This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月10日 at 19:44:28

Artist: senya
Title: Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o(OPver.)
Source: Touhou
Tags: zun yuuhei satellite 幽閉サテライト Mayumi Morinaga 森永真由美 Iceon Kamase Tora かませ虎 Kaleidoscope 東方プロジェクト project Nardoxyribonucleic stu00608
BPM: 138
Filesize: 1871kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

1. Kantan (1.16 stars, 91 notes)
2. Muzukashii (2.71 stars, 245 notes)
3. Nardo's Futsuu (2.07 stars, 167 notes)
4. Oni (3.34 stars, 370 notes)
5. stu's Oni (3.2 stars, 379 notes)

: senya - Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o(OPver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kantan - Completed
Nardo's Futsuu - Completed
Muzukashii - Completed
stu's Oni - Completed
Oni - Completed

forum Pm<3

[Oni]
00:24:239 (38,39) - dk?
00:30:653 (74,75) - k? flow flow flow
00:39:566 (13,14) - kd? (13) rhythm
00:45:218 (43,44) - how about kd?
01:00:435 - d please
01:09:131 - k or K or consistent 01:10:870 - d?

i will continue this mod tomorrow <3
i waiting this!

Genocide wrote: 554z1

forum Pm<3

[Oni]
00:24:239 (38,39) - dk? fixed
00:30:653 (74,75) - k? flow flow flow fixed
00:39:566 (13,14) - kd? (13) rhythm fixed
00:45:218 (43,44) - how about kd? fixed
01:00:435 - d please d now.
01:09:131 - k or K or consistent 01:10:870 - d? fixed

i will continue this mod tomorrow <3
i waiting this!

Thank you mod

Hi Charlotte! Mod request via PM!







And that's all. Good luck for rank!

Sayaka- wrote: 2h2w1s

Hi Charlotte! Mod request via PM!

[stu's Oni]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it?
2. 01:12:609 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - change to ddkkddk? it's better for playablity imo

And that's all. Good luck for rank!

Thanks ~ all change~

Sayaka- wrote: 2h2w1s

Hi Charlotte! Mod request via PM!

[General]

1. 00:17:826 - add a timing point here to reset the timing signature fixed
2. Kiai inconsistency between stu's Oni and other diffs, fix this please

[Kantan]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it? fixed
2. 00:45:653 (16) - K? there is a cymbal here fixed
3. 01:13:913 (62) - move to 01:13:479 - ? well,changed other pattern
4. 01:15:218 (65) - K? to emphasize the first beat of the second kiai part fixed

[Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:01:305 - to 00:13:913 - I don't think following voice here is a good idea, try to follow something else? (the piano for example)

I won't give a full mod for this diff, since it's pretty hard. I think you should try to reduce the amount of 1/2 in general

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it? fixed
2. 00:40:109 (12) - I don't think this note is needed, remove? fixed
3. 00:42:500 (20) - move to 00:42:609 - ? there is no note at 00:42:500 - fixed
4. 00:43:370 (23) - move to 00:43:479 - ? same reason as above fixed
5. 00:44:674 (29) - I don't think this note is needed, remove? keep
6. 00:54:022 (63) - ^ fixed

[stu's Oni]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it?
2. 01:12:609 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - change to ddkkddk? it's better for playablity imo

[Oni]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it? fixed

And that's all. Good luck for rank!

Thank you mod

Sayaka- wrote: 2h2w1s

Hi Charlotte! Mod request via PM!

[Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:01:305 - to 00:13:913 - I don't think following voice here is a good idea, try to follow something else? (the piano for example) fixed some of the patterns there.

I won't give a full mod for this diff, since it's pretty hard. I think you should try to reduce the amount of 1/2 in general I don't think this is very hard because of the BPM and the considerable amount of breaks throughout the diff.

And that's all. Good luck for rank!

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/cAkV0.rar

hi Charlotte.
The Kantan looks fine to me and I don't really have anything to add but I have a few things I'd like to suggest for the Muzukashii.
[Muzukashii]
I just felt like there were some parts were it felt like it could use a bit more notes in between to give it a better feel as a Muzukashii.
00:09:239 - d
00:13:805 - k
00:19:022 - d (since using k would make it oni material)
00:20:761 - d
00:25:109 - d
00:27:718 - k
00:34:131 - d, I think it sounds nice

This is as far as I can go, sorry if it wasn't helpful.

drum drum wrote: 215943

hi Charlotte.
The Kantan looks fine to me and I don't really have anything to add but I have a few things I'd like to suggest for the Muzukashii.
[Muzukashii]
I just felt like there were some parts were it felt like it could use a bit more notes in between to give it a better feel as a Muzukashii.
00:09:239 - d keep
00:13:805 - k ^
00:19:022 - d (since using k would make it oni material) ^
00:20:761 - d ^
00:25:109 - d ^
00:27:718 - k fixed
00:34:131 - d, I think it sounds nice fixed

This is as far as I can go, sorry if it wasn't helpful. I don't want to use too much 1/4 notes.because,I feel Muzu=Oni so keep.soory

Thank you mod

M4M ;w; My Map ---> https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/225260

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat






Good Luck ^^

Soldsaga KunG wrote: 3r1qv

M4M ;w; My Map ---> https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/225260

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat

Kantan

00:13:044 (16,17) - Ctrl + G fixed
00:53:044 (29,30) - ^ keep
01:01:305 (43) - K fixed
01:02:609 (45) - k fixed
01:08:261 (54) - d fixed

Nardo's Futsuu

00:18:696 (2) - k
00:20:000 (4,5) - Ctrl + G

Muzukashii

00:30:870 (48,49,50) - kkk keep
00:44:348 (26,27,28,29) - d kkk fixed
01:06:522 (104) - k fixed
01:08:044 (110,111) - Ctrl + G fixed

stu's Oni

01:00:870 - add k
01:04:783 (118) - d

Oni

00:04:783 (10) - Move to 00:04:566 - changed other pattern
00:05:000 (11,12) - Ctrl + G fixed
00:05:653 (13) - k fixed
00:06:305 (15,16) - kk keep
00:13:479 (46,47,48) - k d d fixed
01:07:609 (144,145) - kk fixed

Good Luck ^^

Thank you mod

Soldsaga KunG wrote: 3r1qv

M4M ;w; My Map ---> https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/225260

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat

Nardo's Futsuu

00:18:696 (2) - k Nope, the sound is similar to 00:21:305 (6) - which is mapped as d.
00:20:000 (4,5) - Ctrl + G I followed the snare sound at 00:20:000 (4) - .

Good Luck ^^

Thanks for the mod~

No change atm.

Soldsaga KunG wrote: 3r1qv

stu's Oni

01:00:870 - add k
01:04:783 (118) - d

Good Luck ^^

Thanks~

Hi Charlotte~ Taiko mod request by pm

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• All seems okay

[Kantan]

• 00:20:435 (6) - change to k? i think sounds better with k here and you are using k with this sound for example 00:23:913 (11) -
  00:37:826 (2,3) - control+g? (d k d) imo follows better the vocals and you are following that i think ;w;

[Nardo's Futsuu]

• 00:20:435 (5) - change to k? same as the Kantan, i think sounds better using k in this sound

[Muzukashii]

• 00:07:392 (21) - delete for short break? and no sounds bad without note
  00:30:653 (47) - delete? i know is low bpm but for some players this long pattern can be hard xD anyway, it's your decision :3
  01:12:609 (127) - change to k? i think follows better the vocals (if you are following here ofc ;w;)

[Oni]

• 
  00:20:435 (16) - same as the other diffs, change to k? (dk) maybe you are using dd here for consistency but sounds better with dk here imo
  00:23:044 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - kdk kdk kdkdk is a bit weird imo.. change 00:23:587 (33) - to k? (kkk) for more variety
  00:45:979 (46,47,50,51) - change this doublets to dk? i think sounds better
  01:20:435 (218) - change to k? (dkkdk) i think sounds better

[stu's Oni]

• 00:20:435 (15) - change to k? (ddkdd) sounds good imo
  00:45:979 (20,21) - control+g? (dk) i think sounds better
  01:12:609 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - this stream no sounds good for me, maybe you want something easy here, how about to change to ddkkddk or ddkdddk?

This is all, good luck Charlotte! ^^

Hanjamon wrote: 5p4t3w

Hi Charlotte~ Taiko mod request by pm

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[Nardo's Futsuu]

• 00:20:435 (5) - change to k? same as the Kantan, i think sounds better using k in this sound fixed

This is all, good luck Charlotte! ^^

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/cD5sD.zip

Hanjamon wrote: 5p4t3w

Hi Charlotte~ Taiko mod request by pm

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• All seems okay

[Kantan]

• 00:20:435 (6) - change to k? i think sounds better with k here and you are using k with this sound for example 00:23:913 (11) -
  00:37:826 (2,3) - control+g? (d k d) imo follows better the vocals and you are following that i think ;w;
  
  All fixed

[Nardo's Futsuu]

• 00:20:435 (5) - change to k? same as the Kantan, i think sounds better using k in this sound

[Muzukashii]

• 00:07:392 (21) - delete for short break? and no sounds bad without note
  00:30:653 (47) - delete? i know is low bpm but for some players this long pattern can be hard xD anyway, it's your decision :3
  01:12:609 (127) - change to k? i think follows better the vocals (if you are following here ofc ;w;)
  
  All fixed

[Oni]

• 
  00:20:435 (16) - same as the other diffs, change to k? (dk) maybe you are using dd here for consistency but sounds better with dk here imo
  00:23:044 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - kdk kdk kdkdk is a bit weird imo.. change 00:23:587 (33) - to k? (kkk) for more variety
  00:45:979 (46,47,50,51) - change this doublets to dk? i think sounds better
  01:20:435 (218) - change to k? (dkkdk) i think sounds better
  
  All fixed

[stu's Oni]

• 00:20:435 (15) - change to k? (ddkdd) sounds good imo
  00:45:979 (20,21) - control+g? (dk) i think sounds better
  01:12:609 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - this stream no sounds good for me, maybe you want something easy here, how about to change to ddkkddk or ddkdddk?

