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PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 24 October, 2012 at 9:03:50 PM

Artist: Mr. Funky
Title: Break!
Source: DJMax Portable 3
Tags: synth pop rock juna entia j rubystar rickyboi
BPM: 167
Filesize: 11192kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. rickyboi's WS (5 stars, 399 notes)
  2. SS (4.74 stars, 213 notes)
  3. TS (3.04 stars, 110 notes)
: Mr. Funky - Break!
: Mr. Funky - Break! (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd beatmap set I've submitted, my first to have a video, and my first to go for rank.

Note:
Difficulty names are based on turntable charts in DJMP3.

Special thanks:
rickyboi for his guest difficulty.
Lolicore Flandre for his awesome BG.
And to all the modders who helped out :)
Last edited by PROGUY , edited 66 times in total.
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
Sorry if it took too long, kinda busy.

I added a custom hitsound on my difficulty. You may use it if you want, just make sure to full submit it!

Also to change your BG to either 640x480 / 800x600 / 1024x768.

And delete the .osb file in your folder if you're not going to add any SB.

: rickyboi's WS.rar
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter

rickyboi wrote: 1z2y1b

Sorry if it took too long, kinda busy.

I added a custom hitsound on my difficulty. You may use it if you want, just make sure to full submit it!

Also to change your BG to either 640x480 / 800x600 / 1024x768.

And delete the .osb file in your folder if you're not going to add any SB.
Okay, thanks! Also kudosu given for the IRC mod - some corrections in SS and as well as changing offset :)
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
Oh right! please put "rickyboi" in the tags of all the difficulties :)
ExPew
Elite Mapper
1,220 posts
ed January 2011
star.... Nice map....
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter

rickyboi wrote: 1z2y1b

Oh right! please put "rickyboi" in the tags of all the difficulties :)
Done. :D
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
ed September 2011
❤I like the song OvO
❤here is my mod~!

❤In general
SPOILER
just to let u know, the easiest diff shoud be less than 3 stars for rank. so try to make an easy diff.
Also, can u find a bigger BG? and it's not very clear though. the suggested dimension for BG is 1024X768

❤【rickyboi's WS】diff
SPOILER
01:49:538~01:50:796 add a spinner
great~! :)

❤【SS】diff
SPOILER
00:06:964 (6,7) - doesn't look good to me...
00:12:353 (2) - add a clap at the tail
00:14:509 (1) - move the clap from the head to the tail
00:15:047 (2,3,4) - ^
00:16:664 (5) - remove clap
00:40:017 (2) - add a clap
01:27:622 (6) - Ctrl+R?
01:30:496 (6) - ^
01:37:862 (5) - end clap
01:38:580 (1) - remove clap
01:39:299 (3) - move clap from head to end
i think you get the idea of the clap from01:37:503 to 01:40:377,so use to clap way in the remain section.
01:50:796 (x)\
01:50:886 (x)- may be add them for fun?
01:50:976 (x)/
❤【TS】diff
SPOILER
00:06:964 (x) - add a circle
00:12:712 (x) - ^
00:14:509 (1) - this is not fun... too long, try to change it
00:19:538 (4,1) - no blocking plz~!
00:20:257 (1,2) - ^
00:27:802 (X) - add a circle
00:44:329 (3,4) - no blocking plz~!

still needs work~! good luck~!
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008

-Baby Strawberry- wrote: 595i6i

❤【rickyboi's WS】diff
01:49:538~01:50:796 add a spinner - Okay!
great~! :)
:D

: Mr. Funky - Break! (PROGUY) [rickyboi's WS].osu
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-'s mod:
❤In general
SPOILER
just to let u know, the easiest diff shoud be less than 3 stars for rank. so try to make an easy diff.I wanted TS to be the one being = or < 3 stars since it's the easiest one in this set. Oh well, I'll try to tone it down sometime later.
Also, can u find a bigger BG? and it's not very clear though. the suggested dimension for BG is 1024X768 I'll try.

❤【TS】diff
SPOILER
00:06:964 (x) - add a circle Done.
00:12:712 (x) - ^ Done.
00:14:509 (1) - this is not fun... too long, try to change it Sure.
00:19:538 (4,1) - no blocking plz~!Okay.
00:20:257 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:27:802 (X) - add a circle Does a slider count?
00:44:329 (3,4) - no blocking plz~! Done.

❤【SS】diff
SPOILER
00:06:964 (6,7) - doesn't look good to me... Fixed, 6 is now on 7's slider head. (This results in a huge jump, but I guess that's fine... right?)
00:12:353 (2) - add a clap at the tail Sounds weird.
00:14:509 (1) - move the clap from the head to the tail Also sounds weird.
00:15:047 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:16:664 (5) - remove clap ^
00:40:017 (2) - add a clap Done.
01:27:622 (6) - Ctrl+R? Good idea!
01:30:496 (6) - ^ ^
01:37:862 (5) - end clap Okay.
01:38:580 (1) - remove clap Er, no?
01:39:299 (3) - move clap from head to end Added clap at end, kept the clap at the head.
i think you get the idea of the clap from01:37:503 to 01:40:377,so use to clap way in the remain section. Yes, I do.
01:50:796 (x)\
01:50:886 (x)- may be add them for fun? Mm, better not.
01:50:976 (x)/

still needs work~! good luck~! Many thanks :D

Edit: I just attemped to make TS as easy as possible. It's now about 3 stars instead of 3.5.
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
ed September 2011
here's my little recheck

the maps are fine to me, for TS, focus working on the shape of the sliders, make them look as beautiful as u can.

