Cobra wrote: 2h4n3o

Hi! From my queue (you were late but im doing it anyway xD)

General:
1.White and black combo colors shouldn't be used :/ they do look nice with this map but I'm just informing you. The wiki says white combo colors can be blinding during and kiai time. And black circles just look funny I guess. Ohh.. How about Silver and light Yellow? will it work? :3

2. Your MP3 needs to be 128-192kbps. 192kbps is better, obviously. Yours is 122 (so close!) 192kbps is so big... i'll do 128kbps for good ;_;

3. Do you really need your name on the BG? xD oh, Please... T^T

4. You have some weird volume values in the timing section.. i'm seeing 49%, 82%, 72%... they should usually be a multiple of 5. Okay o_o

5. I recommend changing the diff names, they seem silly to me .____. I want to keep them ;^;

6. Your distance is a bit whack in some places, I've noticed. Make sure you ALWAYS use correct distance spacing in Easy/Normal difficulties. But... my hard work ;________________;

Well, that's my general mod. Nice map! Good luck!

GrayKaiser82 wrote: 6c1q3g

-APXH wrote: 623e5

Yeah first, do you need help find the correct version?

Yes(please?) >_<

-APXH wrote: 623e5

Yeah don't need to be so shy. I'll get you the file by PM once I get back from vacation in .

scanter wrote: 476h6t

GL don't abandon your map !

-APXH wrote: 623e5

Current Progess: 34.9% of the beatmap
I have also changed the colours of the combos based on the update recently.

smallboat wrote: 385o36

Hello,for you mod,from my queue ^^ (poor english,sorry ~!)

because your songs more than 3 mins,i choose last 2 diff to mod.



Party Time
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SPOILER

00:32:867 (2) - +note +whistle or No hitsound I'll add note only
00:33:910 (4) - ^ ^

00:41:214 (2) - ^ Following vocals ;^;
00:42:258 (4) - ^ ^
00:55:823 (8) - +whistle ✔
00:56:867 (11) - ^ ✔
00:57:910 (2) - +note following vocals... ;_;
00:58:954 (4) - ^ ✔
01:17:214 (7) - ^ I won't do that o.o
02:04:693 (5) - ^ ✔
02:40:693 (7) - ^ I won't do that too 0_0
03:39:128 (9) - ^ O_O

Ready too -- Advise add 1 spinner? No, sorry ;~;
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SPOILER

01:35:475 (2,7) - +clap ✔
01:37:562 (3,6) - ^ ✔
01:38:606 (8) - ^ ✔
03:16:954 (9) - + whistle No change

General 6t6a34

• 
  Everything seems in order.

Easy Single 2m5f3x

1. 00:37:562 (2) - Would be nice if you move this circle a bit more to the left since it would improve spacing with 00:34:954 (4) - making things much more cleaner. (Make sure to do a spacing recheck in previous and next objects when making changes of course).
   
   How it is

   
   How it could be

   
2. 00:53:736 (1) - Pretty much the same thing as above, would be nice if this circle don't touch with 00:51:128 (3) - . Try moving it down on the grid.
   
   Example

   
3. 01:15:127 (1) - Not something wrong, but I honestly think you could have made this slider a bit better. If you keep in mind this is the only slider you made in a v-shape, you might really want to change this here.
   
   Example

   
4. 02:00:519 (1) - Fix spacing, it should be around 0,70x, not in 0,66x.
   
5. 02:25:041 (1,2,3) - Could have give them a bit more spacing from each other, it looks kinda bad when they are close together like that, also make a spacing recheck here. (Don't mind the approach lines on the screenshots, I've only reduced the time of to get all of them together on the print).
   
   How it is

   
   How it could be

   

Heart Jolter o463z

1. 00:19:823 (1) - I wouldn't make the first object with two arrows, it looks kinda unnecessary and it ruins the flow of the song. Try splitting the slider into two others.
   
   Example

   
2. 00:32:084 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit harsh to hit them because the change of white to red tick and the considerable time between them. You could have placed something in the white ticks to improve gameplay.
   
   Example

   
3. 00:41:214 - Why no object here? I understand you followed the vocals, but adding something between them might improve flow, and you can clearly hear there's a beat there. The same applies for 00:42:258 - 00:49:562 - 00:57:910 - 00:58:954 - 01:17:214 - 02:04:693 - 02:05:736 - 02:11:997 - 02:40:693 - . There's no need to add in all of them of course, but this is for you take a look on how many points there are without a beat that could have been added.
   
4. 01:01:041 (5) - Change whistle for clap like you did on your two next diffs for a consistency.
   
   03:37:301 (2,3) - I honestly think you should move them to the left, it looks pretty bad when playing here.
   
   How it is

   
   How it could be

   

Party Time!! 5m7e

1. 00:24:780 (4,6) - Would be nice if they were perfectly stacked. Which means placing both of them on the same location in the grid (x=184 y:124).
   
2. 00:32:606 - Consider adding object for improving flow. The same applies for 00:33:649 - and 00:34:693 - .
   
3. 00:36:519 - Also why no object here?
   
4. 03:19:301 (2,3,4,5) - Would be nice if this part was consistent with your previous patterns. You've made a sudden change adding just a few circles/sliders in a part where there's no point in doing that, since the song is clearly going. I recommend taking a look here.
   Nothing much to add here.

Ready too, Bingo 4746t

• Streams on this diff could have used a lower distance spacing.
  I couldn't find anything to poke here, good job on jumps.

Wolf wrote: 1h5t4o

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

General 6t6a34

• 
  Everything seems in order.

Easy Single 2m5f3x

1. 00:37:562 (2) - Would be nice if you move this circle a bit more to the left since it would improve spacing with 00:34:954 (4) - making things much more cleaner. (Make sure to do a spacing recheck in previous and next objects when making changes of course). ✔
   
   How it is

   
   How it could be

   
2. 00:53:736 (1) - Pretty much the same thing as above, would be nice if this circle don't touch with 00:51:128 (3) - . Try moving it down on the grid. ✔
   
   Example

   
3. 01:15:127 (1) - Not something wrong, but I honestly think you could have made this slider a bit better. If you keep in mind this is the only slider you made in a v-shape, you might really want to change this here. ✔
   
   Example

   
4. 02:00:519 (1) - Fix spacing, it should be around 0,70x, not in 0,66x. ✔
   
5. 02:25:041 (1,2,3) - Could have give them a bit more spacing from each other, it looks kinda bad when they are close together like that, also make a spacing recheck here. (Don't mind the approach lines on the screenshots, I've only reduced the time of to get all of them together on the print). ✔
   
   How it is

   
   How it could be

   

Heart Jolter o463z

1. 00:19:823 (1) - I wouldn't make the first object with two arrows, it looks kinda unnecessary and it ruins the flow of the song. Try splitting the slider into two others. ✔
   
   Example

   
2. 00:32:084 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit harsh to hit them because the change of white to red tick and the considerable time between them. You could have placed something in the white ticks to improve gameplay. ✔
   
   Example

   
3. 00:41:214 - Why no object here? I understand you followed the vocals, but adding something between them might improve flow, and you can clearly hear there's a beat there. The same applies for 00:42:258 - 00:49:562 - 00:57:910 - 00:58:954 - 01:17:214 - 02:04:693 - 02:05:736 - 02:11:997 - 02:40:693 - . There's no need to add in all of them of course, but this is for you take a look on how many points there are without a beat that could have been added. ;^;
   
4. 01:01:041 (5) - Change whistle for clap like you did on your two next diffs for a consistency. ✔
   
   03:37:301 (2,3) - I honestly think you should move them to the left, it looks pretty bad when playing here. ✔
   
   How it is

   
   How it could be

   

Party Time!! 5m7e

1. 00:24:780 (4,6) - Would be nice if they were perfectly stacked. Which means placing both of them on the same location in the grid (x=184 y:124). ✔
   
2. 00:32:606 - Consider adding object for improving flow. The same applies for 00:33:649 - and 00:34:693 - . ✔
   
3. 00:36:519 - Also why no object here? Q_Q
   
4. 03:19:301 (2,3,4,5) - Would be nice if this part was consistent with your previous patterns. You've made a sudden change adding just a few circles/sliders in a part where there's no point in doing that, since the song is clearly going. I recommend taking a look here.
   Nothing much to add here. :/

Ready too, Bingo 4746t

• Streams on this diff could have used a lower distance spacing.
  I couldn't find anything to poke here, good job on jumps.

Good luck there.
Here, have a star:

HelloSCV wrote: 4ghi

hello

Easy Single

nothing

Heart Jolter

1. i think some parts of this diff is overmapped ( like 01:09:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - here ) ohh.. okay

02:04:171 (7) - NC ✔
03:38:606 (6) - ^ , 03:39:388 (1) - delete NC no change ;^;

Party Time!!

00:35:736 (2) - little bit stacked with previous slider, try to unstack? ✔
00:48:258 (3) - ^ ✔
00:51:649 (4,5) - ^ ✔
01:04:693 (1,2,3) - try to same rhythm with 01:06:780 (1,2,3,4,5) - this? both parts have similar music sounds Don't know what to do with it.. but I'll change it anyways :/
01:12:780 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:44:606 (4) - this 2 repeat slider can cause confusing for players imo ✔
01:57:388 (5) - stack problem ✔
02:28:171 (1,2) - you may know here ✔
02:33:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since you didn't add some jumps like this part, i think you need to keep consistense here too o_o

Ready too, Bingo

00:27:519 (6) - delete this note? don't need this ✔
01:05:214 (4,5,6,7) - i think this square jump isn't really good, since DS is too high and doesn't fit well with song cosidering change this pattern okay
01:12:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ no change ;_;
01:33:910 (13) - NC ✔
02:02:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/2Lo0N.jpg ✔
02:14:606 (2,8) - stack each other perfectly ✔
02:25:041 (1,2,3,4) - another pattern problem here No change, but i have something on my head -.-
02:57:388 (13) - NC ✔
03:14:606 - not used green line Huurrr...
03:22:432 (13,14) - delete these and move slider to 03:22:433 (14) - here and add 2 repeats ✔
03:27:128 (1,2,3,4) - pattern :/ same as 02:25:041 (1,2,3,4) -
03:34:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ No change ;_;
03:42:258 (9) - NC 03:42:780 (1) - delete NC ✔

Good luck~

1. The no-video link isn't available on the beatmap's listing...
2. Just use claps every second and fourth white tick of a stanza on most parts of this song (verses, especially).
3. The difficulties' names might make players confused because they can't differ which diff is Insane, Hard, or Normal.
4. Why are the break times between difficulties different to each other? It's really recommended to make them consistent.
5. Try offset 3158 (+25)? The objects fit with the song way better using that offset for me.

1. 00:19:823 - 00:26:606 - ...You don't need all those green (inherited) timing points there if you just want to switch between samplesets. Just keep the first two, and then use per-object sampleset (just choose a circle or part of a slider, and then choose the sampleset on the "Sampleset" dropdown menu in the left of the editor screen).
2. 00:23:475 (4) - Whistle + finish to make the hitsound pattern here consistent (whistles every second and fourth white ticks)? Fits well with the song anyway, and you used it on Normal (and maybe harder diffs?).
3. 00:25:562 (2) - Remove the repeat? It feels weird to end the slider at 00:26:606...
4. 00:30:258 (5,1) - Spacing inconsistency. This is extremely not recommended on an Easy diff. I'm sure enough your default distance spacing is 0.8x...
5. 00:32:345 (1,2,3,4) - Yep, spacing inconsistency everywhere here.
6. 00:49:041 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 00:53:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - They look randomly placed... Arrange them so they will form a pentagon?
8. 00:55:823 (5,1) - Spacing inconsistency.
9. 01:11:997 (3,2) - They slightly touch each other and that doesn't look good, IMO. Move (2) out from (3)?
10. 01:15:128 (1) - Clap? Goes well with the song.
11. 01:41:736 (4) - Add clap on the head of the slider (the part of the slider with the number)?
12. 01:52:693 (2,4) - Clap?
13. 02:28:693 (1,2) - Swap NC because (2) starts on a new stanza.
14. 02:52:171 (3) - Clap?
15. 02:59:475 (1) - Whistle on the head and clap on the tail (the one with the repeat)?
16. 03:03:127 (2,4) - Clap?
17. 03:07:823 - 03:12:519 - Add claps every second and fourth white tick? (Apply my hitsound suggestions to harder diffs too if you did them.)

