Where's the flame

Thanks! I hope you'll understand the reasons behind not changing a lot of the things you mentioned ( they are repeating though ) .Pereira006 wrote: 2g4d8
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- that artist, the"plot" the p could change to caps " BoxPlot " because there album in Bandcamp or Soundcloud is more better trust than youtube Fixed
- Also missing add Liquid Tones in Tag Added
- there osb file, delete it Deleted
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Gameplay:
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- 01:06:778 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/lNNRb/bf1558756f.jpg my view blanket is off Fixed
- 01:39:137 (2,3) - Not sure if this the spacing almost 6.00x is impossible to catch there, would be nice reduce 5.00 or 5.50x Kicksliders play as singletaps, so the real distance is more than half less. In this case it's about 2.5x
- 01:41:834 (2,3) - ^ same ^ same
- 03:14:193 (1) - I never seen you put NC as you style, I don't see this like this NC other parts, in 03:14:531 (1) - could remove NC, example you style in I wanted NC here 03:14:783 - but slider ends there so I put it on the slider head and I think if I put NC on blue tick it won't be good. I did the same thing in every kiai in this part 06:07:452 - 04:41:160 - 01:48:576-
- 03:33:070 (1,2,3,4), and many more, but you didn't NC
- 03:34:081 (5,6,1) - the pattern could change zig-zag is must better than parallel IMO like you did in 02:05:092 (6,7,1,2,3) - here I tried to be consistent with 03:31:553 (9,1,2,3,1,2,3) - . I often used repeating paterns two times in the whole song so I want to keep it consistent here with these
- 04:21:272 (5) - could CTRL+G is good flow with 04:20:598 (1) and 04:21:609 (1) Ok
- 04:31:553 (1,2,3) - 7.00x spacing, still not sure this is fine, would be nice reduce to 5.00x same as before, the actual spacing is twice less, because you will never want to follow those sliders but just click them
- 04:40:823 (1) - remove NC same happen 03:14:193 (1) I guess I explained it above
- 04:55:486 (2,3) - the spacing again same
- 04:56:160 (4,5) - ^ same same
the only thing he spacing made me little worry, not sure ho well
pm in inbox when you done this
HE!1!!!!!!11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111!!11 KEK!! KEK!! KEK!!Okoratu wrote: ct57
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all jokes aside, congrats![]()
Yauxo wrote: 71584y
■ I feel like the spacing is really messed up in this one. There are quite the number of patterns that I'd like to point out because they're weird to play or overdone , but ... that'd kind of mean that I'd have to point out the entire map because of its spacing. I probably wouldve liked this more if this wasnt aimed at fullscreen jumping 24/7 pp map inc :v
I cant really mod that kind of map, sorry.
gl anyways
The map itself is not horrible. But spacing is often really exaggerated for no real reason, when the song always stays the same. Let me point out some examples:Pho wrote: 275c35
[*]I partly have to agree with Yauxo in of spacing, you really aimed for huge spacing for this map for the purpose of 'fun jumping'.
Stuff feels overdone at some sections and could be toned down to fit the intensity of the track more. Feels like the current difficulty-based mapping meta to me :/
It still should be valid, get more mods and opinions from people and see what will happen. Good luck!
I feel like the spacing is really messed up in this one. There are quite the number of patterns that I'd like to point out because they're weird to play or overdone , but ... that'd kind of mean that I'd have to point out the entire map because of its spacing. I probably wouldve liked this more if this wasnt aimed at fullscreen jumping 24/7 pp map inc :v
I cant really mod that kind of map, sorry
You ask a noob player to mod this lolOkay then I'll get to the patterns you mentioned
I partly have to agree with Yauxo in of spacing, you really aimed for huge spacing for this map for the purpose of 'fun jumping'.
