KayeSara wrote: 2n6e16

[Beginner]

1. 01:15:563 - add a note here? Just fill the rhythm.

[Normal]

1. Name as Standard will be better IMO
2. Overall is nice, I just feel a little lag about the rhythm start at the red line like 00:17:791 (2) -, If there is any tempo in the middle of them will be better, let's see, if you put a note 00:17:642 - .

[Hyper]

1. 01:09:028 (1) - I think it should be short one, end at the red line (01:09:177 - ) then you can put01:09:474 (2,3,4) - begin at the white line (01:09:325 - ). If you do so, you may add a note at 01:10:216 -
2. 01:43:929 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as I mention before, such tempo if you start at the red line just make people feel a little lag, put them at the white line start if you think so.

[Another]

1. 00:35:167 (3,4) - as the rhythm down, I prefer this is a downward shape.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:00:266 (2) - remove this note

[Extra]

1. 01:59:820 (1,2,3) - remove the first note, then put the slider at the white line, then put a note at 02:00:414 -

That's all pretty much nice map!

No Change in Beginner,Another x_x thank you for modding~

Hi :3 Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~

Hey Reisen Udongein ~!

[Beginner]
AR-1 is better

00:14:078 (2) - I'd not like to make overlapping in Easy diff , so move it to 256,192
00:52:395 (x) - Useless green line
00:57:444 (x) - ^
01:14:078 (x) - You can add a green line that 5% vol. because the song is no sound here~ (just suggestion)
01:41:405 (6) - nc

pretty good in your Beginner I love it !

[Normal]
Diff name : how about Advanced ?

01:13:929 (x) - you can choose 5% vol. because the song is no sound here owo
01:25:622 (2) - too high for me
01:48:533 (3) - It's better to Ctrl+> two times then Ctrl+R then move back
02:06:335 (x) - add break

[Hyper]
01:15:712 (2) - spacing
01:41:850 (2) - ^
01:52:989 (3) - not overlap on the end of (1) ._.
01:59:820 (3) - ^

[Another]
01:25:365 (3) - how about this ?

24,20,85365,2,0,B|-16:48|-24:96|-12:148|36:168,1,180,0|8

[Extra]
00:26:405 (4) - move down 1 gird (gird level 4)



Wow this is so COOL ! I love it :D:D:D:D:D

Star!

Flask wrote: 5l1l4k

Hi :3 Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~

Hey Reisen Udongein ~!

[Beginner]
AR-1 is better

00:14:078 (2) - I'd not like to make overlapping in Easy diff , so move it to 256,192 - Fixed
00:52:395 (x) - Useless green line - ? it's not useless
00:57:444 (x) - ^ - Fixed
01:14:078 (x) - You can add a green line that 5% vol. because the song is no sound here~ (just suggestion) - X
01:41:405 (6) - nc - Fixed

pretty good in your Beginner I love it !

[Normal]
Diff name : how about Advanced ?

01:13:929 (x) - you can choose 5% vol. because the song is no sound here owo
01:25:622 (2) - too high for me
01:48:533 (3) - It's better to Ctrl+> two times then Ctrl+R then move back
02:06:335 (x) - add break

[Hyper]
01:15:712 (2) - spacing
01:41:850 (2) - ^
01:52:989 (3) - not overlap on the end of (1) ._.
01:59:820 (3) - ^

[Another]
01:25:365 (3) - how about this ? - Fixed

24,20,85365,2,0,B|-16:48|-24:96|-12:148|36:168,1,180,0|8

[Extra]
00:26:405 (4) - move down 1 gird (gird level 4)



Wow this is so COOL ! I love it :D:D:D:D:D

Star!

Thank you for Modding and Star~ :3

Thanks everyone for the mods~
Fixed everything except for the circle size reduction, break, diff name, and that high note (it's not offscreen in play mode) xD

http://up.ppy.sh/files/nnrt.rar

Star~and here is a funny imagine I want to get you know

KayeSara wrote: 2n6e16

Star~and here is a funny imagine I want to get you know

Aww so cute~ >_< thank you for star and the cute cat~

haro haro <:

sorry for being slow








Minor things, cant make anything else since mapset is unique

ikari_kyon wrote: 1z673m

haro haro <:

sorry for being slow

[General] 162k1y

1. As a prefference to silence slider slides, use the file that is given at Ranking Criteria, I think current is ok but just as a prefference: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav - no fixed
2. You are not using custom hitsounds on default normal* soundset, set the normal default soundset on those custom* normal soundsets
   SPOILER

   
   - :3? can't understand
3. Edit: add Ryutaro Nakahara to tags, full name of Ryu* - ok~

[Beginner] 2q336p

1. 00:21:801 ~ maybe set 90%~ volume?
2. 00:43:187 (1) - hmm no stack with 00:41:999 (1)? as may be confusing to beginners, and cuz it looks a bit dirty with the hitburst - Deleted
3. 01:33:088 (3) - finish at start of this? - ok
4. 01:33:682 (4) - finish? - ok
5. 01:42:593 (3) - ctrl+r it? beginners will follow an straight line then, nice blanket by the way - no changed x_x thanks by the way
6. 02:01:603 (1) - for make a better blanket, move the middle control point 1 grid up - Fixed

[Normal] 2mh6e

1. 00:55:068 (1) - to follow previous whistleing, no whistle on end of this and ↓
2. 00:55:662 (2) - exchange the whistle to the start instead the end?
3. 00:56:256 (3) - to finish this whistle pattern, whistle to end
4. 01:17:642 (1,2) - add clap to end of this 2 sliders?
5. 01:22:395 (1) - ↑?
6. 01:23:286 (3) - clap?~ and simmilars just maybe
7. 01:33:979 (5) - no finish to end will make a moar clean sound here

[Taiko DS] 371d5c

Use this bg for taiko please

Taiko BG

1. 00:04:870 (2) - don? the background sound looks on the same scale with next
2. 00:14:226 (1,1,1) - kdd sounds better to me
3. 00:16:306 (2) - k sounds nice with previous
4. 00:39:623 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1) - maybe a ddddkkk ddddkkk d for this part, sounds better
5. 00:50:315 (1) - taiko ranking criteria says that it should be 1/2 space between this an previous note, but with speed up I think is ok
6. 01:00:117 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - k d k d k d k?
7. 01:12:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use 1/6? xD and maybe don for last note 01:14:004
8. 02:06:058 (1,1,1,1) - kdkd? sounds like the last note should be a don

[Hyper] p3t3k

1. 01:52:989 (3) - just a nazi, stack with 01:52:098 (1)'s end
2. 01:53:731 (2) - rotate like 13º and place it to avoid the start get a bad overlap with previous slider, it should looks like this 01:54:474 (1,2)
3. 02:04:870 (4) - just a grid up to avoid the overlap with 02:03:979 (1)?

