotus
this diff is overmapped , it's bad thing when you put something like
00:23:437 (2) -
00:23:639 (4) -
00:24:247 (7) -
00:24:653 (10) -
00:26:882 (3) -
00:27:288 (5) -
00:35:396 (3) -
and so many on the point that the music doesn't sound in the reality
keep in mind that I'm not sure if you can get ranked with this overmapping but I know this is the first map and Insane+
hope you won't do something like this in the future
01:07:119 (5,6) - this distance is just ridiculous , you have to move 01:07:119 (5) - and 01:07:322 (6) - to other position far away from this right now because it is confusing , as you see , (5) is really close to (4) which has the almost same distance as (3) to (4)
I do this diff for stream so maybe it has many overmapped parts
I would change some part I also fell not suitable.. But others I want to remain
Others all fixed

Sky Raker
HP-1 OD-1 , as this diff is supposed to be an Insane , Black Lotus should have the greater setting of difficulty
00:45:430 (2,3) - similar problem to the Black Lotus diff , the distance looks totally the same as 00:44:416 (4,5) - so it is really confusing you should move 00:45:835 (3) - far away from (2) to adjust the proper spacing
01:26:578 (1,2,3,4) - move these whole notes to x:180 y:224 , 01:26:578 (1) - this note will completely stack with 01:25:565 (3) - and the overlapping at 01:26:984 (3) - will look better
All fixed

for all Taiko diffs
reduce all volume in the timing mode to around 60-70 % because the music is not that loud but the whole notes sound really noisy if you compare them
Fixed

It's good enough for the 1st map.. , let me know when you're done fixing!

Very big thanks for modding

Recheck

General
#1 kiai ends are not snapped correctly in every taiko diffs (from 73606 to 73605)

Lime Bell
01:02:254 (1) - finish this head
01:15:227 (1) - ^

fixed these and I will bubble

EDIT:good luck for the first map , bubbled

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF, I lost the modpost which cost me 3 hours cuz of opening VPN to the video. I'll try to bring up what is still in my mind here.

[General]

1. The sliderball's direction cannot follow the correct way after repeating, and map specific skin.ini is still not available now. I highly suggest you get something else for sliderb.png(s).
2. combo number is really difficult to tell for my eye.
3. spiner-background is kind of not same theme with your other skin elements.
4. the resolution of your video is kind of odd for a widescreen one. and a bit low compared with 1k bitrate. here is one for you: http://puu.sh/26dD9
5. source: Accel World
6. kuroyukihime in tag -- I think it should be separated as koroyuki hime?
7. maybe do a horizontal flip to your hitburst?
8. place your first ending-KIAI section at 01:11:984 in all diffs. it fits much better than current one

[Sky Raker]

1. 00:14:416 (1) - add 1 repeat? there does be something and a slider jump also would be great for the strong vocal.
2. 00:21:714 - claps from here became quite loud. plz down the volume. and I suggest you keeping them all in same volume. difference between 50 and 70 is really huge and you should use them carefully. (same thing also happens in other standard diffs, I won't repeat.
3. 00:47:660 - you should make the hitnormal audiable since here, otherwise players are hitting the air. (soft 70, if you need a number)
4. 00:48:470 (5) - what's this slider for. not vocal, nor instrument as I see.
5. 00:57:389 ~ 00:59:619 - why ignored the 3/4 vocals from here.
6. 01:16:849 (1) - i know you wanna keep same shape with 01:16:038 (3) but, this is a big fail as a 3/4 slider usage. highly suggest you keep 1/2 length and cover vocal.
7. 01:28:200 (9) - this note reminds me that... how about add a note at 00:11:984? it also fits there as a note before spinner.

[Black Lotus]

1. 00:10:565 (2,3,4,5) - kind of odd and senseless, simple 3/4 rhythm works much better imo, like 00:11:173 (6,7,8).
2. 00:11:883 (1) - this starting place is X. add note at 00:11:984 and put the spinner after that.
3. 00:15:227 (1) - 1/2 repeat-slider is kind of misleading here cuz of the obvious 3/4 vocal. highly suggest you do the same with 00:18:470 (1) here.
4. 00:20:092 (1,2) - no, this is out of music. you can choose using 4 1/2 notes to cover the drums or a 3/4 repeat slider to cover the vocal. (I suggest the first one)
5. 00:22:322 (4,5,6) - we rarely use 2 triples so closely, cuz they play and sound bad. try remove (5) and rearrange the spacing around here.
6. 00:43:200 (3,4,5) - almost the same issue with 00:10:565 (2,3,4,5), and for here, you also missed vocal at 00:43:403. 3 1/2 notes or something like that is much better.
7. 00:47:660 - you should make the hitnormal audiable since here, follow the suggestion in Sky Raker (and do the same thing in other standard diffs.
8. 00:48:673 (2,3,4) - kind of overmapping.
9. 01:08:741 (1,2) - this 3/4 not good. vocal here is 1/2 and nothing special at 01:09:045
10. 01:11:984 (1,2,3) - highly suggest you keep this same with 01:12:795 (4,5)
11. 01:19:281 (1,2) - NG 3/4 again.
12. 01:20:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - can you make this blanket look better?
13. 01:23:741 (7,8,9,10,11) - overmapped, I'd suggest you use 3 notes instead of 5
14. 01:25:464 (4) - consider removing this, almost the same issue like my first line about this diff.

[Blood Leopard]

1. 00:17:457 (2,3) - make this 1 1/1 slider for the vocal?
2. 00:20:092 (1,2) - 4 1/2 notes fit better here imo
3. 00:37:119 (1,2,3,4) - suggest make this a 1/2 rhythm
4. 00:38:741 (3) - ^
5. 00:52:119 (5) - ^
6. 01:11:578 (5,1) - broken spacing
7. 01:18:470 (1) - use 3/4+1/2 slider is much better than a repeat.
8. 01:19:281 (2,3) - this 3/4 is not good. vocal is all 1/2 and nothing at 01:19:585.
9. 01:24:551 (5,1) - broken spacing cuz of the copy paste.

[Lime Bell]

1. stack leniency 7, the 1/1 stackings are broken!

