hutunohito wrote: d4c5s

Hi~from PM
Here's my mod

column 1234567

mod

[7K Normal]
00:12:199 (12199|4) - delete no sounds here drum sound are exist in this note
00:24:730 (24730|6) - change short note good idea, fixed
00:27:579 (27579|6) - move to 1 fixed
00:36:313 (36313|5,36503|2) - move to 55? same pitch piano sounds i prefer like this
00:42:389 (42389|1,42579|4) - too i prefer like this
little confuse with this mods, you don't highlighted note/time instead giving your own note that doesn't exist so it won't be highlight. put only time so it can jumped the right part
00:45:427 (45427|1) - add note? bass sound here only focus piano sound in here
00:53:401 (53401|2) - add note added
01:19:414 (79414|1) - add note piano sound added
01:20:933 (80933|3) - add note piano sound added
01:22:072 (82072|5) - move to 5 moved
01:22:262 (82262|1) - move to 6 no thanks
01:22:262 (82262|1) - move to 7 five stack with some notes is difficult same note highlighted ? i don't understand this so no change
03:21:882 (201882|3) - move end to 03:22:452 (202452|2) - fixed
03:23:401 (203401|5) - move start to 03:23:591 (203591|5) - it was started from here
03:26:439 (206439|0) - move start to 03:26:249 (206249|0) - it's already sounded properly in here

[7K Hard]
00:31:376 (31376|3) - add 4 added
00:55:110 (55110|0) - move to 2 moved
00:57:484 (57484|4) - add note added
01:34:224 (94224|6) - differ from Normal fixed
02:04:984 (124984|6) - change short it's violin sound

[7K Maximum]
01:00:806 (60806|0) - move to 5 i prefer like this
01:12:958 (72958|6) - move to 5 i prefer like this
01:26:629 (86629|3) - move to 01:26:724 (86724|3) - no thanks
01:34:224 (94224|0) - differ from Normal fixed
02:29:287 (149287|0) - add 1 no thanks
02:53:591 (173591|2) - add 3&5 the same notes as Hard no thanks
03:14:098 (194098|6) - add CN i prefer like this
03:29:667 (209667|2) - long till 03:30:237 (210237|0) - fixed

All done!
Good luck~

dosyeru wrote: 3po62

don't you give a kudosu to hutunohito?

richardfeder wrote: 2y5at

mod request via in-game pm. Sorry for my lazinesslateness lol
Hi Reikosaka and dosyeru
8K diffs are amazing >///<

[Reikosaka]
0|1|2|3|4|5|6

7K NM

00:00:996 (996|6,1186|4,1376|0,1566|2,1756|0,1946|3) - 00:02:135 (2135|6,2325|4) - rearrange according to pitch. The pattern you are using now (especially 00:01:376 (1376|0,1566|2,1756|0) - ) is very awkward for piano sound
This is a general suggestion for all piano notes in the beginning. You may not strictly follow pitch since it's simply hard and unnecessary but please at least make notes heading a right direction. If pitch is going up then never make notes heading left, and also make good use of simple stair pattern. They are one of the best pattern (also best pattern for newbie to read lol) to represent piano sound. arranged little bit

00:08:211 - add a note. you map same kind of piano 00:08:211 (8211|0) - 00:05:173 (5173|3,5363|2) - so keep the consistency. Also this is quite audible imo it's doesn't have piano sound

00:11:439 (11439|2) - should be double notes it doesn't needed for intro

00:14:098 (14098|2) - ? I use double note for minor piano key
00:15:617 (15617|0) - ? I use double note for minor piano key
I don't really understand your mapping here. If you want to take guitar sound then take them all. same for 1/1 beat/snare. You can't just randomly pick some of them and then leave the others alone. when I see 00:14:477 - I think you didn't really care about guitar, then I send a considerable amount of time to figure out what is 00:15:617 (15617|0) - this... so please review this part on your own and make your intention clear: no undermap and keep the consistency added note to 00:14:477 - im mainly to piano sound with following some guitar. 00:15:617 (15617|0) - this is are note which following minor piano key

00:20:363 (20363|2) - same idea. delete. You are mapping guitar+piano here and suddenly a note for beat appear... following 1/1 drum

00:24:730 (24730|6) - ? actually it used for cymbal synth, well i think i change to normal note yet

00:48:275 (48275|3) - move left by one column moved

00:49:034 (49034|5) - move to 3 keeping this
wait is this a clap? I hear no piano here. If this is a clap then 00:49:604 (49604|2) - shouldn't be blank. that's for hat sound