[Another] w155r

1. Just want to say nice flow

- thank you~

[Extra] 576gx

1. 00:56:256 (3) - move the second control point to left, really not significative difference
   SPOILER

   

   432,240,56256,2,0,B|380:60|152:20|52:160,1,475,2|2

I love the flow of the streams /o/

Minor things, cant make anything else since mapset is unique

Fixed my diffs~ thank you for modding and star!

star and good luck!
it's awesome map

Sorry for late reply >_<

ikari_kyon wrote: 1z673m

[Normal] 2mh6e

1. 00:55:068 (1) - to follow previous whistleing, no whistle on end of this and ↓
2. 00:55:662 (2) - exchange the whistle to the start instead the end?
   Ah, I prefer my current whistling for now, personally I feel it fits the synth more >_<
3. 00:56:256 (3) - to finish this whistle pattern, whistle to end Yep
4. 01:17:642 (1,2) - add clap to end of this 2 sliders?
5. 01:22:395 (1) - ↑?
6. 01:23:286 (3) - clap?~ and simmilars just maybe Yep for all three~
7. 01:33:979 (5) - no finish to end will make a moar clean sound here Another Infinity spams finish every 1/2 here, actually xD

Reisen : http://up.ppy.sh/files/nnrt2.rar (:

Hi hi~ Request from my queue~
　
　
[ General]
　

1. Maybe you can read this I think it will help you a lots :3

　
[ Beginner]
　

1. lol!~ Very hard Beginner!~~
2. 00:59:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this parttern is too hard for beginner , try to change it easily please
3. 01:12:890 (1,1) - Too close , sometimes beginners are slowly to read this
4. 01:23:583 (1,1) - The spinner is too short for beginner , and these object is too close as above ^^^
5. 01:28:335 (3) - Remove whistle end like 01:18:830 (3) -
6. 01:33:979 - Add a note with finish here sounds better and follow the music more
7. 01:54:474 (1,1) - Too close
8. 02:07:618 (1) - Remove whistle end because the tone decreased
9. 02:08:881 (2) - Remove whistle start because the tone rise

　
[ Normal]
　

1. HP-1? I think it is too high now >_<
2. 00:50:018 (2) - Use whistle instead of clap may follow the music more? I don't think clap here sounds good
3. 00:56:256 (3) - This slider isn't really symmetrical , I try to make a symmetrical slider!
   

   372,272,56256,2,0,B|338:267|295:245|280:196|280:196|260:176|256:140|256:140|252:176|232:196|232:196|216:248|176:268|140:272,1,375,0|0

4. 01:01:751 (4,1) - Make them like this rhythm , They will have a better flow because the slider flow the long tone!
   
5. 01:12:890 (4,1) - High suggetion to delete circle 1 and add a repeat on slider4 , the music still loud 01:13:484 ~ 01:14:078
6. 02:10:144 (5) - Change to a slider and end at 02:11:091 like "Beginner diff"

　
[ Hyper]
　

1. 00:26:405 (6) - ( Nazi ) Move to x:472 y:224 , It will have a better flow while playing :3
2. 00:46:009 (2) - Move this note and stack with start of00:46:157 (3) , more comfortable for me
3. 01:05:613 (3,4) - Spacing issue
4. 01:09:325 ~ 01:14:078 I can't hear this parttern , make the volume up to 40% so everyone can hear them
5. 01:33:979 (4) - Add clap start like others
6. 02:03:979 (1,4) - Overlap , oh just say xD
7. 02:10:144 (3) - Same as Normal

　
[ Another]
　

1. 00:35:167 (3) - NC this circle , the spacing become huge here
2. 00:35:761 (3) - Same as above
3. 01:30:117 (5) - uncomfortable flow >_< Try Ctrl+R , a better flow will appear xDD
4. 01:51:207 (3) - NC ,Same reason as 00:35:167 (3)
5. 01:51:801 (3) - Same as above
6. 01:59:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - Different spacing with 01:59:820 (6,7,8,9,10) , looks strange , maybe you can make the spacing the same
7. 02:08:249 (2,3) - Remove whistle on these twe circles to follow the music more
8. 02:10:144 (5) - Same as Normal

　
[ Extra]
　

1. 01:16:454 (1) - Ctrl+R on this is more enjoyable while play , oh don't forget ro Ctrl+R on 01:16:751 (2) - too xDD
2. 02:03:385 (7) - End at 02:03:533 sounds much better to me
3. 02:08:249 (2,3) - Remove whistle like Another diff
4. 02:10:144 (5) - Same as Normal

　
[ Taiko DS]
　

1. 00:14:301 (1) - d may follow the music more
2. 00:43:038 (4) - d
3. 00:45:415 (2) - d
4. 00:55:662 (2,1,1) - dkd to follow the music
5. 01:02:048 (1) - d

　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
Okay , That's all , Sorry for late and my poor mod!
You are a good mapper!!!
Good Luck :3

wmfchris wrote: 1d5f1w

Taiko mod as requested.

