yanlu wrote: 28522g

[Insane]

00:19:244 (1)- this spin so short maybe... It's an Insane diff, so it's not a problem at all.
00:51:922 (2)- this sooo hide with Hidden mod! And what o.o
00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5)- make them more like a star (ctrl+shift+D) Actually seems pretty good for me.
00:57:279 (2)- very hide with 00:56:208 (4)- It's fine.
00:58:779 (3)- maybe change to x256 y68? Moved around there.
make 01:01:994 (1)- stack with 01:00:065 (2)- head and 01:02:422 (2)- stack with 01:00:494 (3)- head That would ruin the pattern in some way.
I prefer 01:02:851 (3)- not stack 01:03:494 (4)- 's head Why not? It's following spacing consistency, so it's ok.
01:13:565 (6,7)- this too Why o.o
01:14:637 (2)- cuz there are same color... o.o?
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5)- make star too ;3 It is a star already xD.

[Easy]
00:39:708 (3,4)- make(4) parallel (3) Fixed.
01:01:351 (1)- dele nc Music stopped here, so I think NC fits nice.
01:00:279 (4)- nc here? Nah.
01:39:494 (1)- chage to a slider from 01:39:279- to 01:39:494- Ok.

1. 00:13:993 (1) - consider adding a finish at the beginning
2. 00:41:851 (1) - (a little nazi) don't make it touch the edge of 00:40:994 (4) - ?
3. 00:46:136 (2) - move middle point to x:180 y:68
4. 01:02:851 (2) - add whistle at the beginning (to match 01:06:279 (2) - )
5. 01:09:708 (2) - if you followed above suggestion, add whistle to the beginning here too

1. 00:16:993 (1) - move to x:180 y:184 so that the previous note curves around it more neatly
2. 00:41:851 (3) - make more symmetrical so that it will curve perfectly over 4:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   308,76,41851,2,0,P|256:56|188:80,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 01:11:208 (3) - instead of one slider, try single note..followed by a 1/1 slider
   
4. 01:16:351 (4) - same with here. (I also like the pattern here 01:19:994 (2,3) - and if you don't like what I suggested, you could follow this part instead)
5. 01:28:136 (2) - move to x:404 y:208
6. 01:37:994 (1) - why not make a vertical flip from 01:36:279 (3) - instead?
   
   I have a lot more to say about the combos, so here's a separate section of combo modding. It's all up to you really, but this is what I feel is most appropriate & consistent with the tune:
   
   SPOILER

   00:16:993 (1) - remove NC
   00:17:422 (2) - NC
   00:19:136 (1) - remove NC
   00:19:994 (1) - NC
   00:20:851 (3) - NC
   00:22:136 (1) - remove NC
   00:24:279 (5) - NC
   00:24:922 (2) - remove NC
   00:29:422 (1) - remove NC
   00:31:136 (4) - NC
   00:31:779 (1) - remove NC
   00:34:994 (3) - NC
   00:35:851 (1) - remove NC
   00:40:994 (1) - remove NC
   00:41:422 (6) - NC
   00:43:565 (1) - remove NC
   00:44:851 (7) - NC
   00:45:494 (1) - remove NC
   00:47:851 (1) - remove NC
   00:48:708 (2) - NC
   01:01:994 (2) - NC?
   01:08:208 (1) - remove NC
   01:09:279 (1) - NC
   01:10:136 (1) - remove NC
   01:12:279 (6) - NC
   01:12:708 (1) - remove NC
   01:13:994 (4) - NC
   01:14:422 (1) - remove NC
   01:15:708 (6) - NC
   01:17:422 (1) - remove NC
   01:22:136 (1) - remove NC
   01:22:565 (2) - NC
   01:24:279 (1) - remove NC
   01:25:136 (1) - NC
   01:26:851 (1) - remove NC
   01:31:565 (1) - remove NC
   01:32:851 (3) - NC
   01:34:565 (1) - remove NC
   01:36:279 (1) - NC
   01:37:994 (1) - remove NC
   01:39:279 (5) - NC
   
   i'm really sorry if you had a certain combo pattern going already don't kill me (/o\)

1. 00:32:208 (5,6) - one grid down for perfect blanket
2. 00:50:208 (1,1,1) - make these a better, equal triangle shape
3. 01:06:922 (1,2) - move both one grid to the left, it will correct spacing

