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Kodama Saori - Mikansei Stride (TV Size) 3271j

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 09, 2012 at 5:40:19 PM

Artist: Kodama Saori
Title: Mikansei Stride (TV Size)
Source: Hyouka
Tags: opening 2 mint_ong89
BPM: 146
Filesize: 8445kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.95 stars, 79 notes)
  2. Hard (4.72 stars, 170 notes)
  3. Insane (4.99 stars, 258 notes)
  4. mint's Taiko (4.83 stars, 388 notes)
  5. Normal (2.88 stars, 105 notes)
: Kodama Saori - Mikansei Stride (TV Size)
: Kodama Saori - Mikansei Stride (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hyouka :D

ReDL if you got this map before August 14, 2012

Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by me
Insane by me
mint's Taiko by mint_ong89
can i do taiko diff>>>>> :) :)?
and i finish.... :oops: :oops:

http://puu.sh/MoGS

can i make a taiko picture??
Topic Starter

mint_ong89 wrote: 2c5h3x

and i finish.... :oops: :oops:

http://puu.sh/MoGS

can i make a taiko picture??

Sure i'll your diff now..but you give me the taiko BG alright?

:D
Picture finish.. :) :) :)

http://puu.sh/MCFV
Topic Starter

mint_ong89 wrote: 2c5h3x

Picture finish.. :) :) :)

http://puu.sh/MCFV
Updated! :D
Mod requested via in-game pm :3


General:
Fine~ =w=


Easy:
AR +1 seems fine for Easy diff ~ > <
  1. 00:10:917 (1) - I dont think whistle fits here. so remove it~ it'll be better tho.
  2. 00:17:904 (1) - curve this slider, so it'll be playable better. like this?
  3. 00:26:945 (2) - remove this note and make a slider like this
  4. 00:36:397 (x) - it's seems you missed a note here. it's feels empty orz~
  5. 00:45:027 (2) - move it one grid down~
  6. 00:49:958 (4,1) - switch the NC. The vocal started on (4) not the (1) .
  7. 00:56:945 - this kiai really feels empty ;_; orz
  8. 01:06:397 (1) - remove this NC so it'll look better with the other (2) ~
  9. 01:14:616 (2) - ctrl+j and the fix the spacing~ o.o

Normal:
HP + 1 seems good to me~
  1. 00:33:109 (4) - remove the 2nd slider point it's useless for small slider like this ><
  2. 01:09:684 (1) - ^
  3. 01:25:712 (1) - remove this NC dont fit well orz~

Hard:
This diff seems fine to me o.o good diff~


Insane:
I dont think AR 9 fits this map >< so make it 8 plz~
  1. 00:30:643 (4) - move the 3rd 3 grid up so it'll look better with (5) .
  2. 00:32:698 (2) - ctrl+j and then fix the spacing looks much better like this to me~
  3. 00:40:198 (x) - i hear small stream here so it'll be better if you add note so it fits the song ><
  4. 01:06:602 (1) - remove this NC dont fit will here~

That's all I can find nice mappset and song =w= good luck with Ranking ~
Topic Starter

-Sekai- wrote: 1x592m

Mod requested via in-game pm :3


General:
Fine~ =w=


Easy:
AR +1 seems fine for Easy diff ~ > <
  1. 00:10:917 (1) - I dont think whistle fits here. so remove it~ it'll be better tho.
  2. 00:17:904 (1) - curve this slider, so it'll be playable better. like this?
  3. 00:26:945 (2) - remove this note and make a slider like this
  4. 00:36:397 (x) - it's seems you missed a note here. it's feels empty orz~
  5. 00:45:027 (2) - move it one grid down~
  6. 00:49:958 (4,1) - switch the NC. The vocal started on (4) not the (1) .
  7. 00:56:945 - this kiai really feels empty ;_; orz
  8. 01:06:397 (1) - remove this NC so it'll look better with the other (2) ~
  9. 01:14:616 (2) - ctrl+j and the fix the spacing~ o.o