This is all, good luck Charlotte! ^^

Thank you mod

good map
good luck~

Icing_wind wrote: 4f646

Taiko Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Nardo's Futsuu]

nardo你会讲中文的对吧，对吧。 么么哒。 看见你的图就有动力mod了 呵呵 xD

00:55:653 (82) - → https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/2215577 It seems good~

01:02:826 (95) - change to d As the vocal pitch is relatively high, k would be better imo.

good

good map
good luck~

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/cIivb.rar

Hey' mod req via pm.
Im a bit late as usual ;_; sorry.

[Oni]

Not always sure if you follow the vocal or the instrumental but it plays okay so np.
- 00:13:913 - and - 01:27:392 - maybe start these spinner 1/2 earlier coul've been better, works for all diffs.
- 00:23:479 mm maybe try others pattern here instead of kkk kdkdk ? i think so something like ddk kkddk/ddk kkkdk could be a bit cooler to play and fit more then song, your kkk doesn't emphasize - 00:23:696 (34) - which sounds different/higher.
- del - 00:45:218 (43,44) - or only - 00:45:435 (44) -, to emphasize more - 00:45:653 (45) -?
- change - 01:10:870 (163) - to k and then del - 01:11:087 (164) - ? fits a bit more the song imo.


[stu's Oni]

^ same comment,
- 00:35:218 maybe start the incoming spinner here tho ?
- 00:52:826 (54) del this, or add d at - 00:45:870 - and - 00:47:609 - ? for more consistency (first suggestion might be better).
- 01:01:305 start the kiai here ?_? the song goes high at this moment, not at - 01:00:870 -.
- 01:08:479 why nothing here but d at - 01:10:218 - :c ? maybe del that - 01:10:218 (147) - ?

[Muzukashii]

- 00:23:261 (19) - del and then add d at - 00:23:479 - ?
- 00:32:174 (53) - move to - 00:32:392 -, also del - 00:33:913 (58) - ? better follow exactly the vocal on this part imo.
- del - 00:39:022 (8,9) - and then add something at - 00:39:131 - ? what you did sounds a bit weird 'cause it doesn't fit what you did after at - 00:40:870 -.
- 00:48:261 - 00:52:174 - mm maybe you should try to focus more on the vocal for this part as you do on the 2 parts around. You could try to :
- move - 00:49:457 (45) - to - 00:49:566 - and add d at - 00:51:631 - ?
- 01:01:739 - c/p your kd dkdd kd dkkd here like you did at - 00:02:174 -, also del -01:05:000 (97) -.
- add d at - 01:06:739 -, change - 01:06:957 (106) - to k and move - 01:07:174 (107) - to - 01:07:392 - ? sounds cooler.
- if you applied the previous suggestion, also try to change - 01:08:696 (112) - to k and move - 01:08:913 (113) - to - 01:09:131 - ?
- in the same way, move - 01:10:653 (120) - to - 01:10:870 - and change it to k. well just like you did on the 2nd part of the kiai lol (i noticed it after).
- 01:15:435 (140,141,142) - this ddk should start at - 01:15:000 - :c. If you move it, keep a k at - 01:15:653 -.
- move - 01:21:087 (163) - to - 01:21:305 - ? if you applied the other similar suggestion.

[Nardo's Futsuu]

hey Nardo o/
good diff following the vocal as usual é_è, at least the diff is not really homogeous tho (i mean there are some part with a lot of notes and some with almost nothing, vocal irregularities).
- 00:41:305 (47,49) - swap colors ?

[Kantan]

Maybe too much notes, ill mainly suggest to remove stuff :c.
- what i said in The Oni about spinners is important for this diff i think.
- 00:34:783 (28) - del ? to keep the part calm, + this d doesn't really follow the vocal.
- 00:44:348 (14) - ^, not needed.
- 00:47:926 (20) - ^.
- 00:51:305 (26) - ^.
About the kiai, i think you should do some changes. Like chose to use only xxx patterns or something like xx xxx xx xxx etc.
For example, add something at - 01:03:913 - or del - 01:07:392 (52) -, etc.
The 2nd solution might be better 'cause then you can also:
- del - 01:21:305 (74,78) -, change - 01:22:609 (77) - to k and add d at - 01:23:044 -.
- better del - 01:26:087 (82,84) - to emphasize the 2 K and keep the thing simple.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Icing_wind wrote: 4f646

Taiko Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Nardo's Futsuu]

nardo你会讲中文的对吧，对吧。 么么哒。 看见你的图就有动力mod了

00:55:653 (82) - → https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/2215577

01:02:826 (95) - change to d

good

[Muzukashii]

00:03:913 (8,9) - delete keep

00:08:153 (23) - delete fixed

00:09:892 (31) - delete fixed

00:23:044 (18,19) - kd fixed

00:27:718 (35) - delete keep

00:44:674 (28) - delete fixed

[Oni]

00:29:239 (64) - change to d keep

01:10:000 (158) - ↑ keep

01:17:283 (198) - ↑ keep

good map
good luck~

Thank you mod

Nofool wrote: 5r1252

Hey' mod req via pm.
Im a bit late as usual ;_; sorry.

[Oni]

Not always sure if you follow the vocal or the instrumental but it plays okay so np.
- 00:13:913 - and - 01:27:392 - maybe start these spinner 1/2 earlier coul've been better, works for all diffs.
- 00:23:479 mm maybe try others pattern here instead of kkk kdkdk ? i think so something like ddk kkddk/ddk kkkdk could be a bit cooler to play and fit more then song, your kkk doesn't emphasize - 00:23:696 (34) - which sounds different/higher.
- del - 00:45:218 (43,44) - or only - 00:45:435 (44) -, to emphasize more - 00:45:653 (45) -?
- change - 01:10:870 (163) - to k and then del - 01:11:087 (164) - ? fits a bit more the song imo.

All fixed

[stu's Oni]

^ same comment,
- 00:35:218 maybe start the incoming spinner here tho ?
- 00:52:826 (54) del this, or add d at - 00:45:870 - and - 00:47:609 - ? for more consistency (first suggestion might be better).
- 01:01:305 start the kiai here ?_? the song goes high at this moment, not at - 01:00:870 -.
- 01:08:479 why nothing here but d at - 01:10:218 - :c ? maybe del that - 01:10:218 (147) - ?

[Muzukashii]

- 00:23:261 (19) - del and then add d at - 00:23:479 - ?
- 00:32:174 (53) - move to - 00:32:392 -, also del - 00:33:913 (58) - ? better follow exactly the vocal on this part imo.
- del - 00:39:022 (8,9) - and then add something at - 00:39:131 - ? what you did sounds a bit weird 'cause it doesn't fit what you did after at - 00:40:870 -.
- 00:48:261 - 00:52:174 - mm maybe you should try to focus more on the vocal for this part as you do on the 2 parts around. You could try to :
- move - 00:49:457 (45) - to - 00:49:566 - and add d at - 00:51:631 - ?
- 01:01:739 - c/p your kd dkdd kd dkkd here like you did at - 00:02:174 -, also del -01:05:000 (97) -.
- add d at - 01:06:739 -, change - 01:06:957 (106) - to k and move - 01:07:174 (107) - to - 01:07:392 - ? sounds cooler.
- if you applied the previous suggestion, also try to change - 01:08:696 (112) - to k and move - 01:08:913 (113) - to - 01:09:131 - ?
- in the same way, move - 01:10:653 (120) - to - 01:10:870 - and change it to k. well just like you did on the 2nd part of the kiai lol (i noticed it after).
- 01:15:435 (140,141,142) - this ddk should start at - 01:15:000 - :c. If you move it, keep a k at - 01:15:653 -.
- move - 01:21:087 (163) - to - 01:21:305 - ? if you applied the other similar suggestion.

Almost fixed

[Nardo's Futsuu]

hey Nardo o/
good diff following the vocal as usual é_è, at least the diff is not really homogeous tho (i mean there are some part with a lot of notes and some with almost nothing, vocal irregularities).
- 00:41:305 (47,49) - swap colors ?

[Kantan]

Maybe too much notes, ill mainly suggest to remove stuff :c.
- what i said in The Oni about spinners is important for this diff i think.
- 00:34:783 (28) - del ? to keep the part calm, + this d doesn't really follow the vocal.
- 00:44:348 (14) - ^, not needed.
- 00:47:926 (20) - ^.
- 00:51:305 (26) - ^.
About the kiai, i think you should do some changes. Like chose to use only xxx patterns or something like xx xxx xx xxx etc.
For example, add something at - 01:03:913 - or del - 01:07:392 (52) -, etc.
The 2nd solution might be better 'cause then you can also:
- del - 01:21:305 (74,78) -, change - 01:22:609 (77) - to k and add d at - 01:23:044 -.
- better del - 01:26:087 (82,84) - to emphasize the 2 K and keep the thing simple.