[Taiko]
-remove letterbox during breaks fix
-highly recommeded to add taiko bg as the head of the current bg is "cut" ^
00:13:038 - kkd refer to the music ok. kkd k
00:18:533 - kdddk kkddk
00:19:721 - the music really stops at the next white tick and 7-plet doesn't sound suitable there I think it's not so bad.
00:28:038 - ^ ^
00:29:078 - the melody is based on pattern 4 in a group so pattern like dddkkkd does not fit with the song dddkdkk
00:38:434 - ddkdddk kkddkkd ddkdddk ddkkddk
00:40:216 - kdd kkkkd no fix
00:46:900 - the first k placement sounds odd and I would prefer ending with d corresponding to the bass sound. Try ddkdddkkd dkdkddk ddkkk
00:50:315 - add 1 mote note before slider starts ok
00:50:315 - and I highly recommend to use spinner instead of slider because it covers coming notes heavily. ^
01:23:583 - kkddd / kdddd no fix
01:28:187 - the tone at the 3rd 1/4 tick sounds lower so kkddddk sounds better no change. check this "01:18:682 (1,2,1,1,2,1)"
01:29:969 - ^ kkddkkd or kkddddk no change.
01:30:712 - ^ the melody changes on 1/2 ticks mainly so changing from k to d at the 6th tick sounds odd. ddkkkkd may sound better ok..
01:33:682 - ddkkddk ddkkddd
01:40:216 - ddddk no fix
01:47:345 - the pattern faiiled to do a progression here. By your previous pattern there should be more k notes in later streams. Also the dkdkdk stuffs corresponding to the very high pitch in the music should only appaering in the second half ot each stream referring to the music. .....^
02:05:167 - I don't really see the reason to use such a fast stream. I did it on a whim.
02:10:144 - add a note before spinner ? no fix

some patterns need to be changed to fit the song and the overall style.

ikari_kyon wrote: 1z673m

[Taiko DS] 371d5c

Use this bg for taiko please awww thx ><

Taiko BG

1. 00:04:870 (2) - don? the background sound looks on the same scale with next no change
2. 00:14:226 (1,1,1) - kdd sounds better to me hmm... ok :3 fix
3. 00:16:306 (2) - k sounds nice with previous no change..
4. 00:39:623 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1) - maybe a ddddkkk ddddkkk d for this part, sounds better ^
5. 00:50:315 (1) - taiko ranking criteria says that it should be 1/2 space between this an previous note, but with speed up I think is ok it's already changed into spin.. ;3
6. 01:00:117 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - k d k d k d k? no c
7. 01:12:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use 1/6? xD and maybe don for last note 01:14:004 lolol no, thank you!
8. 02:06:058 (1,1,1,1) - kdkd? sounds like the last note should be a don that pattern is taken from "Rotter Tarmination Inner Oni"

bossandy wrote: 91q67

[ Taiko DS]
　

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap orWhistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )

1. 00:14:301 (1) - d may follow the music more fixed already :3
2. 00:43:038 (4) - d no change.
3. 00:45:415 (2) - d ^
4. 00:55:662 (2,1,1) - dkd to follow the music hmm... no c.
5. 01:02:048 (1) - d ok fix :3

so late... sorry!
thx chris, i_k, and boss ><



http://puu.sh/AECd

bg는 저거 ik가 만들어준거 넣어주면 됨ㅇㅇ

bossandy wrote: 91q67

Hi hi~ Request from my queue~
　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Blue : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.

　
[ General]
　

1. Maybe you can read this I think it will help you a lots :3

- I'll read it few days layer :3 thanks
　
[ Beginner]
　

1. lol!~ Very hard Beginner!~~
2. 00:59:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this parttern is too hard for beginner , try to change it easily please - Fixed
3. 01:12:890 (1,1) - Too close , sometimes beginners are slowly to read this - X
4. 01:23:583 (1,1) - The spinner is too short for beginner , and these object is too close as above ^^^ - Fixed
5. 01:28:335 (3) - Remove whistle end like 01:18:830 (3) - -Add whistles Both
6. 01:33:979 - Add a note with finish here sounds better and follow the music more - Add a slider
7. 01:54:474 (1,1) - Too close - X
8. 02:07:618 (1) - Remove whistle end because the tone decreased - Fixed
9. 02:08:881 (2) - Remove whistle start because the tone rise

[ Another]
　

1. 00:35:167 (3) - NC this circle , the spacing become huge here - Fixed
2. 01:30:117 (5) - uncomfortable flow >_< Try Ctrl+R , a better flow will appear xDD - need to consider :3
3. 01:51:207 (3) - NC ,Same reason as 00:35:167 (3) - Fixed
4. 01:51:801 (3) - Same as above - FIxed
5. 01:59:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - Different spacing with 01:59:820 (6,7,8,9,10) , looks strange , maybe you can make the spacing the same - Fixed
6. 02:08:249 (2,3) - Remove whistle on these twe circles to follow the music more -Fixed
7. 02:10:144 (5) - Same as Normal

- since it's star-shaped notes, i don't want to change it
　
[ Extra]
　

1. 01:16:454 (1) - Ctrl+R on this is more enjoyable while play , oh don't forget ro Ctrl+R on 01:16:751 (2) - too xDD - Fixed
2. 02:03:385 (7) - End at 02:03:533 sounds much better to me - X
3. 02:08:249 (2,3) - Remove whistle like Another diff -Fixed
4. 02:10:144 (5) - Same as Normal

- Same reason like Anothet diff
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
Okay , That's all , Sorry for late and my poor mod!
You are a good mapper!!! - Thanks~
Good Luck :3

Thank you for the modding and Star~ /

Hi there~~mod from Wmf's modding/Taiko queue
oh...so many diffs >.<

[General]

1. Your taiko diff has no background now
2. Recommend to disable Letterbox during breaks because of short breaks is not suit for this effect.
3. A small advice: i'd like to change "Normal" to "Standard" if IIDX diff name is selected :>

[Beginner]

1. 00:31:306 (1) - try to adjust the curve here? the next is the same suggestion.
   
