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SOUND HOLIC - Drive My Life [Osu|Taiko] 645t19

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Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年11月15日 at 17:42:06

Artist: SOUND HOLIC
Title: Drive My Life
Source: Touhou
Tags: tutuhaha Flower Firce777 sherrie__fay Regou ZUN Nana Takahashi Euro Beat Perfect Cherry Blossom Saigyouji Yuyuko PCB TH07 Border of Life
BPM: 167
Filesize: 11509kb
Play Time: 04:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fay's Hard (4.97 stars, 574 notes)
  2. Firce777's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1426 notes)
  3. Flower's Taiko Muzukashii (4.7 stars, 799 notes)
  4. Lunatic (4.86 stars, 633 notes)
  5. Regou's Normal (3.78 stars, 271 notes)
  6. TuEasy (2.97 stars, 200 notes)
: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#8 - Touhou - Vocal

Storyboard & Skin are updated on 20/Octo/2012

More Yuyuko Theme!

Lunatic by me
Fay's Hard by sherrie__fay
TuEasy by tutuhaha
Regou's Normal by Regou
Firce777's Taiko by Firce777
Taiko Muzukashii by Flower

Storyboard by sherrie__fay
Skinset by me
Last edited by Scorpiour , edited 43 times in total.
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
ed December 2010
Nymph
插
spboxer3
Global
3,616 posts
ed November 2009
spboxer3
前排
a32
630 posts
ed February 2010
a32
前排0.0
Azure
771 posts
ed November 2010
Azure
\ ' u ' / 加油 !
Kotone
2,402 posts
ed August 2008
Kotone
Publish: SOUND HOLIC
Arrange: ELEMENTAS
Vocal: Nana Takahashi
Publisher要怎做Artist?要不改成vocal要不改成arranger
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

karenying wrote: 1h6fc

Publish: SOUND HOLIC
Arrange: ELEMENTAS
Vocal: Nana Takahashi
Publisher要怎做Artist?要不改成vocal要不改成arranger
我是按照这个写的



而且从之前的习惯来看这首曲子一般也会归在SOUND HOLIC名下

touhou的同人音乐习惯都是以乐团（例如Silver Forest, Sync.Art, IOSYS 而非vocal/arranger）来做为Artist.

完工后个人test成绩：

wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
ed March 2008
wmfchris
o.o ...

[General]
- Tag taiko gd mapper
- inconsistancy in tags
- remove those short breaks in normal
- 00:23:920 - is a considerably good place to start to reduce unmapped section

[777]
- The taiko hitsound is too loud and covered the song itself, try N80% instead
00:48:621 - d here enables a more sudden transition later to emphasize the note 00:49:070 -
00:53:202 - kkd refer to the music
01:18:531 - sth sound missed here
01:36:136 - the drum starts to be significant here to cconsider to start the stream here
01:58:591 - As usual sliders are not preferred. If it's used just add one here then start the slider later, otherwise the connection with 1/2 before is lost
02:03:621 - same as 0:53
02:09:369 - ^
02:35:058 - same as 1:36
02:57:513 - same as 01:58
up to 03:09:549 - ^ Apply the same mod
03:17:633 - do not put slider 1/4 after the notes
The rap part -- followed the repeating melody in a very vague way, while the current arrangement aren't following the rap strictly there're room for better phrasing, like breaking significantly at the end of every melodic loop.
03:46:914 - like 01:36
04:09:369 - like 1:58

For the beginning section and its repetition it's lead by the melody and it enlarges the problem with loud drum oriented arrangement, while softening is only a temperory approach.

[Muzu]
- change to N80% too
00:44:040 - as you can't use finishes here due to 1/4s, k can be used to highlight the difference (the snare
01:00:567 - k refer to music
01:18:890 - ^
02:10:986 - ^
03:18:172 - sounds a bit empty here, try x x----x x x x x
Flower
1,728 posts
ed August 2011
Flower
クリスちゃん抢2KDS位TUT
Muzukashi我的

http://puu.sh/17sDa
Last edited by Flower , edited 1 time in total.
JauiPlaY
1,304 posts
ed April 2010
JauiPlaY
hi

[General]
BG不够福利 差评

[H Fay]
没kiai 差评
01:03:351 (7) - 我是觉得没啥必要咯
01:34:878 (8) - 狗耳瞬聋
01:59:489 (1) - ^
02:23:202 (1,2,3,4) - 排列略坑
02:27:154 (3) - 这里应该用哲学音效
02:58:411 (6) - 其实声音小点就好
04:10:268 (1) - ^
关于音效 其实如果不想加clap 加点whistle也完全可以的
还有就是前面开始的那一段有点拖时间 如果一直retry不是要多等好久
还是跟sco统一一下吧

[Lunatic]
00:52:303 (9) - 其实这里clap还好点
00:55:178 (10) - clap呢
00:58:052 (7) - 其实这里clap还好点
00:59:489 (4) - ^
01:12:783 (1) - 可以延长到下一根蓝线
01:35:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 可以试试xxoxxxoxoxxoxxox x是clap
01:38:291 (4) - clap
02:22:303 (1) - 头clap
02:27:154 (3) - 这里应该用哲学音效
02:35:417 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 试下oxooxoox x是clap
剩下的几乎没加音效嘛……

去吧孩子
Regou
1,936 posts
ed July 2010
Regou
要Normal嗎><
P.S. 已經做好了orz...
744combo- -||
http://puu.sh/132EU
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Regou wrote: 2l653b

要Normal嗎><
P.S. 已經做好了orz...
744combo- -||
http://puu.sh/132EU
呃……我check一下吧…………因为之前已经有和tutuhaha说需要normal了……我看看的吧……
Regou
1,936 posts
ed July 2010
Regou
哈哈/ \...我慢了 :? 不要緊吧
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
我现在没有办法告诉你会不会用你的diff。。。。抱歉哦……毕竟定位重叠上了……

如果早几天的话就好了～
Milkshake
532 posts
ed August 2011
Milkshake
wow
Millium_old
2 posts
ed September 2011
Millium_old
ファイト
bug sniper
27 posts
ed May 2012
bug sniper
I'd suggest changing this song's language property from Other to English so that when it gets ranked, it will be easier to find.
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

bug sniper wrote: 375o32

I'd suggest changing this song's language property from Other to English so that when it gets ranked, it will be easier to find.
oh .. that's BATs' responsibility :>
Naryuga
782 posts
ed October 2010
Naryuga
Taiko mod via in-Game pm~ >u<

