Spy wrote: 21404s

Hmm,I'mt not good at checking anime metadata /.\ Prefer to check more from Japanese BATs.

jloughman14 wrote: 3w2y1l

I enjoy the map although I feel an easier difficulty should be added in because the normal is very short and pretty easy. It'd be nice with a video also.

LexiaLovesU wrote: 2l6b6n

jloughman14 wrote: 3w2y1l

I enjoy the map although I feel an easier difficulty should be added in because the normal is very short and pretty easy. It'd be nice with a video also.

Video is unrankable

Axarious wrote: 424938

General

1. uwu lazy mod
2. Yeah, you can ignore the single pixel movement but all it takes is a click in the browser and ctrl + arrow keys in game. Makes up like 80% of the mod, your choice.
3. Very interesting map, well done.

ME!

1. 00:13:236 (3,5) - Ctrl HJ? Why? Doesn't make sense to me here?
2. 00:13:716 (1,2,3,4,5) - Link Not sure how I feel about this pattern, but I think you should move (3,4) until its prev/next are equal to reflect 00:17:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - I see your point, but I wanna keep my consistency. D:
3. 00:20:796 (2) - To x:108 y:312? Would make more sense to connect it to transition momentum rather than having the player stop under the end of slider (1). It would destroy my consistency here aswell, since I made that pattern on all following straight sliders.
4. 00:23:316 (2) - To y:207 to match y-values with the previous slider tail. Fixed!
5. 00:51:156 (1) - Check the self blanket by changing CS to 3.2. Uhhhlala, I'm bad lol, Fixed!
6. 01:06:516 (1) - I see neuronecia painted all over this slider. Shhhhh.
7. 01:11:316 (1,2,3) - This (2) to (3) is weird, doesn't follow the momentum that (1) provides. Maybe ctrl g (3) and make it a 1/2 slider rather than a 3/4? I like it this way atm. :c
8. 01:14:556 (2) - To y:151, the autostack makes it look weird in editor. Fixed.
9. 01:16:476 (2) - To y:233, ^ Fixed.
10. 01:29:076 (1,2,3,4) - Take (1) and rotate it 72 degrees around playfield centre, these sliders look quite off in editor. Mmh, yeah, I see, I compared it with the previous curve slider and they seem identical. Just the spacing is a bit inconsistent, but yeah. I'll leave it for now like this.
11. 01:34:224 (2) - To x:190 to fix blanket a bit. Fixed.
12. 01:35:224 (6,7) - Not parallel, you can fix this by scaling. Fixed.
13. 01:39:224 (2,3) - Make the start of (2) parallel with (3)? Fixed.
14. 01:40:390 (6) - To x:122 y:47 to fix blanket and maintain 1.60x ds. Fixed.
15. 01:40:890 (7) - If you follow ^, move to x:320 y:122 to keep 1.60x/3.20x ds. Fixed.
16. 02:05:390 (5) - To x:227, autostack makes this unstacked in editor. Fixed.
17. 02:05:724 (1,1,1,1) - Consider tick rate 2 for these sliders. Why? There aren't too many sounds for me here tbh. D:
18. 02:55:876 (1) - Woo, neuronecia! huhuuhuu ...
19. 03:26:304 (1,1) - Woo, wobble impact! hehehehe...
20. 03:32:733 (2) - To x:215 y:145. Fixed!
21. 03:33:590 (1) - To x:215. Fixed!
22. 03:56:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hard to hit, these would be better as 1/8 slider jumps rather than a connected stream. Mmh, I think they're playable once you're used to them.
23. 04:06:260 (1,2) - Bad blanketing, loosen slider (1) up a bit. :< Fixed! :O
24. 04:31:714 (1) - Split this up into two reverse sliders instead of one? Nah, no reason for me to put another clickable thing here.
25. 04:53:532 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not sure how I feel about having this spaced stream so late in the song. I hope they're ok. ;w;
26. 05:24:214 - Circle here? Fixed! RIP 1000 OBJECTS

1. *Krfawy is waiting for HabiHolic's resized BG. XD
2. I am a bit unsure about the white combo colour. There's a guideline where it's written the colour shouldn't be neither totally white nor totally black. Now it's not, but it's very similar to the most white colour. Consider using something a little bit darker, for example this:

   Combo1 : 242,242,242

   The colour looks like *THAT*
3. 03:39:162 (1,2) - I am 690% sure it is sort of unrankable since the reversed arrow is covered by a note which covers it and makes it invisible. Can you make it more visible, please? ;3;

Krfawy wrote: 155a6k

Meow! :3

ME!

