Hello from my M.Q.
[Hard]
00:17:287 (7) - try something like this
00:19:136 (5) - ya , another suggestion
00:23:452 (3) - something like this?
00:24:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - something like this?
00:56:945 (1) - sound better for me
01:03:520 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:13:178 (6) - try something like this
All *suggestion*
Good luck!

EvilElvis wrote: ke6g

Hello from my M.Q.
[Hard]
00:17:287 (7) - try something like this

SPOILER

00:19:136 (5) - ya , another suggestion

SPOILER

00:23:452 (3) - something like this?

SPOILER

00:24:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - something like this?

SPOILER

00:56:945 (1) - sound better for me

SPOILER

01:03:520 (1) - ^

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:13:178 (6) - try something like this

SPOILER

All *suggestion*
Good luck!

Fixed your suggestion in insane only

tnx for modding

In-Game Request!

General
--> Your video has mp3 in it. Remove the mp3 from your video to save space. Also, the video quality could be better.

--> Your mp3 bitrate is too high (256 kbps). For this map to be rankable, your mp3 bitrate can not be lower than 128 or higher than 192 kbps. Again if you have trouble converting it, I could do that as well.

--> You could manipulate your slider ticks so they sound like your claps/whistles. It would enhance your map significantly.

Easy
-> Approch Rate +1?
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles.
00:15:849 (2) - This slider is not symmetrical. It's best to use 5 anchor points for these kind of sliders to make it more symmetical. 4 anchor points is terrible for slider symmetry trust me. Here is an example if a symmetrical slider:
00:18:725 (4) - ^

Normal
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles.
-> The HP Drain Rate is too low for Normal difficulty. Increase it to 3 or 4.
00:09:273 (4) - This slider is not symmetrical.
00:10:917 (1) - Remove the finish at the slider head. There's no finish to be heard in the music.
00:52:013 (5) - ^
01:05:575 (4) - ^
01:21:602 (1) - ^

Hard
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles.
00:25:506 (1) - Not symmetrical!
00:34:136 (1,2,3) - How about something like this?

Insane
-> To be honest, the map looks better with circle size 4 in my opinion. Otherwise, I found nothing wrong with this difficulty.

Good Map Overall! Get more mods and get more stars to increase your star priority.
Good Luck with your map!

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

In-Game Request!

General
--> Your video has mp3 in it. Remove the mp3 from your video to save space. Also, the video quality could be better.

--> Your mp3 bitrate is too high (256 kbps). For this map to be rankable, your mp3 bitrate can not be lower than 128 or higher than 192 kbps. Again if you have trouble converting it, I could do that as well.

--> You could manipulate your slider ticks so they sound like your claps/whistles. It would enhance your map significantly.

Easy
-> Approch Rate +1? Ok
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles. Ok
00:15:849 (2) - This slider is not symmetrical. It's best to use 5 anchor points for these kind of sliders to make it more symmetical. 4 anchor points is terrible for slider symmetry trust me. Here is an example if a symmetrical slider:

SPOILER

00:18:725 (4) - ^
I think even with 3 dots is fine and it seems symmetric for me

Normal
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles. Ok
-> The HP Drain Rate is too low for Normal difficulty. Increase it to 3 or 4. Ok
00:09:273 (4) - This slider is not symmetrical.
00:10:917 (1) - Remove the finish at the slider head. There's no finish to be heard in the music.
00:52:013 (5) - ^
01:05:575 (4) - ^
01:21:602 (1) - ^ Do you mean the symmetry thing? because theres no finish here and in the above sliders


Hard
00:15:027 - 00:26:945: No hitsounds? It sounds a bit empty here. Add some soft whistles. Ok
00:25:506 (1) - Not symmetrical!
00:34:136 (1,2,3) - How about something like this? Fixed

SPOILER

Insane
-> To be honest, the map looks better with circle size 4 in my opinion. Otherwise, I found nothing wrong with this difficulty. Ok

Good Map Overall! Get more mods and get more stars to increase your star priority.
Good Luck with your map!

