Heya,
Il y a la dose, prend pas peur, c'est pas forcement des choses qui vont changer toute la map, a toi de faire le tri o/. Merci de preciser ce que tu change ou pas.


Bon, c'est a peu pres tout, j'aime assez la map a part certaines petites choses qui colle pas que j'ai releve. Et la musique est top aussi.

J'ai jete un oeil a hard / normal / easy, mais je suis pas top pour ces diffs donc bon, desole. De ce que je vois ca me parait bien. Voir pour la hard diff tres bien.
Pour la hard diff, je trouve que, contrairement a l'insane, cela: 00:49:511 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - est tres bien comme ca :p
Pour ces autres diff, a toi de voir si tu veux suivre que je t'ai suggere dans l'insane au niveau des hitsounds ou pas.

Sinon oui, fait juste attention a l'esthetique, c'est important. Sinon c'est plutot cool, j'aime assez .

J'espere que ca t'aura aide.
Bon courage pour la suite.

Hi! Here from m4m!



well thats all i got for now!

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue ( Nardo posted)

Good Luck~~ o/

Yales wrote: 6j683v

Heya,
Il y a la dose, prend pas peur, c'est pas forcement des choses qui vont changer toute la map, a toi de faire le tri o/. Merci de preciser ce que tu change ou pas.

[Insane]

1. 00:06:737 (3) - Je vois le pattern que tu as voulu faire ici mais mettre cette note a x:252 y:120 se jouerai beaucoup mieux. Fixed
2. 00:09:059 (6) - Add finish? Fixed
3. 00:09:640 (1) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:13:511 (3,4) - Essai d'arranger le blanket. Je ferais quelque chose comme ça perso: http://puu.sh/8kf2S.jpg Fixed
5. 00:16:220 (2) - Pareil : http://puu.sh/8kf6k.jpg C'est pas grand chose, mais ça se voit. Fixed
6. 00:16:801 (4) - Je verrais plutôt un triplet ici (qui se finit sur un slider). Fixed
7. 00:18:737 (1) - Pas de NC ici Fixed
8. 00:18:930 (2) - Mais NC ici Fixed
9. 00:20:479 (2,3) - Arrange le blanket : http://puu.sh/8kfkb.jpg Fixed
10. 00:21:833 (1,2,3) - ^ : http://puu.sh/8kfm1.jpg C'est pas un blanket j'ai essayé de faire ici
11. 00:24:349 (8,1) - Je trouve un peu dommage de laisser vide la musique qu'il y a entre ces deux notes. J'ajouterai un slider reverse 1/8 ici 00:24:349 : Fixed
12. 00:32:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - Je te conseil de deleter, et de CTRL+C ; CTRL+V ; CTRL+H 00:31:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - ceci a la place (et tu repositionne le debut du stream au meme endroit que l'ancien était, ofc). Fixed
13. 00:33:446 (6) - Je verrais plus quelque chose comme ca Ça fait bizarre le reverse après le stream sur un red tick je trouve. Fixed
14. 00:34:608 (2,2) - Je trouve aussi que ces deux sliders sont pas très catchy, je modifierai comme ça: http://puu.sh/8kfLd.jpg (j'ai rien touche au pattern, juste la timeline), si ca te plait faut que tu ajuste les hitsounds en conséquence par contre. Fixed
15. 00:36:930 (3) - 1/8 slider reverse plutot ? Ca sonne mieux je trouve Fixed
16. 00:37:511 (1) - Si tu as modifie le slider en 1/8 ajoute un finish sur la head de ce slider Je l'ai pas rajouter >,<
17. 00:38:285 (4) - Il est pas joli ce slider Fixed
18. 00:44:672 (4) - Perso ca me derange pas, mais c'est dur a lire, et je me demande si c'est rankable honnetement. :S Quoiqu'il en soit, je le trouve pas top comme slider, aussi je te conseil simplement de le remplacer par 2 notes. Un truc comme ca: http://puu.sh/8kgri.jpg Fixed
19. 00:47:575 (1) - Un pwal plus grand le spacing siouplait. ^^ Je trouve ça ben correct Fixed
20. 00:48:349 (1) - Un pwal moing grand (de facon a ce qu'il reste le meme avec le reste du stream). Je vois bien l'effet plus petit au plus grand ici mais je trouve pas que ce soit vraiment necessaire. :S Fixed
    00:49:511 (4) - Je fairais quelque chose comme ca: http://puu.sh/8kgES.jpg (le slider est 1/8... pour changer ^^). Si tu veux faire quelque chose comme ca, tu peux changer le double en triple ou ne rien mettre comme tu as fait, a voir ce que tu prefere. Fixed
    
    -
    
21. 00:49:898 (6) - NC + finish on the head Fixed
22. 00:50:285 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
23. 00:50:382 (2) - delete Fixed
24. 00:50:479 - Juste une note ici Fixed
25. 00:50:866 (1) - delete Fixed
26. 00:50:672 - Un slider 1/2 et un finish sur la head. oyeah. Fixed HELL YEAH XDD
27. 00:51:059 - et ajoute une single note here. Fixed
    
    -
    
28. 00:51:253 (5,6,7,8) - le rythme est cool ici o/ mercii
29. 00:52:995 (1) - NC + Finish Fixed
30. 00:53:382 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
31. 00:53:479 (2) - delete Fixed
32. 00:53:575 (3) - juste une note ici Fixed
33. 00:53:962 (1) - delete Fixed
34. 00:53:769 - Un slider 1/2 et un finish sur la head. oyeah. x2 Fixed
35. 00:54:156 - single note Fixed
    ^ Tu ma fait trouver une autre error !!! Fixed
    
36. 00:55:317 (8) - finish sur le head Fixed
37. 00:51:059 (4,6) - clap Pas de clap pour le 1st part du kiai
38. 00:54:156 (4,6) - clap Pas de clap pour le 1st part du kiai
39. 00:51:446 (6,6) - Il y a un probleme avec les NC ici je pense, essai de revoir ca. Je trouve qu'il est correct
40. 00:55:898 (3) - x:280 y:212 Fixed + j'ai mis de façon plus égalitaire pis ça fait comme un blanket pour le NC
41. 00:56:091 (5) - Finish + Clap on head Fixed, mais pas de clap
42. 00:56:672 (3) - Finish + Clap la ou j'ai sélectionné en rouge : (lol) Fixed, mais pas de clap
43. 00:57:640 (3) - Clap Pas de clap pour le 1st part du kiai
44. 00:58:414 (7) - Clap + Finish on head Pas de clap pour le 1st part du kiai
45. 00:59:188 (2) - Clap sur le tout debut et sur la toute fin du slider C'est correct
46. 01:01:898 (1) - Le spacing est bizarre ici Fixed
47. 01:02:285 (4) - Clap+finish on head Fixed, mais pas de clap
48. 01:02:866 (3) - clap+finish a la fin (A toi de voir si tu veux modifier cetter partie comme je t'ai propose dans le petit paragraphe un peu plus haut, je te le conseil by the way). M'a voir ça
49. 01:05:188 (3) - ^
50. 01:05:962 (3) - ^
51. 01:09:059 (3) - ^
52. 01:04:608 (3) - clap+finish Fixed
53. 01:06:349 (1) - remove nc Fixed
54. 01:06:737 (3) - move to 01:06:930 - 01:07:317 (4) - delete ofc. Fixed
55. 01:06:737 - add note Fixed
56. 01:06:930 (3) - add nc (si tu as fait les 3 etapes au dessus) Fixed
57. 01:11:188 (1) - Remove nc Fixed
58. 01:10:027 (1) - slider ici et NC : http://puu.sh/8kist.jpg Pas fait, mais tu ma fait trouver une autre erreur
59. 01:11:188 (1) - Si tu as choisis le meme pattern que moi arrange le slider que le flow puisse suivre. Quoiqu'il en soit, remove NC Fixed
60. 01:11:575 (2) - Add NC+ Finish + Clap Fixed, sauf NC et clap
61. 01:12:737 (1) - finish too Fixed
62. 01:13:414 (4) - clap+finish a la fin du slider ou fin ET debut. Nahh
63. 01:20:285 (5) - Whistle À date, le whistle sonne trop bizare sur la map
64. 01:21:446 (2) - ^
65. 01:23:382 (4) - ^

Bon, c'est a peu pres tout, j'aime assez la map a part certaines petites choses qui colle pas que j'ai releve. Et la musique est top aussi.

J'ai jete un oeil a hard / normal / easy, mais je suis pas top pour ces diffs donc bon, desole. De ce que je vois ca me parait bien. Voir pour la hard diff tres bien.
Pour la hard diff, je trouve que, contrairement a l'insane, cela: 00:49:511 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - est tres bien comme ca :p
Pour ces autres diff, a toi de voir si tu veux suivre que je t'ai suggere dans l'insane au niveau des hitsounds ou pas.

Sinon oui, fait juste attention a l'esthetique, c'est important. Sinon c'est plutot cool, j'aime assez .

J'espere que ca t'aura aide.
Bon courage pour la suite.

Groos merciiii :3!! "oyeah" xD

samplefish wrote: 3q3b6j

Hi! Here from m4m!

Easy

1. slider velocity is quite high up there, this might be a bit too fast of an easy, imo i would just try remapping it with a slower slider velocity
2. 00:29:382 (2,3) - should work on the blanket, heres an idea http://puu.sh/8lkL2.jpg Ohh good idea~~ I didn't do 100% the same as yours though, but nice idea~ I changed a bit
3. 00:32:479 (2) - maybe you can add a note that leads to the next slider Fix
4. 00:32:866 (3) - move slider to around here instead so the reverse slider points to it http://puu.sh/8ll4Y.jpg Didn't do it like you >,<
5. 00:34:027 (4,1) - consider unstacking these, plenty of places to put them if you rearrange 00:35:188 (2,3,4) - Is stacking twice not good in easy? D:!! because I don't think I'll change it if I don't have to
6. 01:04:995 (1) - blanket! midpoint:232,304 endpoint:280,372 Fix
7. 01:20:866 (1,2) - could use a better blanket.Fix

Normal

1. 00:21:640 (4) - really no reason to not have a note here
2. 00:23:962 (1) - no nc, this goes against your combo pattern from the rest of the map Fix
3. 00:26:672 (4) - ^ Letting this one
4. 00:30:156 (4) - instead of not having a note here, why dont you try something like this http://puu.sh/8llDz.jpg Ohhh epic ideaaa~ Love it *.*
5. 00:34:414 (1,2,3,4) - could be confusing since theres quite a big rhythm change Fix
6. 01:00:349 (2) - try something instead of a space, like http://puu.sh/8llLu.jpg Fix
7. 01:11:575 (1) - ^ Fix
8. 01:18:156 (1,1) - i would definitely put something between these. Hmm I'll think about it, you're not the only one who told me, so might give it a try xD

well thats all i got for now!

Thanks a lots D

Random Taiko mod here:

[Nardo's Oni]

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

Good luck.

JUDYDANNY wrote: 5g3k6z

Hello~ :3 Hi~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue ( Nardo posted)

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is storong suggestion.

[General]

1. Volume umn,,, globally noisy. Try them!
   
   "%"

   00:00:350 - ~~ 65%
   00:06:543 - ~~ 75%
   00:11:188 – (add) 60%
   00:12:737 - ~~~ 50%
   ＊noisy.
   00:23:575 – (add) 60%
   00:25:124 - ~~~ 65%
   00:34:414 -~~ 70~75% or delete this.
   00:37:511 - ~~ 70%
   00:46:801 – (add?) 75~80%
   00:48:349 (29) – add 80% (or 85%)
   Kiai => 90% , 01:17:769 - ~~ 80%
   ＊Kiai ~01:17:769 - . not too different volume. fixed this on both diffs.
   01:22:414 -(add) 70%
   
   I felt better.
   