Stuff feels overdone at some sections and could be toned down to fit the intensity of the track more. Feels like the current difficulty-based mapping meta to me :/
Thanks for your input!Okoratu wrote: ct57
here are just a few thoughts i had when playing this:
02:32:396 - this part was MUCH more demanding than 05:24:980 - stamina-wise while being basically the same thing or nearly the same idk the 2nd one just felt a whole lot easier to do because it has more rest moments for my left hand lol
This is true. I had two options here either to make the beggining easier for warmup or harder so that ending wouldn't be so hard after playing the map for long already, I'd be guessing people already would run out of stamina, and much rather fail at middle than on the end of the song which always suk.
in of fun or playability or HOW THE FUCK DO I NOT 100 this 05:16:722 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - crossed a line for me that probably shouldn't have been crossed lol i guess you know what i mean with this
never got 100s here lol except when I missed the whole slider xd, but I guess you can have complaints about having this part more spaced
06:29:362 (1,1,2,3) - does this haaaaaaaaaaaave to end in an 1/6 triplet being mapped, i think an 1/6 doublet would be smarter, more forgivable and actually predictable but that may just be me lol
Many people have issues here. I personally like it as notes because the music s it, but if it really bring antifun for people I'll just change it to a slider. 05:03:281 (2) - this thing is 1/8 so it's a slider, because when I had it as circles people complained to me about not being able to do 356 bpm bursts xd
DUDE WHAT LOL, Thanks xdDahplA wrote: 144e
Good luck getting this ranked again. I love this map, you've definitely improved.
Feels weird having no stars left D:
OD is fine. Generally you'll want to have around OD 9 for DnB maps due to easy rhythm, but this one is more difficult so I raised the setting.Kipley wrote: 6e21v
Secretpipe best mapper follow this person's wordsSecretpipe wrote: n6k
I told you lol
edit: idk if im even allowed here wtf but if im allowed to post pls dont go thru with od 9.5 and about the slider hold spam (it's very boring and bothersome to go thru that part without hitting a 100.)
Come on, you obviously can't compare both songs with each others. Racemization has strong beats and intense emphasis, Escape With The Clouds doesn't (in the way Racemization has). It's a pretty calm song (compared to this) which imo doesn't full screen jumps..Mazzerin wrote: 5s2065
you may as well unrank/throw maps like https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/347765 (just a random example) in the trash bin because the song is too intense for easier difficulties
regarding difficulty: I won't change it.-Nya- wrote: 4y392e
Hey~ From my M4M queue.
No Escape:
- Whoa, that OD is pretty high. (To be honest, I don’t think I’ve ever modded a map that has such a high OD before >.<)
- One unsnapped green line: 05:20:765. Easy thing to fix though. Just snap it to 05:20:767
- 01:25:823 (8,9,10,11) –These jumps look extremely big to me, especially since the rhythm is so fast. I suggest you try to make the jumps a bit less for more comfortable play here. I see that spacing was the reason that this map got DQ in the first place so I guess I’ll also point out places where I feel the spacings are a bit overdone. Again: 01:24:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) – Not all of them, but especially the ones that I pointed out first: 8,9,10,11.
- 01:29:025 (1,2) –I don’t really know if it’s necessary to make these jumps this big.
- 01:29:868 (7,8) –Weird to play, since the flow goes backwards from 7 back to 8. You can probably try turning this stream: 01:29:531 (3,4,5,6,7) –the other way, so that (3) starts where (7) is now.
- 01:30:542 (2,3) –This jump looks big.
- 01:31:216 (5,6) –Same as 01:29:868 (7,8) –
- 01:32:564 (7,8) –This is an example of a pattern that doesn’t cause bad flow, since you don’t have to jump sharply with your cursor. Then again, that jump looks a bit big, lol.
- 01:35:261 (6,7) –Pretty big jump.
- 01:39:137 (2,3) –This jump looks insane to me since the rhythm here is much faster than the rest of kiai time and yet you made the jump almost similar to the rest.
- 01:41:834 (2,3) -^
- 02:17:733 (1,2) –Not a nice placing, since it causes weird flow and you didn’t place any of the rest like this.