   Frankly, double middle nodes could make your slider more smooth:) i know it will take more works but imo, it's better to choose that if slider is longer than three times of circle's radius (including head & end).
   
   and many other sliders i will give same suggestion, so won't mention it again
2. 01:24:771 (2) - move next NC to here?
3. 01:31:900 (1,2,3,4) - unnecessary overlaps here :<

emm....maybe too many spinners which could be the hardest object for beginners, try to reduce the amount next time plz

[Normal]

1. 00:09:919 (1,1) - i suppose it's a bad style for a normal diff....>.<
2. Pretty a nice diff ~~ but it looked like a Hard diff ... not normal ... despite the bpm is 202, it's too hard for newbie players....
3. and, you'd better add creator's name before diff name if it is a GD

[Hyper]

1. 00:49:127 (1,2,3,4,5) - the beats here heard weird because you may miss a note at 00:49:424 - , and 00:49:573 - is a end not start. So try this beat or similar?
   
2. 01:19:870 (8) - the slider end on the start of next bar make your beat heard off....imo, it's better to avoid this situation.
3. 01:34:276 (1) - Invisible reverse arrow

[Another]

1. 00:40:811 (1) - a low speed slider follow stream maybe not a good idea...but anyway, just up to you :>

Nothing much to say about this diff

[Extra]

1. 00:14:078 (7) - i suppose it's better to divide into a slider and then a note on downbeat with NC for next bar~
2. 00:27:370 (4) - actually it's a 1/6 but not 1/4 here....
3. 00:44:969 (1,2) - not a good stream style...
4. 00:59:820 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i prefer sliders here suppose more suit for music
5. 01:10:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - pay a attention to stack leniency here...and also the next one
6. 01:55:885 (4,5,6) - another bad stream style :<
7. 02:02:419 (3) - 1/6 here >.<
8. 02:06:355 - i suppose the hp drain is too high at this part....so consider to reduce HP by 1?

really cooool~~~good work~


generally a good mapset good luck with rank~

Scorpiour wrote: 2pj3z

Hi there~~mod from Wmf's modding/Taiko queue
oh...so many diffs >.<

[General]

1. Your taiko diff has no background now - Updated!
2. Recommend to disable Letterbox during breaks because of short breaks is not suit for this effect. - Removed!
3. A small advice: i'd like to change "Normal" to "Standard" if IIDX diff name is selected :>

[Beginner]

1. 00:31:306 (1) - try to adjust the curve here? the next is the same suggestion. - Changed!
   
   Frankly, double middle nodes could make your slider more smooth:) i know it will take more works but imo, it's better to choose that if slider is longer than three times of circle's radius (including head & end).
   
   and many other sliders i will give same suggestion, so won't mention it again
2. 01:24:771 (2) - move next NC to here? - Fixed!
3. 01:31:900 (1,2,3,4) - unnecessary overlaps here :<

- Changed!
emm....maybe too many spinners which could be the hardest object for beginners, try to reduce the amount next time plz - Okay! Thank you for the advice :3

[Another]

1. 00:40:811 (1) - a low speed slider follow stream maybe not a good idea...but anyway, just up to you :> - I think this part is bit slow than other parts in the song~

Nothing much to say about this diff



generally a good mapset good luck with rank~

Thank you for Modding~ :3

add "electro gothic" and "lincle kingdom" to tag

also i suggest using various hitsounds in long streams. normal spamming sounds bad

http://puu.sh/BfZv

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔어요
모든건 제안으로써 무시하셔도 좋습니다



맵 완성도가 엄청나네요 ㅎㄷ;;
노래도 마음에 들고 xD 빨리 랭크 되라고 star!

Sorry for being very late again >_<

bossandy wrote: 91q67

Hi hi~ Request from my queue~
　
[ Normal]
　

1. HP-1? I think it is too high now >_< Yep
2. 00:50:018 (2) - Use whistle instead of clap may follow the music more? I don't think clap here sounds good Whistle + Clap instead (:
3. 00:56:256 (3) - This slider isn't really symmetrical , I try to make a symmetrical slider!
   

   372,272,56256,2,0,B|338:267|295:245|280:196|280:196|260:176|256:140|256:140|252:176|232:196|232:196|216:248|176:268|140:272,1,375,0|0

   Leaving as is >_<
4. 01:01:751 (4,1) - Make them like this rhythm , They will have a better flow because the slider flow the long tone! Ah, personally want to keep the symmetry here (:
   
5. 01:12:890 (4,1) - High suggetion to delete circle 1 and add a repeat on slider4 , the music still loud 01:13:484 ~ 01:14:078 But I want that stack :3
6. 02:10:144 (5) - Change to a slider and end at 02:11:091 like "Beginner diff" Yep

　

Scorpiour : Made the spinner appear 1/2 after instead of 1/4 (: (not adding creator's name because Extra and Hyper doesn't have creator's name on it xD)

Thanks both~

http://up.ppy.sh/files/nnrt3.rar

Hi,mod request from my queue.

[Extra]
01:12:890 - It is noisy when it is 60%. Add timing point,volume 40%
01:57:890 - add circle
01:59:078 - ^
02:03:385 (7) - slider end point, 02:03:533 is better.

[Another]
01:57:890 - add circle
01:59:078 - ^

[Hyper]
01:09:325 - Volume is too small when it is 20%.The volume of this timing point is changed to 60%.

[Normal]
fine~

[Beginner]
fine~

Ryu* is so good <3
nice map
good luck~

http://puu.sh/BiMD
I don't want to stack

hi from my mod Q

Extra

00:56:256 - omg make this slider more symmetric http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/344952
01:14:078 - ^ http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/344954

Another

01:30:117 - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/BLfU
01:41:405(1,2) - hm sliders with 2 repeats very confused on this speed/ maybe you make so http://puu.sh/BLil

Hyper

01:03:979 - i think mabe add note here
01:34:276 - make this slider symmetric http://puu.sh/BLqt

Normal

fine~~

Beginner

fine~~

It's all good luck~~

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Beginner]
00:31:306 (1) - try to avoid overlap like this? http://puu.sh/BPn9
02:06:355 (1) - change to 2.0x here so that SV will be similar to previous part?