1. *Krfawy is waiting for HabiHolic's resized BG. XD
2. I am a bit unsure about the white combo colour. There's a guideline where it's written the colour shouldn't be neither totally white nor totally black. Now it's not, but it's very similar to the most white colour. Consider using something a little bit darker, for example this:

   Combo1 : 242,242,242

   The colour looks like *THAT* Fixed! :O
3. 03:39:162 (1,2) - I am 690% sure it is sort of unrankable since the reversed arrow is covered by a note which covers it and makes it invisible. Can you make it more visible, please? ;3; I see your point, but for me personally it's not confusing because of the combo and the followpoint. I keep that in mind and change it when more people complain about it! :3

That's all because visually the map is pretty OK, it's not too hard nor too easy. Good mappu. :3 Thanks! ;w;

Good luck! :D/

I also changed some things myself in addition! :3

Swerro wrote: e3s6r

Nice map I like the way you created the sliders alot


just a quick reminder not superduper important:
at 02:33:557 no.5 (the slider) isn't far away enough from 4. you should move it a little more up that looks nice

Hanjamon wrote: 5p4t3w

Hi Fatfan ^^

here the taiko diff http://puu.sh/fGgvF/cb884b5ac7.rar

Hanjamon wrote: 5p4t3w

Hi Fatfan ^^

here the taiko diff http://puu.sh/fGgvF/cb884b5ac7.rar

FlowHomie wrote: t6fu

An interesting map =/= an overmapped map? The fuck is this?

The hitsounds doesn't contribute to the experience, they make it obnoxious. Know when to set the line.

Mazzerin wrote: 5s2065

SUP :D/
00:12:756 (1,2,3) - the 1/4 sliders (almost) touch the big slider doesn't look exactly good, also sliders without anchors in this case would look better imo mimimi, it's supposed to look like this actually xD sorry, no change
00:18:516 (1) - doesnt perfectly blanket the circles OMFGMOGMO OMG, you're even right, fixed
00:19:716 (3) - use a 1/4 slider to not skip the beat on the blue tick Made it to a 4circle+slider stream, thanks!
00:20:796 (2,3) - 00:22:476 (2,1) - places like these doublets play really weird because you have to stop on 1 1/4 and then do a jump to get the 2nd one I think they play fine at that low bpm
why are there so many beats skipped between 00:27:396 (2) - and 00:28:116 (1) - could fill them up with 1/4 sliders just like before you can kinda relax in that part, so it's ok i think
00:30:756 (3) - i think this is where the NC is supposed to be not 00:30:996 (1) - because 00:22:596 (1,2,1,2) - had it there Fixed :O
01:02:076 (4,1) - 01:02:676 (3,4,1) - these spacing inconsistencies in this section on 1/4s are kinda weird because they force you to stop-move stop-move all the time since each time it changes Chaged the spacing
00:59:796 (1,2) - 01:05:316 (2,3) - 01:10:116 (4,5) - 01:12:276 (1,2,3) - maybe stick to only one 1/4 spacing on stuff like this, will make it look better mmh, but i like it ;;
01:27:156 (1) - these sliders always had their backs turned to the jumps so ctrl+h Oh lol, I see.. mmh, kinda difficult to fix it in a nice way with the following objects, so yeah, no change i guess
01:33:724 (1) - make this 1/4 reverse slider it skips an important vocal beat atm Does it? I follow the voice mostly. D:
01:46:724 (4) - this would be cooler as circles cause strong vocals There were so many jumpy circles before, so i think it's ok
01:51:890 (1) - this vocal makes you miss the really strong piano or whatever note DON'T DO IT Waaaah, fixed! Thanks
02:05:724 (1) - why is it a reverse slider Mmh, dunno acutally, i'll fix it some day with a better looking slider
01:36:557 note pls really strong one here I'm a vocal mapper, so I map more to the voice instead to the backgroundbeat D:
01:42:890 ^
01:48:224 ^
01:56:557 ^
02:00:557 ^
02:03:224 ^
02:03:557 ^
02:30:890 ^
02:32:224 ^
02:40:224 ^
02:41:557 ^
02:21:724 (1) - spinner after this slider? Made a pause inbetween.
02:48:390 (1) - SPINNAH It's fine without i guess
03:04:447 (9) - make it face the opposite side with its end like the other sliders before it did Fixed it in another way
03:32:519 (1) - remove nc, it was 5 notes+2 those 2 sliders before Lol fixed! Thanks :3
03:43:769 (6,1) - this is a bit too big compared to other 1/4 jumps Yeah right, decreased the spacing.
04:08:078 (2,3,4,5,6) - give these some ncs Oki, done
04:15:351 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - omg why don't these have the cool spacing out effect like these did 04:13:532 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Fiiixed just for you <3
04:22:851 (1,2,3,4) - 04:24:782 (2,3,4) - 04:26:487 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - rather not use that big spacing in a calm part and leave it for the last kiai? It's not that big imo
04:56:260 (5) - nc Fixed!
04:58:760 (5,6,1,5,6,1,5,6,1) - these really feel like they space out for no reason o.o Ok, deleted the tripples
05:08:987 (5,5) - use lower slider velocity to fit in with lower spacing Should be fine like it is atm
05:25:351 (6) - change this into reverse slider or something Changed
05:25:805 (7) - this into 3 circles Fixed!