Normal:
HP + 1 seems good to me~
  1. 00:33:109 (4) - remove the 2nd slider point it's useless for small slider like this ><
  2. 01:09:684 (1) - ^
  3. 01:25:712 (1) - remove this NC dont fit well orz~

Hard:
This diff seems fine to me o.o good diff~


Insane:
I dont think AR 9 fits this map >< so make it 8 plz~
  1. 00:30:643 (4) - move the 3rd 3 grid up so it'll look better with (5) .
  2. 00:32:698 (2) - ctrl+j and then fix the spacing looks much better like this to me~
  3. 00:40:198 (x) - i hear small stream here so it'll be better if you add note so it fits the song ><
  4. 01:06:602 (1) - remove this NC dont fit will here~

That's all I can find nice mappset and song =w= good luck with Ranking ~
Fixed many of them..thanks! :)
Hello M4M! These are all suggestions feel free to ignore them if they didn't help.

GENERAL
- Palitan mo yung green color combo nito. Combo2 : 128,255,128

Easy
00:21:602 (2) - Don't you think it's too early for this kind of fast reverse for beginners? How about making it a 2 stacked note?
00:23:246 (4) - Looks better if put a little curve in it ;)
00:26:945 (2,1) - Might be better if the new combo is on (2) instead of (1)
00:38:862 (1) - Add finish. Sounds better than the whistle.
00:42:927 - The clap doesn't seem to be very fitting here. Remove it please.
00:43:383 - Add a note with clap? This is much better, just adjust the following note's spacing and shape like this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392098
01:26:739 (1) - How about adding clap? I think it fits :)

Normal
00:40:506 (3) - Add a finish here would be good.
01:03:109 (4,1) - Put the new combo on (4) instead of (1)? The symmetry you used here looks better if it has the same color.
01:19:958 (1) - Put a curve like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392108 looks pretty bland if it's just straight.
01:26:739 (1) - Same as Easy. Adding a clap would sound good.

Hard
HP/OD -1 ?
00:16:054 (3) - Position this to x:396 y:168 for a better blanket with the previous slider.
00:16:876 (5) - ^ same issue. put it to x:288 y:224. Adjust (6)'s spacing if you followed this.
00:24:273 (4,1) - Since this is stacked. I'd prefer you to put the New combo on (4) for less confusion.
00:31:054 (4) - How about like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392112 I think it flows better.
00:37:219 (1) - Put a little bit more curve on this slider please xD
00:39:684 (1,2) - Add claps on the whole slider?
00:40:506 (3) - Add finish please and New combo please.
00:41:534 (1) - remove New combo.
00:42:972 (1) - Not sure about this.. but the rythm feels awkward. Remake it?
00:58:999 (4) - Same as 00:37:219. More curve please xD
01:04:342 (2) - NAZI but this here's a better adjustment. http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392118
01:15:438 (1) - This looks pretty bland. put a curve.
01:25:917 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about some claps here too? this is following the drums right? xD
01:26:739 (1) - Same as Easy. Clap please :)

Insane
Circle -1? I like it better with that.
00:02:287 (5) - Add whislte here too.
00:05:575 (5) - ^ same
00:06:910 (2,3,5,6) - Add claps
00:07:630 (7,1) - New combo on (7) instead of (1)?
00:13:178 (6) - move your 3rd way point to x:56 y:288 for a better blanket.
00:39:890 (4,5,6,7) - Starting your triple on a red tick is bad. It plays better on a white tick just like this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392132. Also don't forget to put claps.
00:40:506 (1) - Finish!
00:41:739 - Add a note with clap? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392135
00:54:890 (1,2,3) - I think this part would good as a slider with reverse as well. Something like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392140
01:09:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about this.. I think it could be done better. remap it?
01:26:739 (1) - How about putting notes here instead of just a spinner? This is already an Insane putting in just a spinner would be a let down for me :(


This is a nice map! Good luck Genkishi! go for rank! \o/
Topic Starter

rickyboi wrote: 1z2y1b

Hello M4M! These are all suggestions feel free to ignore them if they didn't help.

