ALiCE'S EMOTiON 5f53a Mami Mami Zone‬ · forum‬

ed January 2010

2012-05-28T02:42:33+00:00

here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:19:558 (4) - it's better not to have this in easy diff..cause a little hard for noob
00:59:095 (3,4) - ^
01:10:193 (3,4) - ^(also some same parts
03:23:373 - kiai may end here.

[Normal]
00:49:384 (4) - how about end at 00:50:078 - it feels better

[Hard]
00:46:610 (1,2) - the overlap not seems well
01:54:586 (1,2) - ^

[Lunatic]
Sv seems a little low for the high ar and bpm..but whatever
00:46:610 (1,2) - a little hard to read
01:54:586 (1,2) - ^
02:19:558 (1,2) - design like this really a little ugly to see yeh
02:20:251 (3,4) - ^

Overall.Good map yeh.

val0108

1,430 posts

ed January 2010

2012-05-29T17:09:51+00:00

Image 0108

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
00:57:621 - [suggest] silence this volume?
02:05:598 - ^ same as 00:57:621 -
02:55:540 - etc.

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:40:714 (5,1) - [arc issue] It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 00:41:060 (1) - slider end.
00:46:089 (3,1) - ^ etc.
00:49:384 (4,5) - [nazi] I think you need full stack them. It's looks like a bit off
01:46:263 (1,2,3,4) - [suggest] make it square? It's just a suggest. no reason.
02:29:615 (8,9,10) - why don't you stack it? It's look awkward for me :\　They are stack when they play

thanks mod.
http://puu.sh/xwMd

OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

6,856 posts

ed March 2010

2012-06-09T12:33:36+00:00

NoHitter wrote: 2p4m21
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Concerned with these speedups: 00:57:361 (1), 02:05:338 (1), 02:55:280 (1). - No problem, that's fine how it is.
03:20:251 (1) - IMO a spinner would fit this part better. - I prefere here more slider.

spboxer3 wrote: 21lg

Ono's Taiko Oni 163s4a

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:27:361 (2,3,1,2) - kdk k? - changed

00:33:257 (3) - k? - better to follow the beat here

00:38:459 (2,3,4) - k d k ? - I changed it to "d d d x K K K" instead.

00:56:321 (1,2,3,4,1) - D K D D K? - I think this dosen't sounds that nice. To be save, I will leave it how it is since it is right to the beat.

01:01:870 (1,1,1,1) - D K K D? - I didn't followed the vocal here~

02:04:297 (1,2,3,4,1) - D K D D K / D K K D K? - Wow, the second suggestion sounds better, but I'm not sure about it, so same as before.

02:20:945 (1,1,1,1) - D K K D? - same as before

02:53:373 (3,6,9,10) - use k? ((10) use K) - If I'm doing this the coming K would lose some of his effect.

Well, didn't changed that much, yeah. But mainly because I mapped to the beat and not to the vocal. In a more "authentic" way.

UPDATE: http://puu.sh/zLt0

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,735 posts

ed November 2009

2012-06-11T13:03:48+00:00

It's EPIC !

AWESOME , can't resist !!!

take my 2 stars >w<

Good luck !! Mixagji val0108 OnosakiHito \:D/

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-06-11T13:43:34+00:00

>val san
puushのurlからDLできませんorz
たぶんアップロード失敗してるっぽい...

>OnosakiHito
thx
!

>Frost
really thanks always ;_;

Sure

4,220 posts

ed February 2009

2012-06-11T21:27:54+00:00

Why didn't you fix the problem of normal-hitclap2.wav?
Did you forgot to do full-submit?

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-06-12T04:53:05+00:00

ohh im sorry
yes I forgot to do fullsubmit orz

okay ed

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

2012-07-08T15:34:53+00:00

from #modreq

[0108]

OD+1
00:55:454 (3) - a bit too close as a jump imo

[Lunatic]

OD+1
00:14:355 (8) - not easy to tell this as a slider, not a big problem but it's up to you. (ar8 hehe
00:22:852 (3) - a bit too close to 00:23:026 (1), consider to move this up and left?
00:28:055 (1,2,3) - make 2 the first, 3 the second, 1 the third?
01:19:904 - 1 more note here and end KIAI here. (do the same to all the left your diffs plz
01:42:361 - 1 more note?
01:50:945 (2) - move farther from 1?
02:27:881 - End KIAI here, do the same in all diffs
03:20:338 - insert an ending KIAI section here (all diff

[Normal]

