Sync wrote: f5m41

02:38:924 (5,1) - Watch out, this is spaced as if it were half a beat apart from each other; players will hit the slider too early here. - oh yeah, i moved it, thanks!
03:07:740 (9) - I'd add a new combo here instead of the slider a few beats later. - good idea, it also helps extinguish any confusion with the overlap

altkyo wrote: 3t1y1j

Hi! I'm just ing here to suggest that you swap the slider at 03:23:530 (1) - to put a simple hitcircle, followed by a Spinner, considering that its a hard diff and a long map, this slider can be really tiring to hold, and your map have no spinners , a good place to put one! - I was holding off on changing this since it was only suggested once to change it, but I will change it to a spinner cx

In general, your map is really good, I had fun playing it, also asked some friends to play it, and they liked - Yay!!
Hope that gets ranked soon, Good Luck!

I'm glad they enjoyed it!

I had a lot of fun making it and I hope so too! ^^ Thank you for the mod!!

FCL wrote: 3u2635

M4M
Tbh this map looks clean, just a few suggestions to do it better

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1. I'm sure your map does not require three first kiai times, music is also calm. However you can add kiai fountains if you understand me (If not just ask me in-game)
2. 00:01:425 (1) - hm, maybe triple, it's fine here? - I wanted the map to start up simple and build up to the first chorus so i made it a single note
3. 00:10:503 (8) - move up a bit for better triangle - okee
4. 00:39:911 (2,4) - bad overlap, fix it - okee
5. 00:50:372 (4) - try to make a symmetrical form, like this http://puu.sh/lWq7t/f182dfbc1b.jpg - okee
6. 01:06:556 (6) - probably fix this overlap will be okay - okee
7. 01:32:214 (7) - move on 144 116 for create a good triangle - okee
8. 01:34:385 (4) - spacing error? distance looks not correct - i think its fine
9. 01:39:911 (2) - try to stack with end of 01:38:530 (8) - no thank you
10. 01:40:109 (3,4,5) - flow it bad for me, my suggestion http://puu.sh/lWqmt/dbf065324b.jpg - no thank you
11. 02:17:214 (1) - i think you should make more spacing here imo - fixed
12. 02:19:977 (9) - not clear now, move on 212 332 - made more clear and readjusted them in my own way
13. 02:58:859 (2,6) - try to stack - okee
14. 03:05:372 (3) - add red dot at centre of slider, will look nice - didnt add red point but fixed that slider up
15. 03:20:174 (8,3) - stack - okee
16. 04:02:223 (6,7) - maybe stack? Now it looks weird, although... - no thanks
17. 04:07:899 (6) - again space error? - fixed
18. 04:45:602 (4,7) - meh, fix it, looks bad now - fixed
19. 04:46:818 (8,9,10,11,12) - looks really bad, make a pentagon it fine - made more pentagonal

uh, really like this song. Good luck! - Thanks a bunch!

Thank you for the mods! The map is now a lot more prettier and less bad

1. 00:29:451 (5,1) - the way you want players to jump right after a relatively weak beat is strange. Try to avoid the jump here? example
2. 02:16:819 (9,1) - spacing in-between those two feels compressed. Probably (1) should be x0.1 farther than that.
3. 03:53:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the volume at the first circles is still quite hard to hear. ARe you sure you don't want to try drum sampleset or make the soft ones a little louder like starting 35>40>45 and so on...
   Note: 01:53:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you know what to do if you agree to make this a little more audible
4. 04:02:325 (7) - no-no, don't make up patterns. Oovermapping you try to use here does not fit with the song.
5. 04:44:993 (3) - let's flip it the other way, so players won't expect this slider to have two repeats. example
   Note: 01:32:214 (7) - same here.

Bakari wrote: 2o2d6z

Hi again!

First of all, please make volume level on the green and red lines here 03:29:994 - equal. - oops. fixed

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1. 00:29:451 (5,1) - the way you want players to jump right after a relatively weak beat is strange. Try to avoid the jump here? example - okee. followed the example
2. 02:16:819 (9,1) - spacing in-between those two feels compressed. Probably (1) should be x0.1 farther than that. - i think i forgot to move it when i was re-mapping. fixed
3. 03:53:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the volume at the first circles is still quite hard to hear. ARe you sure you don't want to try drum sampleset or make the soft ones a little louder like starting 35>40>45 and so on... - I decided to take the tom sound from Cry Thunder for the first two notes
   Note: 01:53:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you know what to do if you agree to make this a little more audible - :3
4. 04:02:325 (7) - no-no, don't make up patterns. Oovermapping you try to use here does not fit with the song. - replaced with a single note and remapped slider
5. 04:44:993 (3) - let's flip it the other way, so players won't expect this slider to have two repeats. example - okee
   Note: 01:32:214 (7) - same here. - same okee

You did great job! - Thank you!