just suggestions~ ignore if you don't like
[Timing]
  1. I feel the offset is off, try -20ms?
[Taiko Muzukashi]
  1. diff name - maybe "Taiko Muzukashii"?
  2. 00:48:351 (13,14,15,16) - make this? http://puu.sh/16ArB
  3. 01:01:286 (56) - add finish? sounds better
  4. 01:02:363 (60) - move to 01:02:543 - , fits with the vocal
  5. 01:06:854 (81) - k
  6. 01:09:729 - add k
  7. 01:17:453 - add d
  8. 01:18:711 (130,131,132) - this single triplet sounds sudden, so delete 01:18:800 (131) - ?
  9. 01:22:124 - add k
  10. 01:37:214 (204) - add finish to emphasize the KIAI
  11. 01:53:561 (268) - k
  12. 02:17:274 - add k
  13. 02:05:956 (306,307,308) - add finish like 02:00:208 (286,287,288) - ?
  14. 02:17:274 - add k
  15. 02:20:507 - add d
  16. 02:21:585 - add k
  17. 02:24:459 - add d
  18. 02:28:950 (391) - add finish
  19. 02:33:082 - add d
  20. 02:36:136 (410) - add finish
  21. 03:22:124 (584) - ^
  22. 03:36:315 - add d
  23. 03:51:226 (704,706) - D sounds better. personally I just dislike successive dons/kats ._.
  24. 03:59:489 (740) - add finish
[Firce777's Taiko]
  1. diff name - maybe rename to "Firce777's Taiko Oni" for the Muzu diff?
  2. 01:07:034 - add k, hears vocal sound
  3. 01:18:531 - ^
  4. 02:07:034 - add k? 3/2 blank here sounds a bit empty
  5. 02:17:453 - add k
  6. 03:22:842 (1,2,1,2,1) - kkddd
  7. 03:30:747 (3,1,1,1) kkdk
  8. 03:34:339 (1) - maybe this should k
Good luck~ :)
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
thank you for your mod and star Naryuga~
waiting for taiko mappers' reply :>
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
ed September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-
那我就往这里放星星吧 ;)
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

-Baby Strawberry- wrote: 595i6i

那我就往这里放星星吧 ;)
感谢星星的说>_<
Flower
1,728 posts
ed August 2011
Flower

wmfchris wrote: 1d5f1w

o.o ...


[Muzu]
- change to N80% too
00:44:040 - as you can't use finishes here due to 1/4s, k can be used to highlight the difference (the snare
01:00:567 - k refer to music
01:18:890 - ^
02:10:986 - ^
03:18:172 - sounds a bit empty here, try x x----x x x x x
All fixed. Maybe a bit misunderstanding in the last mod, but maybe ok.


Naryuga wrote: 4r6u5k

Taiko mod via in-Game pm~ >u<

[Taiko Muzukashi]
  1. diff name - maybe "Taiko Muzukashii"? Fixed
  2. 00:48:351 (13,14,15,16) - make this? http://puu.sh/16ArB Fixed
  3. 01:01:286 (56) - add finish? sounds better Fixed
  4. 01:02:363 (60) - move to 01:02:543 - , fits with the vocal kept. following drum here is more comfortable for me.
  5. 01:06:854 (81) - k Fixed
  6. 01:09:729 - add k There seems to be only background chorus at this spot... I wonder if it sounds good.
  7. 01:17:453 - add d Fixed
  8. 01:18:711 (130,131,132) - this single triplet sounds sudden, so delete 01:18:800 (131) - ? Fixed
  9. 01:22:124 - add kIt is too intense. Refer to "GO MY WAY!!" (oni).
  10. 01:37:214 (204) - add finish to emphasize the KIAI Fixed
  11. 01:53:561 (268) - k Fixed
  12. 02:17:274 - add k Fixed
  13. 02:05:956 (306,307,308) - add finish like 02:00:208 (286,287,288) - ? Fixed
  14. 02:17:274 - add k Fixed
  15. 02:20:507 - add d Kept. Reason as above.
  16. 02:21:585 - add k I added don, because ka is to light.
  17. 02:24:459 - add d Kept. Reason as above.
  18. 02:28:950 (391) - add finish Fixed
  19. 02:33:082 - add d Fixed
  20. 02:36:136 (410) - add finish Fixed
  21. 03:22:124 (584) - ^ I try to make this section sluent, so maybe a finish is abrupt.
  22. 03:36:315 - add d It is not a must I think, it is not downbeat... And I choose not to add
  23. 03:51:226 (704,706) - D sounds better. personally I just dislike successive dons/kats ._. I try to make the sections form a repetition, so maybe it is a good idea but I choose to make it the same as previous sections...
  24. 03:59:489 (740) - add finish
Fixed

Good luck~ :)
THANK YOU FOR MODDING~
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
777 & Flower's taiko diff has been updated!
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
ed July 2009
Kite
Offset: 38.286ms seems better to me, current feels a little bit late (-6)
This song is so great, would have loved to make an insane for this but meh xD
Your map is really cool, the only thing I dislike is the custom clap for normal sampleset.. it sounds a bit annoying.
Try this one instead? http://puu.sh/17Diw

Edit: While you are at it, you might consider cutting the intro away of the mp3 as it's not really mapable anyways, it takes up 1/4 of the map
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour
o ~~thank you very much Kite~~~

and sherrie choose to map from very beginning~~~~hmm.....
Kiiwa
928 posts
ed January 2010
Kiiwa
Hi~ I love this song!

General
You don't want Kiai the same as others for Fay's Hard?

Lunatic
01:00:387 (6) - Should be like http://puu.sh/187ja
01:31:465 (5) - New combo for consistancy with others
01:35:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Maybe you can decrease the volume on there types of streams? Cause they are so loud ;_;
02:30:387 (4) - New combo for consistancy with 02:24:639 (1) -
03:11:166 (4) - New combo for spacing
03:22:124 - Add finish
04:04:519 (5,6) - Didn't expect them to be that many returns when playing >_> Maybe decrease spacing?

Fay's Hard
Interesting hitsounds~
01:35:777 - Spinner should be here to match with 02:34:699 - ?
02:58:411 (1) - This ends 1/8 too late looooool
02:59:130 - Kiai burst here to match with 02:00:208 -
03:59:130 (1) - How cute. Can you make it even better looking~?
04:10:986 - Kiai here to match with 02:00:208 - & 02:59:130 -

Regou's Normal
01:31:465 (2,3,4,5) - This type of stacking is probably too hard for most Normal players. Maybe just stack perfectly ;_;?
01:58:771 - 02:00:208 - Better to remove this break and same with all others like it

TuEasy
Hi 22~ AR-1?
03:13:321 (1) - Start on next 1/1 instead please
01:58:681 (1) - 02:57:603 (1) - 04:09:459 (1) - Better to not start this spinners on 1/4 in Easy diff lol :lol:

Good map~
L_P
1,370 posts
ed July 2011
L_P
combo3和4看起来真的很像

Lunatic
01:38:291 (4) - head clap
01:50:507 (6) - clap
建议break ends 02:10:986 -
02:27:154 (3) - finish?
03:09:908 - break ends
03:11:525 (6,1) - note或头 clap (这里vocal不知道跑去哪了..感觉这样比较抓得到节拍）
03:12:962 (5) - ^
03:14:399 (6,1) - ^
后面也有
03:32:902 (8) - NC？

FAy
01:00:387 (1) - delete finish&clap, 换成whistle?
03:59:130 (1) - 尾巴还是不clap的好

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没看到特色梗啊= =ll
可能是歌挺平的关系吧
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Kiiwa wrote: 3n2x5o

Hi~ I love this song!

General
You don't want Kiai the same as others for Fay's Hard?