- 02:19:755 (1,2) – Rather keep the spacing consistent here with the rest since there’s no real change in the music to the change of distance here.
- 02:20:261 (1,2) -^
- 02:20:767 (1,2) –This is just . . . no. Very bad flow and too big jump.
- 02:54:811 (5,6) –Very big jump here. What makes it even more difficult is the fact that the jump comes right after a stream.
I’m sorry, but there are still a lot of places where I feel the jumps are just too big (It doesn’t really look like you addressed Irre’s spacing issues thoroughly) I won’t be able to push this forward because of the above reasons and many other similar issues: The insane spacings and the bad flow (Bad flow more my personal opinion I guess)
I want to pop the bubble, but honestly, I’m scared to since I’m afraid I’m overreacting or something, but I truly think, personally, that this isn’t ready yet. I would like the next BN to read this as well and then make his/her own judgement. Perhaps this mapset will go through easily now, but I’m not gonna take that chance. Sorry >.<
Good Luck~!
It's a little silly that you think I don't like you. I may sound so when I disagree with opinions, but that's not true. I'm actually very grateful that you gave your opinion about some things and that you're trying to help with my map.Yauxo wrote: 71584y
Randomly ing in again, I know you dont like me, but I care about the map.
With all that BN and QAT drama just around the corner, I'd say that "I wont change the difficulty" will result in "That didnt adress the problem mentioned in the first DQ post -> DQ #2" and will probably circle somewhere around that point. Ive seen that youve changed some things, but some of the unnecessay fullscreen jumps are still to be found in the diff.
To the qualifying BN; Make double-sure that it meets your quality standard. This is a double-edged sword, really.
monstrata wrote: 4335o
[No Eescape]
I think you could have paid more attention to kicks and snares at certain parts. Examples: 02:56:665 (1,2,3) - 02:59:362 (1,2,3) - 03:00:036 (3,4,5) - 05:49:250 (1,2,3) - 05:54:643 (1,2,3) - etc... The way you map some of these jumps it seems like you go "this drum is loud, lets map a jump " and "this drum is normal/soft, so we'll use normal spacing". You could be more thorough with your spacing concept. Well I actually did try to make the kick and snare thing more spaced where the bass is stronger, but in some places it just felt too much compared to the other patterns so the spacing stayed rather similar in some places
- 01:17:564 (4,5,6) - I can understand your jump from 4>5 but not 5>6. You map an equally large distanced jump to something that is barely audible in the music xP. it was mainly since I wanted to emphasize 01:18:238 (1) - but changed anyway.
- 01:24:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - These are overdone not because they are too big, bit because this section is quite calm compared to the Kiai right before it. By using jumps this big so early on, it makes the Kiai feel less intense. I think having big jumps here are fine, but comparatively, these should still be smaller than the ones you use in Kiai. Please don't buff the Kiai jumps tho xP. Well I'm tired of people complaining about these so I'll change them rip. I still felt it was stronger than anything in this song so it had this kind of spacing.
- 01:49:840 (2,4) - Are there even 1/4's here? Applies to a lot of thse 5x streams you use. The blue ticks are nearly inaudible. They are audible tho, I don't want to change such things since it's a lot of what dnb maps are based on and they fit extremely well imo.
- 02:05:598 (2,3,1,2) - This doesn't flow very well for me... idk I don't really see the problem. The slider follows the same direction as the note before and the angle isn't that bad either.
- 02:08:547 (4) - I would take these out and instead map a jump between 02:08:463 (3,5) - . Triplets work, but making it a 5x stream makes the snare on 5 less impactful. If you did a triplet + jump you could emphasize it a lot better. I see what you're getting at but my intention was to have the snare thing as the last stream note and I really liked how it went. Also don't want to randomly cut off the obvious stream which is the only thing that you can listen to at this point.