Thanks for modding!!..BTW i'll leave the adjustment of the mp3 bitrate and removing of the audio in the video clip

[Easy]
00:38:862 (1) - add finish
01:23:862 (2,3) - make a this? http://puu.sh/QjIi

[Normal]
00:40:506 (3) - add finish to beginning
00:43:794 (3,4,5) - not same spacing. just a caution
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4) - same. but this fix is easy http://puu.sh/QjEC http://puu.sh/QjEL

[Hard]
00:40:506 (1) - add finish to beginning
01:24:890 - add circle here?
01:25:506 - ^

[Insane]
00:40:506 (1) - add finish to beginning
00:52:835 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - too big spacing difference. you should add new combo to 00:54:068 (5) -
00:54:890 (1,2,3) - maybe should be same spacing?

Taiko is fine

Muya wrote: 1k3o2l

[Easy]
00:38:862 (1) - add finish
01:23:862 (2,3) - make a this? http://puu.sh/QjIi

[Normal]
00:40:506 (3) - add finish to beginning
00:43:794 (3,4,5) - not same spacing. just a caution
00:46:260 (1,2,3,4) - same. but this fix is easy http://puu.sh/QjEC http://puu.sh/QjEL

[Hard]
00:40:506 (1) - add finish to beginning
01:24:890 - add circle here?
01:25:506 - ^

[Insane]
00:40:506 (1) - add finish to beginning
00:52:835 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - too big spacing difference. you should add new combo to 00:54:068 (5) -
00:54:890 (1,2,3) - maybe should be same spacing?

Taiko is fine

fixed some

thanks for modding

Hi~

Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[All diffs]

1. 00:01:054 - change to S:C1 this red timong point and 00:06:808 - remove this green timing point

[Easy]

1. AR +1 I feel approach circle still slow.
2. 00:17:904 (3,4) - Hmm, this rhythm doesn't fit the music well imo... Change the pattern like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:24:479 (1) - change the direction like this? It would flow better.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:49:958 (1) - add finish at the end

[Normal]

1. 00:40:506 (3) - add whistle at the end?
2. 00:45:438 (5) - add whistle at the beginning?
3. 00:47:082 (3,4) - Hmm, spacing is too close... The spacing should be same and consistent in normal diff.
4. 01:01:876 (3,1) - ^
5. 01:03:931 (2,3) - ^ Symmetry pattern is good. However, I think you should make another pattern...
6. 01:21:602 (1) - still not symmetrical. Actually, using 5 ticks for these kind of sliders is easier to make than 4 ticks.
   
   SPOILER

   

   153,236,81602,2,0,B|177:284|256:306|337:284|363:232,2,240,0|0|4

[Hard]

1. HP -1? due to considering diff balance.
2. 00:02:698 - no need this break
3. 00:23:246 (2) - move 1 grid right
4. 00:24:890 (4) - ^
5. 01:26:328 (5,6,7) - move 1 grid right and 1 grid down

[Insane]

1. 00:02:698 - no need this break
2. 00:16:260 (5) - remove whistle at the slider's body? It sounds noisy :<
3. 00:17:493 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:315 (3) - ^
5. 00:24:684 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:31:876 (6) - move 1~2 grid down because the spacing is close a bit.

Taiko is fine to me. It's nice~ <3

Overall Good Map! Good Luck!

banvi wrote: 572nr

Hi~

Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[All diffs]

1. 00:01:054 - change to S:C1 this red timong point and 00:06:808 - remove this green timing point

[Easy]

1. AR +1 I feel approach circle still slow.
2. 00:17:904 (3,4) - Hmm, this rhythm doesn't fit the music well imo... Change the pattern like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:24:479 (1) - change the direction like this? It would flow better.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:49:958 (1) - add finish at the end

[Normal]

1. 00:40:506 (3) - add whistle at the end?
2. 00:45:438 (5) - add whistle at the beginning?
3. 00:47:082 (3,4) - Hmm, spacing is too close... The spacing should be same and consistent in normal diff.
4. 01:01:876 (3,1) - ^
5. 01:03:931 (2,3) - ^ Symmetry pattern is good. However, I think you should make another pattern...
6. 01:21:602 (1) - still not symmetrical. Actually, using 5 ticks for these kind of sliders is easier to make than 4 ticks.
   
