wuzzat wrote: 44101w

Can I do a M4M? will do it as soon as possible

for sure

I don't know if my mod helps,but i'll do my best

[General]
placing a spinner at 01:52:255 seems more convenient imo.a circle with a finish hitsound like yours is okay too.
This timing 01:15:684,can applied with 3/4 metronome.but i guess not LOL
and the metronome ticks here 01:36:255 doesn't seem right,you can add a new timing here 01:36:255 with 210 BPM and 4/4 metronome.

[Insane]
OD 8,5 with many streams here is pretty hard,suggesting to use OD 8 or 7
01:00:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a stream here doesn't fit the map imo,try to map this part like 00:51:695 (11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) instead ?

[Hard]
00:36:129 (2,4) - This pattern is good enough,but can you make their spacing similar like 00:35:701 (1,3) ? seems like a big jump now
00:44:272 (7) - stack this note with (6)'s tail?
01:04:546 (4) - place where 01:03:118 (3) starts?

And Normal diff seems fine to me.
feel free to skip the mod if you think you don't need some
Overall this mapset is great ^^ so much epic with the massive bell hitsound at 01:15:684 makes the map more live.
nothing much to say,good luck sieg.

It's okay to mod my map just 1 diff >~< b

wuzzat wrote: 44101w

I don't know if my mod helps,but i'll do my best

[General]
placing a spinner at 01:52:255 seems more convenient imo.a circle with a finish hitsound like yours is okay too.
but this is the very end, circle is fine also, yes

This timing 01:15:684,can applied with 3/4 metronome.but i guess not LOL
yeah, but this is 6/4 (:

and the metronome ticks here 01:36:255 doesn't seem right,you can add a new timing here 01:36:255 with 210 BPM and 4/4 metronome.
seems legit

[Insane]
OD 8,5 with many streams here is pretty hard,suggesting to use OD 8 or 7
i guess, back 8 can work

01:00:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a stream here doesn't fit the map imo,try to map this part like 00:51:695 (11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) instead ?
uh, i'll get more opinions on this before changing

[Hard]
00:36:129 (2,4) - This pattern is good enough,but can you make their spacing similar like 00:35:701 (1,3) ? seems like a big jump now
spacing a bit reduced but i think suck round flow patterns are not so hard

00:44:272 (7) - stack this note with (6)'s tail?
it's better for 1\4 to not

01:04:546 (4) - place where 01:03:118 (3) starts?
yep

And Normal diff seems fine to me.
feel free to skip the mod if you think you don't need some
Overall this mapset is great ^^ so much epic with the massive bell hitsound at 01:15:684 makes the map more live.
nothing much to say,good luck sieg.

It's okay to mod my map just 1 diff >~< b

thanks (:

m4m
General:
Я точно не помню насчёт стар рейтинга, но по-моему нужен изи с < 1.5
Мп3 с обрезанным концом и в конце затухание. Думаю там можно звук убавлять на объектах и получится отлично с: ( http://puu.sh/ajcSR/916beb1f9e.mp3 )

Normal - Perfect. (По крайней мере я не нашёл изъянов, только тут немного флоу не понравился 00:38:272 (1,2,1,2,3) - Мог бы закруглить побольше флоу, чтобы играть так, как шло ранее.
Но это мои придирки.
Hard
Insane
Testplay (Фк с 1 раза, поэтому все паттерны читаемы, за исключением некоторых стримов) Mod
На этом мой скромный мод закончился. Извини за размер мода, но всё очень хорошо сделано!
Удачи в ранке!!!

PeaseMaker wrote: 3q7256

m4m
General:
Я точно не помню насчёт стар рейтинга, но по-моему нужен изи с < 1.5
c < 2

Мп3 с обрезанным концом и в конце затухание. Думаю там можно звук убавлять на объектах и получится отлично с: ( http://puu.sh/ajcSR/916beb1f9e.mp3 )
меня текущий устраивает, но спасибо за старания (:

Normal - Perfect. (По крайней мере я не нашёл изъянов, только тут немного флоу не понравился 00:38:272 (1,2,1,2,3) - Мог бы закруглить побольше флоу, чтобы играть так, как шло ранее.
Но это мои придирки.
попробую

Hard

SPOILER

00:02:843 (2,3) - Звучит лучше имхо
может быть, но для консистенси лучше оставить как есть

00:50:981 - Этот и 00:51:267 этот тик не имеют звуков, может на круги заменить как нибудь?
ну как же, там "заканчивается" скрипка

01:10:543 (1,2,3,4) - Почему бы не сделать 2 одинаковых паттерна? ( 01:12:257 (1,2,3,4,5) )
да, точно

01:15:397 (5,6,7) - Попробуй заменить на 1\1 слайдер, звучит лучше
уху
Больше не вижу ничего. Сделано отлично.