1. 00:19:823 - 00:27:128 - Same problem about per-object sampleset and unnecessary inherited timing points as Easy. (This applies to the harder diffs too, btw.)
2. 00:28:171 (6,1) - Swap NC.
3. 00:34:171 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Uh, why is the spacing really inconsistent throughout this part?
4. 00:44:084 (7,8) - ^
5. 00:44:867 (8,1) - Swap NC. I think it's obvious why...
6. 00:46:432 (2,5) - What's with the sudden increase of distance spacing? It isn't allowed.
7. 00:52:171 (4,5,1) - Spacing.
8. 00:53:214 (5,1) - Swap NC.
9. 00:55:301 (5,6) - Spacing.
10. 00:58:954 (4,5) - ^
11. 01:01:041 (7,1) - ^
12. 01:01:562 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders with two repeats are generally not recommended to use as the second repeat is really often unexpected and will throw off players on any diff. I recommend you to refrain from using them. (This warning applies to any other slider like this.)
13. 01:04:693 (1,3) - Swap NC.
14. 01:10:954 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
15. 01:13:041 (1,2) - ^ (Okay, I'm tired of continuing with the swap NC and spacing stuff here, so I'll just say that the spacing between every object must be consistent on Easy and Normal diffs. Also, NCs should be placed at the beginning of a stanza (that tall/big white tick), not ticks before or after it. There might be exceptions, but I'm sure enough there isn't any of it in this song. Fix the NC and spacing problems here by yourself from now on.)
16. 01:40:954 (5,1) - (5)'s tail is partially covering (1)'s repeat. Looks weird, IMO...
17. 02:25:041 - 02:41:736 - Uh. You're using 1.3x, 1.2x, 1.1x, 0.8x, and 0.7x DS here, if you haven't realized yet, and let me say it once again, it's not allowed for the spacing to be inconsistent like this. This is just not allowed everywhere, even on Hard and Insane diffs, because they can be extremely confusing. Just use 0.8x.
18. 02:25:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - Four circles and a slider that is only 1/2 beats in-between... This is kinda hard for a Normal diff, IMO.
19. 02:34:432 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
20. 02:59:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...Why are they suddenly spaced so small like this? They can be confusing to players considering the distance spacing you normally used.
21. 03:07:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
22. 03:22:432 (9) - A 1/4 slider with three repeats can be somewhat unexpected, and its usage isn't recommended on a Normal diff. Just use three circles every 1/2 beats I guess?

1. The combo pattern is really random here. You apply an NC every stanza sometimes, and then every two stanzas at the other times. Make them consistent, please.
2. 00:20:606 (4,5) - Ctrl+G to follow the vocal better? Don't forget to rearrange them so the spacing can stay consistent.
3. 00:25:562 (6) - Move the anchor point/node in the middle of the slider to (152,160)? The pattern here should look way better that way.
4. 00:33:128 (4,5) - Maybe make a jump similar to 00:32:084 (1,2)?
5. 01:10:954 (5) - You should apply NC to the object that begins a jumpy pattern like this...
6. 01:16:693 (6,7) - Combine the circles into a slider? Feels awkward currently, especially since the time between them (2/1 beats) is pretty long.
7. 01:46:954 (10,11) - I find this jump very unexpected because there's nothing that indicates there's supposed to be a jump here.
8. 01:47:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is okay, but this is better.
9. 02:33:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern looks really random... The pentagon doesn't even look like one. Sorry if that sounded rude, that's just what's in my mind. Try to make them look better at least? The flow is also kinda weird there.
10. 02:40:171 (6,7) - Same as 01:16:693 (6,7).

1. The combo pattern still looks patternless here...
2. 00:23:375 (7) - Remove this circle? There's nothing that this circle follows from the song, which means it's overmapped. Overmapping is sometimes fine, but not here.
3. 00:26:505 (2) - ^
4. 00:29:214 - Add a circle to follow the instrument?
5. 00:36:649 - Add a circle to follow the vocal?
6. 01:05:239 (4) - NC because it's the beginning of a jumpy pattern?
7. 01:21:544 (2) - Remove this because there's nothing on the song here?
8. 01:21:780 - There isn't anything here on the song...
9. 01:22:041 - ^
10. 01:25:693 (2) - Remove? I think you know why...
11. 01:25:954 - Uhm, there's nothing here.
12. 01:26:214 - ^
13. 01:59:606 - There's no sound to follow here on the song's music. Maybe you should make the rhythm like this...
14. 02:03:258 - Yep, there's no sound too.
15. 02:13:041 - Add a circle to follow the instrument?
16. 02:13:171 (4,5) - Combine them into a slider?
17. 02:14:084 (1) - I think players will be confused if it's partially overlapped by 02:13:562 (6). They'll think this slider is only 1/4 beats after that previous slider instead of 1/2.
18. 02:31:693 (7) - There's nothing on the song here... Remove?
19. 03:19:432 - ^
20. 03:20:084 (5) - ...You're supposed to use yellow (1/8) ticks here. Feel free to leave it like what it is now, but it will sound a little off here.
21. 03:28:432 (1,2) - Yeah, this kind of pattern might confuse players because the circle is placed near the repeat while the gap between the circle and the slider is 1/2 beats of length. A pattern like this is only usually used if the slider has two repeats instead of one. I suggest to avoid using patterns like this... (Applies to similar patterns later.)

Hinsvar wrote: 683k34

Hi; mod here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. The no-video link isn't available on the beatmap's listing... Don't know how to do that since i'm a newbie :/
2. Just use claps every second and fourth white tick of a stanza on most parts of this song (verses, especially). Okay
3. The difficulties' names might make players confused because they can't differ which diff is Insane, Hard, or Normal. Okay ;___;
4. Why are the break times between difficulties different to each other? It's really recommended to make them consistent. Gonna restart all my hard work again... :/
5. Try offset 3158 (+25)? The objects fit with the song way better using that offset for me. Well... song starts on my offset

>Easy Single

1. 00:19:823 - 00:26:606 - ...You don't need all those green (inherited) timing points there if you just want to switch between samplesets. Just keep the first two, and then use per-object sampleset (just choose a circle or part of a slider, and then choose the sampleset on the "Sampleset" dropdown menu in the left of the editor screen). Hmmm... no
2. 00:23:475 (4) - Whistle + finish to make the hitsound pattern here consistent (whistles every second and fourth white ticks)? Fits well with the song anyway, and you used it on Normal (and maybe harder diffs?). OFC in harder diffs... anyways, no change
3. 00:25:562 (2) - Remove the repeat? It feels weird to end the slider at 00:26:606... If i remove it, i would not know what should i add :/
4. 00:30:258 (5,1) - Spacing inconsistency. This is extremely not recommended on an Easy diff. I'm sure enough your default distance spacing is 0.8x... Okay, I'll change it
5. 00:32:345 (1,2,3,4) - Yep, spacing inconsistency everywhere here. Afghgjhafd
6. 00:49:041 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
7. 00:53:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - They look randomly placed... Arrange them so they will form a pentagon? Penta. symmetry... okay!
8. 00:55:823 (5,1) - Spacing inconsistency. o.o
9. 01:11:997 (3,2) - They slightly touch each other and that doesn't look good, IMO. Move (2) out from (3)? okay
10. 01:15:128 (1) - Clap? Goes well with the song. Gahh.. forgot to do that, thanks for reminding me X3
11. 01:41:736 (4) - Add clap on the head of the slider (the part of the slider with the number)? The nanana part, no change
12. 01:52:693 (2,4) - Clap? sorry, no change ;_;
13. 02:28:693 (1,2) - Swap NC because (2) starts on a new stanza. NOO!! Good time sen. D:
14. 02:52:171 (3) - Clap? nah... sorry
15. 02:59:475 (1) - Whistle on the head and clap on the tail (the one with the repeat)? Okay
16. 03:03:127 (2,4) - Clap? no change, sounds horrible to me:/
17. 03:07:823 - 03:12:519 - Add claps every second and fourth white tick? (Apply my hitsound suggestions to harder diffs too if you did them.) No change, but I'll change it on other diffs.

>Heart Jolter

1. 00:19:823 - 00:27:128 - Same problem about per-object sampleset and unnecessary inherited timing points as Easy. (This applies to the harder diffs too, btw.) Don't really know if this is useful or useless... I'll not change it anyways :/
2. 00:28:171 (6,1) - Swap NC. Okay
3. 00:34:171 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Uh, why is the spacing really inconsistent throughout this part? Well, i don't know about me O_O
4. 00:44:084 (7,8) - ^ Don't know if i'm gonna overlap these D: but i'll change it anyways
5. 00:44:867 (8,1) - Swap NC. I think it's obvious why... okay
6. 00:46:432 (2,5) - What's with the sudden increase of distance spacing? It isn't allowed. o_o
7. 00:52:171 (4,5,1) - Spacing. okay
8. 00:53:214 (5,1) - Swap NC. no change
9. 00:55:301 (5,6) - Spacing. okay
10. 00:58:954 (4,5) - ^ looks fine to me o.o
11. 01:01:041 (7,1) - ^ useless, if another modder mods this, I'll change it
12. 01:01:562 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders with two repeats are generally not recommended to use as the second repeat is really often unexpected and will throw off players on any diff. I recommend you to refrain from using them. (This warning applies to any other slider like this.) Well, okay... :/
13. 01:04:693 (1,3) - Swap NC. uhhmm... no
14. 01:10:954 (3,4,5) - Spacing. okay
15. 01:13:041 (1,2) - ^ (Okay, I'm tired of continuing with the swap NC and spacing stuff here, so I'll just say that the spacing between every object must be consistent on Easy and Normal diffs. Also, NCs should be placed at the beginning of a stanza (that tall/big white tick), not ticks before or after it. There might be exceptions, but I'm sure enough there isn't any of it in this song. Fix the NC and spacing problems here by yourself from now on.) okay, I'll try
16. 01:40:954 (5,1) - (5)'s tail is partially covering (1)'s repeat. Looks weird, IMO... o_o
17. 02:25:041 - 02:41:736 - Uh. You're using 1.3x, 1.2x, 1.1x, 0.8x, and 0.7x DS here, if you haven't realized yet, and let me say it once again, it's not allowed for the spacing to be inconsistent like this. This is just not allowed everywhere, even on Hard and Insane diffs, because they can be extremely confusing. Just use 0.8x. Can somebody help me? o_o
18. 02:25:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - Four circles and a slider that is only 1/2 beats in-between... This is kinda hard for a Normal diff, IMO. ^
19. 02:34:432 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
20. 02:59:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...Why are they suddenly spaced so small like this? They can be confusing to players considering the distance spacing you normally used. ;^;
21. 03:07:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
22. 03:22:432 (9) - A 1/4 slider with three repeats can be somewhat unexpected, and its usage isn't recommended on a Normal diff. Just use three circles every 1/2 beats I guess? okay

>Party Time!!

1. The combo pattern is really random here. You apply an NC every stanza sometimes, and then every two stanzas at the other times. Make them consistent, please. Q_Q
2. 00:20:606 (4,5) - Ctrl+G to follow the vocal better? Don't forget to rearrange them so the spacing can stay consistent. looks fine to me o.o
3. 00:25:562 (6) - Move the anchor point/node in the middle of the slider to (152,160)? The pattern here should look way better that way. DS broke (what is this about? :O)
4. 00:33:128 (4,5) - Maybe make a jump similar to 00:32:084 (1,2)? okay
5. 01:10:954 (5) - You should apply NC to the object that begins a jumpy pattern like this... okay
6. 01:16:693 (6,7) - Combine the circles into a slider? Feels awkward currently, especially since the time between them (2/1 beats) is pretty long. no change
7. 01:46:954 (10,11) - I find this jump very unexpected because there's nothing that indicates there's supposed to be a jump here. o_o
8. 01:47:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is okay, but this is better. following vocals o.o
9. 02:33:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern looks really random... The pentagon doesn't even look like one. Sorry if that sounded rude, that's just what's in my mind. Try to make them look better at least? The flow is also kinda weird there. no change
10. 02:40:171 (6,7) - Same as 01:16:693 (6,7). no change

>Ready too, Bingo?