   SPOILER

   

   153,236,81602,2,0,B|177:284|256:306|337:284|363:232,2,240,0|0|4

[Hard]

1. HP -1? due to considering diff balance.
2. 00:02:698 - no need this break
3. 00:23:246 (2) - move 1 grid right
4. 00:24:890 (4) - ^
5. 01:26:328 (5,6,7) - move 1 grid right and 1 grid down

[Insane]

1. 00:02:698 - no need this break
2. 00:16:260 (5) - remove whistle at the slider's body? It sounds noisy :<
3. 00:17:493 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:315 (3) - ^
5. 00:24:684 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:31:876 (6) - move 1~2 grid down because the spacing is close a bit.

Taiko is fine to me. It's nice~ <3

SPOILER

(I'm noob taiko player though.)

Overall Good Map! Good Luck!

Thanks for modding!!

New mp3: http://puu.sh/Qzsh
New Video: http://puu.sh/QzSB

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

New mp3: http://puu.sh/Qzsh
New Video: http://puu.sh/QzSB

The Video's size is 17 mb o.o

I guess the present video is fine i guess

This is Japanese song, so the title should be a phonetic transcription..
Title: Mikansei Sutoraido
and the singer is こだまさおり the phonetic transcription is 「Kodamasaori」not 「Saori Kodama 」...
btw,you can add 「kotenbu」in tags

Good luck!

Azure wrote: 5c181o

This is Japanese song, so the title should be a phonetic transcription..
Title: Mikansei Sutoraido
and the singer is こだまさおり the phonetic transcription is 「Kodamasaori」not 「Saori Kodama 」...
btw,you can add 「kotenbu」in tags

Good luck!

Im not sure about this

hmmm im gonna go get some suggetion from others first then

Seems your MP3's bitrate is 256 kbps, consider lowering it down to 192kbps?

Lolicore Flandre wrote: 4f3l32

Seems your MP3's bitrate is 256 kbps, consider lowering it down to 192kbps?

Fixed

Your offset is a bit late btw.

Hmmm i changed the bitrate to 192 and full submit but when i ed the map again it turns to 256 bitrate again ;w;

EDIT: FIXED!!

offset is still late =/

Use 1058.

rickyboi wrote: 1z2y1b

offset is still late =/

Use 1058.

Try reing it?

because i change the mp3 bitrate

Genkishi wrote: 663a6b

rickyboi wrote: 1z2y1b

offset is still late =/

Use 1058.

Try reing it?

because i change the mp3 bitrate

oh okay, reed it and checked again.

1,111 - 145.5 bpm
6,041 - 146 bpm

I found no problem with the taiko diff, good job

wmfchris wrote: 1d5f1w

I found no problem with the taiko diff, good job

Thanks

Yo~


[Insane]
00:01:505 (3) - whistle on head
00:02:327 (5) - remove whistle
00:04:793 (3) - whistle on head
00:05:615 (5) - remove whistle
00:54:930 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here?

[Hard]
00:02:122 (3) - whistle on tail
00:05:409 (3) - ^
01:19:587 (5,1) - swap new combo

[Normal]
AR+1? feels better imo
00:01:505 (2) - whistle on head
00:04:793 (2) - ^
00:40:546 (3) - can you make this prettier by moving the last slider point abit more to the right?