[Mamo's Taiko Muzukashii]

1. lower the volume before 00:15:227, also do this in other taiko diffs.
2. 00:13:403 - add don
3. 00:34:078 - add don
4. 00:51:308 (202) - move to 00:51:511
5. 00:52:119 (206) - move to 00:52:322
6. 01:00:835 - remove?

[Ts8aiko]

1. 00:21:714 - seems you kept following strictly to vocal even the intro part is over, which is not good in a taiko oni and for this song imo. Such as the empty at 00:22:322 and 00:23:943 and 00:24:349, these blanks are some place where the music is still going without any obvious change but you stopped. That's kind of hurt. Things like this happened a lot in this diff x_x.
2. 00:33:369 (141) - and here, I think 1/2 can do much better than a 3/4 rhythm. You're ignoring many places such as heavybeats or unique rhythm, and focus only on vocal.
3. 00:34:484 - obvious triple here.

[Mamo's Taiko Oni]

1. blanks like 00:00:633 ~ 00:01:241 and 00:02:254 ~ 00:02:862 are annoying me.
2. 00:31:950 (1) - remove?
3. 00:32:457 (1) - ^
4. 00:44:619 - add don?
5. 00:51:308 (1) - remove?
6. 00:52:119 (2) - ^
7. 00:54:349 - add don?
8. 01:06:106 (1,2,1,1) - 1/2 rhythm fit better here imo
9. 01:11:984 ~ 01:14:214 - I think you should do something around the 3/4 vocal instead of triple and 5s (which is already filling this oni diff)
10. 01:17:356 (2) - remove? the vocal does have a clear end
11. 01:21:916 - add don?
12. some place I think is too much, could be better if you separate them into some parts: 01:17:660 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1), 01:19:079 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2), 01:23:335 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1).
13. 01:28:302 (1) - remove

The Ts8aiko diff really need lot of extra work imo. Hope I didn't miss anything.

add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" to all standard diffs, remove the code in taiko diffs

sorry for this trouble, but without any explain I dunno if you really understood what I said before..
here are something to be double checked:

[General]

1. you forgot to set the make taiko diffs' first KIAI ends to 01:11:984.

[Black Lotus]

1. 00:43:200 (1,1,1) - cancel new combo
2. 01:19:281 (1,2) - i means this 3/4 is not good (short as NG), the vocal is all 1/2 here and I think that can work better with 01:20:092 (3,4,5,6) .

[Black Leopard]

1. 01:11:984 (1) - spacing, it needs x1.00 distance with the previous 01:11:578 (5).
2. 01:24:957 (1) - ^

[Ts8aiko]

1. surprised by the improvement, good job.
2. 01:15:126 - add don here, and remove 01:15:329 (368), might do adjustment about the rhythm after this, thus add don at 01:15:937
3. 01:16:545 (375) - remove, add don at 01:17:153.
4. 01:22:727 - add don, remove 01:23:031 (406).
5. 01:24:146 (412) - big ka

[Mamo's Taiko Oni]

1. 01:28:302 (1) - i still think a removal is better.

that's all.

fixed all

rebubbled, 元宵节快乐

哎 真是好长时间了呢
加油

Colin Hou wrote: 1v5j56

rebubbled, 元宵节快乐

raririn wrote: 2a5t1o

哎 真是好长时间了呢
加油

3Q~

hi

[general]

为什么有些难度的第二个kiai在红线就结束了 而不是01:29:822 (1) - 结束？

[BL]

00:06:714 (4) - http://puu.sh/28vML 或许这样看着更舒服？
00:09:146 (2,3) - 这个得微调http://puu.sh/28vOO
00:10:160 (4) - 间距
00:13:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这真没必要做成这样大折返吧 做个多变形状移动会舒服点 不过这次就这样也行 比如这种01:00:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 然后没音效也有点ry
00:21:714 (3,1,2,3) - 3加个finish
00:22:322 (4,5,6,7) - 这种间距最好不用 slider后近距离接远距离其实打着不是很好 下张图再说吧 进N音效之后的clap下法就不吐槽了..
00:35:396 (3) - 这间距什么情况
00:40:768 (5,6,7,8,1) - 横平竖直太无聊了 至少名义上给他点弧度
00:47:660 (1,2,3,4) - 这方块目测是你做完半边然后flip horizontally弄出来的 横间距比竖间距大啊
01:28:200 (9) - 这结尾为啥收在了上面

实话实说目前你的这个对节奏和间距的把握和设计做I有点勉强

[Sky Raker]

00:38:335 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这种placement是我不太能推荐的 http://puu.sh/28whG 从设计的角度看用1/2slider和三连做弧形blanket 00:39:146 (5) - 是基本思路 00:38:943 (4) - 在slider的弧线延长线上 00:39:349 (6) - 的弧度调好正好整体上形成一个大圆 而且4,5,6的间距还相等
类似的东西比较多 不过这肯定不是靠mod就都能搞定的 你可以自己看看哪些你现在不觉得麻烦可以改 不改也不是什么大事以后还有机会
00:51:714 (1,2) - blanket
01:04:889 (3) - 这是不是太远了
01:06:105 (3) - 不要放在这里 http://puu.sh/28wp2 这种情况这么放会比较平衡 01:05:903 (2) - 而且这个也明显低了 要往上点放到延长线上
01:14:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这形状实在不好

[Blood Leopard]

00:26:781 (7) - 间距
00:31:038 (8,1,2) - 这平行线间直线距离不一样是为啥

太方正了

[ONI]

fine

[ts8]

>_> lack of systematical and logical rhythm & kd proportion

[muzu]

01:10:058 (280) - move this to 01:10:261 (281) - ? triplet right after 2/1 feels not very easy to catch

[Lime Bell]

00:35:497 (2) - 间距 以及我觉得可以顺时针转25度左右
00:46:443 (4,5,6) - 整张图就这一个stack 我觉得你弄弄就可以消掉他

[Ash Roller]

fine

建议：

1 overlap 想好再用 否则看起来就是乱成一片
2 音效 需要多收集自定义音效 以及掌握默认音效的使用方法 比如N-whistle 无脑用效果并不好
3 间距 针对Insane说的 间距如果你还不能不开DS徒手掌控好 那么就还是要用DS做参考 以免做的太乱
4 hard不要那么横平竖直 多找找自己的风格

(应该都是中国人吧 看得懂吧 有人看不懂的话就找我

..
好..
好事多磨

Go ranked *w*

Tachibana Kanade wrote: 2t3n1t

..
好..
好事多磨

Zeroarg wrote: 5w333d

Go ranked *w*

Thank you all. But I maynot repending it soon, just because my study...
I will try to remap this beatmap.
I want to fix two Insane diffs into one. and add Futsuu and Kantan diff for Taiko, 7K EZ NM HD SHD for mania.
so it will be 12 diffs then.
But just wait until middle of June.

