Sign In To Proceed 2z1z44

Don't have an ? 5p1p6t

osu! to create your own !
forum

Yasuo-P - Electric Angel [Taiko|Osu] 5d591e

posted
Total Posts
154
Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月10日 星期四 at 18:32:22

Artist: Yasuo-P
Title: Electric Angel
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: hatsune miku vocaloid2 ts8zs Flask Strawberry Fionana Cuvelia bx1989 collab
BPM: 150
Filesize: 2862kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. bx1989's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 544 notes)
  2. Collab (5 stars, 304 notes)
  3. Flask's Normal (4.3 stars, 121 notes)
  4. Hard (4.87 stars, 206 notes)
  5. Lia's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 492 notes)
  6. Ts8zs' Easy (1.09 stars, 55 notes)
: Yasuo-P - Electric Angel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
#2
BG from this map http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/49194 by [Ryu](deleted)
Enjoy Miku's sweet smile!
Thank you!
ertyukjh (helped me cut the mp3)
JoJo (helped me with the timing)
[Ryu] (left me the cute BG)
bx1989
Strawberry
Fionana
Flask
ts8zs
Cuvelia
Kawayi Rika (bubble)
SapphireGhost (rank)
Collab :Strawberry,raririn,Fionana
沙發
~~IRC MODDED~~
23:15 <raririn> : 开新坑咯\o/
23:17 <JoJo> : 0.0
23:17 <JoJo> : 神麻婆/ \
23:18 <JoJo> : 哇又是V家的 o.o
23:19 <raririn> : 诶
23:19 <raririn> : 别黑我啊...
23:26 <raririn> : 这次这个截的很短 才76秒 而且只有1个diff 想请吐槽一下:>
23:27 <JoJo> : o.o lazyrin
23:27 <raririn> : 噗...
23:27 <raririn> : 不过确实没有懒到只截1分多钟的orz
23:30 <JoJo> : 现在才1难度 也要mod么:>
23:30 <raririn> : 不用mod随便看一遍就好啦:>
23:31 <raririn> : 看auto或者啥的随便咯
23:31 <JoJo> : 那我试打一下好了:>
23:31 <raririn> : 好~
23:31 <raririn> : 很善良的:D 可以DT的那种
23:35 <JoJo> : 啊啊 有几个要吐槽的地方=w=
23:35 <raririn> : 嗯嗯
23:35 <JoJo> : DT我肯定不行..我这么叒/ \
23:35 <raririn> : 噗……
23:36 <raririn> : 我也不行:D
23:36 <JoJo> : BG不错/ \
23:37 <raririn> : 你有感觉到break前后的mapping style有明显区别吗?
23:38 <JoJo> : 先general...BG换成jpg可以省700KB空间/ \
23:38 <raririn> : 诶 好的
23:39 <JoJo> : 要我帮你压缩么/ \