Also, i just found that u got 2 insane diff and 1 normal diff, so better make the SS be your hard diff by lower the settings, or make a new diff if u don't wanna change SS diff. because there's really a jump between each diffs. :)

No KD for this post OvO
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Alright, thanks again :D

Edit: Also I can't find a better image than the one that's currently being used. Google Image gave me a lot of disturbing results instead -.-
BeatofIke
Beatmap Nominator
4,176 posts
ed September 2011
STAR~

Will mod it later.
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Thanks for the star! Also thanks in advance for the mod :D
Flanster
5,938 posts
ed August 2010
Yo, Nice to see another DP3 Tune! Are you interested in using my DJMAX Portable 3 hitcircles on your map?



If you want to use em my map and get em ;)
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Hi there, I've seen your map before :)
Regarding the custom hitcircles, I'll think about it at the moment. Thanks for the offer :D
BeatofIke
Beatmap Nominator
4,176 posts
ed September 2011
OMG, I totally forgot about modding this. :o I'll mod it don't worry.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
ed December 2010
yo~

General


I think you need diff with less than 3.0star-rating D:

TS
grid level: 3 or 4
00:23:491 (1,3) - you can find better slider-shape
00:27:083 (3) - http://puu.sh/oGyo somrthing like this? + x208 y64
00:37:503 (1,2) - same shape as ^
00:45:047 (4) - so close to (3) maybe ~2 grids right?
00:49:000 (1) - no way! ugly shape! try this http://puu.sh/oGzE
t/37194&start=0 read this
00:53:131 (3,4) - something like this http://puu.sh/oGAJ
00:57:982 (1,2,3,) - http://puu.sh/oGyo try this
01:15:227 (2,3,4) - try to fix shape

WS
00:23:850 (4) - a bit messy shape ><
00:34:628 (1) - wrong shape
00:55:287 (4,1) - terrible! http://puu.sh/oGCt maybe change something?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
gl~
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008

-Bakari- wrote: 1r12o

yo~
WS
00:23:850 (4) - a bit messy shape ><
00:34:628 (1) - wrong shape
00:55:287 (4,1) - terrible! http://puu.sh/oGCt maybe change something? - I don't really know what's terrible in this. The AR made it unnoticable after execution, but sure I'll change it anyway.
Thanks!

Also regarding the lowest star difficulty.. It doesn't really have to be lower than 3 stars. Just make sure there's a normal difficulty and the diffculty spread is fine on the map set.

: Mr. Funky - Break! (PROGUY) [rickyboi's WS].rar
Last edited by rickyboi , edited 2 times in total.
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Bakari's mod:

General
Fixed.
I can't find a better source :(
I think you need diff with less than 3.0star-rating D: Edit: Well as rickyboi have explained above, I think it isn't necessary because TS is already the "Normal" difficulty here. It's close to 3 stars after all.

TS
00:23:491 (1,3) - you can find better slider-shape Done.
00:27:083 (3) - http://puu.sh/oGyo somrthing like this? + x208 y64 Done. (The coordinates lead to x0.87 spacing by the way, but I did understand what you mean by this placement.)
00:37:503 (1,2) - same shape as ^ Done.
00:45:047 (4) - so close to (3) maybe ~2 grids right? Yes.
00:49:000 (1) - no way! ugly shape! try this http://puu.sh/oGzE Sure.
00:53:131 (3,4) - something like this http://puu.sh/oGAJ It's hard to do it with a x0.8 spacing, but I did what I can.
00:57:982 (1,2,3,) - http://puu.sh/oGyo try this Done.
01:15:227 (2,3,4) - try to fix shape And done.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
gl~ Thanks :)
Last edited by PROGUY , edited 1 time in total.
BeatofIke
Beatmap Nominator
4,176 posts
ed September 2011
Hello, Sorry for the long wait. Here's what I've found:

[General]
-Your break_2.png is too small. You most likely have to resize it to 800X600 or 1024X768.
-Your Audio Lead-In is inconsistent.
-Usually it's better to disable letterbox during breaks if your map has a video.

[TS]
-Hp Drain (-1) for better difficulty spread.
-Open osu file and set Audio-Lead In to 1500.
AudioLeadIn: 1500

[SS]
-HP Drain/Overall Difficuty (-1) for better difficulty spread.
-Open osu file and set the Audio-Lead In to 2000.
AudioLeadIn: 2000

[Rickyboi's WS]
-Open osu file and set Audio-Lead In to 2000.
AudioLeadIn: 2000

Good Map.
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
BeatofIke's mod:

[General]
-Your break_2.png is too small. You most likely have to resize it to 800X600 or 1024X768. Edit: If I do that, it may reduce the quality of the BG, and there's no better replacement for it.
-Your Audio Lead-In is inconsistent. Okay lol again
-Usually it's better to disable letterbox during breaks if your map has a video. Done for all diffs.