1. The combo pattern still looks patternless here...
2. 00:23:375 (7) - Remove this circle? There's nothing that this circle follows from the song, which means it's overmapped. Overmapping is sometimes fine, but not here. okay ;^;
3. 00:26:505 (2) - ^ omg, nooo
4. 00:29:214 - Add a circle to follow the instrument? Don't know if i would overmap this, but okay
5. 00:36:649 - Add a circle to follow the vocal? Going to be a bit insane than insane, no change
6. 01:05:239 (4) - NC because it's the beginning of a jumpy pattern? okay
7. 01:21:544 (2) - Remove this because there's nothing on the song here? okay :/
8. 01:21:780 - There isn't anything here on the song... ^
9. 01:22:041 - ^ ^
10. 01:25:693 (2) - Remove? I think you know why... ^
11. 01:25:954 - Uhm, there's nothing here. o_o
12. 01:26:214 - ^ ^
13. 01:59:606 - There's no sound to follow here on the song's music. Maybe you should make the rhythm like this... okay
14. 02:03:258 - Yep, there's no sound too. o_o
15. 02:13:041 - Add a circle to follow the instrument? okay
16. 02:13:171 (4,5) - Combine them into a slider? nahh
17. 02:14:084 (1) - I think players will be confused if it's partially overlapped by 02:13:562 (6). They'll think this slider is only 1/4 beats after that previous slider instead of 1/2. :/
18. 02:31:693 (7) - There's nothing on the song here... Remove? no change '^'
19. 03:19:432 - ^ okay
20. 03:20:084 (5) - ...You're supposed to use yellow (1/8) ticks here. Feel free to leave it like what it is now, but it will sound a little off here. i don't wanna use 1/8 ;_; nevermind, no change
21. 03:28:432 (1,2) - Yeah, this kind of pattern might confuse players because the circle is placed near the repeat while the gap between the circle and the slider is 1/2 beats of length. A pattern like this is only usually used if the slider has two repeats instead of one. I suggest to avoid using patterns like this... (Applies to similar patterns later.) okay

...Okay, I'm done here. This still needs more work. A lot. But don't worry; there should be a lot of experienced mappers and modders out there willing to help you (:

Good luck on the way

1. 00:22:301 (3) - this note is not 1/4, it should be snapped to 00:22:345
2. 00:22:954 (6) - this is similar to above, the rhythm like this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819403
3. 00:27:649 (7) - you can't hide reverse arrow, it's unrankable
4. 01:06:519 (1) - ^
5. 00:38:084 (1) - it looks better to place the slider here http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819406
6. 00:43:301 (1,2,3) - hmm, i'd use slider speeds that gradually get faster, like 0.85x 0.9x 0.95x 1.0x
7. 00:50:345 (3) - this is too close to (4), i suggest ctrl+G that can make this pattern nice
8. 01:09:519 (8) - remove this? without this note it feels beter to play
9. 01:21:388 (1) - remove clap since it had the whistle
10. 01:25:562 (1) - ^
11. I think this part should have a higher volume, about 45%
12. 02:06:649 (2) - this one is pretty hard to read, suggest moving it somewhere that 1-2 and 2-3 are the same distance
13. 03:21:128 - add note!

1. 00:23:128 (4) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819409
2. 00:37:041 (4,5,6) - how so big jumps..
3. 01:01:823 (1) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819411
4. 01:10:171 (2,3) - hmm..
5. 01:14:084 (1) - 3/4 slider seems to fit better here http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819413
6. the clap sound in the next part is too loud, about 50% is enough
7. 01:37:562 (2,3) - hmm
8. 01:43:823 (3,4) - this is really hard
9. 02:40:432 (6) - o.o i think this i not good
10. the next part 85% is too loud, too
11. 03:21:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is too hard, plus too much claps
12. i can see some nice patterns in your map, but it needs improvement in the basic things, like distance designs in the not-jumpy parts etc

1. the sliders with 2 reverse arrows at the beginning is not good to play, suggest shanging to 2 normal sliders
2. 00:33:128 (4,7) - i think you need http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819421
3. 00:42:258 (4,5) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819423
4. 00:59:475 (1,2) - look, it's too close to the slider, you should open the slider a little and place it to the normal 0.8x http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819426 it'd look nicer
5. 01:11:214 (2,3,4) - not good ww
6. 01:40:954 (7) - movedown1grid
7. 02:33:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is too jumpy for a hard diff
8. 03:26:084 (8,9,10) - this is good
9. 03:29:475 (7,8) - you can make this like above, hmm

1. 00:55:823 - end slider here
2. 01:41:736 (1,2,3) - distance!
3. 02:06:649 (2) - i don't recommend using 3/4 in normal like this; a reverse-arrow slider would be nice
4. 02:25:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - distance!
5. 02:30:258 (1) - ^
6. 02:35:997 (5,6) - ^
7. 03:24:258 (2) - ^
8. 03:30:519 (3) - move up a bit
9. I think the beginning is pretty nice, but gets worse later (lazy?)
10. plz make sure everyting is snapped in distance, to 0.8x

1. Shouldn't it be "Ready to Bingo"?
2. 00:19:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not symmetrical.
3. 00:51:910 (7,1) - Small overlapping which doesn't look beautiful.
4. 01:04:693 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A lot of 1/4 seems useless here. Are you sure you follow well the song?
5. 01:08:867 (6) - NC since jump.
6. 01:44:475 (4) - Move it to x=264 y=264 for a better symmetry for 01:43:823 (2,3,4).
7. 01:46:432 (5) - Move it to x=348 y=232 to have a perfect parallelogram.
8. 01:57:649 (2,3) - Not symmetrical.
9. 02:41:997 (2,5) - Not at the same high.
10. 02:42:519 (4,1) - ^
11. 02:51:127 (6) - Move it to x=404 y=128 for a perfect parallelogram with 02:50:084 (1,2,3).
12. 02:54:258 (1,3) - Not at the same high.
13. 03:17:736 (2,3) - Not symmetrical.
14. 03:27:128 (1,4) - ^
15. 03:43:041 (6) - Finish?

1. AR+1, definitely.
2. 00:22:954 (1) - You're not allowed to do this with NC.
3. 00:36:519 (3,4) - Not symmetrical.
4. 00:54:519 (4,7) - Avoid this small overlapping.
5. 00:58:954 (3,1) - ^
6. 01:14:084 (5,2) - Try to stack them.
7. 01:20:345 (7,8,9) - Move 7 to x=192 y=168 and the others as well to keep your zigzag pattern.
8. 01:23:214 (4,6) - Not at the same high.
9. 01:23:736 (6,7) - Overlapping not really good looking.
10. 01:35:997 (3,5) - ^
11. 01:48:258 (3,5) - ^
12. 01:52:171 (2,3) - Not symmetrical.
13. 02:34:954 (7) - Maybe you should put it at the center of the pentagon?
14. 02:47:475 (7) - NC
15. 03:13:301 (2,4,6,8) - Not at the same high.
16. 03:40:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You have whistles in the other diff i moded.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote: 6vr

from my queue



Origin

1. 00:23:128 (4) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819409 fixed, no circle
2. 00:37:041 (4,5,6) - how so big jumps.. Made the jump 1/2 original
3. 01:01:823 (1) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819411 What?
4. 01:10:171 (2,3) - hmm..]Fixed
5. 01:14:084 (1) - 3/4 slider seems to fit better here http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/819413 I'll do that another time
6. the clap sound in the next part is too loud, about 50% is enough ???
7. 01:37:562 (2,3) - hmm Fixed, sliders are now poiting each other
8. 01:43:823 (3,4) - this is really hard Fixed
9. 02:40:432 (6) - o.o i think this i not good Fixed
10. the next part 85% is too loud, too 0.o
11. 03:21:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is too hard, plus too much claps Distance changed, claps not, they go well with the background claps in the actual song
12. i can see some nice patterns in your map, but it needs improvement in the basic things, like distance designs in the not-jumpy parts etc

i think at some point you would remap this, just take these mods above as some ideas how you can improve stuff
take time to look at other prople's good maps in edit mode, you can get more experience
i see good potential in your mapping, good luck.

rezoons wrote: 2iqw

Feeling wheni played the map:
Origin: It's not very good.Some jump are cool in a map but there your whole map is a jump! All your note are a >3x jump. Checked and you'll see. Result it's not very pleasant to play. You should remap this using the distance snapping and do what you want with some jump when the music is more "intense". That's how it usually works. But it's never good to mod a diff. you're not used too. Maybe you should play more insane diff before trying to map one.

Since i thought Origin was too poorly mapped i won't mod it but i'll mod your hard instead.

Simple_Star wrote: 474q10

Easy
HP2 OD2 HP raised by 1, not gonna change the OD

Normal
HP4 AR5 OD5(or4?) All kept, but i'll raise the OD by 1

Hard
HP6 AR7 OD6 Made OD as 4, no change on others

Origin
HP7(or8?) pffuuffuf

Ready to Bingo
HP8 OD7 Okay

like this map, hope to rank and i'm a ELF www Eeheheheheheh X3

Helios_Zul wrote: 62554c

Hello Mod From My Queue

Wow SJ ^.^

General

1. Well Perhaps For High Quality Vid But Nvm Deni made that for me X3

Easy

01:21:388(3) Move To x:304 y:260 Okay
02:54:258(1,2) Change It Like This? (Looks More Proper) Looks nice, but distance is bad... no change

Normal

00:19:823(1) Move It To x:256 y:56 Okay
00:51:128(2,4) Make It Like This? No change... i may break symmetry on the other side

Hard

00:28:432 Move To x:280 y:316 Okay
00:34:171 Perhaps Make A Gap Of This Slider Well... Okay

00:41:475(3) Stack It With Hit Circle(7) Okay
02:25:041(1,3) Change It Like This? Okay

02:52:432 Move It To x:328 y:112 (dont forget the hit circle behind it) No change, it's a little different on the previous side.

Many Of Your Map Has Been Repaired And Totally Perfect
Perhaps BAT would Find More
Good Luck And GO RANKED

sheela901 wrote: 3n562

Hi! From my queue~ Sorry for the late mod

[General]
- No need "super junior" in the tags because it's already in the artist okay
- In "Artist", it's 슈퍼주니어 I will change it if another modder says this.. since i saw a ranked map known it in English.

[Normal]
02:56:345 (1) - Start the spinner at 02:56:084 I don't like adding spinners on red ticks, so no change.

[Hard]
00:42:258 (4) - Put it at x: 256 y: 308 so it won't touch the slider okay

[Ready to Bingo]
01:05:997 (4) - Remove it It would be a DS problem between (3) and (5), no change
01:14:345 (7) - ^ I would break it's sym. no change
01:32:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Something like that Looks nice, but i prefer the current one, thanks for your effort.

SPOILER

01:39:388 (2) - Remove it It may be a horrible sound without this note holding a clap, no change

Good Luck and star!

-APXH wrote: 623e5

Hey, when was the last time you updated my difficulty?

CDFA wrote: 6d6j4w

Overall:
You may want to consider changing the gray combocolor for times like this: https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/890516 okay o.o

BINGO:
00:34:954 (1,2,3,4) - This part seems more like a transitional part rather than an impact, so I think jumps this large wouldn't be fitting Well.. okay, shorten a bit
00:43:301 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:54:519 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:59:475 (1,2,3) - You could adjust this to follow the vocals rather than the drums ppff, okay...
01:08:345 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Jumps seem pretty large for not having that heavy of vocals Well, it is :3
01:29:736 (1,2) - Same as before with these kinda jumps Intentional
02:06:258 (1,2,3) - Follow vocals here okay
02:56:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Things like this seem really hard to read for players, especially with having notes first instead of sliders. So this is not allowed? but i just saw few ranked maps having this kind of "dominant" notes.
Biggest issue with this diff is that there's way too many jumps. Jumps are fine, but only when they're called for, weather it be an impact in the music, or to emphasize a staccato part of the music. A lot of jumps seem to just be there for the sake of being jumps.

Hard:
01:33:910 (11) - If you're gonna have this, have it at 1/3 to match the music The sound seems horrible to me, not gonna change...
02:49:041 (10) - What does this follow in the music? Background music o.o
02:53:214 (9) - ^ ^
02:57:388 (3) - Same as before Again, not gonna change
03:18:258 (1) - What does this follow in the music? Again, background music.
03:22:432 (7) - Same as before NO

Normal:
00:41:736 (3) - Pretty sure this isn't allowed in normals, and if it is, it doesn't make much sense atm since there's nothing in the music signifying that the slider should be like this Well, it is allowed o.o
00:59:475 (1) - ^ ^
01:14:084 (4) - ^ ^
02:25:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Seems like a lot of 1/2 to have here in comparison to the rest of the diff Following the vocals here..