01:50:425 (5,6) - make them 1 slider with repeat? starting from a red line is a bit confusing for normal players
01:52:679 (1) - use repeat slider plz, just like the first slider in this stage

easy is fine and I can't mod taiko (or too lazy orz)

send me a pm when fixes done

val0108

1,430 posts

ed January 2010

2012-07-08T16:12:36+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v9

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Artist:ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Creator:Mixagji
Version:0108
Source:Touhou
Tags:val0108 OnosakiHito nomiya ayumi redalice Futatsuiwa from Sado Ten Desires mamizou Ghost Region

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315,304,68806,6,0,B|375:283|375:283|428:272|447:231|436:184,1,187.499997206032,4|2
409,124,69153,2,0,B|372:134|372:134|326:133|298:74,1,124.999998137355,8|2
197,304,69500,2,0,B|137:283|137:283|84:272|65:231|76:184,1,187.499997206032,0|2
104,124,69847,2,0,B|140:134|140:134|186:133|214:74,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,360,70193,5,0
324,252,70367,2,0,B|316:212|328:164|328:164|384:176|423:106,1,187.499997206032,2|0
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332,24,71234,1,10
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252,72,71494,1,0
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27,7,71928,2,0,B|75:23|87:63|47:111,1,124.999998137355,8|2
30,278,72274,2,0,B|6:240|38:204|38:204|78:176|50:104,1,187.499997206032,0|2
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144,352,72968,5,0
256,44,73315,1,0
368,352,73662,1,0
255,188,74008,1,6
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256,260,74269,1,2
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152,188,74702,2,0,B|155:144|155:144|151:92|83:84,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,102,75049,2,0,B|344:100|384:160|384:160|360:200,1,187.499997206032,0|2
363,196,75396,2,0,B|360:240|360:240|364:292|432:300,1,124.999998137355,8|2
448,104,75743,5,0
467,244,75916,2,0,B|505:298|483:367|433:385|371:363,1,187.499997206032,2|0
397,369,76263,1,2
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220,160,77823,2,0,B|300:152|352:172|396:236,1,187.499997206032,0|2
386,223,78170,2,0,B|431:175|431:175|443:127|403:111,1,124.999998137355,8|2
312,56,78517,5,4
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256,220,78777,1,2
256,220,78864,1,8
200,56,79037,1,8
256,352,79384,5,0
372,146,79558,2,0,B|347:155|318:160|318:160|280:124|256:136|256:136|229:125|191:161|191:161|152:160|128:131,1,249.99999627471,4|4
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484,116,90656,1,0
316,88,90829,1,0
384,256,91003,6,0,B|340:304|268:296,1,100,4|2
272,292,91263,1,2
252,276,91349,2,0,B|208:232|144:240,1,100,8|2
308,212,91696,2,0,B|324:156|304:108,1,100,0|2
24,188,92043,2,0,B|8:252|32:296,1,100,10|0
304,115,92390,6,0,B|217:108|153:148,1,150,2|2
159,143,92737,1,8
112,256,92910,1,2
240,228,93084,1,0
159,143,93257,1,2
92,60,93430,2,0,B|132:32|196:36,1,100,10|0
328,44,93777,1,0
448,124,93951,6,0,B|416:168|360:156,1,100,2|8
448,124,94297,2,0,B|496:200|488:288,1,150,2|0
489,266,94644,1,2
368,352,94818,2,0,B|480:344,1,100,10|0
404,268,95164,5,0
320,200,95338,1,0
232,296,95511,1,0
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152,160,96032,5,8
120,312,96205,1,10
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40,360,96552,6,0,B|24:300|40:244,1,100,4|2
44,236,96812,1,2
68,240,96899,2,0,B|128:240|176:200,1,100,8|2
276,312,97245,2,0,B|280:256|248:208,1,100,0|2
317,66,97592,2,0,B|301:114|237:134,1,100,2|0
53,44,97939,2,0,B|101:44|153:72|161:140,1,150,2|2
168,156,98286,1,8
232,20,98459,1,2
248,131,98633,2,0,B|276:192|328:199,1,100,0|2
380,120,98980,5,10
444,196,99153,1,0
392,280,99326,2,0,B|392:312|392:312|368:368|320:376|292:344,2,150
120,280,100020,2,0,B|120:312|120:312|144:368|192:376|220:344,2,150
256,72,100714,1,4
256,168,100887,5,0
256,168,101234,1,2
256,168,101581,5,8
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256,212,101928,1,10
429,156,102101,6,0,B|461:108|441:52,1,100,0|2
443,60,102361,1,2
443,60,102448,2,0,B|389:76|345:48,1,100,8|2
188,144,102795,2,0,B|168:192|196:252,1,100,0|2
272,108,103141,2,0,B|236:60|176:56,1,100,10|0
40,30,103488,6,0,B|80:80|80:124|64:172,1,150,2|2