- 02:37:452 (1,2,3,4) - This should be spaced lower, following your stream pattern. Or at least, spaced less than 02:37:789 (1,2,3,4) - because this set is where the notes are the highest pitch, so having the highest spacing here works best. Well the stream patern is actually longer since there's two times where 02:37:452 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 02:42:845 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this kind of pitch repeats and imo 02:37:789 (1,2,3,4) - is higher pitched than 02:37:452 (1,2,3,4) - so it's more spaced
- 02:54:137 (2,3,1,2) - I don't really like the sharp angle you have to turn from 2>3 in order to play the stream. 02:55:317 (1,2,3) - This is much better though! sure
- 04:11:160 (2,3) - I think a rhythm like this is more appropriate: I tried to follow vocals there but I guess it's better to follow the thing you gave ok
- 05:09:811 (1,2,1) - etc... man these are pretty cool. thank
- 05:22:115 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ehh i didn't like these though. They're all stacked but its kinda awkward to play them for me. I much preferred the patterns which involved jumps and movement. Like this pattern is so different from 05:23:295 (1,2,1,2) - while your other sliders prior usually all involve the same pattern and movement being repeated. Point made
Good luck!
Yauxo wrote: 71584y
Some things will probably overlap with that I've said in my mod and some things might sound weird. It's christmas eve here, my english and explaining might have taken a hit today. I'll list some major examples of what my spacing problem is about so that I dont have to pick every single pattern out of that map. I think this would be disrespectful as well. See these as general examples you could apply to any similar pattern.
Section from 00:39:137 (1) - to 00:43:351 (2) -
I can see that you want to the song getting "louder" (I guess less quiet) and rightfully so, but comparing the spacing from Part A (quiet) to Part B (not-so-quiet) doesnt feel right to me.
- Part A uses a pretty low and even spacing with expections for patterns like 00:29:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -, which is totally fine though! The spacing fits the difficulty and song intensity very well, so there are no complaints here.
- Part B on the other hand literally jumps up the difficulty curve and introduces a 3/1 jumping section, peaking at x3,5 DS for a very similar type of beat like the previous, just being a little bit louder with additional bass here and there.
If Part A's general DS would be 1.0, Part B's should be around 1.3 to 1.5 - it currently feels more like a 2.0 or higher.
Section from 01:22:283 (1) - to 01:26:328 (1) -
What buggs me here is that the difficulty of the song starts to ramp up even before the actual speed/intensity/whatever change happens.
01:22:283 (1) - to 01:24:643 (8) - still feels like it'd belong to the part before that (which had lots of patterned spacing like 01:17:733 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ). Again, I can see the intention behind this, but I dont think that this much spacing is jusified with the previous part in mind.
01:24:811 (1) - to 01:26:160 (10) - Glad that it was nerfed a bit so that it's not full on fullscreen jumps anymore. While it does fit to the intensity of the current buildup, I'd lower this one a little bit as well if you were to change the things mentioned above. It's strong, yes, but it's not the end of a kiai.
Part 01:30:036 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - and similar (Kiai stuff)
So, these happen many times throughout the map, so Im not sure if what I say is even valid. For me though, they're too spaced.
Im having lots of trouble pointing the finger at specific patterns because, theoretically, every single one of these patterns is consistent with a different pattern that meets the same issue. If I were to point out pattern x and ask for a less spaced version, then pattern y would be overspaced in comparison. Rinse repeat, every changed pattern is overspaced compared to the previous one.
It's like as if youre in a sandcastle building competition. One guy builds a huge one and everyone tried to build a better and higher one - until everyone's castle breaks down. wat
I feel like stuff like the following examples could be toned down by at least a tiny bit, as some of them just feel like basic* beats/notes. Maybe this would help to lower the general spacing a little bit, too.