Insane
Testplay (Фк с 1 раза, поэтому все паттерны читаемы, за исключением некоторых стримов)

SPOILER

Mod

SPOILER

00:02:569 (1,2) - Немного растерялся, когда понял, что там пауза перед стримом, может подогнать под спейсинг, чтобы легче читалось?
побольше, да

00:17:986 (5,6,7,8) - Не услышал ритма.
00:16:536 (6,7,8,9,10) - Довольно неожиданный стрим
00:23:129 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Разве в музыке есть ритм под стримы?
00:29:986 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ (overmapping)
есть немного овермапа, но вообще эти части отлично должны заходить под стримы

00:50:410 (1) - Я бы перетащил бы её на стак с тройкой 00:50:695 (2,3,4)
мне бльше по центру нравится

01:33:112 (4,5,6) - Не знаю как, но тут я выбил все сотки.

На этом мой скромный мод закончился. Извини за размер мода, но всё очень хорошо сделано!
Удачи в ранке!!!

спасибо (:

Hi, from my queue.




If you have any complaints, questions, comments, etc. or found any errors in my work, ✉ in-game or on the osu website!
Good luck to you for ranking this Sieg!

AllStar12 wrote: 2z5x33

Hi, from my queue.

• 
  

  1g1z4l

  Insane

1. 00:05:540 (3) - Intentionally left out a Finish on the slider's head? There is a cymbal sound there
2. 00:06:350 (4) - ^
   yeah because it's kind of more consistent to 00:04:213 (1,2) -
3. 00:23:415 (9) - Whistle for that distinctive sound similar to 00:23:129 (5) - ?
4. 00:30:272 (9) - ^
5. 00:37:129 (9) - ^
   yep
6. 00:21:558 (6,8) - Have these two swap places? Personally like this kind of flow path then zig zag but you can ignore this suggestion if you want
   some kind of variations is a must
7. 00:25:415 (1) - Not really blanketed and stacked at the end as well so if you want, I provided you the code down below:
   
   Picture and Code

   
   

   205,295,25415,6,0,P|129:287|98:218,1,160,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   thanks
8. 00:55:122 (7) - Not really stacked where circle note 2 is which is x: 179 y: 316
   but not really noticeable already on play
9. 01:16:398 (2) - Not stacked completely with the slider's head or was it intentional?
   nope
10. 01:12:971 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - How about having this part doing crosses like this? Feel bit more fitting like this:
    
    Example

    
    nice but too complicated compared with rest of patterns
11. 01:41:398 (5) - Flows better if you Ctrl+ G this. This will lead into the stream more smoothly than before.
    ok
12. 01:43:112 (5,6,7,8) - Consider finding a better mini jump here?
    not really sure
13. 01:46:540 (5,6,7,8,1) - Wasn't really forming a perfect pentagon so fixed it up and also blanketed slider 1 with circle note 6 for you. Circle note five is still has the same spot as the original.
    
    Picture and Code

    
    

    143,141,106541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    191,261,106683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    81,192,106826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    210,183,106969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    112,267,107112,6,0,P|166:337|253:312,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    kind of, thanks

• 
  

  1g1z4l

  Hard

1. 00:03:391 (4) - Missing Finish here? There is a cymbal sound here and you also added Finish here in your Insane Difficulty.
   oh
2. 00:05:540 (3) - Intentionally left out a Finish on the slider's head? There is a cymbal sound there
3. 00:06:350 (4) - ^
   same as on insane
4. 00:10:611 (1) - Blanket a bit better here?
5. 00:13:490 (1) - ^
   yes
6. 00:19:272 (3) - Re-position this to x: 344 y: 287 so the previous distance snap will be 1.60x and your next distance snap will be 1.10x which is the common distance snap you're using yes? or is it 1.20x since you also use that commonly later on
   imo, not really a big deal
7. 01:18:541 (5) - Blanket this bit better?

yes

• 
  

  1g1z4l

  Normal

1. 00:05:540 (1) - Intentionally left out a Finish on the slider's head? There is a cymbal sound there
2. 00:06:350 (2) - ^
   as for insane
3. 00:17:558 (1) - Remove NC
   oh my
4. 00:18:558 (1) - Consider trying out this kind of flow path, I can say it's much smoother.
   
   Picture and Code

   
   

   218,309,18558,6,0,P|249:246|221:157,1,150,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   like current way more
5. 00:21:986 (1) - The distance snap between this slider and the previous is 1.33x so I fixed it up along with blanketing so here how it looks like and the code:
   
   Picture and Code

   
   

   498,270,21986,6,0,P|442:339|369:350,2,150,2|2|2,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   uh, how did i missed that, thanks
6. 00:53:408 (3) - Blanket this a bit better?
   yes
7. 01:29:398 (5) - Missing a Finish here?
   yep
8. 01:43:683 (1) - Distance snap here to slider 2 is 1.15x so I fixed it up for you along with blanketing it. Here's the code:
   
   Picture and Code

   
   

   446,80,103683,6,0,P|472:165|439:233,2,150,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

many thanks
If you have any complaints, questions, comments, etc. or found any errors in my work, ✉ in-game or on the osu website!
Good luck to you for ranking this Sieg!

thanks AllStar12, great mod (:

Let's do this!

[General]
I enjoy Final Fantasy very very much.
Everything seems to be ok except the combo colours. Add some more for variety :3

[Normal]
What up with the weird CS :/
OD +1
00:20:272 (1) - Looks a bit ugly, space the red points more.
00:30:272 (3,2) - Stack properly.
01:20:255 (2) - Make this point a little bit more to the right. Flows better.
01:41:969 (1) - Same level of ugliness as the other slider.

