~

What a beautiful mapset... I never have seen like this one.

*love this*

Mother of god, those hitsounds <333 love this

thanks guys, I'm so Inspired

Hi,mat大人

[*]From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

[*][Scorpiour's Normal]

01:15:468 - 加一个NC
01:37:622 - ^
01:49:392 - 这个把音量提高5~10%,虽然后面那个是40%,但这里40%的音量显的弱了那么一点
01:54:238 - 和后面加NC更统一些的话,这里应该加一个NC的
04:04:471 - 这个end处没和线合上

[*][Hard]

02:43:835 - 这里用S1

[*][Taiko]

目前感觉很好，但是前面几个红蓝红的don觉得有些怪。。不过可以给5分满足级别 那几个don don don

GL+sar

From mod reqs.
There is my opinion,So you don't need follow!

[General]
none
[Taiko]
01:05:430 (10) - Delete(I think not match the sound)
01:07:276 (16) - ^same matter
01:24:699 (2,3) - not so good...
01:32:084 (2,3) - ^same matter

Nice Taiko Map!!

[Normal]
02:36:007 (4) - NC?
04:04:070 (2) - NC?(because of BPM change.)

Good diff!
[Hard]
This is good diff, but I think it's like insane...
I suggest you make new Hard diff easier.

Good luck!

hibarirailwayz wrote: 263b54

From mod reqs.
There is my opinion,So you don't need follow!

[General]
none
[Taiko]
01:05:430 (10) - Delete(I think not match the sound)
01:07:276 (16) - ^same matter
01:24:699 (2,3) - not so good...
01:32:084 (2,3) - ^same matter

Nice Taiko Map!!

fixed

thanks hibarirailwayz and 12T

Hi LKs, from my queue ;33

[General]
I suggest you to convert some SB images from .png to .jpg, cuz this folder's size is 11,2 without video and.. it enough high >w<
BG end.png unused image file o.o Use it or remove and full submit
Idk but I have 64390 (-2ms) as 3rd offset and 241807 as 5th >w< you could try it and discuss with some mats/bats imho, it seems off to me >w<

[Scorpiour's Normal]
01:41:315 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for the easiest map.
01:48:699 (1) - ^ You could to extend the previous slider till here and remove 01:49:161 (2) :

01:54:238 (3) - NC for consistency with 03:21:007 (1,2,3,4) and other parts
02:46:853 (1) - This circle could to be very confusing for beginners player. I suggest you to move it further from 02:45:468 (4), using distance snap maybe.
02:54:238 (3) - Remove a repeat? So much for the easiest in my opinion D:
03:02:545 (1) - Same thing above, too soon after the spinner for the easiest diff
03:46:392 (1,2) - This NC is really useless. If you want to keep this 03:46:849 (1), remove NC here then 03:46:392 (1)
03:50:541 (3) - NC for constistency with other parts ;3
03:57:925 (3) - ^
04:04:070 (2) - Unsnapped slider's end
04:19:240 (1) - Unsnapped spinner's end

[Hard]
01:47:776 (10) - New combo
03:07:276 (3) - I don't understand this slider srsly D: I suggest you to make this rhythm, it fits better.

03:12:930 (1) - Useless NC, remove it
03:48:233 (3) - Whistle
03:50:079 (3) - ^
03:50:541 (1) - ^ on the head
03:51:464 (2) - ^
03:54:233 (1) - ^
03:56:079 (1) - ^
03:57:925 (1,3) - ^ (Why haven't you added hitsonds here DD:)
04:08:686 (5) - I think you should to add NC here to advice players about SV change
04:10:994 (1) - Whistle plz
04:13:574 (1) - ^
04:16:240 (1) - ^ on the head
04:20:930 (5) - New combo?