The rest of your mod has been used. Thanks once again :)
(I'm now a bit uncomfortable with Bakari's mod above lol)
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Full submission update for 800 x 600 BG as suggested by the previous mods.
Flanster
5,938 posts
ed August 2010
Just a few pointers.

General
You should work on the sliders, lot of em need adjustment.
Enjoyed playing "SS" a lot

rickyboi's WS
Isnt AR9 a bit too much, AR8 would fit good.
01:13:970 (3) - note is too high and blocking the HP-bar, this is UNRANKABLE.
some other notes are a bit up, might be better to put em down a little?

TS
Audio Leadin is 1500, the other diffs is 2000
Though i can see why since the notes are starting later but its still inconsistency.

heres a star from me 8-)
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod :)
Now I just gotta wait for rickyboi to make his changes ;)
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008

Lolicore Flandre wrote: 4f3l32

rickyboi's WS
Isnt AR9 a bit too much, AR8 would fit good. - I'll think about it. I've been seeing maps with almost same bpm but also AR 9.
01:13:970 (3) - note is too high and blocking the HP-bar, this is UNRANKABLE. - Fixed, didn't notice that.
Thanks!

: Mr. Funky - Break! (PROGUY) [rickyboi's WS].osu
Flanster
5,938 posts
ed August 2010
Me again, dropping off a BG remake.Spent my time photoshoping while upgrading my gf's laptop.Use if you like.
SPOILER
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Thanks again :D
spboxer3
Global
3,616 posts
ed November 2009
from #modreqs

[general] 5x5m35


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. looks all fine~

[TS] 475m3m


  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:10:916 (4,1) -
  2. 00:51:874 (3,3) -

[SS] 6y6l



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:10:017 (4,3) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:34:628 (1) - awkward slider~you can make the layout better~ (arc)
  2. 00:40:736 (2) - ^
  3. 00:46:485 (2,4) - ^
  4. 00:56:724 (6) - ^

[rickyboi's WS] 663v21



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:19:538 (4,2) -
  2. 00:33:730 (3,1) -
  3. 00:40:017 (2,2) -
  4. 00:45:946 (6,3) -
  5. 01:22:952 (4,2) -


    Hitsound
    (For I listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
    1. 00:03:012 - use Normal default?
    2. 00:17:383 (1) - finish?
    3. 00:34:628 (1) - finish at slider head?
    4. 00:40:377 (1) - ^
    mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
    1. 00:18:101 (4,1,2) - [suggest] let (1,2,4'slider start) use same spacing~

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

It's really better then your 1st map ^^
good luck~
star~
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
spboxer3's mod:

[TS] 475m3m


  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:10:916 (4,1) - Fixed.
  2. 00:51:874 (3,3) - Fixed.

[SS] 6y6l



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:10:017 (4,3) - Fixed.
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:34:628 (1) - awkward slider~you can make the layout better~ (arc) Done, but it's better that you should give a visual example (screenshot).
  2. 00:40:736 (2) - ^ ^
  3. 00:46:485 (2,4) - ^ I don't think there's anything wrong with these two.
  4. 00:56:724 (6) - ^
Done. Again an example would be nice.

It's really better then your 1st map ^^
good luck~
star~ Thanks :D
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008

spboxer3 wrote: 21lg

[rickyboi's WS] 663v21


  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:19:538 (4,2) - Looks fine to me, it's really unnoticable if you're playing it since this is AR 9.
  2. 00:33:730 (3,1) - ^ same
  3. 00:40:017 (2,2) - Fixed
  4. 00:45:946 (6,3) - same as 00:19:538
  5. 01:22:952 (4,2) - Fixed


    Hitsound
    (For I listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
    1. 00:03:012 - use Normal default? - Okay.
    2. 00:17:383 (1) - finish? - Okay.
    3. 00:34:628 (1) - finish at slider head? - No, but I'm going to put finish on slider end.
    4. 00:40:377 (1) - Okay.
    mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
    1. 00:18:101 (4,1,2) - [suggest] let (1,2,4'slider start) use same spacing~ - It's still same spacing (x1.0)
Thank you for the mod ;)

: Mr. Funky - Break! (PROGUY) [rickyboi's WS].osu
Cilvery
346 posts
ed May 2011
Hi~ <request from my queue>

[TS]
00:46:485 - add finish

01:20:976 - ^

[SS]
00:41:634 - stack 00:41:275 (3)

01:10:467 - add whistle

01:20:616 - add finish

01:32:113 - ^

01:41:814 - add whistle

[rickyboi's WS]
00:34:628 - add finish

00:34:988 - remove finish, instead to add whistle

01:29:239 - add whistle
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
o(`･ω･´)o
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Cilvery's mod:

[TS]
00:46:485 - add finish Done.