All fixed
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Thank you mod

Nofool wrote: 5r1252

Hey' mod req via pm.
Im a bit late as usual ;_; sorry.

[Nardo's Futsuu]

hey Nardo o/ Hey Nofool~ o/
good diff following the vocal as usual é_è, at least the diff is not really homogeous tho (i mean there are some part with a lot of notes and some with almost nothing, vocal irregularities).
- 00:41:305 (47,49) - swap colors ? Since the vocal pattern here is similar to 00:39:566 (43,44,45,46) - but with a higher pitch, I prefer using the same constellation.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Thanks for your mod~

Nofool wrote: 5r1252

Hey' mod req via pm.
Im a bit late as usual ;_; sorry.

[stu's Oni]

^ same comment,
- 00:35:218 maybe start the incoming spinner here tho ?
- 00:52:826 (54) del this, or add d at - 00:45:870 - and - 00:47:609 - ? for more consistency (first suggestion might be better).
- 01:01:305 start the kiai here ?_? the song goes high at this moment, not at - 01:00:870 -.
- 01:08:479 why nothing here but d at - 01:10:218 - :c ? maybe del that - 01:10:218 (147) - ?

Good luck'

Thanks for the mod~
Here

Hey ^^ mod from pm req. First mod after being afk for forever \o/

That's all from me. Hope it helps and Good Luck ^^

Hi~mod request by pm >w<
im so sorry~oni i =w=

H i M E wrote: e645

Hi~mod request by pm >w<

Nardo's Futsuu

00:02:609 (3) - move 00:02:826 - ? I followed the piano more in the prelude.
00:13:044 (22) - move 00:13:261 - ? Retained for mapping both the vocal and the piano.

im so sorry~oni i =w=

Thanks for your mod~

H i M E wrote: e645

Hi~mod request by pm >w<

Kantan

00:07:826 (9) - try to move 00:08:044 - ? keep
00:09:566 (11,12,13) - follow 00:07:826 (9,10) - ? fixed
01:13:479 (57) - move 01:13:261 - ? keep
01:14:348 (59) - try to del ? keep

Nardo's Futsuu

00:02:609 (3) - move 00:02:826 - ?
00:13:044 (22) - move 00:13:261 - ?

Muzukashii

01:05:218 (96,97) - ctrl+g ? fixed

stu's Oni

don't have recommendations

Oni

don't have recommendations

im so sorry~oni i =w=

Thank you mod

snowball112 wrote: 5r5p5a

Hey ^^ mod from pm req. First mod after being afk for forever \o/

Kantan

- Maybe use 1.2 sv instead of 1.4? Might look strange to have the same SV for all diffs in general.

- Delete 00:20:000 (5). Maybe delete 00:21:739 (8) as well.

- Maybe remove 00:29:131 (19) to get a longer break before the longer pattern of 00:30:000 (20,21,22,23,24)?

- Maybe change the spacing in 00:37:826 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13)? I think that it would be better to make it more similar or more spaced out that 00:45:653 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35). From 15 onwards you have the drums, and the part before feels calmer. From this, I would suggest:
- add a note at 00:36:522.
- remove 00:37:826 (2,3).
- remove 00:39:566 (5).
- remove 00:41:305 (8).

- Remove 00:56:522 (31) to put more emphasis on 00:56:087 (30) and 00:56:957 (32)?

- Maybe make it so that 00:38:696 (4) and 00:40:435 (7) are the same? The piano sound feels similar so it might be better to make these the same. Similarly, you could make 00:42:174 (10) and 00:43:913 (13) the same as well since they have a similar sound here as well. Maybe dd for 4 and 7 and kk for 10 and 13?

- 00:59:566 (36,37) dd and 01:00:435 (38) k? Might sound better. You only have vocals here, so it might be better to use fewer claps as these would not be ed by the instruments.

- Move 01:04:348 (44) to 01:03:913 (44)? There is a guitar sound here that might be good to map and it might be good to space things out a bit.

- There are strong beats in the music at 01:08:696 and 01:10:435 and 01:10:870 where you have not placed any notes. I suggest you:
- move 01:07:826 (49) to 01:07:392.
- move 01:09:566 (52) to 01:08:696.
- add a note at 01:10:435.
- move 01:11:305 (54) to 01:10:870.

- Maybe move either 01:14:783 (60) or 01:13:913 (58) to 01:13:044? It may play better this way. Moving 58 might be the better option.

- Maybe move 01:21:739 (70) to 01:21:305 (70)? Very optional though.

- Maybe add a note before the spinner at 01:26:957 (79)?

Almost fixed

Nardo's Futsuu

- I feel that you use a lot of notes in the calm part from 00:31:739 (28) to 00:45:653 (57). In my opinion you could:
- remove 00:33:261 (32)?
- move 00:35:000 (37) to 00:36:087 (38)?
- remove 00:40:218 (45)?
- remove 00:41:957 (49)?

- Maybe remove 00:46:305 (59) and 00:47:174 (62)? This part is similar to 00:52:609 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) but the latter feels stronger in my opinion, so you could contrast the two parts by leaving out two notes in the first part.

- Maybe move 00:50:653 (70) to 00:50:435 (70)? I think the piano sound feels stronger here.

- Maybe move 01:04:348 (101) to 01:03:913? I feel like the instrument sound at 01:03:913 is stronger and the vocals at 01:04:783 (102) than at 01:04:348 (101) , so it might be better to leave a space at 01:04:348 (101).

- Maybe remove 01:14:566 (126) and make 01:14:348 (125,126,127,128) kkd? There are claps in the music at 01:14:348 (125) and 01:14:783 (127) and it might be good to space things out a bit after 01:13:044 (121,122,123,124).

Muzukashii

- I feel like a note is missing at 00:07:392 (21). Maybe add one.

The part 00:08:044 (23) until the spinner 00:13:913 (1) feels a bit strange in places. I would recommend that you:
- move 00:08:261 (23) to 00:08:913 (25).
- remove 00:09:783 (29).
- move 00:10:218 (31) to 00:10:653 (32).
- remove 00:11:957 (38).
I feel these changes make the map follow the instruments better.

All fixed

That's all from me. Hope it helps and Good Luck ^^

Thank you mod

snowball112 wrote: 5r5p5a

Hey ^^ mod from pm req. First mod after being afk for forever \o/

Nardo's Futsuu

- I feel that you use a lot of notes in the calm part from 00:31:739 (28) to 00:45:653 (57). In my opinion you could:
- remove 00:33:261 (32)? I followed the vocal there.
- move 00:35:000 (37) to 00:36:087 (38)? ^
- remove 00:40:218 (45)? ^
- remove 00:41:957 (49)? ^

- Maybe remove 00:46:305 (59) and 00:47:174 (62)? This part is similar to 00:52:609 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) but the latter feels stronger in my opinion, so you could contrast the two parts by leaving out two notes in the first part. The two parts are nearly the same except the slightly increased volume in the latter part. I prefer keeping the current one for a more reasonable difficulty as Futsuu.

- Maybe move 00:50:653 (70) to 00:50:435 (70)? I think the piano sound feels stronger here. I followed the vocal there.

- Maybe move 01:04:348 (101) to 01:03:913? I feel like the instrument sound at 01:03:913 is stronger and the vocals at 01:04:783 (102) than at 01:04:348 (101) , so it might be better to leave a space at 01:04:348 (101). ^

- Maybe remove 01:14:566 (126) and make 01:14:348 (125,126,127,128) kkd? There are claps in the music at 01:14:348 (125) and 01:14:783 (127) and it might be good to space things out a bit after 01:13:044 (121,122,123,124). The current pattern could give a better impact before the 2nd part of the kiai.

That's all from me. Hope it helps and Good Luck ^^

Thanks for your mod~

Hello Charlotte! From PM mod request!

[Kantan]
Good!

[Nardo's Futsuu]
00:09:783 (15,16,17) - change to kk d
00:28:261 (21,22) - ctri + g

[Muzukashii]
00:08:044 (23,24) - move (23) to 00:08:261 and delete (24)
00:36:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change to kddk dk

[stu's Oni]
00:17:826 (1) - finish
00:45:653 (19) - ^
00:52:609 (53) - ^

[Oni]
Good!

That's all. Touhou is the best ^^

Good luck!

eeezzzeee wrote: 1j3b2g

Hello Charlotte! From PM mod request!

[Nardo's Futsuu]
00:09:783 (15,16,17) - change to kk d k dd could fit the background music in a way better.
00:28:261 (21,22) - ctri + g k d could follow the pitch of the piano nicely.

That's all. Touhou is the best ^^

Good luck!

Thanks for your mod~

eeezzzeee wrote: 1j3b2g

Hello Charlotte! From PM mod request!

[Kantan]
Good!

[Nardo's Futsuu]
00:09:783 (15,16,17) - change to kk d
00:28:261 (21,22) - ctri + g

[Muzukashii]
00:08:044 (23,24) - move (23) to 00:08:261 and delete (24) fixed
00:36:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change to kddk dk fixed

[stu's Oni]
00:17:826 (1) - finish
00:45:653 (19) - ^
00:52:609 (53) - ^

[Oni]
Good!

That's all. Touhou is the best ^^

Good luck!