23:39 <raririn> : 好啊好啊owo
23:40 <JoJo> : http://puu.sh/zN5J
23:40 <JoJo> : 220KB o.o
23:40 <raririn> : thx~
23:41 <JoJo> : timing完全off了...
23:41 <JoJo> : 我先mod完最后再给你offset
23:42 <JoJo> : BPM没错 offset差很多
23:42 <raririn> : o.o
23:42 <raririn> : 好
23:42 <raririn> : 诶 offset13344 这个对么
23:43 <JoJo> : 不是,你只是换了跟白线吧...
23:43 <raririn> : :? 不太明白
23:43 <JoJo> : 那我先把offset给你 你resnap好我再吐槽:>
23:43 <raririn> : 啊嗯
23:45 <JoJo> : 600
23:45 <JoJo> : 误差+-5ms
23:46 <JoJo> : 本来的误差超了50ms...我居然能95ACC...
23:47 <raririn> : o.o 我打的时候也有95+
23:47 <JoJo> : OD低的关系吧/ \
23:47 <JoJo> : snap好了喊我:>
23:48 <raririn> : 如果我觉得是5ms early 那应该加还是减
23:49 <JoJo> : early是你按早了5ms还是图早了5ms? o.o
23:49 <JoJo> : 你按早offset就应该-
23:56 <JoJo> : ...
23:56 <raririn> : =w=
23:56 <JoJo> : 刚才网挂了..
23:56 <raririn> : 嗯嗯
23:56 <JoJo> : http://puu.sh/zNfk
23:57 <raririn> : 好~
23:57 <JoJo> : 改好了么:>
23:57 <JoJo> : 你最后改了多少o.o
23:57 <raririn> : 595~
23:57 <JoJo> : ok~
23:58 <JoJo> : 知道怎么resnap绿线么:>
23:58 <raririn> : 嗯
23:58 <JoJo> : 知道o.o?
23:58 <raririn> : 因为本来准确的不是只要一起移动就可以了嘛o.o
23:59 <JoJo> : 0.0 嗯嗯 因为一般大家都只会批量resnap note不会resnap绿线..
00:00 <raririn> : :O
00:01 <JoJo> : 只要你不是一根一根resnap的lol"
00:01 <raririn> : 嗯……
00:02 <JoJo> : 00:25:995 (9,1) - 加大spacing
00:02 <raririn> : 电脑好烫 待机一会
00:02 <JoJo> : 囧..
00:02 <JoJo> : 那我一口气发完你待会儿慢慢看:>
00:03 <JoJo> : 00:37:395 (4,1) - 这个spacing玩全补课接受啊~加大加大~
00:04 <raririn> : 好了...不好意思
00:04 <JoJo> : 00:37:395 (4,1) - 这个spacing玩全补课接受啊~加大加大~
00:04 <JoJo> : 00:42:195 (3) - 这个slider已经unrankable了
00:05 <raririn> : orz
00:05 <JoJo> : 上次哪张图因为这样的slider还被BATunrank过
00:06 <JoJo> : http://puu.sh/zNm6
00:06 <raririn> : 嗯
00:06 <JoJo> : 00:51:795 把break拽到这里
00:07 <JoJo> : 01:03:795 (6) - 建议拆开 减少1了reverse然后在01:04:395 (7) - 加个circle
00:08 <JoJo> : 01:10:795 (13,1) - 加大spacing
00:08 <JoJo> : 01:22:195 (4,5) - 加大加大!!!
00:09 <JoJo> : 01:26:995 (5) - ...一样 话说你是复制粘贴的???
00:09 <raririn> : 这个是的,,,比较难拉
00:09 <JoJo> : 囧
00:09 <raririn> : orz
00:09 <JoJo> : 没了 吐槽就这些o.o
00:10 <raririn> : 好 谢啦ovo
00:10 <JoJo> : 好骗裤兜去/ \

