Yo, mod from my modding Q~
Thx for waiting
[General]
[ByBy's Easy]
[Nya's Normal]
[Goku's Advanced]
[Hard]
[Insane]
[Nirvana]
Nice map lah :3
Good luck~
Thx for waiting
[General]
- The title, maybe put the "TV EDIT" in bracket to differentiate it from the actual title, like this : Nirvana (TV EDIT)
- Disable "widescreen " (for any diff that haven't disable it. Some diffs have it disabled already)
- Why don't put the audio preview here 00:45:345 ? If you start it right at where the vocal start, the vocal will become kinda covered (hope you understand xD) I mean when you select a song, the song start with fade in and if you place the audio preview right at the vocal, the vocal will be covered by the fade in (apalah, begitu pokoknya :v)
[ByBy's Easy]
- There's one DS problem... These two 01:10:345 (2,3) -
- 00:02:671 (1) - Maybe you could make this look less like "distorted" slider wave (curve it more)
- 00:10:679 I think you need to add a note here.... The sound is pretty big to ignore... It's also good as a lead up to the next part
- 00:14:012 (2,1) - They are overlapped .-. maybe you could move (1) to the right a bit.
- 00:44:012 (2,1) - Maybe you could blanket (2)'s tail so you could place 00:46:345 (2) - at where (2)'s tail was while keep blanketing it.
- 00:53:345 (1) - I like it more like this tho http://puu.sh/iONO3/fbd5763cd4.jpg
- 00:54:678 (3) - This slider kinda ruin the flow imo... I mean from (2) to (3) is going to right while (3) is suddenly go left... Maybe you have to make (3) less "steep"...
- 00:54:678 (3,1) - If you don't fix the mod above ^ I'm bothered by the fact these two almost overlapped >.<
- 01:26:678 (3) - Nazi mod. Is this really supposed to crook a bit? (not perfectly straight) http://puu.sh/iONZ9/f8a4674961.jpg
- 01:04:012 (1) - Oh yeah, if I recall it correctly, spinner gap in Easy must be min 4 beats... I think this one is just 3 beats...
- Nothing to mod actually, you used simple beats and pattern. But, I think you can blanket better xD
[Nya's Normal]
- Yo, we meet again
this is fate xD - 00:00:002 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are not supposed to be following vocal right? Because if they are actually following vocal, they are off.... Well, in case you are following vocal, you could use this http://puu.sh/iOOf3/2e0e68c37f.jpg
- 00:10:346 (5) - I think this note is kinda unnecessary. There's no really sound to follow. If it's just a filler I suggest to just delete it. Adding a little pause once in a while is a nice thing :3
- 00:30:012 (3) - Maybe you could make this into actual slider wave... Kinda like this : http://puu.sh/iOOmD/0b5038c894.jpg
- 00:31:345 (6) - ^
- 00:45:345 (6) - A simple circle would work nicely here.
- 01:20:012 (1,2,3) - Try to position these so 01:19:678 (5) - would be placed at the middle. Kinda : http://puu.sh/iOOuz/0bbbf80b1e.jpg
- Nice rhythm. What this map lack is flow. At some part, you could make the flow better if you curve the slider the other way; example : 00:20:012 (4) - 00:35:345 (3) - 00:46:512 (3) - 00:48:012 (6) - 01:00:012 (3) - and some other. At some part, you could make the flow better by reducing the "steepness"; 01:18:678 (4) - 00:24:678 (3) - 01:15:178 (1) - and other. Maybe pay more attention to flow would be nice, especially for easier difficulties
[Goku's Advanced]
- Advanced? Like Normal+? .-.
- Is this diff supposed to keep the DS consistent? If yes, you have one DS problem.
- Maybe keep the slider tick rate consistent, the other use 1.
- 00:00:335 (1) - Actually if you want to follow vocal, using 1.5/1 slider (or 1/1 slider followed by a circle) would work best since the vocal is pretty long. But like this is alright I guess xD
- 00:03:672 (3,2) - Overlapped... Maybe move (2) kinda upward to avoid it.
