Can't recognize the difficulty but anyway...
you don't have soft custom hitsound but you used S:C1, make you this is what you expected.
[WS]
00:03:012 (1,2) - move this to (272,220) so that it forms a square with next combo (3,4,5). The jump in fact fits what you've done in next combo
00:06:964 (5) - whistle like 00:06:245 -
00:09:838 (5) - ^
00:12:712 (5) - ^
00:22:772 (6) - whistle at the beginning corresponding to 00:21:335 (1) -
00:40:377 (1,2) - you can fix the spacing here
00:50:616 (1,2,3) - the spacing is simply confusing...
01:02:293 - the pattern changed but the logic from vocal shouldn't been changed. Use whistle on the purple (2) instead of the light blue (1,2,3).
- The placement in the beginning can be improved a bit, as you see the style of the beginning is qutie different from the rest... also there could be better usage of whistle as indicated, you used some of them correctly and if you fill up the rest it would be much better.
[SS]
01:02:293 (1) - not recommended to use 1/2 sliders with multiple reversing tick in this intermediate diff.
[TS]
00:28:161 (4) - sounds a bit odd when the 1/2 slider is placed after a short break...
00:28:161 (4) - a note here would be suitable
01:37:503 (4) - Try to maintain the same spacing throughout the diff in this easy/normal.
not sure what the diff looks like before it's made easier, but around 0:28 there're notes that sound missed. Also you may want a clap as slidertick at place like 00:11:994 - which will make the diff sounding much better.
In overall I would say there's room for improvement for hard, and good luck.
you don't have soft custom hitsound but you used S:C1, make you this is what you expected.
[WS]
00:03:012 (1,2) - move this to (272,220) so that it forms a square with next combo (3,4,5). The jump in fact fits what you've done in next combo
00:06:964 (5) - whistle like 00:06:245 -
00:09:838 (5) - ^
00:12:712 (5) - ^
00:22:772 (6) - whistle at the beginning corresponding to 00:21:335 (1) -
00:40:377 (1,2) - you can fix the spacing here
00:50:616 (1,2,3) - the spacing is simply confusing...
01:02:293 - the pattern changed but the logic from vocal shouldn't been changed. Use whistle on the purple (2) instead of the light blue (1,2,3).
- The placement in the beginning can be improved a bit, as you see the style of the beginning is qutie different from the rest... also there could be better usage of whistle as indicated, you used some of them correctly and if you fill up the rest it would be much better.
[SS]
01:02:293 (1) - not recommended to use 1/2 sliders with multiple reversing tick in this intermediate diff.
[TS]
00:28:161 (4) - sounds a bit odd when the 1/2 slider is placed after a short break...
00:28:161 (4) - a note here would be suitable
01:37:503 (4) - Try to maintain the same spacing throughout the diff in this easy/normal.
not sure what the diff looks like before it's made easier, but around 0:28 there're notes that sound missed. Also you may want a clap as slidertick at place like 00:11:994 - which will make the diff sounding much better.
In overall I would say there's room for improvement for hard, and good luck.