Easy:
Fine, but very 1/1y, which should be avoided but i got this 03:13:041 (1) - & this 03:43:041 (4) - X3

Gabe wrote: 4i6g6f

Sexy, Free & Single, I'm ready to Mingle~

edit: "Ready to Bingo"? You should change it to "Ready to Mingle" instead.. o_o

zorefire wrote: p2og

From queue
[Easy]
03:43:041 (4) - for new players that would look a little hard.
so very sorry that is all I could find ;w;!!!!!!!

07:58 VeeLaHee104: KAISUR
07:59 GrayKaiser82: Wuut? o.o
07:59 *VeeLaHee104 is listening to Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single
07:59 VeeLaHee104: Y U NO RANK THIS?
08:00 GrayKaiser82: olololololo
08:00 GrayKaiser82: hard to find BATs >3<
08:00 GrayKaiser82: Ehehehehehehehe
08:00 VeeLaHee104: then go find mods, hole shet..
08:01 VeeLaHee104: especially you got Gabe. why didn't you tell him to mod it?
08:01 GrayKaiser82: NO
08:01 GrayKaiser82: He's drunk >.<
08:02 VeeLaHee104: hahah okki, nevermind that, I'll mod your map ~
08:02 VeeLaHee104: if it's perfect i'll give you stars :)
08:03 GrayKaiser82: \:D/
08:04 GrayKaiser82: btw
08:04 *GrayKaiser82 is editing Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single [Origin]
08:04 GrayKaiser82: ^ this diff is a GD
08:05 VeeLaHee104: for whom?
08:05 GrayKaiser82: You'll find out later, i'm sure :)
08:05 GrayKaiser82: Mod in arabic
08:05 GrayKaiser82: But mod Origin in English, GDer may not understand
08:07 VeeLaHee104: okkiiii ^3^
08:07 VeeLaHee104: Gonna mod your map soon ~

1. Sdeg "Origin" Huwa GD? dhifi Esmeh fi Tags.

1. S3uba tam ~

1. S3uba zein, L1ken 9ayed 1/2y ...

1. S3uba ba3ad tam ~

1. Nice difficulty, but too much jumps!! i hope it's allowed.

1. Mthil Origin, L1ken alqafz1t aqal... bs S3uba zein!

VeeLaHee104 wrote: 25oz

SMEXI FWEE AN SINGUL AM REDY TU BINGO <3

modreq via in-game

SPOILER

07:58 VeeLaHee104: KAISUR
07:59 GrayKaiser82: Wuut? o.o
07:59 *VeeLaHee104 is listening to Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single
07:59 VeeLaHee104: Y U NO RANK THIS?
08:00 GrayKaiser82: olololololo
08:00 GrayKaiser82: hard to find BATs >3<
08:00 GrayKaiser82: Ehehehehehehehe
08:00 VeeLaHee104: then go find mods, hole shet..
08:01 VeeLaHee104: especially you got Gabe. why didn't you tell him to mod it?
08:01 GrayKaiser82: NO
08:01 GrayKaiser82: He's drunk >.<
08:02 VeeLaHee104: hahah okki, nevermind that, I'll mod your map ~
08:02 VeeLaHee104: if it's perfect i'll give you stars :)
08:03 GrayKaiser82: \:D/
08:04 GrayKaiser82: btw
08:04 *GrayKaiser82 is editing Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single [Origin]
08:04 GrayKaiser82: ^ this diff is a GD
08:05 VeeLaHee104: for whom?
08:05 GrayKaiser82: You'll find out later, i'm sure :)
08:05 GrayKaiser82: Mod in arabic
08:05 GrayKaiser82: But mod Origin in English, GDer may not understand
08:07 VeeLaHee104: okkiiii ^3^
08:07 VeeLaHee104: Gonna mod your map soon ~

Eheheh X3

[General]

1. Sdeg "Origin" Huwa GD? dhifi Esmeh fi Tags. Kay

[Easy]
03:23:475 (3) - Dhifi finish, 3shan kiai inshallah ~

1. S3uba tam ~

[Normal]
00:44:867 (7) - Dhifi finish. Kay
01:36:519 (3) - 1 shbaka fi ala3la ^
01:39:128 (1,2,3) - Dhifi Clap. ^
01:43:301 (6) - Dhifi finish. ^
02:06:258 (2,3) - Msafa Kbeer 9 Ghalat... inzein, sh9 bha6y o.o

1. S3uba zein, L1ken 9ayed 1/2y ...

[Hard]
02:08:345 (7) - Dhifi NC? L1, 3shan Al-break m1btkhreb.. >_<

1. S3uba ba3ad tam ~

[Ready to Bingo]
02:06:258 (1) - Dhifi whistle. Kay
02:08:345 (1) - Dhifi finish. ^

1. Mthil Origin, L1ken alqafz1t aqal... bs S3uba zein!

Another mutual mod, Zzk-Zzk! It's already perfect have some stars !
Now go find BATs and rank this before i lose my patience !!

gideon5504 wrote: 6u115k

Hi~From M4M queue.

General:
~Clean :3

Easy:
~03:13:041 (1) - I think you could skip this bit, cuz the reverse slider + stack could confuse beginners. Well, it doesn't to others o.o
~Nothing more.

Normal:
~01:07:823 (9) - NC. okay
~02:55:301 (4) - +1 reverse? no change, giving a player's chance to prepare for the spinner.

Hard:
~00:32:084 (1,2) - Swap combos. nahh, music changes.
~01:33:910 (11) - Doesn't really fit with the music. It does o_o
~02:27:128 (4) - NC. okay
~02:43:823 (6) - ^ no change, part of the pattern.
~02:57:388 (3) - This kind of reverse slider doesn't really feel right in the music. Don't really know why you mentioned this, consisting with the bingo diff.
~03:21:388 (6) - NC.okay
~03:22:432 (7) - same problem. same like before

Ready to Bingo:
~00:36:519 (1,2) - Triplet doesn't fit. Following the vocals here.
~01:32:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This was sudden to me, I thought it was going to be another triplet and so on... I suggest you follow the vocal here, since that's wat u did b4. nahh, following the music here is better, just gonna keep them.. for a while
~02:56:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ^ ^
~03:21:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ Jumps here work better. I don't want to make more jumps here ;_;
~Pretty nice map here

Overall the structure of ur map is excellent (wish I could do that ) I was quite fascinated by ur Bingo diff, it was great :3 Apart from Origin diff (that I felt) the mapset is pretty good. Keep it up! Hope this gets ranked :3 >3<

That's all from me! Good luck!

gideon5504 wrote: 6u115k

Hi~From M4M queue.

General:
~Clean :3


Origin:
~This diff is kinda weird..Many jumps dun fit and the distance spacing is also inconsistent leading to confusion.
I'm sorry I can't do a mod on this, cuz the map just doesn't feel right to me Furthermore, players need to hear the notes in the map and I think the volume is too soft + so many green lines. @@


Overall the structure of ur map is excellent (wish I could do that ) I was quite fascinated by ur Bingo diff, it was great :3 Apart from Origin diff (that I felt) the mapset is pretty good. Keep it up! Hope this gets ranked :3

That's all from me! Good luck!

VeeLaHee104 wrote: 25oz

SMEXI FWEE AN SINGUL AM REDY TU BINGO <3

modreq via in-game

SPOILER

07:58 VeeLaHee104: KAISUR
07:59 GrayKaiser82: Wuut? o.o
07:59 *VeeLaHee104 is listening to Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single
07:59 VeeLaHee104: Y U NO RANK THIS?
08:00 GrayKaiser82: olololololo
08:00 GrayKaiser82: hard to find BATs >3<
08:00 GrayKaiser82: Ehehehehehehehe
08:00 VeeLaHee104: then go find mods, hole shet..
08:01 VeeLaHee104: especially you got Gabe. why didn't you tell him to mod it?
08:01 GrayKaiser82: NO
08:01 GrayKaiser82: He's drunk >.<
08:02 VeeLaHee104: hahah okki, nevermind that, I'll mod your map ~
08:02 VeeLaHee104: if it's perfect i'll give you stars :)
08:03 GrayKaiser82: \:D/
08:04 GrayKaiser82: btw
08:04 *GrayKaiser82 is editing Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single [Origin]
08:04 GrayKaiser82: ^ this diff is a GD
08:05 VeeLaHee104: for whom?
08:05 GrayKaiser82: You'll find out later, i'm sure :)
08:05 GrayKaiser82: Mod in arabic
08:05 GrayKaiser82: But mod Origin in English, GDer may not understand
08:07 VeeLaHee104: okkiiii ^3^
08:07 VeeLaHee104: Gonna mod your map soon ~

[General]

1. Sdeg "Origin" Huwa GD? dhifi Esmeh fi Tags.

1. S3uba ba3ad tam ~

What does this mean?
[Origin]
I'll mod this in english as you requested me.. Thanks.
00:36:519 (1,2,3) - fix x0.4 distance spacing. Spaced out the combos
00:43:823 (1,1) - remove NC, omg... Is it that annoying? I'll see what the XATs say
01:27:649 (4) - 2 grid up Thank you
01:29:736 (4) - Add NC because going to another pattern You're right.
01:34:693 (8,1) - this is kinda hard, the note (1) is almost hard to read for players.. Moved it down
01:37:562 (2,3) - big jump there! I'm perfectly capable of reaching it.
01:43:823 (3,4) - same like 00:36:519 (1,2,3) - Spaced out
01:50:606 (1,1) - same like 00:43:823 (1,1) - Space out
02:38:084 (2,3) - huehuehue.. overlap What do you mean?
02:53:214 (5) - Same like 01:29:736 (4) - Thank you
03:32:345 (3) - 4 grid left Deh OK

1. Nice difficulty, but too much jumps!! i hope it's allowed.

1. Mthil Origin, L1ken alqafz1t aqal... bs S3uba zein!

Another mutual mod, Zzk-Zzk! It's already perfect have some stars !
Now go find BATs and rank this before i lose my patience !! But all the BATs hate me~ *w*

Irreversible wrote: 4i6z36

no kd for this, please!

First of all, hi!

I've looked over your map, and I have to say that there are a quite few major issues which have to be fixed first.
Let's talk about your Origin diff. o_o

I had a look at CDFA's mod, and he was right: there are definetly too many jumps, which make no sense at all. Of course it is cool to give the map a bit more exciting stuff with putting jumps, but it's quite overused like this. I made it jumpy because the song was quite slow, so to make it harder, I made it up with jumps

00:05:214 (6,7) - For example this one, why is it there? 00:03:128 (1,2) - I could agree with you on that one, because it's like the begin, but still, this one mentioned above makes it odd to play. Symmetry

00:36:519 (1,2,3,4) - Next, things like this look weird, because you didn't use a certain distance snap, which you should in cases like this, just for readability. ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

By the way, all silenced slider starts are unrankable.I'll do something about it. I'll add some hitsounds, and ask Kaiser to ask them to the beatmap.

00:36:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You used jumps all over the way, so how is a player supposed to get this 1/4 jump? The 1/4 thing sounds a bit weird as well, first of all because it's silenced, and secondly because it doesn't really fit the background. When I was originally doing this part, I was listening to the little electronic sounds effects in the background

01:49:041 (10,11,12,13) - If you listen a bit more closely, you can hear that the background is quite quiet here, and you should give the lyrics the prioirty here, but that's up to you of course. OK

02:00:258 (2,3,4) - The using of different DS types with streams is also not really recommendable, it makes everything unconfortable to play, because the player has to think all the time whether its 1/2 or 1/4. I was in a rush...I'll do something

But of course there are good parts as well. For example 02:08:345 (1,2,3,4) - , this really flowed nice! You should use jumps like this more often, they're great. For me to do that, Super Junior would have to DRRAAAAAAGG out their words for it to work (In my case)

So, what I basically suggest is go over your Insanes again and rework most of it's parts, to make it more consistent and more fun to play, by help of using the things mentioned above. So for now that's the main advice for you, if you need some further help with patterns, or the jumps, don't hesitate to ask one of the QAT-, we'd be all glad to help you!~

-APXH wrote: 623e5

VeeLaHee104 wrote: 25oz

[General]

1. Sdeg "Origin" Huwa GD? dhifi Esmeh fi Tags.

1. S3uba ba3ad tam ~

What does this mean?

GrayKaiser82 wrote: 6c1q3g

She's just asking if Origin is truly a GD, added your name on Tags already.

Anyways, Updated

-APXH wrote: 623e5

1. Why would she ask if it was a GD? The name of the difficulty doesn't fit in with the rest of the group -_-;;;
2. Did you include my hitsounds?

gideon5504 wrote: 6u115k

Hi~From M4M queue.