Oh the hard is really really awesome *-*
Good job guys, have my star here! Good luck with rank *_*

And..Awesome SB is awesome <33

Chewin wrote: 8364l

Hi LKs, from my queue ;33

[General]
I suggest you to convert some SB images from .png to .jpg, cuz this folder's size is 11,2 without video and.. it enough high >w< Checked the folder, all of the .PNG pics have some transparent area so the conversion might result in problem. About the size, it's ok to make it larger than 10M if there is SB or video
BG end.png unused image file o.o Use it or remove and full submit I'm asking sherrie to deal with the issue
Idk but I have 64390 (-2ms) as 3rd offset and 241807 as 5th >w< you could try it and discuss with some mats/bats imho, it seems off to me >w< my bad, fixed the 5th section

[Hard]
01:47:776 (10) - New combo don't want a NC switch here..to make it decent
03:07:276 (3) - I don't understand this slider srsly D: I suggest you to make this rhythm, it fits better. x.x I'll take this into consideration, I think it's fun to play

03:12:930 (1) - Useless NC, remove it yes
03:48:233 (3) - Whistle Sry, I didn't plan hitsound during this part, the outro was supposed to be plain and quiet imo
03:50:079 (3) - ^
03:50:541 (1) - ^ on the head
03:51:464 (2) - ^
03:54:233 (1) - ^
03:56:079 (1) - ^
03:57:925 (1,3) - ^ (Why haven't you added hitsonds here DD:)
04:08:686 (5) - I think you should to add NC here to advice players about SV change ok
04:10:994 (1) - Whistle plz
04:13:574 (1) - ^
04:16:240 (1) - ^ on the head
04:20:930 (5) - New combo? same reason with the first one

Oh the hard is really really awesome *-*
Good job guys, have my star here! Good luck with rank *_*

And..Awesome SB is awesome <33

Thanks chewin, useful modding

Sco: 03:59:772 (3,1) - 这两个都是repeat slider 所以都是后面略没压上

来mod啦

Hard

SCO Normal

我拿星星弥补吧。。。

hi LKs sorry late because playing ddtank @.@

Normal
CS4 idk why but its ok just give suggest to CS3

Hard
about timing
03:47:079 kiai already finished in here change the finish in 03:46:849
just that :3

Taiko
no kiai time?

你好 李 :3/

I love that song:
a) Touhou
b) Scorpiour
c) LKs

okok jk, dont be angry at me.

Im soooo like guy who licks someone's butt, I have no clue how it calls

Hitsounds/SB ♥

[moe's normal]

01:39:468 - 01:40:853 - slider (just suggestion >w>")
01:41:084 - circle

[李]

01:08:776 - 01:09:238 - slider 1 repeat
01:08:776 - finnish
01:09:007 - ^
01:16:161 - 01:16:622 - slider 1 repeat
01:16:161 - finnish
01:16:392 - ^
01:26:199 - remove
01:26:430 - ^
01:51:930 - 01:52:161 - slider
01:52:392 - 01:53:084 - streams
01:53:315 - 01:54:007 - ^

Good Luck with that sexy map o/

frans_niko wrote: 3n5k2g

Hard
about timing
03:47:079 kiai already finished in here change the finish in 03:46:849 Sure
just that :3

Ryu wrote: 343u3m

你好 李 :3/

I love that song:
a) Touhou
b) Scorpiour
c) LKs

okok jk, dont be angry at me.

Im soooo like guy who licks someone's butt, I have no clue how it calls

Hitsounds/SB ♥ :3

wow

hi~


Normal

1. 01:19:161 (2) - ...
2. 01:32:084 (3) - 尾端平滑点
3. 01:38:545 (2,3) - 对称?
4. 01:54:238 (1) - 往右一点
5. 02:01:622 (3) - 尾clap, 02:03:238 (2) - 去clap 怎么样
6. 03:22:853 (1) - 头clap, 尾whistle..?
7. 03:30:238 (5,2) - ^^