1. 02:24:390 k
2. 04:42:055(45,46)dk sounds good
   

xtrem3x wrote: 3x6t14

Mod request via .-.

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General:


Don: d
Kat: k
Big don: D
Big kat: K

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Jamón Ahumado's Oni:

00:20:196 (68,69) - borralas (en si no hay un sonido pertinente para estas 2 notas y tambien ...) what? hay sonido ahi, ademas suena bien para mi
00:20:436 - cambiala a D (es obvio el sonidón ahi) hasta el dia de hoy, kkD, eso era unrankeable, ahora es rankeable pero igual, lo veo mejor sin finisher

00:35:556 - una k (quizas no sigas vocales como tal pero aqui una nota no vendría mal (?) ) break

00:42:396 - borrala (antes de esto hiciste un break y al notar este se ve un poco mejor otro break aca) nop, es mi estilo
00:42:516 - ^ ^

01:29:076 - pasalas a k (ya que no hay sonidos "Bass" aqui no hay necesidad de resonarlas asi) pensare acerca de esto, el sonido de aqui es diferente al de las anteriores notas, asi que suena bien con dddd imo

01:29:724 - Extiende el Spinner hasta 01:33:390 -(se que es un sonido largo pero especificamente en esa parte hace todavia otro aumento, asi que supongo que el spinner deberia terminar ahi) intento evitar spinners largos, ya vere

01:36:057- una d (independientemente de si sea vocal o sonido aqui suena bien para una nota) no, esto romperia mi consistencia

01:38:890 - muevelo al 01:39:224 (ni idea pero creo que suena bien ahi XD) suena feo
01:54:890 - muevelo al 01:54:724 ^ no xD, si te fijas en esta parte no estoy siguiendo las vocales

02:37:724 - cambia a D (un enfasis algo obvio aqui) por el momento lo dejare sin

03:31:662 - una k break

03:34:876 - esa secuencia cambiala por dddk k k d d esta bien para mi

04:08:078 - cambia por D (ninguna cambia de volumen de sonido como para ponerle k) me gusta mas como suena en k xD

05:12:623 - cambia a K (enfasis obvias en estos puntos que siguen abajo) no lo veo necessario
05:14:442 - ^ ^
05:16:260 - ^ ^
05:19:896 - ^ ^
05:21:714 - ^ ^
05:22:623 - aqui es a D ^
05:23:532 - aqui K ^
05:24:442 - aqui D ^

05:25:464 - borrar suena bien, no veo la necesidad de eso xD

05:27:623 - Solo es sugerencia (esto es mas que nada para darle el enfasis final al spinner de que irá mas y mas rapido hasta terminar, no es algo muy usado pero se me hace como divertido - ultimo cambio es 1056 ...yo y mis prisas) no funciona el puush asi que no se xD

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is a fast mod via In-Game

mliencheng wrote: 4g2h5m

mod from in-game pm request

[ Hanjamon's Oni]

1. 02:24:390 k changed :3
2. 04:42:055(45,46)dk sounds good yeah sounds good, but in the 1/1 beat i'm using d, so it will be a bit weird >.<

I really can't find much to mod, the map is already good

loopuleasa wrote: 2f1w2c

Mod - [ME!]