GENERAL
- Palitan mo yung green color combo nito. Combo2 : 128,255,128

Easy
00:21:602 (2) - Don't you think it's too early for this kind of fast reverse for beginners? How about making it a 2 stacked note?
00:23:246 (4) - Looks better if put a little curve in it ;)
00:26:945 (2,1) - Might be better if the new combo is on (2) instead of (1)
00:38:862 (1) - Add finish. Sounds better than the whistle.
00:42:927 - The clap doesn't seem to be very fitting here. Remove it please.
00:43:383 - Add a note with clap? This is much better, just adjust the following note's spacing and shape like this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392098
01:26:739 (1) - How about adding clap? I think it fits :)

Normal
00:40:506 (3) - Add a finish here would be good.
01:03:109 (4,1) - Put the new combo on (4) instead of (1)? The symmetry you used here looks better if it has the same color.
01:19:958 (1) - Put a curve like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392108 looks pretty bland if it's just straight.
01:26:739 (1) - Same as Easy. Adding a clap would sound good.

Hard
HP/OD -1 ?
00:16:054 (3) - Position this to x:396 y:168 for a better blanket with the previous slider.
00:16:876 (5) - ^ same issue. put it to x:288 y:224. Adjust (6)'s spacing if you followed this.
00:24:273 (4,1) - Since this is stacked. I'd prefer you to put the New combo on (4) for less confusion.
00:31:054 (4) - How about like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392112 I think it flows better.
00:37:219 (1) - Put a little bit more curve on this slider please xD
00:39:684 (1,2) - Add claps on the whole slider?
00:40:506 (3) - Add finish please and New combo please.
00:41:534 (1) - remove New combo.
00:42:972 (1) - Not sure about this.. but the rythm feels awkward. Remake it?
00:58:999 (4) - Same as 00:37:219. More curve please xD
01:04:342 (2) - NAZI but this here's a better adjustment. http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392118
01:15:438 (1) - This looks pretty bland. put a curve.
01:25:917 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about some claps here too? this is following the drums right? xD
01:26:739 (1) - Same as Easy. Clap please :)

Insane
Circle -1? I like it better with that.
00:02:287 (5) - Add whislte here too.
00:05:575 (5) - ^ same
00:06:910 (2,3,5,6) - Add claps
00:07:630 (7,1) - New combo on (7) instead of (1)?
00:13:178 (6) - move your 3rd way point to x:56 y:288 for a better blanket.
00:39:890 (4,5,6,7) - Starting your triple on a red tick is bad. It plays better on a white tick just like this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392132. Also don't forget to put claps.
00:40:506 (1) - Finish!
00:41:739 - Add a note with clap? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392135
00:54:890 (1,2,3) - I think this part would good as a slider with reverse as well. Something like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/392140
01:09:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about this.. I think it could be done better. remap it?
01:26:739 (1) - How about putting notes here instead of just a spinner? This is already an Insane putting in just a spinner would be a let down for me :(


This is a nice map! Good luck Genkishi! go for rank! \o/
Fixed some

thanks! :)
Hi, from my modding queue
Sorry for my poor English. Some sentences are hard to make.

[General]
01:03:417 What's that timing point ? I think if it's useful, put it Kiai.

[Easy]
No probs

[Normal]
No Probs

[Hard]
00:57:561 Put a note here, it would sound better

Good song, and good luck for rankings ^^
Topic Starter

JudgeTheDude wrote: 4al1d

Hi, from my modding queue
Sorry for my poor English. Some sentences are hard to make.

[General]
01:03:417 What's that timing point ? I think if it's useful, put it Kiai.