加油bakarin OvO
http://puu.sh/E2Yx

說好的GD 沒上Hitsounds跪求幫忙(拖了好久對不起TAT)

.osb沒用到就刪 tags記得加上我的名子o.o/

然後Creator's Words 那邊的連結掛了
Topic Starter

Flask wrote: 5l1l4k

http://puu.sh/E2Yx

說好的GD 沒上Hitsounds跪求幫忙(拖了好久對不起TAT)

.osb沒用到就刪 tags記得加上我的名子o.o/

然後Creator's Words 那邊的連結掛了
没关系是那个图被删了哦
General
两个相同BG在folder里 删一个?

Hard
00:26:195 (1,2) -开头两个clap不要?
01:10:995 (1,2) - ^

渣Mod抱歉T T..
对这首歌印象很深啊 当初玩歌姬计划的时候 第一次perfect就是这首。
求TAIKO……

Sun Rainbow wrote: 46i1k

求TAIKO……
还是我来=w=?
Topic Starter

Urlangce wrote: 6p1a4u

对这首歌印象很深啊 当初玩歌姬计划的时候 第一次perfect就是这首。
求握手 第一个也是唯一一个1Perfect的
对这首歌印象很深啊 当初哲学图 第一次ranked就是这首。

ok I self heavy

话说mapset决定好没, 能要GD不 (最近蛋疼

edit: =_=好像都有了算了

坑什么啊
Topic Starter

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote: 6vr

对这首歌印象很深啊 当初哲学图 第一次ranked就是这首。

ok I self heavy

话说mapset决定好没, 能要GD不 (最近蛋疼
随意w 不过可能会坑一段时间 只要你愿意

edit:本来啥都没你一说来了一堆直接就凑齐mapset了这能怪我嘛
http://puu.sh/JA1C Ts8zs' Easy Finished
嗯……讲一下梗
大量使用了滑条变向梗来表示变音,比较有感觉的是01:01:795 (2) - 这个……每次看到这里都鼠标不由自主得跟着动(羞
高潮重复梗……这算梗么……这纯属偷懒吧!
还有就是拍手梗 01:00:995 (1) - 所以没用三连就是因为拍手……顺便降低下难度
压哨子梗 00:37:395 (2) - 01:22:195 (2) -
就这三(四)个梗支撑了整个Easy =w=b
Add Hitsound :O:

http://puu.sh/JMTz
http://puu.sh/JPM4 你要的转盘
Hard
00:21:195 (4) - NC
00:32:595 - 突然变安静了
00:29:995 (6) - NC
00:38:995 (1) - 去NC
00:40:595 (5) - NC
01:00:995 (9) - NC
01:01:395 (1) - 去NC
01:05:995 (8) - NC
01:09:395 (6) - NC
01:35:795 (3) - 往下挪
Normal
00:44:995 (1) - 红点下移
求collab
here my collab part~ -->http://puu.sh/Kiys

also some simple mod :)

[Hard]
00:21:195 (4) - 这样 拆成一note+1/2slider比较好 现在这样感觉有点怪
00:21:795 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这段stream的spacing好好弄弄..而且建议间距小点 毕竟只是次高难度,,
00:24:995 (7) - 建议slider开头+clap
00:37:395 (4) - 尾部建议改成finish
00:47:395 (3) - +clap
01:24:395 (2) - spacing..
01:25:795 (7) - (nazi) 1 grid up
01:28:995 (2) - 开头+clap
01:32:195 (3) - +clap
01:35:795 (3) - +finish, 感觉clap也有点多余

:) ganbatte

edit: 简单看了下ez和nm. nm不错但是ez感觉有点难了, 建议remap一下
http://puu.sh/Klfq 提供一个前面的下拍梗=3=不太适合Easy……hard吧……应该……normal似乎也凑合
Easy用补完么?
话说这算mod么=w=b
Topic Starter

ts8zs wrote: 552536

Hard
00:21:195 (4) - NC no
00:32:595 - 突然变安静了 因为没东西可以下 tick下音效不会
00:29:995 (6) - NC no
00:38:995 (1) - 去NC no
00:40:595 (5) - NC no kiai才开始的NC
01:00:995 (9) - NC no NC在后面
01:01:395 (1) - 去NC no ^
01:05:995 (8) - NC no
01:09:395 (6) - NC no
01:35:795 (3) - 往下挪 我觉得这样好:3
Normal
00:44:995 (1) - 红点下移why...
来吧开始mod~

Insane
SPOILER
其实OD可以+1
00:02:995 (7) - 好看点?
00:07:995 (7) - 我觉得删掉比较好
00:14:195 (5) - 蹭到3了不好看哟
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - 这种组合不是很喜欢,全部都蹭到了。抱歉没找到什么好的解决方案,不过还是建议有时间的话改一改这里
00:22:995 (2,4) - 这两个完全可以平行的,然后4和5在对称一下
00:46:595 (14,1) - 为什么不弄成这样的?
00:48:995 (8,9) - 对称
00:58:295 (2) - 删掉会比较好玩

Hard
SPOILER
推荐设置
01:09:195 (4) - 我觉得放在01:08:395 (2) - 的位置上会不会好点?
01:10:795 (9) - 蹭到了不好看
01:16:195 (8) - spacing
01:32:795 (6) - 跳的有点突然
01:35:795 (3) - 我觉得应该放这里