[Hard]
AR -1
OD -1
00:20:272 (1) - Whyyyyy
00:27:129 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved a little bit. Just move (2) a tad bit to the right.
Nicely done!

[Insane]
00:23:129 (5,2) - Stack properly.
00:25:844 (2,5) - Stack properly.
00:27:844 (3,7) - ^
00:39:915 (9,11) - ^
00:43:272 (4,6) - ^!!!
01:26:684 (3,6) - ^
01:44:398 (3,5) - ^ Jesus Christ man!


I like it. Good luck!
GRIDSNAP FOREVER!

Kaguya Hourain wrote: 522m2e

Let's do this!

[General]
I enjoy Final Fantasy very very much.
Everything seems to be ok except the combo colours. Add some more for variety :3
uh.. i'll think about this

[Normal]
What up with the weird CS :/
OD +1
3 if fine for easiest diff, considering rhythm
00:20:272 (1) - Looks a bit ugly, space the red points more.
eh..
00:30:272 (3,2) - Stack properly.
sure
01:20:255 (2) - Make this point a little bit more to the right. Flows better.
ok
01:41:969 (1) - Same level of ugliness as the other slider.
;_;

[Hard]
AR -1
OD -1
00:20:272 (1) - Whyyyyy
lol, i like them
00:27:129 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved a little bit. Just move (2) a tad bit to the right.
yep
Nicely done!

[Insane]
00:23:129 (5,2) - Stack properly.
00:25:844 (2,5) - Stack properly.
00:27:844 (3,7) - ^
00:39:915 (9,11) - ^
00:43:272 (4,6) - ^!!!
01:26:684 (3,6) - ^
01:44:398 (3,5) - ^ Jesus Christ man!
all done

I like it. Good luck!
GRIDSNAP FOREVER!

thanks!

Hello Sieg, you requested in my queue. so I'll try my best

There is particularly a reason why I do not accept any mapper that has at least one ranked map, but nevermind that for now.

[Normal]

00:19:272 (2,1) - The part where there are two anchors make the slider look a bit ugly. You can keep it, but I suggest to space the two red anchors.

00:45:701 (3) - It's blanket over the previous seems a bit off.

00:56:835 (1) - The slider could be ctrl+j and be placed at the same spot as I see the movement of the cursor being somewhat "better" when moving into 00:57:978 (2) -

[Hard]
Suggestion of AR7 or 7.5

00:05:540 (3,4) - Probably a (this might be just me) jump from the previous beat such as this might be too big even for a hard. You could just have slider 3 start from the bottom instead, at [384,328]

00:34:844 (4) - What about this trying to be parallel to 00:34:415 (2) - ?

00:36:129 (2) - You might want to space this a bit away from one because from the editor it looks like the gape between slider 1 and 00:36:415 (3) - is larger than the gap between circle 3 and slider 2.

01:10:543 (1) - Suggestion to have it look like this
Reason? Flow of the cursor seems better if it heads staight into the next slider without having to turn or anything.

01:14:826 (3) - Move it by just a bit away from 01:13:970 (1) - (I just considered this overlap?)

01:25:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move this thing down so that slider 2 can be stacked under 01:25:398 (5) -

01:37:755 (4) - Sounds kind of weird if you start at that blue tick.

[Insane]
That star rating makes me feel like there is too much a jump in difficulty here.

00:28:272 (5,6,7,8) - Not sure, but this isn't a perfectly nice-looking square.

00:48:129 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - There should be a new combo in here somewhere

01:07:545 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why would this be a stream and 01:09:258 (2,3,4,5) - not a stream, because in my ears the song sounds almost exactly the same here.

01:18:541 (7) - Blanket it under the previous slider well, not around 01:17:112 (5) - (How did I even.)

01:50:969 (2) - Move it to [320,128]. You might think I'm saying "because it has a minor overlap with 01:50:398 (8) - ". Well you can say that.

[END OF MOD]
...Some of the hitsounds sound quite off from the song, or is that just me?

N1ghtRabb1T wrote: 71h3j

Hello Sieg, you requested in my queue. so I'll try my best

There is particularly a reason why I do not accept any mapper that has at least one ranked map, but nevermind that for now.

[Normal]

00:19:272 (2,1) - The part where there are two anchors make the slider look a bit ugly. You can keep it, but I suggest to space the two red anchors.
i prefer to keep
00:45:701 (3) - It's blanket over the previous seems a bit off.
not actually a blanket, but anyway.. moved a bit
00:56:835 (1) - The slider could be ctrl+j and be placed at the same spot as I see the movement of the cursor being somewhat "better" when moving into 00:57:978 (2) -
makes sense

[Hard]
Suggestion of AR7 or 7.5
prefer to keep 8
00:05:540 (3,4) - Probably a (this might be just me) jump from the previous beat such as this might be too big even for a hard. You could just have slider 3 start from the bottom instead, at [384,328]
actually this is 2/1 to play, so i don't even see a reason to treat this as a jump
00:34:844 (4) - What about this trying to be parallel to 00:34:415 (2) - ?
nope
00:36:129 (2) - You might want to space this a bit away from one because from the editor it looks like the gape between slider 1 and 00:36:415 (3) - is larger than the gap between circle 3 and slider 2.
sure
01:10:543 (1) - Suggestion to have it look like this