What I don't agree with:

1. Disconnected streams 00:59:796 (1,2,3,4) - Personal preference, I like to play them.
2. This M is really cheesy, especially that you won't add an E afterwards. 02:16:390 (1) - It adds some flavour but I would rather have a spiral. Yeah, right. Changed all sliders in that section.
3. This type of slider is too sharp and a nightmare for HR for instance 03:14:304 (1) - I would prefer a triangle one. Mmh, I'd like to have more opinions on that before I change something here.
4. 03:17:733 (1) - 03:31:019 (1,1) - 03:42:590 (1) - Similar to above, and it's really ugly. I love those sliders. ;w;
5. This section can be transformed into a stream burst 03:39:804 (2,1) - I don't exactly understand what you exactly mean here. O: A stream with two notes?
6. The long stream 04:53:532 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - should be more linear instead of having like 5 turns. Bunching them up slightly with the convert to stream option would be better for lowering the difficulty spike in this section. I see your point and I know this option of course, the current state of it however reflects exaclty my personal mapping style how I'd like to have that stream.
7. What I said above can be applied to most stream bursts across the map. Try to strigthen or curve them out better. See the LAOS - United map by Asphyxia and you can see how those streams are really smooth. Your stream bursts seem jagged because they were probably manually placed. Learn to use the convert slider to stream option more.
8. The jump between these two don't make a nice drop-off since the momentum is upwards 03:57:483 (6,1) - I see, but I don't see a solution for that problem so far. D:

What's really good:

1. This monster slider 00:51:156 (1) -
2. The rhythm
3. The hitsounds
4. The symmetry-based mapping
5. The slow section starting here 01:33:724 (1) - flows really nicely. Some jumps could be accentuated, if you pay attention to the melody since it spikes in some points.
6. These are fun to play. 02:00:390 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
7. 03:14:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - along with their hitsounds makes some nice stream bursts
8. These types of drop-offs should be more frequent imo 00:39:396 (1,2,3,4) -

What's really bad:

1. These circular sliders. They shouldn't be circular, maybe criss-crossed. Alternatively put one or two repeating sliders that beat in place. 01:29:076 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed those. RIP star rating, lol.
2. For sliders of type: 03:21:162 (1,2,3,4) - 03:43:447 (1,2,3,4) - 03:53:733 (3,4,5) - 03:56:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 04:00:590 (3,4,5) - 04:03:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should try to shorten them and bunch them closer together. It's problematic to play those and not that fun at all. As a tip try to use only usethose types of sliders when there are vocals (the ones that say "ah-dadadada") and if there aren't, just put a normal stream in place. I have to really think about it. Mmh, I'd like to have more opinions here, but I have to say that i'm quite confident with the current state.

Good luck with the map, hope to see it ranked! Thank you very much! We discussed quite a bit ingame and also added the "sayonare" at the end. Thanks for that aswell! :3

Darkxell_mc wrote: 5pj43

Hi, kinda m4m... Anyways thanks for your hepl, here is everything^^
I'm modding CTB! and Standard only sorry ^^"

I miss the video... Too bad it's not really SFW :/

[Standard]

00:19:956 (1) - The notes hides the slider witch makes it hard to read on first try... Or maybe i'm really to tired? But personally I would have released the key half a beat before. I think it should be ok! It's also at the beginning, so people could retry that one easily.
01:14:676 (3) - Wut? Is this... intended? It looks nice, but for some reason I just can't make it ^^' (Am I bad, sempai?) Yeah, of course, I think it's sightreadable.
01:16:596 (3) - Again. I guess the second time you're ready for it?^

01:29:724 - 01:33:724 - Useless timing point? Dunno if this is inherited from other diffs, if it is then It's good ^^ (Copy pasted the CTB mod...) Mmh, I asked a timer for that. :O

That was fast too... I love the diff, very nice slider patterns, Awesome jumps... Thanks

[End]

I hope this will be approved soon, it deserves it! ^^ ( + 1 star )
You guys are awesome map makers ^^'~ <3

Raiden wrote: m65e

Hey! Raiden here from my mod queue.