Normal
SPOILER
00:14:595 (3,4) - 其实你完全可以复制旋转180的。。。
00:35:795 (1) - OJZ 这个一定必须强烈建议改掉,至少对称吧亲。。。
00:44:995 (1) - 好多了吧
00:51:795break拉到这里

easy
SPOILER
推荐设置
00:16:195 (1) -这个拉长啊
00:17:795 (3) - 然后这个和1的尾巴对齐
00:20:995 (2,2) - 后面的头和前面的尾对齐
00:27:395 (3,1) - 蹭到了不好看
00:30:995 (3) - EAST 可别跳哦!
00:32:595 (2,4) - 又蹭了。。。
00:51:795break拉到这里
01:00:995 (1) - 拉长
01:07:395 (1) - 拉长,这种小段拉条既不合拍又不好看
01:14:195 (1,3) - 3头1尾对齐
01:18:995 (3) - 又蹭了。。。
01:19:795 (4,1) - 又蹭了
然后打开AIMOD差spacing问题,你是按照0.9Xmap的所以spacing不能小于0.85不能大于0.95 【话说mapping的时候有开DS吗。。。

Good luck~
no kd ~

Ts8zs's Easy
这配置都快赶上Normal了..HD 1~2 OD 1~2 AR 2~3 比较好。
00:16:195 (1) - 和00:22:595 - 同样节奏 后者有repeat 这里也加吧
00:30:995 (3,1) - 间距错了 在Easy都要保持一致的 开着DS做
00:44:995 (1,2) - 间距
00:50:995 (4) - 看其他diff在这都加了finish 这里也去clap加fin?
01:00:995 (1) - 和前面一样 加repeat
00:59:395 - 开始突然变的简单 前面那么多节奏而这里·开始用这么多长slider代替 好像偷懒w
01:18:195 (2,3) - 没看出用意..虽然能衔接4 但这里看起来是很随便的摆法
01:26:195 (4,1) - 间距
01:29:795 (1,2) - ^
01:35:795 (4) - 去clap加finish


这diff不仅配置像N排列节奏对刚玩的新手也过于难了.. 星数显示两星半并不代表什么这本来就是一个坏掉的系统:3 强烈建议remap 间距一定要保持一致

Flask's Normal

00:25:395 (1,2) - NC替换?
00:26:995 (1) - RNC
01:11:795 (1) - RNC
01:13:795 (4) - NC
01:33:795 (3) - 往下点..?

gj! ovo

Hard
00:24:595 (6,7,8) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/377675 这样摆或许比较好看
00:26:195 (1,2) - 减速的地方加clap有种违和感.. 1的头加个音量50%的finish? 2的头加个whistle什么的..
00:29:395 (3) -头finish衔接clap比较好听 ~_~
01:10:795 (9) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/377686 9摆这?
01:10:995 - save as above 用其他音效替代clap
01:12:595 (3) - 嗯.. 怎样?
01:23:395 (5) - 再加个repeat? 顿了下怪怪的..
01:35:795 (3) - 真的不摆在2下面吗O.O http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/377695

都是nazi而已..做的不错 :3!

Collab
01:13:395 (6) - 帮我改下吧ww x:88 y:184

rank go go~

Fionana wrote: 48192p

no kd ~

Ts8zs's Easy
这配置都快赶上Normal了..HD 1~2 OD 1~2 AR 2~3 比较好。fixed
00:16:195 (1) - 和00:22:595 - 同样节奏 后者有repeat 这里也加吧你把后面那个去掉你会听到类似finish的东西=w=
00:30:995 (3,1) - 间距错了 在Easy都要保持一致的 开着DS做raririn帮我改得太粗糙了……所以以后我还是自己改自己上传好了
00:44:995 (1,2) - 间距fixed
00:50:995 (4) - 看其他diff在这都加了finish 这里也去clap加fin?C F都加上吧=w=
01:00:995 (1) - 和前面一样 加repeat虽然说背景是有那么一声
00:59:395 - 开始突然变的简单 前面那么多节奏而这里·开始用这么多长slider代替 好像偷懒w降低难度,偷懒
01:18:195 (2,3) - 没看出用意..虽然能衔接4 但这里看起来是很随便的摆法要全改的话很麻烦的QAQ
01:26:195 (4,1) - 间距fixed
01:29:795 (1,2) - ^fixed
01:35:795 (4) - 去clap加finish全加上了