Hard

1. 01:10:853 (3) - 这里用whistle?
2. 01:17:084 (8) - 这里45%音量 好像比较好
3. 01:27:929 (3) - 这个放外面比较符合这里的意境 http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/360582
4. 01:40:392 (1) - 这里whistle? 而且这个地方好像是stream
5. 01:53:084 (5) - 这里连下去感觉好怪异 你看这样如何 http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/360583
6. 02:05:776 (2) - 稍微拉近点吧;_; http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/360585 毕竟是hard难度, 读图简单点好
7. 02:07:968 (3) - 弧度
8. ...这转盘
9. 02:19:248 - storyboard: 这花是不是小了点
10. 02:39:468 (4) - 放个s:c1的whistle 音量53%
11. 02:44:776 (2,3) - 人性呢
12. 02:47:776 有两条绿线叠着
13. 02:50:084 (2) - 滑条头加个s:c1的whistle吧
14. 02:50:430 - add note?
15. 02:59:545 (2,3,4) - 看看能不能做成这样 http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/360594
16. 03:00:815 (1) - 消了干嘛 加个n:c2的finish 音量36%左右
17. 03:11:776 (1) - 尾上clap呢
18. 03:13:161 (4) - 这个whistle其实效果不好 音量拉到70%附近如何 就这个note
19. 03:21:930 (1,2,3,4,1) - 求人性
20. 03:26:084 (7) - 目测blanke不是很好 左边靠下点
21. 03:34:276 (2) - 放中间...
22. 03:38:084 (1,2) - 就音乐来看是4个一组 这样不好打啊
23. 04:20:930 (5,6,7) - 怎么没有渐弱
24. 感觉是很美的图嗯 刚开太鼓看了下 其实比起转谱的平均质量这个不错了233

star☆

Good luck~

I didn't find anything ... The map is very good, sorry ;__;

[General]
Add kiai in taiko diff ? (taiko BG ?)
StoryBoard: Sherrie__fay B( http://puu.sh/GiaN

[Scorpiour's Normal]
[Insane][Hard]


Great stuff here, go poke Ntr some MAT's for bubble xD
Gl with rank~

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote: 3o5b3e

[General]
Add kiai in taiko diff ? (taiko BG ?) Idk
StoryBoard: Sherrie__fay B( http://puu.sh/GiaN

[Insane][Hard]

SPOILER

[notice][list]
[*]01:18:238 - rly want to mute previous slider end and add note here :<
also dont like this slider ticks and slow sliders..... muted the sliderti, turned down the volume on the end
[*]01:30:007 (4) - imo sounds better without this note I personally agree but there needs a note to connect the two sliders, changed volume
[*]01:24:699 (1) - slider tick :<
[*]01:32:084 (1) - slider tick :<
[*]01:34:738 (1,2) - NC somewhere here i guess, because changing slider speed
[*]01:42:122 (2,3) - same changing SV
[*]01:46:392 (1) - why NC o.o? Idk, fixed :3
[*]02:55:161 (1) - just curious why only last tick silent o.o
[*]03:09:930 (1) - clap ? k
[*]03:14:545 (1) - same clap as 03:13:622 (1,1) - i guess
[*]03:22:622 (2) - whistle here ? ( this stream part surrely miss whistle somewhere
About the last pattern, I just followed this, the feeling

thanks

Hello ~ LKs ~

Random check beat map ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions



That's all ~ I can't find more issue ~ nice map!

And got 1 more taiko mod after call me ><

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Hello ~ LKs ~

Random check beat map ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y

1. Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)

I forgot this, thanks for reminding

I'll you when sco finishs fixing, thanks

Thanks for your moddings ~~fixed a lot~~

and check out the newest version here

Done.

EDIT: forgot to find a taiko mod

Okay fast i think

[Taiko]
01:04:853 (8,13) - Delete this pls
01:05:084 (9) - Katsu (clap)
01:05:776 (10) - ^
01:06:930 (14) - ^
01:07:622 (15) - ^
01:08:084 (16) - ^
01:08:084 - 01:09:930 Leave a 1/2 and delete this for more fitting: 01:08:315 (1,1,1,1)
01:08:084 (16) - Katsu
01:09:930 (20) - ^
01:08:545 (17,19) - Those just let it without hitsounds beter
01:12:468 (29) - Katsu
01:14:314 (34) - ^
01:37:622 - 01:39:468 You don't need to put a 1/4 also in that is not suggested to put a finish there
01:41:315 - 01:54:699 - ^
03:20:661 (1,2) - Unusless
03:51:002 (2,4) - Katsu
03:58:848 (3,4) - ^
04:17:740 (3) - ^
04:20:501 (8,9) - ^
04:23:352 (1) - Delete, looks ugly D:

o3o

thans Kurisuchianu. fixed something

@rika also I invited lepi, I can show you the log if you want

神LKs

I guess I should hurry... I'm to lazy usually.