Thank you mod

Hi! Mod from request!

Black is something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:49:566 (21,22) - Ctrl+g. I think it fits the music a bit better as d k d
00:53:044 (26,27) - Ctrl+g for the same reason as above and to add a little bit of variation?
01:10:435 (53) - Change to k to match vocals?

[Nardo's Futsuu]

01:13:696 (123,124) - Ctrl+g. dk kd feels a bit better to play here for me

Overall the map is pretty fun to play! Most of them are suggestions because I found it fine to play without these changes, but I think it plays a little better with them. Good luck with the rank!

Grimbow wrote: 1f296v

Hi! Mod from request!

Black is something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Nardo's Futsuu]

01:13:696 (123,124) - Ctrl+g. dk kd feels a bit better to play here for me The vocal pitch of 01:13:044 (121,123) - is the same, so I would like to keep both of them as don.

Overall the map is pretty fun to play! Most of them are suggestions because I found it fine to play without these changes, but I think it plays a little better with them. Good luck with the rank!

Thanks for your mod~

Grimbow wrote: 1f296v

Hi! Mod from request!

Black is something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:49:566 (21,22) - Ctrl+g. I think it fits the music a bit better as d k d keep
00:53:044 (26,27) - Ctrl+g for the same reason as above and to add a little bit of variation? ^
01:10:435 (53) - Change to k to match vocals? ^

[Nardo's Futsuu]

01:13:696 (123,124) - Ctrl+g. dk kd feels a bit better to play here for me

Overall the map is pretty fun to play! Most of them are suggestions because I found it fine to play without these changes, but I think it plays a little better with them. Good luck with the rank!

sorrry,no change.Thank you mod

eeezzzeee wrote: 1j3b2g

Hello Charlotte! From PM mod request!

[stu's Oni]
00:17:826 (1) - finish
00:45:653 (19) - ^
00:52:609 (53) - ^

That's all. Touhou is the best ^^

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod !!

Hi~

[Kantan]
good~

[Nardo's Futsuu]
01:17:392 - add k? (same as 01:02:392 (96,97,98,99,100) rhythm)

[Muzukashii]
00:11:522 (35) - remove? (I think that kdddk k is better than kdddkdk)

[Oni]
good~

[stu's Oni]
00:04:022 (10) - remove? (I think that the one that divide in d k is better than ddk)
00:13:913 (45) - k? (same as 00:11:957 (37,38) pattern)

good luck!

NeviltiS wrote: 5h2b1s

Hi~

[Kantan]
good~

[Nardo's Futsuu]
01:17:392 - add k? (same as 01:02:392 (96,97,98,99,100) rhythm)

[Muzukashii]
00:11:522 (35) - remove? (I think that kdddk k is better than kdddkdk) fixed

[Oni]
good~

[stu's Oni]
00:04:022 (10) - remove? (I think that the one that divide in d k is better than ddk)
00:13:913 (45) - k? (same as 00:11:957 (37,38) pattern)

good luck!

Thank you mod

NeviltiS wrote: 5h2b1s

Hi~

[Nardo's Futsuu]
01:17:392 - add k? (same as 01:02:392 (96,97,98,99,100) rhythm) Although it is a good idea, the pattern from 01:11:305 to 01:16:957 - is a bit long already, so I would prefer a longer break here.

good luck!

Thanks for your mod~

NeviltiS wrote: 5h2b1s

Hi~


[stu's Oni]
00:04:022 (10) - remove? (I think that the one that divide in d k is better than ddk)
00:13:913 (45) - k? (same as 00:11:957 (37,38) pattern)

good luck!

Thanks for the mod~

[General]
That's actually Nitori Kawashiro's theme, isn't it? I would add a background of her instead of Reimu.

[Kantan]
00:01:740 - 00:13:044 - I strongly recommend to decrease the density of this section, it's quite similar to Futsuu. Just check the pictures out how that actually is: Current Kantan part, Current Futsuu part, my suggestion how to change in Kantan
00:18:261 (2,3) - That's quite unfitting to start with these pattern imo, suggesting to remove this note, make (3) afterwards to k.
00:23:044 (8) - k k works and sounds better to learn.
00:30:000 (18,19,20,21) - that potenially could be replaced with a Drumslider to have an alternative for something streamy, up to you.
00:31:739 - 00:44:783 - This needs to be less density. That section of the song is extremely calm and really really should not be overmapped in any aspect. Remove at least 00:32:609 (23,2,3,5,6,8,9,12).
00:59:566 (35,36,37) - Please leave them out. I hear and understand you're following the vocals here but is something which is really not necessary to do in a Kantan Difficulty.
01:02:174 (40) - having a more interesting rhythm wouldn't hurt and playing x o o instead of o o o is definitely more interesting.
01:03:913 (43,44) - swap them, that fits to the actual hitsound building more.
01:08:261 (49,50,51) - What about d d K?
01:10:000 (52,53,54) - ^, it emphasize these sections well.
01:11:739 (55,56) - Finishers here maybe?
01:13:479 (57,58,59,60,61) - either d d k x K (recommend) or d d k k D, k d d d K doesn't looks imo that good at all.
01:21:739 (70) - That's an awkward place to set the note, it kinda breaks the (current) flow here. Unless you're going to change the whole Kiai this wouldn't fit how you've mapped the Kiai so far. Move it back to 01:21:305.
01:22:174 (71,72,73) and 01:23:913 (74,75,76) - Same what I suggested on 01:08:261 (49,50,51).

[Futsuu]
00:31:739 - 00:44:783 - Again, this is way too much what should be mapped. That's barely acceptable for an Oni Difficulty, but nothing below. Please remove 00:33:261 (32,34,36,37,43,45,49,51,53) for at least.
00:48:261 - 00:51:739 - I find this part is a bit too calm for the current pattern you've used for now. How ing this?: http://puu.sh/cTw9p/b9f18eb9da.jpg
01:05:218 (103) - Removing this note seems better to fit with your mapping structure here.

[Muzukashii]
00:01:740 - 00:13:696 - This section has except for one-two smaller parts the exact same pattern like your Oni Difficulty which is unacceptable. And compared to the Futsuu Difficulty this is way too much. Please add more breaks and smaller combo chains.
00:23:913 (21) - Considering to remove to split this more and having more emphasis on 00:23:479 (19,20,22,23).
00:24:783 (24,25) - Would change (24) to D and removing (25) afterwards.
00:37:174 (2,3) - Pretty bad filler which really don't contribute much into the difficulty. They should be removed.
00:39:131 (8) - ^
00:40:870 (13) - ^
00:43:696 (22) - ^
00:47:609 (36,39) - Also these just sounds like fillers which just prevents to have some ms of break time and to go into the next parts.
00:50:761 (48,49) - That really don't fit here, this looks more like to force a more difficult pattern and that isn't good to map like this.


The Oni Difficulties were fine - tho I really dislike how you've mapped from 00:31:739 - 00:44:783 but this can stay - but about Muzukashii and Kantan.. these Difficulties are unfortunately not ready to be bubbled for now. I haven't said everything which needs to be changed, only the biggest issues has been said and should be fixed. There are similar issues through both Difficulties which you're going to fix hopefully. Beside of this I strongly suggest getting more Mods for your set.

Stefan wrote: 72304b

[Futsuu]
00:31:739 - 00:44:783 - Again, this is way too much what should be mapped. That's barely acceptable for an Oni Difficulty, but nothing below. Please remove 00:33:261 (32,34,36,37,43,45,49,51,53) for at least. Deleted some notes there.
00:48:261 - 00:51:739 - I find this part is a bit too calm for the current pattern you've used for now. How ing this?: http://puu.sh/cTw9p/b9f18eb9da.jpg fixed
01:05:218 (103) - Removing this note seems better to fit with your mapping structure here. fixed

The Oni Difficulties were fine - tho I really dislike how you've mapped from 00:31:739 - 00:44:783 but this can stay - but about Muzukashii and Kantan.. these Difficulties are unfortunately not ready to be bubbled for now. I haven't said everything which needs to be changed, only the biggest issues has been said and should be fixed. There are similar issues through both Difficulties which you're going to fix hopefully. Beside of this I strongly suggest getting more Mods for your set.