00:51:123 (51123|2) - ^ not applied according above

00:55:110 (55110|0) - suggest to delete and map the claps 00:54:920 - and 00:55:110 - . changed LN's to double note, i see that's not balance with other diff. i don't follow clap in this part
Also don't put 00:54:920 (54920|6,54920|4,55300|6,55300|4) - in the same columns. 00:54:920 (54920|4,54920|6) - are very different, they are not piano sound and should distinguish them from moving them to other columns to avoid confusion those sound are same piano, so that's why im added in same place. i removed one note 00:54:920 -

00:57:484 (57484|3) - add a note added

01:05:743 (65743|5,65743|2) - move left by one column they clearly have a lower pitch compare to 01:04:794 (64794|5,64794|2,65173|5,65173|2) - fixed

01:19:414 (79414|4,79604|5) - put them in the same column (repeated piano) fixed

01:38:781 (98781|5,100300|5) - some LNs such as those are obvious 1/1 long instead of 1/2. Please review this part on your own and correct all LN with wrong length im sure this are exact LN's length

01:42:199 (102199|0) - move to 2 why ? this is drum sound

01:42:389 (102389|5) - should be two shorter LNs why two shorter LN's ? i didn't hear any short synth instead long synth. that's why i use long note 01:42:389 (102389|5,102768|0,103148|5,103528|0) -
btw why stop mapping beat here? o.o

01:51:503 - keep the consistency! no reason to stop mapping guitar sound here i think im already mapped guitar sound. see the LN's

01:54:541 (114541|6) - should be two shorter LNs this sound are long synth

01:56:629 (116629|4,118148|1) - ? and where's your guitar ;w; LN's that you highlited are guitar sound
01:59:667 (119667|5,120237|4) - LNs like this are perfectly suitable i think this is guitar sound but 01:56:629 (116629|4,118148|1) - are really confusing...and even more confusing is why you suddenly stop mapping guitar and use these LNs..and this are guitar sound too.

02:00:427 (120427|1) - it's OK to move this note to a column different from 02:00:237 (120237|1,120617|1) - i guess not

02:02:135 (122135|6,122515|1,122705|4,122895|6,123275|1,123465|3) - ? shouldn't be like this? https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1686654 full 1/2 yeah i hear guitar sound (that's low chord) fixed

02:22:832 (142832|0) - move to 2 piano synth are same chord in here

02:30:047 (150047|5) - move to 6 fixed

02:37:832 (157832|4,157832|5,158022|4,158022|5,158211|4,158211|5,158401|4,158401|5) - try this? https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1686660 i prefer like this

02:39:161 (159161|5) - if you want to use LN like this to highlight guitar sound then extend it's length and make it ends at 02:39:730 - short note are enough to highlighted guitar sound
02:40:680 (160680|1) - ^ same like above

03:04:604 (184604|5,184794|5,184794|4,184984|4,184984|5,185173|5,185363|5,185363|4) - don't do this...this looks not very good and is not a friendly pattern for newbie arranged, i hope this easier than before

03:24:161 (204161|4,205680|0) - delete no it was drum sound

7K Hard

00:36:313 (36313|2,36503|0) - move right by two columns same sound as 00:35:553 (35553|2,35743|0) - ?

00:40:110 (40110|4) - delete no it's have triple piano sound

00:49:034 (49034|1) - move to 3 or 4 moved to 4, i think that's good idea too

00:52:072 (52072|1) - what is this? note following hat sound ?
I didn't check this diff in detail since structure seems fine for me. The chart seems to be a little monotone and note placement seems to be a little bit random. You may check the pattern on your own and pick various sounds to make this diff more unique and fun instead of just note for beat/clap/snare and LN for guitar >,< i've lack knowledge about pattern

7K MX

why is this diff so easy? It's like a little harder diff of 7K Hard >///<
still the only suggestion I can give you is try to pick various sounds to make this diff more unique and fun! I can't really find any critical problem now but this diff is a little bit monotone to me. Also pay more attention to relevant pitch and awkward pattern. Test play on your own will be very helpful. Besides I have nothing to say. Good luck! well you right this just little hard according hard, i just make different with minor piano key, i don't want to make it harder anymore like adding LN's

