From my modding queue


Sorry for too late

Hello

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00:59:780 - So why the random kiai time to here? 01:00:280 (1) -
01:34:613 (2) - Try using a reverse slider here instead
03:23:280 (3) - Angle this kickslider


I cant find any other issues in the map.

Nice music and nice map.

GL!

M4M
[illuminate]

1. soft-hitclap3に3msの遅延があります
2. soft-hitwhistle2 ^
3. soft-hitwhistle3 ^
4. soft-hitfinish2の音量が小さい気がする
5. まとめて修正したものはこちらにあります
6. また全体的にもう少しaddtional-hitsoundを多くするか大きくするかしてフィードバックを充実させてももいいかもしれません
   
7. 00:14:447 (1) - これが00:15:197 (3) - と全く並行な部分がないのは気になるので14°右にselection centerで回転させるといいといい感じになると思います。
   
8. 01:19:780 (1,1) - 初回プレイの時には1/4と誤解してました。01:19:780 (1) - を01:19:947 (1) - の頭にstackした上で
   01:19:947 (2) - のNCをはずせば視認性はあがりますが、雰囲気が変わるのでお任せします
   
9. 02:16:780 (2) - 02:19:447 (6) - 02:22:113 (2) -
   この3つに関しては明らかに音が伸びてるのでSV0.5にして1/2か3/4スライダーにしてもいいと思います
   
10. 02:54:113 (7) - かぶらないようにまげてもいいと思います
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 03:01:280 (1,2,3,1,2) - もしこだわりがなければ音的にこんな配置もありだと思います（なぜかここの部分だけは違和感大きかったので・・・）
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 03:06:113 (1) - Add NC?　明らかに音が変わっている気がします
    
13. 04:07:447 (5,6,7,8,1) - 少し簡単になりますがまとめて(316,136)に移動させると04:06:947 (3) - の頭から連なってるように見えて綺麗だと思います
    
14. 04:12:113 (1) - (156,168)に移動させると終点が04:10:947 (4) - とstackして綺麗です
    
15. 04:12:447 (2) - (244,292)に移動させれば04:11:447 (6,1) - の頭と連なって綺麗に見えます。その際04:12:780 (3,4,5,1) - とかにすこしstackするので綺麗になるよう04:12:780 (3) - (508,348),04:12:947 (4,5,1) - (368,228)に動かすといいと思います

やってて楽しい譜面でした！頑張ってください！

Rendyindo wrote: 5e4a38

01:24:780 (5) - Change it to stream? keep
01:26:113 (5) - ^ ^
02:12:863 (2,3,4) - ^ becouse 02:13:113 (1) will hard to read. but other test players everybody said visible and fine
04:43:113 - Add a circle. I couldn't find sound

Sorry for too late thx for modding but keep all.

i hate pp wrote: 626z6y

w

00:59:780 - So why the random kiai time to here? 01:00:280 (1) - ?? no need imo
01:34:613 (2) - Try using a reverse slider here instead umm... keep
03:23:280 (3) - Angle this kickslider change to other styles but some fixed


I cant find any other issues in the map.

Nice music and nice map.

GL!

Urushi38 wrote: 14zx

M4M thanks!
[illuminate]

1. soft-hitclap3に3msの遅延があります
2. soft-hitwhistle2 ^
3. soft-hitwhistle3 ^
4. soft-hitfinish2の音量が小さい気がする
5. まとめて修正したものはこちらにあります ありがとうございます！！！！
6. また全体的にもう少しaddtional-hitsoundを多くするか大きくするかしてフィードバックを充実させてももいいかもしれません 了解です
   
7. 00:14:447 (1) - これが00:15:197 (3) - と全く並行な部分がないのは気になるので14°右にselection centerで回転させるといいといい感じになると思います。 個人的に気に入っている配置なのでkeepで！
   
8. 01:19:780 (1,1) - 初回プレイの時には1/4と誤解してました。01:19:780 (1) - を01:19:947 (1) - の頭にstackした上で
   01:19:947 (2) - のNCをはずせば視認性はあがりますが、雰囲気が変わるのでお任せします そこもお気に入りなのでkeepしたい
   
9. 02:16:780 (2) - 02:19:447 (6) - 02:22:113 (2) -
   この3つに関しては明らかに音が伸びてるのでSV0.5にして1/2か3/4スライダーにしてもいいと思います ラス以外は単発オンリー地帯にしたいのでkeep!
   