Lunatic
01:00:387 (6) - Should be like http://puu.sh/187ja :arrow: i know but i wanna keep the slider shape...
01:31:465 (5) - New combo for consistancy with others :arrow: fixed~
01:35:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Maybe you can decrease the volume on there types of streams? Cause they are so loud ;_; :arrow: let me see how to adjust it.....
02:30:387 (4) - New combo for consistancy with 02:24:639 (1) - :arrow: fixed~
03:11:166 (4) - New combo for spacing :arrow: sorry no change because i wanna follow vocal here
03:22:124 - Add finish :arrow: fixed~
04:04:519 (5,6) - Didn't expect them to be that many returns when playing >_> Maybe decrease spacing? :arrow: don't worry~~it's not hard =v=

Good map~
thank you very much~~~
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

L_P wrote: i2x64

combo3和4看起来真的很像 :arrow: 颜色需要调调吧……我看看怎么弄的……

Lunatic
01:38:291 (4) - head clap :arrow: fixed~
01:50:507 (6) - clap :arrow: fixed~
建议break ends 02:10:986 - :arrow: 咦～这个可以有～
02:27:154 (3) - finish? :arrow: 好像应该不是这里……我finish要整个再整理下～
03:09:908 - break ends :arrow: okay
03:11:525 (6,1) - note或头 clap (这里vocal不知道跑去哪了..感觉这样比较抓得到节拍） :arrow: 做了clap，这里不是跟的vocal而是6个一组的节奏～
03:12:962 (5) - ^
03:14:399 (6,1) - ^ :arrow: 调整了这一带clap
后面也有
03:32:902 (8) - NC？ :arrow: 这里是原本就没有打算放NC啦～

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没看到特色梗啊= =ll
可能是歌挺平的关系吧 :arrow: 特色梗啊…………我只是想着做跳+长Slider啦～～
非常感谢的说>.<
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
ed January 2011
Loneight
早灣 >w<
M4M



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[TuEasy] x39g

  1. 01:54:459 (3) - NC~?
  2. 01:54:459 (3) - 加個clap在結尾
  3. 01:55:896 (4) - ^
  4. 02:53:381 (3) - 同01:54:459 (3) -
  5. 03:39:369 (4) - NC ~ 咱想說跟02:26:615 (1) - 對 , 不過好像沒對到.. (被打
  6. 04:05:237 (3) - 同01:54:459 (3) -

[Regou's Normal] 261r5e

  1. 無用的綠線:
    03:32:902 -

  2. 01:06:675 (1,2) - 交換NC ?~
  3. 01:32:902 (1) - 第4個點 x:320 y:320
  4. 01:55:717 (2) - 感覺這note可以re?~
  5. 02:16:735 (2,3,1) - 這邊咱覺得..把(2)分開比較好?!
  6. 03:57:693 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感覺這邊...不是normal的擺法了 lol! 看要不要修改~

[Lunatic] 35ve

  1. 無用的綠線:
    00:49:789 -

  2. 01:00:387 (6) - 感覺可以改成[url]這種[/url]旋律
  3. 01:21:046 (7) - 讓它跟(4)重疊感覺比較好?~
  4. 03:18:531 (4,5) - 這overlap有點不太好看 ;w;
  5. 04:01:286 (3,4) - ^

[Fay's Hard] 231w6w

  1. 01:48:890 (2,3,4,5,6) - 做一個星星?~
  2. 01:56:974 (8) - re 結尾的finish
good song & good luck ~
scorp醬 加油 !>w<
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
ed January 2010
lkx_Shore
General
渣Mod from my queue

TuEasy
OD3>2

Finish加了也听不到...fin的时候把音量调高点?...

Regou's Normal
OD5>4

Fay's Hard
01:55:717 (4) - 尾巴也加上fin
01:56:256 (6) - 头的fin去掉,尾巴加上fin
01:56:974 (8) - 尾巴的fin去掉
01:57:333 (1) - 加上fin
01:58:052 (5) - ^
01:58:591 (8) - ^
01:58:771 (1) - 头加上fin
03:47:274 (3,4,5) - 这里感觉怪怪的
总觉得这个hit的音效有点吵...


10分 :)
wantuole
528 posts
ed December 2010
wantuole
:D from my queue
[General]
吐槽
02:27:154 这什么声音啊！
easy比nor的slider要快啊！
皮肤也不喜欢,hitcircleoverlay的银色圈和slider边框额白色不一致，
[TuEasy]
01:38:651 (2) - 往下点 太靠近001:40:806 (2)
SPOILER
01:58:681 (1) - 蓝线开始转？
02:37:573 (2) - ^
03:49:429 (2) - ^
[Regou's Normal]
让我想起icebeam的图
02:56:256 (3) - 再回撞一次，音乐是02:58:411这里开始降的
03:38:112 (5) - 太难看了 不如就直接盖住
[Fay's Hard]
00:48:351 (1) - 先往下再往上,或者其他办法 让2出现的位子别太奇怪.
SPOILER
01:28:052 (4) - ^ 出现位子太奇怪 没任何往左大跳的提示，这个想改的话太麻烦,就不给主意了
03:22:842 (3) - ctrl+r
03:56:615 (1) - 03:55:896 (3,4) 掉头 正对着这个1,背对着就像是中途断了摆设梗
[Lunatic]
很不流畅的感觉，只举一些特别明显的地方
01:21:226 (1) - ??出现在这太奇怪了，完全无视了前面的跳
01:50:327 (5) - 对称 01:49:789 (3) 是好主意 但是根据节奏应该对称它的结尾位子，不是开头
02:12:423 (3,4,5) - 3出现在这个位子感觉是继续向右的转圈移动，3 4 5一起旋转60°，再摆个6边形，(缺一个角不会影响美观的,因为你之前的1已经在那里了)
03:51:765 (6,7,8) - 依旧方向问题,感觉会在右上出现的滑条(1的位子不变的话，6 7 8应该上往下走,7向右边突出点,1才会这里出现)
就这么多 祝你好运 :)
当然 星星~
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

l1106188 wrote: 4l4u33

早灣 >w<
M4M

[Lunatic] 35ve

  1. 無用的綠線:
    00:49:789 - :arrow:
    [/color]
  2. 01:00:387 (6) - 感覺可以改成[url]這種[/url]旋律 :arrow: 图片崩了啊……然后其实我大概知道你想要的是什么样的……
  3. 01:21:046 (7) - 讓它跟(4)重疊感覺比較好?~ :arrow: 哦……这里是重复上面的一个梗啦，也就是说(1,2,3)-(4)和(4,5,6)-(7)这两组的相对位置其实是一样的～
  4. 03:18:531 (4,5) - 這overlap有點不太好看 ;w; :arrow: 尝试着换了个造型不过还是有overlap。。。让我想想的…………
  5. 04:01:286 (3,4) - ^ :arrow: 这里做了个大弧线～～

good song & good luck ~
scorp醬 加油 !>w<
非常感谢的说～～=v=
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

wantuole wrote: 525w37

:D from my queue
[General]
吐槽
02:27:154 这什么声音啊！ :arrow: 音乐自带的！
easy比nor的slider要快啊！
皮肤也不喜欢,hitcircleoverlay的银色圈和slider边框额白色不一致， :arrow: 试过纯白色的边缘但是发现效果还不如用浅灰色，毕竟sliderborder无法像circle那样也做成