richardfeder wrote: 2y5at

[dosyeru]
sp|1|2|3|4|5|6|7
For all diff: 00:18:654 - I think you can add sp for this kind of sound, especially for hard diff. It would be fun and they don't appear frequently. Your choice lol
[Normal]
02:02:135 (122135|2,122895|2) - move to sp?
I don't like to put these notes at scratch lane here.
[Hyper]
00:30:806 (30806|6) - move to 4
I like to follow PR strictly here.
01:13:148 (73148|3,73338|2) - move to 5 and 3
01:13:338 (73338|5) - moved this to 5
02:19:699 (139699|5) - I don't get this xD
fixed to follow strings
I prefer to put 02:37:832 (157832|1,158022|1,158211|1,158401|1,158591|1) - them in 5. Just my preference though xD
I couldn't take your preference, but changed a little bit.
[Another]
00:18:654 - I think you can add sp for this kind of sound. It would be your choice lol
some notes already follow the sounds you mentioned.
I don't see necessity to change current patterns so I will take this suggestion for next my map. thx
02:58:528 - add note for guitar
02:58:718 - ^
guitar sounds come to the front later, so I like no notes following guitar here

Amazing 8K diffs! \:D/
Good luck and take my star /o/ \o\ ty

Simple_Star wrote: 474q10

Hello Reikosaka Here is Mod~
[7K Normal]
00:02:135 (2135|1) - Maybe here is a little piano sound.But it is not clearly. So i suggest you remove it fixed

00:04:034 - Add a Note at 5.Piano Sound here according to above so, only used note as high keychord in this part

00:04:794 - Add a Note at 2.Piano Sound too~ same

00:05:173 (5173|3) - Can't listen it clearly so suggest you remove it~ no thanks

00:36:123 - Clearly Beat Sound.Recommend you add a Note at 2.Because you catch the sound at 00:34:414 - added

00:36:882 - Add a Note at 5.The same likes ^ added

00:42:199 - Add a Note at 6~.You catch the same sound at 00:42:958 - added

00:45:427 - Add a Note at 5.Here has a the same sound likes00:44:857 - Although the sound is concealed it was focus on piano

01:24:730 - Here Has a Guitar Sound not really sure but added

01:26:819 (86819|1) - Move to 3 or 5. 01:26:060 (86060|1,86060|6) - follow this

01:33:180 - The long sound start/end at here in my opinion i guess not

02:04:034 - Has sound.Add a Note at 1 added

02:24:730 - 02:25:110 - Needn't Double Notes in my opinion it's piano major keys

02:33:275 (153275|1) - Move to 6.Because there are some people are left-hand space it doesn't really hard

02:34:794 (154794|5) - Move to 2 ^ same

02:35:173 (155173|1,155363|5) - And Ctrl+J according your pattern i prefer this

02:38:022 (158022|4,158022|5,158401|4,158401|5) - Can move to 23 .Because it is a little diffcult in Normal moved

03:37:832 (217832|6) - Move to 2 nope

03:41:249 (221249|2) - Move to 5 nope

03:41:439 (221439|6,221534|5,221629|4) - Move to left hand.Last 1/4 all in right hand.A little tired orz prefer like this

03:43:718 (223718|6,223813|5,223908|4) - Move to left hand prefer like this

03:44:098 (224098|0,224098|2) - Move to right hand nope

[7K Hard]
00:04:034 - Here has clearly Piano sound not enough to put as note so leave this

00:04:794 - ^ not enough to put as note so leave this

00:05:173 (5173|3) - Suggest remove likes 7K Normal no thanks

00:36:123 - The same Sound but suddenly only 1 Note orz focusing on piano

00:36:882 - ^Here i suggest you add at 3 focusing on piano

00:42:199 - The same likes^ focusing on piano

00:42:958 - ^ focusing on piano

00:56:060 (56060|4,56439|4) - Move to 3.More intersting to play note pitch

01:27:958 - My suggestion

01:27:958 -How about this? http://puu.sh/9qewl/4e132e4303.jpg nice pattern and followed pitch, fixed

01:49:034 - Needn't double Notes in my opinion CloseHat are enough to make double as the difficult are hard or above. well depending on song ofc

02:01:756 - The same sound likes 02:01:946 - So Suggest you Add a Note at 5 added

02:14:287 - Ah..Why 4 Notes orz removed

02:28:908 - Can delete 1 Note in my opinion deleted

03:23:401 - ~ 03:24:161 - Maybe can use LN Style likes 01:27:958 -It is very fun~ prefer like this

03:26:439 - My suggestion http://puu.sh/9qf3O/1fafd1b9c8.jpg monotone pattern :/

[7K Maximum]
Haven't some problems but↓
Maximum Star≈3 Orz i don't know why
00:08:211 - Has clearly Piano Sound here only follow major keys

00:49:224 - Add a Note.The same sound likes 00:47:705 - prefer like this

01:27:958 - http://puu.sh/9qfJw/b9c80c2aa6.jpg this are followed pitch

03:23:401 - Likes 01:27:958 - But Ctrl+H followed pitch

03:43:908 - I suggest you start 1/4 at here didn't have enough sound for 1/4, so not

Good Luck~

Midge wrote: 2q456j

Nooo reiko pls

LightAN21 wrote: 4r6f4i

Hello !
Sorry for the delay !