10. 02:54:113 (7) - かぶらないようにまげてもいいと思います 画像通りではありませんが曲げました！
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 03:01:280 (1,2,3,1,2) - もしこだわりがなければ音的にこんな配置もありだと思います（なぜかここの部分だけは違和感大きかったので・・・） keepで！
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 03:06:113 (1) - Add NC?　明らかに音が変わっている気がします add
    
13. 04:07:447 (5,6,7,8,1) - 少し簡単になりますがまとめて(316,136)に移動させると04:06:947 (3) - の頭から連なってるように見えて綺麗だと思います good
    
14. 04:12:113 (1) - (156,168)に移動させると終点が04:10:947 (4) - とstackして綺麗です yay
    
15. 04:12:447 (2) - (244,292)に移動させれば04:11:447 (6,1) - の頭と連なって綺麗に見えます。その際04:12:780 (3,4,5,1) - とかにすこしstackするので綺麗になるよう04:12:780 (3) - (508,348),04:12:947 (4,5,1) - (368,228)に動かすといいと思います いろいろ試行錯誤しましたがkeepで！

やってて楽しい譜面でした！頑張ってください！ niceなmodをありがとうございます！

ty

sionKotori wrote: 2z4d3w

Fookiezi wrote: 9q48

00:51:447 (1) - inconsistent NC k fixed
04:16:113 (1,2) - mayble un NC ^

01:34:613 (2) - imo i dont really like this slider, you can do better some fixed
02:51:447 (2) - ^ ^
03:49:780 (1) - ^ keep

thats it, great map

thanks for your modding!!

@to Fookiezi, no offense to you. sorry but dont feel bad

np :3 it's my fault in the beggining :p

Mini mod:
Kotorin pro, have my star ^^

UndeadCapulet wrote: 1t2uc

Mini mod:

Illuminate 4c1y4w

00:43:113 (1) - I think ctrl+g is smoother out of 00:42:780 (3) - . good
01:19:947 (1) - I think ctrl+h is smoother, so like this. keep
04:11:113 (5,6) - Seem pretty close, I expect 1/2 here. Maybe flip 04:11:447 (6,1) - ? ^

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Kotorin pro, have my star ^^ thanks!

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[sionKotorIlluminate]

1. 00:22:113 (5) - 1/6 じゃないかな、裏にあわせて置いたほうがいいかも、メロディにあわせておいてるかもしれないけど
2. 00:49:613 (1) - ここはNc打たなくていい場所だと思うな、いきなりこのリズムが出てきてるわけじゃないし予測できる
3. 00:50:947 (1) - ^
4. 00:52:280 (1) - ^
5. 00:54:447 (1) - ここは別の場所に起きたいな、Finish入る音だし個人的には上のほうに飛ばしたい
6. 00:54:530 (1) - どう考えてもEndのFinish浮いてるけど
7. 01:06:780 (1) - ここは視認性の問題でNc入れてると思うんだけど、ここはRemove Ncしたほうがいいかなあって思います
8. 01:39:280 (1) - Remove Nc、ここはいれなくても読めるしspamかな
9. 01:49:947 (1) - ^
10. 01:58:447 (1,2) - この音取りはちょっとあってないかも、こっちのほうが自然
    
11. 02:03:113 (1,1) - Sliderでカバーするのももちろんありだけど、4連打4連打いれちゃってもいいんじゃない？
12. 02:06:113 (1) - どっちかパターン統一したほうがいいと思うな　02:04:780 (1,2,3) -
13. 02:08:780 (1) - 位置ずれてるよ、画像でみたらわかりやすい、意図的ならしらん・・・
    
    img

    
14. 02:10:447 (1) - 02:13:113 (1) - ^
15. 02:13:780 (3,1) - Ncの使い方こっちのほうがいいと思う
    
16. 02:29:113 (4) - ここあえてNc抜いてるのなにｗ
17. 02:47:113 (1,2) - ここと同じ　01:58:447 (1,2) -
18. 03:07:447 (3) - ちょっとこれは読みづらいかな、向きが問題かも
19. 03:41:780 (6) - Ncいれたほうがいいかもなあ
20. 04:11:447 (6) - なんか違う、曲調にあわせたらこんな感じじゃね？提案通りじゃなくていいからもう一度考えてみて
    