01:20:976 - ^ Done.

[SS]
00:41:634 - stack 00:41:275 (3) Done. (lol I didn't notice they weren't stacked)

01:10:467 - add whistle Soft whistle keysound is not the same as the normal whistle keysound :/

01:20:616 - add finish It won't fit with the song.

01:32:113 - ^ ^

01:41:814 - add whistle Ah, thanks for noticing that too.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
o(`･ω･´)o Thanks again :3
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
Sorry won't change anything on Clivery's mod because I didn't find anything useful.
spboxer3
Global
3,616 posts
ed November 2009
Random check from #modreqs

※ Notice 214h2b

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.

general 4o4j2g


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. you have difficulty spread issue:
you have large diff spread for TS and SS! and your easiest diff is 3.07 stars. under 3.24 stars it's rankable but you had better let it under 3.00 stars

TS 6v2b


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:11:994 - [suggestion] break time end at this way?
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:42:173 (3,4,1) - [nazi] make this pattern straight like ↓
    photo 

    36,77,42173,2,0,B|36:12,2,60,8|0|0
    40,172,42892,1,8
    44,268,43251,5,0
  2. 00:57:982 (1,2,3) - [suggestion] It's a boring pattern. you just used same slider to copy and paste. you can make the layout better like↓
    photo 

    128,272,57982,6,0,B|96:240|96:192|136:160,1,120,8|0
    128,68,58700,2,0,B|171:56|213:80|220:130,1,120,8|0
    304,164,59419,2,0,B|292:207|250:231|203:213,1,120,8|0
    216,312,60137,1,8

    or



    128,272,57982,6,0,B|96:240|96:192|136:160,1,120,8|0
    212,112,58700,2,0,B|244:144|244:192|204:224,1,120,8|0
    212,316,59419,2,0,B|244:348|292:348|324:308,1,120,8|0
    388,248,60137,1,8
  3. 01:18:461 (3,4,5) - Technically fine. but it's an immature pattern. Not pretty pattern in Normal diff :<

SS 4j1s1d



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:35:347 (3) - [arc issue] It's looked awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 00:35:167 (2) -
    before
    after 


    181,279,35347,2,0,B|152:240|192:184,2,75,0|0|8
  2. 00:40:736 (2) - Actually, this slider it's kinda awkward for me. because looks just want to use slider. but you don't make a shape for this slider. I wish you can make it pretty. like those ↓
    photo 

    240,48,40736,2,0,B|240:104|304:136|352:120,1,150,10|0
    416,88,41275,1,0
    488,104,41455,1,10
    416,88,41634,1,0


    240,48,40736,2,0,B|256:120|256:120|304:136|352:120,1,150,10|0
    408,112,41275,1,0
    472,72,41455,1,10
    408,112,41634,1,0


    240,56,40736,2,0,B|309:80|309:80|344:72|384:83,1,150,10|0
    408,152,41275,1,0
    456,96,41455,1,10
    408,152,41634,1,0
  3. 00:41:994 (1,2) - [arc issue] Those arc should be more relational
    before

    after 

    373,268,41994,6,0,B|415:274|464:264,2,75,0|8|0
    300,252,42532,2,0,B|264:248|230:211,1,75
  4. 00:46:485 (2,4) - those looks awkward slider too. please imitate slider like 00:40:736 (2) -


rickyboi's WS 194h4w



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:39:119 (2) - [suggestion] add finish since you add finish at preview part (00:37:503 - ,00:38:041 - 00:38:580 - )
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:11:634 (1) - [nazi] Set slider ball at turning point (00:11:814 - )
    photo 

    256,188,11634,6,0,B|312:176|336:240|336:240|384:264|440:248,1,200,0|14
  2. 00:31:754 (1) - ^
    photo 

    192,32,31754,6,0,B|232:64|288:48|288:48|336:80|336:132,1,200,4|10
  3. 00:47:562 (1,2) - [arc issue] It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 00:47:922 (2) -
    photo 

    208,344,47562,6,0,B|232:360|256:352|280:360|304:344,1,100

Umm...since you don't have any bubble/ranked map. cell me back when you fixed difficulty spread issue.
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
Fix'd all

http://puu.sh/ASZV
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter

※ Notice 214h2b

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.

general 4o4j2g


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. you have difficulty spread issue:
    (image)
you have large diff spread for TS and SS! and your easiest diff is 3.07 stars. under 3.24 stars it's rankable but you had better let it under 3.00 stars That's gonna be a tough fix, but I'll try.

TS 6v2b


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:11:994 - [suggestion] break time end at this way? Done. (I think.)
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:42:173 (3,4,1) - [nazi] make this pattern straight like ↓
    (image and code) Done.
  2. 00:57:982 (1,2,3) - [suggestion] It's a boring pattern. you just used same slider to copy and paste. you can make the layout better like↓
    (two of each images and codes) I used the second one :)
  3. 01:18:461 (3,4,5) - Technically fine. but it's an immature pattern. Not pretty pattern in Normal diff :< I can't find a better shape than this. It should be fine anyway.