Mod for 7K:
columns:
7K: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

7K Normal

00:02:135 - you can add a note for piano's sound. added

00:24:730 (24730|6) - you can move to col 3 - similar sound with 00:24:541 (24541|3) moved

00:43:718 (43718|5) - I think this hitsound appear more obviously at 00:43:908 - you can move to there both piano & clap are sounded there

00:43:528 (43528|0,43718|1) - suggest same column. used same pattern with next part

00:45:427 - add a note(kick.wav) - suggest same column with 00:45:237 (45237|0)
^ for these 2 drum's note, I suggest column 1 or 3 this part based on piano chord (but i can't get the chord x.x)

00:48:275 (48275|2,48465|6) - suggest same column. nope

01:16:376 (76376|3) - you can use long note(1/2 beat long) with same hitsound. added

02:40:680 (160680|1) - you can add hitsound F5 or F6. i tried and its weird to compose piano sound to guitar (acoustic) sound

02:44:477 (164477|6) - suggest using normal note for drum's sound.

03:00:617 (180617|4,180617|6) - suggest using only one note.(col 5)
^ because 03:00:237 (180237|4,180237|6) is more loudly. based on piano chord

7K Hard

00:48:085 (48085|0) - you can move to col 2, and
00:48:275 (48275|2,48275|6) - change hitsound, and
00:48:465 (48465|0,48465|6) - change hitsound i don't want

01:01:376 (61376|1,61566|1) - suggest different column.(different hitsound) fixed

01:29:762 (89762|1) - you can add hit sound: Hat.wav i don't use hat in this part
01:30:522 (90522|2) - ^
01:31:566 (91566|3) - ^

01:47:895 (107895|6,108085|6) - suggest different column.(different hitsound) fixed

02:50:363 (170363|2) - change to normal note or add hitsound CrashCymbal or OPHat. the note produce short synth and it doesn't have cymbal or OPhat

03:03:844 - move a note to col 5 - same sound with 03:03:465 (183465|5,183654|5)
^ and move another note up 1/2 beat - use 2 notes to express this hitsound 03:04:034 (184034|6) will be better. you mentioned something wrong here, fixed

03:05:553 - you can add notes - the rhythm changing. reverb doesn't needed a note

03:20:933 (200933|0) - suggest col 1. already there

03:22:452 (202452|6,202642|6) - suggest different columns(different sounds), and
03:21:882 (201882|6) - extend to the red line. it's sounded like that

03:24:920 (204920|0) - the sound change at 03:25:490
^ - shorten to the red line and add a long note(1/2 beat long) start from 3:25:490

as far i heard its end up 03:25:585 -

7K Maximum

03:14:098 - 03:15:047 I think here should use similar long notes in same columns like 03:17:135 - 03:18:085 fixed

03:24:920 (204920|2) - suggest ending at 03:25:490 this method are same with previous part

03:33:275 - 03:39:351 you can use long notes to express pinao part. This can make this diff more like Hard+. unfortunately i don't use any method to make something different with the real beat. so this suggest can't be applied because the piano itself doesn't have long synth.

I hope my suggestions are helpful to you !

Good luck !

Draftnell wrote: 2ao4y

Hi Reikosaka~

Here my simple modd ^^

7k Normal

00:17:515 - add note in col 6 added
00:45:427 - add 2 note in col 1 & col 6 so i do rearrange
03:10:110 - add note 1 >w< dont want it
03:29:287 (209287|1) - move to col 5the high pitch actually goes to right, but i used reverse pitch in this part (my old style) so i dont want .-.

the rest of the package already good

7k Hard

00:14:667 - add a LN ? why i add hold note for guitar -_-
01:07:262 (67262|6) - move to col 5 moved
01:16:946 - add note 1 added
01:17:705 - ^ added 7th column
01:27:009 (87009|6) - move to col 3 prefer this
01:30:237 (90237|5,90237|0) - CTRL + H keep like this for same reason with above
02:32:705 - add note 1 (for guitar sound) if i put note for guitar at this parts seems will disturb with kick snare sound
02:32:895 - ^ same reason with above
03:03:085 (183085|6) - move to col 5 rapid-note already good

the rest is nice >w<

7k Maximum

00:12:389 (12389|4) - move to col 4 moved, i dont know why i feel its fit
00:23:971 (23971|4) - move to col 5 dont want to move it
01:00:806 (60806|0) - move to col 3 already good i think
03:17:135 (197135|1) - move to col 5 i moved this to 3rd column instead.