Thanks for your mod Stefan~

Update: http://puu.sh/cU1O0.zip

Stefan wrote: 72304b

[General]
That's actually Nitori Kawashiro's theme, isn't it? I would add a background of her instead of Reimu. okay.BG changed

[Kantan]
00:01:740 - 00:13:044 - I strongly recommend to decrease the density of this section, it's quite similar to Futsuu. Just check the pictures out how that actually is: Current Kantan part, Current Futsuu part, my suggestion how to change in Kantan fixed
00:18:261 (2,3) - That's quite unfitting to start with these pattern imo, suggesting to remove this note, make (3) afterwards to k. fixed
00:23:044 (8) - k k works and sounds better to learn. fixed
00:30:000 (18,19,20,21) - that potenially could be replaced with a Drumslider to have an alternative for something streamy, up to you.fixed
00:31:739 - 00:44:783 - This needs to be less density. That section of the song is extremely calm and really really should not be overmapped in any aspect. Remove at least 00:32:609 (23,2,3,5,6,8,9,12). okay.changed easily
00:59:566 (35,36,37) - Please leave them out. I hear and understand you're following the vocals here but is something which is really not necessary to do in a Kantan Difficulty.fixed
01:02:174 (40) - having a more interesting rhythm wouldn't hurt and playing x o o instead of o o o is definitely more interesting.
01:03:913 (43,44) - swap them, that fits to the actual hitsound building more. fixed
01:08:261 (49,50,51) - What about d d K? fixed
01:10:000 (52,53,54) - ^, it emphasize these sections well.
01:11:739 (55,56) - Finishers here maybe? fixed
01:13:479 (57,58,59,60,61) - either d d k x K (recommend) or d d k k D, k d d d K doesn't looks imo that good at all. okay. changed d d k k D
01:21:739 (70) - That's an awkward place to set the note, it kinda breaks the (current) flow here. Unless you're going to change the whole Kiai this wouldn't fit how you've mapped the Kiai so far. Move it back to 01:21:305. fixed
01:22:174 (71,72,73) and 01:23:913 (74,75,76) - Same what I suggested on 01:08:261 (49,50,51). fixed

[Futsuu]
00:31:739 - 00:44:783 - Again, this is way too much what should be mapped. That's barely acceptable for an Oni Difficulty, but nothing below. Please remove 00:33:261 (32,34,36,37,43,45,49,51,53) for at least.
00:48:261 - 00:51:739 - I find this part is a bit too calm for the current pattern you've used for now. How ing this?: http://puu.sh/cTw9p/b9f18eb9da.jpg
01:05:218 (103) - Removing this note seems better to fit with your mapping structure here.

[Muzukashii]
00:01:740 - 00:13:696 - This section has except for one-two smaller parts the exact same pattern like your Oni Difficulty which is unacceptable. And compared to the Futsuu Difficulty this is way too much. Please add more breaks and smaller combo chains. That's right.changed easily
00:23:913 (21) - Considering to remove to split this more and having more emphasis on 00:23:479 (19,20,22,23). fixed
00:24:783 (24,25) - Would change (24) to D and removing (25) afterwards. fixed
00:37:174 (2,3) - Pretty bad filler which really don't contribute much into the difficulty. They should be removed. fixed
00:39:131 (8) - ^ ^
00:40:870 (13) - ^ ^
00:43:696 (22) - ^ ^
00:47:609 (36,39) - Also these just sounds like fillers which just prevents to have some ms of break time and to go into the next parts. fixed
00:50:761 (48,49) - That really don't fit here, this looks more like to force a more difficult pattern and that isn't good to map like this. 49 delete.


The Oni Difficulties were fine - tho I really dislike how you've mapped from 00:31:739 - 00:44:783 but this can stay - but about Muzukashii and Kantan.. these Difficulties are unfortunately not ready to be bubbled for now. I haven't said everything which needs to be changed, only the biggest issues has been said and should be fixed. There are similar issues through both Difficulties which you're going to fix hopefully. Beside of this I strongly suggest getting more Mods for your set.

Thank you mod Stefan.Kantan & Muzukashii Almost fixed

Mod Request Via PM ~

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat




Good Luck

LNP- wrote: 525f26

Mod Request Via PM ~

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat

Futsuu

> 00:28:261 (21) - d Nope, it has a higher pitch than 00:27:826 (20) -
> 00:50:000 (60) - d The current pattern is more repetitive, thus being easier imo.
> 01:13:696 (112) - k No change since it has the same vocal pitch as 01:13:044 (110) -
> 01:25:218 (142) - move to 01:25:435 - I prefer using more monochrome 1/2 in Futsuu for simplicity.

Good Luck

Thanks for your mod~

LNP- wrote: 525f26

Mod Request Via PM ~

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat

Kantan

Nice

Futsuu

> 00:28:261 (21) - d
> 00:50:000 (60) - d
> 01:13:696 (112) - k
> 01:25:218 (142) - move to 01:25:435 -

Muzukashii

> 00:08:913 (19) - d keep
> 00:13:479 (32) - d ^
> 00:31:522 (49) - d ^
> 01:22:609 (161,162) - D D & 01:24:348 (168,169) - K K ? ^

Good Luck

sorrry.no change.but Thank you mod

some small mod

stu's Oni


00:13:913 (45) - start spinner here(?)
00:24:566 (41) - add d
00:31:739 (88) - remove finisher (?)
00:41:305 (8) - probably k matches the vocal better, your choice

not bad

Request via .... PM .-.

_____________________________________________________

General:

let me guess.... Satellite in tags for Senya's fan? (besides mentioning Yuuhei satellite)

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Kantan:

Good (owo)b
_____________________________________________________

Nardo's Futsuu:

00:13:696 - a little voice ... add note (k for me XD) (?)
_____________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

01:01:196 - move to 01:00:979 and
01:01:305 - Change to K

_____________________________________________________

Oni:

00:03:479 - change to k
00:04:783 (11,12,13) - it-su-ka = ddk or dkk
00:06:522 - change to k (?)
00:09:566 - delete (?)

00:18:696 - Change to k .-.
00:20:653 - ^

(Only suggest - all whistle just for combine XD)
00:35:870 - k
00:36:305 - ^
00:36:739 - ^

(same as Oni)
01:01:196 - move to 01:00:979 and
01:01:305 - Change to K

01:14:457 - move to 01:14:239
01:15:218 - change to D

_____________________________________________________

stu's Oni:

00:07:826 - move to 00:07:609

01:00:870 - k
01:01:087 - d
01:01:522 - change to d

01:03:044 - change to k
01:10:870 - ^
01:16:739 - ^

01:20:000 - change to k
01:20:218 - change to k
01:20:435 - change to d

_____________________________________________________

and that's all .-.

xtrem3x wrote: 3x6t14

Request via .... PM .-.

_____________________________________________________

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K
_____________________________________________________

Nardo's Futsuu:

00:13:696 - a little voice ... add note (k for me XD) (?) The voice is the end of the vocal at 00:13:044 (22) - , so it'd be better to leave it blank because of the calm music as well as difficulty concern.
_____________________________________________________

and that's all .-.

Thanks for your mod~

xtrem3x wrote: 3x6t14

Request via .... PM .-.

_____________________________________________________

General:

let me guess.... Satellite in tags for Senya's fan? (besides mentioning Yuuhei satellite)

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Kantan:

Good (owo)b
_____________________________________________________

Nardo's Futsuu:

00:13:696 - a little voice ... add note (k for me XD) (?)
_____________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

01:01:196 - move to 01:00:979 and fixed
01:01:305 - Change to K fixed

_____________________________________________________

Oni:

00:03:479 - change to k fixed
00:04:783 (11,12,13) - it-su-ka = ddk or dkk okay,changed ddk
00:06:522 - change to k (?) keep
00:09:566 - delete (?) keep

00:18:696 - Change to k .-. keep
00:20:653 - ^ ^

(Only suggest - all whistle just for combine XD)
00:35:870 - k keep
00:36:305 - ^ ^
00:36:739 - ^ ^

(same as Oni)
01:01:196 - move to 01:00:979 and fixed
01:01:305 - Change to K fixed

01:14:457 - move to 01:14:239 fixed & changed k
01:15:218 - change to D keep

_____________________________________________________

stu's Oni:

00:07:826 - move to 00:07:609

01:00:870 - k
01:01:087 - d
01:01:522 - change to d

01:03:044 - change to k
01:10:870 - ^
01:16:739 - ^

01:20:000 - change to k
01:20:218 - change to k
01:20:435 - change to d

_____________________________________________________

and that's all .-.

Thank you mod

Hi~ From my queue~
Map is so good~
My mod is personal opinion..
Good Luck~

mrdumpling64 wrote: 1v1q3w

some small mod

stu's Oni


00:13:913 (45) - start spinner here(?)
00:24:566 (41) - add d
00:31:739 (88) - remove finisher (?)
00:41:305 (8) - probably k matches the vocal better, your choice

not bad

Thanks~

- Racoon - wrote: 1p634k

Hi~ From my queue~

Kantan

00:30:000(16) - Remove Finish? - I think finish sound is not correct this note. normal sound sounds good fixed

Nardo's Futsuu

00:10:218(16) - Move to 00:10:000 & k? - Same rhythm and sound as 00:08:044(12,13,14)
00:31:305(27) - k? - I feel song's tone is being up

Muzukashii

00:04:348 - Add d? - Feel empty keep

Map is so good~
My mod is personal opinion..
Good Luck~

Thank you mod

- Racoon - wrote: 1p634k

Hi~ From my queue~

Nardo's Futsuu

00:10:218(16) - Move to 00:10:000 & k? - Same rhythm and sound as 00:08:044(12,13,14) I think the vocal at 00:10:218 - is relatively louder than 00:10:000 - , so k dd would be fine imo.
00:31:305(27) - k? - I feel song's tone is being up Nope, the drum kicks are identical.

Map is so good~
My mod is personal opinion..
Good Luck~

Thanks for your mod~

xtrem3x wrote: 3x6t14

Request via .... PM .-.

_____________________________________________________

General:

let me guess.... Satellite in tags for Senya's fan? (besides mentioning Yuuhei satellite)
____________________________________________________

stu's Oni:

00:07:826 - move to 00:07:609

01:00:870 - k
01:01:087 - d
01:01:522 - change to d

01:03:044 - change to k
01:10:870 - ^
01:16:739 - ^

01:20:000 - change to k
01:20:218 - change to k
01:20:435 - change to d

_____________________________________________________

and that's all .-.

thanks~!!

sorry for late ;w;
very very busy these days.