这diff不仅配置像N排列节奏对刚玩的新手也过于难了..我做的标准是1pc3modSS 星数显示两星半并不代表什么这本来就是一个坏掉的系统:3只要有这么个星数的diff就ok 强烈建议remap我巨懒 间距一定要保持一致间距是失误QAQ
rank go go~

-Baby Strawberry- wrote: 595i6i

easy
SPOILER
推荐设置fixed
00:16:195 (1) -这个拉长啊no
00:17:795 (3) - 然后这个和1的尾巴对齐no
00:20:995 (2,2) - 后面的头和前面的尾对齐fixed
00:27:395 (3,1) - 蹭到了不好看fixed
00:30:995 (3) - EAST 可别跳哦!fixed
00:32:595 (2,4) - 又蹭了。。。fixed
00:51:795break拉到这里后面的也顺便提前了下=w=
01:00:995 (1) - 拉长no
01:07:395 (1) - 拉长,这种小段拉条既不合拍又不好看no
01:14:195 (1,3) - 3头1尾对齐fixed
01:18:995 (3) - 又蹭了。。。fixed
01:19:795 (4,1) - 又蹭了fixed
然后打开AIMOD差spacing问题,你是按照0.9Xmap的所以spacing不能小于0.85不能大于0.95 【话说mapping的时候有开DS吗。。。有开……后来改乱了 那个破aimod刷新一次变一次……有的不能再近的都提示far= =

Good luck~
http://puu.sh/KAhH 嗯上传
Hi my mod here
@ts8zs quote和上传请全部放在一层里不要刷版

[Easy]
*整体的节奏太过紧密以致于像normal 不是星数3↓就可以 通常4★normal配的都1-2的Easy
*spacing=0.9*1.0 normal是1.0*1.0 差这么少自重 强烈建议SV0.8
* 00:16:195 (1) - 00:22:595 (1) - 01:00:995 (1) - 01:07:395 (1) - 01:10:595 (1) - 这些1/2的滑条不仅打着不舒服 最重要的是容易误读 而且难听
00:14:595 (2) - 为什么用长滑条盖过节奏
00:50:995 (4) - 去clap
00:56:595 (1) - 转盘太短 虽然rank的标准是1000分但是在我看来E的转盘至少8000才能合格
00:58:195 (1) - 离转盘太近
01:01:795 (2) - 意义不明 为什么盖过去
01:11:395 - 01:12:195 - 01:13:795 - 节奏空白 不填的意义不明
01:20:595 (1) - 巨丑的overlap
01:35:795 - kiai#2 end
01:35:795 (4) - 去clap加finish
总而言之 节奏有的地方太过紧密 有的地方太松 总体偏难 有不少偷懒的地方 音效差很多 我test的时候都没听到什么音效
我的建议是多看别的Easy 反正是和没屁股王长喜一样的风格很让我讨厌的1/1+1/2Easy

[Normal]
00:35:795 (1) - 哇这啥
00:50:195 (2) - 尾finish
00:58:195 (1) - 其实可以再对称点
01:20:595 (1) - 我建议clap换whistle clap的话会打乱13的节奏
01:35:795 - kiai#2 end
Fine.