Reason? Flow of the cursor seems better if it heads staight into the next slider without having to turn or anything.
nice variant but i prefer current way
01:14:826 (3) - Move it by just a bit away from 01:13:970 (1) - (I just considered this overlap?)
yep
01:25:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move this thing down so that slider 2 can be stacked under 01:25:398 (5) -
current placement is fine, its not really noticable
01:37:755 (4) - Sounds kind of weird if you start at that blue tick.
good catch

[Insane]
That star rating makes me feel like there is too much a jump in difficulty here.
not at all (:
00:28:272 (5,6,7,8) - Not sure, but this isn't a perfectly nice-looking square.
guess it was not supposed to be, moved
00:48:129 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - There should be a new combo in here somewhere
not really
01:07:545 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why would this be a stream and 01:09:258 (2,3,4,5) - not a stream, because in my ears the song sounds almost exactly the same here.
because it's not, consistent with 00:57:264 (2) -
01:18:541 (7) - Blanket it under the previous slider well, not around 01:17:112 (5) - (How did I even.)
lol, whatever, not noticeable on play
01:50:969 (2) - Move it to [320,128]. You might think I'm saying "because it has a minor overlap with 01:50:398 (8) - ". Well you can say that.
k

[END OF MOD]
...Some of the hitsounds sound quite off from the song, or is that just me?
just you maybe or your sound settings, no one mentioned before -_-'

thanks N1ghtRabb1T

Это медленникчемныйый я тут!
[Insane]
00:25:129 (7,8) - попробуй двинуть как-то так (играться будет приятнее и веселее) :
00:31:701 (5,6,7,8) - я не знаю может это я конечно такое днище, но на этом бпм они играются через жопу, попробуй подумать над ними, может поменять где-то
00:49:982 (15) - не знаю почему, но мне кажется что стоит поставить нк тут
01:11:828 (5,6) - вообще если говорить про флоу то тут их надо поменять местами, но оно не очень хорошо оверлапит со слайдером так что не знаю
01:16:398 (2,3) - я пока такого стака еще у тебя не замечал o:, это специально или ты поправишь?
01:43:112 (5,6,7,8) - не нравится как выглядит да и если говорить про направление слайдера то паттерн должен развиваться несколько иначе, можно сделать что-то такое:

Мне нравится, только мне кажется что раз под конец надо увеличить спейсинги на джампах, в последнем киае, музыка располагает к этому

[Hard]
00:36:558 (4) - я бы кнтрл джи сделал
01:14:541 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - мне не очень нравится что он как-то резко заканчивается, но это придирка и мне все равно нечего предложить

Нормал впорядке

EvilElvis wrote: ke6g

Это медленникчемныйый я тут!
[Insane]
00:25:129 (7,8) - попробуй двинуть как-то так (играться будет приятнее и веселее) :

SPOILER

действительно
00:31:701 (5,6,7,8) - я не знаю может это я конечно такое днище, но на этом бпм они играются через жопу, попробуй подумать над ними, может поменять где-то
хмхм, подумаю
00:49:982 (15) - не знаю почему, но мне кажется что стоит поставить нк тут
еслиб он был не паттерне, а где-нибудь в центре или еще где, неохота вобщем
01:11:828 (5,6) - вообще если говорить про флоу то тут их надо поменять местами, но оно не очень хорошо оверлапит со слайдером так что не знаю
что-нибудь придумаю
01:16:398 (2,3) - я пока такого стака еще у тебя не замечал o:, это специально или ты поправишь?
блять, да я же правил это, вот точно помню
01:43:112 (5,6,7,8) - не нравится как выглядит да и если говорить про направление слайдера то паттерн должен развиваться несколько иначе, можно сделать что-то такое:

SPOILER

здорово

Мне нравится, только мне кажется что раз под конец надо увеличить спейсинги на джампах, в последнем киае, музыка располагает к этому

[Hard]
00:36:558 (4) - я бы кнтрл джи сделал
интересно получается
01:14:541 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - мне не очень нравится что он как-то резко заканчивается, но это придирка и мне все равно нечего предложить
-_-'

Нормал впорядке

спасибо за мод (:

Chyo-Kun wrote: 2p552

       General 494n6x

1. You are using an MP3 with a very long silent part. I suggest cutting it to reduce the size of the map and there's not a reason to not do it.
   actually it's a fade-out, best way i can do
    
2. I don't really think that "Violin" is a necessary tag, you already put "Instrumental" which is enough.
   it is, very useful
    
3. In my opinion you should add at least another combo colour. It's quite repetitive to have only two colours throughout the entire map (It's just an opinion!)
   uh... I'll consider
    
   
   

   Normal 6g3l6m

    
    
4. 01:31:826 (1) - This slider is technically unrankable. When you complete a spinner,usually you get 1000,2000 or more points for spinning fast, right? Well, those numbers are directly under this slider, making it a little confusing for the player to read it. I suggest replacing it where it's not overlapping with those score numbers.
   actually numbers appears under slider -_-'
      
   Nothing else in this diff. Well mapped.
      