40,204,103835,1,8
188,144,104008,1,2
48,304,104182,2,0,B|168:284,1,100,0|2
276,332,104529,2,0,B|152:356,1,100,10|0
136,204,104875,1,0
136,204,105049,2,0,B|256:176,1,100,2|8
352,248,105396,2,0,B|336:64,1,150,2|2
336,64,105743,1,0
244,24,105916,2,0,B|184:44|172:120,1,100,8|2
272,128,106263,5,0
432,180,106436,1,2
404,348,106610,1,0
244,296,106783,1,2
244,296,107130,5,8
364,112,107303,1,10
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316,204,107650,6,0,B|254:225|209:189,1,100,4|2
204,172,107910,1,2
176,176,107997,2,0,B|128:208|128:264,1,100,8|2
16,372,108344,2,0,B|48:336|112:336,1,100,0|2
192,72,108691,2,0,B|156:112|92:104,1,100,10|0
51,31,109037,2,0,B|103:26|155:42|205:81,1,150,2|2
232,104,109384,1,8
364,32,109558,1,2
324,176,109731,2,0,B|336:128|304:80,1,100,0|2
240,200,110078,1,10
304,276,110251,1,0
400,240,110425,6,0,B|416:288|416:288|404:340|356:372|288:352,1,200,0|10
112,144,110945,2,0,B|96:96|96:96|108:44|156:12|224:32,1,200,0|2
384,28,111465,1,8
444,88,111638,6,0,B|400:140|336:96|336:96|272:108|228:184|280:296|384:280,1,400
370,281,112679,5,8
160,340,112852,1,10
216,156,113026,1,10
240,252,113199,6,0,B|240:292|272:320,2,74.9999977648259,4|2|2
168,236,113719,2,0,B|140:196|92:196,1,74.9999977648259,0|2
32,188,114066,2,0,B|80:168|116:132|148:72,1,149.999995529652,2|0
84,36,114586,5,0
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268,108,115107,1,2
276,32,115280,1,0
276,32,115454,2,0,B|428:32,1,149.999995529652,2|2
456,184,115974,6,0,B|488:96,2,74.9999977648259,8|2|2
356,280,116494,2,0,B|392:184,1,74.9999977648259,0|2
382,209,116841,2,0,B|352:140|312:116|256:112,1,149.999995529652,2|0
264,240,117361,6,0,B|256:316|240:344|180:364,1,149.999995529652,0|2
176,244,117881,2,0,B|184:168|200:140|260:120,1,149.999995529652,0|2
176,244,118401,2,2,B|104:280,1,74.9999977648259
44,236,118748,5,4
24,164,118922,1,2
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264,72,119442,1,2
308,12,119615,2,0,B|288:64|292:136|336:184,1,149.999995529652,2|0
244,172,120136,6,0,B|257:222|232:261|188:276|188:276|174:317,1,149.999995529652,2|2
33,346,120656,2,0,B|19:295|44:256|88:241|88:241|102:200,1,149.999995529652,0|2
158,187,121176,1,8
256,192,121349,12,0,122563
256,364,122910,5,0
256,292,123083,1,2
256,224,123430,5,0
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112,192,124991,5,0
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432,140,125685,6,0,B|448:80|448:80|416:16|340:48,1,187.499997206032,4|2
342,47,126032,2,0,B|340:104|340:104|336:140|278:183,1,124.999998137355,8|2
80,140,126378,2,0,B|64:80|64:80|96:16|172:48,1,187.499997206032,0|2
170,47,126725,2,0,B|172:104|172:104|176:140|234:183,2,124.999998137355,8|2|0
132,192,127245,2,0,B|163:212|167:248|167:248|164:392,1,187.499997206032,0|2
164,367,127592,1,2
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260,348,128112,1,10
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440,324,128459,6,0,B|408:132,1,187.499997206032,4|2
305,79,128806,2,0,B|348:212,1,124.999998137355,8|2
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207,79,129500,2,0,B|164:212,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,364,129847,5,0
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256,20,130540,1,0
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432,176,130974,1,2
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164,256,131581,2,0,B|232:240|248:172,1,124.999998137355,8|2
264,296,131928,2,0,B|324:337|380:313|380:313|456:325,1,187.499997206032,0|2
424,169,132275,2,0,B|356:185|340:253,1,124.999998137355,8|2
192,344,132621,1,0
72,308,132795,2,0,B|24:224|76:124,1,187.499997206032,2|0
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160,212,133835,1,2
160,212,133922,1,2
160,212,134008,6,0,B|152:128|180:76|232:32,1,187.499997206032,4|2
220,42,134355,2,0,B|272:84|352:84,1,124.999998137355,8|2
352,172,134702,2,0,B|360:256|332:308|280:352,1,187.499997206032,4|2
291,341,135049,2,0,B|240:300|160:300,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,192,135396,5,0
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256,89,136783,6,0,B|184:36|112:64|112:64|144:96,1,187.499997206032,4|2
312,144,137130,2,0,B|360:104|436:108,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,192,137477,2,0,B|183:138|111:166|111:166|143:198,1,187.499997206032,0|2