SS 4j1s1d



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:35:347 (3) - [arc issue] It's looked awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 00:35:167 (2) -
    (images) Fixed.

    181,279,35347,2,0,B|152:240|192:184,2,75,0|0|8
    [/box]
  2. 00:40:736 (2) - Actually, this slider it's kinda awkward for me. because looks just want to use slider. but you don't make a shape for this slider. I wish you can make it pretty. like those ↓
    (three of each images and codes) I used the first one :)
  3. 00:41:994 (1,2) - [arc issue] Those arc should be more relational
    (image and code) I made 1 become as similar as 2 for a beautiful curve pattern. If you disagree with this, I'll use your suggestion instead.
  4. 00:46:485 (2,4) - those looks awkward slider too. please imitate slider like 00:40:736 (2) - Done.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
ed March 2008
Can't recognize the difficulty but anyway...

you don't have soft custom hitsound but you used S:C1, make you this is what you expected.

[WS]
00:03:012 (1,2) - move this to (272,220) so that it forms a square with next combo (3,4,5). The jump in fact fits what you've done in next combo
00:06:964 (5) - whistle like 00:06:245 -
00:09:838 (5) - ^
00:12:712 (5) - ^
00:22:772 (6) - whistle at the beginning corresponding to 00:21:335 (1) -
00:40:377 (1,2) - you can fix the spacing here
00:50:616 (1,2,3) - the spacing is simply confusing...
01:02:293 - the pattern changed but the logic from vocal shouldn't been changed. Use whistle on the purple (2) instead of the light blue (1,2,3).

- The placement in the beginning can be improved a bit, as you see the style of the beginning is qutie different from the rest... also there could be better usage of whistle as indicated, you used some of them correctly and if you fill up the rest it would be much better.

[SS]
01:02:293 (1) - not recommended to use 1/2 sliders with multiple reversing tick in this intermediate diff.

[TS]
00:28:161 (4) - sounds a bit odd when the 1/2 slider is placed after a short break...
00:28:161 (4) - a note here would be suitable
01:37:503 (4) - Try to maintain the same spacing throughout the diff in this easy/normal.
not sure what the diff looks like before it's made easier, but around 0:28 there're notes that sound missed. Also you may want a clap as slidertick at place like 00:11:994 - which will make the diff sounding much better.

In overall I would say there's room for improvement for hard, and good luck.
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
wmfchris's mod:

Can't recognize the difficulty but anyway...

[SS]
01:02:293 (1) - not recommended to use 1/2 sliders with multiple reversing tick in this intermediate diff. Alright then. Made this slider to reverse once, then I added a following slider to make up for them.

[TS]
00:28:161 (4) - sounds a bit odd when the 1/2 slider is placed after a short break...
00:28:161 (4) - a note here would be suitable Not sure about this, but I added a circle a beat before here.
01:37:503 (4) - Try to maintain the same spacing throughout the diff in this easy/normal. Done.
not sure what the diff looks like before it's made easier, but around 0:28 there're notes that sound missed. The drumroll? In the easiest difficulty? I would like to as well but I can't...
Also you may want a clap as slidertick at place like 00:11:994 - which will make the diff sounding much better. Done, as well as with many other slider ticks that would fit the song.

In overall I would say there's room for improvement for hard, and good luck. Thanks :)
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
Did everything on wmfchris's mod.

http://puu.sh/DgIZ
Leorda
4,416 posts
ed June 2009
Hi there


[TS]
* If this is an easier diff, please make sure that there is no jump in this diff (e.g. 00:49:000 (1,2)). Otherwise, beginners would hard to reach the object

00:49:000 (1) - Make this slider symetry? It doesn't looks symetry for me...


[rickyboi's WS]
00:28:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe, arrange the pattern like this one? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/356176


That's all I got, sorry
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Leorda's mod:
Hi there Hi lol


[TS]
* If this is an easier diff, please make sure that there is no jump in this diff (e.g. 00:49:000 (1,2)). Otherwise, beginners would hard to reach the object
Yes, it's an easier diff with 3 stars. Also ALL spacings in this diff are already at x0.8 (with small variations).

00:49:000 (1) - Make this slider symetry? It doesn't looks symetry for me... I'm not sure with this, it looks good to begin with... I did some minor edits to this though.


That's all I got, sorry Thanks.
congaan
163 posts
ed July 2011
Hello/ form #modreq

[TS]
This difficulty is for beginners, so I suggest simple rhythm
00:07:143 (2) - start at 00:07:323, same as 00:10:197 (3)
00:12:892 (2) - same
00:54:748 (1) - this slider starts at 00:54:748
start at 00:54:568 and end at 00:55:107
01:34:988 (1,2,3) - I prefer this rhythm 00:37:503 (1,2)

[WS]
Verrrry good jumps and streams,rickyboi.
Everyone has his own feeling, so here is just my suggestion. If you ask some players, I'll be glad.
00:04:538 (6) - add new circle. I prefer 3 hits to jump here.
00:21:874 (2,3,4) - spacing is large a little, imo.
00:35:706 (5,1) - leave more spacing.
00:45:047 (2) - Ctrl+R then replacement a little. I have no reason to change pattern only here. I annoyed
01:48:640 (4) - I'll use no return slider. Because return slider stops mouse movement.