OniJAM wrote: 3f4s4f

Thank you all. But I maynot repending it soon, just because my study...
I will try to remap this beatmap.
I want to fix two Insane diffs into one. and add Futsuu and Kantan diff for Taiko, 7K EZ NM HD SHD for mania.
so it will be 12 diffs then.
But just wait until middle of June.

Middle of June is coming
Well, I think I have completed all the changes. But no more mania diff will be added. I failed to do that...
Now I'm going to find another BAT to repair bubble because of the retirement of LKs

LOL Too many clones of this song

Modded by irc, discussed few things about

1. Timing: offset (+12).
2. Hitsound: Fixed some weird places/parts.
3. Pattern embellished.
4. Useless new combo wiped off.

hey Oni here the mods that you requested to me~

[Muzukashii]

• Muzukashii diff isn't allowed use different triplet, like ddk dkd dkk kkd kdk kdd. it must same, like ddd or kkk only. you must change it, for the example like 00:16:253 (66,67,68) -

1. 00:32:266 (131) - d, because you can hear if 00:32:266 (131) - has a same pitch sound like 00:32:063 (130) - right? better use the same note like
2. 00:32:063 (130) -
3. 00:33:685 (135) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTbO.jpg
4. 00:40:374 (161,162,163) - k d d. you can hear the pitch sounds there (background sounds). the pitch sounds are getting low from 00:40:374 (161) until 00:40:780 (163) -
5. 00:41:489 (166) - k, becuase 00:41:489 (166) - has same pitch sound like 00:41:185 (165) - (hear it again carefully). and you use 00:41:185 (165) - k. so it's better use the same note at 00:41:489 (166) -
6. 00:46:861 (188) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTj1.jpg
7. 01:27:199 (351) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jToI.jpg

[Oni]

1. 00:14:631 (67) - change this to be d
2. 00:30:442 (159) - d
3. 00:59:834 (311) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTA1.jpg
4. 01:15:847 (402,403) - why you use finishes here........ remove the finishes please

goodluck!

mingmichael wrote: 103v33

hey Oni here the mods that you requested to me~

[Muzukashii]

• Muzukashii diff isn't allowed use different triplet, like ddk dkd dkk kkd kdk kdd. it must same, like ddd or kkk only. you must change it, for the example like 00:16:253 (66,67,68) -

1. 00:32:266 (131) - d, because you can hear if 00:32:266 (131) - has a same pitch sound like 00:32:063 (130) - right? better use the same note like
2. 00:32:063 (130) -
3. 00:33:685 (135) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTbO.jpg
4. 00:40:374 (161,162,163) - k d d. you can hear the pitch sounds there (background sounds). the pitch sounds are getting low from 00:40:374 (161) until 00:40:780 (163) -
5. 00:41:489 (166) - k, becuase 00:41:489 (166) - has same pitch sound like 00:41:185 (165) - (hear it again carefully). and you use 00:41:185 (165) - k. so it's better use the same note at 00:41:489 (166) -
6. 00:46:861 (188) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTj1.jpg
7. 01:27:199 (351) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jToI.jpg

[Oni]

1. 00:14:631 (67) - change this to be d
2. 00:30:442 (159) - d
3. 00:59:834 (311) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTA1.jpg
4. 01:15:847 (402,403) - why you use finishes here........ remove the finishes please

goodluck!

Nearly all fixed, thanks for modding~!

~General~

1. It would be nice to use same kiai and colours on the whole mapset, though it's not necessary if you don't want.

~Ash Roller~

1. 01:13:617 (2) - This slider could be stacked better with the previous one.

~Lime Bell~

1. 00:25:780 (2) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing and hard to read for beginners, I suggest you to remake this pattern.
2. 00:40:374 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
3. 00:41:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This whole pattern seems a bit too hard compared to the rest of the whole difficulty if you ask me.
4. 01:07:131 (4) - Again, please don't use too many repeats since they only cause confusion to beginners.
5. 01:10:374 (1) - Same as above, once again.
6. 01:17:672 (5) - ^
7. 01:19:293 (3) - ^
8. 01:23:347 (1) - ^

~Sky Raker~

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low for this kind of difficulty right now.

1. 00:21:726 (5) - This note feels too loud compared to the rest.

~Black Lotus~

1. 00:59:023 (1,2,3,4) - These notes feels too close each other, make the spacing bigger perhaps? Would play better and also easier to read.
2. 01:01:455 (9) - Add a new combo here, otherwise it will be too long.

***中文開首語還沒有寫好，就只放banner算了***

[基本]
<太鼓> 因為黃色連打、旋轉音符不是必須打擊的元素，所以用法與應援團滑條有不同。下面再作詳細的解說。
使用衝衝時間煙火不當：Offset 71996 的調時區間改至 75238 (比下一區間差1毫秒)

[太鼓梅級] 目測難度：梅級1星
音符總體以2拍分隔為主實在太稀疏。開首時 (00:15:239 前) 這樣還OK，但是衝衝時間 (01:02:266~ )麻煩再加強。以下附上本家コネクト譜面作參考用：
00:33:077 (20) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:34:699 放音符
00:46:050 (32) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:47:672 放音符
01:00:644 (1) - 旋轉音符提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 01:02:266 放音符

[太鼓竹級] 目測難度：竹級3星
00:33:888 (35) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:34:699 放音符
00:46:050 (56) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:47:672 放音符
01:00:644 (1) - 旋轉音符提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 01:02:266 放音符