Sorry for late again
and good luck ww

Shiki_nyan wrote: 21476y

sorry for late ;w;
very very busy these days.

kantan

um.....
I'd like to: move 00:23:913 (7) - to 00:23:696 - keep
00:24:348 (8) - change k to d fixed
00:24:783 (9) - change d to k fixed
00:27:392 (12) - move to 00:27:174 - keep
00:50:870 (17) - change d to k keep
00:51:739 (18) - ^^^ fixed
01:16:957 (55) - change to d (? keep
01:25:653 (68,69) - change to d to stress the end. keep

Nardo's futsuu

01:15:653 (118) - delete
01:19:783 (128) - move to 01:20:218 -

Muzukashii

00:50:761 (41) - move to 00:50:870 - fixed
01:10:000 (109) - I'd like to change it to d keep
01:26:957 (177) - I'd like to delete. keep

oni

00:44:457 (39) - delete? this chain is little bit long in this part I think. fixed
00:47:392 (51) - change to d 00:47:609 (52) - delete....I think this can help here sounds great than before. fixed
01:04:022 (122) - delete fixed
01:26:957 (247) -I'd like to delete. keep

Sorry for late again
and good luck ww

Thank you mod

Hi from my mod requeue






Good luck

yo~ Free modder is coming. w

Kantan and guest Futsuu ---> well mapped.




以上 enjoy and hope it be ranked~

Shiki_nyan wrote: 21476y

sorry for late ;w;
very very busy these days.

Nardo's futsuu

01:15:653 (118) - delete Nope, the note is placed because of 01:01:739 (85) -
01:19:783 (128) - move to 01:20:218 - Retained for pattern consistency as 01:05:870 (94) -

Sorry for late again
and good luck ww

Thanks for your mod~

rew0825 wrote: 1x352b

Hi from my mod requeue

[ Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:31:305 (27) - k I prefer following the identical drum beat by putting a don there.

Good luck

Thanks for your mod~

rew0825 wrote: 1x352b

Hi from my mod requeue

[ Kantan]

1. 00:05:218 (4,5) - ctrl+g　keep

[ Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:31:305 (27) - k

[ Muzukashii]

1. none

[ stu's Oni]

1. 00:11:522 (34,35,36) - kkk
2. 00:20:653 (17) - move to 00:20:761
3. 00:48:805 (37) - move to 00:48:913

[ Oni]

1. none

Good luck

Thank you mod

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote: 3o4l60

yo~ Free modder is coming. w

Kantan and guest Futsuu ---> well mapped.

Muzukashii

00:47:826 (31) - delete keep
00:51:631 (43) - move it to 00:51:848 keep
01:05:761 (90) - move it to 01:05:979 keep

guest Oni

00:07:826 (23,28) - delete? not sure.
00:55:544 (70,71) - ctrl+g
well mapped~ w

Oni

00:51:848 - add k? keep
01:17:826 (196,197,198,199,200,201) - this part is fine but not that fit the music.. if you keep i think thats fine. keep

以上 enjoy and hope it be ranked~

Thank you mod

Forum PM

Kantan

00:27:392 (12,13,14) - kkd honestly doesn't feel right, with the music here. It is more suited with kdk which is like 00:23:913 (7,8,9) - the higher pitch at 00:28:261 is really clear that it is higher than 00:27:826
00:31:739 (17,18,19,20,21) - this regulated rhythm patterns feels a little weird, this is due to the parts at 00:32:609 and 00:34:348 which just don't seem to fit with the current objects used. This is more simplified and regular pattern but 00:32:609 (18) should be k and 00:34:348 (20) should be d to be more in sync with the song

Nardo's Futsuu

00:13:696 - add a note? It's just like 01:27:174 (146)
00:35:218 (34) - that piano lower pitch is really quite clear and distinct, change to d?
00:50:435 (61) - change to d

Muzukashii

00:28:696 (36,37) - dk instead of kd, it's similar to 00:29:348 (38,39) and I feel the identical pattern is better
00:33:479 (55) - change to k, make it a direct match yet slight different pattern to the following one 00:34:131 (56,57,58,59,60)

stu's Oni

00:19:783 (11) - change to d, k seems quite off
00:28:044 (61,62,63,64) - change to kdkk, having k where the higher pitch is at 00:28:261
01:16:739 (184,185) - you usually use the whistle when the pitch is higher, except for 01:16:739 (184,185) - kd instead of dk?

Oni

00:06:087 (15) - being the highest pitch in the whole intro section of the song, d kinda makes quite a softer impact, k would have a greater effect
00:24:783 (40) - have a finish
01:11:739 (161) - ^


Good Luck

neonat wrote: 375v4a

Forum PM

Kantan

00:27:392 (12,13,14) - kkd honestly doesn't feel right, with the music here. It is more suited with kdk which is like 00:23:913 (7,8,9) - the higher pitch at 00:28:261 is really clear that it is higher than 00:27:826
00:31:739 (17,18,19,20,21) - this regulated rhythm patterns feels a little weird, this is due to the parts at 00:32:609 and 00:34:348 which just don't seem to fit with the current objects used. This is more simplified and regular pattern but 00:32:609 (18) should be k and 00:34:348 (20) should be d to be more in sync with the song

All fixed

Nardo's Futsuu

00:13:696 - add a note? It's just like 01:27:174 (146)
00:35:218 (34) - that piano lower pitch is really quite clear and distinct, change to d?
00:50:435 (61) - change to d

Muzukashii

00:28:696 (36,37) - dk instead of kd, it's similar to 00:29:348 (38,39) and I feel the identical pattern is better keep
00:33:479 (55) - change to k, make it a direct match yet slight different pattern to the following one 00:34:131 (56,57,58,59,60) fixed

stu's Oni

00:19:783 (11) - change to d, k seems quite off
00:28:044 (61,62,63,64) - change to kdkk, having k where the higher pitch is at 00:28:261
01:16:739 (184,185) - you usually use the whistle when the pitch is higher, except for 01:16:739 (184,185) - kd instead of dk?

Oni

00:06:087 (15) - being the highest pitch in the whole intro section of the song, d kinda makes quite a softer impact, k would have a greater effect fixed
00:24:783 (40) - have a finish fixed(&Kantan&Muzu)
01:11:739 (161) - ^ ^


Good Luck

Thank you mod

rew0825 wrote: 1x352b

Hi from my mod requeue

[ stu's Oni]

1. 00:11:522 (34,35,36) - kkk
2. 00:20:653 (17) - move to 00:20:761
3. 00:48:805 (37) - move to 00:48:913

Good luck

Thanks~

neonat wrote: 375v4a

Forum PM

stu's Oni

00:19:783 (11) - change to d, k seems quite off
00:28:044 (61,62,63,64) - change to kdkk, having k where the higher pitch is at 00:28:261
01:16:739 (184,185) - you usually use the whistle when the pitch is higher, except for 01:16:739 (184,185) - kd instead of dk?


Good Luck

Thanks~

Hi, mod as your request. Sorry for waiting!





Other seem fine.
Good Luck!

mintong89 wrote: 4y5840

Hi, mod as your request. Sorry for waiting!

[General]
Disable "Widescreen "? This thing isn't used at Taiko. all diff unchecked
00:17:826 - You should add a red line at here, the rhythm tick (beat stanza) changes at here. fixed

[Oni]

00:03:913 (8,9) - Should be d k at here, the piano tone at 00:04:131 (9) - here is higher than previous one.
00:07:392 (21,22) - ^ Same.
00:26:739 - => 00:27:609 - How about dkd k kdk here? First it sound more fit with song, second it has the variety pattern that fit each other! (dkd -> kdk)
00:30:435 - => 00:31:739 - The pattern at here sound didn't fit with song, try "kdkkdkd ddkdd"?
00:37:283 (3) - The song part at here sound peace and more quiet then other part, I think it's not need to put 1/4 part lol, so delete it?
00:43:261 (30) - k because there's have a high tone piano here?
01:07:392 - I think you should add a note here because there's have the ring bell sound at here.
01:15:218 - D because of cymbal?

All fixed

[stu's Oni]

00:07:392 - Add a note because there's still have piano sound at here?
00:31:739 (87) - D because of cymbal?

[Muzukashii]

00:10:653 (23) - Move this to 00:11:087 - here to make it same pattern as 00:08:261 (17,18,19,20,21) - here? fixed & changed pattern

Other seem fine.
Good Luck!

Thank you mod

neonat wrote: 375v4a

Forum PM

Nardo's Futsuu

00:13:696 - add a note? It's just like 01:27:174 (146) Nope, vocal is absent there.
00:35:218 (34) - that piano lower pitch is really quite clear and distinct, change to d? fixed
00:50:435 (61) - change to d I followed the piano there.

Good Luck

Thanks for your mod~

mintong89 wrote: 4y5840

Hi, mod as your request. Sorry for waiting!

[General]
Disable "Widescreen "? This thing isn't used at Taiko.
00:17:826 - You should add a red line at here, the rhythm tick (beat stanza) changes at here. fixed

Other seem fine.
Good Luck!

Thanks for the check mintong~

Update: http://puu.sh/d7mVO.rar

mintong89 wrote: 4y5840

Hi, mod as your request. Sorry for waiting!

[stu's Oni]

00:07:392 - Add a note because there's still have piano sound at here?
00:31:739 (87) - D because of cymbal?

Other seem fine.
Good Luck!