[Normal]
I think SV is high for a Normal. So you'd better change main ds to 0.8x to avoid jump.
01:03:385 (1) - change to a slider?
01:21:207 (3) - curve it to fit (4) better?

[Hyper]
00:13:187 (4) - don't like the slider like this because it end on long white tick and cause a slip of downbeat.
01:09:028 (1) - decrease once repeat and add a note? It will add more sense of hit.
01:19:573 (7) - ctrl+r? will flow better.
01:53:731 (2) - try to avoid to put head under 01:53:286 (1)?
02:03:979 (1,4) - avoid the little overlap?

[Another]
Fine.

[Extra]
00:56:256 (3) - use some pattern like this? http://puu.sh/BPAj

That's all I can find. GL~

Hi \ôvô/
Sorry, this mod is more small than usually.

[In General]
Why there's no Kiai times... It would be good to atleast have one here : 01:15:266 to 01:36:652

[Beginner]
Nothing to say.

[Normal]
There's one unsnapped timing point here : 01:54:013
00:53:583 : That's a pretty nice slider.
01:09:028 (4) - You should add a clap here to keep the consistency.

[Hyper]
00:20:018 (2) - I'm suggesting you to add a finish here.

[Another]
02:10:144 (5) - Delete the whistle.

[Extra]
Unsnapped timing point here : 01:14:053

Sorry if the mod was useless.

It took me like, 5 hours to actually get started on modding this.

Extra:
Tick Rate 2!~
00:33:385 (2) - Flip this horizontally so the repeat is easier to see. Or just do something, the repeat is hard to see atm.
00:35:761 (2) - ^
00:41:702 (4) - Make this curve more notable, right now, it just looks weird
00:45:266 (2) - Same as before
00:56:256 (3) - Not symmetrical!~. Try moving the 2nd sliderpoint a bit to the right.
01:14:053 - Unsnapped green section~

ANNUDDA:
Sexy~. It's like, it's hard but it's not stupid jumpy or anything.

HUVY:
01:22:989 (3) - NAZI: Stack with previous (6)
01:31:306 (2) - NAZI: Stack with previous (4)'s end
01:53:731 (2) - Move this so it isn't overlapped by (1)'s slidertrack
01:59:820 (3) - NAZI: Stack with previous (3)

Nurmul:
00:47:939 (3) - Slightly touches HP bar
01:40:811 (4) - Remove whistle on end of slider
01:40:811 (4) - add clap on end of slider
01:54:028 - Unsnapped green section!~

Ayzay:
Claps on 2 and 4! >3<~
00:33:682 (5) - Make this into 2 sliders or something

swag~.

popner wrote: 2s73y

[Normal]

I think SV is high for a Normal. So you'd better change main ds to 0.8x to avoid jump. xD
01:03:385 (1) - change to a slider? as I said in previous mod, I want to keep (4,1,1)'s symmetry (:
01:21:207 (3) - curve it to fit (4) better? ok~

CDFA wrote: 6d6j4w

Nurmul:
00:47:939 (3) - Slightly touches HP bar I want to keep symmetry here, personally xD
01:40:811 (4) - Remove whistle on end of slider
01:40:811 (4) - add clap on end of slider It's fine imo, whistle sounds more dramatic here :3
01:54:028 - Unsnapped green section!~ Snapped (:

Gabe wrote: 4i6g6f

[Normal]
There's one unsnapped timing point here : 01:54:013 Snapped~
00:53:583 : That's a pretty nice slider. Thank you (:
01:09:028 (4) - You should add a clap here to keep the consistency. ok~

Thanks all~
http://up.ppy.sh/files/nnrt4.rar

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Gabe wrote: 4i6g6f

Hi \ôvô/
Sorry, this mod is more small than usually.

[In General]
Why there's no Kiai times... It would be good to atleast have one here : 01:15:266 to 01:36:652 - I'll discuss about it with guest mappers

02:10:144 (5) - Delete the whistle. - Fixed

Sorry if the mod was useless.

thank you for modding~

Katty Pie wrote: 5p4938

hi from my mod Q

Another

01:30:117 - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/BLfU - Changed
01:41:405(1,2) - hm sliders with 2 repeats very confused on this speed/ maybe you make so http://puu.sh/BLil - X

It's all good luck~~

popner wrote: 2s73y

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Beginner]
00:31:306 (1) - try to avoid overlap like this? http://puu.sh/BPn9 - I'll consider about it x_x
02:06:355 (1) - change to 2.0x here so that SV will be similar to previous part? - X

That's all I can find. GL~

thank you for modding you both~ :3

CDFA wrote: 6d6j4w

It took me like, 5 hours to actually get started on modding this.

Extra:
Tick Rate 2!~
00:33:385 (2) - Flip this horizontally so the repeat is easier to see. Or just do something, the repeat is hard to see atm.
00:35:761 (2) - ^
00:41:702 (4) - Make this curve more notable, right now, it just looks weird
00:45:266 (2) - Same as before
00:56:256 (3) - Not symmetrical!~. Try moving the 2nd sliderpoint a bit to the right.
01:14:053 - Unsnapped green section~

ANNUDDA:
Sexy~. It's like, it's hard but it's not stupid jumpy or anything.