[太鼓松級] 目測難度：松級7星
00:00:645 ~ 00:15:239 - 開首開太猛，衝衝時間被比下去了。建議只跟鋼琴音

[太鼓鬼級] 目測難度：鬼級8星

[Ash Roller]
除了總體1拍節奏悶得很之外都沒有問題

[Lime Bell]
也是悶。A段建議採用完全歌詞取向
00:36:320 (3) - 前移1/2拍; 00:37:131 (4) - 前移至00:36:726開始，延長成2拍長; 00:37:739 (5) - 改成2個單體音符
00:39:361 (3) - 前移1/2拍，延長成1.5拍長或是00:39:969加單體音符

没我事真是太好了……不想重新做了……随便你们改吧……

ts8zs wrote: 552536

没我事真是太好了……不想重新做了……随便你们改吧……

不好意思没和包子你和@Mamosora 说就把你们俩的Oni和我remake的だ部分拼成了Collab Oni...
“だが、すべて、私の私利私欲のために”
电脑被小学生占领了一天今晚改图还有包子放心不会没你事的……

OniJAM wrote: 3f4s4f

ts8zs wrote: 552536

没我事真是太好了……不想重新做了……随便你们改吧……

不好意思没和包子你和@Mamosora 说就把你们俩的Oni和我remake的だ部分拼成了Collab Oni...
“だが、すべて、私の私利私欲のために”
电脑被小学生占领了一天今晚改图还有包子放心不会没你事的……

……表示一年上不了线也怨我，没关系，collab也行www

Andrea wrote: ev47

~General~

1. It would be nice to use same kiai and colours on the whole mapset, though it's not necessary if you don't want.

~Ash Roller~

1. 01:13:617 (2) - This slider could be stacked better with the previous one.

~Lime Bell~

1. 00:25:780 (2) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing and hard to read for beginners, I suggest you to remake this pattern.
2. 00:40:374 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
3. 00:41:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This whole pattern seems a bit too hard compared to the rest of the whole difficulty if you ask me.
4. 01:07:131 (4) - Again, please don't use too many repeats since they only cause confusion to beginners.
5. 01:10:374 (1) - Same as above, once again.
6. 01:17:672 (5) - ^
7. 01:19:293 (3) - ^
8. 01:23:347 (1) - ^

~Sky Raker~

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low for this kind of difficulty right now.

1. 00:21:726 (5) - This note feels too loud compared to the rest.

~Black Lotus~

1. 00:59:023 (1,2,3,4) - These notes feels too close each other, make the spacing bigger perhaps? Would play better and also easier to read.
2. 01:01:455 (9) - Add a new combo here, otherwise it will be too long.

tetsutaro wrote: r2q5n

***中文開首語還沒有寫好，就只放banner算了***

[基本]
<太鼓> 因為黃色連打、旋轉音符不是必須打擊的元素，所以用法與應援團滑條有不同。下面再作詳細的解說。
使用衝衝時間煙火不當：Offset 71996 的調時區間改至 75238 (比下一區間差1毫秒)

[太鼓梅級] 目測難度：梅級1星
音符總體以2拍分隔為主實在太稀疏。開首時 (00:15:239 前) 這樣還OK，但是衝衝時間 (01:02:266~ )麻煩再加強。以下附上本家コネクト譜面作參考用：

コネクト 3/3/3/5

00:33:077 (20) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:34:699 放音符
00:46:050 (32) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:47:672 放音符
01:00:644 (1) - 旋轉音符提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 01:02:266 放音符

[太鼓竹級] 目測難度：竹級3星
00:33:888 (35) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:34:699 放音符
00:46:050 (56) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:47:672 放音符
01:00:644 (1) - 旋轉音符提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 01:02:266 放音符

[太鼓松級] 目測難度：松級7星
00:00:645 ~ 00:15:239 - 開首開太猛，衝衝時間被比下去了。建議只跟鋼琴音

[太鼓鬼級] 目測難度：鬼級8星

[Ash Roller]
除了總體1拍節奏悶得很之外都沒有問題

[Lime Bell]
也是悶。A段建議採用完全歌詞取向
00:36:320 (3) - 前移1/2拍; 00:37:131 (4) - 前移至00:36:726開始，延長成2拍長; 00:37:739 (5) - 改成2個單體音符
00:39:361 (3) - 前移1/2拍，延長成1.5拍長或是00:39:969加單體音符

All fixed, thanks for modding!

嘛... 上傳者是你 給你的.osu檔也是你的財產了w
remap辛苦了 有甚麼需要幫助的可以隨時PM我~

Mamosora wrote: i3h1t

嘛... 上傳者是你 給你的.osu檔也是你的財產了w
remap辛苦了 有甚麼需要幫助的可以隨時PM我~

不好意思没有提前告知很抱歉……为了凑4O4T必须要把两个Oni合起来- -本来还打算做4个Mania但是精神力不足= =
暂时可能没有什么需要帮助的地方- -有空可以给collab一点建议毕竟经历了很多mod也没有找过你都是我自己改的

Hi~ from my queue

please tell me what did you fix and did not fix.


Sky Raker

Black Lotus


GL

[ Sana ] wrote: 1v6t6y

Hi~ from my queue
please tell me what did you fix and did not fix.
Sky Raker

1. 00:56:185 (2) - ctrl + g Nope
2. 01:10:374 (1,2,3,4) - it can be boring to player. change like -> Nice idea
   
3. 01:27:401 (5) - make reverse slider -> Okay
   
4. 01:28:212 - add circle here Okay

Black Lotus

1. 00:04:699 (7) - ctrl + g Nope
2. 00:11:996 (3) - place here -> Fixed
   
3. 00:29:428 (4) - ctrl + g Changed in my way
4. 00:30:644 (3,2) - overlap perfectly Fixed
5. 01:10:780 (2,3,4) - doesn't fit as well. -> Okay
   

GL

Thanks for modding~

From Cat and Frog's modding queue~ \w

This is one of my favorite OPs.

Unrankable
Strong suggestion
Suggestion

[General]
Hitsound volume -5%

[Ash Roller]
00:46:050 (3) - uncurve, leads into (4) better
00:42:807 (3,4) - combine into 1 3-repeat slider?

[Lime Bell]
01:24:563 (2,3) - unstack?