Hanjamon's Oni

00:23:556 (86) - Change for don? no, is fine for me and if i change this will break my consistency :c

01:06:636 - Add a kat? break >.<

01:20:796 (6) - Change for don? kat fits good with this sound

02:59:304 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - Alternate between k and d? i like this part with only k ;w;

03:26:519 (173) - Change for don? not a bad idea, but i prefer kkkkd

04:28:192 - Add a kat? little break, also, Dk is unrankable :c

04:28:305 - ^ so make it dkkdkkd

05:16:032 (55) - Change for don? consistency and k fits good >.<

Awesome map overall, I hope it gets ranked soon

1. BG has not the right size ; here for yyou the rght one
   
   SPOILER

   
2. StackLeniency :C increase pls atleast 2.0
   
3. 01:05:316 (4,5) - don't let overlap
4. 01:44:391 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i would reduce the jumps due slow part
5. 01:49:557 (10,1) - to big jumps here in the slow part
6. 03:14:304 (1) - the repeat is touching the slider start and end such kind of overlaps are unrankable
7. 03:17:733 (1) - ^
8. 03:31:447 (1) - ^
9. 03:42:590 (1) - ^

Lally wrote: 5351m

hi o3o

[o3o]

1. BG has not the right size ; here for yyou the rght one Fixed! Gero even gave me a better bg.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. StackLeniency :C increase pls atleast 2.0 Okkkk, fixed.
   
3. 01:05:316 (4,5) - don't let overlap Why? Is there something wrong with it? I don't see a problem here.
4. 01:44:391 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i would reduce the jumps due slow part I heavily focus on voice mapping in this part and I have to say that I find this part quite "intense". That's why I mapped it like this and I feel like it's fitting. So yeah, no change, sorry. ;w;
5. 01:49:557 (10,1) - to big jumps here in the slow part Pretty much the same as stated above. D:
6. 03:14:304 (1) - the repeat is touching the slider start and end such kind of overlaps are unrankable Fixed this one, hehe.
7. 03:17:733 (1) - ^ These sliders though have a very clear path, so it's not unrankable. I asked around and these ones seem ok. Plus I love them too much. o3o
8. 03:31:447 (1) - ^ ^
9. 03:42:590 (1) - ^ ^ So much red, sorry, orz. ;w;

call me back o3o

arviejhay wrote: 373d6n

can i create a Storyboard here?

General 6t6a34

1. Difficulty Spread : ☑
2. Unsnapped objects : There's one in overdose, go check it please
3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
4. Metadata Issues : ☑
5. Timeline Issues : I found only one issue, check it below
6. Combo Colors : ☑
7. Unused hitsounds : ☑
8. Hitsounds Issues : ☑
9. Inaudible hitsounds : ☑
10. Application of every mods :

m1ng's Overdose 3451f

1. 01:20:436 (2,1) - The distance here could be a bit decreased for the better movement
2. 01:34:029 (2) - Unsnapped note
3. 02:01:724 (1,2) - This could be replaced with 1/4 rhythm imo.. as I can clearly hear the 1/4 sounds from the background
4. 03:02:197 - Unnecessary inherited point
5. 03:59:304 (1,2) - Unexpected timed jump here which is pretty hard to .. Could you please reduce the distance between 1 and 2?
6. 04:36:942 (2) - I would place (2) like this to make it have better movement
7. 04:43:987 (1,1) - The distance here could be reduced for a bit to make it easier. Current distance is a bit large imo
8. 05:04:896 (2,1) - It's way too surprising cuz of sudden timed jump. You may add hdash between them as well
9. 05:26:260 (1) - I personally think that the spinner should be finished at 05:29:697 - to be better off with the music (this must be applied to std diff as well)

Hanjamon wrote: 5p4t3w

The video is NSFW

Hanjamon wrote: 5p4t3w

The video is NSFW

-Kamikaze- wrote: 101r26

Could someone and put video in description?

-Kamikaze- wrote: 101r26

Hanjamon wrote: 5p4t3w

The video is NSFW

-Kamikaze- wrote: 101r26

Could someone and put video in description?