1. 00:13:993 (1) - finish at beginning?
2. 00:15:493 (1) - you should just add a whistle here too
3. 00:26:851 (1) - add a whistle at the end..i hear a little something in the background but i can't explain lol
4. 00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - make neater star . and somehow, consider getting 00:56:208 (4) - to stack on 00:57:279 (2) - . it will look rly nice (:
   If you're too lazy to try it out , you can use the random star I made:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   200,324,55565,5,8,0:0:0
   142,196,55779,1,0,0:0:0
   112,336,55993,1,0,0:0:0
   220,244,56208,1,8,3:0:0
   76,256,56422,1,8,3:0:0

5. 01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could probably make a more equal star here too, like that above star. but i guess it doesn't matter haha

meiikyuu wrote: 1t524m

Easy

1. 00:13:993 (1) - consider adding a finish at the beginning Sure.
2. 00:41:851 (1) - (a little nazi) don't make it touch the edge of 00:40:994 (4) - ? Moved it a bit.
3. 00:46:136 (2) - move middle point to x:180 y:68 Ok.
4. 01:02:851 (2) - add whistle at the beginning (to match 01:06:279 (2) - ) No because that whistle on 1:06 it's following the piano sound, and there is no piano sound here.
5. 01:09:708 (2) - if you followed above suggestion, add whistle to the beginning here too ^

Insane

1. 00:13:993 (1) - finish at beginning? Sure.
2. 00:15:493 (1) - you should just add a whistle here too Same here, I'm following piano sound with whistles.
3. 00:26:851 (1) - add a whistle at the end..i hear a little something in the background but i can't explain lol Yeah I can hear it xD, added.
4. 00:55:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - make neater star . and somehow, consider getting 00:56:208 (4) - to stack on 00:57:279 (2) - . it will look rly nice (: Seems great indeed, I will use yours, thanks ^^
   If you're too lazy to try it out , you can use the random star I made:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   200,324,55565,5,8,0:0:0
   142,196,55779,1,0,0:0:0
   112,336,55993,1,0,0:0:0
   220,244,56208,1,8,3:0:0
   76,256,56422,1,8,3:0:0

5. 01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could probably make a more equal star here too, like that above star. but i guess it doesn't matter haha Improved it.

1. Solo tus dificultades tienen video, deberias añadirle tambien el video a las dificultades de Sekai

• -- Muy bien hecho

• - 00:22:136 (1) - Why the new combo here? Remove it to keep your combo pattern
  - 00:24:922 (1) - Same ^

• - 00:18:494 (1) - Why you don't start this spinner here 00:19:136 and finish here 00:20:422 if you follow the instrument
  - 01:07:994 (4) - I really prefer to see this slider like this, also I like these type of patterns
  - 01:10:351 (4,5) - Spacing here? The note (5) looks a little far from (4)
  - 01:36:279 (3) - A new combo here feels really good

• - 01:30:279 (3) - nazi* Podrias mover un poco este slider para que no haga un overlap con el slider (1)

MoodyRPG wrote: 5ay4u

General

1. Solo tus dificultades tienen video, deberias añadirle tambien el video a las dificultades de Sekai Uy, ni idea como se me paso esto, hecho.

Easy

• -- Muy bien hecho

Insane

• - 01:30:279 (3) - nazi* Podrias mover un poco este slider para que no haga un overlap con el slider (1) Si te fijas bien no llegan a tocarse, lo que se toca es el circulo que se va cerrando y después queda ahí antes que el slider desaparezca :p

Sonnyc wrote: 491l5w

Easy:

00:52:779 (2) - Try this for more blanket? Sure.

SPOILER

296,252,52779,2,0,P|256:277|216:252,1,100,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:09:708 (2) - Add Whistle at the start? No, I'm following Piano sound with Whistles.
01:16:565 (2) - ^? ^
01:25:136 (4) - Delete Whistle like 01:23:422 (2) feels better here ^

Insane:

00:25:994 (6) - Can't you make more flatter? Why? o.o, it's ok like this.
00:37:350 (3,5) - Delete Whistle, since all is too loud I like how it sounds since I'm following voice here.
00:40:565 (3,4) - Do something similar with above ^
00:47:636 (1) - I don't think this note is the one to be emphasized with Finish Music sounds like a cymbal here, so it fits.
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be better if you made a perfect pentagon I have no idea how to do it even better, but I think this is not a problem after all xD.

[Yue] wrote: 6a6c48

ToraDoraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! *--------------*
Exelente mapa Bruno! te dejo una estrella >w<

BounceBabe wrote: 5w6

General
You have too much Kiai parts! Reduce them, overall its 49 seconds, and the song has 1 mintues 45 seconds time. You also start at 00:13:993 - Delete the first section maybe? I'll try to keep them for now since fits good with the song.