   
   "code"

   350,387.096774193548,4,1,0,65,1,0
   6543,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
   11188,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
   12736,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
   23575,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
   25124,-100,4,1,0,65,0,0
   34411,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
   37511,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
   46801,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
   48349,-100,4,1,0,85,0,0
   49511,-90.9090909090909,4,1,0,90,0,0
   49898,-90.9090909090909,4,1,0,90,0,1
   77769,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
   82414,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
   84349,-100,4,1,0,35,0,0
   85898,-100,4,1,0,25,0,0
   87446,-100,4,1,0,15,0,0
   88995,-100,4,1,0,5,0,0
   
    

[Oni]

1. 00:05:575 (3) – K backbase is up , and feels better I guess. No change, as I followed the main rhythm's pitch.
2. 00:07:898 (5) – , 01:19:124 (5) - d , For emphasize to 00:07:124 (3) – ‘s Strong accent. Nope. I followed the vocal pitch purely.
3. 00:21:833 (1,2) – swap, emphasize to 00:23:575 – kat sound. ^
4. 00:40:608 (16) – , 00:45:253 – delete finisher , not too loud & emphasize to 00:46:801 (18,29) - finishers that distance makes shorter. I used finish at 00:40:608 (181) - because I want to reinforce the beat on every 2 long white lines, and I used finish at 00:45:253 (204) - for inducing a tension before the kiai. As the rhythm is getting progressively stronger from 00:45:253 to 00:48:930 - , I attempted to increase the density of the finish pattern, to every long white line starting from 00:43:704 - .
   
5. umn. 00:45:253 - ~ 00:45:640 -
   00:45:446 – add d? backbase. I would like to leave it blank here, as I can't find anything to the placement of a note.
   00:45:543 – add ? vocal. ^
   
6. 01:16:801 (13) - d? As the vocal keeps high, k is preferred.
   
7. um. Good Thanks \:D/

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:05:575 (3) – K , same as Oni. refer to above
2. 00:07:898 (26) - , 01:19:124 (277) - d. same as Oni/ ^
3. 00:40:608 (127) – , 00:45:253 (142) - delete finisher refer to Oni
4. 00:46:027 (145) - ^, emphasize to 00:46:801 (148) -. I repeated the pattern as 00:44:866 (140,141,142) -
5. 01:17:188 (271) – add here? … k? Good, fixed

Good Luck~~ o/

Thanks for the mod JuDa~

kanpakyin wrote: 366t19

Random Taiko mod here:

[Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:06:930 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - I have the feel that you were following the pitch here. This pattern, however, doesn't match the pitch perfectly. How about considering changing the pattern to dk d k k k kd? Fixed. It would be better.
2. 00:11:382 (38) - ^ ^
3. 00:25:414 (98,99,100,101) - How about considering dk d k? Okay. It could still show a contrast with 00:28:511 (113,114,115,116) -
4. 00:31:608 (130,131) - kk doesn't fit the music that well, I would suggest dk here. fixed
5. 00:54:543 (252,253,254) - There are nothing to this triplet...I think simple 1/2 should be enough here, or you can change the pattern to X XXX changed to k ddk
6. 01:06:930 (329,330,331) - ^ ^
7. 最後果part同一開始一樣 已更改
8. 01:23:963 (412,413,414,415,1) - I would rather place those note like this: Extending the slider to 01:24:543 - and then put a note, preferentially a don, to 01:24:349 - fixed

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:930 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - I have the feel that you were following the pitch here. This pattern, however, doesn't match the pitch perfectly. How about considering changing the pattern to dk d k k k kd? fixed
2. 00:11:382 (38) - ^ ^
3. 00:40:220 - Probably you could add a note here? I feel quite empty here as the drum still contiunuing here. A note could fit it perfectly. added k there.
4. 最後果part同一開始一樣 已更改
5. 01:23:962 (291,292) - How about placing a triplet here? kkk probably. fixed

Good luck.

Thanks for the mod kpy~

Update: http://puu.sh/8s1fP

　:3/

Yay! Arigatooo JUDYDANNY !!!

Take this.

Taiko'd

(ノ・ω・)ノ

kanpakyin wrote: 366t19

Take this.

Taiko'd

(ノ・ω・)ノ

Thanks so much kpy~ \:D/
I feel a little bit surprised >.<

YOSHA!! thanks kanpakyin
Thanks again for the great taiko level Nardoxyribonucleic !!

Julie !! M4M



[General]

1. Is not no better than End of spinner I'd rather seem to be better. why not 01:24:349 end ?
2. Easy diff is the first people should be able to be easily but Slider Velocity is " 1.40 " ? so high i think (In my opinion)

[Easy]

1. 00:09:640 (1) - End time is strange

[Normal]

1. 01:18:156 (1,1) - btw add break time
2. HP3 > HP4
3. AR3 > AR4

[Hard]

1. 00:34:414 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - change hit sound so confused
2. 01:20:091 (4) - delet it

if you have times , i make same song for G.D
just play not must mod xD
http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/171746

GL Julie !!

K i b i y a - wrote: 282d1g

Julie !! M4M



[General]

1. Is not no better than End of spinner I'd rather seem to be better. why not 01:24:349 end ? Would cut the song T^T
2. Easy diff is the first people should be able to be easily but Slider Velocity is " 1.40 " ? so high i think (In my opinion) Yeah I know, lots of modder said that but some other said it is rankable, and since I already place everything....it doesn't worth changing everything >,<!! Since this was my 1st map, already kept in mind that I won't be doing this again xD

[Easy]

1. 00:09:640 (1) - End time is strange Trying to give some times, but yeah changed a bit thanks

[Normal]

1. 01:18:156 (1,1) - btw add break time Added
2. HP3 > HP4 Fixed
3. AR3 > AR4 Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:34:414 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - change hit sound so confused any idea? >,<
2. 01:20:091 (4) - delet it actually, there should be something there xD

if you have times , i make same song for G.D
just play not must mod xD
http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/171746

GL Julie !!

Thanks for the mods Kibiya~ :3

Also, let's try to mod it.

Normal
01:24:031 Why a second spinner ?[/list]


Insane

I think that HP8 is too high. HP 7 would be better.

00:13:441 (3) Maybe a simple slider could be better than a

reverse one ?

00:19:332 (3) The same, maybe add a note after the slider.

00:30:973 (1,2,3,4,5) The girl sings in the stream, so it

doesn't fit very well.

00:32:143 (2) I think it's better to delete it. More natural

to play.

00:38:960 (1) This double reverse arrow doesn't fit the

song.

00:44:596 (3,4,5,6,7) I don't understand which notes in the

song this pattern fit with.

00:49:942 (1) This slider must be 1/4 earlier.

00:55.644 (1,2,3,4) The girl start singing at the third

note.

00:57:435 (2) This note must be 1/4 earlier.

01:04:420 (1,2,3) I think only two notes must be there, and

the (4) must be 1/4 earlier.

01:08:419 (1,2,3,4,5) The girl start singing at the third

note. So maybe a slider just after the 3 notes ?[/list]

Kinomi's Insane
I think that HP8 is too high. HP 7 would

be better.

Loooooooooong list, so I put it in a spoilerbox.
Thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/8EEZ6.osu

Yostel wrote: 4r4e36

Also, let's try to mod it.

Normal
01:24:031 Why a second spinner ? Maybe that break is kinda weird for just a spinner, I added some note :3[/list]


Insane

I think that HP8 is too high. HP 7 would be better. Fixed

00:13:441 (3) Maybe a simple slider could be better than a

reverse one ? Fixed

00:19:332 (3) The same, maybe add a note after the slider. I kept it :3

00:30:973 (1,2,3,4,5) The girl sings in the stream, so it

doesn't fit very well. Hmm then 00:32:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be fix too >,<

00:32:143 (2) I think it's better to delete it. More natural

to play.

00:38:960 (1) This double reverse arrow doesn't fit the

song. Ohh yeah fixed ;D!!

00:44:596 (3,4,5,6,7) I don't understand which notes in the

song this pattern fit with. not sure if I understand what your trying to say >,<

00:49:942 (1) This slider must be 1/4 earlier. Fixed~

00:55.644 (1,2,3,4) The girl start singing at the third

note. Fixed :3

00:57:435 (2) This note must be 1/4 earlier.Fixed

01:04:420 (1,2,3) I think only two notes must be there, and

the (4) must be 1/4 earlier. Roger that~

01:08:419 (1,2,3,4,5) The girl start singing at the third

note. So maybe a slider just after the 3 notes ?Fixed, I changed the 3rd note too xD

Thanks a lots for modding

EDIT : updated Kinomi's insane~ :3!

I love it, good work
Don't know why so much people not ing this xD
I thought black bullet is pretty popular

00:44:596 (3,4,5,6,7) I don't understand which notes in the

song this pattern fit with. Bon bah si tu comprend pas, je la fais en français.

Je comprends pas a quelles notes dans la musique ce pattern correspond en fait.

kitajima12 wrote: 2y4z2v

I love it, good work
Don't know why so much people not ing this xD
I thought black bullet is pretty popular

Kyaa thanks that mean a lots to a first mapper <3

Yostel wrote: 4r4e36

00:44:596 (3,4,5,6,7) I don't understand which notes in the

song this pattern fit with. Bon bah si tu comprend pas, je la fais en français.

Je comprends pas a quelles notes dans la musique ce pattern correspond en fait.

Ohh un français xD, haha, um..ça correspond à l'instrument si tu l'écoute bien :3!!
Re-mercii pour le mods ^^

As your request :3

[Easy]

1. 00:25:124 (1) - The blanket can be improved here. you need to move all the points a little bit higher , and that'll probably fix up the blanket to where it looks good.
2. 00:28:220 (1) - Same issue as above, you should move the end point of this slider a little bit higher too and that'll make the blanket better.
3. 00:31:317 (1) - Well I hear a cymbal sound here and I think it fits really well with a finish to the start, but you might want to decrease the volume of it here by around 10% because its a little loud but it sounds good.
4. 00:34:414 (1) - I prefer you don't stack in this diff, it's hard for beginners to read because they're use to learning the movement while being accurate with the clicking too.
5. 00:38:672 (2) - ^
6. 00:48:349 (3) - I don't think its a bad idea to shorten the slider so the reverse hits the blue tick, there is no clicking involve at the blue or red ticks but you still get all the necessary beats shown.
7. There too much stacking here, it's really not necessary because you don't have enough beats for it, but whatever.
8. 00:54:543 (3) - You need to add an whistle here or else remove all the whistles you did at the 2nd kiai, they're really inconsistent right now , but if I were you I'd say you should remove it.
9. 01:14:672 (1) - Add a new combo to the start.