21. 04:18:447 (1) - 前と同じ以後以前指摘なしだから自分で見つけて
22. 04:29:280 (1,2,3) - 04:30:947 (1,2,3) - 2.3に対するDS狭すぎてやりづらいと思う
23. 04:30:447 (1,2,3,1) - この流れ最高に意味がわからないからせめて2と3入れ替えたほうがよくね
24. 04:37:613 (4,1,2,3) - ここの流れもちょっと疑問符
25. 04:43:280 (4,1) - 多分現状のNcだったら読みづらいと思う
    
26. 05:04:447 (4) - Ncいれてもいいかもね

Metadata (Artist Title Source)のソース用意してから呼んでなｗ
あとAppでSlider多めだしOD8.5くらいいってもいいと思うけど~

Satellite wrote: 271f1s

[sionKotorIlluminate]

1. 00:22:113 (5) - 1/6 じゃないかな、裏にあわせて置いたほうがいいかも、メロディにあわせておいてるかもしれないけど ですね！
2. 00:49:613 (1) - ここはNc打たなくていい場所だと思うな、いきなりこのリズムが出てきてるわけじゃないし予測できる fixed
3. 00:50:947 (1) - ^ ^
4. 00:52:280 (1) - ^ ^
5. 00:54:447 (1) - ここは別の場所に起きたいな、Finish入る音だし個人的には上のほうに飛ばしたい ^
6. 00:54:530 (1) - どう考えてもEndのFinish浮いてるけど ^
7. 01:06:780 (1) - ここは視認性の問題でNc入れてると思うんだけど、ここはRemove Ncしたほうがいいかなあって思います ^
8. 01:39:280 (1) - Remove Nc、ここはいれなくても読めるしspamかな ^
9. 01:49:947 (1) - ^ ^
10. 01:58:447 (1,2) - この音取りはちょっとあってないかも、こっちのほうが自然 折り返しのスライダーにしました
    
11. 02:03:113 (1,1) - Sliderでカバーするのももちろんありだけど、4連打4連打いれちゃってもいいんじゃない？　ﾎﾟﾎﾟﾎﾟﾎﾟって音に合わせたいのでkeep!あと個人的なイメージだとここsliderなんだよね・・・
12. 02:06:113 (1) - どっちかパターン統一したほうがいいと思うな　02:04:780 (1,2,3) - fixed. 後者に合わせました
13. 02:08:780 (1) - 位置ずれてるよ、画像でみたらわかりやすい、意図的ならしらん・・・fixed
    
    img

    
14. 02:10:447 (1) - 02:13:113 (1) - ^ ^
15. 02:13:780 (3,1) - Ncの使い方こっちのほうがいいと思う ^
    
16. 02:29:113 (4) - ここあえてNc抜いてるのなにｗ ^
17. 02:47:113 (1,2) - ここと同じ　01:58:447 (1,2) - ^
18. 03:07:447 (3) - ちょっとこれは読みづらいかな、向きが問題かも 時計回りの流れを維持したいのでkeep
19. 03:41:780 (6) - Ncいれたほうがいいかもなあ fixed
20. 04:11:447 (6) - なんか違う、曲調にあわせたらこんな感じじゃね？提案通りじゃなくていいからもう一度考えてみて 確かに04:11:363 - にも音ありますねー、修正しました
    
21. 04:18:447 (1) - 前と同じ以後以前指摘なしだから自分で見つけて fixed
22. 04:29:280 (1,2,3) - 04:30:947 (1,2,3) - 2.3に対するDS狭すぎてやりづらいと思う ^
23. 04:30:447 (1,2,3,1) - この流れ最高に意味がわからないからせめて2と3入れ替えたほうがよくね ^
24. 04:37:613 (4,1,2,3) - ここの流れもちょっと疑問符 ^
25. 04:43:280 (4,1) - 多分現状のNcだったら読みづらいと思う ^
    
26. 05:04:447 (4) - Ncいれてもいいかもね ^

Metadata (Artist Title Source)のソース用意してから呼んでなｗ
あとAppでSlider多めだしOD8.5くらいいってもいいと思うけど~ 他のテスターに相談した結果のOD8なのでkeepで！正直ODに関しては全く分からない

ありがとうございました！

Metadata:
from http://www.tanocstore.net/shopdetail/000000000049/ (KONAMI公式のページが消えてたので)
8トラック目 "Elektrick U-Phoria(Extended Mix) - DJ Noriken"
tags -
konami(コナミ)
21 spada(beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA 収録曲 https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/2dx/21/p/n ... horia.html)
uk hardcore(ゲーム内のジャンル表記 ソースは同上)
beatnation rhyze vs tano*c(アルバム名)

04:20:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ?