Easy

Nothing here

Insane

00:15:493 (1) - Spacing, jump is too sudden and doesnt fit at this part at all Ok, changed it.
00:20:851 (1) - Remove NC Nah, fits good imo because first Kiai starts here.
00:36:494 (1) - ^ Add on next element Why? o.o
00:44:851 (4) - You cant see this circle good, move it a little I like patterns with stacked notes, and this is one of them, so I'll keep this.
01:05:208 (8) - NC, delete new combo at 01:05:422 (1) - Following vocal here, and vocal starts at 01:05:422.
01:12:065 (1,2) - These doesnt fit at all, remove the 2nd one These fit, listen the song at 25% rate and you will see.
01:18:922 (7) - Remove NC, delete next Following vocal.
01:22:351 (5) - ^ ^
00:17:208 (3) - ^ ^
01:15:494 (4) - ^ ^
01:18:922 (7) - ^ ^
01:22:351 (5) - ^ ^
01:05:208 (8) - ^ (01:12:065 (1) - Here you did that)[/color] ^, and changed combos on that 01:12 pattern.
01:24:065 (1,1,1) - Remove NC This is ok for me.
01:25:565 (1) - I suggest a half beat reserve slider, fits the vocal better than this huge slider In this case I'm following music instead vocal.
01:37:136 (4,5) - This plays odd, try to move them a little different Flows nicely imo.
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a symmetric star Improved it.

Wolf wrote: 1h5t4o

General
About the kiais, starting at 01:01:994 - you've pretty much used one after one after 2 seconds of the previous kiai. For example, you've ended one kiai at 01:13:994 - and started one at 01:15:708 - Have you tried "flashy" kiais here? I think they would fit well, but this is just me of course. Doesn't fit for me.

Easy
Nothing much I can add here. Looking solid to me.
01:00:279 (4) - Hmm not quite sure, you could've made this one to be a bit more aligned with 00:58:994 (2) - Something like this for a better looking. Improved this.
01:01:351 (1) - Don't quite like the position of this slider here due to the fact that 00:58:994 (2) - can still be seen fading. In other words, overlap doesn't look good imo. The slider that is overlapping this one is more than two seconds before, so I guess it's not a problem at all.

Insane
00:52:565 - Could've added a note here o3o Nah, no music here.
Couldn't find much stuff here as you can see. It looks pretty good to me.

ykcarrot wrote: 5a4a5f

[Insane]
00:25:994 (6) - It looks too curved in comparison with (5,7). Maybe change like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/564675 Ok.
00:31:565 (2,3) - Feels like random stacking. Convert them into a slider? Ok.
00:33:494 (2) - Spacing 1.7x ? Nah, it would feel like a random and weird jump.
01:34:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I wonder if you care about stack leniency. You can see (1,3,5,1) are stacked, which are not on the same position when you play. It looks a bit awkward, because (1,3,5,1) are not continuos notes. Try out stack leniency 4 and look at those notes, they won't be stacked and look tidier imo. Idk what to do here :c, they should see stacked..

In editor

SL 7

SL 4

01:36:708 (3,4,5) - This formation looks awkward to me. If you can't make them symmetrical, I suggest rotating. (by 120 dgrees, clockwise) Sure, seems nice. http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/564721
01:37:994 (6) - If you take suggestion above, its position should be changed like this. ^ http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/564727
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Then Ctrl+H ? ^


[Easy]
00:48:708 (1,3) - Can you make them symmetrical? I mean the curvature isn't same. Yeah it is, I'm using the same slider, but reduced it. (I did the same on 00:55:565 (1,3) -)
01:15:708 (1,2) - That encircling is too close. Moved slider.

1. I really don't like your bg ._.
   Can you choose something that doesn't make Taiga looks so... weird?

1. 00:40:994 (4,1) - I think the 4 and the 1 are not fitting together very well and it doesn't look very nice because the 4 is just a straight slider. Can you consider making a double blanket here?
   
   
   You could reflect the 3 over to keep symmetry there.
   
2. 00:48:708 (1,2,3) - Since Ykcarrot also mentioned this in his mod, can I suggest something that may be better here? Copy the 00:48:708 (1) and paste it at 00:50:208 and flip it over the y-axis. Then add a circle at 00:51:279. Shorten the 00:51:494 (1) by one tick and move it to 00:51:708. Then instead of the slider 00:52:779 (2) we could have two circles. I think the two circles play better with the vocals at that point, and I really didn't like that blanket with the 1 and 2 for some reason.
   