311,246,137824,2,0,B|359:206|435:210,1,124.999998137355,8|2
428,240,138084,1,0
404,260,138170,5,0
256,292,138344,2,0,B|183:238|111:266|111:266|143:298,1,187.499997206032,2|0
136,290,138691,1,2
320,348,138864,2,0,B|368:308|444:312,1,124.999998137355,0|2
468,108,139211,1,10
440,100,139297,1,2
412,92,139384,1,2
380,84,139471,1,2
352,76,139558,6,0,B|364:280,1,187.499997206032,4|2
256,328,139904,2,0,B|288:256|288:256|284:200,1,124.999998137355,8|2
188,4,140251,2,0,B|200:208,1,187.499997206032,0|2
92,288,140597,2,0,B|124:216|124:216|120:160,1,124.999998137355,8|2
56,76,140945,5,0
456,76,141292,1,0
256,360,141638,1,0
256,8,141985,1,2
256,45,142072,1,2
256,82,142159,1,2
256,119,142245,1,2
256,160,142332,6,0,B|225:207|221:283|261:351,1,187.499997206032,4|2
429,255,142679,2,0,B|365:239|301:291,1,124.999998137355,8|2
72,372,143026,2,0,B|156:384|264:336,1,187.499997206032,0|2
173,167,143373,2,0,B|133:215|165:299,1,124.999998137355,8|2
356,352,143719,1,0
433,166,143893,6,0,B|381:90|337:66|257:54,1,187.499997206032,2|0
285,58,144240,1,2
80,40,144413,1,0
236,144,144586,2,0,B|176:96|192:16,1,124.999998137355,2|10
189,34,144847,1,2
189,34,144933,1,2
189,34,145020,1,2
189,34,145107,6,0,B|116:32|52:80|28:156,1,187.499997206032,4|2
76,192,145454,2,0,B|216:192,1,124.999998137355,8|2
322,349,145800,2,0,B|396:352|460:304|484:228,1,187.499997206032,0|2
436,192,146147,2,0,B|296:192,1,124.999998137355,0|2
216,312,146494,5,4
397,235,146667,1,2
296,68,146841,1,0
119,145,147014,1,2
119,145,147361,5,8
119,145,147534,2,0,B|132:164|132:164|104:176|104:176|120:180|120:180|104:192|104:192|132:180|132:180|88:240|92:292|120:304|136:268,1,249.99999627471,12|4
408,52,148748,5,0
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408,52,149008,1,0
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408,52,149182,1,0
408,52,149269,2,0,B|448:120|424:212,1,150,4|2
427,197,149615,2,0,B|388:144|320:164,1,100,8|2
300,306,149962,2,0,B|348:242|344:146,1,150,0|2
344,165,150309,2,0,B|293:196|245:160,1,100,8|2
44,104,150656,6,0,B|116:68|200:100,1,150,0|2
189,96,151003,2,0,B|148:136|168:200,1,100,8|2
180,288,151349,1,0
112,360,151523,1,2
252,224,151696,2,0,B|296:200|356:224,1,100,10|0
420,308,152043,6,0,B|476:284|472:224,1,100,2|2
468,204,152303,1,0
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428,144,152563,1,2
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380,124,152737,6,0,B|312:160,1,66.6666666666667
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88,72,153430,6,0,B|32:96|36:156,1,100,2|2
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104,248,154037,1,0
128,256,154124,6,0,B|196:220,1,66.6666666666667
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311,359,154471,2,0,B|291:295,1,66.6666666666667,8|0
317,224,154644,2,0,B|375:255,1,66.6666666666667,2|0
412,320,154818,6,0,B|464:272|432:212,1,100,6|2
428,208,155078,1,0
424,184,155164,1,8
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452,140,155338,2,0,B|408:128|380:104,1,50,2|0
388,104,155511,6,0,B|432:44,1,66.6666666666667
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192,120,155858,2,0,B|236:60,1,66.6666666666667,8|0
131,74,156032,2,0,B|92:128,1,66.6666666666667,2|0
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56,296,156465,1,0
65,319,156552,1,8
76,342,156638,1,0
88,364,156725,2,0,B|151:343,1,50,2|0
160,340,156899,6,0,B|196:336|232:304,1,66.6666666666667
352,340,157072,2,0,B|316:336|280:304,1,66.6666666666667,2|0
254,250,157245,2,0,B|244:232|244:232|232:192|256:152,1,100,8|2
324,212,157592,6,0,B|432:200,1,100,6|2
440,180,157852,1,0
424,160,157939,1,8
440,140,158026,1,0
424,120,158112,2,0,B|444:56,1,50,2|0
384,8,158286,6,0,B|364:68,1,50
276,132,158459,2,0,B|296:72,1,50,2|0
328,200,158633,2,0,B|312:247,1,50,8|0
220,324,158806,2,0,B|235:276,1,50,2|0
216,196,158980,6,0,B|176:164,1,50,4|0
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296,196,159674,6,0,B|336:164,1,50
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336,72,160020,2,0,B|376:104,1,50,8|0
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256,168,171465,5,0
256,240,171638,1,8
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256,32,174500,1,2
204,240,174760,1,2