HUVY:
01:22:989 (3) - NAZI: Stack with previous (6)
01:31:306 (2) - NAZI: Stack with previous (4)'s end
01:53:731 (2) - Move this so it isn't overlapped by (1)'s slidertrack
01:59:820 (3) - NAZI: Stack with previous (3)

Nurmul:
00:47:939 (3) - Slightly touches HP bar
01:40:811 (4) - Remove whistle on end of slider
01:40:811 (4) - add clap on end of slider
01:54:028 - Unsnapped green section!~

Ayzay:
Claps on 2 and 4! >3<~ - Changed in some parts
00:33:682 (5) - Make this into 2 sliders or something - Fixed

swag~.

thanks~

Just posting to say that I'll mod the taiko tmr
Will edit this later when I mod
And Rika will bubble this after the taiko has been fixed :3 ~

Now I have to revise my exam. 03:07 here ;w;

Yes ~ I checked your mapset ~ can't find anything issue

But taiko i'm not sure ~ so aabc271 will mod taiko for tomorrow ~

Fix aabc's mod after find me ~

[General]
2nd offset is too late for me.
Try 126350? it's better to me or please check it with some mat/bat

[Another]
01:20:167 (1,2) - Select them and 1 grid right for symmetry with 01:20:761 (3)
01:32:791 (5) - Finish on the head
01:33:533 (2) - ^

[Beginner]
00:40:885 Remove break because arrows appear during the player is still playing/spinning
00:50:315 The same ^
01:40:216 (2) - You could to curve this slider to create a blanket with 01:38:137 (2)

[Normal]
I think SV with this jumps and low AR is really high for a normal diff :\ I suggest you to decrease it a bit
00:50:315 Same thing I wrote in beginner
01:17:642 (1) - Move to x:68 y:240 to create a blanket with 01:17:048 (4)?
01:18:236 (2) - If you follow above, overlap it with 01:16:454 (3)
01:54:177 (4) - Almost touches hp bar, move it down?

[Hyper]
02:06:355 Remove green line since there is already the red line o.o

[Extra]
01:45:563 (3) - Overlap with 01:44:375 (3)?

Please I love the another. You are a pro mapper.
Good luck Reisen, gogo rank :3

Chewin wrote: 8364l

[General]
2nd offset is too late for me.
Try 126350? it's better to me or please check it with some mat/bat Agree about this - @Reisen : Already fixed this in my diff (:

[Normal]
I think SV with this jumps and low AR is really high for a normal diff :\ I suggest you to decrease it a bit >_<
00:50:315 Same thing I wrote in beginner Removed~
01:17:642 (1) - Move to x:68 y:240 to create a blanket with 01:17:048 (4)?
01:18:236 (2) - If you follow above, overlap it with 01:16:454 (3) Fixed both~
01:54:177 (4) - Almost touches hp bar, move it down? Ah, no for this one :3

Thanks Chewin, useful mod :3
(again, to Reisen, I agree with Chewin's offset and already used it)

http://up.ppy.sh/files/nnrt5.rar

이번껀 알아서 고쳐줘. 쉬우니까 All Fixed로
Edit : General 요소는 난 안건드리까 알아서!

Chewin wrote: 8364l

[General]
2nd offset is too late for me.
Try 126350? it's better to me or please check it with some mat/bat

[Another]
01:20:167 (1,2) - Select them and 1 grid right for symmetry with 01:20:761 (3)
01:32:791 (5) - Finish on the head
01:33:533 (2) - ^

[Beginner]
00:40:885 Remove break because arrows appear during the player is still playing/spinning
00:50:315 The same ^
01:40:216 (2) - You could to curve this slider to create a blanket with 01:38:137 (2)

[Normal]
I think SV with this jumps and low AR is really high for a normal diff :\ I suggest you to decrease it a bit
00:50:315 Same thing I wrote in beginner
01:17:642 (1) - Move to x:68 y:240 to create a blanket with 01:17:048 (4)?
01:18:236 (2) - If you follow above, overlap it with 01:16:454 (3)
01:54:177 (4) - Almost touches hp bar, move it down?

[Hyper]
02:06:355 Remove green line since there is already the red line o.o

[Extra]
01:45:563 (3) - Overlap with 01:44:375 (3)?

Please I love the another. You are a pro mapper.
Good luck Reisen, gogo rank :3

Thank you for modding bro~ it was really helpful!

also Fixed CDFA 's and Gabe 's Modding in Extra! Thank you guys~

OK ~ So now I'm coming for the taiko mod, as said in my earlier post :3
Let's go ~~

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

-----------------------

[TaikoDS]

00:00:415 ( 1 ) - I think changing this to x0.5 ( no speed difference ) will be better as the song is softer at the beginning ~

01:56:850 ~ 02:01:603 - I personally find this a bit too fast, and I can't react well even retrying. I know it is for increasing difficulty, but I guess sth like x1.25 is enough .__.

02:01:603 ~ 02:03:979 - ^

02:04:721 ~ 02:06:350 - Well, x2.0 is unnecessarily fast imo. Basically that part needs memorization or else I'll just miss all Orz
I prefer making the following changes ( Rate of increase / 2 ). This can create speed-up effects and keep the difficulty reasonable :

• 02:04:721 : x1.25 -> x1.13
  02:04:870 : x1.5 -> x1.25
  02:05:018 : x1.75 -> x1.38
  02:05:167 : x2.0 -> x1.5

The map is nice overall ~

Only the x1.5 & x2.0 parts are breaking the diff spread

Others look good, esp hitsounds :3

I like how it's mapped. Keep it up ~~

Rating : 8/10 ( +1 : Hitsounds, +0.5 : Notes arrangements -1 : x1.5 & x2 part - Combo breaker & widening difficulty spread)

Star and good luck ~

aabc271 wrote: 72671j

OK ~ So now I'm coming for the taiko mod, as said in my earlier post :3
Let's go ~~

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

-----------------------

[TaikoDS]

00:00:415 ( 1 ) - I think changing this to x0.5 ( no speed difference ) will be better as the song is softer at the beginning ~
? I already have used x0.5 sv at that point @w@; edit: resnap error btw, fix ;w;

01:56:850 ~ 02:01:603 - I personally find this a bit too fast, and I can't react well even retrying. I know it is for increasing difficulty, but I guess sth like x1.25 is enough .__.
ok.. fix ><