01:27:845 (2,3) -
01:30:036 (8,9,10,1,2,3) -
01:33:238 (2,1) -
01:35:261 (6,7) -
01:35:767 (1,2,1) -
01:37:958 (6,7,8) -
01:41:665 (1,2,3,4) -
01:43:856 (1,2,1) -
01:46:047 (5,6) -
01:46:553 (1,2,1) -
01:49:081 (5,6,1,2,3) -
01:51:946 (1,2,3) -
01:54:643 (1,2,1) -
01:57:340 (1,2,1) -
02:02:227 (5,6,7,1,2,3) -
02:04:924 (5,6) -
On the other hand I'd like to point out patterns that I really like, spacing wise. I could see the map being mapped like this (if used correctly)
01:29:531 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:31:553 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:34:418 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:39:474 (4,5,1) -
01:42:845 (2,3,4,5) -
01:46:890 (1,2,3,4,1) -
01:49:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
01:53:632 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -
01:55:654 (4,1,2,3,4,5) -
01:58:351 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
02:03:238 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -
02:06:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
So, if you were to adjust the "wrong" spaced objects to be "right" spaced objects, I'd probably be happy already.
(*Basic: Things you'd map as a "normal spaced" object in a very standard/meta Insane (no very strong bass/beat, no streamy sounds, etc.) (I hope this makes sense))
I also think that things like 03:01:722 (5,6,1,2,3) - dont feel too good either. Right now, there's tons of movement everywhere with these huge jumps, so (5 and 6) are comparably tiny and have "no" movement to add to the map.
If we were to talk about consistency, the movement should probably go (Fast) (Fast) (Less Fast) (Somewhat Slow) (Less Fast) (Fast) (Fast), while patterns like these are (Fast) (Fast) (Fast) (Slow) (Fast) (Fast) (Fast).
I feel stupid/like a kid explaining things like this, but I dont know how to do it otherwise. Sorry lol
Anyway, I hope that this helps a little bit.
It feels like Im just trying to kill the difficulty of this map. Maybe Im just a guy that dislikes extremely spaced maps, sorry.
Thank you!FrostxE wrote: 6f5s6z
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I'm kind of impressed with the map after playing throughout the song, the last kiai did good job, disappointed at first for high AR usage though. this ar feels comfortable to me personally for such map, it's not a farm map anyway so much rather let it be more forgiving
There are 2 things that I don't like in the song and deem to be unfitting with the pacing of the diff, hope you consider changing them a bit along with your taste and such
- spaced triples: 01:49:081 (5,6,1) - , 03:15:373 (5,6,1) - , 04:41:665 (5,6,1) - and 06:07:958 (4,5,1) - I can't find them fitting with the song at all and to be honest, they are annoying to play in practice so is it done in favor of having more pp? if not, you could change to a triple stack or use less-spaced triples instead. it's just intense there, but I guess the tripples can be less spaced, but they have to be emphasized since I mapped to the drums
- 02:10:823 (1,2) - this is kind of surprising to read for the first time, trying to introduce this by having proper spacing at the 1st 2 sliders and then leave the rest the same? proper spacing that I mean is just only using ctrl+g on 02:10:823 (1) - and everything else is done, just make it close spacing to show players it's sliders on 1/4 not constant 1/2 like what have been done so far. When you compare this with 05:03:407 (1,2) - , it's more intuitive on 05:03:407 (1,2) - as they are mapped by curved slider and the direction is matched each other unlike 02:10:823(1,2) - changed that part a little to make it play easier and yeah less spacing on first few sliders
The rest looks great though, a challenging map to play that doesn't go beyond the song that far. Good luck for re-qualification and ranking![]()
Thanks! Sorry, for not applying anything, but your opinion is still appreciated and I will consider it.Chaoslitz wrote: pq5n
M4M, sorry for delay
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- 00:27:002 (1,2,3) - The difference of the jump is too big for me, consider moving 00:27:340 (3,4,5) higher stronger than the rest, it wouldn't be emhasized if I reduced the spacing
- 01:26:328 (1,2,3,4) - The jump isn't really need with the soft music not really a jump, because it comes from slider. it's almost the same as having it as 1/2 gap since it's so close
- 01:28:014 (3,1) - The jump here looks weird imo after hitting a triangle 01:27:677 (1,2,3), try something like this: seems fine to me, I'm kind of using similar patern here with blanketing, if you mean the angle it still plays fine
Don't forget to adjust the spacing behind- 01:33:407 (1) - Remove the NC, also the jump is large too large even though there is drum, compare to other parts the nc follows the 1-2-3 patern, but since it's a slider, I NCed it instead of the note after, so that some bursts that start on blue tick don't get NCed 01:44:193 (1,2) - etc. Regarding spacing these sections are spaced more than the rest because the song is more intense here
- 01:33:913 (2,3) - 01:35:935 (2,1) - 01:44:025 (2,1) - 01:48:238 (2,1) - ^
- 01:49:250 (1,2,3) - yea jumps like this is still overdone for me it should be the hardest part in kiai imo
I am sorry that I can't push this map forward.