[Strawberry]
00:26:195 (2) - 折返去clap

[Fionana]
01:34:795 (6,1) - 有点难读
[quote="sand bag"]Hi my mod here
@ts8zs quote和上传请全部放在一层里不要刷版两个mod的话放哪个帖子里呢=w=b

[Easy]
*整体的节奏太过紧密以致于像normal 不是星数3↓就可以 通常4★normal配的都1-2的Easy那全是长滑条好不
*spacing=0.9*1.0 normal是1.0*1.0 差这么少自重 强烈建议SV0.8你存心让我remap,根本没法摆开那样
* 00:16:195 (1) - 00:22:595 (1) - 01:00:995 (1) - 01:07:395 (1) - 01:10:595 (1) - 这些1/2的滑条不仅打着不舒服 最重要的是容易误读 而且难听很难听么QAQ
00:14:595 (2) - 为什么用长滑条盖过节奏为了和高潮有区别
00:50:995 (4) - 去clap让别人加吧
00:56:595 (1) - 转盘太短 虽然rank的标准是1000分但是在我看来E的转盘至少8000才能合格raririn让加的我不想要
00:58:195 (1) - 离转盘太近参见上面
01:01:795 (2) - 意义不明 为什么盖过去这个我觉得跳起来很爽=w=
01:11:395 - 01:12:195 - 01:13:795 - 节奏空白 不填的意义不明增加点3mod难度
01:20:595 (1) - 巨丑的overlapfixed
01:35:795 - kiai#2 end这个不归我管
01:35:795 (4) - 去clap加finish
总而言之 节奏有的地方太过紧密 有的地方太松 总体偏难 有不少偷懒的地方很难么^3modSS1pc啊 音效差很多 我test的时候都没听到什么音效因为和背景完美融合了=w=?要不我把声音调高点=w=
我的建议是多看别的Easy3mod玩的多自然见得多 反正是和没屁股王长喜一样的风格很让我讨厌的1/1+1/2Easy嘛^太乱的话评分会低那几个1/2滑条我会想办法的= =b
Topic Starter
i asked some people for help,asking them about whether the SV should be changed,and here are their answers:
A:E和N的SV一样 应该改吗?
Q:

tutuhaha wrote: 5z2z

最好改掉

fanzhen0019 wrote: 2m374e

最好改掉

Midasmens wrote: 5e4f46

不清楚

_lolipop wrote: 1y2t54

会有人说

spboxer3 wrote: 21lg

通常不同会比较好

12BARRY21 wrote: 4e5b2

改掉比较好

Regou wrote: 2l653b

当然

Athena Tennos wrote: 552kv

在节奏上下点功夫也没什么

SapphireGhost wrote: 34l4t

Easy should use a lower SV than the Normal
i think i needn't ask more people since SG said so,
so plz change the SV to 0.8 @ts8zs

raririn wrote: 2a5t1o

i asked some people for help,asking them about whether the SV should be changed,and here are their answers:
A:E和N的SV一样 应该改吗?
Q:

tutuhaha wrote: 5z2z

最好改掉

fanzhen0019 wrote: 2m374e

最好改掉

Midasmens wrote: 5e4f46

不清楚

_lolipop wrote: 1y2t54

会有人说

spboxer3 wrote: 21lg

通常不同会比较好

12BARRY21 wrote: 4e5b2

改掉比较好

Regou wrote: 2l653b

当然

Athena Tennos wrote: 552kv

在节奏上下点功夫也没什么

SapphireGhost wrote: 34l4t

Easy should use a lower SV than the Normal
i think i needn't ask more people since SG said so,
so plz change the SV to 0.8 @ts8zs
我怎么不能吐槽……Normal should use a higher SV than the Easy
http://puu.sh/KGau 0.8 懒死向 评星是1.03

-Baby Strawberry- wrote: 595i6i

Normal
00:14:595 (3,4) - 其实你完全可以复制旋转180的。。。 犯老毛病- -改了
00:35:795 (1) - OJZ 这个一定必须强烈建议改掉,至少对称吧亲。。。 換成spinner~~
00:44:995 (1) - 好多了吧 條了一下
00:51:795break拉到这里raririn幫我我不會

Fionana wrote: 48192p

Flask's Normal
00:25:395 (1,2) - NC替换? 修了~
00:26:995 (1) - RNC ^
01:11:795 (1) - RNC ^
01:13:795 (4) - NC ^
01:33:795 (3) - 往下点..? 沒注意到 QAQ

gj! ovo

sand bag wrote: 1a858

[Normal]
00:35:795 (1) - 哇这啥 大家都吐槽QAQ (被打
00:50:195 (2) - 尾finish 好w
00:58:195 (1) - 其实可以再对称点 修了一下
01:20:595 (1) - 我建议clap换whistle clap的话会打乱13的节奏 這邊是故意的XD
01:35:795 - kiai#2 end 好 :3
Fine.
http://puu.sh/KJMR