      
   

   Hard 575l21

      
      
5. 00:10:611 (1) - Much like to the normal,this slider is overlapped with the "Clear" pop-up after the spinner, and just like the normal, this is technically unrankable.
   screenshot would be nice, cus I don't really see a problem
      
6. 00:11:571 (4) - If I am not wrong, this slider end is silent. According to the ranking criteria, a slider end can be silent only if it makes sense to have it that way. In this case I think a beat instead of the slider is way better. Your own choice on this, but I would highly suggest changing this. If I missed other sliders like this one, consider changing them aswell, because there is no reason to use a beat instead..
   it's not, there is soft hitnormal, whistlelike sound
      
      
   

   Insane 4w3z3d

      
     
7. 00:31:701 (5,6,7,8) - I don't really like how the beats overlap in this pattern, it's differend from any other jump in the diff. I suggest doing something like 01:05:688 (1,2,3,4) - this. 
   I'll consider on changing this but seems ok for me (:
   
   I really liked this insane, well done. I'll look at it again maybe, to point out stuff I didn't mention in this mod. Good luck!

Thank you Chyo-Kun

The only thing I can say to do in this mapset is... to make an easier difficulty than the Normal. Like really... I think you should make an easy with 0.60SV because Normal is a Hard diff IMO. o_o And just make those two notes 00:46:772 (10,12) - stacked properly in the Insane difficulty because they are doing it ulgy.

I don't think I can help you in any way, your diffs are too pwofesheonel. Sorry! :<

Krfawy wrote: 155a6k

The only thing I can say to do in this mapset is... to make an easier difficulty than the Normal. Like really... I think you should make an easy with 0.60SV because Normal is a Hard diff IMO. o_o And just make those two notes 00:46:772 (10,12) - stacked properly in the Insane difficulty because they are doing it ulgy.

I don't think I can help you in any way, your diffs are too pwofesheonel. Sorry! :<

thanks Krfawy
I know about easy but rhythm is kinda too leaping for a good easy and bpm is relatively high. Also i did receive several testplays\opinions from beginner players and I guess current way of things is fine.

чтобы те, кто предлагают изменить mp3, успокоились, попроси их ретаймнуть, потому что после правок, даже после смены битрейта, любой тайминг плывёт

да... и это тоже, спасибо за напоминание Тик

Well. I don't know what to think of this mapset. Of course, the Insane is perfect and really fun to play! The Hard is also quite good. I don't really like the Normal, for reasons stated above. What is really worrysome is the diff spread though, I don't think it is rankable like it currently is.
Good luck I hope this helped you a little bit.

Thanks Desperate-kun (:

The Difficulty Gap is supposed to allow players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. So what kind of players did I miss? Gap is pretty equal between Insane->Hard and Hard->Normal, yes it's big but what would you expect for 210 bpm song.
Other things are changed.

I don't like some of your rhythm choices. For example 00:12:530 (2) - I know you choose this rhythm because it follows the strings, but 00:12:530 is only a build-up to 00:12:668

yes but i don't use 1\2 on this diff and variable timing is really prevents any repeat sliders like in 00:21:986 (1) -

wth

Sieg wrote: 6nb42

wth

Requested by Forum PM. Nice song but what the hell happened to the Set o3o Modded the version ed as a duplicate






The Spread needs some more work. However, the difficulties themselves look pretty polished. This is going to turn out as very nice set once that problem is solved. Good luck! :p

Not mentioned fixed

Mao wrote: d2n2w

[*]The Spinner at 00:08:008 (1) - seems to be snapped to the previous timing section but doesn't the finish land on the new one since the sound is there?
nope, its' not. spinner snapped properly (:

Normal

1. Rhythm like 00:12:530 (2) - for instance feel very weird since the white tick at 00:12:668 - is the important note here instead of 00:12:530 - but is completely ignored. I mean you even skip a timing section with that although the beat there changes the music in of speed. Also later in the Map (in the Kiais) you actually start mapping this important note (e.g. 00:20:272 (1) - , 01:45:398 (1) - ) which feels inconsistent. So therefore please change it for the ones ignoring this beat by just simply repeating the first 3/2 Slider + adding an object 1/1 later.
   well, kind of... tricky
   if i replace all the 00:11:845 (1,2) - in start and kiai with repeat and object\slider after it will be just repeatslider-slider-repeatslider-slider-repeatslider-slider-etc or repeatslider-2circle-repeatslider-slider-repeatslider-2circle-etc rhythm for a 25 seconds witch is extreme bad for play
   I understand idea that 00:12:668 () a bit supreme to 00:12:530 () but since 00:12:530 () is the very pre start of 00:12:668 () I guess it's just ok to start from 00:12:530 () and cover 00:12:668 () in sake of better gameplay
   
   
2. 00:37:415 (3,1) - It would be much better if you'd switch the NCs here as the Music changes drastically at 00:37:415 - due to the begin of a new section. This would also let the HP drain rise a bit and make the 3/1 gap more friendly in these .
   NC on 00:38:272 (1) - indicates pause better imo, also there is no NCs on downbeats later in that part
   
3. 00:53:408 (3,1) - Having 1's tail so near to 3's head can be very confusing and I'm not sure if newbie players will be able to read this and mistake 1's tail for it's head due to a misread. Something like this is better in order to avoid confusion.
   uh, you underrate players for the diff that have almost 2 star rating, i'll consider changing this tho

Hard

1. 01:33:969 (1) - Maybe I just simply don't understand your intention of the rhythm here but it feels unfitting and off to me which gives me a weird feeling while playing this. The main issue here seems to be that there is basically nothing on the downbeat the repeat is on. I'd rather follow the violin somehow like this here :/
   I'll consider this for insane too. Don't want to change atm.
   