[Normal]

1. 00:27:059 (2) - You should stack less here, but yeah I don't think stacking fits for this part, it really brings up your lack of creativity and should only be used for pattern reasons, if a pattern needs to look a certain way and then you can stack it but I don't think its the case for most of the stacks you did here.
2. 00:37:511 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider, sounds nice and signals transition.
3. 00:43:704 (1) - ^ for consistency.
4. 00:48:349 (3) - As I mentioned before, it wouldn't be a bad idea to make the slider end at the blue tick, that way you can show all the beats in the music with each of the ends.
5. 00:54:156 (3,4,5,6) - You might want to make this symmetry if you decide to do such symmetrical patterns like this, anyways just double check and make sure x and y axis are aligned.
6. 00:57:640 (4) - Again unnecessary stacking.
7. 01:07:704 (5) - ^
8. 01:15:833 (3) - ^
9. The only real problem I have with this diff are the stacks they're pretty unnecessary at least for me, and you can still unstack some of them without remapping and ruining flow, just my 2 cents.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:833 (1,2) - Okay, for these soft parts, I don't reckon you do really complicated things, try to do simple rhythm that still can represent all the beats while still be fun, and I don't like how you added a note at 2, that really ruins the softness of the music, how about you remove it and reverse slider 1 and Ctrl+G it? seems better to me.
2. 00:12:737 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider? sounds nice
3. 00:37:511 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:930 (1,2) - I'd prefer you use a slider here instead because there are no vocals to be clicked on at 2 and It feels little repetitive starting the same way that the last combo ended with the same rhythm.
5. 00:31:317 (1) - Add a reverse and remove the new combo for the next note at 00:31:898 (1) - I don't understand the pause tbh, but if you want to keep it then up to you.
6. 00:34:414 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This is the good flow and where stacking is AWESOME!
7. 00:48:349 (1) - Try what I said before and end it at the blue tick so you can get all the beats down.
8. 00:50:285 (4) - You don't need a new combo here it's really short and unnecessary compared to your other combo's. oh it'll ruin consistency with 00:56:479 (4) - too
9. 00:53:382 (1) - ^
10. 01:02:672 (1) - ^
11. 01:05:769 (1) - ^
12. 01:08:866 (1) - ^
13. 00:51:059 (1) - Not sure but some people might find this spacing a little confusing I'll say.

[Insane]

1. 00:10:801 (1) - Move the spinner to the red tick? there nothing to show the sign that the spinner should start at the white tick, but the red tick seems to be better.
2. 00:25:124 (1) - Add a finish at the start of the slider as said before.
3. 00:39:833 (5,6,7,8,9) - The stream is constructed poorly, you need to move 6 and 7 outward more to make the nice looking here, right now it looks really jagged.
4. 00:50:285 (2,3) - I don't agree with having such rhythms as this, seems a little over mapped and you can show the same thing, by removing note 3 and extending the previous slider, in fact doing a triplet is better here.
5. 00:56:091 (12,1,) okay, swap NC's here doesn't make sense here and is a little bit confusing to read I think you made a mistake here I guess by doing an unnecessay NC?
6. 01:01:124 (3) - Really poor flow, I'd rather you make it shoot up, http://puu.sh/8IH5V.jpg matches well with previous jumps you did.
7. 01:02:672 (1) - As mentioned in hard you don't need such short NC remove it here please.

[Kinomi's Insane]

1. Great Job.
2. 00:10:995 (4) - Wow, this feels like your shooting a circle at ME the way it is placed at the bullet opening of the gun in the background.
3. 00:24:737 (7) - Err, I don't understand the point of the curve, the stream doesn't really go well with the curve of the slider, I'd rather you remove the mid curve there and just make this a straight slider.
4. 00:47:575 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make the stream look better, the design isn't at its best.
5. 01:07:704 (5) - A better blanket comes by moving the endpoint of the slider upward more.
6. 01:24:059 (9) - Add a new combo here? seems to fit well because the stream wasn't part of this combo in the beginning :3

Random mod


[Nardo's Muzukashii]

00:13:317 - d
00:14:575 - k
00:17:672 - k
00:22:317 - k
00:23:382 (73,74,75) dk k
00:26:962 - k
00:30:059 - k
01:15:737 - k



[Nardo's Oni]

00:14:575 - k
00:16:124 - delete. 因為前面也沒有
00:17:672 - k
00:24:156 - k
00:24:253 - delete
00:24:543 - add d
00:25:414 - delete
00:26:962 - k
00:28:511 - delete
00:30:156 - delete. 因為前面也沒有 (指 00:27:059 )
00:30:737 - add d
00:31:608 - delete
00:32:382 - delete
00:33:253 - delete
00:34:704 - delete
00:35:382 - add d
00:36:253 - delete
00:36:930 - add d
00:38:575 - delete
00:39:349 - delete
00:40:027 - add d
00:41:672 - delete
00:42:446 - delete
00:43:124 - add d
00:44:769 - delete
00:46:220 - add d
00:47:091 - delete
00:50:188 - delete
00:50:962 - delete
00:52:027 - k
00:53:285 - delete
00:54:059 - delete
00:56:382 - delete
00:59:382 - d
01:00:156 - add d
01:02:575 - delete
01:03:156 - delete
01:03:349 - delete
01:04:898 - delete
01:05:672 - delete
01:06:253 - delete
01:06:446 - delete
01:08:769 - delete
01:11:091 - delete
01:12:543 - add d
01:15:059 - delete
01:15:850 - delete



★大☆改☆造★ (大誤

主要是把許多2連音去掉 因為其實很多地方都沒有音 卻放了音符 感覺不科學

以上單純只是些建議~


最重要的是 ... 太多2連音開DT不太容易打 (炸

-----mliencheng----- wrote: l1o73

Random mod


[Nardo's Muzukashii]

00:13:317 - d same pitch as 00:13:511 -
00:14:575 - k nope. The vocal pitch drops.
00:17:672 - k for contrasting with 00:17:962 (63) -
00:22:317 - k d for lower-pitched piano
00:23:382 (73,74,75) dk k Both are okay imo
00:26:962 - k similar to 00:14:575 -
00:30:059 - k similar to 00:17:672 -
01:15:737 - k nope. The current one matches the rhythm better.



[Nardo's Oni]

00:14:575 - k nope. The vocal pitch drops.
00:16:124 - delete. 因為前面也沒有 It is not necessary to keep all patterns the same. I don't add it before because I don't want to make the first quarter of the map too difficult.
00:17:672 - k for contrasting with 00:17:962 (63) -
00:24:156 - k the vocal there is not prominent enough.
00:24:253 - delete Why? It matches the feeling of the instrument imo.
00:24:543 - add d nope. I want to keep a distinct 00:23:866 (88,89) - dk sound throughout the map.
00:25:414 - delete retained for increasing the difficulty.
00:26:962 - k similar to 00:14:575 -
00:28:511 - delete retained for keeping it consistent to 00:25:414 (98,99) -
00:30:156 - delete. 因為前面也沒有 (指 00:27:059 ) nope, similar reason as 00:16:124 -
00:30:737 - add d refer to 00:24:543 -
00:31:608 - delete
00:32:382 - delete
00:33:253 - delete
00:34:704 - delete
00:35:382 - add d
00:36:253 - delete
00:36:930 - add d
00:38:575 - delete
00:39:349 - delete
00:40:027 - add d
00:41:672 - delete
00:42:446 - delete
00:43:124 - add d
00:44:769 - delete
00:46:220 - add d
00:47:091 - delete
00:50:188 - delete
00:50:962 - delete
00:52:027 - k pitch issue.
00:53:285 - delete
00:54:059 - delete
00:56:382 - delete
00:59:382 - d
01:00:156 - add d
01:02:575 - delete
01:03:156 - delete
01:03:349 - delete
01:04:898 - delete
01:05:672 - delete
01:06:253 - delete
01:06:446 - delete
01:08:769 - delete
01:11:091 - delete
01:12:543 - add d
01:15:059 - delete
01:15:850 - delete
Others are also rejected because of similar reasons as stated above.


★大☆改☆造★ (大誤 ._.

主要是把許多2連音去掉 因為其實很多地方都沒有音 卻放了音符 感覺不科學 許多你認為沒有音的地方其實有vocal... 如00:31:608 - 00:41:672 - 00:42:446 -等等, 或是vocal 橫跨一個1/4

以上單純只是些建議~


最重要的是 ... 太多2連音開DT不太容易打 (炸lol...

Anyway, thanks for your mod~

Tari wrote: 436s73

As your request :3

[Easy]

1. 00:25:124 (1) - The blanket can be improved here. you need to move all the points a little bit higher , and that'll probably fix up the blanket to where it looks good.
2. 00:28:220 (1) - Same issue as above, you should move the end point of this slider a little bit higher too and that'll make the blanket better.
3. 00:31:317 (1) - Well I hear a cymbal sound here and I think it fits really well with a finish to the start, but you might want to decrease the volume of it here by around 10% because its a little loud but it sounds good.
4. 00:34:414 (1) - I prefer you don't stack in this diff, it's hard for beginners to read because they're use to learning the movement while being accurate with the clicking too.
5. 00:38:672 (2) - ^
6. 00:48:349 (3) - I don't think its a bad idea to shorten the slider so the reverse hits the blue tick, there is no clicking involve at the blue or red ticks but you still get all the necessary beats shown.
7. There too much stacking here, it's really not necessary because you don't have enough beats for it, but whatever.
8. 00:54:543 (3) - You need to add an whistle here or else remove all the whistles you did at the 2nd kiai, they're really inconsistent right now , but if I were you I'd say you should remove it.
9. 01:14:672 (1) - Add a new combo to the start.

[Normal]

1. 00:27:059 (2) - You should stack less here, but yeah I don't think stacking fits for this part, it really brings up your lack of creativity and should only be used for pattern reasons, if a pattern needs to look a certain way and then you can stack it but I don't think its the case for most of the stacks you did here.
2. 00:37:511 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider, sounds nice and signals transition.
3. 00:43:704 (1) - ^ for consistency.
4. 00:48:349 (3) - As I mentioned before, it wouldn't be a bad idea to make the slider end at the blue tick, that way you can show all the beats in the music with each of the ends.
5. 00:54:156 (3,4,5,6) - You might want to make this symmetry if you decide to do such symmetrical patterns like this, anyways just double check and make sure x and y axis are aligned.
6. 00:57:640 (4) - Again unnecessary stacking.
7. 01:07:704 (5) - ^
8. 01:15:833 (3) - ^
9. The only real problem I have with this diff are the stacks they're pretty unnecessary at least for me, and you can still unstack some of them without remapping and ruining flow, just my 2 cents.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:833 (1,2) - Okay, for these soft parts, I don't reckon you do really complicated things, try to do simple rhythm that still can represent all the beats while still be fun, and I don't like how you added a note at 2, that really ruins the softness of the music, how about you remove it and reverse slider 1 and Ctrl+G it? seems better to me.
2. 00:12:737 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider? sounds nice
3. 00:37:511 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:930 (1,2) - I'd prefer you use a slider here instead because there are no vocals to be clicked on at 2 and It feels little repetitive starting the same way that the last combo ended with the same rhythm.
5. 00:31:317 (1) - Add a reverse and remove the new combo for the next note at 00:31:898 (1) - I don't understand the pause tbh, but if you want to keep it then up to you.
6. 00:34:414 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This is the good flow and where stacking is AWESOME!
7. 00:48:349 (1) - Try what I said before and end it at the blue tick so you can get all the beats down.
8. 00:50:285 (4) - You don't need a new combo here it's really short and unnecessary compared to your other combo's. oh it'll ruin consistency with 00:56:479 (4) - too
9. 00:53:382 (1) - ^
10. 01:02:672 (1) - ^
11. 01:05:769 (1) - ^
12. 01:08:866 (1) - ^
13. 00:51:059 (1) - Not sure but some people might find this spacing a little confusing I'll say.

[Insane]

1. 00:10:801 (1) - Move the spinner to the red tick? there nothing to show the sign that the spinner should start at the white tick, but the red tick seems to be better.
2. 00:25:124 (1) - Add a finish at the start of the slider as said before.
3. 00:39:833 (5,6,7,8,9) - The stream is constructed poorly, you need to move 6 and 7 outward more to make the nice looking here, right now it looks really jagged.
4. 00:50:285 (2,3) - I don't agree with having such rhythms as this, seems a little over mapped and you can show the same thing, by removing note 3 and extending the previous slider, in fact doing a triplet is better here.
5. 00:56:091 (12,1,) okay, swap NC's here doesn't make sense here and is a little bit confusing to read I think you made a mistake here I guess by doing an unnecessay NC?
6. 01:01:124 (3) - Really poor flow, I'd rather you make it shoot up, http://puu.sh/8IH5V.jpg matches well with previous jumps you did.
7. 01:02:672 (1) - As mentioned in hard you don't need such short NC remove it here please.