[Easy]
No probs

[Normal]
No Probs

[Hard]
00:57:561 Put a note here, it would sound better

Good song, and good luck for rankings ^^
No changes xD but thanks for modding :)
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
Hello from my M.Q.
[Hard]
00:17:287 (7) - try something like this
00:19:136 (5) - ya , another suggestion
00:23:452 (3) - something like this?
00:24:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - something like this?
00:56:945 (1) - sound better for me
01:03:520 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:13:178 (6) - try something like this
All *suggestion*
Good luck!
Topic Starter

EvilElvis wrote: ke6g

Hello from my M.Q.
[Hard]
00:17:287 (7) - try something like this
00:19:136 (5) - ya , another suggestion
00:23:452 (3) - something like this?
00:24:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - something like this?
00:56:945 (1) - sound better for me
01:03:520 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:13:178 (6) - try something like this
All *suggestion*
Good luck!

Fixed your suggestion in insane only :)

tnx for modding
In-Game Request!

General
--> Your video has mp3 in it. Remove the mp3 from your video to save space. Also, the video quality could be better.

--> Your mp3 bitrate is too high (256 kbps). For this map to be rankable, your mp3 bitrate can not be lower than 128 or higher than 192 kbps. Again if you have trouble converting it, I could do that as well.

--> You could manipulate your slider ticks so they sound like your claps/whistles. It would enhance your map significantly.

Easy
-> Approch Rate +1?
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles.
00:15:849 (2) - This slider is not symmetrical. It's best to use 5 anchor points for these kind of sliders to make it more symmetical. 4 anchor points is terrible for slider symmetry trust me. Here is an example if a symmetrical slider:
00:18:725 (4) - ^

Normal
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles.
-> The HP Drain Rate is too low for Normal difficulty. Increase it to 3 or 4.
00:09:273 (4) - This slider is not symmetrical.
00:10:917 (1) - Remove the finish at the slider head. There's no finish to be heard in the music.
00:52:013 (5) - ^
01:05:575 (4) - ^
01:21:602 (1) - ^

Hard
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles.
00:25:506 (1) - Not symmetrical!
00:34:136 (1,2,3) - How about something like this?

Insane
-> To be honest, the map looks better with circle size 4 in my opinion. Otherwise, I found nothing wrong with this difficulty.

Good Map Overall! Get more mods and get more stars to increase your star priority.
Good Luck with your map!
Topic Starter

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

In-Game Request!

General
--> Your video has mp3 in it. Remove the mp3 from your video to save space. Also, the video quality could be better.

--> Your mp3 bitrate is too high (256 kbps). For this map to be rankable, your mp3 bitrate can not be lower than 128 or higher than 192 kbps. Again if you have trouble converting it, I could do that as well.

--> You could manipulate your slider ticks so they sound like your claps/whistles. It would enhance your map significantly.

Easy
-> Approch Rate +1? Ok
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles. Ok
00:15:849 (2) - This slider is not symmetrical. It's best to use 5 anchor points for these kind of sliders to make it more symmetical. 4 anchor points is terrible for slider symmetry trust me. Here is an example if a symmetrical slider:
00:18:725 (4) - ^
I think even with 3 dots is fine and it seems symmetric for me

Normal
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles. Ok
-> The HP Drain Rate is too low for Normal difficulty. Increase it to 3 or 4. Ok
00:09:273 (4) - This slider is not symmetrical.
00:10:917 (1) - Remove the finish at the slider head. There's no finish to be heard in the music.
00:52:013 (5) - ^
01:05:575 (4) - ^
01:21:602 (1) - ^ Do you mean the symmetry thing? because theres no finish here and in the above sliders


Hard
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles. Ok
00:25:506 (1) - Not symmetrical!
00:34:136 (1,2,3) - How about something like this? Fixed

Insane
-> To be honest, the map looks better with circle size 4 in my opinion. Otherwise, I found nothing wrong with this difficulty. Ok

Good Map Overall! Get more mods and get more stars to increase your star priority.
Good Luck with your map!
Thanks for modding!!..BTW i'll leave the adjustment of the mp3 bitrate and removing of the audio in the video clip
[Easy]
00:38:862 (1) - add finish
01:23:862 (2,3) - make a this? http://puu.sh/QjIi

[Normal]
00:40:506 (3) - add finish to beginning
00:43:794 (3,4,5) - not same spacing. just a caution
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4) - same. but this fix is easy http://puu.sh/QjEC http://puu.sh/QjEL

[Hard]
00:40:506 (1) - add finish to beginning
01:24:890 - add circle here?
01:25:506 - ^

[Insane]
00:40:506 (1) - add finish to beginning
00:52:835 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - too big spacing difference. you should add new combo to 00:54:068 (5) -
00:54:890 (1,2,3) - maybe should be same spacing?