[Sky Raker]
00:07:131 (1,3) - try making these curves a little smoother?
00:19:293 (2,3,4) - doesn't really feel in place
00:20:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream, slider, or remove. it sounds weird
00:24:361 (1,2,3) - make into slider
00:56:996 (4) - make like (2)
01:03:280 (5) - remove

[Black Lotus]
ok

Sorry about small mod ;w;
The map is practically perfect
BAT, come here.

hi, from my queue

[General]
kiai - have you considered soft whistle instead of normal whistle? it has a really nice effect imo ~ ofc, it's completely up to you

[Ash Roller]
00:08:753 (3) - missing whistle
00:42:807 (3) - add clap on end

[Lime Bell]
fine

[Sky Raker]
00:38:753 (3,4,5) - make it equidistant plz
00:42:807 (1) - add finish to match cymbal
00:44:428 (1) - add finish same idea as before
00:47:672 - maybe continue the same clap pattern as before up till here? ofc it's up to you

[Black Lotus]
00:37:435 (6,7,8) - maybe make curve leading into (1) is better flow
00:38:753 (3,4,5) - maybe curve? same idea as before
00:42:807 (1) - add finish on start to match cymbal
00:44:428 (1) - add finish on start
01:26:388 (6) - maybe x:320 y:292?

solid map
good luck

[Seraphin] wrote: 4o5vo

From Cat and Frog's modding queue~ \w

This is one of my favorite OPs.

Unrankable
Strong suggestion
Suggestion

[General]
Hitsound volume -5%

[Ash Roller]
00:46:050 (3) - uncurve, leads into (4) better
00:42:807 (3,4) - combine into 1 3-repeat slider?

[Lime Bell]
01:24:563 (2,3) - unstack?

[Sky Raker]
00:07:131 (1,3) - try making these curves a little smoother?
00:19:293 (2,3,4) - doesn't really feel in place
00:20:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream, slider, or remove. it sounds weird
00:24:361 (1,2,3) - make into slider
00:56:996 (4) - make like (2)
01:03:280 (5) - remove

[Black Lotus]
ok

Sorry about small mod ;w;
The map is practically perfect
BAT, come here.

Some fixed

pieguy1372 wrote: 5n6l

hi, from my queue

[General]
kiai - have you considered soft whistle instead of normal whistle? it has a really nice effect imo ~ ofc, it's completely up to you

[Ash Roller]
00:08:753 (3) - missing whistle
00:42:807 (3) - add clap on end

[Lime Bell]
fine

[Sky Raker]
00:38:753 (3,4,5) - make it equidistant plz
00:42:807 (1) - add finish to match cymbal
00:44:428 (1) - add finish same idea as before
00:47:672 - maybe continue the same clap pattern as before up till here? ofc it's up to you

[Black Lotus]
00:37:435 (6,7,8) - maybe make curve leading into (1) is better flow
00:38:753 (3,4,5) - maybe curve? same idea as before
00:42:807 (1) - add finish on start to match cymbal
00:44:428 (1) - add finish on start
01:26:388 (6) - maybe x:320 y:292?

solid map
good luck

Expect 2 "ofc"suggestions, all fixed
thanks for modding

好~
這圖開很久了吧. 一聽上就忍不住空耳了
~高帥富~

[Kantan]

Mod info:
KAT / K = Blue note ( Big KAT = Big notes , same of DON)
DON / D= Red note

1. SV 1.6 太高了吧. 改做1.2吧
2. 01:23:347 (32,33,34) - Big Kat?
3. 大致沒問題, 很好

[Fuutsu]

1. SV 1.6 改做 SV 1.4吧, Oni的話沒問題, Fuutsu和Kantan的確不用這麼高, 新手開個HR可能什麼都看不到了
2. 00:11:185 (x) - 加個k在這裡吧 鋼琴音做支持 這樣聽上去不錯
3. < 00:28:212 (24) - 這裡是bass drum, 再該加上finish, 下Big Don會好一點.
4. 00:47:672 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - 這段, 有明顯的重低音鼓. 我建議的下法如下: >
   
   圖

   
   <*> 即 dk k k k ddk k k kD
5. 其他沒大問題

[Mamo's Muzu']

1. 同樣的, SV 1.6 改做 SV 1.4吧
2. 00:21:726 (85) - Big Don
3. 00:28:212 (109) - 同理, 這裡都是大鼓+ fin, 即是Big Don
4. 00:28:212 (24) - 這裡是bass drum, 再該加上finish, 下Big Don會好一點.
5. 因為我發現太多沒下fin的地方了, 最後下不下的決定權交回你手上, 總結來說這跟vocal的譜還是可以的
   不過漏太多fin有點不帶感就是了
6. 同樣沒大問題

[Taiko Oni]

1. 00:20:712 (104) - 你這段在跟鼓的話, 就用d吧.
2. 00:21:422 (110) - Del
3. 00:21:523 (110,111) - 改做kk
4. (*) 總合上段 , pattern更改為 ddddk kkd.
5. < 00:27:705 (143) - 這個不是k啊. 細心一聽這裡是兩個連續的低音 意思是在00:27:807 (x) - 加個d
6. 圖

   
7. 00:28:009 (145) - d
8. 00:28:212 (146) - Big Don
9. 00:28:313 (147) - del >
10. <*> 上段, 總結-> dd d D
11. 00:28:415 (147) - 這裡換做ddk吧
12. 01:22:739 (449) - k
13. 01:23:144 (452) - ^

KanaRin wrote: 5k3967

好~
這圖開很久了吧. 一聽上就忍不住空耳了
~高帥富~

[Kantan]

Mod info:
KAT / K = Blue note ( Big KAT = Big notes , same of DON)
DON / D= Red note

1. SV 1.6 太高了吧. 改做1.2吧
2. 01:23:347 (32,33,34) - Big Kat?
3. 大致沒問題, 很好

[Fuutsu]

1. SV 1.6 改做 SV 1.4吧, Oni的話沒問題, Fuutsu和Kantan的確不用這麼高, 新手開個HR可能什麼都看不到了
2. 00:11:185 (x) - 加個k在這裡吧 鋼琴音做支持 這樣聽上去不錯
3. < 00:28:212 (24) - 這裡是bass drum, 再該加上finish, 下Big Don會好一點.
4. 00:47:672 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - 這段, 有明顯的重低音鼓. 我建議的下法如下: >
   