Although i don't have this map before the 1st qualified, though I still think some of the jumps are overdone and unexpected to be that large, didn't point out all in the mod, but yea if you know what I mean, it mostly appears in the kiai time, not absolutely unacceptable, but somehow it isn't in my style. However you mapped streams with various spacing nicely. It can be easier, but it can be harder too. I think the spacing is consistent enough. First I tried to map it mainly to the drums, but after some mods I thought of including the intensity of the bass aswell. So some sections that seem overspaced are just following the more intense bass with the help of drums.
And sorry about it again, anyway, feel to find me if you any questions, try to find other BNs as well, they may favour in this style and help you pushing it forward Before qualify finding BNs wasn't that difficult. Now it's pretty much impossible considering I already had a lot of BNs involved so very few remain.
Good luck!
Thank you, I hope so too xdBiggy wrote: 573z3s
Just a suggestion to make it look cooler and its a minor detail.
01:06:104 (1,2) - Make these curved to have it match the rest of that part. I'm kind of doing another thing here with starting with a few straight sliders then in the middle curved sliders and also end with straight sliders
But anyway its a really good map! I hope this gets ranked. Have a nice day.
Thanks for the mod! well if you could only not block private messages I'd discuss it further and maybe we could decide on something ^^appleeaterx wrote: z2r5k
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lots of red textYeah, I've testplayed one of your previous maps before. I think I have the same idea as Chaoslitz. I don't really feel like iconing this map. While there are many interesting elements in your map, to me it sometimes feels just a tad overdone overall and a bit too insane for my likings. Maybe you can convince me otherwise after applying this mod, but maybe not >_> There was already a discussion about the general spacing of this map and I still believe that scaling the map by 0.8x or something doesn't improve it's quality at all, but only reduces the difficulty of it.:idea: General 1y5x6b
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* OD9.5 = overkill imo. You don't need such high OD in my point of view... I can see myself getting 99% in the beginning and then because of stamina getting like 85% acc towards the end. Nor is this a special case of 'notelock', this is not a Mazzerin map with high BPM lol. As said before, this song is easy rhythm wise and it's pretty high difficulty so having it the same as 5 star DnB map would be silly imo.
* 00:30:373 (5,6) - Don't see why this is so large? Literally nothing special at (6), and really takes away the emphasis on (7) after this, because (5,6) is already large. I wouldn't it call it large tbh it's just a tiny wee bit larger than other ones, I really don't think it's a big deal. The snare is still spaced more. The whole map is mainly based on the drum on red tick and snare on white tick after, so I also used it in the beginning in some places like 00:27:845 (6,7) - aswell
* 00:40:149 (8,9,10,1,2) - Gotta find these almost straight lines a bit unconmfortable when they are not straight (it looks like a mistake, rather than intentional) and not consistent in spacing. The stack resets the movement so the linear movement doesn't really mean anything here, especially when it's right next to the stack.