Taiko is fine
Topic Starter

Muya wrote: 1k3o2l

[Easy]
00:38:862 (1) - add finish
01:23:862 (2,3) - make a this? http://puu.sh/QjIi

[Normal]
00:40:506 (3) - add finish to beginning
00:43:794 (3,4,5) - not same spacing. just a caution
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4) - same. but this fix is easy http://puu.sh/QjEC http://puu.sh/QjEL

[Hard]
00:40:506 (1) - add finish to beginning
01:24:890 - add circle here?
01:25:506 - ^

[Insane]
00:40:506 (1) - add finish to beginning
00:52:835 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - too big spacing difference. you should add new combo to 00:54:068 (5) -
00:54:890 (1,2,3) - maybe should be same spacing?

Taiko is fine

fixed some

thanks for modding :)
Hi~

Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[All diffs]
  1. 00:01:054 - change to S:C1 this red timong point and 00:06:808 - remove this green timing point
[Easy]
  1. AR +1 I feel approach circle still slow.
  2. 00:17:904 (3,4) - Hmm, this rhythm doesn't fit the music well imo... Change the pattern like this?
  3. 00:24:479 (1) - change the direction like this? It would flow better.
  4. 00:49:958 (1) - add finish at the end
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:506 (3) - add whistle at the end?
  2. 00:45:438 (5) - add whistle at the beginning?
  3. 00:47:082 (3,4) - Hmm, spacing is too close... The spacing should be same and consistent in normal diff.
  4. 01:01:876 (3,1) - ^
  5. 01:03:931 (2,3) - ^ Symmetry pattern is good. However, I think you should make another pattern...
  6. 01:21:602 (1) - still not symmetrical. Actually, using 5 ticks for these kind of sliders is easier to make than 4 ticks.
    153,236,81602,2,0,B|177:284|256:306|337:284|363:232,2,240,0|0|4
[Hard]
  1. HP -1? due to considering diff balance.
  2. 00:02:698 - no need this break
  3. 00:23:246 (2) - move 1 grid right
  4. 00:24:890 (4) - ^
  5. 01:26:328 (5,6,7) - move 1 grid right and 1 grid down
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:698 - no need this break
  2. 00:16:260 (5) - remove whistle at the slider's body? It sounds noisy :<
  3. 00:17:493 (1) - ^
  4. 00:18:315 (3) - ^
  5. 00:24:684 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:31:876 (6) - move 1~2 grid down because the spacing is close a bit.
Taiko is fine to me. It's nice~ <3
SPOILER

(I'm noob taiko player though.)

Overall Good Map! Good Luck! ;)
Topic Starter

banvi wrote: 572nr

Hi~

Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[All diffs]
  1. 00:01:054 - change to S:C1 this red timong point and 00:06:808 - remove this green timing point
[Easy]
  1. AR +1 I feel approach circle still slow.
  2. 00:17:904 (3,4) - Hmm, this rhythm doesn't fit the music well imo... Change the pattern like this?
  3. 00:24:479 (1) - change the direction like this? It would flow better.
  4. 00:49:958 (1) - add finish at the end
[Normal]
  1. 00:40:506 (3) - add whistle at the end?
  2. 00:45:438 (5) - add whistle at the beginning?
  3. 00:47:082 (3,4) - Hmm, spacing is too close... The spacing should be same and consistent in normal diff.
  4. 01:01:876 (3,1) - ^
  5. 01:03:931 (2,3) - ^ Symmetry pattern is good. However, I think you should make another pattern...
  6. 01:21:602 (1) - still not symmetrical. Actually, using 5 ticks for these kind of sliders is easier to make than 4 ticks.
    153,236,81602,2,0,B|177:284|256:306|337:284|363:232,2,240,0|0|4
[Hard]
  1. HP -1? due to considering diff balance.
  2. 00:02:698 - no need this break
  3. 00:23:246 (2) - move 1 grid right
  4. 00:24:890 (4) - ^
  5. 01:26:328 (5,6,7) - move 1 grid right and 1 grid down
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:698 - no need this break
  2. 00:16:260 (5) - remove whistle at the slider's body? It sounds noisy :<
  3. 00:17:493 (1) - ^
  4. 00:18:315 (3) - ^
  5. 00:24:684 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:31:876 (6) - move 1~2 grid down because the spacing is close a bit.
Taiko is fine to me. It's nice~ <3
SPOILER