-Kamikaze- wrote: 101r26

This is one of the most interesting mania diffs I've played this year. Hella good job Raika!
Could someone and put video in description? I'd really appreciate it

ByBy_ChAn wrote: 2a4e2c

Hanjamon wrote: 5p4t3w

The video is NSFW

What video ? .-.

deatbeat wrote: 1nb1b

if i(or any mod) sees this ed with the M/V you'd best be running :p

ShikiNoHollow wrote: 2s536e

you request me before right?

clm : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

open this

00:11:196 - add 1 note
errr, for this XD sry... i dont want to add more here ^^

00:39:636 (39636|2) - move to 7
sure~

01:00:636 - add 2 note
yeap, heard more hihat... added

01:08:316 - ^
errr but here, cant really heard it anymore

02:16:390 - add? heavy piano
but i only use single note for single pitch ^^, sry no...

02:32:224 - drum , add note
that is actually echo sound, but sure

02:35:057 (155057|3,156390|4) - what with this creepy note
it gives a heavy feeling... that player should play it really really gently ^^


05:08:987 - to - 05:09:442 - drum - https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/3034561 < try this
anyway, nerfed this part... ^^ thankssssss

good luck , and sorry im late

Fatfan Kolek wrote: 1v70e

BNs are hard to find. :3

Fatfan Kolek wrote: 1v70e

BNs are hard to find. :3

Fatfan Kolek wrote: 1v70e

BNs are hard to find. :3

ExGon wrote: 1w3u5m

good map

TheBronyGames wrote: 1j3m2n

So many stars, and favs, even ExGon said he liked it, and still not even a single Bubble, Is there something wrong with this mapset, BN's?

LordRaika wrote: 6u1dy

• [Hanjamon's Oni]
  
  Uncheck widescreen .

1. 00:08:916 (11) - consider removing finish here ? A bit overemphasized since it is not as stressed as 00:05:076 (1) -
2. 00:14:676 (36) - you may change this note to k since the pitch of music is higher than 00:14:196 (35) -
3. 00:19:716 (65,66) - swapping these notes to dk would fit the snare at 00:19:836 - nicely.
4. 02:27:390 (5,6) - consider deleting these notes ? They sound a bit unnecessary imo.
5. 03:11:947 (87) - maybe move this note to 03:12:054 - and change to d, then add k at 03:12:269 - if you want to follow the vocal ?
6. 03:14:090 (98) - d so that the snare at 03:13:876 (97) - could be emphasized.
7. 03:16:876 (115) - move to 03:16:662 - and change to d for the beat ?
8. 03:21:912 (146) - d would probably sound better here.
9. 03:46:233 (65) - same as 03:11:947 (87) -
10. 03:50:090 (89,90) - swapping these notes to d k would follow the vocal in a way better.
11. 04:23:987 (18,19,20) - d k d would be better since the pitch at 04:23:987 (18,20) - is the same.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote: 2v127

Hi, here is the M4M as requested by Hanjamon.

• [Hanjamon's Oni]
  
  Uncheck widescreen . I don't know why this is enabled, fixed

1. 00:08:916 (11) - consider removing finish here ? A bit overemphasized since it is not as stressed as 00:05:076 (1) - done
2. 00:14:676 (36) - you may change this note to k since the pitch of music is higher than 00:14:196 (35) - hmm sounds good
3. 00:19:716 (65,66) - swapping these notes to dk would fit the snare at 00:19:836 - nicely. nice
4. 02:27:390 (5,6) - consider deleting these notes ? They sound a bit unnecessary imo. done but added a d in 02:31:390 - for consistency with 01:38:057 (11,12,13) -
5. 03:11:947 (87) - maybe move this note to 03:12:054 - and change to d, then add k at 03:12:269 - if you want to follow the vocal ? mine sounds good too imo, i'll keep, also, changed 03:11:412 - to d, it plays better and sounds good too
6. 03:14:090 (98) - d so that the snare at 03:13:876 (97) - could be emphasized. nice
7. 03:16:876 (115) - move to 03:16:662 - and change to d for the beat ? i think the actual kk is fine and i like it so keep >.<
8. 03:21:912 (146) - d would probably sound better here. lol, done
9. 03:46:233 (65) - same as 03:11:947 (87) - same as before >.<
10. 03:50:090 (89,90) - swapping these notes to d k would follow the vocal in a way better. hmm done
11. 04:23:987 (18,19,20) - d k d would be better since the pitch at 04:23:987 (18,20) - is the same. done

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