Well the rest so good !!!

Nice map Reikosaka
and GL for Ranked ^^

dosyeru wrote: 3po62

i found a LN was misplaced.
here's update
http://puu.sh/ebhc7.osu

V<3

-Kamikaze- wrote: 101r26

Leaving another 2 stars for your lovely work, gogo rank it! <3

Simple_Star wrote: 474q10

Hi there
Yours Filesize of the mapset exceeds 10MB without video.Please reduce.
Yours 7K Maximum have 2 unsnapped.Please fix it.

Simple_Star wrote: 474q10

Bubbled Congratulations

Kuo Kyoka wrote: 225m5w

I think I will take the qualify's part ~

LordRaika wrote: 6u1dy

Yo~ here's my BN Check :

U got some serious issue here.... 1d234y

BG : ✔
Audio : X
Timing : ....
Spread : ✔
Metadata : ✔

Audio : Huge problem on...
kick.wav >>> original file : kick.mp3 fixed
snare2.wav fixed
snaretom.wav fixed
tom.wav fixed
tom1.wav fixed
tom2.wav fixed
tom3.wav fixed
all of those is mp3 with 18 ~ 21ms delay T^T
fix it, since they dont accept delay.... , or let me know if you want me to help fix it for you....
the toms seems doesn't good enough, need your guide here

Timing : some Sv on Maximum and Hard, try to reduce 1.5x usage like here :
00:12:389 - , 00:57:958 - and so on, maybe reduce it to 1.2 or smthg, and ask some other player to see....
if its annoying to be play or not D: , you dont want any SV issue right? XD same here.... thts why i suggest to consider change it or else. for the best thing i have, this SV already calculated, the speed 1.5x just used by 1/2 without any 1/4 note inside. it doesn't make any problem here

Note Check : 8K Another and Hyper... have some serious ghost note... no sound and no hitsound,
not an issue for me, but might be an issue for QAT, be careful, i suggest remove this kind of note, like Maximum that doesnt map it....
00:02:515 - , 00:03:465 -
u can make the previous note LN to fill the emptiness, its recommend dont use note... since its no sound.

Let me know again after that ^
and after KK's Check
GL~

Kuo Kyoka wrote: 225m5w

Cause Raika has posted the check before me, I guess you should rebubble it then ;A; sorry, I was not know is need to rebubble

Kyousuke- wrote: 3g3l58

lol same with raika qualify at Pile - Aishiteru banzai!

since many BN were addded, we have a lot of qualified beatmaps lol

but...

already qualified on forum lol

dosyeru wrote: 3po62

that heart icon on this form is a sweet valentine gift from KK.
thank you, KK. you are the only one who gave me any gift today

oh, emotion icon should be

LordRaika wrote: 6u1dy

Kyousuke- wrote: 3g3l58

lol same with raika qualify at Pile - Aishiteru banzai!

since many BN were addded, we have a lot of qualified beatmaps lol

but...

already qualified on forum lol

NO kyou!!

mine is different... i intentionally post that with Strike code....
but i dont QUALIFY it.... there is no heart at all of pile - aisheru banzai....


KK u shouldnt post QUALIFY/heart if the cap doesnt allow u to do so T^T
even if u edit it... it still count the post bfore u edit it....
so the thread here got a heart orz

Kuo Kyoka wrote: 225m5w

I need to save post before ;A; dont know then, but in midnight I cant use the lap, only can by phone and qualified it ;A; sorry
actually, I was do like that on my first qualified's map, lol

dosyeru wrote: 3po62

that heart icon on this form is a sweet valentine gift from KK.
thank you, KK. you are the only one who gave me any gift today

oh, emotion icon should be

No Problems, and of course, im doesnt have any gift too ;A;

Starry- wrote: 86q3p

can confirm, rip.
Kick.wav more than 5ms delay.
;_;

Reikosaka wrote: 2c2c1t

Starry- wrote: 86q3p

can confirm, rip.
Kick.wav more than 5ms delay.
;_;

time to fix this weird note and & hitsound.