(I'm noob taiko player though.)

Overall Good Map! Good Luck! ;)
Thanks for modding!! :)
Topic Starter

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

New mp3: http://puu.sh/Qzsh
New Video: http://puu.sh/QzSB
The Video's size is 17 mb o.o

I guess the present video is fine i guess
This is Japanese song, so the title should be a phonetic transcription..
Title: Mikansei Sutoraido
and the singer is こだまさおり the phonetic transcription is 「Kodamasaori」not 「Saori Kodama 」...
btw,you can add 「kotenbu」in tags

Good luck!
Topic Starter

Azure wrote: 5c181o

This is Japanese song, so the title should be a phonetic transcription..
Title: Mikansei Sutoraido
and the singer is こだまさおり the phonetic transcription is 「Kodamasaori」not 「Saori Kodama 」...
btw,you can add 「kotenbu」in tags

Good luck!

Im not sure about this

hmmm im gonna go get some suggetion from others first then :D
Seems your MP3's bitrate is 256 kbps, consider lowering it down to 192kbps?
Topic Starter

Lolicore Flandre wrote: 4f3l32

Seems your MP3's bitrate is 256 kbps, consider lowering it down to 192kbps?
Fixed
Your offset is a bit late btw.
Topic Starter
Hmmm i changed the bitrate to 192 and full submit but when i ed the map again it turns to 256 bitrate again ;w;

EDIT: FIXED!! :)
offset is still late =/

Use 1058.
Topic Starter

rickyboi wrote: 1z2y1b

offset is still late =/

Use 1058.
Try reing it?

because i change the mp3 bitrate

Genkishi wrote: 663a6b

rickyboi wrote: 1z2y1b

offset is still late =/

Use 1058.
Try reing it?

because i change the mp3 bitrate
oh okay, reed it and checked again.

1,111 - 145.5 bpm
6,041 - 146 bpm
I found no problem with the taiko diff, good job
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wmfchris wrote: 1d5f1w

I found no problem with the taiko diff, good job
Thanks :)
Yo~


[Insane]
00:01:505 (3) - whistle on head
00:02:327 (5) - remove whistle
00:04:793 (3) - whistle on head
00:05:615 (5) - remove whistle
00:54:930 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here?

[Hard]
00:02:122 (3) - whistle on tail
00:05:409 (3) - ^
01:19:587 (5,1) - swap new combo

[Normal]
AR+1? feels better imo
00:01:505 (2) - whistle on head
00:04:793 (2) - ^
00:40:546 (3) - can you make this prettier by moving the last slider point abit more to the right?

[Easy]
AR+1? AR1 feels abit low imo



That's all I can find right now
Goodluck~~♪
Topic Starter

Saten wrote: 1l5e5f

Yo~


[Insane]
00:01:505 (3) - whistle on head
00:02:327 (5) - remove whistle
00:04:793 (3) - whistle on head
00:05:615 (5) - remove whistle
00:54:930 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here?

[Hard]
00:02:122 (3) - whistle on tail
00:05:409 (3) - ^
01:19:587 (5,1) - swap new combo

[Normal]
AR+1? feels better imo
00:01:505 (2) - whistle on head
00:04:793 (2) - ^
00:40:546 (3) - can you make this prettier by moving the last slider point abit more to the right?