* 01:06:104 (1) - NC spam in this whole section is -kinda- really unneeded >_> why not? I think it seperates the paterns pretty nicely
* 01:18:744 (2) - Literally, the emphasis of the whole intro was mainly on the vocals. Why skip these now? 01:16:890 (1) - from here I start mapping to drums and other stuff as indicated with hitsounds
* 01:39:137 (2) - CTRL+G? (2,3) plays awkwardly now due to antiflow. It plays better how it is, if you play the sliders as circles. If ctrl g that, then the clickable slider will be too high and uncomfortable imo. The spacing gets messed up a bit too
* 01:52:283 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Would move 3 upwards. Your map seems to be mostly freestyle and being restricted to the same (straight) area is really uncomfortable & sudden, when 99% of the kiai is fully freestyle with many jumps & curved sliders ... if anything I'd move not the 3 but the burst a bit up like 01:49:587 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - but this so minor that kill me, Ill change it if I convince you to bubble this somehow xd.
* 02:10:823 (1) - 05:03:407 (1) - gotta say these slider spam parts are pretty cool /w\ tbh some people like this thing the most and some people hate the most![]()
* 02:37:705 (4,1) - That ongoing loud beat pattern is gone and the section is slowly getting calmer, let's put a stream jump here!!! what ehh..?? (this is very different than for example 02:43:097 (4,1) - , where it goes from calm -> original again. even at a similar part 02:37:705 (4,1) - you just keep DS) maybe I'm deaf but 02:42:845 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 02:37:452 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sound identically to me when the stream jump note hits the highest pitch
* 04:31:722 (2) - Spacing is a bit too large here to do this antiflow kickslider pattern imo. You seem to do this quite often tho... but maybe try this? http://puu.sh/n1A5q/57e6a43faa.jpg Same applies here too. I don't want the player to play this patern in a circular way and want to him to just click the slider and ignore it's direction looks cool too Spacing wise, it doesn't extend the spacing I use for most kiais so it's fine.
* 04:40:486 (1,1) - Spam not needed. 04:41:160 - nc intended here but that's impossible so it's like that. Same applies at 03:14:868 -
* 05:35:598 (3,4,1) - From your description, I think you mean this? Maybe I interpreted it wrongly, but I still think stuff like this should be avoided. I'm definitely NOT against spaced stuff; the thing is however, that this is the first real time you did stuff like this.... in the 5th minute of the song. If you're going to do spaced 1/4 or overall gimmicky stuff, better do it consistently throughout the whole map, or else it's just a mess ._. This section is one of the easiest tho. People mostly complained about the overall spacing of kiais and stuff but it already got really nerfed I just can't nerf it more than it is or it's completely something not I had in mind when mapping this... Regarding the mentioned patern it's the same way emphasized as in the previous streams like 02:37:705 (4,1) - 02:43:097 (4,1) - 05:30:205 (3,4,1) - . I think it really fits
Good luck for now and have fun!
changed the first stream a bit and few things from previous mods tooMilan- wrote: 3y4v2k
-00:43:351 (2,3) - nuu still dont jump ;( maybe something like this http://puu.sh/ngJd7/b521f5c1da.jpg ? I think it was ok cuz it was really strong, but this is good too so... sure.