LordRaika wrote: 6u1dy

aaaa this must be because u change the hitsound file D:
after my check and KK didnt check it T^T

Kuo Kyoka wrote: 225m5w

Call me to rebubble after DQ then

you guys never check the map befo.... nvm it

Julie wrote: s501v

What's done is done, most important thing you guys learn from errors :3!! so keep it up!
Mania community need you guys !

Julie wrote: s501v

What's done is done, most important thing you guys learn from errors :3!! so keep it up!
Mania community need you guys !

Harbyter wrote: 432sa

i usually don't check qualified map but this was just a case

LordRaika wrote: 6u1dy

errr i check the hitsound...

fixed and then reiko add new hitsound

then u qualify XD omg i didnt know that....


yea.. whats done is done.... T^T

Kuo Kyoka wrote: 225m5w

maybe after DQ ._. I will rebubble it and Raika will qualified it then, cause I cant requalified it! (Rule ) sorry
Raika pls help me on requalified it, thanks
And Reika, pls post a poster when u has some chanes on the map, thanks ( or notice me )
Harbyter, sorry for me but i seems a little bit sad when have someone check the map after it get qualified, but dont mind at it anymore, it ed

lolcubes wrote: 331p4a

I don't want to be rude or anything, but where is the easy diff? I find this normal too hard. ;_; (I'm new to mania and I can't even follow it)
Looks good though.

Kuo Kyoka wrote: 225m5w

I will rebubble it and Raika will qualified it then, cause I cant requalified it! (Rule ) sorry

Loctav wrote: 5b1v22

Everyone can requalify everything. No one cares. You just risk a payment with your BAT score yet again in case it gets disqualified again - and that is up to you to decide!

-Kamikaze- wrote: 101r26

Julie wrote: s501v

What's done is done, most important thing you guys learn from errors :3!! so keep it up!
Mania community need you guys !

I agree!
Everyone makes errors, it's essential to not get upset about them and learn from them ^^

Kuo Kyoka wrote: 225m5w

- Remake the Normal's diff for make it below then 2 stars [for easier then]

lolcubes wrote: 331p4a

Kuo Kyoka wrote: 225m5w

- Remake the Normal's diff for make it below then 2 stars [for easier then]

Well, the diff is well made, although too hard, I think remaking it would be a waste.
I'd rather see an easier diff made which is more simple, but that means more work.

Just saying.

ExPew wrote: 3w1g2

[all 8K]
your special column used too many instrument mixed(such clap/piano/kick/snare), does it fit well?
-becuz bms/iidx usually used cymbal/crash for special column.( you can deny this, i just curious about this )

an example

voice, SFX, and cymbal are assigned to scratch.
is this song too old to you guys btw??

dosyeru wrote: 3po62

an example

voice, SFX, and cymbal are assigned to scratch.
is this song too old to you guys btw??

-Kamikaze- wrote: 101r26

Yeah, S column isn't only for crash/cymbals and we're free to map it as we see it fit.
This isn't related to DQ anyway

dosyeru wrote: 3po62

ExPew wrote: 3w1g2

[all 8K]
your special column used too many instrument mixed(such clap/piano/kick/snare), does it fit well?
-becuz bms/iidx usually used cymbal/crash for special column.( you can deny this, i just curious about this )

let me give you my answer to your 2nd question about the use of scratch in BMS/IIDX first.
In IIDX, scratch notes are used for not only cymbal/crash, but also, for examples, voice sounds or even bass drums as well.

an example

voice, SFX, and cymbal are assigned to scratch.
is this song too old to you guys btw??

so i believe there is no problems to use scratch notes for many instrument through the chart.

From what i read, your first question was asking about playability and mapability. right??
I also believe those scratch notes are not so mean to hit for each level of players, and most of those notes follow quite hearable sounds.
One thing that could be a concern is scratch notes which follows snare drums at every 2nd and 4th beats.
that style is often seen in Insane BMS, and as far as i , there is no IIDX chart used that style.
As i said, however, those notes are not hard to play, so I'd say, scratch notes in this map is not a problem to cause DQ.