256,320,174933,2,0,B|332:356|416:316,1,150,4|0
401,322,175280,6,2,B|292:272|204:272|96:328,1,300,2|0
112,319,175627,6,0,B|144:240|120:184|120:184|64:128,1,187.499997206032,4|2
152,52,175974,2,0,B|164:116|164:116|212:164,1,124.999998137355,8|2
399,319,176321,2,0,B|368:240|392:184|392:184|448:128,1,187.499997206032,0|2
360,52,176668,2,0,B|348:116|348:116|300:164,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,32,177014,1,0
256,352,177188,6,0,B|256:156,1,187.499997206032,2|2
220,132,177534,1,0
336,304,177708,1,0
164,216,177881,1,2
336,184,178055,1,10
368,156,178141,1,2
392,120,178228,1,2
388,76,178315,1,2
384,32,178401,6,0,B|308:16|248:48|248:48|264:100,1,187.499997206032,4|2
216,192,178748,2,0,B|176:64,1,124.999998137355,8|2
128,352,179095,2,0,B|204:368|264:336|264:336|248:284,1,187.499997206032,0|2
296,192,179442,2,0,B|336:320,1,124.999998137355,8|2
176,272,179789,5,0
320,92,180136,1,0
432,300,180482,1,0
120,152,180829,1,2
108,188,180916,1,2
88,220,181003,1,2
56,240,181089,1,2
20,248,181176,6,0,B|12:312|88:364|160:292,1,187.499997206032,4|2
212,216,181523,2,0,B|255:262|255:262|299:217,1,124.999998137355,8|2
492,248,181870,2,0,B|500:312|424:364|352:292,1,187.499997206032,0|2
299,217,182217,2,0,B|255:262|255:262|213:217,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,56,182563,1,0
376,240,182737,6,0,B|408:184|408:184|484:164|476:76,1,187.499997206032,2|2
400,104,183084,2,0,B|340:64|260:116,1,124.999998137355,0|0
200,268,183430,1,2
184,68,183604,1,10
136,52,183691,1,2
88,64,183777,1,2
56,100,183864,1,2
52,152,183951,6,0,B|104:204|104:204|68:264|128:328,1,187.499997206032,4|2
163,250,184297,2,0,B|200:180|141:140,1,124.999998137355,8|2
460,152,184644,2,0,B|408:204|408:204|444:264|384:328,1,187.499997206032,0|2
349,250,184991,2,0,B|312:180|371:140,1,124.999998137355,8|2
220,88,185338,5,4
292,296,185511,1,2
292,296,185598,1,0
292,296,185685,1,8
256,24,185858,1,8
388,344,186205,5,0
475,220,186378,1,6
475,182,186465,1,2
475,144,186552,1,2
475,106,186638,1,2
473,71,186725,6,0,B|424:44|424:44|436:128|364:144,1,187.499997206032,4|2
296,244,187072,2,0,B|296:108,1,124.999998137355,8|2
38,71,187419,2,0,B|88:44|88:44|76:128|148:144,1,187.499997206032,0|2
216,244,187766,2,0,B|216:108,2,124.999998137355,8|2|0
141,344,188286,6,0,B|112:268|24:268|0:360,1,187.499997206032,2|2
4,345,188633,1,2
200,292,188806,2,0,B|248:336|328:300,1,124.999998137355,0|2
504,224,189153,1,10
460,204,189240,1,2
412,196,189326,1,2
364,208,189413,1,2
316,224,189500,6,0,B|348:292|424:324|492:312,1,187.499997206032,4|2
336,152,189847,2,0,B|316:88|240:80,1,124.999998137355,8|2
84,196,190193,2,0,B|132:224|220:224|260:152,1,187.499997206032,0|2
52,120,190540,2,0,B|-12:152|8:224,1,124.999998137355,8|2
132,128,190887,5,0
256,380,191234,1,0
380,128,191581,1,0
254,262,191928,1,2
221,287,192014,1,2
181,311,192101,1,2
141,288,192188,1,2
112,260,192274,6,0,B|126:209|184:193|251:205|262:290,1,187.499997206032,4|2
100,345,192621,2,0,B|52:337|16:301|28:229,1,124.999998137355,8|2
397,266,192968,2,0,B|384:216|322:190|259:219|252:271,1,187.499997206032,0|2
412,344,193315,2,0,B|460:336|496:300|484:228,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,136,193662,1,0
176,39,193835,2,0,B|208:71|208:71|256:44|304:71|304:71|344:23,1,187.499997206032,2|2
330,38,194182,1,2
132,112,194355,1,0
380,112,194529,1,2
256,248,194702,1,10
256,248,194789,1,2
256,248,194875,1,2
256,248,194962,1,2
256,248,195049,6,0,B|196:216|196:216|148:200|100:204|64:252,1,187.499997206032,4|2
28,304,195396,2,0,B|88:340|144:288,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,248,195743,2,0,B|316:216|316:216|364:200|412:204|448:252,1,187.499997206032,0|2
484,304,196090,2,0,B|424:340|368:288,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,344,196436,5,4
256,144,196609,1,0
256,144,196696,1,0
256,144,196783,2,0,B|256:12,1,124.999998137355,8|10
256,19,197303,5,0
120,100,197477,2,0,B|80:144|108:200,1,100,4|0
128,228,197737,1,0
104,260,197823,5,4
256,248,197997,1,0
256,248,198084,1,0
256,248,198170,2,0,B|256:372,1,100,8|2
256,348,198691,5,0
428,304,198864,2,0,B|468:260|440:204,1,100,4|0
420,176,199124,1,0
444,144,199210,5,0
256,108,199384,1,0
256,108,199471,1,0
256,108,199557,2,0,B|256:-16,1,100,8|2
256,8,200078,5,0
256,192,200164,12,0,203373