General:
~Clean :3

Origin:
~This diff is kinda weird..Many jumps dun fit and the distance spacing is also inconsistent leading to confusion.
I'm sorry I can't do a mod on this, cuz the map just doesn't feel right to me Furthermore, players need to hear the notes in the map and I think the volume is too soft + so many green lines. @@ I'm doing something about the hitsounds. The soft-hitnormal sound file is a small kick (drums). As for the jumps, the song is slow, and I hate it when people use DT on a good song. And for the green lines, too late~

Overall the structure of ur map is excellent (wish I could do that ) I was quite fascinated by ur Bingo diff, it was great :3 Apart from Origin diff (that I felt) the mapset is pretty good. Keep it up! Hope this gets ranked :3

That's all from me! Good luck!

BounceBabe wrote: 5w6

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

- The combos are not really bright and don't have much contrast with the video. Consider making them a little brighter. okay

Easy

01:17:214 - You should add a circle or a 1/1 slider here, this place is very empty due to an element missing. It's also an important beat you missed. You really should put an element here. okay
01:51:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Quiet a few circles in a row. It's not an issue but for beginners this might get a little exhausting to play these in a row. Maybe add a slider in between to spice it. hmm.. okay
02:07:301 (1) - Remove NC, not needed here. forgot to remove that while remapping this before, fixed
02:11:997 (5,1) - Stacking is not good in an Easy difficultie. It can confuse beginners due to them only just started learning how to play. The patterns should be in a row and simple movments. okay
02:14:606 (3,1) - Spacing is changing here, you need to fix this. Symmetry, but nevermind.. fixed
02:22:954 (1,1) - There needs to be a 1/1 break between spinnerend and sliderstart. Beginners need time to prepare for next elements and need this space. I'll consider with it, if other modder mentions this again, i'll change it.
02:39:128 (2,3) - Spacing difference again. Fix this please. This can get quiet confusing even if its tiny for the beginners. okay
03:13:041 (1) - This is not good for Easys nor Normals. The player doesnt expect it due to them not being used to have so many repeats. They only get to know 1 repeat, or in a very long slider there can be more repeats, but this is not playable for them. Make a spinner or else but this is not good. spinner doesn't make sense in this part of music, but i'll remove it anyway
03:26:606 (1,2) - NC should be on the 2 slider and not on the short one. swapped them
03:31:823 (1,2) - Spacing difference again. okay
03:43:041 - Since you map to the vocal you should let the map end here, saying this for all difficulties. I've did that once, but i discovered that 1/2 would be hard for beginners to read, so no change

Normal

00:35:475 (2) - jericho2442 told me about those slow down sliders, they are neither allowed nor rankable nowadays. Please remove them and make something else instead. well, okay
00:58:432 (2,3) - The 3 is 0,3x spacing too far away from the 2. You need to make normal spacing here, don't break if because of symmetry. made 0.8x spacing
01:17:736 (3) - Spacing issue, needs to be further away. okay
01:58:954 (4,5) - Unstack these, it's not clearly visible. The circle is very hidden. Also since you stacked this before 01:58:432 (3,4) - this might be played as a 1/1 as well instead 1/2 okay
02:06:258 (2,3) - First, the spacing is wrong and needs to be fixed. Second, 02:05:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this is a very long pattern and tough to play as well because its very close together. You need to remove a few circles or make a longer slider. It's a pattern which is used more in Hards. fixed spacing, second one changed a bit..
02:20:345 (1,2) - I don't really think this is suiting your previous vocal mapping. The 1/2 slider start 02:21:128 - doesn't relate to vocals and the vocal starts here 02:21:388 - . You should move the 1/1 slider to here 02:21:388 - . okay
02:26:867 (6,7) - Spacing difference, fix this please. using 1.0x spacing
02:45:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - That's again a very long snake and so clustered. Maybe you should delete a circle to make it less long. I think it's okay
03:22:432 (4) - Like on Easy. This is not good for Easys nor Normals. The player doesnt expect it due to them not being used to have so many repeats. They only get to know 1 repeat, or in a very long slider there can be more repeats, but this is not playable for them. Also, the sliderstream doesn't releate to anything in the music either. It actually a 1/8 stream. changed it to 1/2 slider
03:42:519 (5,6) - Unstack this please, the note is a little hidden and it doesn't make a good ending. made the (5) slider has one repeat

Hard

00:40:432 (1,2) - First you have this jump, which is only done for symmetry, and then you have the same spacing but not same playment 00:42:519 (5,1) - on this. You need to move the 1 circle further away or it might be considered as jump as well. It looks fine to me
01:08:606 - I think this will play better if you move the circle up. http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1058715 distance looks bad, but i'll do it on my own way
01:30:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is really confusing to play. 01:31:301 (3,5) - This is the same spacing than the normal 1/2 spacing. You better rotate these parts 01:30:780 (1,2,3,4) - so its better to play and more visible how to play. Like this for example http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1058724 okay
02:08:084 (6,1) - Wrong spacing again. Fix this. using 1.3x spacing as a small jump
02:10:693 (2,3,4,5,6) - These are way to many stacks and is confusing in gameplay. You need to spread this a little more so its better to play. 02:09:910 (1,3,5) - Since they are below the slider they are also hard to read. but i've seen a ranked map did this, but i'll change some
02:14:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same with this. 02:19:041 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same for copy paste. same as above

Origin

This difficulty is lack of spacing and general rhythm relating to the song. Either fix this up, remap it or delete the difficulty but this is just a mess. Deleting this difficulty will change the future, remapping would be better 8D

Ready to Bingo

- This is obviously an Insane and shouldn't have such a weird name. ikr?

00:20:606 (4) - If you move this a little lower you wouldn't of break your consistant spacing. okay
00:27:128 (3) - This is copy pasted and done for symmetry but the spacing is wrong overall. The actual problem is this slider 00:26:867 - Since its ending at the bottom of the screen. I suggest you to 00:26:345 (2) - make only a single slider here and add a circle 00:26:867 - here so you don't break your spacing. changed a bit
00:30:780 (3,4) - Again, compared with this spacing 00:31:041 (4,5) - it doesn't fit. It should be consistant and again, it's the same rhythm but spacing is different which is confusing and doesn't play well. okay
00:34:432 (6,7) - This obviously needs to be further away, since its too close. 00:33:388 (4,5) - You have this spacing and then you make that 00:34:432 (6,7) - . It's clustered and not good to play. Move 00:34:954 (7) - this further away so its actually playable. okay
00:39:780 (6) - Rhythmwise, there is no beat, melody or something relating to that, so please remove it. okay
00:39:910 (7,8,1) - Same problem like on the Origin difficulty. Spacing like this is not consistant. Its different every time and its not good to play. Its not a jump, its just a weird spacing change. The constant 1/2 rhythm makes it play even more weird. These spacing changes are just not good and they are through the whole map. They don't make sense at all and don't relate to some kind of beat or anything in the music. This is really random. You need to make these consistant. okay, gonna use 1.3x spacing
00:43:301 (7) - Same as 00:34:432 (6,7) - okay

I think this is ongoing through the map, you need to be aware of those things before you make pattern. I really recommend you to fix this up in the whole difficulty. The map has potential but it's clearly not ready yet. Overall you made a good first map though.

Good luck with further mapping (:

10crystalmask01 wrote: a2i24

Ello o3o random mod!

[Easy]
00:26:084 (3) - I suggest adding a reverse on this slider, since vocals haven't finish yet. giving the player a little rest
00:53:214 (4) - NC okay
02:13:562 (2,3) - Bad flow,consider re-modelling these sliders. it looks fine to me
02:18:780 (4) - NC okay
02:25:041 (1) - Change clap on the head to a finish. since the chorus started, clap should go first
02:52:693 (3,1) - Needs to be blanketed better. it would get worse if i do that
03:21:910 - Missing a clap here on the slider tick following the little drum on the background music
03:23:997 (1,3) - Stack? okay

[Normal]
00:29:214 (2,4) - Stacking them will look better. okay
00:35:475 (2) - Try adding whistle on the reverse. okay
00:40:171 (4) - I don't really see the point of this slider having a twisty turn? Doesn't fit in both vocals nor the music in the background. okay
01:15:910 -Should have a note her to hit the 'da' note in geudael (romanized lyrics) okay
01:18:258 - Try this rhythm: okay

01:59:997 (5) - Place under 01:58:954 (4) - 's tail but BounceBabe mentioned this, it's really hidden and hard to read for players, no change
02:08:084 (2) - Remove clap,it breaks the hitsound pattern. consisting with other diffs
02:21:389 (3,4) - Doesn't follow the music. vocal following

[Hard]
00:52:432 (4,5) - Should be curved,for a better blanket. already blanketed better.
01:24:258 - You need to add a note here for the sake of consistency, not symmetry. okay
01:33:128 and 01:33:649 - ^ Consider re-mapping this part a bit. okay
02:31:823 (3) - Either make this a pointy slider, or make 02:30:258 (1,2) - curved sliders. Gonna consider, i'll change it if another modder says this.
02:50:084 (1,4,7) - Really should move them apart, since their tails are touching 02:51:128 (4) - 's head. okay

..Sorry, can't mod anything beyond this It's okay, i mostly need mods on these diffs

Hope this helps~! ^^

Lapis Aoki wrote: 3uyo

I want this map to get ranked, so I'm modding it. >w< It's great to get a mod from a person i don't know, but lives in my country 8''>

[Easy]
01:52:693 -Make the slider shape like the slider on 01:54:258 Already shaped
02:08:867 -Whistle.
02:09:910 -^
02:18:780 -^
02:19:823 -^
02:22:954 -^
02:34:954 -Finish.
02:40:171 -Whistle.
03:25:041 -^
03:30:258 -^

All hitsounds are fixed~
[Normal]
01:20:084 -Add a note. Tiring
01:27:128 -Make the slider smaller till 01:27:649 I may break the blanket's flow
01:27:910 -Add a note 01:28:171 Add a note under the note at 01:27:910 ^
01:55:823 -Whistle.
01:58:954 -^
02:10:432 -^
02:19:823 -^
02:26:084 -^
02:27:128 -^
02:28:171 -^
02:29:214 -Clap.
02:31:301 -Whistle.
02:39:128 -^
02:40:171 -^
03:21:910 -^

All hitsounds fixed~
GL ~ ! ^^

Lapis Aoki wrote: 3uyo

Nooooo ! This map went to graveyard. ;-;

Irreversible wrote: 4i6z36

no kd for this, please!

First of all, hi!
sexy babe

I've looked over your map, and I have to say that there are a quite few major issues which have to be fixed first.
Let's talk about your Origin diff.

I had a look at CDFA's mod, and he was right: there are definetly too many jumps, which make no sense at all. Of course it is cool to give the map a bit more exciting stuff with putting jumps, but it's quite overused like this.

00:05:214 (6,7) - For example this one, why is it there? 00:03:128 (1,2) - I could agree with you on that one, because it's like the begin, but still, this one mentioned above makes it odd to play.

00:36:519 (1,2,3,4) - Next, things like this look weird, because you didn't use a certain distance snap, which you should in cases like this, just for readability.

By the way, all silenced slider starts are unrankable.

00:36:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You used jumps all over the way, so how is a player supposed to get this 1/4 jump? The 1/4 thing sounds a bit weird as well, first of all because it's silenced, and secondly because it doesn't
really fit the background.

01:49:041 (10,11,12,13) - If you listen a bit more closely, you can hear that the background is quite quiet here, and you should give the lyrics the prioirty here, but that's up to you of course.

02:00:258 (2,3,4) - The using of different DS types with streams is also not really recommendable, it makes everything unconfortable to play, because the player has to think all the time whether its 1/2 or 1/4.

But of course there are good parts as well. For example 02:08:345 (1,2,3,4) - , this really flowed nice! You should use jumps like this more often, they're great.

The Ready to Bingo has quite the same issues, although the jumps has a symmetry pattern here, which helps to make it more readable again. I would reduce some forced symmetry jumps though, because they just let the player think: why is a jump here? :c

Easy, Normal and Hard look good though! I really like that special hitsound too.