另外求raririn幫我修一下 break拉到00:51:795 - 謝謝>w<
來囉~~~~~

[General]
我不確定這樣翻譯是不是正確...
正確的話就在tags加上 "Denki Tenshi"

話說Creator's Words那裡 有提到"人"的能都profile下嗎
那連結還是很礙眼- - 明明就掛掉了

[包子的Easy]
00:19:795 (5) - nc
00:29:395 (3) - 縮成一個折返就好
00:32:595 (5) - nc
00:45:395 (5) - nc
00:51:795 - break到這邊
01:04:595 (5) - nc
01:14:195 (3) - 前面講過
01:17:395 (5) - nc
01:30:195 (5) - nc

沒啥好吐槽的 很有規距的Easy 雖然我不知道你之前做成怎麼樣

[Flask's Normal]

ertyukjh010 wrote: 5o3n4p

十年難得一見的神作
[Hard]
阿咧13節奏嗎 QAQ

00:21:395 (5,8) - clap
00:32:195 (9) - nc
00:33:395 (3) - clap
00:34:195 (4,5,6,7) - 是故意放這種clap節奏的嗎 QAQ
00:40:595 (5) - 感覺這裏可以nc因為有擺星型
00:42:195 (3) - clap
00:48:995 (3) - clap
01:03:795 (6) - ^
01:04:595 (1) - ^
01:05:195 (2) - what
01:09:395 (5) - clap
01:16:195 (8) - 尾部也該下clap
01:26:995 (2) - clap

好Insane的Hard

[Collab]
應該要有什麼到某個part就出來名子的設置啊!!

00:37:395 (1) - 連在這裡就給我停止!!!
00:39:395 (6) - 說不出的怪 兩個折返整個orz 建議把最後個折返換成note
00:44:995 (10) - nc
01:08:595 (3,4,5,6) - 這邊好亂 但說不出改法

後面不下clap或啥的嗎



就這樣了~
嘿嘿今天又看了一眼,BG里miku笑的好甜哦~!

collab难度audio lead in 是必须的,大概这样好了

不给kd,继续加油~!

Flask wrote: 5l1l4k

[包子的Easy]
00:19:795 (5) - nc
00:29:395 (3) - 縮成一個折返就好
00:32:595 (5) - nc
00:45:395 (5) - nc
00:51:795 - break到這邊
01:04:595 (5) - nc
01:14:195 (3) - 前面講過
01:17:395 (5) - nc
01:30:195 (5) - nc
现在这个diff raririn托管了 以后再也不和这家伙做了麻烦死了QAQ
沒啥好吐槽的 很有規距的Easy 雖然我不知道你之前做成怎麼樣之前? http://puu.sh/LezX
Hi there~~mod for request~