[Easy]
AR+1? AR1 feels abit low imo



That's all I can find right now
Goodluck~~♪

Saten wrote: 1l5e5f

Yo~


[Insane]
00:01:505 (3) - whistle on head
00:02:327 (5) - remove whistle
00:04:793 (3) - whistle on head
00:05:615 (5) - remove whistle
00:54:930 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here?

[Hard]
00:02:122 (3) - whistle on tail
00:05:409 (3) - ^
01:19:587 (5,1) - swap new combo

[Normal]
AR+1? feels better imo
00:01:505 (2) - whistle on head
00:04:793 (2) - ^
00:40:546 (3) - can you make this prettier by moving the last slider point abit more to the right?

[Easy]
AR+1? AR1 feels abit low imo



That's all I can find right now
Goodluck~~♪

Thanks for the mod!!

Hi ~ Genkishi ~

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions





That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Hi ~ Genkishi ~

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y

1. Please open osu file check offset and change same.

Done

[Insane] 3j432i

1. 00:24:724 - Add whistle sound better to me. Fixed
2. 01:25:752 (2) - New combo should to here and remove 01:25:135 (1).

Fixed

[Hard] k6p2p

1. 01:26:574 - Should change finish here,same as other diff.

Fixed

[Normal] 2mh6e

1. 00:44:656 (4,5) - Spacing error.

Done

That's all ~ Pretty nice map and song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Thanks for modding!

Also i got offset + 8(1103),call me again if you done ~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Also i got offset + 8(1103),call me again if you done ~

Fixed~!

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

Thank you Very Much~!

ko|da|ma|sa|o|ri
こ|だ|ま|さ|お|り
So the artist should be Kodama Saori.this is the true order according to the rule "surname firstname"
Change it or not now is up to you,but if you don't change it now, it when a BAT comes.

gudbye wrote: 6i1y1i

ko|da|ma|sa|o|ri
こ|だ|ま|さ|お|り
So the artist should be Kodama Saori.this is the true order according to the rule "surname firstname"
Change it or not now is up to you,but if you don't change it now, it when a BAT comes.

I'll change the artist's name when a BAT mod the map

Yes, pls change artist and call me back again ~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Yes, pls change artist and call me back again ~

Fixed the artist

OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Rebubbled ~!

Good luck for rank

Konei wrote: 451331

Good luck for rank

Thank you

[General]

1. Please remove the audio from the video to save some more space

[Timing]

1. I feel your offset is a bit early, I've got a oofset : 1109(+6), if you agree with this, do this after checking my mod since my mod is based on your timing, and do not forget to resnap all notes and timing sections

[Easy]

1. 00:38:911 (1) - How about add a finish to the end of spinner?

[Normal]

1. 00:40:561 (3) - No finish here?

[Hard]

1. 00:39:733 (1) - How about remove clap here, but add clap to 00:40:349 (2) at the reverse point? It fits music more imo. And the same, 00:40:555 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:26:171 (4) - I think add a clap here sounds nice

[Insane]

1. 00:02:746 (x) - It's too short to have a break here, I'd rather remove it
2. 00:06:959 (2,3,5,6) - you can add clap to those notes, or just for 00:06:959 (2,5), it would sound better than it is now imo
3. 00:27:309 (8) - Add clap sounds nice here
4. 00:40:252 (6) - ^

Send me a forump PM when you have reply

Breeze wrote: 2w5d1h

[General]

1. Please remove the audio from the video to save some more space

Fixed, with the help of blissfulyoshi

[Timing]

1. I feel your offset is a bit early, I've got a oofset : 1109(+6), if you agree with this, do this after checking my mod since my mod is based on your timing, and do not forget to resnap all notes and timing sections

I think the offset is fine so no need to change

[Easy]

1. 00:38:911 (1) - How about add a finish to the end of spinner?

Done

[Normal]

1. 00:40:561 (3) - No finish here?

Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:39:733 (1) - How about remove clap here, but add clap to 00:40:349 (2) at the reverse point? It fits music more imo. And the same, 00:40:555 (1) - add finish? Fixed
2. 01:26:171 (4) - I think add a clap here sounds nice

Done

[Insane]

1. 00:02:746 (x) - It's too short to have a break here, I'd rather remove it Done
2. 00:06:959 (2,3,5,6) - you can add clap to those notes, or just for 00:06:959 (2,5), it would sound better than it is now imo Ok
3. 00:27:309 (8) - Add clap sounds nice here Fixed
4. 00:40:252 (6) - ^

Ok

Send me a forump PM when you have reply

After discussed the offset with Faust and blissfulyoshi, we think offset should be 1107-1111, so probably 1109 is the most fit one

And another thing, about the video, although it played well in osu, but it can't be opened in a media player, something is wrong maybe. Well, that doesn't effect much though

Please ask some more player or modder to check the offset

Breeze wrote: 2w5d1h

After discussed the offset with Faust and blissfulyoshi, we think offset should be 1107-1111, so probably 1109 is the most fit one

And another thing, about the video, although it played well in osu, but it can't be opened in a media player, something is wrong maybe. Well, that doesn't effect much though

Please ask some more player or modder to check the offset

Okay i applied offset 1109

And about the video..I think you need a VLC player to play that and if i convert it in an .avi file the size will get bigger

Just to note, if you properly convert a video, .avi looks better quality/size (you can get smaller sizes if you want), at least in my experience (rarely work with .flv)

Let me know whether you want to change a video file or not so that I can rebubble this map

Breeze wrote: 2w5d1h

Let me know whether you want to change a video file or not so that I can rebubble this map

Changed the Video into a .avi file:3

Rebubbled

Breeze wrote: 2w5d1h

Rebubbled

Thanks

rank this pls >_<

Kuria wrote: 133u4o

rank this pls >_<

Yup, Rank This BATs >w<

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
MP3 quality is kind of low. Do you think you can find a better one?

[Easy]
00:15:081 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an Easy.
00:41:382 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:09:944 (1) - Whistle on slider slide. sounds like D:
00:41:999 (4) - ^
Aw, this was looking really awesome until the kiai and all the extra 1/4 rhythms that aren't in the song.

Garven wrote: 3w455y

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best Okay
MP3 quality is kind of low. Do you think you can find a better one? Mp3's quality is fine for me and if i find one the offset will change i suppose

[Easy]
00:15:081 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an Easy. It has a large gap for us to hit the note so no changes for this
00:41:382 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:09:944 (1) - Whistle on slider slide. sounds like D: Fixed
00:41:999 (4) - ^ Fixed
Aw, this was looking really awesome until the kiai and all the extra 1/4 rhythms that aren't in the song.

Thanks for the mod

[Easy]
00:15:081 (1) - I'm still wary of these. They're quite soon after a spinner. This is an Easy, not a Normal.
00:41:382 (1) - ^

Okay, maps are good. Now then.

this mp3 into the set. The timing should be the same. I cut this from the full version of the song, haha.

http://puu.sh/11BLw

go go rank!

Alrighty. Rebubbled!

Edit:

It's a rebubble since I made a new MP3 for you. The timing needs to be double checked by someone else. Also the change to tick rate 2 also lends to a rebubble, sorry.

Garven wrote: 3w455y

Alrighty. Rebubbled!

I thought it was gonna be ranked orz

anyway it's not yet bubbled xD

Timing is fine.
Did a short irc mod that doesn't worth kud.
Good enough for a new mapper, ranked.

NatsumeRin wrote: 2v6x1m

Timing is fine.
Did a short irc mod that doesn't worth kud.
Good enough for a new mapper, ranked.

Thank you!!

wow congrats ~ ><

that's it! gratz~!

Gratz >w<

Grats cousin~ shitty problems and exams, Y U NO LET ME PLAY OSU

Gratz genkishi :3

Thank you~!!

congrats

congratz~

grats!