Satellite wrote: 271f1s

04:20:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ?

思いっきり見落としてましたすみません！！！

cool map

sukiNathan wrote: ht6p

cool map

ty!!

Bubbled #1

Satellite wrote: 271f1s

Bubbled #1

ありがとうございます！

ooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rumia- wrote: 1c4h1x

ooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sukiNathan wrote: ht6p

#2

19:47 sukiNathan: hello
19:47 sionKotori: hi!
19:47 *sukiNathan is editing [https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/854972 DJ Noriken - Elektrick U-Phoria (Extended Mix) [Illuminate]]
19:47 sionKotori: wwee
19:48 sionKotori: k
19:48 sukiNathan: 00:22:113 (5) - maybe add a clap on the head?
19:48 sukiNathan: there's a pretty loud sound on it
19:49 sionKotori: o good ;3 added
19:50 sukiNathan: 02:35:280 (1) - i dont think you really need a NC here
19:50 sukiNathan: the note is the exact same pitch as 02:34:613 (1,2,3) - 
19:50 sukiNathan: and when you have NCs on 02:35:447 (1,1) - it feels a bit spammy
19:51 sionKotori: k ur right
19:52 sukiNathan: ok that was it
19:52 sukiNathan: u can update
19:52 sionKotori: okay!
19:53 sionKotori: updated
19:58 sukiNathan: ok :D
19:58 sukiNathan: #2

thank you for modding!

don't let this die please

Mel wrote: 4r2mb

don't let this die please

idk

I can do nothing but wait. anyway

FUCKING BN DONT SLeePPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

a month has ed since got #2 bubble

hello bns

a

Oh come on, still no BNs?

By the way, awesome map. I loved it. =)

TheArchist wrote: 3h6h51

Oh come on, still no BNs?

By the way, awesome map. I loved it. =)

idk~^_^ BNs are so so busy!

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Satellite wrote: 271f1s

nice 4month ago wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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next month

next years Kappa

Next Century WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

what about flipping your bg so that http://puu.sh/psAHV/8271a6411b.jpg doesn't happen? does this bg look ok when flipped?

01:15:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 04:21:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shouldn't this have more steamspace like 01:04:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (0.8x)
01:31:780 (1,2) - these feel odd cuz they put the loudes things ever on their ends, do you know any rhythm that maps the red ticks ...? the whites don't really have much of anything going on
02:35:280 (4,1) - should have same comboing as 02:24:613 (1,2) -
03:28:780 (5) - i think the angle looks somewhat cringe, maybe try something like http://puu.sh/psBT9/b23e61579e.jpg
05:15:113 (1,2) - would have expected circles for a finish because sliders are such a weak ending choice but that's up to you

good map, can i qualify

Okorin wrote: rm2n

what about flipping your bg so that http://puu.sh/psAHV/8271a6411b.jpg doesn't happen? does this bg look ok when flipped? ...? It's okay imo

01:15:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 04:21:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shouldn't this have more steamspace like 01:04:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (0.8x) 0:15:113 -> changed spacing same as 01:04:447, 04:21:780 -> more wide space than before(sv1.30 0.8x)
01:31:780 (1,2) - these feel odd cuz they put the loudes things ever on their ends, do you know any rhythm that maps the red ticks ...? the whites don't really have much of anything going on fixed
02:35:280 (4,1) - should have same comboing as 02:24:613 (1,2) - ^
03:28:780 (5) - i think the angle looks somewhat cringe, maybe try something like http://puu.sh/psBT9/b23e61579e.jpg ^
05:15:113 (1,2) - would have expected circles for a finish because sliders are such a weak ending choice but that's up to you keep

good map, can i qualify please

thanks

http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/72818 (now dead) -> http://web.archive.org/web/201501130158 ... item/72818

as you can see this track is listed as "DJ Noriken - Elektrick U-Phoria(Extended Mix)"

Where did you take your current metadata from ?