[Taiko]

- As I said, generally good.
- I prefer spare big notes for impressive parts, but others might think different.
- Setting kiai effect means notes in that part gets bonus score in Taiko. I usually recommend to put kiai somewhere but I won't urge, especially calm songs like this. (but still, these kind of songs also have up and down, huh?)

01:03:920 (4) - add x1.37. Not so good part to get HS jump. (Just in case, if you got to fix uninherited timing section in here to bpm 130, don't forget to remove x1.37.)
01:09:699 (1) - Big notes here does not sound that bad than I expected, but as you might know, I'm kinda strict about fitting patterns to music. I suggest normal note instead of big one but this is mere suggestion so don't need to be that serious.
01:17:083 (1) - Similar with above.
01:37:161 - Hmm, fill here might be better? There is sound, anyway. Emptying 01:37:392 instead?
01:40:392 (1) - kat might be better, considering relatively high pitch?
01:43:161 (3) - You didn't used big notes for a few measures (due to streams, I guess?) so now this big note stands out too much. Consider removing this?
01:48:699 ~ 02:16:507 - I personally think you used too many big notes in this part, cause I think this part is 'developing' or something and too many notes standing out aren't good for that. Especially for big notes located in the first beat of the 2nd measure in every 4 measures.
01:56:084 (1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - Hmm, matching rhythms with corresponding measure might be better. I mean, consider using 'o o o oo oo o o' kind of pattern like next measure?
02:16:507 (1) - We usually don't put notes too close to big notes like this. (For spinners, well there wasn't any consensus but it is usually considered as normal notes when it comes to placing big note issues.)
02:24:468 (2) - If you want to give a 'point' in piano sound, you can make this kat.
02:47:315 (1) - Similar with above.
02:53:315 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - Maybe try 'k k d d k k d d' or 'k k d d k d d k' based pattern here? Like 'k k d ddk ddd k' or something.
03:08:084 (2,1,1) - kkk might be better, kats are good to stress out some notes slightly, and this has high pitch so that is why.
03:17:315 ~ 03:45:123 - Similar with 01:48:699 ~ 02:16:507. Though since mood is more tense now I think more big notes than 01:48:699 ~ 02:16:507 is ok, but still I don't like big notes located in the first beat of the 2nd measure in every 4 measures when there isn't big note in the 1st measure. Better to cut streams to put big notes, maybe.
03:35:084 - Filling here and deleting 03:35:546 (1) might be better. (There is kinda looong sound in music and that ends in 03:35:315, so that is why.)
03:45:123 (1) - Similar with 02:16:507 (1).
04:01:618 - Hmmmmmm, this measure line ing by is ugly.You can fix this by putting fake offset with 5/4 in 239772. (This actually can be problem, removing these unnecessary measure line by adding uninherited section cause some problem due to Ranking Criteria: 'Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty'. Anyway due to this I cannot force this to you although left-over measure lines are ugly.)
04:01:807 ~ 04:23:237 - These are actual BPM change so I cannot blame someone, but too many change in speed of notes is kinda confusing. Let's limit these to one per one measure, huh? (I don't force this cause this is actual BPM change and there isn't any radical speed changes.)
　　04:03:515 - Add x1.02
　　04:20:073 - Add x1.03
　　04:20:930 - Add x1.11
　　04:22:314 - Add x1.11

Hmm, not many things to complain, mostly suggestions, as always.
If you fixed something related with timing sections following this mod, let me recheck. These kind of things can make devastating result with slight change so that is why.

[Taiko]
Don't really have much to post that hasn't been posted above, so I'll just mention some things that hasn't been yet.

01:48:699 (1) - Suggest adding kiai start here.
02:18:238 (1) - Suggest ending above kiai here.
03:17:315 (1) - Suggest adding kiai start here.
03:46:849 (1) - Suggest ending above kiai here.

Only other comment I can make is that finisher notes are used a little too frequently in slower parts for my taste, but it isn't badly done either.

Good taiko map.

thanks, taiko modders. I will go through your mods later.

rika: just hold on, I will you :3

lepidopodus wrote: 3842c

I guess I should hurry... I'm to lazy usually.