02:01:603 ~ 02:03:979 - ^
^

02:04:721 ~ 02:06:350 - Well, x2.0 is unnecessarily fast imo. Basically that part needs memorization or else I'll just miss all Orz
I prefer making the following changes ( Rate of increase / 2 ). This can create speed-up effects and keep the difficulty reasonable :

• 02:04:721 : x1.25 -> x1.13
  02:04:870 : x1.5 -> x1.25
  02:05:018 : x1.75 -> x1.38
  02:05:167 : x2.0 -> x1.5

^

Suggested patterns

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:54:325 ( 2 ) - Blue note ? imo this fits the pitch of music more ~
^

____________________________________________

Can't find any more as the hitsounds are nicely placed ~
I can see that you really put your efforts in creating nice hitsounds & patterns. Good job

The map is nice overall ~

Only the x1.5 & x2.0 parts are breaking the diff spread

Others look good, esp hitsounds :3

I like how it's mapped. Keep it up ~~

Rating : 8/10 ( +1 : Hitsounds, +0.5 : Notes arrangements -1 : x1.5 & x2 part - Combo breaker & widening difficulty spread)

Star and good luck ~

thx for nice mod, aabc


http://puu.sh/CR9d

Final Update for Being Bubbled!

Random mod is random

GO

[Beginner]

Not much to say really, but I think there's too many sliders and not enough circles. Up to you.

[Normal]

This looks quite challenging for a Normal. I know this is supposed to be challenging, as it is one of the Lincle bosses, but still the spacing seems a tad high to me. CS-1 should be better.

00:09:919 (1,1) - why is this here?
The map should begin at 00:12:296 in my opinion. This really isn't needed.

[Taiko DS]

I couldn't really master the end, so I asked Nashmun to test it. His impressions are in italic.

00:50:315 (1) - Why is there a speed-up here?
01:47:345 - From this point on and until the end of the map, the streams seem really random with hitsound placement.
01:56:850 - The speedups really suck. They're only there for added difficulty and don't actually bring anything to the map. Please remove them.

[Hyper]

All in all this is fine, but there's a lot of sliders and not enough circles. Some of it was hard to read too because you cluttered patterns.

[Another] There is a HUGE gap in difficulty between the Hyper and this. Since you have another difficulty above this, consider making it easier.

Many of your sliders are straight. Consider using curves more often? It'll look better.

Some of the jumps are really exaggerated for 200+bpm imo, especially the ones using symmetry. Even [Extra] has smaller jumps but is harder because of the streams.
00:21:207 (1) - I read that as a 1/2 slider
00:35:167 (1,2) - Couldn't see that pattern until too late
01:50:910 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is a bit excessive IMO, even for a diff that high. It was not fun to play.

[Extra]

Nothing to say here really, it's just some pure dksslqj goodness. The deathstreams look okay (a bit iffy about the sharp turns sometimes), this is readable, and if I could play it without missing every second, I'd say this is pretty fun.

An okay map imo, not really my style, but it was readable, fun for the most part, but it has a few spread issues especially with Another which should be way easier than it is now.

If you are not going to make any changes, please do not kd this post.

probably no change x_x sorry color :/

eh that's okay.

OK ~ everything looks better now ~

Good luck with cool rank ~

Oh my god *-*

GO REISEEN <3

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

OK ~ everything looks better now ~

Good luck with cool rank ~

yay~ thank you!!

Chewin wrote: 8364l

Oh my god *-*

GO REISEEN <3

Let's do it > <

It's time to keep practicing like I did before ! !!

Frostmourne wrote: 4k533o

It's time to keep practicing like I did before ! !!

> < go for it!!!

Go go go go!
I have to practice this song before it ranks lol

Can't see anything on that background X_X

Charles445 wrote: 252k60

Can't see anything on that background X_X

do you mean no BG there or need to fix combo colours :3?

uhm... is only me or in the tags i see only the full name of Ryu* and not the one of Starving Trancer. so... why not insert in the tags his full name? (who is Yusuke Ceo) (is only a stupid suggestion. can be ignored. =))

Ooooooooooooooh... Let's go!!!!

Few things

[Beginner]
00:19:424 (1,1) - Too soon after spinner.
00:28:929 (1,1) - Same
01:12:890 (1,1) - Same
01:34:276 (1,1) - Same
01:54:474 (1,1) - Same

[Hyper]
AR +1


Getting someone to look over the taiko right now.

Charles445 wrote: 252k60

Few things

[Beginner]
00:19:424 (1,1) - Too soon after spinner. - Changed into note
00:28:929 (1,1) - Same - ^
01:12:890 (1,1) - Same - Shorten spinner's length
01:34:276 (1,1) - Same - ^
01:54:474 (1,1) - Same - ^

[Hyper]
AR +1 - Fixed


Getting someone to look over the taiko right now.

i'll fix those few hours later~ and edit this

EDIT : All Fixed~ Thanks :3

Charles asked me to look at the taiko.

There are 3 things I want to point out.

1.
The opening of the map is overmapped. There is no sort of beat at all, yet you decided to place one. You should consider mapping to the melody at this point because there is no beat to focus on. Or you could just remove this all-together, seeing as the osu! diffs did not map this point.

2.
Overuse of finishers. You used way to many finishers in this map. Finishers are ment to be placed on beats that have a FINISH SOUND in the music. Throwing them all around the map is not a good idea. Of course it is a good idea if the song has tons of finish sounds. So I suggest you tone down some of the finishers.

3.
The speed up at the end concerns me. Not that is does not fit, but it's not consistent. You need to either make it one speed up total, or remove it. Because changing the speed of the notes in those short periods of time is confuseing and throws readability out the window.

Although with these flaws you did a very good job mapping this and I really enjoyed it.
Don't KD this btw.

MMzz wrote: 2g46e

Charles asked me to look at the taiko.

There are 3 things I want to point out.

1.
The opening of the map is overmapped. There is no sort of beat at all, yet you decided to place one. You should consider mapping to the melody at this point because there is no beat to focus on. Or you could just remove this all-together, seeing as the osu! diffs did not map this point.