[Lunatic]
很不流畅的感觉，只举一些特别明显的地方
01:21:226 (1) - ??出现在这太奇怪了，完全无视了前面的跳 :arrow: 因为这里是新的一句了，而且音乐挑到了高处，所以slider也就跟着放在了上面～～
01:50:327 (5) - 对称 01:49:789 (3) 是好主意 但是根据节奏应该对称它的结尾位子，不是开头 :arrow: 唔……没有很理解你的意思……把(5,6)的位置交换了～～
02:12:423 (3,4,5) - 3出现在这个位子感觉是继续向右的转圈移动，3 4 5一起旋转60°，再摆个6边形，(缺一个角不会影响美观的,因为你之前的1已经在那里了) :arrow: 这里是专门在左上位置留空的六边形，Slider起点的位置是Vocal新一句的重音而且是高音，所以我选择利用一个跳来突出这里音乐的变化而不是简单的顺着一个方向摆下去～
03:51:765 (6,7,8) - 依旧方向问题,感觉会在右上出现的滑条(1的位子不变的话，6 7 8应该上往下走,7向右边突出点,1才会这里出现) :arrow: 嗯这个很好=v=
就这么多 祝你好运 :)
当然 星星~
感谢mod和星星的说～～～～
Lan wings
790 posts
ed August 2010
Lan wings
说好的M4M
[General]
overlay小了一个像素``阴影没弄好
combocolour4的话最好深一点``不然跟3很难分辨
虽说是GD``不过各难度开始时间不同大丈夫?
[Lunatic]
为毛这个hitnormal和slidertick我听起来很有点哲♂学味道
00:52:124 (8,9,1,2) - 这里的排列不好看``于是想不到怎么摆好看``可以无视
00:54:818 (7) - x324 y144 00:54:998 (8,9,10) - x356 y256 00:55:357 (11) - x244 y240
效果图

00:57:513 (6,1) - 两个尾巴要不要叠一起`` 看起来是故意不叠的
01:00:567 - 这个tick你知道的``SB音效
01:07:214 (2,4,5,8) - 看看能不能弄成菱形
01:12:603 (4) - 加个clap``虽然听起来不是很明显``但是加了后的确听起来好很多
01:17:453 (6,7,8,9) - 也是菱形弄好点
01:18:351 (9) - add clap``老实说``这clap太不明显了点``不认真听根本听不出区别在哪
01:19:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 右边往下斜一点`斜度和这个差不多01:21:226 (1) -
01:23:381 (1) - 要不要来个锐角
01:28:232 (7) - 往上一格
01:35:777 (1) - 感觉这串stream音量可以搞一下
01:36:226 (6) - 这个clap删掉?
01:58:591 - 我还是喜欢放个circle然后一拍或半拍后spinner``如果放的话01:58:052 (3) - 复制这个然后翻转?
效果图
02:25:357 (3) - 会不会太高?
02:30:028 (3) - 左两格上一格
02:39:908 (6,7,8) - 不向右弯一下?
02:40:268 (1) - 折角位置跟02:39:190 (2) - 重叠好看很多``
02:46:735 (8,1) - 有点挡折返箭头(故意的把你?_?
02:57:513 - same 01:58:591 - 如果放的话02:57:154 (6) - 复制转180
03:38:291 - 这里的"啊~~~"03:39:010 (3) - 这里都加上了``为啥前面不加
03:42:603 (2) - 碰HP条
03:52:124 (1) - 轨迹跟03:51:585 (5) - 重合?
04:01:465 (4) - 不上下翻转么``
效果图
04:09:369 - 你懂的``加的话放中间就好

[H Fay]
hitnormal音量太重``降低1~2dB?
很多地方其实可以whistle和clap合用``whistle放的太少了``EDIT:看到后面发现第一段是故意不放的?``但是感觉还是放了更好听
这是可以加whistle的地方
01:05:417 -
01:08:471 (5,2) -
01:11:166 (1) -
01:19:968 (1,4) -
01:27:154 (1) -
01:30:567 -
01:31:824 -
01:35:777 -
01:40:088 -
01:43:681 -
01:44:399 (1) -
01:46:555 -
01:49:250 (4) -
01:49:789 (7) -
01:50:687 -
01:51:585 -
00:38:561 (2) - 泥马蓝线差评
00:41:435 (2) - 球球你
00:59:669 (1) - sliderside或者sliderwhistle的音量需要切换NC才会有效``比如N NC1 N NC1 这样才可以``其实现在听起来就很好``不用中途变音量
01:34:878 (8) - 音量down
01:52:842 (4) - 这一段太多finish``把一部分finish换成whistle或删掉?
Look here~~
01:53:381 - 换whistle
01:56:256 (6) - 换whistle
01:56:974 (8) - 尾巴finish删
01:59:489 (1) - 音量down
02:27:154 - whistle
02:36:315 (2,4) - 这两个需要删clap换whistle```连续几个太难听
02:44:759 (1,2) - 不是很喜欢加finish的么0.0怎么这两个又不加了
02:46:016 - whistle
02:53:920 (2) - 头放whistle尾巴finish删
02:55:178 (5) - 尾巴放whistle头finish删
02:58:411 (1) - 音量down
03:27:872 - whistle
03:29:130 (4) - 头whistle
03:37:932 (1) - finish
03:38:291 (3,5) - 膜姐恶趣味
03:42:603 (2) - finish
03:44:759 (4) - finish别加了一堆又漏几个啊
03:45:657 (2) - 头finish``
03:49:429 - ^
03:56:615 - ^
04:00:926 (1) - 头whistle
04:02:363 (1) - ^
04:03:082 (3) - ^
04:06:675 - ^
04:08:112 (1,5) - ^
04:10:268 (1) - 音量down

[热狗]
00:46:914 - 可以加个finish
00:49:070 - ^
01:09:908 (1) - 拉弯点
01:28:411 (3) - 没放好``歪了01:27:693 (2,4) - 跟这两个弄好点啊
于是粗略瞄了瞄``没啥大问题``不吐了

[2ha]
00:52:483 (1) - 往下一格
00:56:256 (2) - 拉好点0.0
02:39:010 (1) - 左移一格下移一格 后面挑一个表示没有略过
于是粗略瞄了瞄``没啥大问题``不吐了
wring
596 posts
ed February 2010
wring
Hi~
m4m

[General]
nothing

[TuEasy]
01:27:154 (1,2) - remove the reverse, add note to 01:28:052 (2) - and (3)'s slider start on 01:28:411 - to previous end point?
SPOILER
01:42:064 (3) - finish on start?
01:53:561 (2) - ^
01:55:896 (4) - ^ If you add finish, same as do the others parts please.


[Regou's Normal]
01:22:663 (2) - clap on start?
01:34:339 (2) - finish on start?
02:33:262 (4) - ^
03:35:777 (1) - remobe whistle?
03:59:130 (3) - should not be stack better, a little hard to read imo.