Fixed all big thanks for the mod!! XD!
Sorry took me a while to check it up xD

Gl with your map!

M4M

[General]

1. SV 1.4 for all diff? I think raise SV on higher diff is better but never mind.
2. use Offset 328 will be better

[Easy]

1. 00:29:769 (3) - move this slider's red point to 216, 244. because it looks better with 00:29:382 (2) - and it makes blanket more clearly
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:49:898 (1) - Add finish on the start of slider it needs more impact here. it's also kiai time
3. 01:04:608 (4,1) - move 01:04:608 (4) - to 340,296 and move 01:04:995 (1) - to 252, 256 it makes triangle with 01:04:995 (1,2,3) - it looks really better to me.
4. 01:11:575 (1) - you missed clap here (start of slider) use clap more regularly
5. 01:14:672 (1) - ^
6. 01:16:220 (1) - Add finish same reason with first one.

[Normal]

1. 00:30:156 (4) - Add clap on the end of slider sounds better
2. 00:40:220 (1) - Isn't this right beat following vocal line?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:46:414 - better add note here it feels really empty
4. 00:49:511 (1) - add Finish on the end of slider same reason with Easy diff
5. 00:51:446 (4) - Delete Whistle here. i think it doesn't fit here.

[Hard]

1. OD -1 will be better to difficulty spread
2. 00:13:511 (3) - Delete Finish i can't find reason why you put finish here also this song's first part goes low
3. 00:15:059 (4) - ^
4. 00:18:156 (4) - ^
5. 00:18:930 (1) - Add Finish. you put finish here on Normal diff but why did you put Clap on hard diff?
6. 00:23:575 (2,3) - I think beat is wrong try this one
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:30:543 (5) - Delete Finish really doesn't sound good
8. 00:32:091 (3,3) - ^
9. 00:49:704 (3) - Add finish on the end of slider
10. 01:02:091 (3) - ^
11. 01:11:382 (1,2,3) - Delete Finish

GOOD LUCK~

>3<

Easy: 01:16:220 (1,1) - Add some objects there

Normal:01:18:156 (1) - That spinner is in a stupid place,replace that with some objects

Hard:00:52:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:55:704 (1,2,3) - 01:01:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:04:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:08:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would take off those triples

Insane:00:49:414 (3,4) - That is weirdly timed,00:50:285 (2,3,1) - That slider is too long

Fixed all on Okoratu and Neta mod, except on the general part, thanks a lots.
Sorry took me some time, my finals exam took a huge load on me, got me so lazy D:

VeZaaRa wrote: 723q50

Easy: 01:16:220 (1,1) - Add some objects there

Normal:01:18:156 (1) - That spinner is in a stupid place,replace that with some objects I think I'll let it for the moment, but I'll what you said on this part, if someone else find it stupid to I'll change it :3

Hard:00:52:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:55:704 (1,2,3) - 01:01:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:04:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:08:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would take off those triples

Insane:00:49:414 (3,4) - That is weirdly timed,00:50:285 (2,3,1) - That slider is too long

Fixed all, thanks a lots for mods :3

Hi~ Here's my modding.

[Easy]

Some rhythms are weird.

00:09:640 (1) - Spinner ends at 00:11:769
00:53:382 (2,3) - weird rhythm
00:58:801 - maybe add a circle
01:10:414 (5) - slider ends at 01:10:801, then add a circle at 01:11:188

[Normal]

00:21:640 - add a circle
00:40:220 (5) - add "clap"
00:43:317 - add a circle
00:46:414 (5) - add "clap"
00:57:640 (4) - remove "clap"
00:58:801 - add a circle with "clap"
01:00:349 (2) - add "clap"
01:11:188 - add a circle
01:12:737 (2) - add "clap"
01:23:382 (4) - slider ends at 01:23:575, then add a circle at 01:23:962

[Hard]

Sorry, I think most of the rhythms are so weird.

00:15:446 - add a circle
00:18:543 - add a circle
00:18:930 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - the rhythm does not match with the music
00:23:575 (2,3) - fix the rhythm
00:28:220 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm is incoherent
00:30:930 - add a circle
00:46:027 (3) - slider ends at 00:46:317
01:10:801 (5) - change to a circle
01:20:285 (5) - slider ends at 01:20:479

[Insane]

Rhythms are not following the song.

00:16:801 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+G for better rhythm
00:21:253 (4,1) - put something between these two
00:25:124 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is much better.
Actually this kind of rhythm is almost everywhere in the song. Please use it frequently!
00:43:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - all are hitting on 1/2 beats? Try using this rhythm please~~~

Sorry, I feel so hard to mod this diff. Imo, you should remap the rhythms. Try using more syncopation instead of only 1/2 beats and 1/4 streams.

After all, I've conclude some rhythmic patterns which can be used in your Insane diff!:





...and many more!!!

Work hard and good luck~

Hey, I just modded your map ;)


[Easy]
00:29:769 (3) - If you want, you can make this blanket smoother, it's gonna look neat.
01:11:575 (1) - Snap this bellow (4) properly.

01:18:156 (1) - This is unrankable for sure, because it goes out of screen. I suggest, make it smaller.

01:22:801 (2) - Drag it like this looks much better.




[Normal]
00:51:446 (4) - Remove NC

00:59:188 (1) - What is this for?
There are so many bad blankets in this diff that I don't have the time to point out everything. And so many weird sliders. otherwise, seems okay.



[Hard]
00:17:188 (1) - Make this section better, for a smoother blanket.

00:35:188 (1) - Snap this bellow (2)

00:35:962 (1) - ^

01:00:349 (1) - The spacing here is too short in my opinion.

01:14:285 (1) - The overlap from (5) looks really bad.




[Insane]
00:14:575 (5) - Snap this bellow the end of (4).

00:22:414 (2) - The distance between the two sliders around this note could be better placed, just look
00:46:414 (1) - Remove NC

00:46:801 (1) - NC




[Kinomi's Insane]
00:21:059 (3) - Place this better to get a smoother blanket.

00:28:995 (3) - Drag this one tick to the left so it looks like this
for a smoother blanket.

00:29:575 (4) - to snap this bellow the slider correctly if you fix the above.

00:29:769 (5) - Make this better like this:
00:35:188 (3) - Same as above
00:48:349 (1) - Whats up with the distance snap here?

01:04:608 (5) - The angle of this slider makes it bad flow because of where your cursor is coming from. Hope that make sense.

01:03:640 (4) - Snap it bellow (3).

01:07:704 (5) - For a smoother blanket, make it like this:

Thanks for mod, will take a while for me to fix thing....
REMAPPED INSANE, because realize flow still didnt make sense (thank you sarkras for testing in ctb, realize flow didn't make sense) + redid all hitsound on INSANE
no more rush :3

[Insane]
00:09:640 (1,2,3) - This should be an triangle.
00:34:027 (1) - NC here really?
00:50:479 (1,2,3) - This should be here https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1748199 Like the last circle should be next to the 00:51:253 (5) - .
01:24:446 (1) - Should end on the timing point.
+1 OD.

[Kinomi's Insane]
00:07:124 (2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL + G.
00:14:672 (3) - Make this circle go a little up.
00:26:285 (4) - Make this a hidden circle under the slider end.
00:27:059 (3) - ^.
01:18:350 (2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL + G.
01:24:446 (1) - This one DOES end on the timing point not like the insane. (gj Kinomi)
+1 OD.

[Hard]
+1 OD When remake.

Negri_sk wrote: 122d2h

[Insane]
00:09:640 (1,2,3) - This should be an triangle. nop, 00:10:027 (2,3) isn't the same as 00:09:640 (1,2)
00:34:027 (1) - NC here really? I say yes in-game, but thinking about it, while re-mapping hard, realize why I put NC, imma consider it though
00:50:479 (1,2,3) - This should be here https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1748199 Like the last circle should be next to the 00:51:253 (5) - . Don't want it to straight but consider
01:24:446 (1) - Should end on the timing point. naaaaaaaaah
+1 OD. way to easy for a OD8


[Hard]
+1 OD When remake.I made it supah easy, so is a hard that look like a hard, instead of looking like an insane :3

Thanks brooo for mod !!

:3


Well this was a pretty long mod. good luck!

AndreasHD wrote: z5d29

Hey, I just modded your map ;)

[Kinomi's Insane]
00:21:059 (3) - Place this better to get a smoother blanket. Done.

00:28:995 (3) - Drag this one tick to the left so it looks like this

Click me

for a smoother blanket. Done.

00:29:575 (4) - to snap this bellow the slider correctly if you fix the above.

00:29:769 (5) - Make this better like this:

Click me

00:35:188 (3) - Same as above

Click me

00:48:349 (1) - Whats up with the distance snap here? Fixed it for a while ago, getting submitted now.

01:04:608 (5) - The angle of this slider makes it bad flow because of where your cursor is coming from. Hope that make sense. Fixed it for a while ago, getting submitted now.

01:03:640 (4) - Snap it bellow (3). Fixed it for a while ago, getting submitted now.

01:07:704 (5) - For a smoother blanket, make it like this:

Click me

Fixed it for a while ago, getting submitted now.

Negri_sk wrote: 122d2h

[Kinomi's Insane]
00:07:124 (2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL + G. Nope.
00:14:672 (3) - Make this circle go a little up. Alright.
00:26:285 (4) - Make this a hidden circle under the slider end. Nope.
00:27:059 (3) - ^. Nope.
01:18:350 (2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL + G. Nope.
01:24:446 (1) - This one DOES end on the timing point not like the insane. (gj Kinomi) Danke.
+1 OD.

toybot wrote: 3r152n

:3

[Kinomi's Insane]
00:13:124 - 00:25:124 - whistles are a bit too fast, maybe just make it appear 2/1 beats? Fixed it for a while ago, getting submitted now.
00:30:833 (2) - bend this slider's tail a bit down, to make it look like the two sliders are pointing at the same thing with equal distance Alright.
00:49:124 (3,4,5,6) - the stream has uneven spacing, fix pls Fixed it for a while ago, getting submitted now.
00:53:575 (3,4) - move these two objects so it looks like its in the middle of the slider's curve? like its being blanketed Alright.
01:05:188 (1) - place this ontop of the next slider's head? so it matches the following two objects Nope.
01:12:930 (4) - NC this? its separate from the previous measures Alright.
01:24:446 (1) - use a soft hitsound for the spinner Alright.

Well this was a pretty long mod. good luck!

Thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/9LraA.zip

toybot wrote: 3r152n

:3

[General]
You might want to consider making the sliderslide (normal-sliderslide2) silent? on the diffs with long sliders, it sounds especially noisy, and is pretty annoying
And consider changing the mp3 to a better quality? It feels really weak
Here's the sliderslide: http://puu.sh/9KkcV/40f04b195c.wav
And you said the hitsounding is pretty nooby, so yeah lol (can i hitsound for you? ill make sure it sounds good)

[Easy]
00:06:543 (1,1) - Use the regular normal hitsound for these two spinners? You used them in the normal diff Fix
00:53:382 (2) - move this a little bit down, to create a more curved motion. and remove the clap on the slider's head Fix, but didn't move it down
00:56:479 (2) - same with this; remove the clap on the slider's head. this is to make sure that claps are only on downbeats, or else the claps sound nooby :p Fix, but didn't move it down
01:00:737 - you could probably add a slider here. making it just empty removes the flow that you've created Fix
01:12:737 - same with here, and the slider following should be part of that combo Fix
01:19:124 (1) - shorten this by 1/2 of a beat, since im guessing you were following vocals there shorten by 1/4, 1/2 was a bit to much x,x
01:22:220 - same with this---- add something!!!! plus, it makes the following slider not sound out of place when you click it Fix
01:24:349 (1) - use NC2 on this spinner, makes it sound better yknow Fix

[Normal]
00:09:640 (1) - how about shortening this spinner to 00:10:995 -? And add a finish to it. the 1/1 spaces inbetween notes are too fast for a normal player Yeah I didn't realize for my normal, thanks
00:34:414 (1,2,3,4) - hm, this is boring.. recommend changing it to something else? I'm aware of it, but I'm blaming on distance spacing Q,Q
00:49:511 - 01:12:349 - this whole section... full of claps... remove the claps from beats landing on white lines 2 and 4, to create the same hitsound pattern as in the easy diff. I heard that you are remaking the hitsounds, but is this the remake? pls no Well without the reamake, other mod told me to put clap here in kiai in white stick, so if you want we could talk about it in pm. I keep in mind all my mod so they didn't mod for nothing
01:00:349 (1) - remove the nc, to be consistent with the part on the second kiai Won't do this, was part of my old mods
01:00:349 (1,2) - use soft finishes instead. and raise this section's volume a bit to make it sound grand Love the idea
01:12:737 (2,3) - ^
01:18:156 (1,1,2,3,4) - make this entire section in normal hitsounds, not soft I'll think about it
01:23:575 (4) - move this away from (3), this spacing makes it confusing considering the rhythm, and might give the player a 100 or a miss for hitting the slider too early Fixed puting it in red stick
01:24:349 (1) - same suggestion as in easy Fix

[Hard]
00:12:737 - use the normal custom hitsound as in easy and normal diffs. be consistent pls with your own diffs when it involves hitsounding. or you can change the normal and easy diffs so that it uses soft hitsounds instead Fix
00:19:704 (3) - make this blanket better, mmk Fix
00:21:833 - add a note here? itll be ok for hard, and itll follow vocals, which is kind of what youve been doing Fix
00:31:317 (1,2) - this is supposed to be a 3/4 rhythm? please make it so. Fix
00:32:091 (3) - make this into a slider or something to fill up that space Fix
00:34:027 (1) - remove this NC, it belongs with the previous stanza, and is more of a leadup Fix
00:46:801 (2) - put a finish on the slider's head Fix
00:48:349 (1) - shorten this slider by 1/4 beat to follow the vocals better, and create a better feeling of awesomeness or something :p
The same thing with normal diff, remove claps landing on beats 2 and 4 Fix
01:00:737 (2,3,4) - add finishes in where you know you should Fix
01:16:027 (2) - maybe move this to x160y40? to create a little jump, and make the distance look the same (it says its not the same because of changed slider velocity) Fix
01:17:769 - this section onwards is too silent. i think i said make this normal custom 2? Fix

[Insane]
00:14:285 (5) - Add NC? following what you do in the next two stanzas Fix
00:23:575 (6) - ^ same Fix
00:23:962 (7) - ctrl+g? so it makes the player move in a circular motion then suddenly back down to the next object. i mean it just plays well for effect :p Fun idea, I'll never thought about it, thanks
00:24:640 (9) - i think you should make this a bit longer? it sounds too quick Fix
00:40:995 (2) - ctrl+g for some variance in the movement Love it
00:46:801 (2) - add a finish to the head Fix
00:49:124 (3,4,5,6) - maybe make the stream like this? Acceptoo

SPOILER

00:51:059 (4) - NC? Fix
00:53:382 (3) - ^ Fix
00:54:156 (6) - ^ I say these two NC's because its like it goes onto the next voice Fix
00:56:479 (4) - NC for same reason Fix
01:00:349 (1,2,3) - add finishes to this section? Fix
01:02:672 (5) - move this so that the previous slider blankets it Nice, was actually searching some idea for this one >,<
01:09:253 (4) - change this to a normal bent slider, this flows like its broken and doesn't look good Fix
01:14:672 - this to the spinner, make the objects normal hitsound Fix
01:22:995 (3) - move this closer to the previous slider? so that the player doesnt get the timing wrong Fix

Well this was a pretty long mod. good luck!

How to do good and long mod that fast xD, thanks~~

Update everything~~ :3

hello~ m4m from #modreq (My map https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/181634 )

ill only be modding standard difficulties (since idk how to mod other ones xD)


Easy
i think the OD can be raised a bit
for 00:17:382 (2) - try this instead http://puu.sh/9MY8O/fe094e0a2f.jpg
i think a circle can be put between 00:22:027 (1) - and 00:23:575 (2) - on the white tick
00:25:124 (1) - and 00:26:672 (2) - same as above
00:39:059 (2) - 00:40:608 (1) - ^
lower the hitsound volume a bit for easy on the kiai time (for the clap)
00:53:382 (2) - and 00:54:543 (3) - put circle in between, im going to stop mentioning these but sometimes you can hear faint beats in the music and a circle would fit the rhythm
at 00:55:704 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/9MYzS/1200d42401.jpg
01:11:575 (1) and 01:13:124 (1) - - i thought this was an important place to place a circle in between
01:19:124 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/9MYM7/44c2d1ff83.jpg
also 1/4 beat divisor is unnecessary but since it doesnt affect the beatmap itself its ok to leave there

Normal

00:12:737 (1) - and 00:14:285 (2) - put circle in between
00:33:640 (4) - move it over like this http://puu.sh/9MZ64/ca38d1ae7c.jpg
same thing with the hitsounds at kiai, pretty loud in my opinion (Clap)
01:23:382 (4) - shorten it like this http://puu.sh/9MZlG/546ccd01b4.jpg and add a finish hitsound

Hard

at the beginning try placing the circles like this so they look neater http://puu.sh/9MZzT/035e31781f.jpg
00:15:059 (4) - spacing is too far from the 3 circle
00:21:833 (1) - spacing
00:34:027 (4) - spacing again
~~ your spacing should be even ~~
00:39:833 (4) - and 00:40:608 (1) - put a circle in between
maybe you should lower sample sounds
01:21:446 (2) - http://puu.sh/9MZWi/1b32deb000.jpg
01:20:285 (8) - try this http://puu.sh/9N01K/0ec826e995.jpg

Insane

00:55:608 (1) - i dont think this needed a hitsound
clap hitsounds at kiai again...


Kinomi's Insane

00:15:059 (5) - try this http://puu.sh/9N0vr/7d62443f96.jpg
00:59:188 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/9N0D5/9afd7b7f45.jpg

i think the insanes iare pretty good i couldnt find much wrong with it ;w;"

hope that helped and gl with your beatmap~

Sorry, but no changes. However, I did some few changes on my own (mostly just hitsounds changes).

http://puu.sh/9OdQ5.osu

Update update~~
I'm going to reply on mod later~ xD

edit meeh I should stop being lazyyy :

konoshin69 wrote: 5e5l41

hello~ m4m from #modreq (My map https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/181634 )

ill only be modding standard difficulties (since idk how to mod other ones xD)


Easy
i think the OD can be raised a bit keep 1-3-5-7, and I made it supah easy :3!! look more like a beginner now then an easy >,<
for 00:17:382 (2) - try this instead http://puu.sh/9MY8O/fe094e0a2f.jpg matching the voice + like I said above moar easy that way
i think a circle can be put between 00:22:027 (1) - and 00:23:575 (2) - on the white tick doesn't really match the voice, but like I said trying to make it supah supah easy
00:25:124 (1) - and 00:26:672 (2) - same as above ^
00:39:059 (2) - 00:40:608 (1) - ^ if you follow my whole song, I don't put much on each white tick xD
lower the hitsound volume a bit for easy on the kiai time (for the clap) Ok will do~
00:53:382 (2) - and 00:54:543 (3) - put circle in between, im going to stop mentioning these but sometimes you can hear faint beats in the music and a circle would fit the rhythm same reason for 00:39:059 (2) - 00:40:608 (1) - ^
at 00:55:704 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/9MYzS/1200d42401.jpg Trying to make it easy >,<
01:11:575 (1) and 01:13:124 (1) - - i thought this was an important place to place a circle in between won't do that though sorry :S
01:19:124 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/9MYM7/44c2d1ff83.jpg Since I started with this red tick sound, I better keep the ending the same o.o, not sure if you'll understand what I said xD, I suck at explaining Q,Q
also 1/4 beat divisor is unnecessary but since it doesnt affect the beatmap itself its ok to leave there

Normal

00:12:737 (1) - and 00:14:285 (2) - put circle in between My normal is more into voice though xD
00:33:640 (4) - move it over like this http://puu.sh/9MZ64/ca38d1ae7c.jpg Can't because normal should always respect distance spacing, but I might change the pattern here >,<
same thing with the hitsounds at kiai, pretty loud in my opinion (Clap) Fuxed
01:23:382 (4) - shorten it like this http://puu.sh/9MZlG/546ccd01b4.jpg and add a finish hitsound Nop, but I just realize I should make it longer like the easy >,<

Hard

at the beginning try placing the circles like this so they look neater http://puu.sh/9MZzT/035e31781f.jpg nop too common
00:15:059 (4) - spacing is too far from the 3 circle LOL OMG THANKS, I don't know how that happen, the 4th is also offscreen LOL
00:21:833 (1) - spacing Don't see anything wrong xD
00:34:027 (4) - spacing again ^
~~ your spacing should be even ~~ Nop, not in hard + xD
00:39:833 (4) - and 00:40:608 (1) - put a circle in between Nop
maybe you should lower sample sounds Will do
01:21:446 (2) - http://puu.sh/9MZWi/1b32deb000.jpg nop, look too common xD
01:20:285 (8) - try this http://puu.sh/9N01K/0ec826e995.jpg won't do xD

Insane

00:55:608 (1) - i dont think this needed a hitsound Keeping it though
clap hitsounds at kiai again... ok

i think the insanes iare pretty good i couldnt find much wrong with it ;w;"

hope that helped and gl with your beatmap~

Thank you for mod :3...and gl for you too ^^!

Yo.
Well, that's all, I guess. I'll boost your map with a star. WHY ISN'T IT BUUUBLED? Good Luck on ranking the map.

sheela901 wrote: 3n562

Yo.

Easy 3c1s6b

1. 00:15:833 (1) - Move the second point to x:210 y:355. It'll just fix a little the blanket. Fixed
2. 00:39:059 (2) - The curve is a bit weird. Copy and paste 00:37:511 (1) , then rotate it by -70°. The curve will be more better. Fixed
3. 01:06:930 (3) - Move the last point to x:406 y:217. It'll fix the blanket. Fixed
4. 01:08:479 (1) - Move this note to x:395 y:109? It'll get a better flow. If you moved, paste the code below in your .osu file, so 01:09:253 (2,3,1,1,1) is moved: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   320,25,69253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   246,109,70027,2,0,B|204:74|204:74|164:117|94:86,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   2,50,71575,6,0,P|24:17|59:-1,2,80,12|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   106,91,73124,6,0,B|154:95|154:95|138:167|202:203,1,160
   302,191,74672,6,0,P|340:132|324:40,1,160,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:13:124 (1) - Remove the new combo. Fixed

Normal 6g3l6m

1. 00:53:382 (2) - Ctrl + J, and move it to x:444 y:160? It follows the flow better, and I just feel like it. Fixed, except I think you did an error on x:444 y:160 xD, yep love the flow better :3
2. 00:57:253 (3) - Move this to x:485 y:229. It stills because of the flow. Fixed
3. 01:00:349 (1) - Remove the new combo. Fixed

Insane 4w3z3d

1. 00:20:479 (2) - Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J and Ctrl + G, so it could make the same slider pattern of 00:20:866 (3,4) . Fixed
2. 00:21:833 (1,2,3) - Make a blanket pattern? It feels a bit ugly. Actually it will be to crunch if I do blanket, keeping it like that xD

Well, that's all, I guess. I'll boost your map with a star. WHY ISN'T IT BUUUBLED? Good Luck on ranking the map.