おねがいしまーす

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-07-08T16:45:03+00:00

Colin Hou wrote: 1v5j56
from #modreq

[Lunatic]

OD+1 since This is the second Insane diff. It's not necessary to do it.

00:14:355 (8) - not easy to tell this as a slider, not a big problem but it's up to you. (ar8 hehe

00:22:852 (3) - a bit too close to 00:23:026 (1), consider to move this up and left? fixed

00:28:055 (1,2,3) - make 2 the first, 3 the second, 1 the third?

01:19:904 - 1 more note here and end KIAI here. (do the same to all the left your diffs plz fixed all diffs

01:42:361 - 1 more note? fixed

01:50:945 (2) - move farther from 1? fix

02:27:881 - End KIAI here, do the same in all diffs fixed all diffs

03:20:338 - insert an ending KIAI section here (all diff fixed all diffs

[Normal]

01:50:425 (5,6) - make them 1 slider with repeat? starting from a red line is a bit confusing for normal players fixed

01:52:679 (1) - use repeat slider plz, just like the first slider in this stage fixed

easy is fine and I can't mod taiko (or too lazy orz)

send me a pm when fixes done

I was surprised orz
Thank you very much for the mod!!!

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

4,456 posts

ed November 2009

2012-07-08T16:53:16+00:00

baka 0108 fon't forget to use /code next time

edit: bubbled

val0108

1,430 posts

ed January 2010

2012-07-09T05:47:11+00:00

gogo

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-30T10:59:24+00:00

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.
Too many kiai fountains at the end ><

[Easy]
00:19:558 (4) - I'm not a fan of short repeating sliders like this in Easy difficulties.
00:59:095 (3,4) - And this kind of stack is pretty difficult to read for new players. Especially with this AR. It's quite doubtful that they'll get the correct rhythm.
01:10:193 (3,4) - ^
01:12:968 (1,2) - Maybe use 2 single circles instead to give a stronger impact while still keeping it simple?
02:07:072 (3,4) - That stack thing again
02:09:847 (3,4) - Use circles? New combo like the previous chorus
02:18:170 (3,4) - Stacks
02:20:945 (1,2) - Circles?
02:29:269 - Extend break to here