[Lunatic]
01:12:603 (4) - finish?
01:14:040 (4) - NC?
01:16:914 (5) - NC
01:21:046 (7,1) - switch NC?
01:27:693 (6) - finish on end?
01:28:411 (1) - finish on start?
01:50:687 (7) - clap on start?
01:52:303 (3) - ctrl+r maybe more flowing. if you do so, put (3) on farther?
01:55:717 (6) - NC?
01:58:591 -,01:58:771 - add note and shorten the spin?
02:19:789 (4) - NC?
02:26:615 (2) - change to finish on end?
02:27:154 (3) - clap?
02:27:333 (4) - NC and add finish on start?
02:57:513 - , 02:57:693 - add note and shorten the spin?
03:32:184 (4,5,6,7,8) - put on this?
SPOILER
03:38:471 (2) - finish on end?
03:39:190 (1) - finish on start?
04:04:519 (5,6) - ctrl+r maybe better
04:08:112 (1,2,3,4,5) - like to put before I mentioned and how about to do this?
SPOILER

[Fay's Hard]
HP+1?
00:44:759 (5) - remove clap?
00:45:477 (7) - remove clap or reduse the volume?
00:49:070 (2) - add clap on return?
00:52:663 (2) - turn to clap on start?
01:34:878 - add note?
01:40:626 (2,3) - switch the slider and note, it may follow more smoothly.
SPOILER
01:50:148 (1,2) - change to this rhythm and switch NC.
SPOILER
01:51:226 (6) - why clap on whole slider? better to remove on end clap imo.
02:33:800 (8) - finish on start and end?
02:39:549 (4,5) - swich (4) and (5) like before I mentioned? hitsounds is nice.
SPOILER
04:00:926 (1) - finish on start?
04:06:675 (1) - ^

Hope to my mod useful xD
good luck~ :)
Regou
1,936 posts
ed July 2010
Regou

l1106188 wrote: 4l4u33

早灣 >w<
M4M



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[Regou's Normal] 261r5e

  1. 無用的綠線:
    03:32:902 - ok

  2. 01:06:675 (1,2) - 交換NC ?~ 不了,我這樣NC視覺上比較好
  3. 01:32:902 (1) - 第4個點 x:320 y:320
  4. 01:55:717 (2) - 感覺這note可以re?~ ok
  5. 02:16:735 (2,3,1) - 這邊咱覺得..把(2)分開比較好?!哈哈...這個是故意了...
  6. 03:57:693 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感覺這邊...不是normal的擺法了 lol! 看要不要修改~ 這個我都不真的知道要怎麼改...唉@@我再看一下
good song & good luck ~
scorp醬 加油 !>w<

lkx_shore wrote: 6aw5g

General
渣Mod from my queue

Regou's Normal
OD5>4 不了反正我AR都設6了OD也不用太低了


10分 :)

wantuole wrote: 525w37

:D from my queue
[General]
[Regou's Normal]
让我想起icebeam的图 最近玩太多了好像開始有點學起來了@@...
02:56:256 (3) - 再回撞一次，音乐是02:58:411这里开始降的 不了,我這是跟前面節奏的
03:38:112 (5) - 太难看了 不如就直接盖住 ok
就这么多 祝你好运 :)
当然 星星~

Lan wings wrote: 2x2e71

说好的M4M
[General]
overlay小了一个像素``阴影没弄好
combocolour4的话最好深一点``不然跟3很难分辨
虽说是GD``不过各难度开始时间不同大丈夫?

[热狗]
00:46:914 - 可以加个finish 個人不喜歡
00:49:070 - ^ ^
01:09:908 (1) - 拉弯点 ok
01:28:411 (3) - 没放好``歪了01:27:693 (2,4) - 跟这两个弄好点啊 修好了
于是粗略瞄了瞄``没啥大问题``不吐了

wring wrote: 5e6x1j

Hi~
m4m

[General]
nothing

[Regou's Normal]
01:22:663 (2) - clap on start? ok
01:34:339 (2) - finish on start? nope
02:33:262 (4) - ^ nope
03:35:777 (1) - remobe whistle? ok
03:59:130 (3) - should not be stack better, a little hard to read imo. I have no way to place it :cry:

Hope to my mod useful xD
good luck~ :)


http://puu.sh/19ouEhttp://puu.sh/19oyk 稍微再改了下

對了scor你看要不要用default的soft-hitfinish,好像比較好(現在那個...怪怪的?)
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
Scorpiour

Lan wings wrote: 2x2e71

说好的M4M
[General]
overlay小了一个像素``阴影没弄好 :arrow: 嗯调整了下
combocolour4的话最好深一点``不然跟3很难分辨 :arrow: 正在选新的colour 4...
虽说是GD``不过各难度开始时间不同大丈夫?因为是GD所以大丈夫吧？吧……

[Lunatic]
为毛这个hitnormal和slidertick我听起来很有点哲♂学味道 :arrow: 你一定是听错了
00:52:124 (8,9,1,2) - 这里的排列不好看``于是想不到怎么摆好看``可以无视 :arrow: 调整了这里Slider的形状和位置，应该会好一些了？
00:54:818 (7) - x324 y144 00:54:998 (8,9,10) - x356 y256 00:55:357 (11) - x244 y240
效果图
:arrow: 我这里是个五边形啦～～～
00:57:513 (6,1) - 两个尾巴要不要叠一起`` 看起来是故意不叠的:arrow: 我觉得不需要啦～
01:00:567 - 这个tick你知道的``SB音效 :arrow: 好的～
01:07:214 (2,4,5,8) - 看看能不能弄成菱形 :arrow: 不太容易……一个三角一个四边…………
01:12:603 (4) - 加个clap``虽然听起来不是很明显``但是加了后的确听起来好很多 :arrow: 好～
01:17:453 (6,7,8,9) - 也是菱形弄好点 :arrow: 距离不够了……后面整个combo都要调整…………头疼了…………
01:18:351 (9) - add clap``老实说``这clap太不明显了点``不认真听根本听不出区别在哪 :arrow: 加上了
01:19:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 右边往下斜一点`斜度和这个差不多01:21:226 (1) - :arrow: 我这里因为开了grid(方便对齐)所以空间不够了…………
01:23:381 (1) - 要不要来个锐角 :arrow: vocal是个平滑的，所以我觉得锐角不太适合……
01:28:232 (7) - 往上一格 :arrow: 这里音高和前面的(6)是一致的，所以高度也是一样…………突出后面的音高变化
01:35:777 (1) - 感觉这串stream音量可以搞一下 :arrow: 其实不太好弄因为空间有限不过还是做了个渐变=v=
01:36:226 (6) - 这个clap删掉? :arrow: 这里是专门做的clap节奏……所有stream都是这种～
01:58:591 - 我还是喜欢放个circle然后一拍或半拍后spinner``如果放的话01:58:052 (3) - 复制这个然后翻转? :arrow: 我是不太喜欢这种样式啦………………
效果图
02:25:357 (3) - 会不会太高? :arrow: 放心吧play的时候完全不会出屏幕
02:30:028 (3) - 左两格上一格 :arrow: 其实没打算做blanket的…………
02:39:908 (6,7,8) - 不向右弯一下? :arrow: 好～
02:40:268 (1) - 折角位置跟02:39:190 (2) - 重叠好看很多`` :arrow: 放心啦分数不会挡的～
02:46:735 (8,1) - 有点挡折返箭头(故意的把你?_? :arrow: take it easy~~~实测过的～
02:57:513 - same 01:58:591 - 如果放的话02:57:154 (6) - 复制转180 :arrow: >_>
03:38:291 - 这里的"啊~~~"03:39:010 (3) - 这里都加上了``为啥前面不加 :arrow: 理性告诉我应该加，但是直觉告诉我加上了会变得别扭……于是我跟着直觉走了……
03:42:603 (2) - 碰HP条 :arrow: 放心，默认皮肤碰不到～～不是默认的我就不管了=v=
03:52:124 (1) - 轨迹跟03:51:585 (5) - 重合? :arrow: 重合之后反而打起来有一点点挡手………………
04:01:465 (4) - 不上下翻转么`` :arrow: 原先是这么放的但是发现用大弧线比S弧线舒服～
效果图
04:09:369 - 你懂的``加的话放中间就好 :arrow: 嗯……如果决定加的话我3个会一起放的
非常感谢的说～～
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
ed October 2010
Strawberry
so..here all my suggestions :3