Okorin wrote: rm2n

http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/72818 (now dead) -> http://web.archive.org/web/201501130158 ... item/72818

as you can see this track is listed as "DJ Noriken - Elektrick U-Phoria(Extended Mix)"

Where did you take your current metadata from ?

o my fault ;_; fixed!

http://p.eagate.573.jp/game/2dx/21/p/ne ... horia.html

the original appears first in "beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA"

I think you should put that in source instead since it's more accurately describing

Okorin wrote: rm2n

http://p.eagate.573.jp/game/2dx/21/p/newsong/elektrick_u_phoria.html

the original appears first in "beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA"

I think you should put that in source instead since it's more accurately describing

are you saying about sources?
beatmania IIDX is fine imo (example: https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/331821)

metadatas

Artist and Title: from here(http://web.archive.org/web/201501130158 ... item/72818)
sources:following the examples
tags:
konami = KONAMI
21 spada = from beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA
uk hardcore = that song's genres from here(https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/2dx/21/p/n ... horia.html) "UK HARDCORE"
beatnation rhyze vs tano*c = It's songs from this album(http://web.archive.org/web/201501130158 ... item/72818) beatnation RHYZE vs HARDCORE TANO*C

i think these are fine

I have no idea, the game it first appeared in is called like this so i thought it would make sense to call it like that in the source. I will ask around.

Also i don't really take other sets as references for metadata

ok. thank you in advance

edited:
I don't fixating keep sources beatmania IIDX. I can accept your opinions and change sources but idk and I wanna know why other maps using beatmania IIDX on tags

hypeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Okorin wrote: rm2n

good map, can i qualify

Okorin to the rescue

sionKotori wrote: 2z4d3w

why other maps using beatmania IIDX on tags

^ This

well, i agree with Okorin for using "beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA" on Source. This song is from that game.

Okorin wrote: rm2n

good map, can i qualify

Go Go Go

Good luck!

alacat wrote: 1qva

sionKotori wrote: 2z4d3w

why other maps using beatmania IIDX on tags

^ This

well, i agree with Okorin for using "beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA" on Source. This song is from that game.

ya, not tags. on source
I wanna fix it and asked him. waiting.

According to my comprehension, beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA is the specific game name (different arcade machine), while beatmania IIDX is name of the whole series.

So, including 21 SPADA there is better from my side as it is the exact name of the game. Both of them are acceptable though.

Actually, since the metadata changed after the last two icons, let's restart with a bubble #1

wow it's been 6 months lol
#2

1 old bubble cleared. Dozens more to go ._.
Time to Rave, feel the BeatofIke *runs*

congrats!

finally.... thanks!

congrats :3

gg wp

w00t

やったぜ！
おめでとう

finally qualified !

gz d00d

gratz

Yakiniku party !!!

おめでとうございます！！

nice :d

Satellite wrote: 271f1s

congrats :3

本当にお世話になりました！！

Shoga wrote: 2c1n5l

gg wp

pls show me your play

UndeadCapulet wrote: 1t2uc

w00t

6-months Qualified Train! Beep Beep!!

Asahina Momoko wrote: 4e4d5u

やったぜ！
おめでとう

ありがとうううう！！！！

pkk wrote: v5v20

finally qualified !

gz d00d

ty dude

alacat wrote: 1qva

gratz

Yakiniku party !!!

finally Yakiniku party!!!!! arigatou!!!!

Reol wrote: 261w1h

おめでとうございます！！

ありがとうございます！！

deetz wrote: k1l54

nice :d

thanks :d

おー
少し遅れたけどおめでとう！

Akitoshi wrote: 1q705w

おー
少し遅れたけどおめでとう！

ありがとうございます！！
i didn't know you speak Japanese

やったぜ！！

Rumia- wrote: 1c4h1x

やったぜ！！

Gratz Kotori!!! D:

Yohanes wrote: 6p6b21

Gratz Kotori!!! D:

ty!!

Rank soon? =)

o: gratz!

survived!

おめでとナス

iyasine wrote: 3h651z

おめでとナス

ありがとうございます