2. Overall pretty nice but I dislike stuff like 00:39:129 (5,6) - and 00:52:552 (1,2,3) - since the ends just simply need the Soft Sample Set for not to feel weird ingame :/ The flow as well as the rhythm is pretty cool for most parts though.
   But there's drumroll. I don't feel like it needs soft end.

Insane
[*]I guess it's intentional but some of your streams feel overdone (e.g. 00:36:844 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - , 01:44:826 (5,6,7,8) - etc.) which can feel unintuitive (I'm really not sure what to think about this lol). Simplifying some of them could also adjust the Spread :/ Also the triplets in the calm section at 00:37:844 - like 00:39:558 (8,9,10) - feel a bit overdone and it would sound much better without them imo.
yeah, but great spots for drumrolls tho

[*]00:00:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - That might be a personal preference of mine but it would be nice not to start off with such a long high BPM stream since it kicks the player off as s/he isn't really into the song yet. It would be much nicer and player-friendly if you'd start off similiar as in the Hard or by using 1/4 Repeat Sliders.
prefer to keep here

[*]01:52:255 (13) - I don't know if you like NCs ont he end of streams but adding one for consistency with the other diffs would be nice.
i really don't :\

The Spread needs some more work. However, the difficulties themselves look pretty polished. This is going to turn out as very nice set once that problem is solved. Good luck! :p

Guess you right, guys. I'll work on adjusting spread. Many thanks.

should be fine now

おっす!やったよ!
From my Moddinq queue~

[General]

[Normal]

[Hard]

[Insane]

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Thanks Shurelia applied most of the stuff

sorry for late mod

thanks (:

(/^w^)/

VeeLaHee104 wrote: 25oz

(/^w^)/

\(^w^)/

hi :3 form queue

[General]
None.

[Normal]

1. 00:41:558 (2) - i think that rhythm is too weird for me.
   
   what about this rhythm and placement?

   
2. 00:52:837 (2) - curve?

[Hard]

1. 00:49:415 (5) - add NC? the change of rhythm is easy to understand
2. 01:01:119 (4) - a little curve? Why don't you let along to 01:00:262 (1)
3. 01:36:255 (5,1) - Swap NC

[Insane]

1. 00:19:272 (3) - move to x52,y11? flow will be better
2. 00:48:701 (6,11) - add NC? I think that you should put NC without in this position.
3. 01:36:255 (5,1) - same opinion on hard diff.

good luck

thanks ShiraKai (:

Hard:

1. 00:17:986 (6,7) - Drag to (176,112) for spacing?
2. 01:36:255 (5) - Are you sure for the combo here? Leaving this not NC'ed doesn't looks that nice for me since a new stanza starts, and a new violin sound appears..

Insane:

1. 01:36:255 (5) - Same thing to think about as [Hard].

Map is good so there wasn't much to point out!
But I would personally recommend an [Easy] difficulty since [Normal] feels a little fast and a little hard as an easiest difficulty for your mapset, despite 1.99 star difficulty. No complains on the current spread though, so it will be fine as it is too.

Starred, and good luck~

thanks Sonnyc all applied (:

[Insane]

00:26:701 (5) - I would rather see this moved left, closer to 00:26:129 (3) . It makes going into the stream much easier.
00:28:701 (8) - Move this left, I'm sure you can guess why a square pattern would be awkward to hit (hint, it's a square pattern).
00:28:558 (7,8,1) - This is a straight line coming out of a square, do you hate us all? It'd be cool if you changed at lest 1 part (make it not a square or not a straight line, preferably both).
00:47:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I suppose this is meant to be the make or break part of the map for the player but I feel that it's awkward to play (jumps are very straight and it's quite a fast map). I think my biggest dislike of this section is the fact that it overlaps so much, it makes it hard to see approach circles and judge speed which is key to a more awkward pattern. Change it if you want, or not, depends how mean you are.
00:50:838 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Every single one of these patters are so straight, I'd imagine they'd be very awkward for people who struggle with this speed. I personally have no issues with them but I feel like it'll annoy some lower ranked players who want to fc this map.
00:52:552 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:58:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:01:119 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:02:833 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:13:113 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:14:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (this one especially)
01:49:969 (5,6,7,8) - I spoke earlier about squares, this one is just as awkward ignoring the straight line, move this left please.
01:51:683 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I would appreciate if this stream didn't curve down so much and ended moving horizontally rather than downward/horizontally. I don't want to move my cursor down, that requires concentration and effort.

raiku mod!