[Taiko]

- Setting kiai effect means notes in that part gets bonus score in Taiko. I usually recommend to put kiai somewhere but I won't urge, especially calm songs like this. (but still, these kind of songs also have up and down, huh?) added kiais

01:03:920 (4) - add x1.37. Not so good part to get HS jump. (Just in case, if you got to fix uninherited timing section in here to bpm 130, don't forget to remove x1.37.) ok
01:09:699 (1) - Big notes here does not sound that bad than I expected, but as you might know, I'm kinda strict about fitting patterns to music. I suggest normal note instead of big one but this is mere suggestion so don't need to be that serious. agree, removed
01:17:083 (1) - Similar with above.
01:37:161 - Hmm, fill here might be better? There is sound, anyway. Emptying 01:37:392 instead? wanna keep my design
01:40:392 (1) - kat might be better, considering relatively high pitch?k
01:43:161 (3) - You didn't used big notes for a few measures (due to streams, I guess?) so now this big note stands out too much. Consider removing this? ok
01:48:699 ~ 02:16:507 - I personally think you used too many big notes in this part, cause I think this part is 'developing' or something and too many notes standing out aren't good for that. Especially for big notes located in the first beat of the 2nd measure in every 4 measures. removed some finishs on 2nd long white ticks
01:56:084 (1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - Hmm, matching rhythms with corresponding measure might be better. I mean, consider using 'o o o oo oo o o' kind of pattern like next measure? just wanna keep my rhythm design
02:16:507 (1) - We usually don't put notes too close to big notes like this. (For spinners, well there wasn't any consensus but it is usually considered as normal notes when it comes to placing big note issues.) moved the spinner backward by 1/4
02:24:468 (2) - If you want to give a 'point' in piano sound, you can make this kat. nor really wanna. I have a imagination on creative rhythm here
02:47:315 (1) - Similar with above.
02:53:315 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - Maybe try 'k k d d k k d d' or 'k k d d k d d k' based pattern here? Like 'k k d ddk ddd k' or something.
03:08:084 (2,1,1) - kkk might be better, kats are good to stress out some notes slightly, and this has high pitch so that is why.
03:17:315 ~ 03:45:123 - Similar with 01:48:699 ~ 02:16:507. Though since mood is more tense now I think more big notes than 01:48:699 ~ 02:16:507 is ok, but still I don't like big notes located in the first beat of the 2nd measure in every 4 measures when there isn't big note in the 1st measure. Better to cut streams to put big notes, maybe. hmm, since this is the climax of the song, I think it'd be ok
03:35:084 - Filling here and deleting 03:35:546 (1) might be better. (There is kinda looong sound in music and that ends in 03:35:315, so that is why.)
03:45:123 (1) - Similar with 02:16:507 (1).
04:01:618 - Hmmmmmm, this measure line ing by is ugly.You can fix this by putting fake offset with 5/4 in 239772. (This actually can be problem, removing these unnecessary measure line by adding uninherited section cause some problem due to Ranking Criteria: 'Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty'. Anyway due to this I cannot force this to you although left-over measure lines are ugly.) actually I think they are good prompts to remind ppl there is a BPM change.
04:01:807 ~ 04:23:237 - These are actual BPM change so I cannot blame someone, but too many change in speed of notes is kinda confusing. Let's limit these to one per one measure, huh? (I don't force this cause this is actual BPM change and there isn't any radical speed changes.)
　　04:03:515 - Add x1.02
　　04:20:073 - Add x1.03
　　04:20:930 - Add x1.11
　　04:22:314 - Add x1.11 I tried, but I think as long as it's not tricky it's ok to exist. so no change

Hmm, not many things to complain, mostly suggestions, as always.
If you fixed something related with timing sections following this mod, let me recheck. These kind of things can make devastating result with slight change so that is why.

I just changed "
01:03:920 (4) - add x1.37. Not so good part to get HS jump. (Just in case, if you got to fix uninherited timing section in here to bpm 130, don't forget to remove x1.37.) ok" so I'm not sure if I should ask you for recheck

and thanks again.

OK ~ Looks better now ~

Good luck with cool rank ~

Thanks, Rika.