So, what I basically suggest is go over your Insanes again and rework most of it's parts, to make it more consistent and more fun to play, by help of using the things mentioned above. So for now that's the main advice for you, if you need some further help with patterns, or the jumps, don't hesitate to ask one of the QAT-, we'd be all glad to help you!~

Yasora wrote: 2t3d38

The title describe me perfectly 8)
*runs

Insane :
I think u should lower the AR to 8
00:26:867 (8) - try to replace in somehere else because the distance to the next slider is too close
00:34:693 - try to add circle to feel the empty beat in x:256 y:160

Gamu wrote: 1u6u2d

hello~ Request from Gamu's Standard Modding Queue

[ Easy]

1. OD +1 pls. It is too low. Okay
2. 00:34:954 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
3. 00:34:954 (1) - Add a normal-hitclap at the start point. It is missing. ^
4. 00:35:997 (2) - ^ ^
5. 00:44:867 (1) -Please change to normal-hitclap from whistle at the end point. It will be better. Nope, Following the "lalala" part
6. 00:46:432 (3) - ^ (at the start point). Okay
7. 01:13:041 (1) - Remove a new combo. Okay, and i also swapped NC on the previous note due to new track
8. 01:14:084 (3,1,2) - Let's change the placement in order to create a blanket sliders? Of course, I was pasted the code and image. Please use all means If you prefer it :3 Okay, but didn't use the code :/
   
   image & code

   
   

   364,248,74084,2,0,P|396:208|404:160,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   344,80,75128,21,8,0:0:0:0:
   244,80,75649,2,0,P|212:116|198:166,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

9. 01:17:736 (4) - Add a finish. missing? Okay
10. 01:52:171 (2) - Please change to clap from whistle at the end point. ^
11. 01:52:693 (3) - Add a something like a clap sound at the slidertick. (it is normal-slidertick2) ^
12. 01:58:432 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
13. 01:59:997 (6,1) - Swap these new combos. They are breaking the consistency of the new combos. Okay
14. 02:03:649 (1,2) - ^ ^
15. 02:05:736 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
16. 02:18:780 (1) - ^ New track, but okay..
17. 02:38:084 (5,1) - Swap these new combos. Same as 01:59:667. Okay
18. 02:40:171 (3) - Add a finish at the end point. Okay

[ Normal]

1. HP +1 and OD +2 pls. Difficulty balance is bad. Okay
2. 00:21:910 (1) - Remove a new combo. Nope, the new track here is important
3. 00:34:954 (4) - Same as Easy diff, add a normal-hitclap at the start point. And the end point too, Okay
4. 00:45:388 (1) - Add a normal-hitclap at the start point because not enough. Okay
5. 00:46:432 (2) - ^ ^
6. 00:47:475 (3) - Move to x:404 y:92 in order to create the perfect Sliderbows. Okay, i hope it doesn't break the spacing gap.
   
   image

   
7. 00:59:475 (1) - Remove a new combo. Nope, same reason
8. 01:06:780 (1) - Beautiful blanket is collapsing. Therefore, Move to x:280 y:180. 01:07:301 (2) - Move to x:392 y:220. Okay
9. 01:09:910 (1) - 1 grid left in order to create the perfect Sliderbows. Nazi, but Okay
10. 01:14:084 (5,1) - Swap these new combos. They are breaking the consistency of the new combos. Okay
11. 01:29:736 (1,2) - ^ ^
12. 01:52:171 (2) - Add a normal-hitclap at the start point and remove a whistle at the end point. The clap is a necessary but whistle's unnecessary. ^
13. 01:53:214 (3) - ^ ^
14. 01:54:258 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
15. 01:58:954 (1,2) - Swap these new combos. The Reason has already been written (⇒ They are breaking the consistency of the new combos.) ik ik, Okay
16. 02:02:084 (1) - Remove a new combo. Okay
17. 02:04:693 (7,1) - Swap these new combos. Same as 01:58:954..etc ^
18. 03:28:171 (6,1) - ^ ^

[ Hard]

1. HP, AR and OD +1 pls. Okay
2. 00:45:388 (2) - Please change to normal-hitclap from whistle. It will be better. ^
3. 00:45:910 (4) - ^ at the end point. ^
4. 01:05:736 (7) - Add a new combo. ^
5. 01:11:997 (7,1) - Swap these new combos. I think so ^
6. 01:14:084 (7,1) - ^ ^
7. 02:15:388 (2,3) - I feel very strange it. Please try these. And i think it's fine, i followed vocals a little in this track
   
   image

   
8. 02:33:389 (1) - It makes the perfect stack? It is necessary to make modifications if you think so Spacing would look bad, but Okay
9. 02:37:041 (1,2) - Swap these new combos. Okay
10. 02:38:607 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
11. 03:16:693 (4,1) - Swap these new combos. ^
12. 03:27:649 (6) - Add a new combo. ^
13. 03:33:388 (6,1) - Swap these new combos. ^
14. 03:35:997 (6,1) - ^ ^
15. 03:42:258 (5,1) - ^ ^

[ Insane]

1. HP is too high >< HP7 would be better.
2. 00:34:954 (1) - Add a normal-hitclap. There is a backsound like a clap.
3. 00:35:997 (5) - ^
4. 00:45:910 (5) - Please change to normal-hitclap from whistle. Same as Hard diff.
5. 00:46:954 (9) - ^
6. 01:52:170 (3) - ^
7. 01:53:214 (7) - ^
8. 02:44:866 (1) - Remove a new combo.
9. 03:41:736 (1,4) - Swap these new combos.
   
   Uhmhmfmfmmhmf All fixed

Some new combos was a strange and some claps is missing.
I pointed out mainly them but there may be a place that have overlooked. Thanks for pointing it out
Well, I hope that this map is rank :3/ I hope the BAT i called can bubble this...

1. 00:53:606 - I can hear a vocal here, and I'd suggest you to follow that since it sounds so empty without that. Add a note here. Also, 00:53:867 (5) - this note is unnecessary to appear at here, I can't hear any sound here, and the rhythm feels awkward imo. Remove this note please.
2. 01:19:562 (6,1,2) - In my opinion, the distance between (6,1) and (1,2) should be same, since the music between them are really the same. You can move it to x:459, y:135 (or somewhere near that place), that would be a great flow, too.
3. 01:57:910 (1,2) - This rhythm feels awkward to me because it's not following anything. I think you can try to follow the vocals here, the players will be much easier to read how objects going.
   
4. 02:15:388 (4,5) - I'd prefer to follow the vocal "ah ah ah ah" and put notes on the red/white ticks, not two 1/4 sliders.
5. 02:33:388 (5) - / 02:37:562 (7) - Pretty sure you forget a new combo here. :p
6. 03:16:432 - This vocal sounds really important and you shouldn't miss that. It sounds really empty during the sliderslide since you didn't put any notes there. I think you can change 03:16:171 (5) - into a 1/2 slider and a note to fix this issue.
   

1. 02:15:388 (8,9) - Same as what I've pointed out here in Insane diff.
   Nice o.o/

Flask wrote: 5l1l4k

Hi!

[Insane]

1. 00:53:606 - I can hear a vocal here, and I'd suggest you to follow that since it sounds so empty without that. Add a note here. Also, 00:53:867 (5) - this note is unnecessary to appear at here, I can't hear any sound here, and the rhythm feels awkward imo. Remove this note please. About the rhythm you told to add a circle, You'd really need to hear closer on the vocal 00:53:475 (2) -, and you might know it was from the 1/2 beat of the rhythm's track. Also, removing the circle here as I'm trying to follow the vocal on this part won't make sense. I'm using it for the vocal track's rhythm.
2. 01:19:562 (6,1,2) - In my opinion, the distance between (6,1) and (1,2) should be same, since the music between them are really the same. You can move it to x:459, y:135 (or somewhere near that place), that would be a great flow, too. Didn't move on the place you mentioned, but made it on my own way
3. 01:57:910 (1,2) - This rhythm feels awkward to me because it's not following anything. I think you can try to follow the vocals here, the players will be much easier to read how objects going. Nice, okay
   
4. 02:15:388 (4,5) - I'd prefer to follow the vocal "ah ah ah ah" and put notes on the red/white ticks, not two 1/4 sliders. You don't look like you're following the music background here, but okay, vocals can be heard more than it. ;_;
5. 02:33:388 (5) - / 02:37:562 (7) - Pretty sure you forget a new combo here. :p Omg, nice catch, kk :V
6. 03:16:432 - This vocal sounds really important and you shouldn't miss that. It sounds really empty during the sliderslide since you didn't put any notes there. I think you can change 03:16:171 (5) - into a 1/2 slider and a note to fix this issue. Okay
   

[Hard]

1. 02:15:388 (8,9) - Same as what I've pointed out here in Insane diff. Okay
   Nice o.o/ Not really ;^;

I don't see any big issues in easier difficulties, hope I can help you. Good luck!

Gray Veyron wrote: 6k514b

^ plz quit osu soon ^

Lapis Aoki wrote: 3uyo

Gray Veyron wrote: 6k514b

^ plz quit osu soon ^

In your dreams lol

Sieg wrote: 6nb42

Hello mr. Gray Veyron

General

1. You have 2 unused *.osb files in song dir, since you didn't use storyboard you can safety delete them both owps, Okay
2. Video quality is rather low Ofc, but if i increase it's definition, the filesize increases, it won't fit the beatmap submission. I think i will try to find one.
3. You can use 슈퍼주니어 as artist and Super Junior as romanised artist Okay
4. Also song title will be 섹시프리앤싱글 ^
5. Tags: suju, pop Okay, but not "pop" due that runaway BAT added it on the genre, so it's already counted there.
6. Hitsounds - hitnormal is too clunk, hard to hear Most can hear, if you mean by raising the volume, It'll be more clunky, I'll just keep it.
7. Combo colors seems a bit random :3 Well, yes it is random, especially the red and blue is for the kiai times :3

Insane

1. 00:23:997 (1,2,3) - extended sliders here they don't really reflect anything, just use of 1\2 suits better Okay, but a jump like you did doesn't fit much here. Since the song track or the vocals aren't strong enough for a bigger jump. Also, i might not make the exact pattern you made.
   
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2. 00:25:823 (5) - slider end on downbeat is rarely acceptable for insane level difficulties because it usually have strong empathized beat (which is your case). You can try triplet here Okay
3. 00:27:128 (1,2) - You missed ongoing sound from 00:27:388 () - to 00:27:649 () - Correct rhythm should be I think it's fine as the current rhythm is following it correct too, so I was moving them to the white lines for a better rhythm for the song track.
4. 00:30:519 (1,2,3) - why 0.3x DS here, it seems quite random, either stack or put you common DS I'll pick into the stack. I'm making a symmetry here.
5. 00:37:041 (3,4) - flow transition bad here, try Okay
   
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6. 01:07:562 (11,12,1) - better curve here Okay
7. 01:08:345 (2,3) - stack ends properly Okay
8. 01:33:388 (2,3) - that pattern look wat
9. 01:20:084 (8,9,1) - ^ ^
10. 02:08:084 (6,1) - way too close, try 1.7x DS I can't make a jump here, since the song track came up with the calm sounds, It would probably make no sense. I know it's a new track and a powerful beat here, but still can't do that. I'll stack instead
11. 02:16:432 (8,9,1) - stack this or make proper curve I'll pick into the stack.
12. 02:50:606 (2,3) - flow is pretty broken here Okay, I'll change this pattern into a Claw formation.
13. 03:40:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to space them more Likely no, since the song track is almost weak, there shouldn't be bigger spacing than the current one
14. 03:42:258 (1,2) - bigger jump will reflect music better here Okay, but i won't make the spacing you've made on the pattern
    
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15. General issue: spacing, diff is way too compressed for insane. You need a lot of work on that. orz But you still see nice patterns, eh? you already know spacing effects the pattern and the rhythm of the song track, but now you're saying this needs more work? orz

Hard

1. 00:24:780 (4) - skipping strong lyrics and beat on 00:25:041 (4) - is not a good idea Okay
2. 00:29:997 (5) - put this a bit away from 00:29:214 (3) - for better readability ^
3. 00:34:432 (4) - extended slider is not necessary here just 1\2 will be fine ^
4. 00:42:780 (5) - ^ ^
5. 01:56:867 (2) - same ^ ^
6. 00:38:084 (3) - looks meh atm, just blanket will be bette okeh
   
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7. 01:09:910 (1,2,3) - such pattern too confusing for hard level I think it's fine, as long as players would think it's a triplet due close spacing and vocals on the song track, It won't be much confusing.
8. 01:15:910 (6,7) - rotate them by ~30 degrees for a better flow Okay
   
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Normal

1. 00:21:910 (1,2) - flow can be improved here a bit It's already improved, since i was planning to make a blanket here.
   
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2. 00:38:084 (4,5) - also here, is not a really smooth transition Well, It was a symmetry with 00:39:128 (5,7) - on the past, but right now, It's not symmetry atm when a modder before you told me to add a note on 00:39:388 (6) - . So likely, I'll keep the current one.
3. 01:30:780 (1,2,3) - ^ Same here, but not symmetry, I'm making these sliders 01:29:736 (5,1,3) - a pattern to form a Sharp-to-Soft formation. In addition, a note on 01:31:562 (2) - .