Thanks ~

Hi

[General]

1. i think you can reduce the volume on 00:31:739 - ~ 00:44:782 -

[ Kantan]

1. 00:32:609 (18) - actually, this note is not really need, because 00:39:565 - you didn't add note , also i think it would make the spread better
2. 00:34:348 (19) - ^also make the spread more even
3. 00:41:305 (4) - ^
4. make the spinner end on 01:33:478 - instead 01:33:369 -

[ Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:32:392 (29) - 由於這一段muzu和oni的spread不是很好,所以必須把kantan~muzu的難度降低,把這個note 刪掉吧
2. 00:42:608 - 和00:43:478 - 加個note吧然後把00:41:739 (43) - 刪掉,因為muzu在這裡note的密度有提高的情況
3. 01:33:369 - 跟kantan一樣結束點調到這裡

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:392 - ~ 00:13:696 - this part is not satisfied to me, try this to make consistency with former part
2. 00:37:609 (2) - move to 00:37:825 - would be more fit the vocal
3. 01:17:609 (141) - change to d and move to 01:17:825 - to make a consistency with 01:07:392 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) -
4. 01:33:369 - same as kantan

[ Oni]

1. 00:36:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to reduce this pattern, it sounds not good to me example
2. 00:39:021 (9,13,15,16) - remove them and change 00:39:892 (14) - to d sounds more clear to me
3. 01:33:369 - same as kantan

[ stu's Oni]

1. 00:42:825 - 這裡加個note,感覺這裡跟muzu的難度差太多了
2. 00:43:260 - ^
3. 這首做得很好=w=b

the overall is fine, but some pattern on oni should be improved especially peace part , and the diff spread on 00:31:739 - ~ 00:44:782 - is a bit uneven
Hope you can improve this set more , i will recheck if it is improved , good luck !:)

qoot8123 wrote: 213i52

Hi

[ Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:32:392 (29) - 由於這一段muzu和oni的spread不是很好,所以必須把kantan~muzu的難度降低,把這個note 刪掉吧 fixed
2. 00:42:608 - 和00:43:478 - 加個note吧然後把00:41:739 (43) - 刪掉,因為muzu在這裡note的密度有提高的情況 fixed
3. 01:33:369 - 跟kantan一樣結束點調到這裡 Done.

the overall is fine, but some pattern on oni should be improved especially peace part , and the diff spread on 00:31:739 - ~ 00:44:782 - is a bit uneven
Hope you can improve this set more , i will recheck if it is improved , good luck !:)

Thanks for your mod qoot~

Update: http://puu.sh/dcq62.rar

qoot8123 wrote: 213i52

Hi

[General]

1. i think you can reduce the volume on 00:31:739 - ~ 00:44:782 - okay.This part=(volume)80→70%

[ Kantan]

1. 00:32:609 (18) - actually, this note is not really need, because 00:39:565 - you didn't add note , also i think it would make the spread better fixed
2. 00:34:348 (19) - ^also make the spread more even fixed
3. 00:41:305 (4) - ^ fixed
4. make the spinner end on 01:33:478 - instead 01:33:369 - fixed

[ Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:32:392 (29) - 由於這一段muzu和oni的spread不是很好,所以必須把kantan~muzu的難度降低,把這個note 刪掉吧
2. 00:42:608 - 和00:43:478 - 加個note吧然後把00:41:739 (43) - 刪掉,因為muzu在這裡note的密度有提高的情況
3. 01:33:369 - 跟kantan一樣結束點調到這裡

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:392 - ~ 00:13:696 - this part is not satisfied to me, try this to make consistency with former part nice idea! fixed
2. 00:37:609 (2) - move to 00:37:825 - would be more fit the vocal fixed
3. 01:17:609 (141) - change to d and move to 01:17:825 - to make a consistency with 01:07:392 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) - fixed
4. 01:33:369 - same as kantan fixed

[ Oni]

1. 00:36:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to reduce this pattern, it sounds not good to me example good~.fixed
2. 00:39:021 (9,13,15,16) - remove them and change 00:39:892 (14) - to d sounds more clear to me okay.fixed
3. 01:33:369 - same as kantan fixed

[ stu's Oni]

1. 00:42:825 - 這裡加個note,感覺這裡跟muzu的難度差太多了
2. 00:43:260 - ^
3. 這首做得很好=w=b

the overall is fine, but some pattern on oni should be improved especially peace part , and the diff spread on 00:31:739 - ~ 00:44:782 - is a bit uneven
Hope you can improve this set more , i will recheck if it is improved , good luck !:)

Thank you mod

qoot8123 wrote: 213i52

Hi

[ stu's Oni]

1. 00:42:825 - 這裡加個note,感覺這裡跟muzu的難度差太多了
2. 00:43:260 - ^
3. 這首做得很好=w=b

the overall is fine, but some pattern on oni should be improved especially peace part , and the diff spread on 00:31:739 - ~ 00:44:782 - is a bit uneven
Hope you can improve this set more , i will recheck if it is improved , good luck !:)

感恩qt大大owo
不過我覺得 00:43:260 這邊再加 會有點多餘 所以我先只加前面 00:42:825 這裡~
感謝mod~!!!!

Mod from PM mod request by stu00608

[ Kantan]

1. 01:06:521 k

[ Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:13:044 k , 低音不明顯
2. 00:19:999 d

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:12:174 k , pitch higher than previous note
2. 00:31:521 could remove
3. 01:00:978 ^

[ stu's Oni]

1. 00:09:348 這個可以移除 , 若不移除 00:11:087 這裡應該也加上相同音符然後移除後面的音符( 00:11:305 )
2. 00:34:673 高音， k 合適
3. 01:07:282 k
4. 01:19:456 k , 這裡是低音 高音在它之後 ( 01:19:565 )

[ Oni]

1. Fine map, no comments

Good mapset , good luck for rank !

mliencheng wrote: 4g2h5m

Mod from PM mod request by stu00608

[ Kantan]

1. 01:06:521 k fixed

[ Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:13:044 k , 低音不明顯
2. 00:19:999 d

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:12:174 k , pitch higher than previous note fixed
2. 00:31:521 could remove keep
3. 01:00:978 ^ keep

[ stu's Oni]

1. 00:09:348 這個可以移除 , 若不移除 00:11:087 這裡應該也加上相同音符然後移除後面的音符( 00:11:305 )
2. 00:34:673 高音， k 合適
3. 01:07:282 k
4. 01:19:456 k , 這裡是低音 高音在它之後 ( 01:19:565 )

[ Oni]

1. Fine map, no comments

Good mapset , good luck for rank !

Thank you mod

mliencheng wrote: 4g2h5m

Mod from PM mod request by stu00608

[ Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:13:044 k , 低音不明顯 Retained for a similar hitsound pattern as 01:26:521 -
2. 00:19:999 d fixed

Good mapset , good luck for rank !

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/dEEmr.rar

mliencheng wrote: 4g2h5m

Mod from PM mod request by stu00608

[ stu's Oni]

1. 00:09:348 這個可以移除 , 若不移除 00:11:087 這裡應該也加上相同音符然後移除後面的音符( 00:11:305 )
2. 00:34:673 高音， k 合適
3. 01:07:282 k
4. 01:19:456 k , 這裡是低音 高音在它之後 ( 01:19:565 )

1. Fine map, no comments

Good mapset , good luck for rank !

感謝廉mod!

Here's my mod~ Sorry it took so long!

If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to message me anytime :3












That's all from me, good luck!

Jerry wrote: 3n3p6t

Here's my mod~ Sorry it took so long!

If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to message me anytime :3

• [General]
  There are quite a number of unsnapped notes in the mapset, please Resnap all Notes for every difficulty.
  
  
  
  The kiai times are also unsnapped, change the kiai times (green lines) positions like this :
  01:01:305 - move to 01:01:304 -
  01:27:392 - move to 01:27:391 -

• [Nardo's Futsuu]

1. Fix the unsnapped issues that I pointed out in the general tab above. fixed

That's all from me, good luck!

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/dHUKP.rar

Jerry wrote: 3n3p6t

Here's my mod~ Sorry it took so long!

If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to message me anytime :3

• [General]
  There are quite a number of unsnapped notes in the mapset, please Resnap all Notes for every difficulty.
  
  
  
  The kiai times are also unsnapped, change the kiai times (green lines) positions like this :
  01:01:305 - move to 01:01:304 - All diff fixed
  01:27:392 - move to 01:27:391 - All diff fixed

• [Kantan]

1. Fix the unsnapped issues that I pointed out in the general tab above.
   
   Nice and simple Kantan :3

• [Nardo's Futsuu]

1. Fix the unsnapped issues that I pointed out in the general tab above.

• [Muzukashii]

1. Fix the unsnapped issues that I pointed out in the general tab above.
   
   
2. 00:39:566 (6,7) - CTRL+G? Follow vocal pitch for this fixed

• [Oni]

1. Fix the unsnapped issues that I pointed out in the general tab above.
   
   
2. 00:23:044 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - This part sounds abit weird >< Try changing it to k ddk k? It makes the rhythm better :
   fixed
   
   
3. 00:29:674 - kddk here makes the rhythm sound strange, move this don to 00:30:325 -? fixed
   
   
4. 00:30:978 - Delete this note, can focus more on drum sound of music at 00:31:086 - fixed

• [stu's Oni]

1. Fix the unsnapped issues that I pointed out in the general tab above.
   
   
2. 00:11:305 (34) - Move this note to 00:11:087 - so that there is a consistency of rhythm with 00:09:348 (29) -
   
   
3. 00:27:499 - Add kat here to maintain the consistency of rhythm with 00:25:653 (46,47,48,49,50) -

That's all from me, good luck!