   圖

   
   <*> 即 dk k k k ddk k k kD
5. 其他沒大問題

[Mamo's Muzu']

1. 同樣的, SV 1.6 改做 SV 1.4吧
2. 00:21:726 (85) - Big Don
3. 00:28:212 (109) - 同理, 這裡都是大鼓+ fin, 即是Big Don
4. 00:28:212 (24) - 這裡是bass drum, 再該加上finish, 下Big Don會好一點.
5. 因為我發現太多沒下fin的地方了, 最後下不下的決定權交回你手上, 總結來說這跟vocal的譜還是可以的
   不過漏太多fin有點不帶感就是了
6. 同樣沒大問題

[Taiko Oni]

1. 00:20:712 (104) - 你這段在跟鼓的話, 就用d吧.
2. 00:21:422 (110) - Del
3. 00:21:523 (110,111) - 改做kk
4. (*) 總合上段 , pattern更改為 ddddk kkd.
5. < 00:27:705 (143) - 這個不是k啊. 細心一聽這裡是兩個連續的低音 意思是在00:27:807 (x) - 加個d
6. 圖

   
7. 00:28:009 (145) - d
8. 00:28:212 (146) - Big Don
9. 00:28:313 (147) - del >
10. <*> 上段, 總結-> dd d D
11. 00:28:415 (147) - 這裡換做ddk吧
12. 01:22:739 (449) - k
13. 01:23:144 (452) - ^

Nearly all fixed, thank you very much

It is just like the long run, I'm running and running to get to the finishing line..—— My essay

Taiko mod as requested from the Malaysian Taiko Queue

[Kantan]

1. change your circle size and approach rate to 5. change your hp drain rate and overall difficulty to 4.
2. 00:20:104 (5,6,7) - this straight 3 big d isn't a good idea. it's not really friendly for new player. it would be better and easier if you change it to d k d.
3. 00:34:699 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - tbh this part is kinda hard after you mapped 1/1 with gaps and suddenly 1/1 with no gap. makes everything feels difficulty, try to make it easier. maybe: Dk k k ddk k k ddk and so on.
4. 01:18:482 (25,26,27,28,29) - since the pattern before is d ddd d, it would be better if you make this as k kkk k, to make it sound better when consistent.
5. 01:21:726 (30,31,32,33,34) - please don't spam finish when there's no loud instrument or music/cymbals.

[Futsuu]

1. Do the settings same like I say in Kantan.
2. 00:10:982 (17) - move this to 00:10:780 (17) - to avoid confusion, because the starting you're mapping it based on 1/1 if there's suddenly change to 1/2 looks confusing to play.
3. 00:21:726 (12) - add finish here there's cymbal.
4. 00:22:536 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - why don't you make it like this: dkd dkd dkd ddD kdk kdk kdk. sounds better when the second part is a counter from the first part.
5. 00:35:915 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - this part feels weird when you mapped it with four circles pattern. try to reconsider and map based on the song more.00:37:536 (41,42,43,44) - this doesn't sound good and 00:43:617 (52,53,54,55) - sounds better with kdkk
6. 00:47:672 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - why this part suddenly become so hard and you mapped it using 1/2. try to make it easier. maybe follow vocal.
7. 01:05:915 (10) - this circle you should bring to 01:06:320 (10) -
8. 01:07:536 (13) - this circle should bring to 01:07:942 (13) -
9. 01:09:563 (16) - remove finish from here please.
10. 01:17:063 () - add a circle here just to make a variation for the ending.

[Mamo's Muzukashii]
Try to reduce some finishes, some of it sounds really random.

1. 00:00:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would make this as k d k d k d k
2. 00:06:320 (18,19,20,21,22) - if you really following vocal here, it should be kddkk
3. 00:09:969 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - try to make this like: ddk k kd d dk, counter pattern always sounds good \o/
4. 00:40:374 (154,155,156,157,158) - dkkdd sounds better here.
5. 00:44:428 (172) - add whistlere here, there's not much change of beat here. so just follow the pattern before.
6. I don't really have problem when kiai because you're following on vocal most of it. but seriously remove some of the random finishes @_@

[Collab Oni]

1. 00:07:131 (33) - this would be better if it's whistle.
2. 00:24:057 () - add a circle here. this three * is related, would be better if you do it all rather than just one.
3. 00:24:158 (126) - add clap*
4. 00:24:361 (127) - add a circle here*
5. 00:25:577 (133,134) - because there's a gap before, you should delete this two circles to make it consistent and add a circle at 00:27:604 () -
6. 00:26:996 (140) - sounds better if clap
7. 01:15:442 (398) ~ end - starting from here, most of the beat is overmapped and some of the whistles are random, please check again. @____@

Hi~from my queue

General
0.0

Ash Roller
00:54:158 (1,2) - 音效过渡有点不自然，我觉得这两个也要加whistle

Lime Bell
fine

Sky Raker
这diff看起来不干净，压在残影上的物件太多了
00:23:144 (5) - 这边开始的一段为什么一直在上面摆东西，下面都没用到
00:35:509 (2,3,4) - 为什么没clap了

Black Lotus
00:01:455 (5) - 这个滑条和你前面几个note还有后面几个note使用的sv以及间距明显不对，建议减速
00:37:131 (4,5) - 这个节奏感觉有点突兀，其他类似的地方都没有这个节奏- -
00:53:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里为什么放连打。
00:55:172 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 这梗感觉曲子没这个节奏在这里，莫名
00:23:347 (1,2,3) - 白线的三连感觉不是很好，三连尽量红线起

大概就那么多吧。
good luck

Thanks for you two's modding, I will fix as soon as possible

EDIT: Nearly all fixed (due to bad network, i forgot which i fixed... sorry)

HeatKai wrote: 5b401y

Taiko mod as requested from the Malaysian Taiko Queue

[Kantan]

1. change your circle size and approach rate to 5. change your hp drain rate and overall difficulty to 4. well.. fixed, but i see some ranked taiko map use 3 3 0 3, just like http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/61820, i just copy that
2. 00:20:104 (5,6,7) - this straight 3 big d isn't a good idea. it's not really friendly for new player. it would be better and easier if you change it to d k d. fixed
3. 00:34:699 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - tbh this part is kinda hard after you mapped 1/1 with gaps and suddenly 1/1 with no gap. makes everything feels difficulty, try to make it easier. maybe: Dk k k ddk k k ddk and so on. fixed
4. 01:18:482 (25,26,27,28,29) - since the pattern before is d ddd d, it would be better if you make this as k kkk k, to make it sound better when consistent. fixed
5. 01:21:726 (30,31,32,33,34) - please don't spam finish when there's no loud instrument or music/cymbals. fixed