ExPew wrote: 3w1g2

-Kamikaze- wrote: 101r26

Yeah, S column isn't only for crash/cymbals and we're free to map it as we see it fit.
This isn't related to DQ anyway

i dont point to unrank stuff you know? im just asking

those red i point must fix, others is optiona

ExPew wrote: 3w1g2

Reason for Disqualification

kick.wav ( 5ms+ late )
fixed


[7K Normal]

star difficult on Normal has reached more than 2.00 (UNRANKABLE) reduced

[7K Hard/Maximum]

SV change quite terrible pn HD and MX such as:

00:12:389 - inconsistent sv change on music i like this
00:55:110 - ^ removed

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00:27:958 - try constant your sv change previously at 00:24:920 -
00:30:616 - ^ remove i think this is good

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00:43:148 - use x1.0 this part prefer like this

00:55:680 - try constant your sv change previously at 00:55:300 -
00:56:059 - ^ remove
00:56:439 - ^ remove
00:56:819 - ^ remove i didn't make it constant, but i remove the SV so it's only one speed change in this part

00:57:958 - this is bad sv changes using x1.5 does not fit on music

01:24:161 - remove this svfixed
01:25:680 - this not breakcore/speedcore you mapped in, remove it. actually the beat feels like stacked, but also can't be played well too. so i remove it
01:25:727 - remove removed

02:03:654 - remove, i prefer use 0.8 until new measure line same
02:04:224 - ^ remove same
02:04:793 - ^ remove i prefer this

03:05:553 - remove i like this
03:21:123 - ^ lol, not funny. fixed


[all 8K]

your special column used too many instrument mixed(such clap/piano/kick/snare), does it fit well?
-becuz bms/iidx usually used cymbal/crash for special column.( you can deny this, i just curious about this )

Julie wrote: s501v

Zzz I'm stress night before exam, so felt like checking =w=

Hmm might be unrankable issue?

02:02:705 - 1/12 piano timing orz...
02:03:465 - ^

there's not 1/12 note placed

For all level

02:58:908 - forgot keysound, should be "violon 3" no? O.O
In your Normal, you put LN for violon, so you probably heard some violon there as well no? XD removed the not

Hmm ok instead of people just complaining Normal being to hard and saying remap, let's help (mine might not help orz). Hope it help for better quality after re-rank!

Normal

You do want your whole diff to be easier then Hard of course, but also some part easier then Hard xD

01:37:832 - 01:48:085 - maybe this part hard for beginner? stack one hand and need to focus LN on the other hands, mostly then you see triple stack 01:42:009 (102009|0,102199|0,102389|0) , which make it even more confusing for beginner since it wasn't same ryhthmn, and they might just keep staring at those LN~ fixed

02:02:325 (122325|3) - 02:03:085 (123085|3) - You didn't add it in hard, why add it in Normal? This sound is not as much important for normal, this part should be more relax then before 02:02:135 , try 1/2

02:06:503 (126503|3) - delete since you didn't add it in Hard deleted

Would love if you keep your violon keysound (like you did on Hard) on the slider example : 02:08:591 (128591|2,128591|4) , if player don't miss slider can still hear the good hitsound you mapped for~ Since I'm pretty sure those slider wasn't for drum www too lazy to change xD, you're right

02:11:629 (131629|5,131629|2,132009|5,132009|2,132579|5,132579|2) - why same column x.x!! and mostly lots of right side in this part hard fo beginner, but anyway the thing is why same colum, drum and piano same column? XD i think not
02:28:528 (148528|5) - delete, only one note in Hard here deleted

02:34:034 (154034|6,154319|6,154604|6,154794|5,154794|3) - all in the same hands, this part might cause trouble for beginner, mostly this 02:34:319 (154319|6) stacked on blue line changing the rhythmn of it, might want to put it in the left side if you want to keep this note i think not

03:00:237 (180237|6,180237|4,180617|4,180617|6,181186|4,181186|6) - this piano 03:01:186 (181186|6,181186|4) stack same column as drum O.O + you didn't add anything in Hard xD well, different is good :/

03:03:085 (183085|1,183275|1,183654|1,183844|1,184224|0,184414|0) - those stack for left hands, probably not suggested, also the rhythmn nearly as same as Hard. that's not really hard i guess

03:04:794 (184794|1,184794|0,184984|0,184984|1,185363|1,185363|0) - this part is a bit harder then the Hard level lool lol xD

03:16:566 (196566|2,196756|6,196756|3,196946|1,197135|0,197135|4,197230|5,197325|6) - this part, probably the trickiest part in your Normal, and the rhythmn might also be more hard then Hard. Hard only have one LN hold that might be hard and one LN, but Normal have a bunch of LN on one hands + triple (like Hard) on the other hands. i think that's not hard

Ok I gotta go sleep + exam~ will edit later~ XD

Harbyter wrote: 432sa

hi reika :v



00:57:484 - did you forgot this note on the 7K maximum ?You put a note here in the 7k hard