GL~
Last edited by congaan , edited 2 times in total.
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
congaan's mod:
Hello/ form #modreq Hi there :)

[TS]
This difficulty is for beginners, so I suggest simple rhythm
00:07:143 (2) - start at 00:07:323, same as 00:10:197 (3) No thanks. This part follows the electric guitar with some simple sliders.
00:12:892 (2) - same ^
00:54:748 (1) - this slider starts at 00:54:748 and end at 00:55:107 ??? Not sure where you're getting at since they're already there to begin with.
01:34:988 (1,2,3) - I prefer this rhythm 00:37:503 (1,2) No thanks.

GL~ Thanks for the star. :)
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008

congaan wrote: 573t6g

Hello/ form #modreq
[WS]
Verrrry good jumps and streams,rickyboi.
Everyone has his own feeling, so here is just my suggestion. If you ask some players, I'll be glad.
00:04:538 (6) - add new circle. I prefer 3 hits to jump here. - Sorry no, ruins my flow.
00:21:874 (2,3,4) - spacing is large a little, imo. - I think it's fine. It's not that fast.
00:35:706 (5,1) - leave more spacing. - Fixed
00:45:047 (2) - Ctrl+R then replacement a little. I have no reason to change pattern only here. I annoyed - Okay fixed.
01:48:640 (4) - I'll use no return slider. Because return slider stops mouse movement. - Changed to triples

GL~
Thanks!
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
ed June 2011
hi PROGUY (the crazy notecharter that i know)

here my mod

TS
for 3 star make the CS-1 (suggest) and the AR so fast for the newbie make it lower

SS
Kiai time (2nd) start in (2) maybe NC

WS
AR9 o.O that so crazy rickyboi but its ok (for suggest -1)

just that Good Luck~
PROGUY
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936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
frans_niko's mod:
hi PROGUY (the crazy notecharter that i know) Crazy? lol

here my mod

TS
for 3 star make the CS-1 (suggest) Not sure what you mean here. Are you referring to the keysounds?
and the AR so fast for the newbie make it lower AR 5 > 3 :)

SS
Kiai time (2nd) start in (2) maybe NC I'll think about it.

just that Good Luck~ Thanks :)
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
But I like mine on AR 9 :<
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
ed June 2011
[quote=PROGUY]frans_niko's mod:
hi PROGUY (the crazy notecharter that i know) Crazy? lol
i know you notechart AGK ver =,= that make me crazy
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
ed August 2011

feel free to ignore whatever you don't like~

TS
if this is a normal diff. then try AR +1 , because SV seems a little fast for the current AR
01:16:664 (4) - put the slider at x:208 y:304 so that it makes a more neater blanket around 1 : http://puu.sh/GCZY

nice~

SS
00:03:550 (3) - make symmetrical to 2? o.o by copying 2 and flipping it
00:04:449 - add note , i hear a beat in the music


rickyboi's WS
00:03:012 (1,2) - move these notes 2 grids up (i think it will look nice b/c it forms a perfect square with 00:04:089 (3,4,5) - ^^) : http://puu.sh/GD8e
00:30:137 (1) - make this neater blanket around 3?
00:35:167 (2) - hm..2 grids to the left to be in the center of 1 , up to you tho
01:12:532 (1) - remove new combo

i like the sliders xD

thats all i find i guess ;-; nice job, good luck~
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
ed March 2011


=TS=
1. 01:18:461 (3,4,5) - Isn't it's quite confusing? Don't make a stack on a slider. Really, even I a bit shocked when realized (5) is a long slider.
2. 01:39:658 (3) - Make the end a bit down, preventing overlap.

=SS=
1. 00:56:724 (6) - First, it's somehow bugging me when I realized this is a speedup. Second, you can create a better S shape even without a red dot. Take a look. The first one, is a bit sharp here and there, let's make it smoother. http://puu.sh/GOgf

=rickyboi's WS=
Nothing much to say, but perhaps fix some sliders like 00:11:634 (1) - to http://puu.sh/GOkp and 00:15:586 (1) - to http://puu.sh/GOkG.

Good luck.
PROGUY
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936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter


TS
if this is a normal diff. then try AR +1 , because SV seems a little fast for the current AR Done.
01:16:664 (4) - put the slider at x:208 y:304 so that it makes a more neater blanket around 1 : http://puu.sh/GCZY Done.

nice~ Thanks :)

SS
00:03:550 (3) - make symmetrical to 2? o.o by copying 2 and flipping it I like the idea but it would be rhythmically wrong.
00:04:449 - add note , i hear a beat in the music I can't find a good place to put a circle here...

thats all i find i guess ;-; nice job, good luck~ Again thanks :D

Loli Cjj's mod:

rofl

=TS=
1. 01:18:461 (3,4,5) - Isn't it's quite confusing? Don't make a stack on a slider. Really, even I a bit shocked when realized (5) is a long slider. Really? It's not that confusing... if the slider snake from the starting point that is. Even so, I can't think of any other better pattern at the moment.
2. 01:39:658 (3) - Make the end a bit down, preventing overlap. Done, as well as having the next overlapped slider move up a little.