2.
Overuse of finishers. You used way to many finishers in this map. Finishers are ment to be placed on beats that have a FINISH SOUND in the music. Throwing them all around the map is not a good idea. Of course it is a good idea if the song has tons of finish sounds. So I suggest you tone down some of the finishers.

3.
The speed up at the end concerns me. Not that is does not fit, but it's not consistent. You need to either make it one speed up total, or remove it. Because changing the speed of the notes in those short periods of time is confuseing and throws readability out the window.

Although with these flaws you did a very good job mapping this and I really enjoyed it.
Don't KD this btw.

KDS said :

1. Even if it's little bit unfit to Beat of Song, this degree is quite fine i think. also i like this part!

2. Think about 'Ryougen no Mai' 's Patterns :3

3. Honestly , if no speed change here , i think it's really really boring.

Mods so far : Standard - 18 Taiko - 4

Hi, from my queue! Sorry for the lateness...

[Beginner]
00:41:999 - This whole combo didn't work too well with me, so how about THIS. I've placed a repeated slider before your combo starts, changed the other slider to the same one as I've added and done apprpiate shape of the next slider + the spacing. (5) can be snapped to near the middle

[Normal]
This is too hard for a normal, I would name it Normal+?
02:07:613 - Select the whole combo and CTRL + J

[Hyper]
00:13:038 (3) - Whistle at the end sounds quite good
00:32:642 (2) - Make this shape symmetrical, so both ends the same x value on the grid.

Another and Extra I didn't find anything, hope you get this rebubbled - it seems like a fine rank map there

Jebok wrote: 336e1h

Hi, from my queue! Sorry for the lateness...

[Beginner]
00:41:999 - This whole combo didn't work too well with me, so how about THIS. I've placed a repeated slider before your combo starts, changed the other slider to the same one as I've added and done apprpiate shape of the next slider + the spacing. (5) can be snapped to near the middle

[Normal]
This is too hard for a normal, I would name it Normal+?
02:07:613 - Select the whole combo and CTRL + J

[Hyper]
00:13:038 (3) - Whistle at the end sounds quite good
00:32:642 (2) - Make this shape symmetrical, so both ends the same x value on the grid.

Another and Extra I didn't find anything, hope you get this rebubbled - it seems like a fine rank map there

EDIT : All fixed in Hyper diff

Back again!

[Beginner]
00:19:424 (1) - Extend the spinner to 00:21:801 - and delete 00:22:395 (1), then put a new combo on 00:22:989 (1)
00:28:929 (1) - Extend the spinner to 00:31:306 - and delete 00:31:900 (1,2) , then put a new combo on 00:32:494 (3)
01:15:266 - Add circle
01:15:563 - Add circle

[Taiko]
I'm gonna give my own thoughts on this since nothing was changed.

The beginning really really is over-mapped. Even for a taiko it doesn't make much sense. If I played taiko more often I'd much prefer it start at 00:12:296.

Also the speed up at the end... my god, it's hard enough, you don't need to make it unreasonably hard. Keep everything 1.00x there's no need for a speedup.


Extra needs no changes (although the ending is particularly difficult and will kill a lot of players)
Another needs no changes
Hyper needs no changes (somehow blue tick kicksliders work in this...)
Normal needs no changes


After these changes I can supply a bubble, or you can get someone else to bubble and I will rank. Mapset's almost ready, just need those quick tuneups to Beginner and the Taiko.

Charles445 wrote: 252k60

Back again!

[Beginner]
00:19:424 (1) - Extend the spinner to 00:21:801 - and delete 00:22:395 (1), then put a new combo on 00:22:989 (1)
00:28:929 (1) - Extend the spinner to 00:31:306 - and delete 00:31:900 (1,2) , then put a new combo on 00:32:494 (3)
01:15:266 - Add circle
01:15:563 - Add circle

[Taiko]
I'm gonna give my own thoughts on this since nothing was changed.

The beginning really really is over-mapped. Even for a taiko it doesn't make much sense. If I played taiko more often I'd much prefer it start at 00:12:296.

Also the speed up at the end... my god, it's hard enough, you don't need to make it unreasonably hard. Keep everything 1.00x there's no need for a speedup.


Extra needs no changes (although the ending is particularly difficult and will kill a lot of players)
Another needs no changes
Hyper needs no changes (somehow blue tick kicksliders work in this...)
Normal needs no changes


After these changes I can supply a bubble, or you can get someone else to bubble and I will rank. Mapset's almost ready, just need those quick tuneups to Beginner and the Taiko.

Beginner - All fixed.

Taiko - Since it has 1.25x in the middle of map , so i left 1.13x and 1.25x. everything except those is removed. Removed whole things

(p.s - I sent Bubble Request to Kawayi Rika, But if she reject it , Just Bubble my map thanks :3)

EDIT : Waiting Kawayi Rika's Bubble~ :3

Aright fixed 445's mod ~

Looks better now ~ Rebubbled!~

Congratz Reisen! /o/

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Aright fixed 445's mod ~

Looks better now ~ Rebubbled!~

yay~ thx!!

Ok, this is ready to go!

~Ranked!~

Charles445 wrote: 252k60

Ok, this is ready to go!

~Ranked!~

thank you Charles~ yay!!

congrats

congrats, great set.

呵呵

Congratz❤

Congrats~
Have a Cat:

Omedeto udong ><

gratz Reisen

congrats!

Fun song

thank you Ladies & Gentlemen!! xD

Gratz, really fun to play.

Congratulation! (:

wowowow..cool! GZ~

굳

omedeto~>w<

Thanks~

/o/

축하합니다! 벌써 저 잡으셧네요 ㅋ...

좋은 맵 더 만들어 주세요 ㅎㅎ

congrats :>

My reisen <3 Congratz *-*

Great!

nice

Thank you all~!! Now i'm going to focus on my Pending maps~

Good Job KDS on this Taiko diff.. Really nice~

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