Really just doing meta data checks etc. All tags seem fine, timing is perfect and diff spread is great! I only had a small issue with the names and I gave my reasoning below

[Easy]

I personally felt that this diff would be more appropriately named as a normal. The reason I think this is because I took into the slider velocity, the spacing and the average cursor movement throughout the map. When you look at your AR, OD and drain rate compared to other easies, it doesn't quite fit the name in my opinion.

00:42:558 (1,2,3) - I recommend after listening to this section carefully, that you should place the sliders here in the same way as depicted here on the timeline (http://puu.sh/b9V8N/238dc9eb06.jpg). The reason I've decided upon this is because I felt that slider 2 was too abrupt when starting on the red tick and didn't play out of slider 1 very well when timed as such. Start slider 2 on the white tick.

00:51:409 - I felt that this particular section needed a filler circle for this beat as when playing up the map starting on slider 2, the flow misses a transition into the next slider. Here's what I went with (http://puu.sh/b9Vmq/0339b52f2e.jpg).


[Hard]

This certainly qualifies for an easy insane in my opinion as the current insane is on another level of extra and in my opinion should be highlighted as such.

00:13:490 (1) - I suggest moving the tail point of this slider to the right to incorporate the blanket into the body of the slider and not just the head of the slider like so (http://puu.sh/b9VUo/385626f04e.jpg).

[Insane]

00:16:536 (6,7,8,9,10) - My only problem was the fact that the stream felt too close to the previous note to fit the timing such as that I felt inclined to hit the stream earlier, what I did was move the stream upwards and to the right a little more to help the player flow in and out of the stream better whilst maintaining the same flow and cursor speed as the sections before and after (http://puu.sh/b9Y4K/84e49e60c1.jpg).

Really hard to say anything about this set, it looks very polished, so good luck getting it ranked anyway!

In order to navigate the diff spread a little easier, I personally suggest altering the names, good luck!

jesus1412 wrote: 6i432p

[Insane]

00:26:701 (5) - I would rather see this moved left, closer to 00:26:129 (3) . It makes going into the stream much easier.
alright
00:28:701 (8) - Move this left, I'm sure you can guess why a square pattern would be awkward to hit (hint, it's a square pattern).
alright
00:28:558 (7,8,1) - This is a straight line coming out of a square, do you hate us all? It'd be cool if you changed at lest 1 part (make it not a square or not a straight line, preferably both).
okay
00:47:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I suppose this is meant to be the make or break part of the map for the player but I feel that it's awkward to play (jumps are very straight and it's quite a fast map). I think my biggest dislike of this section is the fact that it overlaps so much, it makes it hard to see approach circles and judge speed which is key to a more awkward pattern. Change it if you want, or not, depends how mean you are.
too mean
00:50:838 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Every single one of these patters are so straight, I'd imagine they'd be very awkward for people who struggle with this speed. I personally have no issues with them but I feel like it'll annoy some lower ranked players who want to fc this map.
00:52:552 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:58:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:01:119 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:02:833 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:13:113 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:14:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (this one especially)
personally i don't have such problems too, i don't see how this can be difficult
01:49:969 (5,6,7,8) - I spoke earlier about squares, this one is just as awkward ignoring the straight line, move this left please.
okay
01:51:683 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I would appreciate if this stream didn't curve down so much and ended moving horizontally rather than downward/horizontally. I don't want to move my cursor down, that requires concentration and effort.
sure

thanks :3

Raiku wrote: 3c74t

raiku mod!

Really just doing meta data checks etc. All tags seem fine, timing is perfect and diff spread is great! I only had a small issue with the names and I gave my reasoning below

[Easy]

I personally felt that this diff would be more appropriately named as a normal. The reason I think this is because I took into the slider velocity, the spacing and the average cursor movement throughout the map. When you look at your AR, OD and drain rate compared to other easies, it doesn't quite fit the name in my opinion.
actually great suggestion, thanks

00:42:558 (1,2,3) - I recommend after listening to this section carefully, that you should place the sliders here in the same way as depicted here on the timeline (http://puu.sh/b9V8N/238dc9eb06.jpg). The reason I've decided upon this is because I felt that slider 2 was too abrupt when starting on the red tick and didn't play out of slider 1 very well when timed as such. Start slider 2 on the white tick.
idk, i'll think ask about this around

00:51:409 - I felt that this particular section needed a filler circle for this beat as when playing up the map starting on slider 2, the flow misses a transition into the next slider. Here's what I went with (http://puu.sh/b9Vmq/0339b52f2e.jpg).
changed


[Hard]

This certainly qualifies for an easy insane in my opinion as the current insane is on another level of extra and in my opinion should be highlighted as such.

00:13:490 (1) - I suggest moving the tail point of this slider to the right to incorporate the blanket into the body of the slider and not just the head of the slider like so (http://puu.sh/b9VUo/385626f04e.jpg).
yep

[Insane]

00:16:536 (6,7,8,9,10) - My only problem was the fact that the stream felt too close to the previous note to fit the timing such as that I felt inclined to hit the stream earlier, what I did was move the stream upwards and to the right a little more to help the player flow in and out of the stream better whilst maintaining the same flow and cursor speed as the sections before and after (http://puu.sh/b9Y4K/84e49e60c1.jpg).
sure

Really hard to say anything about this set, it looks very polished, so good luck getting it ranked anyway!