[TuEasy]
01:27:154 (1) - 这里开头好像应该+个finish o.o 结尾+clap?
02:36:136 (1,2) - 感觉可以更美观点:D 试试这个?
SPOILER 
256,252,156136,6,0,B|80:252,2,168,4|0|8
256,140,157573,2,0,B|432:140,2,168,0|0|8
02:50:507 (3) - 这里nc, 然后去掉02:51:225 (1) - 这里的.. 和02:39:010 (1) - 保持一致嘛
02:53:381 (5) - 于是随着上面的这里nc :3
02:57:603 (1) - 转盘后挪1/4tick? 因为voice是长白线开始的所以这里感觉有一点空隙比较好..
03:26:256 (3) - 结尾+clap 然后(4)的开头去clap..和03:24:818 - 一致?
03:32:902 (4) - 感觉这里来个repeat不错诶:3
03:49:429 (2) - 这个结尾好像丢个clap > <
04:02:363 (3) - 同02:50:507 (3) -
04:05:237 (3) - ^
04:09:459 (1) - ^

[Regou's Normal]
00:48:351 (2) - 感觉这个和前面的00:45:836 (2) - 叠起来就好啦lol
01:27:333 (1) - 这里感觉1/2跟在slider结尾很难读..感觉错开比较好;_; 比如移到x:312 y:336
01:34:968 (1) - 前移1/4? 因为voice在1/2前刚好开始最后一个音所以感觉跟紧点感觉更好些 o.o?
01:41:345 (3) - sliderbody上+whistle感觉效果不错 :3 现在的感觉有点不连续诶 而且voice是长音连着的所以听起来怪怪的x.x
01:47:094 (3) - ^
01:52:842 (3) - ^
01:58:860 - 总感觉这里应该塞个spin..
02:33:980 (1) - 同01:34:968 (1) -
02:36:136 - 这里副歌开始也可以和上面一样试试在几个sliderbody上+whistle感觉都蛮好的
02:57:783 - 同01:58:860 -
03:40:806 - 感觉这里开始用N:C就可以了..怪怪的》。
03:47:992 - 同副歌
04:09:459 - 同01:34:968 (1) -

[Fay's Hard]
00:59:759 - 感觉这里whistle音量降降比较好..现在有点吓人了
01:11:166 (1,2,3) - 试试+finish? :3
01:16:914 (1) - 开头加whistle? 整个combo和01:21:226 (1) - 这里保持一致?
01:18:351 (1) - ^
01:17:453 (2,4,6) - ^
01:23:561 (3) - finish?
01:34:878 (1) - ^
01:47:094 (4) - 感觉这里+个finish也蛮合适的，因为感觉clap不是很明显，这里像是突然结束一个combo有点不舒服
01:47:992 (4) - 如果上面+了的话这里开头+个whistle感觉也不错，还有01:48:531 (7) -
02:19:429 (8) - 感觉这里repeat的whistle下在开头的红线上比在白线上听起来更舒服一点:3
02:21:585 (1,2) - finish?
03:21:046 (1) - nc? 然后去掉nc在03:20:148 (1) - 的，和03:18:172 (1) - 一致 o.o?
03:57:244 - stack个circle，感觉最后了用三连更爽点 lol
03:58:501 - ^
04:10:268 (1) - 这里用个音量渐强感觉比较好诶xD

[Lunatic]
01:04:878 (5) - 感觉这个移动个角度接下一个slider更顺点:3 like-->http://puu.sh/1al69 
384,197,64878,2,0,B|432:216|432:216|476:208,2,96,0|0|8
01:17:812 (8) - 这里repeat感觉移动停住了有点不连贯的感觉。。正好是承接下一combo的地方所以感觉可以试试这样-->http://puu.sh/1aldE
01:34:519 (2) - 这里也感觉去掉repeat再+个circle感觉更合适点。。嘛lol
01:46:555 (3) - 同上 circle可以叠在(2)的结尾
01:48:262 (8) - 感觉两个1/4circle跟在上一个slider后面更舒服点:D。。--> http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/447937
02:16:735 (3) - 同上..circle可以试着叠在(2)结尾?
02:22:753 - 同01:48:262 (8) -
02:47:184 - ^
02:38:112 (6) - ctrl+R? lol
03:20:417 - add a circle?

I think that's it \:D/
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
ed December 2010
Nymph
long time no mod
request from in game for normal and hard diff, so.

[Hard]
我个人不是很喜欢用这种沉闷的hitsound配这种燃曲子 所以说有点建议：全曲子一直用一样的hitnormal我个人感觉沉闷而且没有变化 也许可以考虑个别part换成别的hitsound 或许会更好一些

我觉得歌曲很燃 所以多用一些finish或许会更好 比方说：
00:38:291 (1,2,1,2) - 这几个note加finish我觉得非常符合音乐
01:27:154 (1) - 这里音乐很强的finish我觉得应该跟
03:37:932 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个note也很适合

顺带提一下 这finish文件结尾处是突然没声的 听起来很别扭 如果有更好的文件建议换
01:58:771 (1,1) - 这种我个人觉得很不好听。。或许可以降低音量
02:57:693 (1,1) - 同上

02:56:256 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个1/3节奏是跟什么我没太懂 感觉很奇葩
排列和节奏没啥问题

[Normal]
setting太高了 这setting可以当hard了 我建议AR OD-1

01:31:465 (2,3,4,5) - 这种重叠我建议normal难度不要用 虽然或许能过 不过我觉得没什么必要。。这种梗感觉更像一个hard或者insane的梗
。很多跟上面所说的类似的重叠 我都不太建议在normal难度用 不过还是看你自己的想法了

[Luna]
01:00:387 (6) - 这个跟音乐应该是一个note加一个slider 比这样顺
01:35:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 可以做个音量渐变增大 很合曲
02:34:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 同上
后面类似的同
Regou
1,936 posts
ed July 2010
Regou

Strawberry wrote: 3h3w39

so..here all my suggestions :3

[Regou's Normal]
00:48:351 (2) - 感觉这个和前面的00:45:836 (2) - 叠起来就好啦lol 呵呵,,,故意的
01:27:333 (1) - 这里感觉1/2跟在slider结尾很难读..感觉错开比较好;_; 比如移到x:312 y:336 稍微移過了點
01:34:968 (1) - 前移1/4? 因为voice在1/2前刚好开始最后一个音所以感觉跟紧点感觉更好些 o.o? Normal diff不想弄這麼近啦
01:41:345 (3) - sliderbody上+whistle感觉效果不错 :3 现在的感觉有点不连续诶 而且voice是长音连着的所以听起来怪怪的x.x 個人受不了x_x
01:47:094 (3) - ^ ^
01:52:842 (3) - ^ ^
01:58:860 - 总感觉这里应该塞个spin..j 這個就是因為塞spinner那個spinner太短才不弄的...
02:33:980 (1) - 同01:34:968 (1) - 同上,先看看
02:36:136 - 这里副歌开始也可以和上面一样试试在几个sliderbody上+whistle感觉都蛮好的 還是...個人因素啦
02:57:783 - 同01:58:860 - 塞不下了
03:40:806 - 感觉这里开始用N:C就可以了..怪怪的》。
03:47:992 - 同副歌 ...這個我再看看,我個人覺得有點空可是好像又塞不下spinner啊
04:09:459 - 同01:34:968 (1) - 嗯...同上


I think that's it \:D/

Nymph wrote: 2w2f1l

long time no mod
request from in game for normal and hard diff, so.