02:57:014 (3,4) - Stacks
02:59:789 (3,4) - Circles. New combo
03:08:112 (3,4) - Stacks
03:10:887 (1,2) - Circles

[Normal]
02:29:269 - Extend break to here

[Hard]
01:34:991 (3,1,2,3,4) - This gets really messy with hitbursts. Think you could unclutter it a bit?
02:29:269 - Extend break to here

[Lunatic]
OD +1 at least
01:07:592 (2,3,4,5,6) - Not really liking these streams to conclude the phrase. They play awkwardly
01:18:691 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:41:581 (1,2) - Why a jump into a stack? Either stay as a stack or keep moving.
02:15:569 (4,5,6,7,8) - same stream thing. I won't bother pointing the rest out.
02:18:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern is really messy. The spacing is all over the place and the back and forth doesn't flow very well with the spacing changes.
02:29:269 - Extend break to here

02:52:332 (3) - Repeat arrow is covered by the hitburst from 02:49:991 (1) -

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-08-30T16:24:45+00:00

Garven wrote: 3w455y
[General]
Too many kiai fountains at the end >< Should I reduce it ? I like it ><

[Lunatic]
OD +1 at least 0108 is OD8. so I think OD7 is fine

others are all fixed.
thanks again!

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-30T19:26:35+00:00

[Lunatic]
OD7 feels too easy for an Insane though. :<
03:17:130 (1) - This feels extra. Maybe delete?

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-08-31T14:50:39+00:00

yeah I have noticed OD8 is more fun on this map

and I improved placement a bit. mainly in kiai time.

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

ed January 2010

2012-08-31T16:18:42+00:00

That'll do.

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-08-31T16:32:33+00:00

thx~

Yuukari-Banteki

1,534 posts

ed June 2008

2012-09-12T08:42:30+00:00

[Easy]
00:33:430 - it would be helpful to have a note here; generally, long pauses are difficult for beginning players whereas constant rhythms are easier, because they haven't yet learned how to read spacing or approach circles and rely entirely on consistent note placement to hit the notes at the correct time
00:53:893 - ^
00:54:240 - ^
00:54:586 - ^
00:59:095 - you should really start here, even if you have to fudge the map a little bit to do it. As I mentioned earlier, beginning players rely entirely on consistent note placement to hit the notes on time and its rather cruel to suddenly throw in 1.5x placement after the rest of the combo was 1x
01:10:193 - ^
01:41:407 - ^
01:52:506 - ^
02:07:072 - ^
02:18:170 - ^
02:50:425 - 02:50:771 - 02:51:118 - notes here would be really helpful for newbie players
02:57:014 - same as before
03:08:112 - ^

[Normal]
00:53:546 - 00:54:760 - it'd still be great if you could like put some map here, even a spinner
02:01:523 - 02:02:563 - ^
02:14:008 (1,2) - put claps on the last hit of these to keep up the pattern?
02:25:107 (1,2) - ^
02:50:078 - 02:51:118 - insert map here?

[Taiko]
01:15:049 (1,2) - these finishes feel out of place in the middle of the musical phrases. Finishes usually work better at the ends of phrases
03:23:199 (1,2,1) - I'm not quite sure what the last 3 notes here are supposed to achieve since they don't particularly close the song nor do they fit the music

[Hard]
00:34:471 (2) - could you space this evenly between 1 and 3?

[Lunatic]
00:44:875 (2,3) - maybe space these wider so that you don't need to jump to 1? I think it would look better
01:49:558 (3) - space this evenly between 2 and 4
01:52:852 (2,3) - as with 0:44
02:41:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - there are too many of the snap hitsound in here, it no longer sounds like it goes with the music
02:44:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[0108]
keep doin' what you do best :3 also can i have your children

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-09-12T17:11:37+00:00

Saturos-fangirl wrote: 6c1m5f
[Easy]
00:33:430 - it would be helpful to have a note here; generally, long pauses are difficult for beginning players whereas constant rhythms are easier, because they haven't yet learned how to read spacing or approach circles and rely entirely on consistent note placement to hit the notes at the correct time I don't think so. They aren't really fit music.
00:53:893 - ^
00:54:240 - ^
00:54:586 - ^
00:59:095 - you should really start here, even if you have to fudge the map a little bit to do it. As I mentioned earlier, beginning players rely entirely on consistent note placement to hit the notes on time and its rather cruel to suddenly throw in 1.5x placement after the rest of the combo was 1x fixed
01:10:193 - ^ fixed
01:41:407 - ^
01:52:506 - ^
02:07:072 - ^ fixed
02:18:170 - ^ fixed
02:50:425 - 02:50:771 - 02:51:118 - notes here would be really helpful for newbie players
02:57:014 - same as before fixed
03:08:112 - ^ fixed

[Normal]
00:53:546 - 00:54:760 - it'd still be great if you could like put some map here, even a spinner It's too hard for Normal imo
02:01:523 - 02:02:563 - ^
02:14:008 (1,2) - put claps on the last hit of these to keep up the pattern? fixed
02:25:107 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:50:078 - 02:51:118 - insert map here?