[Futsuu]

1. Do the settings same like I say in Kantan. fixed
2. 00:10:982 (17) - move this to 00:10:780 (17) - to avoid confusion, because the starting you're mapping it based on 1/1 if there's suddenly change to 1/2 looks confusing to play. fixed
3. 00:21:726 (12) - add finish here there's cymbal.
4. 00:22:536 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - why don't you make it like this: dkd dkd dkd ddD kdk kdk kdk. sounds better when the second part is a counter from the first part. fixed
5. 00:35:915 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - this part feels weird when you mapped it with four circles pattern. try to reconsider and map based on the song more.00:37:536 (41,42,43,44) - this doesn't sound good and 00:43:617 (52,53,54,55) - sounds better with kdkk fixed
6. 00:47:672 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - why this part suddenly become so hard and you mapped it using 1/2. try to make it easier. maybe follow vocal. remaped this part, but not follow vocal
7. 01:05:915 (10) - this circle you should bring to 01:06:320 (10) - fixed
8. 01:07:536 (13) - this circle should bring to 01:07:942 (13) - fixed
9. 01:09:563 (16) - remove finish from here please. fixed
10. 01:17:063 () - add a circle here just to make a variation for the ending. not fixed, because i remove all 1/2 part

[Mamo's Muzukashii]
Try to reduce some finishes, some of it sounds really random. fixed

1. 00:00:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would make this as k d k d k d k fixed
2. 00:06:320 (18,19,20,21,22) - if you really following vocal here, it should be kddkk fixed
3. 00:09:969 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - try to make this like: ddk k kd d dk, counter pattern always sounds good \o/ fixed
4. 00:40:374 (154,155,156,157,158) - dkkdd sounds better here. fixed
5. 00:44:428 (172) - add whistlere here, there's not much change of beat here. so just follow the pattern before. fixed
6. I don't really have problem when kiai because you're following on vocal most of it. but seriously remove some of the random finishes @_@

have remove some finishes

[Collab Oni]

1. 00:07:131 (33) - this would be better if it's whistle. fixed
2. 00:24:057 () - add a circle here. this three * is related, would be better if you do it all rather than just one. fixed
3. 00:24:158 (126) - add clap* fixed
4. 00:24:361 (127) - add a circle here* fixed
5. 00:25:577 (133,134) - because there's a gap before, you should delete this two circles to make it consistent and add a circle at 00:27:604 () - fixed
6. 00:26:996 (140) - sounds better if clap fixed
7. 01:15:442 (398) ~ end - starting from here, most of the beat is overmapped and some of the whistles are random, please check again. @____@

i have delete some notes and change some whistles

thanks for modding

baldrace wrote: 1r2f6s

Hi~from my queue

General
0.0

Ash Roller
00:54:158 (1,2) - 音效过渡有点不自然，我觉得这两个也要加whistle fixed

Lime Bell
fine

Sky Raker
这diff看起来不干净，压在残影上的物件太多了 > <
00:23:144 (5) - 这边开始的一段为什么一直在上面摆东西，下面都没用到 > <
00:35:509 (2,3,4) - 为什么没clap了 > < 不是有么

Black Lotus
00:01:455 (5) - 这个滑条和你前面几个note还有后面几个note使用的sv以及间距明显不对，建议减速 not fixed, sv是一样的啊 间距也没有大问题
00:37:131 (4,5) - 这个节奏感觉有点突兀，其他类似的地方都没有这个节奏- - 有所改动 把这两个节奏改掉了
00:53:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里为什么放连打。> < 缓冲部分放连打我是觉得没有问题
00:55:172 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 这梗感觉曲子没这个节奏在这里，莫名 这部分是有点不舒服 不过暂时先不改动 因为暂时我找不到更好的改法，如果有人给个好的建议我会改掉的
00:23:347 (1,2,3) - 白线的三连感觉不是很好，三连尽量红线起 这个地方我觉得还是蛮和节拍的

大概就那么多吧。
good luck

Hi, From my Modding queue!














I Hope, that my sugestions helped

Papysh wrote: 124h3v

Hi, From my Modding queue!

Ash Roller

1. 00:00:645 (1,2,3) - I would use that pattern, Because it looks better for me hmm, but i think my pattern flows better and looks well too
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:03:888 (1) - I would like to curve that slider a little bit, It looks better for me yes fixed, but also change 2
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:753 (4) - Move that a bit higher (about 2 grids) and then move that slider 00:24:158 (5) - a bit left (2-3 grids) so it can fit better with 00:21:726 (1,5) - And it looks better nope, while player play this part, they can't see 1 and 2 when 5 appears
4. 01:02:266 (1) - please move that slider a bit so it can look better with the 01:00:644 (1) - fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Rest Looks Perfect for me

Lime Bell

1. 00:01:050 (2) - Move that a bit Right Because it looks better for me fixed
2. 00:07:536 (2) - Same as previous, but move that a bit down nope, this time ka- na- ta- are in the same tune, so keep 1 2 3 in a straight line fits better, also it flows better to beginners
3. 00:08:753 (4) - Chenge shape of that slider so it can look better, and play better nope
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:52:536 (3,4) - Maybe somethink like this nope
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:18:482 (1) - Maybe curve taht slider a bit, for better look not very bad looking, and it will break the link with 01:16:050 (2) -

Rest looks perfect for me

Sky Raker

1. 00:16:861 (1,2) - Maybe chose better shape for that sliders, so they can fit better and it will make them look better remap some part
2. 00:08:753 (1,2,1) - Maybe curve them a bit like this it looks nice when you only see 00:08:753 (1,2,3,1) - , but 00:07:942 (3,4) cannot have a good flow with this part
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dont like that because the circles are touching GREAT! Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Rest looks Good for me

Black Lotus

1. 00:05:104 (8) - Ctrl + Shift + R -> Selection centre -> 8 fixed
2. 00:13:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Nice stream here thanks
3. 00:19:090 (3) - I would chose other shape for it not a good shape for me
   
   SPOILER

   

This dif is really good diff, Everything else look perfect

I Hope, that my sugestions helped

Your mod helps a lot~ Thanks very much

Thanks for applying my mod o3o

[ash roller]

spinners could be a bit shorter?(especially the last one) a long spinner is a bit harder for beginners (peosonally)

[lime bell]
00:33:888 (4) - divide it into two slider in order to make it more suitable for the rhythm(just suggest)

00:39:361 (3) - it's better to add a note at any place

00:46:253 (4,5) - combine them into one?