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Poke me once this is adressed, and I'll bubble.

Thanks again for some finishing touches! I'll poke you asap

Weegle wrote: 624g5a

hype!

Bakari wrote: 2o2d6z

Oh my, hope it gets ranked soon. ;_;

Neoskylove wrote: 5y4b36

#modreqs.

00:19:188 (2,1) - I think this is overlap. - its fine
00:33:793 (3,4) - blanket - fixed
00:40:109 (3,4) - this jump is awkward - i dont mind it
00:51:951 (1,3) - blanket - fixed
01:38:924 (1) - http://puu.sh/mqdNp/742f520a3f.jpg - nice suggestion
02:27:477 (2,5) - overlap - fixed
04:36:480 (5) - ctrl G - no thank you

thanks for the mod!

1. 01:56:293 (3) - there is no sound at the sliderend. Maybe replace this slider with the one at 01:55:109 (1) - (just flipped around so it looks like a '}') - and then youd obviously need to change 01:56:885 (4).
2. 02:17:214 (1) - Maybe replace this slider with just a single circle?
3. 05:08:912 (3) - theres SOMETHING not right with this slider - i dont think its placed directly in the middle of the sliderhead/end of 05:08:102 (2) - or cutting directly through the middle of it. It just be my eyes playing tricks on me (which does happen >.>) but something just feels off about the placement of this slider.

NucleaRaven wrote: 6b4j17

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1. 01:56:293 (3) - there is no sound at the sliderend. - cause there is no hitsound necessary
   Maybe replace this slider with the one at 01:55:109 (1) - (just flipped around so it looks like a '}') - and then youd obviously need to change 01:56:885 (4).
2. 02:17:214 (1) - Maybe replace this slider with just a single circle? - I prefer the slider, I tested the circle note but in the end I reverted the changes, thanks for the suggestion though ^^
3. 05:08:912 (3) - theres SOMETHING not right with this slider - i dont think its placed directly in the middle of the sliderhead/end of 05:08:102 (2) - or cutting directly through the middle of it. It just be my eyes playing tricks on me (which does happen >.>) but something just feels off about the placement of this slider. - You're right!! The blanket was off just a tad so i adjusted it and i aligned the straight slider to go through the direct middle of the curved slider, nice catch! It also helped me remap a few shady spots that might ruin the flow so thanks a bunch! X)

This was literally all i could find as its basically a flawless map - amazing hitsounds - amazing flow and spacing... and an AWESOME song from an awesome band.
Heaps of luck to you!! - thank you for the kind words ^.^ and yeah avenged fucking rocks! >:D

1. 01:44:451 (6,7) - this blanket is weird and forced, please use 1,3x DS here for consistency.
2. 02:43:661 - i suggest to not ignore this beat, try to change 02:43:267 (2) - this into a 1/1 slider?
3. 03:42:966 (1,2) - increase the spacing here since it's a bit confusing when reading with 03:42:156 (6,7,1) - these 1/1 spacings

Karen wrote: d6u19

Hello from forum PM

1. 01:44:451 (6,7) - this blanket is weird and forced, please use 1,3x DS here for consistency. - fixed
2. 02:43:661 - i suggest to not ignore this beat, try to change 02:43:267 (2) - this into a 1/1 slider? - good idea
3. 03:42:966 (1,2) - increase the spacing here since it's a bit confusing when reading with 03:42:156 (6,7,1) - these 1/1 spacings - fixed

map is fine i think, but i feel really uncomfortable with those random spacing changes, so i won't give bubble sorry. - aww okay
btw you need to ask Bakari for a rebubble since you changed quite a lot stuff from those mods. - alright thank you

Maakkeli wrote: f6f4s

hey but wasn't Mike Portnoy playing the drums in nightmare so you might wanna add him in the tags or something
just correct me if i'm wrong

ThoomyyxD wrote: 24341j

Avenged Sevenfold♥

-Kanzaki wrote: 5v692p

rank when

Shyotamaze wrote: 6q1f3k

soon tm

Shyotamaze wrote: 6q1f3k

soon tm

Spork Lover wrote: 60628

Hmm

-Kanzaki wrote: 5v692p

rank when

Spork Lover wrote: 60628

-Kanzaki wrote: 5v692p

rank when

Shyotamaze wrote: 6q1f3k

pls

Shyotamaze wrote: 6q1f3k

I swear if a BN doesn't show up within a month I'll spam this mapset with stars and maybe they'll finally notice it

Shyotamaze wrote: 6q1f3k

I'm running out of kds help me pls

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

Good map tbh. Just fix these timing sections:

Inconsistent sample (should be the same)


Inconsistent hitsound volume (should be the same)