[Easy]
AR+1? AR1 feels abit low imo



That's all I can find right now
Goodluck~~♪

Thanks for the mod!! :)
Hi ~ Genkishi ~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y


  1. Please open osu file check offset and change same.

[Insane] 3j432i


  1. 00:24:724 - Add whistle sound better to me.
  2. 01:25:752 (2) - New combo should to here and remove 01:25:135 (1).

[Hard] k6p2p


  1. 01:26:574 - Should change finish here,same as other diff.

[Normal] 2mh6e


  1. 00:44:656 (4,5) - Spacing error.

That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Hi ~ Genkishi ~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y


  1. Please open osu file check offset and change same.
Done


[Insane] 3j432i


  1. 00:24:724 - Add whistle sound better to me. Fixed
  2. 01:25:752 (2) - New combo should to here and remove 01:25:135 (1).
Fixed

[Hard] k6p2p


  1. 01:26:574 - Should change finish here,same as other diff.
Fixed

[Normal] 2mh6e


  1. 00:44:656 (4,5) - Spacing error.
Done


That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Thanks for modding! :)
Also i got offset + 8(1103),call me again if you done ~
Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Also i got offset + 8(1103),call me again if you done ~
Fixed~! :)
OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~


Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~


Thank you Very Much~! :)
ko|da|ma|sa|o|ri
こ|だ|ま|さ|お|り
So the artist should be Kodama Saori.this is the true order according to the rule "surname firstname"
Change it or not now is up to you,but if you don't change it now, it when a BAT comes.
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gudbye wrote: 6i1y1i

ko|da|ma|sa|o|ri
こ|だ|ま|さ|お|り
So the artist should be Kodama Saori.this is the true order according to the rule "surname firstname"
Change it or not now is up to you,but if you don't change it now, it when a BAT comes.
I'll change the artist's name when a BAT mod the map :D
Yes, pls change artist and call me back again ~
Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Yes, pls change artist and call me back again ~
Fixed the artist :)
OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Rebubbled ~!

Good luck for rank ;)
Topic Starter

Konei wrote: 451331

Good luck for rank ;)
Thank you :)
[General]

  1. Please remove the audio from the video to save some more space
[Timing]

  1. I feel your offset is a bit early, I've got a oofset : 1109(+6), if you agree with this, do this after checking my mod since my mod is based on your timing, and do not forget to resnap all notes and timing sections
[Easy]

  1. 00:38:911 (1) - How about add a finish to the end of spinner?
[Normal]

  1. 00:40:561 (3) - No finish here?
[Hard]

  1. 00:39:733 (1) - How about remove clap here, but add clap to 00:40:349 (2) at the reverse point? It fits music more imo. And the same, 00:40:555 (1) - add finish?
  2. 01:26:171 (4) - I think add a clap here sounds nice
[Insane]

  1. 00:02:746 (x) - It's too short to have a break here, I'd rather remove it
  2. 00:06:959 (2,3,5,6) - you can add clap to those notes, or just for 00:06:959 (2,5), it would sound better than it is now imo
  3. 00:27:309 (8) - Add clap sounds nice here
  4. 00:40:252 (6) - ^
Send me a forump PM when you have reply
Topic Starter

Breeze wrote: 2w5d1h

[General]

  1. Please remove the audio from the video to save some more space
Fixed, with the help of blissfulyoshi :D

[Timing]

  1. I feel your offset is a bit early, I've got a oofset : 1109(+6), if you agree with this, do this after checking my mod since my mod is based on your timing, and do not forget to resnap all notes and timing sections
I think the offset is fine so no need to change

[Easy]

  1. 00:38:911 (1) - How about add a finish to the end of spinner?
Done

[Normal]

  1. 00:40:561 (3) - No finish here?
Ok

[Hard]

  1. 00:39:733 (1) - How about remove clap here, but add clap to 00:40:349 (2) at the reverse point? It fits music more imo. And the same, 00:40:555 (1) - add finish? Fixed
  2. 01:26:171 (4) - I think add a clap here sounds nice
Done