- 00:07:677 (5,1) - Keep the DS? why do you reduce it here?
- 00:09:345 (5) - It might be surprising because you suddenly followed backsound when you previously followed vocal (this part 00:08:344 (2,3) - ) The player might click this note too early because they thought it follow vocal as well. I suggest to either move this to follow the vocal or add a note here 00:09:178 to follow both, vocal and backsound.
- Woah, you use the same SV with Hard? that pretty far jump (from Normal which uses 1.00... If I think about it, the Normal could actually use 1.10 or 1.20 since the Easy uses 0.90...) o-o 1.30 or 1.40 would work best (and spread best) but it's up to you to change it or not (since changing SV = remap xD)
- 00:15:845 (1) - A simple circle would work nicely imo since it's just a short sound and nothing to slide... Furthermore, a circle will help you feel the "pound" more.
- Well, maybe this is not Normal+ after all xD
- 01:01:178 (1) - Long slider like this is surprising (at leas for me orz) I prefer spinner...
- 01:01:178 (1,2) - Is this really supposed to be overlapped like that? o-o
[Hard]
- Bahasa Indonesia kan? 00:04:006 (1) - hindari pake double reverse kayak gini... Tapi karena kebetulan yang ini fit the music well, mungkin gapapa :3
- 00:28:512 (3) - Kayaknya slider ini ga terlalu fit deh, di blue tick ane ga denger bunyi apa apa .-. kayaknya pake rhythm yang standard bakalan lebih cocok.
- 00:39:178 Mungkin add a note buat vocalnya.
- 00:39:345 (3,4) - Whistle disini agak berisik kayaknya xD suara aslinya juga ga terlalu whistle deh... Kayaknya pake clap yang kayak disini 00:42:012 (4) - bakal lebih cocok...
- 00:47:345 (3) - Kayaknya part ini ga perlu triplet deh. Simple 1/2 slider bakalan lebih cocok
- 00:50:012 (3,4,5) - ^ menurut pengalaman ane (sok berpengalaman xD) triplet bakal lebih cocok kalo dimulai di red tick kecuali kalo ada suara khusus yang nge .
Nice Hard
[Insane]
- 00:09:178 (1,2,3) - Mungkin kayak gini lebih bagus? http://puu.sh/iOPQ5/214f97ff0c.jpg
- 00:15:845 (1) - Kalo cuman buat emphasize doang kayaknya ga perlu NC deh. Kecuali kalo ngubah SV. Furthermore, kayaknya ngubah SV disini juga bagus, dicepetin sedikit biar emphasizenya lebih berasa.
- 01:22:678 (1,3) - Bisa dibikin lebih perfect lagi sejajarnya :v
[Nirvana]
- 00:01:169 (5,6) - Kayaknya 1/2 slider sama circle gak terlalu cocok deh disini, soalnya vocalnya panjang dan ngga ada break, mendingan pake 1/1 slider aja (bahkan kalo itu sengaja biar mapnya jadi lebih susah)
- 00:02:504 (4,5) - ^
- 00:11:845 (1) - Jumpnya agak jauhan dikit biar ga overlap sama (3)
- 00:18:345 (4) - pattern breaker xD Gak punya tempat yang bagus? sebenernya bagus kalo circle ini ditaro di tengah segitiga http://puu.sh/iOQ9t/b5980539a4.jpg tapi karena letak next slidernya yang begitu kayaknya nggak banget :v
- 01:02:012 (3) - Mungkin NC disini, sama disini 01:02:345 (5) - biar bentuk patternnya bagus.
- 01:27:678 (4) - Naro (4) di tempatnya (1) kayaknya ga bagus deh :/ kalo notenya ada 4, mungkin pake pattern segi 4
Nice map lah :3
Good luck~
Thanks~