Hmm, so for timing change, just added x1.37, huh? Then that wouldn't be that big problem unless the note had 1ms of timing miss, but at least when I checked that there isn't any, so this should be alright.

lepidopodus wrote: 3842c

Hmm, so for timing change, just added x1.37, huh? Then that wouldn't be that big problem unless the note had 1ms of timing miss, but at least when I checked that there isn't any, so this should be alright.

Yeah I guess so. Pretty useful modding lepi, thanks for your assistance

/_\再给个星, you know

- The whole map / SB has the theme of cold colour (blue/purple) except the spinner meter. It looks better if we change it from red to like purple.
- I know the intro is worth listening but it's far tooooo long. 00:17:767 - would be a suitable position to start.

[Hard]
01:42:238 (3) - NC to notify the SV change?
02:56:776 - why there isn't a whistle here comparing with 02:55:853 - ?
nice diff, but there're some streams 03:28:392 - or jumps like 02:44:776 (2,3) - might be too hard as presented in a 2-diff mapset.

[Normal]
02:47:315 (2) - this one has similar effect to (1) so finish here

[Taiko]
01:10:622 (5) - having similar melody with previous d k k, use d k k here?
02:12:007 - + d here? sounds like you connected surrounding phrases here.
03:35:084 - in the last pharse before ddddkkkkd... you had a note here (03:20:545 - ) so add one here too

that's all.

wmfchris wrote: 1d5f1w

- The whole map / SB has the theme of cold colour (blue/purple) except the spinner meter. It looks better if we change it from red to like purple. changed the pic. Also changed spinner-clear,spinner-osu and spinner-spin to purple
- I know the intro is worth listening but it's far tooooo long. 00:17:767 - would be a suitable position to start. I've considered this but as you know so far. The SB has been made to fit the intro(relatively dark) and beside piano there is nothing else so kinda hard to map.

[Hard]
01:42:238 (3) - NC to notify the SV change? k, also added NC at 01:34:853 (1) - for same reason
02:56:776 - why there isn't a whistle here comparing with 02:55:853 - ? keep blank at the end of the measure, just like 02:58:392 (7) -
nice diff, but there're some streams 03:28:392 - or jumps like 02:44:776 (2,3) - might be too hard as presented in a 2-diff mapset. fixed the Jump. I think the streams are ok since the BPM is quite low.

[Normal]
02:47:315 (2) - this one has similar effect to (1) so finish here added for him, with lower volume

[Taiko]
01:10:622 (5) - having similar melody with previous d k k, use d k k here? ok
02:12:007 - + d here? sounds like you connected surrounding phrases here. ok
03:35:084 - in the last pharse before ddddkkkkd... you had a note here (03:20:545 - ) so add one here too ok

that's all.

thanks

bubble restored, good luck with yr rank!

after conaideration I think the spread is not solid as wmf said. will add another diff later. no more modding atm, thanks

Let me know when it's ready for modding then. Setting icon to popped for now.

Alrighty then.

[General]
Timing is pretty bad, but as discussed in IRC you'll be tightening it up. Don't forget about all those unsnapped slider ends and stuff.
Consider using a light grey sliderborder color to go with the hitcircle overlay? Looks kind of weird otherwise due to all the transparency

Tick rate 2 fits this song best.

[Normal]
01:49:392 (1) - A little soon after a spinner for a Normal. Kind of borderline on this one.
02:10:853 (1) - This one, not so much. Way too soon after a spinner.
02:10:853 (1) - ^
02:16:392 (1) - Why not just extend this to 02:18:238 - ?
02:35:776 (3,4) - Hm, think you could try something different here? This is kind of a lower-level Normal difficulty, and stacking 1/2 onto a 1/2 slider might be a little difficult to read well, then following up after that short slider into another hit object 1/2 away.
02:43:161 (2,3) - Same thing here
02:45:468 (4,1) - I wouldn't mind this spacing as much if the 1 wasn't on the screen when the 4 slider was finished. As it is, it feels way too close.
03:02:545 (1) - Too soon after a spinner
03:09:007 (3,4) - You know, you could just simplify rhythms instead of trying to hit every note. This -is- a Normal, after all. Try to reduce your 1/2 rhythm usage a little.
04:02:625 (1) - Again, a little soon after a spinner. At least move this closer to the center to aid in recovery.