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:746 (x) - It's too short to have a break here, I'd rather remove it Done
  2. 00:06:959 (2,3,5,6) - you can add clap to those notes, or just for 00:06:959 (2,5), it would sound better than it is now imo Ok
  3. 00:27:309 (8) - Add clap sounds nice here Fixed
  4. 00:40:252 (6) - ^
Ok

Send me a forump PM when you have reply
After discussed the offset with Faust and blissfulyoshi, we think offset should be 1107-1111, so probably 1109 is the most fit one

And another thing, about the video, although it played well in osu, but it can't be opened in a media player, something is wrong maybe. Well, that doesn't effect much though

Please ask some more player or modder to check the offset
Topic Starter

Breeze wrote: 2w5d1h

After discussed the offset with Faust and blissfulyoshi, we think offset should be 1107-1111, so probably 1109 is the most fit one

And another thing, about the video, although it played well in osu, but it can't be opened in a media player, something is wrong maybe. Well, that doesn't effect much though

Please ask some more player or modder to check the offset
Okay i applied offset 1109

And about the video..I think you need a VLC player to play that and if i convert it in an .avi file the size will get bigger
Just to note, if you properly convert a video, .avi looks better quality/size (you can get smaller sizes if you want), at least in my experience (rarely work with .flv)
Let me know whether you want to change a video file or not so that I can rebubble this map
Topic Starter

Breeze wrote: 2w5d1h

Let me know whether you want to change a video file or not so that I can rebubble this map
Changed the Video into a .avi file:3
Rebubbled
Topic Starter

Breeze wrote: 2w5d1h

Rebubbled
Thanks :)
rank this pls >_<
Topic Starter

Kuria wrote: 133u4o

rank this pls >_<
Yup, Rank This BATs >w<
[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
MP3 quality is kind of low. Do you think you can find a better one?

[Easy]
00:15:081 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an Easy.
00:41:382 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:09:944 (1) - Whistle on slider slide. sounds like D:
00:41:999 (4) - ^
Aw, this was looking really awesome until the kiai and all the extra 1/4 rhythms that aren't in the song.
Topic Starter

Garven wrote: 3w455y

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best Okay
MP3 quality is kind of low. Do you think you can find a better one? Mp3's quality is fine for me and if i find one the offset will change i suppose

[Easy]
00:15:081 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an Easy. It has a large gap for us to hit the note so no changes for this
00:41:382 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:09:944 (1) - Whistle on slider slide. sounds like D: Fixed
00:41:999 (4) - ^ Fixed
Aw, this was looking really awesome until the kiai and all the extra 1/4 rhythms that aren't in the song.
Thanks for the mod :)
[Easy]
00:15:081 (1) - I'm still wary of these. They're quite soon after a spinner. This is an Easy, not a Normal.
00:41:382 (1) - ^

Okay, maps are good. Now then.

this mp3 into the set. The timing should be the same. I cut this from the full version of the song, haha.

http://puu.sh/11BLw
go go rank!
Alrighty. Rebubbled!

Edit:

It's a rebubble since I made a new MP3 for you. The timing needs to be double checked by someone else. Also the change to tick rate 2 also lends to a rebubble, sorry.
Topic Starter

Garven wrote: 3w455y

Alrighty. Rebubbled!
I thought it was gonna be ranked orz

anyway it's not yet bubbled xD
Timing is fine.
Did a short irc mod that doesn't worth kud.
Good enough for a new mapper, ranked.
Topic Starter

NatsumeRin wrote: 2v6x1m

Timing is fine.
Did a short irc mod that doesn't worth kud.
Good enough for a new mapper, ranked.
Thank you!! :)
wow congrats ~ ><
that's it! gratz~!
Gratz >w<
Grats cousin~ shitty problems and exams, Y U NO LET ME PLAY OSU
Gratz genkishi :3
Topic Starter
Thank you~!! :) :)
congrats
congratz~
grats!
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