Thanks for the mod, star and luck

[Easy]

00:48:349 (2)- 3/4 repeat slider ticks seems like something to avoid in Easy when it's 4/4 time. It's short enough that nobody should miss, so probably not a big deal, but something of note given Easy difficulty.

[Normal]

No issues noted.

[Hard]
00:59:188 (2,3)- Change the two sliders to one repeat slider and circle to coincide with the vocals that you were following with that combo, e.g.:

[Insane]

No issues noted.

[Summary]

Overall, your maps are very refined at this stage. I had to virtually nitpick to find something to note, and I didn't want to walk away with you feeling empty handed. I have very little Taiko experience, so I don't feel comfortable modding those. Good luck getting ranked, and I hope that what I have provided helps! ♥

looking into the hitsounds. maybe it helps a bit :3

[Hard]

00:06:543 (1) - added clap at start and end
00:07:124 (2,3,4,5,6) - added clap
00:09:059 (7) - added clap start and end
01:16:220 (1) - whistle at start, finish at end
01:18:156 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - added clap at single notes and at the slider end
01:20:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - added finish at slider end~ and notes
01:23:382 (7) - added whistle start and end

[Kinomi's Insane]

00:47:577 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - add clap
00:49:511 (8) - added whistle

[Insane]

00:07:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - changing clap at the start of the slider

rest sounds fine gl with the map :3

Fixed stuff from the 3 modders !! arigatoo minna~

JULIE PLEASE DON'T BE MAD AT ME, Ai Ni
General: The audio sounds a little quiet to me but idk what you'd do to fix it >.<

Hard
I don't really mod hard but I'll do it for chu julie <3
Or at least I was going to but can't find anything to say that wouldn't just be nit picky >.<

Insane
00:34:414 (1) - I'd say no new combo :<
00:35:188 (1) - ^
00:35:769 (2) - new combo
00:35:962 (1) - no new combo
Not much I could find wrong since You're so perfect *drools* *^*

Kinomi's insane
00:25:124 (1) - this slider kinda looks ugly imo :c it just look odly curved
01:00:349 (1) - ^
01:05:382 (2) - and 01:06:156 (4) - could be blanketed around 01:06:737 (5) - which would make it look better
That's about it, it overall it looks pretty solid to me \(>w<)/
I know it's not much but honestly there's not much that's wrong with your map imo, I really hope it gets ranked JULEWD <3

bump*

bump for julie face

Heyo Julie~ Rechecking because I have to. Also, don't give me a kudosu, since I already have one.
C'est tout~ Bonne chance pour mettre la map ranked!

Yesss! Febli-chan <3 Alright, here are mods as requested. I tried to my best(because honestly I think it deserves to be ranked) mwuaha

Normal:
00:34:354(1-4) Perhaps these circles could be spaced out, and if they are spaced out, then they should be spaced out evenly.

Hard:
00:09:622(8) A new combo should start here, a combo running from 1-13 is quite long
00:49:606 Maybe a new circle here to match up the lyric "akaku" (3 objects in total, one for each syllable)
00:50:415 Same as above↑, except the lyric here is "moeru"
00:52:725 Same as above↑, except the lyric here is "atsuku"
00:53:495 Same as above↑, except the lyric here is "hibiku"
01:23:986 The spinner could possibly start here and end at the point you've already set it to end at.

The ones I commented about the lyrics matching up are actually from my own preference since I love black bullet so much, so I thought there should be a little rhythm balanced out when it comes to those lyrics above ^__^

Hope this helps, and wishing the best to you! ☺

Yay thanks sheela for recheck woah xD
thanks trammiexo, moee modding haha xD "moeruuu"
Update source + custom hitsound + mp3 + snapping + some fix~

Hello!

I'm new to modding, so d̶o̶n̶'̶t̶ ̶t̶a̶k̶e̶ ̶m̶e̶ ̶s̶e̶r̶i̶o̶u̶s̶l̶y̶ please excuse any newbie mistakes I make. xD

Easy
-Two spinners at the beginning seems strange for an easy map. Merging them into one, I think, would be a lot better.
-Outro feels somewhat awkward (might be just me). 1 at 01:19:173 feels out of place, a hitcircle at 1:18:786 feels more comfortable for me.

Normal
-4 at 0:30:205 makes its turn on a blue tick. It feels a bit awkward, were you trying to get it to turn on the white tick (or the red tick like the slider at 1:00:786), or was that intentional?

Hard
-A 13 object combo in the intro is kind of long. Maybe make a new combo at 00:09:689.
-Some combos in the first verse (00:12:786 to 00:34:269) follow the same pattern of objects (for example, circle-slider-circle, circle-slider-circle)(I'm typing circle so much, it's starting to look weird). It gets a bit predictable, but that's one of my pet peeves. xD

Insane
-I've started playing Insanes not too long ago (maybe a month ago) so I can't say too much. But OH HOW I LOVE JUMPY MAPS.
-Nothing to say here.

Kinomi's Insane
-I don't know if I should be commenting on this as it's a guest difficulty.
-Regardless, there isn't anything I can say here.

Great work! I look forward to this map's development.

Rofl~ thanks fixed the new combo (I have no idea how I forgot that) and added a note on easy xD

easy:
replace the 2nd spin in the start to some slider or circles
00:12:786- 00:33:689 u should place more circles and not just sliders
00:37:570-00:53:044 again, u need to put more circles...
in the end: i think u need to put less time spin...
normal:
again- don't put the 2 spinners...
00:34:463-00:36:786 i think u should put some distance btw those circles
dont put the big spin in the end

No change, but I guess kudo for effort as a new modders :3!! keep it up!

Hi, mod here~

[Easy]

01:09:302 (2,3) - I don't like how the flow works here, I think it would play better if it looked something more like this:

If you decide to do this, then to move 01:11:624 (1) - a bit to avoid the spacing error.

01:13:173 (2,1) - The two sliders are the same length, so why not go with a symmetrical pattern? I think it would look better imo.

01:20:915 (1,2,3,4) - I think that there are too many finishes being used in these last few notes and it can become kind of jarring.

[Normal]

00:34:463 (1,2,3,4) -I don't like this stack. They're two whole beats apart, surely you can make some sort of pattern out of it. Don't just leave it as a plain, boring old stack.

00:45:302 (3,4,1) - imo these finishes don't really fit, I suggest getting rid of a few of them. How about on the ends of (4)? That would be good because they don't land on any downbeats.

00:48:398 (3) - In contrast to my previous suggestion, how about adding a finish at the end of this note? I think it would sound better because there are three emphasised beats and 3 is more memorable than 2.

01:08:140 (1) - Try making this slider look the same in visuals to 01:08:915 (2,3) - . I think it would be better and more consistent.

01:21:495 (1,2,3,4) - Like how I said in easy, not a fan of the amount of finishes.

[Hard]

00:38:334 (2) - Make this the same as 00:37:560 (1) - ? Doing this would make the combo symmetrical, making it look nicer.

01:16:076 (2,1) - I don't like how this flows, try moving (1) up a bit. or rotating it clockwise.

[Insane]

00:11:044 (1) - I recommend you map out this spinner. It's mapped out in hard and you've already mapped out 00:09:689 (1,2,3,4) -

00:24:398 (3,4) - This seems overmapped, these two sliders really don't fit the music. I don't here anything in the music that is 1/8 apart.

00:34:076 (1) - I suggest you curve this slider like 00:33:689 (4,1) - to keep the sliders consistent and to create a symmetry with (4)

00:36:786 (1,2,3) - Another overmapped set of notes, I don't hear any 1/8 or even 1/4 in the music here.

00:43:753 (1,2) - I know what you were trying to do here, but I think it would look better if the set of notes were symmetrical.

00:53:044 (2,2) - I don't like the slight overlap between these two notes, looks ugly imo.

01:05:818 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda like the above with (4, end of 5) but with worse flow since the cursor has to go all the way down to hit that stack.

[Kimoni's Insane]

00:18:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream really doesn't fit lol. It's a really calm part of the tune, and I do not hear any 1/4 in the music.

00:20:528 (2,3) - This blanket has a little room for improvement, how about moving (3) to x:197 y:271?

01:14:334 (8) - This 1/6 slider is unnecesary and overmapped, I do not hear any 1/6 in the music. Replace this with a 1/4 slider or something.


Well, that's it from me. Despite the issues that I've pointed out above, I found all diffs to be enjoyable, fun, and sophisticated. Good luck!

Fixed mostly everything except some finish hitsound and those 1/8 slider
Thanks for the mods :3

Hi, here's the mod from my queue!

Did you mean just the Insane difficulty or both?

I think you just meant the Insane

I LOVE BLACK BULLET!

[Insane]

00:30:979 (6) - Move this to 396, 312

00:31:173 (7) - Move this to 244, 300 I think this looks a bit nicer with this ^

00:40:463 I think you should add a circle here

00:43:753 (1,2) - Blanket these a little better

01:11:624 (4) - Move the slider to 384, 44 and angle it so it looks something like this https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1911084

Really cool map, and awesome song (Black Bullet was soooooo good)

Hopefully my mod helped you a little bit

GL <3

skinnyjimmy wrote: 3u6f13

Hi, here's the mod from my queue!

Did you mean just the Insane difficulty or both?

I think you just meant the Insane

I LOVE BLACK BULLET!

[Insane]

00:30:979 (6) - Move this to 396, 312

00:31:173 (7) - Move this to 244, 300 I think this looks a bit nicer with this ^

00:40:463 I think you should add a circle here

00:43:753 (1,2) - Blanket these a little better

01:11:624 (4) - Move the slider to 384, 44 and angle it so it looks something like this https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1911084

Really cool map, and awesome song (Black Bullet was soooooo good)

Hopefully my mod helped you a little bit

GL <3

Woah really cool flow idea~ but I kept most of them, changed the last part but it isn't entirely like you say, but look a lots alike~ thanks for the mods :3

Hey there. Overall it looks pretty good. You could use a lot more blankets though (as you will see).






Good luck! Cant wait to see this get ranked. I loved the show and i love the song

It's a very nice map, and on the other maps haven't the video ,i very like it
if the map can be ranked ,it isn't a happy things? wwww
good job
haha
I will you

Hi~

From #modreqs

[General]
Black Bullet!