=SS=
1. 00:56:724 (6) - First, it's somehow bugging me when I realized this is a speedup. Second, you can create a better S shape even without a red dot. Take a look. The first one, is a bit sharp here and there, let's make it smoother. http://puu.sh/GOgf Done.

Good luck. Many thanks :D
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
Did most of it. Thanks for the mod!
Wreath
435 posts
ed February 2012
from h-728 and Wreath's queue

hi, PROGUY and rickyboi

[rickyboi's WS]
  1. 00:08:760 (1) - add finish beginning and remove finish tail
  2. 00:11:634 (1) - ^
  3. 00:23:850 (4) - add clap tail
  4. 00:28:790 (8) - add clap
  5. 00:30:137 (1) - add finish beginning
  6. 00:33:011 (1) - ^
  7. 00:33:730 (3) - ^
  8. 00:34:628 (1) - add finish beginning and remove finish tail, add clap tail
  9. 00:35:347 (3) - add finish
  10. 00:35:886 (1) - add finish beginning
  11. 00:36:604 (3) - add finish
  12. 01:03:011 (4) - NC
  13. 01:03:371 (1) - remove NC i think this NC is unnecessary
  14. 01:12:532 (1) - ^
  15. 01:13:071 (1) - ^
  16. 01:10:197 (1) - this slider form is not good. i think it will be much better if you make this http://puu.sh/HjYy
    SPOILER
  17. 01:12:532 (1) - add finish beginning
  18. 01:13:071 (1) - ^
  19. 01:16:125 (1) - ^
  20. 01:16:844 (3) - ^
  21. 01:17:742 (1) - ^
  22. 01:19:000 (1) - ^
  23. 01:19:718 (3) - ^
  24. 01:20:616 (1) - add finish beginning and remove finish tail
  25. 01:21:874 (1) - add finish beginning
  26. 01:22:592 (3) - ^
  27. 01:32:113 (1) - add finish beginning and remove finish tail
  28. 01:46:485 (1) - add finish beginning
  29. 01:47:383 (3) - add finish
  30. 01:48:101 (1) - ^
  31. 01:48:461 (3) - ^
  32. 01:48:640 (4) - ^
  33. 01:49:000 (7) - add finish and NC
  34. 01:49:359 (1) - remove NC
[SS]
  1. 00:39:119 (4) - it doesn't follow the music well. i think it will be much better if you do this http://puu.sh/HkkR
  2. 00:47:742 - add note
  3. 01:03:191 - ^
  4. add finish in the same way as rickyboi's WS
[TS]
  1. Fine
good luck :oops:
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008

Wreath wrote: 43r37

from h-728 and Wreath's queue

hi, PROGUY and rickyboi

[rickyboi's WS]
  1. 00:23:850 (4) - add clap tail
  2. 00:28:790 (8) - add clap
  3. 00:34:628 (1) - add finish beginning and remove finish tail, add clap tail
  4. 01:10:197 (1) - this slider form is not good. i think it will be much better if you make this http://puu.sh/HjYy
    SPOILER
I followed these, Others are ignored.
The additional finishes weren't needed because the drums didn't really have those.

Thank you for the mod Wreath ;)

http://puu.sh/HkBp
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Wreath's mod:

[SS]
  1. 00:39:119 (4) - it doesn't follow the music well. i think it will be much better if you do this http://puu.sh/HkkR No thanks.
  2. 00:47:742 - add note Sure.
  3. 01:03:191 - ^ No thanks, not here.
  4. add finish in the same way as rickyboi's WS That wouldn't make the map fit with the song...
[TS]
  1. Fine
good luck :oops: Thanks :)
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,471 posts
ed July 2011
Hi there ~ Request from my queue

[General]
You can see some DJMAX rank beatmap, copy some tags into your tags ._. (suggestion)
why don't set your Preview Time at kiai time ? i think it's ok xD

[SS]
00:56:724 (6) - nc because the slider velocity change

[rickyboi]
01:14:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing .o.


That's all i can find, sorry TvT !

Good Luck !
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Flask's mod:

[General]
You can see some DJMAX rank beatmap, copy some tags into your tags ._. (suggestion) Um, such as...?
why don't set your Preview Time at kiai time ? i think it's ok xD Nope, because the current preview point is the same as it was in the actual game.

[SS]
00:56:724 (6) - nc because the slider velocity change Nope.


That's all i can find, sorry TvT !

Good Luck ! Thanks...
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
ah DP orz
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rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008

rickyboi wrote: 1z2y1b

Flask wrote: 5l1l4k

Hi there ~ Request from my queue
[rickyboi]
01:14:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing .o. - Fixed
http://puu.sh/J1qR
Piscis
261 posts
ed October 2010
All suggestion~

[TS]
00:27:802 (4) - Add clap?
00:28:161 (5) - Add clap to slider end?
01:17:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think changed new style. Is not a good place...