   
   
   
   
3. 01:04:994 (4,1) - Maybe a bit nazi, but these blankets aren't consistent with nicer blankets such as the one at 01:18:708 (4,1) or 00:44:851 (1,2). But, perhaps that was on purpose, so I won't go to much into it.

1. 00:58:351 (1) - Hm, maybe add a finish on the end of this slider to coincide with the one in the music. You have one there in the insane diff.

1. 00:47:636 (5) - Maybe add a NC here to accent this transition even stronger, and to be consistent with your hard diff and with the insane diff.

1. 00:36:279 (1) - I feel that a whistle is missing from the head here to follow your pattern and to accent the vocals on this slider.
   
   
2. 00:53:851 (1,3) - Maybe include claps on these offbeats as well as whistles because the beat is still going here even though the vocals have stopped. Cutting out offbeat clap pattern here seems strange to me.
   
   
3. 00:58:565 (1) - I think a finish on the head might fit nice here to go along with the one in the music.
   
   
4. 01:01:136 (1) - If you're going to have a rhythm like this where you have something mapped at 01:01:136 when there is no music at all, you should remove the whistle from the head of this slider because it is quite noisy. Also maybe add a finish to the repeat so that you have a finish at 01:01:351 and a clap at 01:01:565 to hit with the ones in the music just like you have in the hard diff.
   
   
5. 01:02:851 (3) - Maybe add a whistle to the head of this slider just like you have at 01:16:565 (3).
   
   
6. 01:20:851 (4) - Whistle on the head.
   
   
7. 01:22:994 (2) - Missing clap on the head according to your pattern of offbeat claps.
   
   
8. 01:35:851 (4) - Missing clap according to you pattern.

1. 00:48:279 (1) - Since your new combo patterns nearly everywhere in the map are following the vocals, maybe remove the NC from here and add it to 00:48:494 (2) because the new vocal line starts at 00:48:494. This would also be consistent with the insane.
   
   
2. 00:52:351 (2) - Maybe continue your NC spam through here? Add a NC here and one at 00:52:779 (3). It seems better to end the NC spam at the triplet.
   
   
3. 01:14:208 (2,3,4) - Spacing is a bit broken for this triplet.
   
   
4. 01:30:922 (7,8) - The blanket is a bit off here, maybe move this to (232,84) to fix.

1. 00:49:565 (5) - Maybe add a clap on the head to keep consistent with your pattern.
   
   
2. 00:53:851 (1,3) - Again I think it would be better to include the claps on these circles as well as the whistles.
   
   
3. 01:28:565 (3) - Hm maybe remove this finish here and add a whistle. This is the only diff with a finish here.
   
   
4. 01:38:851 (3) - Maybe add a whistle to the head here.
   
   
5. 01:39:279 (4) - I feel that a clap is missing from the head of this slider to hit along with the one in the music. You have one there in the normal diff.

1. 00:34:136 (4) - This slider seems a bit out of place to me in this style. Can I suggest a different placement?
   
   
   I just copied the 00:32:851 (1) and flipped it over for the 4. I also rotated the 3 a bit.
   Or maybe this:
   
   That's pretty similar to what you have I guess, I just don't like the slider you have now, it would flow better as this curved slider.
   
   
2. 00:37:994 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure I like this placement very much. Maybe try something like this:
   
   
   The sliders all closing in around the 4. Makes for a more fun flow imo.
   
   
3. 01:00:065 (2,3) - I was sort of confused that these sliders aren't following symmetry here. Maybe try this:
   
   
   The 01:00:494 (3) is stacked on the 01:01:994 (1,2). The 00:59:851 (1) is stacked on the 00:58:565 (2).

1. Seems fine.

UnitedWeSin wrote: 6t6y41

[General]

1. I really don't like your bg ._.
   Can you choose something that doesn't make Taiga looks so... weird? Weird?, lol, I like it.

[Easy]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 00:40:994 (4,1) - I think the 4 and the 1 are not fitting together very well and it doesn't look very nice because the 4 is just a straight slider. Can you consider making a double blanket here? Both ways are ok imo.
   
   
   You could reflect the 3 over to keep symmetry there.
   
2. 00:48:708 (1,2,3) - Since Ykcarrot also mentioned this in his mod, can I suggest something that may be better here? Copy the 00:48:708 (1) and paste it at 00:50:208 and flip it over the y-axis. Then add a circle at 00:51:279. Shorten the 00:51:494 (1) by one tick and move it to 00:51:708. Then instead of the slider 00:52:779 (2) we could have two circles. I think the two circles play better with the vocals at that point, and I really didn't like that blanket with the 1 and 2 for some reason. I don't want to ruin that blanket sliders pattern, and rhythm of your suggestion is the same, so I prefer to keep it as I did.
   