Thank you mod

Might mod this soon, consider this a possible placeholder.

In case I don't, I'll just pop a few tags here:

1. 幽閉サテライト (Yuuhei Satellite)
2. Mayumi Morinaga/Morinaga Mayumi (senya's name, use former for our way of Romanisation, use latter otherwise, it doesn't matter)
3. 森永真由美 (Japanese of Mayumi Morinaga)
4. Iceon
5. Kamase Tora + かませ虎 (Romanised + Japanese) (both Iceon and Kamase were part of the composition of the song)
6. Kaleidoscope (album name I assume, idk about this one)
7. 東方プロジェクト + 東方Project + Project (because technically the name of the series is Touhou Project, these are just the relevant tags for it)

no KD please.

Dainesl wrote: 714v1e

Might mod this soon, consider this a possible placeholder.

In case I don't, I'll just pop a few tags here:

1. 幽閉サテライト (Yuuhei Satellite)
2. Mayumi Morinaga/Morinaga Mayumi (senya's name, use former for our way of Romanisation, use latter otherwise, it doesn't matter)
3. 森永真由美 (Japanese of Mayumi Morinaga)
4. Iceon
5. Kamase Tora + かませ虎 (Romanised + Japanese) (both Iceon and Kamase were part of the composition of the song)
6. Kaleidoscope (album name I assume, idk about this one)
7. 東方プロジェクト + 東方Project + Project (because technically the name of the series is Touhou Project, these are just the relevant tags for it)

no KD please.

Thanks!,changed All diff tag.

Jerry wrote: 3n3p6t

• [stu's Oni]

1. Fix the unsnapped issues that I pointed out in the general tab above.
   
   
2. 00:11:305 (34) - Move this note to 00:11:087 - so that there is a consistency of rhythm with 00:09:348 (29) -
   
   
3. 00:27:499 - Add kat here to maintain the consistency of rhythm with 00:25:653 (46,47,48,49,50) -

That's all from me, good luck!

Thanks! all fixed

ming comes as requested. sorry for the lateness @.@

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Kantan]





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[ Muzukashii]





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[ stu's Oni]





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[ Oni]





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okay that's all from me. Futsuu looks nice
i'll leave it to qoot since he put a star icon in his previous mod
goodluck~

mingmichael wrote: 103v33

ming comes as requested. sorry for the lateness @.@

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

[ stu's Oni]

General

☞ okie

Notes Structure

☞ okay~

Notes

• delete 00:56:195 - and 00:57:065 - and also move 00:57:934 - to 00:58:043 - and change 00:58:043 - to be don. it doesn't need any 4-plets again because it will make the 1/1 vocal unclear on 00:56:086 - and 00:56:956 - . after you delete them, try to change those notes like this :


it would follow the instruments & vocals perfectly with the usage of doublet notes

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okay that's all from me. Futsuu looks nice
i'll leave it to qoot since he put a star icon in his previous mod
goodluck~

Thanks~
but 00:56:086 - and 00:56:956 - I think k would be better

mingmichael wrote: 103v33

ming comes as requested. sorry for the lateness @.@ npヽ(○´ｗ｀○)ﾉ

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Kantan]

General

☞ it would be better to change the volume on 00:01:740 - tobe 60% @.@ it's too loud for using 80% for the calm part there. anyway please change this for all of you difficulties all diff fixed

Notes Structure

☞ nice kantan nothing should to be mentioned here~

Notes

• it would be better to delete this one 00:25:652 - , to give a 4/1 break between 00:24:782 - and 00:26:521 - . anyway you did it too on 00:18:695 - and it's really wise usage of break there

• move 00:46:086 - to 00:46:956 - , it emphasizes the vocals perfectly on 00:46:956 - and a note there would emphasize the last vocal on 00:47:391 - perfectly too~

• move 00:49:565 - to 00:50:434 - and change those notes to be o o o, to make a mirror pattern between 00:46:521 - which is o o o (if you use my previous mod, you should do this)

• move 00:53:043 - to 00:53:912 - and change it to be kat there. it follows the vocals, like the previous mods above ^

• this note doesn't really need on 01:00:869 - . i know that you wanna to follow the vocals there or maybe you wanna to emphasize 01:01:304 - with a note on 01:00:869 - . okay, basically it's a nice idea, but not for the kantan one. try to make it simple, and it's all sounds on Kantan diffs which should be emphasized or followed by us

All fixed

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[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ OD 5 please. the current one will have a same one like Futsuu fixed

Notes Structure

☞ there are many of the usage of doublet notes (it looks like xx-xx or xxxx-xx notes) aren't managed well because actually they don't follow any particular sounds. for the example like : 00:02:174 - ~ 00:03:044 - ; 00:17:826 - ~ 00:22:608 - ; and many more. make it sense please, for the patterns. what sounds you are going to follow. well, i'll try to improve those pattern later in the Notes box

Notes

• move 00:02:392 - to 00:02:609 - . the reason has been explained in the Notes Structure box

• 00:04:566 - delete

• delete 00:18:043 - and move 00:18:478 - to 00:18:695 - , reason has been explained in the Notes Structure box

• move 00:19:782 - to 00:20:434 - and a kat on 00:20:217 -

• this one, 00:21:956 - please delete please. here, you must really consider for the usage of the breaks. you can compare with Nardo's Futsuu then. his diff has many 2/1 breaks and your Muzu just have a 1/2 break only with many notes. this will make your quality of your spread diffs worse because of this one

• 00:28:912 - delete too ^

• delete too 00:31:521 - , to give a 1/2 break after the triplet comes out before and to make a break for a new part which starts on 00:31:739 -

• delete this 00:44:130 - . it's just an additional note because there's not any vocals/instruments come out there

• wat? a 5-plet on 00:49:565 - until 00:50:434 - ? i don't get the usage of this note actually. actually it should be x-xxx pattern to follow the vocals/instruments. please delete this one 00:49:782 - and change the notes from 00:49:565 - until 00:50:434 - to be o ooo

• delete this too 00:51:086 - . nothing particular to be followed by. and also a break will be wiser there for the usage of the pattern

• again this one about the usage of the break. please delete this one 00:52:173 - , so it would have a 3/2 break there. it fits perfectly with the song too because the vocals have stropped on 00:51:956 - , and if you wanna to follow the instrument sounds on 00:52:173 - it's nice too, but consider again for the spread diff, especially the usage of the notes&breaks okay.but strange now.so more delete.

• no no, delete please 00:54:999 -

• move 01:01:956 - to 01:02:173 - , the reason has been explained in the Notes Structure box

• delete again 01:03:695 - , for the break & spread diff again

• delete 01:05:434 - . a ooo-triplet there would be nice with a break on 01:05:434 - , not a note

• delete this too 01:09:130 - , for the break again

• i think this one 01:09:999 - should be don, for the low one. how about you?

• and also a kat on 01:10:434 - imo

• no for the long patterns on 01:12:173 - until 01:15:217 - . it kills all Muzukashii players with this kind of pattern, a long 1/2 pattern with 1/4 triplets inside it. you should be wiser to decide what patterns you should use. here i have some suggestions :
delete 01:12:391 -
delete 01:14:021 - and 01:14:130 -
delete 01:15:108 - and change those five notes to be o o o o O
you will see this pattern if you follow those suggestions, from 01:11:739 - until 01:15:217 -


• delete again 01:17:825 - , for the breaks

• try to swap 01:18:043 - and 01:18:260 -

• delete this too 01:21:304 -

All fixed

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[ stu's Oni]

General

☞ okie

Notes Structure

☞ okay~

Notes

• delete 00:56:195 - and 00:57:065 - and also move 00:57:934 - to 00:58:043 - and change 00:58:043 - to be don. it doesn't need any 4-plets again because it will make the 1/1 vocal unclear on 00:56:086 - and 00:56:956 - . after you delete them, try to change those notes like this :


it would follow the instruments & vocals perfectly with the usage of doublet notes

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[ Oni]

General

☞ okie

Notes Structure

☞ okay~

Notes

• same like Muzu, move 00:02:392 - to 00:02:609 - fixed

• move 00:04:131 - to 00:04:348 - okay.but move→delete

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okay that's all from me. Futsuu looks nice
i'll leave it to qoot since he put a star icon in his previous mod
goodluck~

Thank you mod

recheck.

General :

1. 00:59:355 - unsnapped green line on kantan , muzu and oni
2. 01:00:655 - ^

Oni :

1. 00:29:131 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - this pattern could be improved to better flow like this
2. 01:14:566 (172,173,174,175) - how about try k kkd ? more fit the vocal imo

that's all from me

qoot8123 wrote: 213i52

recheck.

General :

1. 00:59:355 - unsnapped green line on kantan , muzu and oni fixed
2. 01:00:655 - ^ ^

Oni :

1. 00:29:131 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - this pattern could be improved to better flow like this fixed
2. 01:14:566 (172,173,174,175) - how about try k kkd ? more fit the vocal imo fixed

that's all from me

Thank you recheck

looks good now .

bubbled!

qoot8123 wrote: 213i52

looks good now .

bubbled!

Thank you bubble