In order to navigate the diff spread a little easier, I personally suggest altering the names, good luck!

thanks Raiku :3

Raiku mod!

Overall:
There's a LOT of empty space at the end of the mp3. Please cut that out since it's pretty pointless.

Insane:
00:01:200 (3) - tbh i really wish you did like a slider here or something, it's just awkwardly empty

Hard:
Fine

Advanced?:
Fine, but weird diff name choice considering

Normal:
01:40:255 (5) - NC here or just somewhere around here, this combo is way too long

I really want to bubble this, but a few things

1) Did you just recently add Advanced? I have never seen it mentioned anywhere else in the thread.
2) I really want someone to check this timing, because nobody has done anything

CDFA wrote: 6d6j4w

Raiku mod!

Overall:
There's a LOT of empty space at the end of the mp3. Please cut that out since it's pretty pointless.
alright, fortunately I didn't delete source
that means no re will needed for those who don't want to re -_-'

Insane:
00:01:200 (3) - tbh i really wish you did like a slider here or something, it's just awkwardly empty
prefer to keep, empty space is intentional because of intro

Hard:
Fine

Advanced?:
Fine, but weird diff name choice considering
yeah, i can name normal as easy and this as normal but this will be not really true

Normal:
01:40:255 (5) - NC here or just somewhere around here, this combo is way too long
added on 01:39:969 (1) -

I really want to bubble this, but a few things

1) Did you just recently add Advanced? I have never seen it mentioned anywhere else in the thread.
not so recently but yeah, for even better spread

2) I really want someone to check this timing, because nobody has done anything
yep, I've got only 2 posts related to timing here:
p/3336354
still no one complained in mods about and i did receive some testplays form high level players, noting was wrong also

thanks CDFA

edit: fixed unsnapped sliders
2 spinners shortened

CDFA bribed me.

Timing looks well done to me.

01:38:541 - Don't forget to add a red line here to fix the downbeat.

Hi Sieg

UnitedWeSin wrote: 6t6y41

CDFA bribed me.

Timing looks well done to me.

01:38:541 - Don't forget to add a red line here to fix the downbeat.

Hi Sieg

oh, sure
Thanks mr. UnitedWeSin :3

Timing Request (Thanks to CDFA).
Here's what I've got! I'm not sure that it's correct though. *runs*

Thanks BeatofIke (:
I've just tried your timing and it's fine and playable but current one is a bit more accurate.

That... was amazing. Holy shit. Keep up the good work. Starred <:

thanks Mezzaten :3

a red name said to post here. there are more timing points than there are timing changes because taiko

uh.... alright
thanks pishifat

does that mean the timing is fixed

CDFA wrote: 6d6j4w

does that mean the timing is fixed

yep

IM DOING IT

NO STOPPING ME

(In actuality though, timing is fixed, so I'm bubbling this now based on talking to others about the timing. I've discussed about the diff names, and even though it's unorthodox, it's still fine. Any other BAT can object tho)

Why the title is "ファイナルファンタジーVIII" ?
The translation of this is "Final Fantasy VIII" and clearly not something related to your title, move it to your tags...

Title = Romanised Title = The Landing


Metadata Source: http://www.square-enix.co.jp/music/sem/ ... index.html


Popped for now, poke CDFA to repair it when fixed.

shit

CDFA wrote: 6d6j4w

shit

shit

ORZ

So I got yelled at because I don't check metadata enough and conveniently enough, when I checked the metadata

The artist is completely wrong:

Here's the version you're using:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cr8fSPDXABs

I discussed with Charles, and here's all the metadata you should do (If you haven't done already)



THEN.

THEN I WILL BUBBLE THE MAP

pls dont hate me Sieg ;w;

oh my...
all done

i'm sorry for the troubles ;_;

Seriously, this is amazing, i this song ;w; star before rank ^^/

thanks :3

SIEG

I AM SO SORRY BUT

OH MY GOD

YOU DOUBLED THE TAGS ON ADVANCED

FIX THAT

AND THEN

I WILL Bubble it

I FEEL TERRIBLE HERE'S STARS

goddamn, something wrong is happening all the time, i'm starting to feel bad

fixed, many thanks

I SHOULD BE THE ONE FEELING BAD LIKE IM MAKING YOU WAIT THIS LONG

AND NoW ITS haPPEning

yay!
@CDFA <3

Sieg, me in game so we can make sure everything is sound from your end.

I've tested all diffs and made sure everything is seamless, nevertheless give me a shout and we can talk over anything you might want to alter at the last minute.

So me and Sieg went over the map thoroughly in IRC and made sure everything was to standard and updated. Turns out the map is amazing!

Now I can officially give you a heart! (this will be the first map I've ranked!)

Congratulations!

thanks <3

wooooooo
Congrats, :3

One of my favorites FF

Gratz

Congratz Sieg~

Congratz Sieg ^^

thanks guys (:

gratz <3
really like the map <3

I Love This Song ... This are one of my favorite games of PS One :3