[Hard]
There's a lot of completely silent hit objects here. Add some audible sounds to them please.
Check for consistent use of sliderslides too.
01:01:836 (1,2) - I kind of had a hard time telling this was a slider -> circle at first glance.
01:56:776 (2,1) - Veeeery tiny overlap here. Think you can move it slightly away?
02:36:699 (4,8,3) - Add finish?
02:40:392 (4,3) - Add finish
02:43:622 (2,2,4) - Add finish?
03:24:238 (4) - This stacked note feels like it kills all that momentum you had with the rest of the chorus.
03:28:392 (1) - Another flow-killing stack
03:32:084 (1) - It'd be cool if you started adding more of the custom hitsound usage here to help accentuate the SB and the final round of the chorus.

[Insane]
There are occasional completely silent notes scattered about this difficulty too.
01:33:930 (1) - This slow slider intentional? It doesn't feel right considering you go right to full speed here 01:35:776 (1) -
01:41:315 (1) - Another awkward slow slider transition compared with 01:43:161 (1) -
02:56:776 - Missing a SB hitsound?
03:13:622 (1,1,1) - New combo spaaaaam
03:38:084 (1,2) - These play awkwardly. Usually sliders in streams work best in multiples of 2, not 3.
03:44:084 (2,1) - After those two grandly spaced sliders, I was expecting the pattern afterward to be a bit further away than this.

[Taiko]
The beginning feels way too dense note-wise. Hold back a bit. It feels like you're driving a bulldozer through the calm forest.
The ending feels like you're beating the drums unnecessarily as well considering the instrumentation. Maybe considering starting the map later and ending it early?

Garven wrote: 3w455y

Alrighty then.

[General]
Timing is pretty bad, but as discussed in IRC you'll be tightening it up. Don't forget about all those unsnapped slider ends and stuff.

yes timing. I adjusted the following 5 red sections. Due to there are too many sections I can't their old code/position on the time line

90 253590
72 259220
80 257723 (this was added after the last update)
93 251000
105 241783


Consider using a light grey sliderborder color to go with the hitcircle overlay? Looks kind of weird otherwise due to all the transparency
changed to 221,221,221
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. not going to change, slidertick sound is not very fitting imo so too many of them would be confusing to me


[Insane]
There are occasional completely silent notes scattered about this difficulty too. fixed 02:50:545 (3) - if there are still silent notes just tell me.
01:33:930 (1) - This slow slider intentional? It doesn't feel right considering you go right to full speed here 01:35:776 (1) - actually this one is designed to match with this one 01:41:315 (1) - . but there have been some ppl disapprove them I returned to SV1.0. (but it becames very very bad looking
01:41:315 (1) - Another awkward slow slider transition compared with 01:43:161 (1) -
02:56:776 - Missing a SB hitsound? it is sliderslide sound. I kept it blank here
03:13:622 (1,1,1) - New combo spaaaaam you really dislike this? cause 03:15:468 (1) - this should be NCed for the SV change and if I use 1,2,1 mode it looks pretty bad
03:38:084 (1,2) - These play awkwardly. Usually sliders in streams work best in multiples of 2, not 3. listen to the song here. it has a curve like this on its pitch so I chose repeat slider instead
03:44:084 (2,1) - After those two grandly spaced sliders, I was expecting the pattern afterward to be a bit further away than this. /me cries it's too hard to make the spacing evenly I tried my best and it's 1.24:1 now

fixed silent notes and inconsistency of sliderslide in hard
removed outro part of taiko