[Timing]
Stop the KIAI at 01:01:947 – instead of 01:00:398 – if you want a flashing effect during the change
And do not slow down the slider velocity even a short flash

[Easy]
AR: -1
Seems it’s almost all 1/1, higher AR will make players cant see the next note before they finish the current one
^ For example at this point 00:15:689 – you can only see 00:15:882 (1) – and no other things around
00:09:689 (1) – I suggest to extend the spinner to 00:12:205 - , don’t want to leave gaps between the next note. You can also consider extend to 00:12:398 – but it might be a little harder
00:18:979 (1) – Can try to curve this note another way to make a “S” shape with 00:17:431 (2) - , would help better in flow. Refer pic:
00:53:431 (2) - Try to make them more flowy (by moving (2) a little bit down) after 00:53:044 (1) - something like this:
00:22:076 (1) – Prefer this to be rotated like 180* with Ctrl+G (swapping heads and tail) which points down to 00:22:850 (2) – after 00:20:528 (4) –
00:28:269 (1,2) – Making them same shape would look neater, suggest to use the shape of 00:29:044 (2) – and then rotate a little like 45* clockwise
00:33:689 (4) – Not sure I like it to be curved that much after 00:31:366 (1,2,3) – because you don’t want it to look special without anything heavy indicated
00:36:786 (4) – This one’s a little out of constant DS, try moving 00:36:011 (3) – more downwards (should be fine if you’re out of the area for a bit)
00:37:560 (1,2) – I’m not sure if they have same shape, but if it’s not try to make 00:37:560 (1) – look like the shape of 00:38:334 (2) - , copy and paste! :d
00:55:753 (1) – Nazi, move the tail point of the slider to 1 tiny grid left or around X:252 Y:320 to make it perfectly aligned with 00:54:979 (5) –
00:59:237 (1) – Suggest not to point the reverse slider on 00:58:076 (5) – because it might spoil the flow. Try something like this:
01:01:947 (1) – Might wanna try rotating 90* clockwise and make it a pattern like this (refer pic), which looks better to avoid strange sliders combo :3

No major problems, playable and simple!
Keep up.

[Hard]
Took a quick look and found the notes and jumps are pretty randomly placed
Notes are all forced to follow vocal instead of constant beat
Need a bit more work on this diff
00:06:592 – Add finish, start of the music
00:06:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Suggest to replace all the claps in to something lighter (or custom hitsound sound like a beat). You can try soft whistle
00:09:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Try not to abuse finish sound, might sound annoying sometimes. Replace them to something like as suggested on the last mod, soft whistle could do
00:13:753 (1) – I don’t see any point to jump here, try to remain 1.3x DS seems it’s the slow part too
^ If you really really insist to keep, at least make the jump at 00:14:334 (2) – instead of 00:14:140 (1) –
00:15:495 – As mentioned, try not to force all the notes to follow just vocal and leaving unnecessary gaps between notes. Consider putting something there
00:17:237 (1) – Strongly suggest not to make a jump here, please use 1.3x DS, even you’re following vocal cuz it isn’t that heavy or significant for you to make players to notice it that much
00:18:592 - In Hard diffs you can actually fill these space to avoid letting players to feel it’s “empty”
00:20:334 (1,2) - As mentioned above, try to remain 1.3x DS to let your map look more neat and cuz it’s slow part too
00:21:882 (1) – 4.0x jump is way too big (and it’s stacked) in Hard diff, please avoid this because Hard level players can’t react that
00:23:431 (1) – This pattern is actually a lot better than previous ones like 00:20:334 (1,2) – because you have something on the middle which is 00:23:624 (2) – to show it’s really a pattern instead of random jumps (and you don’t make players feel it’s on purpose)
00:25:173 (1) – Ctrl+G would fit better in the flow, but it also makes it a little bit more jumpy cuz of your arrangements
00:26:528 (1) – The small jump here is acceptable, which is not a bad thing, because the music is getting faster leading to the KIAI
00:34:463 (1) – Try to make this stick to the slider 00:34:076 (4) – to keep it the same pattern as 00:34:753 (2,1) – . Suggest no jump there because the spacing of the next pattern is barely any distance snapped
00:36:979 – As mentioned, you can actually map these parts in Hard instead of leaving a gap, can be good parts to make music more filled
00:43:753 (1) – Suggest to make it more spaced because most of the notes is very fast distanced and anti jump here doesn’t look good here
00:48:979 (2) – Try to make this blanket with 00:48:398 (1) – leaving 00:49:560 (1) – more distance because they’re too close to each other
01:00:398 – Actually this part is still in KIAI try not to slow it down
01:02:044 (2) – This sound a little extra if you’re focusing on vocal, suggest to remove it
01:02:721 (5,6) – Ctrl+G would fit better with the flow
01:05:818 (3) – If possible make the pattern on the middle line if you want symmetry cuz seems it’s already close to it. Try this:
^ And please do make sure 01:06:011 (4) – has the exact same shape with 01:05:431 (2) – to make it look neat. Copy paste 01:05:431 (2) – and then use Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G
01:07:173 (3,4,5,6) – The DS of this set is pretty random altho I know you’re using 1.7x DS. You can try the function of creating polygon circles (Ctrl+Shift+D), put 1.7x DS and then 4 points
01:12:786 – Try not to slow down SV seems it’s still in KIAI
01:18:011 (1) – Remove clap
01:18:398 – As previously, try to replace the claps with some lighter hitsound, sometimes it just sound annoying for some players (but I’m okay with it).
^ And also if you want to rank the map try not to over hitsounding it, BATs don’t like them
01:19:947 (7,8,9) – Try to snap them with 1.7x DS, it’s a bit squeezed down there. Something look like 01:21:495 (2) – would be better

Rhythms are fine
Need some work on this diff, try to request more mods

[Insane]
AR9 is a bit too fast, try AR8.6 (hold down shift key and adjust)
00:06:786 (2) – Remove this would sound better cuz it’s like an extra hit
00:09:689 (1) – Yep this looks good ^
00:18:495 (6) – Removing this also sounds better to fit the music, which you have to arrange the DS for a bit after breaking them to 2 sets
00:24:689 (4) – A bit over sounded. The drum hits are actually at 00:24:689 – and 00:24:786 - , and then continues at 00:24:979 – and 00:25:076 – . Try not to overmap it
00:27:979 (5) – Suggest to remove this, triplets at most of the time shouldn’t end in red tick which is 00:28:076 (6) –
00:34:657 – Remove clap (extra sounded)
00:36:979 (3) – Same as the mod with 00:24:689 - , try to fix this part as well
00:41:431 – I would follow vocal at this part becoz the vocal is a bit heavy
00:43:076 – Add a circle here to form 5 hits, don’t wanna miss the sound at 00:43:076 –
01:18:011 (2) – Remove this, sounds extra
01:20:334 (1,2) – Try to make their distance close, even it’s “Insane” you shouldn’t space them that much because you didn’t previously

The SV in KIAI is too fast, try just to use 1.25 SV
Other than that looks okay

[Kinomi’s Insane]
Try AR8.6 (hold shift key and adjust) or something around there, AR8 is a bit slow
00:07:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – Suggest to make them all whistled cuz of strong vocal
00:10:850 – Remove whistle, look like you didn’t do it on purpose
00:11:044 (4,6) – Whistle them for strong vocal
00:13:366 (2) – Move to X:276 Y:280 (with 1.0x DS) for better pattern and flow imo
00:30:882 (2) – Ctrl+G for flow pattern? It’s optional, feel free to keep
00:31:947 (2) – Try the pattern mod like 00:13:366 (2) – see if you find it a better one or not
00:45:882 (5) – NC here because of the DS
00:46:657 (7) - ^ Here as well and remove the NC for 00:46:850 (1) –
00:47:624 (3) – And then you can put a New combo here again
00:56:140 (8) – Move this to X:128 Y:124 for better blanket (if you want perfect one try turning off grid snap and move around)
00:57:495 (4) – You can try blanket this with 00:56:915 (3) – (even you ignore the DS), 0.8x DS here look strange
01:13:366 (2) – Move this to X:340 Y:296 for better blanket. Then move this set 01:14:721 (1,2) - a few tiny grids to the left to avoid stacking 01:13:366 (2) –
01:18:786 (3,4,5,6,7) – Whistle them for strong vocal
01:22:076 – Remove whistle here
01:24:108 (9) – NC here for consistency

Solid, simple, easy to read and play. Good diff!

Have to work a bit harder on some diffs. Good luck!

Thanks for the great mod, learned some new stuff, and try to improve the hard owo

Hai hai!
Random mod!

[General Parameters]

1. Audio : Ok.
2. BG : Ok.
3. Timing : Ok.
4. .wav files : Ok.

[Easy]

1. 01:14:721(1) - You could do better than that, try this instead. The reverses give corresponding with music!
   

[Normal]

1. 00:35:237 (2,3,4) - Here, the spacing is not respected. Just move each notes on the vertical axis (y-4).
2. 01:01:947 (1,2) - Ajust the blanket perfectly please.
3. 01:02:286 - I guess, you can stay with the 1/4 snap. This is about kiai time so put correctly the green tick? You can choose both :
   - blue tick : 01:02:237 or white tick : 01:02:334
4. 01:16:269 (4) - Seems not good here. Try it, it is more consistent with the rhythm of music!
   

[Hard]

1. Here, there are many overlapping notes. I suggest you move a few steps to the right / left.
   In other words, there would be a little more style, if you will apply this. Look this
   
   cf. Jenny's Mapping Tips
2. 00:15:882 (1,2) - The spacing is insufficient. Also, could you repair this blanket?
   Suggestion :
   

[Insane]

1. Okay.

Bonne chance!

Merci beaucoup pour le mod :3!! Le stacking je ne l'ai pas changer, car a chaque fois quand je fait ça, le monde me dit de le stack >,<

I trying help to JMQ~ >< (OMG!!!)
I help you before this map Ranked and Unranked about this map XD

I think you not much to add TV Size in tittle:
p/3347786#p3347786

Like Lanturn said: TV Size is okay to use, but Very very okay if you use black bullet~

NO KDS~ (I just help some people ><)

EDIT:
If you not sure about title, You can ask with KSHR or Lanturn~

gokugohan12468 wrote: p2n3u

I trying help to JMQ~ >< (OMG!!!)
I help you before this map Ranked and Unranked about this map XD

I think you not much to add TV Size in tittle:
p/3347786#p3347786

Like Lanturn said: TV Size is okay to use, but Very very okay if you use black bullet~

NO KDS~ (I just help some people ><)

EDIT:
If you not sure about title, You can ask with KSHR or Lanturn~

OMG YEAH I TOTALLY FORGOT, I saw the thread and went to look why it was unrank and score wipe, but keep forgetting to change it myself uwahh xD!! baka me
thanks~ better change that now so I dont forget

Oh, I totally forgot about this. I will fix some of my parts in a few days because busy with school.

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generally nothing wrong

good luck

Je sais pas quoi en faire et je veut voir ta map ranked donc... voila :3

Good Luck est comme dirait hinata :

Fixed~ Thanks for the mod Hollow Wings :3!!

uwahh gros merciiii Shapy!! !! FIGHTOOO!

Love it... have a star! <3

Kritikally wrote: 4p2964

Love it... have a star! <3

Arigatoo kritikally , really appreciate it!

100th post of the thread >,<!!

god,
i just have to mod this
but that icon lawl;w;
good luck~ spam star

Genocide wrote: 554z1

god,
i just have to mod this
but that icon lawl;w;
good luck~ spam star

Uwahhh arigatoo proo genocide >///<!

Woah, 6 months of pending? You made a good job at gathering modders and kudosu!!
I tested all the diffs (Taiko too) and I love them!! I WANT TO MARRY KINOMI'S STREAMS *p*

Here, have a kudosu! for you Amazing job!!!! I think that this beatmap doesn't deserve any other modding for now <3

warfu2000 wrote: 5845w

Woah, 6 months of pending? You made a good job at gathering modders and kudosu!!
I tested all the diffs (Taiko too) and I love them!! I WANT TO MARRY KINOMI'S STREAMS *p*

Here, have a kudosu! for you Amazing job!!!! I think that this beatmap doesn't deserve any other modding for now <3

Woah thanks for kudo :3!! Yeah, was lucky to have 2 really pro mapper GD for my 1st mapset >,<

rank it already omg.