-01:06:104 - didnt find much sense to silience the slider ends when there are mapping a clear beat uhhh even 20% may do what you want but better, also how loud those whistles are, is annoyingx d maybe using 40% or less do better agreed, they were meant for the slider ticks but ye I'll just make the slider ends audible. oh and changed to drum addition instead of soft
-03:02:396 (3,6) - http://puu.sh/ngJRk/015ffeafd5.jpg triggers me, dunno why h ok stacked the 5 on 6 aswell then
-03:34:081 (5,6,1) - weird that you have these 3 notes in the same line when you jump pretty much every downbeat uhhh ok fixed it to go like 03:31:553 (9,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
-04:21:104 (4) - x050y350 ~~-triggers me, dunno why I hope you mean 250 350 lol, but anyway want to keep the absoulute spacing thing so moved it a bit different along with 04:21:272 (5) -
-04:36:778 (3,1,2,3,4) - dont u think this straight flow is kinda awkward? your flow is usually pretty smooth and freely, but here is kinda eh i think it's cuz of the stack the movement is reset so it doesn't matter if line or not imo
-04:46:216 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - especially here, where it's stack-triple-jump!, weird i'd say same
-05:03:070 (1,2,1,2) - myaesthetics http://puu.sh/ngKFY/7b8f883586.jpg tried something different
gooood song I don't map bad songs for rank ol
im ok with the map, so ya i can 2nd i guess what DahplA said
thanks againDahplA wrote: 144e
Yo,
[No Kudosu]
The last thing I'll say is that from 02:10:823 - onwards, regarding the slider spam and streams, is that it could look much better. The second part looked great probably because the sliders looked more uniform in position and the extra kick sliders in the streams fit really well. changed the stream part kept the slider part only ctrl g at some places
- 00:28:014 (7,1) - I feel like this part really doesn't flow well for literally the smallest but still significant reason. All of your slider base combos have made use of "outward" flow, like 00:25:654 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:28:351 (1,2,3,4) - but these two sliders conflict this, since they both face the same way. Yeah I know, little thing right, but here is what I'd do. did something different
- 00:44:531 (1) - This really just deserves to be placed in the middle. I don't see why it isn't since it belongs with 00:46:890 (1,1) - not really, the following circles are in the middle because it's easier to hit them after spinning in the middle
- 01:19:924 (1,2,3,4,1) - Still kind of looks weird to have two parts curved, then one part abnormally straight o.O tried something
- 01:34:081 (3) - I really dislike this, because it's more so to do with reading it (which in itself is hard) rather than the focus of jump skill. I don't think it's hard to read since the slider head is completely visible and only the slider end overlaps which should influence reading minimally...
- 01:39:137 (2) - The only time I'm going to suggest Ctrl+G to improve flow. Also works well with 01:39:137 (2,1,2,3) - um ok, also moved it more down
- 05:30:205 (3,4,1) - Really weird curve shape. I dunno what's wrong with it lol
- 06:28:351 (1,1,1,1) - Could definitely be more creative. what did I just create...
Anyways, don't let my 60 (plus a couple more when this is done) Kudosu go to waste C: no pressure
thanks!Lasse wrote: 4y3p20
no kd, just some minor stuff I noticed while playing through the map since apparently I have it from when it was qualified and f2'd it
ar9.5 just feels a bit too high for how dense/slow the map is and that's me saying this as someone who plays lots of ar8 dt
=> played the map at 9.2 instead and that felt totally fine, so maybe you could consider 9.2 or 9.3? 9.5
05:37:115 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is the only pattern where 9.5 might help a little bit, but at least for me that still seemed fine on lowered ar
it just makes the mpa feel so "hectic" seems perfect for me tho, it just feels much easier to read the jumps and some streams, so keep. I'd actually raise it to 10 if I could lol, but ppl would complain too much so...
02:43:014 (3,4,1) - and 02:48:238 (1,2,3,4,1) - would be nicer if spaced similarly since they sound pretty much the same/same for other part where this repeats (slightly lowering the first one and increasing the second onewould fit well, or just increasing the second one if you don't want to lower the spacing, lol) if you listen more closely you'd notice that 02:48:576 (1) - etc is the part where it gets highest pitch aka where I used those spaced tripples, but the music calms down at that exact place, so it's like how it is. same with the other part
also lowering the volume of the repeats for 02:48:576 (1,1) - and 05:41:160 (1,1) - would sound better imo
+adding some increasing volume timing points to the spinners afterwards would give those a nice effect good point
there was a stack that looked off while playing (might not even be noticeable at 9.5) => 04:22:115 (3,4,5) - it's not much but you can easily fix that :v
doesn't seem intentional as every other one of those seemed properly stacked during gameplay yes
sliderspam part is pretty fun to play even though second one was a bit more interesting
gl