   
   
   
   
3. 01:04:994 (4,1) - Maybe a bit nazi, but these blankets aren't consistent with nicer blankets such as the one at 01:18:708 (4,1) or 00:44:851 (1,2). But, perhaps that was on purpose, so I won't go to much into it. Yeah, it's on purpose.

Hitsounds

1. 00:58:351 (1) - Hm, maybe add a finish on the end of this slider to coincide with the one in the music. You have one there in the insane diff. Yeah, I forget it, added.

[Insane]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 00:34:136 (4) - This slider seems a bit out of place to me in this style. Can I suggest a different placement? Sure, seems good.
   
   
   I just copied the 00:32:851 (1) and flipped it over for the 4. I also rotated the 3 a bit.
   Or maybe this:
   
   That's pretty similar to what you have I guess, I just don't like the slider you have now, it would flow better as this curved slider.
   
   
2. 00:37:994 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure I like this placement very much. Maybe try something like this: Ok, tried something like that.
   
   
   The sliders all closing in around the 4. Makes for a more fun flow imo.
   
   
3. 01:00:065 (2,3) - I was sort of confused that these sliders aren't following symmetry here. Maybe try this: Ok.
   
   
   The 01:00:494 (3) is stacked on the 01:01:994 (1,2). The 00:59:851 (1) is stacked on the 00:58:565 (2).

Hitsounds

1. Seems fine.

popner wrote: 2s73y

Just suggestions:

[Generall]
Offset +24 IMO but you'd be better to find some other timing. (I'm sure that current is fast.) Asked a BAT, and +16 would be ok, so changed it.

[Easy]
Fine! Nothing need to say about this diff.

[Insane]
00:19:244 (1) - the spinner is a little short: Although auto can achieve 2000 score, I think a longer spinner is better since the song is not fast. Maybe you can delete previous note(00:19:136 (5)) and start the spinner here. So this spinner will not cause so much difficulty: Okay, I guess seems good.

SPOILER

00:20:422 (1) - miss a NC? That's on purpose.
01:07:565 (6,7) - the vocal have a slight change at 01:07:779, so the stack here is a little weird while playing Nah, it's ok imo.
01:13:565 (4,5,1) - the jump and distance change follows stack is not so good in flow. I know you use 01:13:994 (1,3) to follow the music, but in privous part you mainly follows the vocal, so I think there should be a long slider (1/1 slider) start at 01:13:779 (1). The rhythm can be this: I think it's not a problem to follow music here instead vocal, seems good like I did.

SPOILER

For the pattern, maybe you can stack 01:14:422 (2) on head of 01:14:851 (4), like this:

SPOILER

01:15:708 (1,2) - maybe this two slider is too much curved? During test play, I found that the symmetric sliders is not so smooth. Also I changed the curve direction so (2) is different from 01:16:565 (3). Okay, did it less curved.

SPOILER

01:24:708 (2) - why not stack it under end of 01:23:208 (1), like 01:23:851 (2)? I think that is funny. No, because it would cause an overlap with the slider that comes next, and that seems bad.
01:27:494 (1) - this note is close to previous spinner end, but far from playfield center. It is generally ok, but if someone is not good at spinner, he need to stop spin in advance. this is an Insane diff, so I think good players wouldn't have any problem with this.

kg2161012 wrote: 2x5xe

Hello~

Can I make diff for Taiko Oni and Muzukashii?

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y

1. Use japanese artist : 堀江由衣 Sure, thanks.

[Insane] 3j432i

1. AR+1 is better,
   i don't understand why you use 7,that's will be hard to read some partterns. Lol, this should be 8, I have no idea what happened here xD, fixed.
2. 00:20:438 (1) - Add new combo. Done.
3. 00:32:010 (3,4) - Change same spacing likes 00:31:152 (1,2). Tried something related here, but it should be fine anyways.
4. 00:50:438 (2) - Stack on 00:48:724 (1) - start point,looks better. Ok.
5. 00:52:367 (4) - I would say stack on 00:51:724 (1) flow is better. This is already stacked there o.o
6. 01:14:652 (2) - Why not stack on 01:14:867 (3) - end point? Mistake, fixed.
7. 01:23:224 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - please don't spam new combo to here,looks confused. Ok.

[Easy] 83e4o

1. 01:27:724 - Add whistle to here,it's really fits with piano. Yeah, sounds nice.

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

you might want to use japanese title as well; it's "バニラソルト". no kds please :3