Hello short mod here ~

Easy

01:23:431 (4) - start 4 earlier, on red tick pause feels awkward to play
http://gyazo.com/37f340c4b3930d56c43dfbc0f8e866d4

Normal

good diff

Hard

could map the opening of the song if you wanted to

00:15:302 (5) - make 5 a reverse slider the long slider doesn't feel like it fit the rhythm to me.
http://gyazo.com/cdeffac9f99aa5779d444d9b377343fd

Insane

I feel like you could also map the start of the song here as well if you choose to, just an opinion ~

Kinomi's Insane

Same as Insane

sorry for not being able to get images to work Puush is dead right now and gyazos dont work with Img for some reason
hope this helps in some way~

easy
great work

normal
00:40:269 (5) - add this
00:43:366 (5) - add this

hard
I think hard is great

Insane
00:18:302 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream here is too strange...
00:24:398 (3,4) - two slider of 4*1/4 is better,then move 00:24:689 (4) - closer to the next combo
00:36:786 (1,2,3) - a stream with 4 corcle and a 4*1/4 is better

Kinomi's Insane
00:14:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 is a round slider,but 3,4,5 placed too straight
00:31:173 (3) - I think...a circle here will be more confortable,then start the new combo at 00:31:366 (1) -
00:33:205 (4) - this circle placed too high ,I think
00:36:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - they arn't in a line...
00:39:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I know 1,2 and 3,4 is a mirror image,but 3,4 is too far from 1,2 and too close to 5,6
00:42:979 (5,6) - make a short slider istead of two circle will be better?

Thank you :3!! (sorry took me time to give kudo, fixed some stuff :3)
Now how to get at least 1 standard bat mod XD

I'll apply my mod later because me having to play OWC soon and getting ready for it.

KinomiCandy wrote: 403z1o

I'll apply my mod later because me having to play OWC soon and getting ready for it.

Noted.

As per your request:
[Kinomi's Insane]
00:10:076 (1,2,3) - I have a feeling these tones are enphasized in the music, jumps here would be better.
00:13:560 (3) - Blanket's not perfect, intentional?
00:40:463 (5,6) - Is following the same instance in the music as 00:39:882 (1,2,3,4) Hence should be in the same pattern (try a triangle?)
00:39:398 (5) - What is this note mapped to?
I feel the enphasized voices like 00:07:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7) and 01:18:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7) would sound better with finish hitsounds.

[Insane]
How the heck did this difficulty manage to have almost the same star rating as Kinomi's while it's actually harder X_X
00:07:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feel like hitsound finish at the slider starts (and 6) sound better.
00:11:044 (1,2,3,4) - Why triangular flow for 4 notes, there are a bunch of other patterns that fit 4 notes that you can try in case you don't like squares, and you can use 00:10:657 (4) too for 5 note patterns.
00:15:108 (4) - Barely audible hitsound, i suggest increasing that section's volume by 5%
00:18:253 (4) - Why use repeat slider instead of having a longer stream? it kinda breaks the flow, also i dont think you should use 1/8, while they exist in the music it's just awkward to play.
00:39:398 (5) - What is this note mapped to?
00:51:302 (2,3) - Swap these circles? (Ctrl+G) it flows better imo and would create a jump at 00:51:495 (3) that fits with the tone increase.
01:00:398 (1) - Why this shape? it would make sense if you wanted it to flow into 01:01:366 (2) But the repeat arrow throws away that theory.
01:11:431 (3,4) - It would have been better if you had continued the zig zag here.
01:18:398 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I feel like hitsound finish here works as well.

[Hard]
00:07:173 (2,3,4,5,6) - All these notes have enphasis, finish would sound cooler (Like you did in the part right after which sounds the same).
00:18:205 (4,5) - Try like this, make more sense to me:

00:35:528 (2) - Why start on blue tick, makes more sense like this:

00:55:173 (4,5) - Try like this, make more sense because of vocal:

00:58:269 (4,5) - ^ here too
01:07:753 (6) - ^here as well.
01:13:753 (3) - It follows vocals better like this:

01:18:398 (3,4,5,6,7) - Dunno why u use sliders here when you didn't do it at the start, but it feels better to put finish at these slider starts.

[Normal]
00:06:592 (1,1) - These spinners dont fit, this section is perfectly mappable, you can follow what you did at the end, or you can just put circles on red ticks.
00:21:689 Seems like you missed a beat here, intentional?
01:18:398 (5) - New combo
01:18:398 (5,6,7,8) - Just like on the other diffs, hitsound finish sounds better here.
01:18:398 (5,6) - Doesnt feel like a stack is necessary.

[Easy]
00:06:592 (1,1) - Same as Normal.
00:48:398 (2,1) - This rythm is a no-no for Easy because new players will want to hit 00:49:947 (1) Early using a non repeat slider would alleviate the issue like this:

01:19:173 (2,1) - here you have the same issue as above, try this instead:

01:20:915 (1,2) - I'd suggest just merging these 2 into a single slider.

[Taiko Muzukashii]
I'm not sure about having d K so close multiple times on a muzukashii i'd think d D would be better. (multiple sections)
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/2224788 You can barely see the girl's face on the background.

[Taiko Oni]
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/2224791 And you can barely see the guy's face on this one, was this awkward shift intentional?

I'd give this a star icon but I don't wanna overwrite the taiko icon, pretty nice map, Good Luck!
Feel free to PM me once you've looked through the mod and Kinomi applied all mods.

Fixed everything except
insane : 01:11:431 (3,4) - It would have been better if you had continued the zig zag here. Not sure how to really put it xD
hard : 00:35:528 (2) Got it from a modders, was matching the voice in this part, if it really have to be change then I'll change it :3

For the taiko level, the BG is intentional xD.

Thanks a lots for the mods sakura >/////<

Now gotta wait for lazy kinomi :3!! I don't want to rush him :3

Sakura wrote: 2th19

KinomiCandy wrote: 403z1o

I'll apply my mod later because me having to play OWC soon and getting ready for it.

Noted.

As per your request:

[Taiko Muzukashii]
I'm not sure about having d K so close multiple times on a muzukashii i'd think d D would be better. (multiple sections) d K in 1/2 is technically fine in Muzukashii, so I would like to keep mine here.
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/2224788 You can barely see the girl's face on the background.

[Taiko Oni]
https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/2224791 And you can barely see the guy's face on this one, was this awkward shift intentional? As Julie said, the BG shift is intentional in order to show different characters while playing.

I'd give this a star icon but I don't wanna overwrite the taiko icon, pretty nice map, Good Luck!
Feel free to PM me once you've looked through the mod and Kinomi applied all mods.

Thanks for the check~

IT'S FINALLY DONE, TIME TO LAZY AGAIN.

look down

I think the novideo button is missing, lol.

Applied most of the mods from previous pages. Sorry for not replying
to them, kinda in a hurry and I might as well just be done with this.

Sakura wrote: 2th19

KinomiCandy wrote: 403z1o

I'll apply my mod later because me having to play OWC soon and getting ready for it.

Noted.

As per your request:

[Kinomi's Insane]
00:10:076 (1,2,3) - I have a feeling these tones are enphasized in the music, jumps here would be better. Done.
00:13:560 (3) - Blanket's not perfect, intentional? Not really, hope it's fixed.
00:40:463 (5,6) - Is following the same instance in the music as 00:39:882 (1,2,3,4) Hence should be in the same pattern (try a triangle?) Done.
00:39:398 (5) - What is this note mapped to? The vocal.
I feel the enphasized voices like 00:07:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7) and 01:18:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7) would sound better with finish hitsounds. Sounds pretty awkward for me, so I'll keep it as it is.

Feel free to PM me once you've looked through the mod and Kinomi applied all mods.

I changed a lot in my difficulty, so it's kinda harder now with a lot of jumps that's in there.
I also changed few hitsounds, so if Julie can add this hitsound into the map, that would be great. http://puu.sh/cQhNg.wav

Thanks for modding. Here's my difficulty: http://puu.sh/cQogS.osu

Rechecking:
Kinomi's right the No video button is missing, make sure you from a difficulty that has the video included.

[Kinomi's Insane]
The jumps are better now, but could you make it so that the distances here 00:09:302 (8,1,2) Aren't the same? (1 > 2 > 3 needs to be longer to signify that those are jumps people will trip because 8 > 1 > 2 are the same distance but different timing) these too 00:11:044 (4,5,6), the suggestion I was thinking of had bigger jumps. Here too: 01:20:334 (7,8) (Must have missed it last time)
00:13:560 (3) - Eh well i guess making a perfect blanket is hard orz
00:39:398 (5) - Ok.
00:40:463 (5,6,7) - Much better.
Re: Enphasized Voices: Well I disagree, it doesn't seem to sound awkward in the other diffs but to each their own

[Insane]
00:11:044 (1,2,3,4) - Still looks the same to me?
00:18:011 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Aren't aligned properly.See? looks sloppy.
00:39:398 (2) - I'll assume is the same as Kinomi's orz
01:00:398 (1) - Now you made a jump, tho i can catch it, but im not sure orz
01:11:431 (3,4) - I meant something like this:

[Hard]
00:18:205 (4,5) - Good tho at least try to make a prettier slider, Like so
00:35:528 (2) - Can you tell me who suggested this and why? By looking at their reasoning i can try and see if i agree or not.

[Normal]
00:06:592 (1,2,3,4,5) - You dont use such awkward and long sliders at the end, why use them here? It also drives your hitsounding inconsistent with the end of the map.

[Easy]
Looking better.

No kudosu

Fixed a few jumps and did do the finish hitsounds after all, because... meh. http://puu.sh/cTgJk.osu

Also, I think there's some unused hitsounds materials that's in the beatmap that should be removed.

My change :

[Easy]
00:09:689 - removed whistle for this
01:19:173 (2) - removed clap on head and end lol
Hope that's ok

[Normal]
Changed the begining except kept this slider 00:11:044 (3)

[Hard]
00:18:205 (4,5) - fixed~
00:35:237 (1,2) - Hmm got it from teru21 in a long irc mod, I don't think he post it on the thread. Welp I changed it :3

[Insane]
00:10:657 (4,1,2,3,4) - changed to pentagon
00:18:011 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - made it straight with the help of a long slider
00:39:398 (2) - LOL, well I don't know for kinomi but I was trying to match the vocal here XD drum-voice-drum? triplet? xD
00:51:689 (4,5) - changed this pattern
00:54:398 (2,3) - swapped this 2
01:11:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ohh niice!! changed :3

All update with Kinomi diff + deleted unuse hitsound! Thanks a whole lots again Sakura!

For the record, no video button is STILL missing
Will recheck later tonight orz

This button? xD

Video is in Kinomi mappu

Nah, this one:

Is this some sort of a bug? I there was this beatmap as well that had this kind of a problem, but it eventually got fixed when ranked. We did try to it again, but the error still remains.

And i already told you about the combo colors.
[Hard]
00:09:108 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing suddenly went lower here, while the feeling of the song is the same, so no reason for it to be different.
00:29:044 (3,1) - Spacing error (Doesn't look like an intentional jump)
01:12:011 (3,4,1) - The spacing here looks awkward and unpolished you should try to even it out (it also applies to the combo after) Ex: 01:13:173 (2,3,4)
01:19:173 (5,6) - Why jump just here instead of with the whole combo?
01:19:947 (7,8) - And here spacing goes back to normal.
tl;dr Jumps are fine, but keep them consistent with the music, spacing inconsistencies.

Other diffs seem fine now, after the combo colors and these spacing issues are fixed i may be able to give this a bubble.

All fixed~! Thanks again >///<

Lots of spacing cleanups on Hard, unsnapped notes fixed

[Kinomi's Insane]
01:14:334 (8) - Why is this in 1/6

I think that should be all, hit me when Kinomi replies.

i was on drugs http://puu.sh/cX6Y1.osu

lolololol
Update~

Looks all good
Bubbled!

p/3059441