Easy

1. 01:05:214 (5,2) - try to avoid such overlaps for easy, diff must be maximum clear to not confuse newbies I'm making a full blanket here, but okay.

You should put more work on insane here. Good Luck!

1. The video could look better, now has a low quality and looks kinda bad. I made one for you: Video (Actually I made 3 with 3 different video size, so feel free to use any of them)
2. The current BG is okay but I found another that you might like more (is on the .rar with the video).
3. It's me or the mp3 sounds quite bad?

1. 01:51:649 (1) - Make this finish a normal one instead a custom like you did in the others diffs.
2. 02:07:301 (4,1) - Add finish in each tail of the sliders.

1. The setup looks kinda low and this is a Hard diff, maybe +1 on all except Circle Size, AR 7 works nice with that SV for instance.
2. 00:38:084 (3) - Missing clap at the start.
3. 02:21:388 (3) - Considers Ctrl+Ging this slider, imo this change improves the flow of the previous circles and the next slider.
4. 03:43:301 (8) - Considers remove this circle, I mean, the music ends on the previous red tick, also the finish sounds too loud with anything on the track. If you don't add with this at least remove the finish, and if you add with this remove the finish on all diffs. (Maybe you want emphasize the end of the song but really the finish doesn't fit at all)

1. 03:43:301 (3) - Same as Hard.

Kenezz wrote: 203g67

I'm heeeeereee~
from my queue

[General]

1. The video could look better, now has a low quality and looks kinda bad. I made one for you: Video (Actually I made 3 with 3 different video size, so feel free to use any of them) Okay, picked 720x480
2. The current BG is okay but I found another that you might like more (is on the .rar with the video). Ofc i like it, but it looked really simple and squarely. I think i'll go with the current one, due it's fancier than the suggested one, But thanks for your effort.
3. It's me or the mp3 sounds quite bad? It's because the mp3 is 128kbps, That's the reason it sounded bad.

[Easy]

1. 01:51:649 (1) - Make this finish a normal one instead a custom like you did in the others diffs. owps, Didn't see that when updating from Sieg's mod, Good catch!
2. 02:07:301 (4,1) - Add finish in each tail of the sliders. Okay

[Hard]

1. The setup looks kinda low and this is a Hard diff, maybe +1 on all except Circle Size, AR 7 works nice with that SV for instance. Okay
2. 00:38:084 (3) - Missing clap at the start. Forgot to add that ;_; Okay
3. 02:21:388 (3) - Considers Ctrl+Ging this slider, imo this change improves the flow of the previous circles and the next slider. Okay
4. 03:43:301 (8) - Considers remove this circle, I mean, the music ends on the previous red tick, also the finish sounds too loud with anything on the track. If you don't add with this at least remove the finish, and if you add with this remove the finish on all diffs. (Maybe you want emphasize the end of the song but really the finish doesn't fit at all) Okay, Just going to remove the circle, and there it goes! The inconsistency between Easy/Normal and Hard/Insane.

[Insane]

1. 03:43:301 (3) - Same as Hard. Okay

Sexy, Free & Single I'm ready too, Bingo!
Hope this can help you, I'll re-check later o3o/

sheela901 wrote: 3n562

Hey, Gray Veyron! Rechecking~

Easy 3c1s6b

1. 00:30:702 (5) - The slider sounds really weird, because the vocal on 00:31:223 took to "another level". I think the correct, for me, would be this:
   
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   The 1/1 slider will hold the long vocal, and it sounds better.
   It also applies to 00:32:267 (1,2) .
   
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   I notice that the rhythm 00:40:615 (1,2,3,4) is the rhythm I want to suggest, so I guess is to keep the consistency.
   Okay, mapped a few parts that had this rhythm. Also, I've kept some of them because i made it purposely, to give beginners a bit time for a little rest from clicking too much.
2. 00:38:658 (3) - The note is misplaced in the timeline. Ouch, fixed it.
3. 00:48:963 (1,2) - I don't like the flow that's created to (2,3), because (2) shoots to the tail, yet the head down. You can try this pattern: Well, i'd like to use your suggested pattern because the flow looks neat. But i prefer double blanket here, because flow would look almost the same and utilize the flow, like the pattern you've made. Just gonna keep the current one, but thanks for the effort.
   
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4. 01:11:397 (3,4) - The rhythm doesn't sound fitting with the song. 01:10:354 (2) -'s head lands on the same beat as 01:11:397 -'s, so I think a slider would fit better, and it'll keep the consistency. I think the rhythm here is okay and consistent, since i wasn't following the vocal track or a music background, i was just following the song's tune. Also, If you meant by making slider (2) longer, i can't do that. It won't fit the rhythm well.
5. 01:09:832 to 01:18:180 - I think you overused the clap, and the pattern sounds weird. The claps' should be heard on the upbeats (2nd and 4th white ticks). And I think it's because of the drum hitsounds that is used on the upbeats. I used the Finish hitsound on the upbeat because in the song track, you can here the drums in the song track on every upbeats in the chorus. And for the claps, the small drum sound in the music background.
6. 01:22:354 (1) - This note sounds weird, yet you can start a slider with a length of 01:22:876 (2) on the downbeat. 01:18:180 (1) is a slider on the downbeat, yet why not 01:22:354 ? It would follow the same path. This also applies to 02:33:310 to 02:41:136 . I don't think a downbeat would really fit with the track, but i'll make a few changes for this.
7. I feel that the breaks are too long, so it's a little too empty in my opinion. Players, at least, have a video to watch, hehe X3
8. 02:22:876 (4) - Add a new combo? The beats are different to the others, and I think a new combo would highlight the long note. Okay
9. 03:40:093 - I suggest to raise the volume up, because I can't here the hitsounds. The beats in my music can still be heard. The song track here has it's volume down, so made it as a low volume, at least 20% of volume to make it a little hearable to beginners.

I noticed that you used a different rhythm on each chorus, I yet think that it's preferable that you use a same path to your chorus, so it won't have an inconsistency. It doesn't have to be the exact same rhythm, but a little similarities. I know that, but i don't like to replicate the chorus' rhythm as same as the other ones. But ofc, it shouldn't be the same. So to keep each rhythm 'unique', a few consistencies of rhythm won't matter.

Normal 6g3l6m

1. 00:28:093 (1,2) - I find the flow odd. For me, it feels uncomfortable if you followed and played a left curve, and repeating the same curve. The flow would also be broken. I made a pattern that you can use: The suggested pattern looks very good, but i was planning to make a Bounce formation between sliders here, this is the reason i've made the sliders curved and was following the deep-sound-ride in the song track. At the last of pattern on 00:32:267 (1) - , the suggested pattern broke a bit of flow for the Cycle formation. But thanks for the efforts~
   
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   188,256,29136,2,0,L|321:231,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   322,114,30180,2,0,L|455:139,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   451,255,31223,2,0,P|364:279|315:261,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   279,255,32006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   279,255,32267,6,0,P|221:241|156:252,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   There's also 01:52:615 (3,4,5) -, but I'll let you play with your imagination.
2. 01:05:658 (1) - A 1/1 slider would be nice. It hits the vocal. It also applies to 01:08:267 (5) . Okay, made a parallel on the first pattern instead, But not on the second one. Because i'm making a double blanket here purposely. And a little visible to players to avoid copied or stack-confusion pattern on the next track.
3. 01:23:136 - I would add a note to hit the vocal, like you did to 01:18:963 (2) . Okay
4. 01:27:050 (2) - The slidertick lands on a strong beat, but the tick is too weak for this beat. I think it would be best if a note or slider's head starts on the strong beat. Okay
5. 01:09:832 to 01:18:180 - Same thing in easy. It also applies to 02:33:310 . Same reason.
6. 02:22:876 (1) - I would make a slider, like you did in Easy. This would avoid the little empty space between the end of the spinner to (1). The reason is that you turn the spinner, and you don't have enough time to go the next object, because the spinner doesn't have a specific point, so you can turn it outside of the spinner, like touching the borders of your screen. So, I would suggest to make a slider to make an easier path. Okay, but omg, look what charles learnt me.
7. 03:40:093 - Same suggestion as in easy. Same reason.

Hard 575l21

1. 00:22:354 (2,3) - The rhythm sounds weird. At the end of the sentence (00:22:615 - ), it should need something strong, either the circle or the head of a slider to emphasize the beat. It would also follow the vocals nicely. I've tried your suggestion, rhythm sounds great. But i prefer to keep the current one 'cause i was planning to make a little jump for the strong beat here to follow the vocal track. So adding a circle might make my pattern a bit wrong to place after the little jump.
2. 00:30:963 (2,3) - I don't think the tails would be on the white ticks. In my opinion, the tails are weak than the heads. And I think the 1/2 sliders would fit on the white ticks, because the beats are gradually risen and lowered. Okay, made slider (1) as an extended slider(tail ends on 1/4 beat) and moved the two sliders on white tick. It might utilize the vocals~
3. 00:36:441 (1) - The placement was unexpected. I think the circle should be down from the previous object's tail. That way, the player would get that you have to click the note on the downbeat. I also think that the flow would be better, instead of having the note next to the previous' head. Made that on purpose, the new track(especially vocals) got much stronger there, so it should have a little jump here. Almost the same reason as 00:22:354 (2,3) -
4. 00:39:310 (4) - I would follow the vocal. The tick isn't strong for the beat. Like earlier, the strong beat should have a circle, or a slider's head. Okay
5. 01:27:832 (5) - The slider should on where the tail is. The reason is that the rhythm in music from 01:26:528 to 01:27:571 - is the same as 01:27:571 to 01:28:354 . So, you should keep the consistency in the rhythm. There's also 01:30:702 (1,2,3,4) that you can replace by the one from the sentence before, but it's optional. This also applies to 02:51:050 (4,5,6) . I was following the vocals a little, but made a few changes here.
6. 01:57:050 (4) - I don't know why is there a jump on this slider. The beat is weak, so, in my opinion, the jump won't fit. owps, didn't see that while i was remapping this diff, fixed it.
7. 02:16:093 (7) - The tail is overlapping the next object's head, and can lead to clicking (1) earlier. You can stack it with (5). Naah, this is an Anti-jump, so the reason why i added it is because an almost-insane-jump from the formation ed 'til here. So need a tiny rest for Hard players.
8. 02:49:745 (6) - The space between (6,1) should have a jump, and not (5,6). The note after (6) is stronger than the note after (5). But I would reduce the distance between (5,6) to make a little jump. Okay
9. 03:24:441 (3,4,5) - The distance between those notes doesn't make sense to me. (5) has the strong beat, but not (4). Try to move (4) to somewhere like x:250 y:174, and place (5) to where it could follow the curve of 03:25:745 (6,7,8,9) . Okay

Insane 4w3z3d

1. 00:21:050 - Because of (3), a 1/2 on 00:21:050 would be best, since the claps fits. Hmm... okay...
2. 01:03:571 (9) - You should add a new combo. It'll avoid the really long combo. And as I can see, you used the pattern (a new combo on each downbeat), so why not also in the chorus. There's also 01:07:745 (7) -, 01:11:919 (9) -, 01:16:093 (7) -, they're also in the other chorus. Okay, added them all.
3. 01:17:919 - You shouldn't skip a beat like that. In my opinion, the insane difficulty should go all-along the way. What I meant is that the player must stay active in insane difficulties, so the difficulty shouldn't skip a beat, unless you want to. But in this case, you shouldn't. The pause is a little uncomfortable to me. In the song track, there are deep rides on the music background here. And the vocal stayed on the same line and tuned with the rides, i don't hear any other beats to add a circle that doesn't follow any song track. So just gonna keep a little empty here.
4. 01:20:006 (8,9,1) - You should either arrange the slider's curve, or the circles too make a beautiful curve, instead of having a bump in the curve, like 01:20:136 (9) -, which I find it ugly. Same for 01:32:136 (4,5) -, but straight. Okay, straighten them.
5. 01:32:789 to 01:34:876 - You can make a stream, instead of 1/2 patterns on a rhythm with 1/6 beats consecutive. It would spice the difficulty a little up. But the stream has to be 1/6. What you can do is that starting from 01:32:789 to 01:33:702 -, it's filled with kicksliders, while the other half would be circles. This will fill every beats in the rhythm. It also applies to 02:56:267 . Okay, I'll add two circles on 1/6 beats front, then a slider by 1/6 beat until the starting of break. I hope it's likely able to players.
6. 02:39:571 (7,8) - It's just me, but the overlap is ugly. Making a half blanket here, so keeping this.
7. 03:31:223 (11) - I don't see the point of ending it on a blue tick. There's no beat on the blue tick. I would end it on the red tick. Okay

This would be it! If you have questions, don't hesitate of asking me them! Good Luck on ranking it!

neonat wrote: 375v4a

So I finally got to it.