[SS]
01:37:862 (2) - Remove clap to slider start
01:38:580 (3) - Remove clap
01:38:940 (4) - Remove clap to slider end
01:40:017 (6) - Remove clap to slider start
01:40:736 (1) - Remove clap
01:41:095 (2) - Remove clap to slider end
01:42:532 (5) - ^
01:43:610 (1) - Remove clap
01:43:970 (2) - Remove clap to slider end
01:45:047 - Remove clap
01:45:766 (6) - Remove clap to slider start

I'm sorry fewer :(
Good luck!
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter

Piscis wrote: 2m37l

All suggestion~

[TS]
00:27:802 (4) - Add clap?
00:28:161 (5) - Add clap to slider end?
01:17:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think changed new style. Is not a good place...

[SS]
01:37:862 (2) - Remove clap to slider start
01:38:580 (3) - Remove clap
01:38:940 (4) - Remove clap to slider end
01:40:017 (6) - Remove clap to slider start
01:40:736 (1) - Remove clap
01:41:095 (2) - Remove clap to slider end
01:42:532 (5) - ^
01:43:610 (1) - Remove clap
01:43:970 (2) - Remove clap to slider end
01:45:047 - Remove clap
01:45:766 (6) - Remove clap to slider start

I'm sorry fewer :(
Good luck!
Nope, sorry.
Kashimaria
455 posts
ed November 2011
TS :

00:27:802 (4) - Add hitsound (clap)
00:28:520 (5) - Add hitsound (slap)
SS :

00:13:341 (3) - delete hitsound
00:39:568 (1) - delete NC
rickyboi's WS :

00:03:730 (1) - delete NC
01:01:215 (1) - delete NC
01:03:371 (1) - delete NC
01:24:928 (1) - delete NC
01:25:546 (4) - NC
01:27:622 (1) - delete NC
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Gomo Pslvarh's:

TS :

00:27:802 (4) - Add hitsound (clap) Nope.
00:28:520 (5) - Add hitsound (slap) Slap? ROFL. If you mean clap, still no.
SS :

00:13:341 (3) - delete hitsound Er, no.
00:39:568 (1) - delete NC Okay.

Thanks :)
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008
Sorry, no change on my diff.
spboxer3
Global
3,616 posts
ed November 2009
Recheck after 4 month and sry about it :o

It's your first map aim Ranked. So... OK, Here we go~

It's my 2400th post xD
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Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
ed September 2009
wow one more bubble !
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter

spboxer3 wrote: 21lg

Recheck after 4 month and sry about it :o

OK. Here we go~

It's my 2400th post xD
Many thanks!

Also kudosu given for this. Oh, nevermind then.
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Flanster
5,938 posts
ed August 2010
it'd be fun if both our maps get ranked the same day
Mr. Funky would be proud :P

Also I'd suggest including the genre, visualisation and vocals info of the song in the tags like the other DJMAX maps

synth pop rock juna entia j rubystar
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter

Lolicore Flandre wrote: 4f3l32

it'd be fun if both our maps get ranked the same day
Mr. Funky would be proud :P
LOL
That would be pretty awesome.

Lolicore Flandre wrote: 4f3l32

Also I'd suggest including the genre, visualisation and vocals info of the song in the tags like the other DJMAX maps

synth pop rock juna entia j rubystar
Oh... Well too late for that :(
I'll be sure to put those in if I ever get the chance though ;)
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
ed January 2010
[Normal]
00:21:694 (2,1) - Kinda ugly overlap.
00:42:173 (3) - Angle this so that it looks like a straight line with 4 and 1
01:11:994 - niiice

[Hard]
00:04:628 (1) - This curve is rather sharp for such a short slider. Smooth it out a bit
00:43:610 (2) - Looks smoother if you position the points like this:
SPOILER
01:13:071 (3,4) - Raise these 1 pixel so that they're evenly spaced between the 1 and 2
01:38:940 (4) - See if you can adjust this like the previous slider I gave a screenshot for to smooth it out a little.

[Insane]
AR -1
OD +1
00:13:610 (3) - This flows better ctrl + g'd
01:10:197 (1) - Yeah, no please. Use something different here.
01:12:532 (1,1) - Remove new combo
01:15:766 (4,1) - It looks nice, but doesn't play very well. It played a lot smoother positioned like this:
SPOILER

Don't forget to add those tags!
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
Fixed all of the above in Garven's mod for Normal (TS) and Hard (SS) (and tags added!). Now waiting for rickyboi to make the changes before updating the beatmap set.
rickyboi
830 posts
ed October 2008

Garven wrote: 3w455y

[Insane]
AR -1 - Sorry no.
OD +1 - Sure

Did everything.
Thanks for the mod! PROGUY has the updated version so wait for him.
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
ed October 2010
Topic Starter
And updated! :D
Garven
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5,857 posts
ed January 2010
I haven't had time to do a full recheck yet, but just something for you to mull over until I do:

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