Garven wrote: 3w455y

[Normal]
01:49:392 (1) - A little soon after a spinner for a Normal. Kind of borderline on this one. sorry no change for the slider is really easy to fine, Maybe i can increase AR by 1?
02:10:853 (1) - This one, not so much. Way too soon after a spinner. change here
02:10:853 (1) - ^ .....
02:16:392 (1) - Why not just extend this to 02:18:238 - ? 02:17:776 - here is the end of soprano which my spinner follows
02:35:776 (3,4) - Hm, think you could try something different here? This is kind of a lower-level Normal difficulty, and stacking 1/2 onto a 1/2 slider might be a little difficult to read well, then following up after that short slider into another hit object 1/2 away. remake the whole pattern here
02:43:161 (2,3) - Same thing here the beat here is really hard to cope with...remake it
02:45:468 (4,1) - I wouldn't mind this spacing as much if the 1 wasn't on the screen when the 4 slider was finished. As it is, it feels way too close. i think it really doesn't matter...
03:02:545 (1) - Too soon after a spinner adjust here~
03:09:007 (3,4) - You know, you could just simplify rhythms instead of trying to hit every note. This -is- a Normal, after all. Try to reduce your 1/2 rhythm usage a little. i know~ but i suppose it's fitness because 03:08:084 (1,2) - is 1/1 beats, and here comes a little change, and then back to 1/1 slider, always the soprano.
04:02:625 (1) - Again, a little soon after a spinner. At least move this closer to the center to aid in recovery. alright, i forget what i did it before since i try to remake these placement, imo, these sliders after spinner are really fine because they're sliders which are easy to click even though the player is a newbie. Anyway, i put two notes here to instead. Actually, to myself, i'd like to choose shorter spinners for soprano but considered the diff, i make these spinners longer, which means i should ballance the beats following.

thank you very much for your modding ~~

check out here please~

updated sco's diff

adjusted bg end.png codes to let it appears faster

Garven wrote: 3w455y

[Hard]

01:01:836 (1,2) - I kind of had a hard time telling this was a slider -> circle at first glance. = =you must forgot to mention the approach circle. enlarged spacing to make it more clear
01:56:776 (2,1) - Veeeery tiny overlap here. Think you can move it slightly away? fixed
02:36:699 (4,8,3) - Add finish? no sry. don't want too many finishs..
02:40:392 (4,3) - Add finish
02:43:622 (2,2,4) - Add finish?
03:24:238 (4) - This stacked note feels like it kills all that momentum you had with the rest of the chorus. damn it momentum;w; I tried to make the spacing looks the best
03:28:392 (1) - Another flow-killing stack this one is fine imo. stack doesn't mean flow-killing all the time. the pentagon plays good even after a "sudden" brake
03:32:084 (1) - It'd be cool if you started adding more of the custom hitsound usage here to help accentuate the SB and the final round of the chorus. added one missing whistle. sry again there are too many custom hitsounds even it's me I have totally forgotten what hitsound is fitting during this final chorus

fixed for kiiwa

[Normal]
Just replies and commentary here:
Increasing AR would just make it harder. =P
And it is possible follow the melody without hitting every single rhythm. As I said - think simplification.
The post-spinner notes are not about what you can see while you're spinning. It's about this being the easiest difficulty. Even if it's a Normal, new people are going to play it. In general they spin with reckless abandon to get as many points as possible. They need lots of time to re-aim their cursor, and this is why I push for more time after spinners.

[Kiiwa]
02:40:392 (4) - Compare to 02:33:007 (4) - is why I suggested to add a finish
I don't think the SB change was added to this difficulty.

Garven wrote: 3w455y

[Kiiwa]
02:40:392 (4) - Compare to 02:33:007 (4) - is why I suggested to add a finish added finish
I don't think the SB change was added to this difficulty. checked .osu file. all codes about BG end have been changed to

 F,0,263237,265555,0,0.1296002
 F,0,265555,272929,0.1296002,0

(about 1.5s faster than the it was)
But sometimes it just doesn't work in the editor. Idk why

pretty thanks for your patiently guide Garven, hopes the diff is fine and i will notice these points in the future~~

if there's any unconfortable stuff please tell me >.<

AIBAT throws an unsnapped slider error in Insane. It's fine. Please move along.

Rebubbled!

Ranked.

Boom

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Lol nice ><

wow~~

\:D/

thanks a lot

何時加的DIFF

wow :O

教练你好 教练再见

O_O Finally! I love it, good job ♥

好w

Fixed the Genre info, nice streams.

thanks everyone

Charles445 wrote: 252k60

Fixed the Genre info, nice streams.

thank you Charles :3

Charles445 wrote: 252k60

Fixed the Genre info, nice streams.

I forgot that orz.