[Normal]
setting太高了 这setting可以当hard了 我建议AR OD-1 好吧/ \ AR-1了,OD5其實應該還可以吧...?

01:31:465 (2,3,4,5) - 这种重叠我建议normal难度不要用 虽然或许能过 不过我觉得没什么必要。。这种梗感觉更像一个hard或者insane的梗
。很多跟上面所说的类似的重叠 我都不太建议在normal难度用 不过还是看你自己的想法了 其實整張圖都是這樣啊...個人覺得不真的這麼大問題..感覺還挺好讀的. o.o 如果再有人噴我就看看要不要改掉點比較明顯的
http://puu.sh/1bDYz
Dino99
1,830 posts
ed May 2011
Dino99
拖了段時間.. 抱歉摟>.<

• Suggestion
• Extremely suggestion
• Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<TuEasy>

  • • 01:27:693 - finish
    • 01:37:214 (1,2) - 微彎一下如何?
    • 01:58:681 (1) - finish
    • 02:26:615 (1) - 頭尾都finish吧
    • 02:30:387 (3) - 感覺有點太斜了>_> 這樣如何? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/452362
<Regou's Normal>
  • • 01:05:956 (4) - 移到[X:276 Y:76]吧 我覺得好看些~
    • 01:28:052 - 有鑼聲~ finish吧
    • 01:27:693 (2) - 第三個小白點往下一格美觀些~
    • 02:00:208 (1) - 放這裡感覺挺怪的>_>... 好孤單的感覺=v= 疊在01:57:333 (4) - 好看些w
    • 02:28:591 (5) - 太彎了不太好看.. 這樣唄~ http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/452384
    • 02:59:130 (1) - 同之前 疊著吧
    • 03:33:800 (1) - finish吧 好聽些
<Fay's Hard>
  • • OD-1? 就Hard來說7感覺高了...
    • 01:27:154 (1) - finish吧
    • 01:57:154 - 聽起來怪怪的.... remove finish好些
    • 01:59:489 (1) - 可以試試音量漸增~
    • 02:33:800 (8) - 往右兩格?
    • 02:34:699 (1) - 縮短到02:35:777 - 我覺得好些~
    • 02:55:178 (5) - finish改成加在尾巴?
<Lunatic>
  • • 01:35:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 這邊降低些音量吧~ 太大聲了>_> 然後再做個音量漸增也不錯:>
    試試這樣?? (01:35:777 - 50% 01:36:136 - 60% 01:36:495 - 70% 01:36:854 - 80%) 改了的話後面記得也要改喔~
    • 02:12:423 (3,4) - 頭尾對調? 打起來挺好的xP
    • 02:52:663 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 弧度可以再排好點>v<?
    • 02:57:513 (1) - finish吧~
加油啦!!~~ @w@
Milkshake
532 posts
ed August 2011
Milkshake
Hey Scorpi~
modding for hard and insane diffs. Maybe I'll add mods about normal and easy diffs, i'll let you know if i do.

✿ Fay's Hard
*I liked the hitsounds much, gj
*why there's no kiai time like in other diffs?
(fix only what you feel like. but please don't ignore them without trying, most of them are extremely suggestion..)

00:26:794- i know it's suppose to open/sounds cool/etc, but actually you don't really need that circle in the start.
it sounds kinda..terrible.
00:46:914- to 00:49:429-
the rhythm here is kinda bad, and when i testplayed i kinda had no idea what's going on with those sliders
and i think it's a bit hard for people who play hard and not lunatic
00:46:914- instead of loadsa circles you can make something like that-
http://puu.sh/1cfyV
00:48:172- here you can make sliders which sounds better and kinda easier to play
which follow the rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/1cfzL (possible for slowdown here too >w< moe)
00:50:148- better if you'll make (2) 1/1 slider repeat like this http://puu.sh/1cfBj
01:00:387(1,2,3,4,5)- i think this part is pretty confusing for hard.
http://puu.sh/1cfDF > http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/453275 it works nice
01:23:561- make 2 sliders of 1/2 instead of those circles? http://puu.sh/1cfIA
01:25:717- maybe follow like http://puu.sh/1cfJQ ?
01:42:962(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- in both stars you added some blue-line circle, i suggest you to remove them
they're a bit confusing even though they follow the rhythm.
you can make (5) longer or something, but just suggestion
03:10:627- to 03:35:058- liked this part, gj~ >w<
03:46:735(1,2,3,4,5,6)- this part sounds out of rhythm, maybe because of the hitsounds or smth, but..
try to change it?f

✿ Lunatic
*you're moe, gj /slap
*about undermapping..i'll try to give a few suggestions to follow rhythm better and still having good flow~
00:55:537- in parts like that when you mostly did 1/1 slider repeat, you can make 2 sliders of 1/2.
something like that: http://puu.sh/1cfTk
00:59:399- if you'll add a note here it can create nice rhythm, the flow won't be a problem with smaller DC i guess
01:00:387- the slider here sounds to early..i suggest to add a note here and move (7) to the white line,
it sounds better for me at least and! if you'll add a note in 01:01:196- and make (1) from the new combo closer it creates nice rhythm too.

^if you do that, remove 01:01:555- so it won't sound overmapped or just terrible
01:04:878- you can cancel the repeat here and add 2 notes in blue and white lines under the end of the slider~
01:01:896- add note? (can create a stack here and move it a bit lower)
01:16:375- you can do something like i said in 01:04:878-
01:21:266- how about following the rhythm like http://puu.sh/1cfZd
01:32:723- can follow the rhythm like http://puu.sh/1cg0U
02:16:735- cancel 1 repeat and put 2 circles in the end of the slider~
02:21:226- you can make a stack here of 3 circles, delete the one on the white line and make a stack~
02:27:064- add note?

if you guys didn't understand something of what i said here, please pm me~
good luck! /w\
kosiga
1,548 posts
ed May 2011
kosiga
Hi~ Scorpiour :)

sorry, for late :(

here my mod~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - Tags - 「Rogue」 What is this o.o? maybe mistakes 「Regou」 ?
  2. Song Setup - combo colors - 3 and 4 are too similar color. i suggest the replacement of the color. ↓ my suggest
    Combo1 : 160,160,240
    Combo2 : 240,160,240
    Combo3 : 200,200,240
    Combo4 : 160,240,240