Easy

00:32:789 (2) - I don't get why this doesn't have a clap Ouch, fixed
02:08:789 (2,5) - remove the finishes on this slider Following the percussion on the background track. Also, if it's removed, it might feel empty on just following the vocals.
02:31:223 (3,4,1) - semicircle motions here....not one the easier kinds of movement you can use I don't get it on what you said here, but i'll just keep this rhythm for easier hearing with the beats.

Normal
^ fixed :3

00:39:571 (7,1) - have a blanket? I wasn't trying to make a blanket here, but okay
00:54:702 (5,6,7) - imo stacking isn't really fitting in this situation here in Normal Okay
02:07:745 (7) - clap on start of slider I haven't added them here on other diffs, if i add it here, would be inconsistent
02:16:615 (1) - whistle on start of slider Will give a try~
02:22:876 (5) - unrankable burai slider I still don't get it on what you said, i've changed that old lump of mine into a two normal sliders here. Or am i wrong?
RC: Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used Knew that, but thanks for reminding!

Hard

00:42:702 (1,2) - would be better presented being further away from each other Okay, but not gonna move them more further to make a bigger jump than the current one.
01:00:963 (3) - remove the finish Okay
01:22:093 (6) - would have preferred if it kept the 2 hitsound ending for each phrase, but 3 beats still sound fine, but 4 (right now) is just too excessive, please remove the hitsound on this one Keeping this to consist between Hard and Insane, because i was follow the little rides on the song track. Without it, it'd feel empty and music instructs with four beats each to the new track. This'll be the same as others you've mentioned
01:26:267 (6) - ^
01:30:441 (7) - ^
02:07:223 (3) - clap on end of slider I've did this before... from months ofc. But some modder told me to remove the clap, and now you tell me to add it for the background beat. Omg, i guess i'll give it a try... once again~
02:07:745 (4) - clap ^
02:45:050 (5) - same thing as 01:22:093 (6)
02:49:745 (6) - ^
02:53:919 (7) - ^
03:18:963 (6) - ^
03:22:876 (5) - ^
03:39:310 (2) - clap Same reason as before, but sounds intense here. So yeah, adding that.

Insane

General Impression: Too many overmapped unnecessary silent streams like 01:17:136 (3,4,5,6,7) and 00:52:093 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - not needed and increases difficulty for no good reason

Sorry, but I don't think very highly of Insane
That's okay, i sometimes need modders to tell opinions about my Insane here. I will consider with the senseless streams since it's been a year i've kept it and added so many efforts to this diff than the others, and they were no problem to the modders i've called when i revived this map. Thanks anyway!

That's mostly what I wanted to say, Good Luck on this once again.

neonat wrote: 375v4a

This is what I saw for the Normal regarding the unrankable slider



Whether or not it's the most updated one I don't know

Gray Veyron wrote: 6k514b

That's fine, i'll get you up when i'm finished with remapping

Edit: Finally ready!

Sakura wrote: 2th19

From my modding queue:

[General]
Your hitsound volume is too low, i can barely hear the hitnormals on most hitobjects. hmm, okay, increased the volume of all custom hitsounds by +2 gains via Audacity, not going to increase it a lot at this spot.
http://puu.sh/eaRrX/601a018cc8.jpg and http://puu.sh/eaKvt/0fd5591766.jpg why are these in the video? Blame their company (a.k.a. SMTOWN), it's not me adding that on the video. And besides, you can also see the official music video where those came up. Last year, a modder told me to remove it, I've tried via Creativebloq or Autodesk Maya to remove the ads, but it kills the quality and enlarges the video's file size. As so i gave up and there's no way it can be removed :<
02:24:963 Why Kiai here? it feels way less impactful than the actual chorus. Their music sheet i've bought from their album said it has three choruses. One on 01:01:484 -, two on mentioned, and three on 03:23:397 -, so i think this part is pretty intense for a kiai time like the others.
You have a delay on Softhitfinish2:

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Make it less than 5 ms.
You have a delay on Normalhitfinish3:

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Make it less than 5 ms.
Fixed the delayed hitsounds.
[Insane]
Why do you only use the red and blue colors during kiai? I thought you were using red for speedups like this: 00:27:571 (1) but it doesn't seem to be the case. Ouch, good catch, i added NC here for the SV change, and i was a little careless on the colors, fixed.
While patterns and symmetry are nice, it looks more like you're forcing the map to fit rather than making it harmonize itself with the song, I know it's quite tough to do, and the work required is big, so i'll just tell you to keep this in mind for future maps. Well, i'm not trying to force making it 'perfect' since it's my old mapping style, but still looks okay to me. Oh well... never mind, I'll store that advice for the next maps.
00:32:789 (3) - Either move a couple grids up so it looks better aligned with the pattern, or make it horizontally aligned with 00:32:528 (2) and 00:33:050 (4) Horizontally aligned with 00:32:267 (1) - Okay
00:34:354 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern feels kinda random, try to make something out of these at least? I've just made these as combined triangles (with a few jumps ofc), so i've just changed a little placement of the notes.
00:35:397 (5,6) - Try to make them look more symmetrical at least? I've tried my best here, so hopefully it's symmetrical.
01:14:528 (2,3,4,5,6) - Would be nice if you made something out of these at least. A few triangles in this track might work.
02:08:267 - Why slowdown here? This section doesn't feel slower than the rest of the song. The track here got it's sound a little soft, so i've changed to a lower slider velocity to emphasize with the song track.
02:20:006 (6,7,8) - It would look better if 6 was between 4 and 5 (and aligned with 3) and then it curved to the right, you would have to then fit 02:20:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Afterwards but since then there's a spinner that shouldn't be an issue. Just moved circle (6) for a triangle, good catch anyway~
02:40:093 (2,3,4,5) - Looks really awkward, make symmetrical by aligning 3 with 4 (and putting them on the center axys) and 5 with 2. Okay, kinda weird stack on circle (5) and (2), but i hope it's too nazi to stack perfectly.
03:28:615 (3,4,5,6) - Considering all your jumps have some sort of pattern, this kind of straight line feels really awkward. Used to make a triangle here with slider tails and the circles next to it. But i'll change it's position, and i'm not sure if it'd be okay this time.

[Hard]
00:23:919 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest just going with a plain pattern here the music doesn't warrant that jump nor it feels like back and forth to me Reflecting with the vocals on how sturdy the track is, the word "free" looks fitting for a little jump in this part.
00:44:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would feel better if you swapped 3 and 4 and 4 was the slider, but since it's a 3 note pattern why not go for a 5 note pattern instead? Just swapped circle (3) and (4), 5 notes might ruin my rhythm for following the vocals.
01:04:354 (8,9) - Why are you stacking these? For players to perceive the vocals going to their next line of song track. So a 'stack' should be fine here.
01:09:832 (1,2,3) - This is really confusing it looks like 3 sliders when it's only 2. Since there are some modders before mentioned this as well, i'll start changing it's position.
01:17:658 (3,1) - Dunno why stack here either. Same reason as before.
01:20:528 (2,3) - This stack also feels out of place. Move the circle's placement, now it's a triangle (once again).
01:51:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm pretty sure you can use a prettier pattern here. And i'm pretty sure the pattern i'm thinking is not really fitting for this part. And the diamond here looks fine and emphasizing with the song track either the vocals, so keeping it
02:02:006 (1,3) - Don't overlap these sliders! Not really an overlap, seen a few qualified maps that reached to the ranked list with this pattern. The stack is quite visible during playtime, so no need to worry when players can possibly perceive it.
02:13:484 (4,5,6,7) - This kind of going back feels forced for the sake of having a pattern symmetrical with 02:12:441 (1,2,3), see it's things like these that break the harmony of the map like i mentioned back in your Insane diff. ...Fine
02:15:832 (6,7) - ^ this jump too for the same reason. Try using this flow instead to fix: Nice, my mind was out of flow ideas at this part, good catch.

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02:27:832 (8,9) - Again dunno why stack here. Again same reason as before
02:49:745 (6,1) - Why jump here. An intense new track here, i've did this small jump on 01:26:267 (6,1) - too, so this track should have the same position as the one i've mentioned.
03:24:702 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Cool pattern but stacking 9 below 7 feels awkward in flow it'd feel better if it exited from the top, but then you'd end up out of bounds so exiting from the left would flow better. Oh well, gonna stack circle (8) on circle (3). And sorry, this'll be an intentional back-and-forth flow you'd not like to see, just trying to reflect with the vocals.

[Normal]
My main issue is that you need more rhythmic variety on this map. So need to add more/remove circles, remake slider's rhythm, and flow the song track's phrases correctly? Well, will do that on some (or few) parts. I mainly follow the song's beat (1/1-1/2 beat) and vocals, but will do it anyway.
02:31:223 (4) - Switch into a repeat slider instead of using a hitsounded tick I think another slider will fit here instead of a repeat slider.
02:50:006 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm feels way too simple in comparison with what is going on, i'd understand if it was an Easy, but this is a Normal AND you have an Easy. Added a few circles for this.
03:21:310 (3) - Again this tick hitsound is way too awkward, change for a repeat slider or something different. Okay
03:40:093 (1) - Do not mute both the tick and the slider slide at the same time Tho tbh i'd prefer if it had a repeat in the middle instead. ...Fine

[Easy]
01:30:180 (4) - Move 1 grid to the left to make spacing more even. nazi, but okay.
03:40:093 (1,2,3,4) - Why are you using short sliders here while you used a long one in Normal? I've fixed the issue in Normal, comparing to it's end, it's finally consistent between diffs.

Call me back.

Norman wrote: 222y39

Good

Rakuen wrote: 414d2k

As requested!

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Timing 5f403k

• Please +23 offset to 3,073 As you wish

Hitsound 49204b

• Make sure the last part at 03:40:093 - for all diffs are audible, at least 40% I'd suggest I guess this is fine, it can still be heard. Even tho the music changed a bit quiet, and this note should be with it as well.

Easy 3c1s6b

1. 00:33:310 (3,4,5) - Symmetry? Tried my best here, 'cause distance snap won't let me do a perfect symmetry, but yeah. Fixed
2. 02:10:876 - A green point S:C1 (finish) I think the finish hitsound here sounds fine, it'd be still the same if i do this. This'll also go to the other mods you've mentioned.
3. 02:19:223 - ^ ^

Normal 6g3l6m

1. 02:08:267 (1) - Easier to read if not stacked Okay
2. 02:10:876 - A green point S:C1 (finish)
3. 02:19:223 - ^ (maybe other diffs too)
4. 02:24:963 (1) - Prefer not to stack Okay
5. 02:25:484 (2) - Bad flow imo :c Did you just... add a negative mod??!!?

Hard 575l21

1. SV is too damn fast...even comparing with Easy and Normal
   Sometimes mapping doesn't depend on "how long we want the slider to be", have to consider the rhythm and the tempo too
   I have no care for long sliders/or some SV changes, I think it's fitting pretty well for a Hard diffs, since it's a slow song. It should probably be okay on this.
2. 00:21:832 (1,2,3) - Arrangement a bit weird, I'd make tail of 00:22:354 (2) - 1.0x DS to (1) I've changed a bit here, and tried my best. So i hope it's not a big issue there.
3. 00:28:093 - At this point you can see 00:27:571 (6,1,2) - is not really neat is it ;3 Okay ;3
4. 02:03:050 (3) - Stack hard to react - I don't think it's probably a big issue for stacking this, as long as it's visible and noticeable to players. It can play normal and correctly.
5. 02:16:093 (7,1) - Would make mistake reading this - Changed a bit here, okay

Others jm3w

• Um...maybe could use some interesting slider shape and arrangements, I don't really get how fully blanket map looks neater.
  
  For Hard and Insane, prefer them to have a slower SV, and lesser random jumps to fit the spread better

Almost the same reason as I've told on the first list of Hard. But i'll think about the spread, since i don't want to add bigger jumps and less SV due slow song and almost stream-less song that might not have a lot of 1/4 beats to follow. I can't add notes for overmapping if so, but i'll reconsider this later.

Good luck!