01:14:428 (4) - a bit shorter is better


[sky raker]
00:09:969 (1) - the sound is different from others...especially or mistakes?

00:47:672 (1) - may use shorter and slower sliders to suit the rhythm ╮(╯▽╰)╭

00:50:915 (1) -
00:51:726 (1) -
won't you think using the same tricks would be better?

01:10:982 (4) - why not adding another note?


[black lotus]
I am not good at streams so only suggestion
01:00:644 (1) - not a buautiful arrange....


That's all,good luck!

Vita-VVA wrote: 5z486j

[ash roller]

spinners could be a bit shorter?(especially the last one) a long spinner is a bit harder for beginners (peosonally)
nope, the first spinner might be a little longer... but i can't find a more suitable place, the second has the same length as Zeroarg's newly ranked version.
[lime bell]
00:33:888 (4) - divide it into two slider in order to make it more suitable for the rhythm(just suggest) too difficult for beginners

00:39:361 (3) - it's better to add a note at any place I make this part a little easier for players to adjust themselves because before and after this part is difficult than average

00:46:253 (4,5) - combine them into one? no, i think mine suits the music better

01:14:428 (4) - a bit shorter is better it is ok to ends at 01:14:834 - , but i want to keep the same length with 01:11:996 (1,2,3) -


[sky raker]
00:09:969 (1) - the sound is different from others...especially or mistakes? no mistakes, i use this sound again in Black Lotus diff

00:47:672 (1) - may use shorter and slower sliders to suit the rhythm ╮(╯▽╰)╭also no speed change in Black Lotus diff, so i decide not to change this part

00:50:915 (1) -
00:51:726 (1) -
won't you think using the same tricks would be better? 我英死早没看懂233 well, now i know what you means though Tieba chats, but i think it my arrangment also suits the music, and using same tricks maybe too difficult for Hard and lacking of link with 00:52:536 (3) -

01:10:982 (4) - why not adding another note? too tight if added


[black lotus]
I am not good at streams so only suggestion
01:00:644 (1) - not a buautiful arrange.... ....


That's all,good luck!

Sorry, i seems your mod was of no use... so i can't give you kd
Thank you all the same

ash
00:08:753 (3,4,5) - blanket 包好点？
00:10:374 (5) - 节奏不懂。。应该滑条缩短然后加个NOTE在4的位置，或者加个强点的音效
01:24:969 (2) - 包好点？
整体音效感觉不是很搭，NORMAL部分的音效声音调小一点

lime
00:05:509 (3,4) - 开头几个滑条弧度都改缓一点
00:26:388 - 加个NOTE
00:39:361 - ^
01:00:644 (1) - 好评
短的滑条弧度都缓一点应该比较好，当然只是个人建议。。

sky
00:20:104 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 人性。。
00:41:996 (3,4) - 往下拉3-4格
00:59:631 (5,6) - 这走势略没FLOW感
01:15:644 (2,3,4) - FLOW感不足 改成这样？
01:18:482 (1,2) - 这样？

BLACK LOTUS
00:13:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好！
00:29:428 (4,5,6) - 感觉原地不好
00:31:455 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 碉堡
01:00:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 请务必教我这是怎么摆的
好图！掉血略坑 考虑-1？


感觉很不错，节奏啊排列啊神马的，所以我也没啥好的建议了- -

abdomsisn wrote: 3pw1m

ash
00:08:753 (3,4,5) - blanket 包好点？blacket在开了DS的情况下我只能包成这样
00:10:374 (5) - 节奏不懂。。应该滑条缩短然后加个NOTE在4的位置，或者加个强点的音效 4已clap 但是滑条在这里还是蛮合适的我不觉得要改
01:24:969 (2) - 包好点？我觉得已经包好了
整体音效感觉不是很搭，NORMAL部分的音效声音调小一点 我觉得声音大小还是比较适合了 不算太重

lime
00:05:509 (3,4) - 开头几个滑条弧度都改缓一点 看上去不错了啊……
00:26:388 - 加个NOTE 换了种方法填上去了
00:39:361 - ^ 同上
01:00:644 (1) - 好评
短的滑条弧度都缓一点应该比较好，当然只是个人建议。。

sky
00:20:104 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 人性。。
00:41:996 (3,4) - 往下拉3-4格 fixed
00:59:631 (5,6) - 这走势略没FLOW感 重拉了一个
01:15:644 (2,3,4) - FLOW感不足 改成这样？ fixed
01:18:482 (1,2) - 这样？ fixed

BLACK LOTUS
00:13:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好！
00:29:428 (4,5,6) - 感觉原地不好 改了
00:31:455 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 碉堡
01:00:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 请务必教我这是怎么摆的 因为很长所以扔box里了

SPOILER

算出来的，图形大概是这样的，上方的角=72度，底边靠下的小角任意设置，底边长度也可任意设置，然后通过勾股定理等算出各边长度（坐标），在四个红点处放note（中间两个要适当往左右拉开一定距离），然后通过rotate和scale就做出了一整个五角星

好图！掉血略坑 考虑-1？HP7感觉更合适


感觉很不错，节奏啊排列啊神马的，所以我也没啥好的建议了- -

thanks for modding~

Hi~M4M







good luck~

大概看了一下 没发现什么问题

就是BLdiff的质量一般.. 间距和一些细节都可以提高 不过由于是1stmap 而且还是折腾了这么久的老图 我不知道你是否还有耐心继续大修大改
如果你还改的动的话我可以写出很多的nazi或者概念上的东西 如果不愿意改的话我可以直接点rebubble（记得改我楼上的mod）