[Hard]
00:34:471 (2) - could you space this evenly between 1 and 3? I think don't need.

[Lunatic]
00:44:875 (2,3) - maybe space these wider so that you don't need to jump to 1? I think it would look better I don't think so.
01:49:558 (3) - space this evenly between 2 and 4 -.-
01:52:852 (2,3) - as with 0:44
02:41:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - there are too many of the snap hitsound in here, it no longer sounds like it goes with the music I like it orz
02:44:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

thx for mod.

OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

6,856 posts

ed March 2010

2012-09-13T14:55:27+00:00

Thank you for mod Saturos-fangirl. I used the second suggestion. FIrst one I want to keep how it is because I like it.

: http://puu.sh/14HwS

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-09-13T15:57:50+00:00

ed~

xsrsbsns

1,935 posts

ed July 2010

2012-09-13T16:33:24+00:00

broken slider on [0108] 00:13:315 (1) -

Mixagji

625 posts

ed March 2011

Topic Starter

2012-09-13T16:39:01+00:00

oh, really thanks! fixed!!

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

ed December 2010

2012-09-15T14:33:03+00:00

Checked pop map ~ did a IRC mod ~

Really Awesome ~ Rebubbled ~!

IRC Log

22:41 *Kawayi_Rika is editing (ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone)[http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/43728]
22:41 Kawayi_Rika: >< nice map
22:41 Mixagji: >< 0108!
22:42 Kawayi_Rika: 0108 style funny!
22:43 Mixagji: yeah!
22:44 Kawayi_Rika: 03:20:164 (1) -
22:44 Kawayi_Rika: this spinner
22:44 Kawayi_Rika: 03:20:251 -
22:44 Kawayi_Rika: start to here better
22:47 Kawayi_Rika: and Lunatic :
22:47 Kawayi_Rika: 00:22:852 (3) -
22:47 Kawayi_Rika: move 1 grid right
22:48 Mixagji: okay
22:48 Kawayi_Rika: wait me check other diff

22:49 Kawayi_Rika: 00:57:708 (1) -
22:49 Kawayi_Rika: make symmetry?
22:51 Mixagji: fix~
22:54 Kawayi_Rika: 01:19:037 (4) -
22:55 Kawayi_Rika: Looks not straight
22:55 Kawayi_Rika: Hard
22:56 Kawayi_Rika: 00:39:153 (1) -
22:56 Kawayi_Rika: this too
22:57 Kawayi_Rika: 01:33:604 (2,1) - make blanket
22:58 Kawayi_Rika: 01:40:020 (4,1,2) - ^
23:00 Kawayi_Rika: 02:27:881 (7) - You are forgot add finish here?
23:00 Mixagji: oh forgot ;P
23:00 Kawayi_Rika:

23:01 Kawayi_Rika: 03:05:858 (4) - not staright too
23:05 Kawayi_Rika: Normal :
23:06 Kawayi_Rika: 02:15:396 (3,4) - Try make blanket.
23:07 Kawayi_Rika: 02:45:916 (1) - move to 352.288
23:11 Kawayi_Rika: 01:53:199 -
23:11 Kawayi_Rika: Easy
23:11 Kawayi_Rika: finish?
23:12 Mixagji: -.-b
23:13 Kawayi_Rika: ok ~ that's all ~
23:14 Kawayi_Rika:

really awesome map
23:14 Mixagji: thanks!!!
23:16 Mixagji: all fixed and ed!
23:16 Kawayi_Rika: ok
23:20 Kawayi_Rika: 01:19:037 (4) - this still not staright
23:20 Kawayi_Rika: hard
23:21 Kawayi_Rika: 01:34:297 (1) - this
23:21 Kawayi_Rika: second point 224. 56
23:22 Kawayi_Rika: Normal :
23:22 Mixagji: oops
23:22 Kawayi_Rika: 02:15:396 (3) - second ponit 160.72
23:23 Kawayi_Rika: done and told me

23:25 Mixagji: done ;D
23:25 Kawayi_Rika: k
23:27 Kawayi_Rika: ok all fine now

23:27 Mixagji: yay!