[TuEasy]
  1. 01:35:777 (x) - add note and add finish.( first look, I thought that you did not have any problem even if you did not put it. but I wrote because it put the sound in other places 02:33:262 (1) - 03:45:118 (1) - )
  2. 02:33:262 (1) - from my experience, score 6000 is short for easy diff. i know it is used in other map. but overall this easydiff is difficult. I thought that was enough, even start 02:31:824.
  3. 03:33:621 (1) - ^ i suggest start 03:33:441 or http://puu.sh/1cguu
  4. 03:45:118 (1) - start 03:43:681

    Rhythm is simple. but It is difficult for easy diff :o ( fast SV & a little far DS )
    for ex: consecutive circle particularly ↓
    02:17:812 (1,2,3) -
[Regou's Normal]
  1. 00:49:789 (1) - i suggest the same position as the 00:38:291 (1) - 00:41:166 (1) - 00:44:040 (1) - . x256,y64
  2. 01:52:842 (3) - match it with vocal, slider end 01:53:561. and 01:53:920 - add note. is better?
  3. 02:00:208 (1) - Is it necessary to put it in the distance o.o? I think that position is in a place a little strange. You should not mind DS here :P Placed as close to the middle perhaps?
  4. 02:59:130 (1) - ^
  5. 03:26:794 (1) - grid move about x300,y316 ?
  6. 03:33:621 (3,1) - sudden whistle.　I think that whistle does not match :?
  7. 03:45:118 (2,1) - Surrounded by more beautiful? http://puu.sh/1ch8p
    284,120,225118,2,0,B|212:72|144:120|144:120|76:168|4:120,1,300,0|2
    76,48,226555,5,4
  8. 03:59:130 (3) - I think you should not stack here. If you're stacked http://puu.sh/1chbj I recommend this pattern.
[Fay's Hard]
  1. 00:38:292 - overlap with timing&Inherited Points. You should not overlap it carelessly. remove Inherited point.
  2. 00:47:633 (5,6,7,8,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: i suggest 1/3 rhythm here. http://puu.sh/1chkk and 00:48:351 (1) - I thought that the rhythm here did not match rhythm of note in front. The rhythm that it is slightly too simple )
  3. 01:59:489 (1) - It is too a loud sound ><;
  4. 02:58:411 (1) - ^
  5. 04:10:268 (1) - ^
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:00:387 (6) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1chBY because 01:00:387 here do not yet have a sound.
  2. 01:12:603 (4) - add finish ?
  3. 01:52:303 (3) - i prefer Ctrl+R flow. :P

    others fine~
Good map :3 Star☆~

Good luck~ :)
tutuhaha
3,053 posts
ed October 2010
tutuhaha
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: drivemylife.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 96495
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Drive My Life
Artist:SOUND HOLIC
Creator:Scorpiour
Version:TuEasy
Source:Touhou
Tags:tutuhaha Flower Firce777 sherrie__fay Rogue ZUN Nana Takahashi Euro Beat Perfect Cherry Blossom Saigyouji Yuyuko Border of Life

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.12
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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[TimingPoints]
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改完
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour

tutuhaha wrote: 5z2z

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Title:Drive My Life
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Creator:Scorpiour
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Tags:tutuhaha Flower Firce777 sherrie__fay Rogue ZUN Nana Takahashi Euro Beat Perfect Cherry Blossom Saigyouji Yuyuko Border of Life

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108,236,248830,2,0,B|156:316|252:316,1,168
256,192,249459,12,4,250986
改完
updated~
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wring wrote: 5e6x1j

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01:12:603 (4) - finish? :arrow: no...there's a finish on the following note
01:14:040 (4) - NC? :arrow: why....
01:16:914 (5) - NC :arrow: sorry no change
01:21:046 (7,1) - switch NC? :arrow: I think it is unnecessary~
01:27:693 (6) - finish on end?
01:28:411 (1) - finish on start? :arrow: both no because i choose to place finish on downbeats...
01:50:687 (7) - clap on start? :arrow: there's a clap before...
01:52:303 (3) - ctrl+r maybe more flowing. if you do so, put (3) on farther? :arrow: it's fine~
01:55:717 (6) - NC? :arrow: nope~
01:58:591 -,01:58:771 - add note and shorten the spin? :arrow: let me think about it....
02:19:789 (4) - NC? :arrow: nope~
02:26:615 (2) - change to finish on end? :arrow: i choose on head :>
02:27:154 (3) - clap? :arrow: fixed~
02:27:333 (4) - NC and add finish on start? :arrow: nope~
02:57:513 - , 02:57:693 - add note and shorten the spin? :arrow: same as above, let me think...
03:32:184 (4,5,6,7,8) - put on this? :arrow: no i choose to my direction :>
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03:38:471 (2) - finish on end? :arrow: no~
03:39:190 (1) - finish on start? :arrow: no~
04:04:519 (5,6) - ctrl+r maybe better :arrow: i make a square shape here~
04:08:112 (1,2,3,4,5) - like to put before I mentioned and how about to do this? :arrow: as above >.<
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Hope to my mod useful xD
good luck~ :)
thank you very much for the modding ~
Scorpiour
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Strawberry wrote: 3h3w39

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01:04:878 (5) - 感觉这个移动个角度接下一个slider更顺点:3 like-->http://puu.sh/1al69 :arrow: puush坏掉了…… 
384,197,64878,2,0,B|432:216|432:216|476:208,2,96,0|0|8
01:17:812 (8) - 这里repeat感觉移动停住了有点不连贯的感觉。。正好是承接下一combo的地方所以感觉可以试试这样-->http://puu.sh/1aldE :arrow: ....
01:34:519 (2) - 这里也感觉去掉repeat再+个circle感觉更合适点。。嘛lol :arrow: 我自己平常是倾向于4个一组的节奏啦……
01:46:555 (3) - 同上 circle可以叠在(2)的结尾 :arrow: 其实这样的话不如用3个note来～～我试试的---->空间不太够…………
01:48:262 (8) - 感觉两个1/4circle跟在上一个slider后面更舒服点:D。。--> http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/447937 :arrow: 我不喜欢把1/4放到slider后面……纯粹的个人喜好……
02:16:735 (3) - 同上..circle可以试着叠在(2)结尾? :arrow: ^
02:22:753 - 同01:48:262 (8) - :arrow: ^
02:47:184 - ^ :arrow: ^
02:38:112 (6) - ctrl+R? lol :arrow: 感觉不是很舒服～
03:20:417 - add a circle? :arrow: 不好听～

I think that's it \:D/
感谢mod的说～～
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12BARRY21 wrote: 4e5b2

拖了段時間.. 抱歉摟>.<

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  • • 01:35:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 這邊降低些音量吧~ 太大聲了>_> 然後再做個音量漸增也不錯:>
    試試這樣?? (01:35:777 - 50% 01:36:136 - 60% 01:36:495 - 70% 01:36:854 - 80%) 改了的話後面記得也要改喔~ :arrow: 加上了音量变化
    • 02:12:423 (3,4) - 頭尾對調? 打起來挺好的xP :arrow: 结果我把这里排列重新弄了。。。
    • 02:52:663 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 弧度可以再排好點>v<? :arrow: 唔～～～
    • 02:57:513 (1) - finish吧~ :arrow: 忘记了！fixed~
加油啦!!~~ @w@
非常感谢>w<
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