01:26:629 (86629|3) - following your rhytm i think this note should be here 01:26:724 - always on the 7k maximum

or are intentional?


but the hitsound Kick is like this

ExUsagi wrote: 3p472q

Reserved.. :^)

1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7 / 8

these mods below not based of 'any style' for quality sake, i only follow how the music & the rhythm works

[D's Normal]
00:05:173 (5173|1,5363|5) - feels weird because the pitch kinda down.. flip to 6 2 will works better
00:06:692 (6692|5,6882|7) - same case above, 8 6 will works better
piano sounds in music definitely go up, but hit-sounds somehow go down.
I leave this to reikosaka since this is his own map-set. If he follows hit-sounds, I will flip those notes.
03:20:363 (200363|3) - to 3 will more accurate i guess?
moved to 5
03:44:857 - add 1 more note? better rhythm imo
hmm,... no change

[D's Hyper]
00:04:984 (4984|1,5363|5) - same case on NM, feel weird because the pitch goes down.. switch to 6 2 will works
00:06:692 (6692|1,6882|3) - ^ 4 2
i need to talk to rei
00:30:427 (30427|6) - to 3 would be more accurate
no change
01:31:186 (91186|0) - no hit hat, but you put hit hat here, considering as ghost notes, you could turn 01:30:996 (90996|0) - into LN on another column, OR follow the 1/4 synth
removed hit-sounds

[D's Another]
00:05:173 (5173|1,5363|3) -
00:06:692 (6692|1,6882|5) - i guess you know, switch those column placement for more accurate pr
same as other diffs
02:05:458 (125458|3,125458|5) - 02:07:547 (127547|5,127547|3) - 02:08:496 (128496|4,128496|2) - optional..
i can't be the only one here who thinks this is a real ghost notes..
02:17:610 (137610|4) - same case above i guess.. layering 1 single long sound with 1/4 kinda.. ==a
it's not like i don't like the 1/4 part, it plays nicely, but in my honest opinion, i prefer the 1/2 beat 'as it is'... so consider to layer the real sound as you always did... :3
I guess those hit-sounds would be misplaced.
to be honest, rei added hit-sounds into my diffs instead of me, so i dont know how he did.

for the 8K, i personally looooooveeeeee the spreads.. overall it has enjoyable rhythm..

for 7K, i will delay first as reika's favor.. :3

ExUsagi wrote: 3p472q

7K check

im sorry though, i will going abit harsh because im not satisfied with current PR patterning, and some keysounding placement, though it's minor but really important... this could be affect my discreet on 8K spread too..

[7K Normal]
00:00:617 (617|1) - until 00:11:060 (11060|1) - , if i could be honest, the current notes placement 'based of piano pitch' is really random.. if you really want to make reversed pr, make everything reversed, but i saw you put the pitch not in order at all.. i highly recommend you to put the note placement based of piano pitch.. fixed, that's weird for piano things

00:12:579 (12579|6,12958|2,13148|4) - these LNs should uses violin*.wav keysound, because these ln is what its represent for, re-arrange all hitsound 'as its supposed to layered at'.. i don't know but even it's only about keysound placement, this is just simply wrong in my view.. sorry seriously im lazy to fix this keysound placement, and this is not even serious issue (still rankable)

for hint, try : View > Show Sample Names, you can easier see which keysound you should move..


this one is the current hitsound placement


try to fix everything like this..

00:18:085 (18085|0,18085|3) - ^

01:24:541 (84541|0,84920|5,85110|0) - what is this notes layered for? ==a guitar desuu

01:37:832 (97832|0,98022|3,98211|0) - flipped with 01:43:908 (103908|6,104098|3,104287|6) - '-')a erm, i guess this one is fine.. ==a but i feel its weird to play something reversed after 4 beat (64:0 > 68:0).. it just my personal opinion as player i have opinion in this map that shouldn't do proper pitch in every part :/

continue later.. and i guess you got the hint of the keysound placement fix on other diffs too..

ExUsagi wrote: 3p472q

"seriously im lazy to fix this keysound placement, and this is not even serious issue (still rankable)"
for now, ask QAT, or maybe another BN to re-rank this...this kind of respond is really pisses me off..

im just trying to help to rank your map here.. ==a

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote: 4b5b1n

"seriously im lazy to fix this keysound placement, and this is not even serious issue (still rankable)"
i don't want to instantiate another drama but as a keysounder, i'm kinda offended by this.
just saying