[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in: 2000ms to collab
[Easy]
  1. 真心认为这SliderTickRate 2 有些太猎奇了……
  2. 00:19:795 (5) - NC please~对于E/N而言,combo的长度除非非常特殊的情况否则最好别超过6
  3. 00:32:595 (5) - ^
  4. 00:41:795 - 感觉上这里应该有个note
  5. 00:45:395 (5) - NC
  6. 00:51:795 - 把break做个延迟到这里开始?
  7. 01:04:595 (5) - NC
  8. 01:17:395 (5) - ^
  9. 01:26:595 - 同前面kiai,建议加note
  10. 01:30:195 (5) - NC
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:995 (1,2) - 感觉上这里做成一整个折返条会更舒服,因为两个红线音都分别和前面白线音更贴合,也就是2+2而不是1+3的结构
  2. 00:38:595 (1) - 考虑删掉?一方面是距离Spinner有点近,另一方面感觉这里留空拍能更好的带出Kiai的高潮
  3. 00:40:595 (1,2) - 和前面那里说的类似,Note+reverse Slider的结构感觉上不如用一整个slider或者2个1/2的Slider,相比之下00:43:795 (3,4) - 的处理就好很多了:>
  4. 00:45:395 - 这里的重音被你弄丢了……2/1长度的Slider其实并不是很合适,而且还导致了00:46:595 - 中间的那个Clap被弄没了……简单来说就是你下Note的时候并没有想到该怎么处理音效的问题,所以会感觉很尴尬,改一改吧:>
  5. 00:48:595 - 长白线的鼓点重音+Vocal重音却下在了Slider尾,很违和……强烈不建议这么做。其实 00:46:195 (2,3,1) - 这里的节奏的话我自己可能会做成这种:
  6. 01:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - 这种倾斜度很大的平行四边形/菱形造型是典型的……唔……新人经常会用但是经常用不好的典型……改改吧……把角度拉开做成正方形/五边形或者六边形都比这样要好
  7. 01:16:195 (4,5,6) - 这里下3个1/2节奏没问题,但是如果这么下的话我想不到01:15:995 - 留空拍的理由……但是全下的话难度又显高了,简而言之就是你自己把自己挤到了两难的境地上了……
  8. 01:16:995 (1) - 单一个slider的combo有什么特殊含义么……?
  9. 01:23:395 (1) - 同前面一段的建议——考虑删掉?
  10. 01:25:395 (4,5,6) - 建议做成slider-slider-note,因为这5个音的重点是在最后一个上,用note收尾比slider舒服的多得多
[Hard]
  1. 00:27:595 - 感觉上可以加note的地方=v=
  2. 00:40:395 (4,1,2,3) - 我只能说这个跳的方向——重点是2、3之间的方向不是很舒服……
  3. 00:46:795 (6) - 叠到00:47:795 (5) - 这里?
  4. 00:49:795 (4,5,6) - 强烈建议三连向前做到红线,很合适!然后00:49:995 - 保留个note
  5. 01:18:795 - 考虑加个note?
  6. 01:31:795 (1,2,3,4) - 跳的方向改成逆时针?
  7. 01:34:395 - 加note或者向后做成三连?
[Collab]
  1. 第一红线前不要放note!
  2. 00:29:995 - 考虑加note?
  3. 00:30:795 - ^,而且其实我觉得从00:30:195 (2) - 到这里更适合放2个1/2Slider..
  4. 00:33:995 - 继续建议加note
  5. 00:35:795 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看也打着不舒服的形状……
  6. 00:36:595 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 不好听,不好看,不合适,不喜欢…………
  7. 00:44:795 - 前面都stream了这里没理由留空……
  8. 00:46:995 (1) - 继续建议加note
唔……差不多就这样了……加油的说……
IRC modded...甚麼的QAQ
Hi, mod time~ :3

Nice song, good job on mapping this, I hope this will get in ranked beatmaps.

[Ts8zs' Easy]

I recommend adjust the volume to 50-55%
You could set a timing point on 00:26:195 - and start using soft hitsounds, finishing on 00:32:595 - and using normal hitsounds again
Same between 01:10:995 - and 01:17:395 -

[Flask's Normal]

Nice flow, I only point some spacing inconsistency, sorry if I look a bit nazi, follow if you want >_<

00:46:195 (2) - Move to x:332 y:300 or elsewhere it keeps ~1.0x spacing
Only if you do:
00:47:395 (3) - Move to x:48 y:336 or or elsewhere it keeps ~1.0x spacing

00:59:395 (2) - Move to x:348 y:204
01:08:995 (5) - Move to x:16 y:304
01:11:795 (2) - 0.8x spacing or 0.7x? If 0.8x move this to x:408 y:128, if not re-arrange 01:12:595 (3,4) -
01:17:395 (1) - Move to x:508 y:276

Good luck c:
Hi._.
847's mod,just some suggestions
好久没mod了唉>_>

Collab
00:03:795 (3) - remove clap
00:04:795 (7) - ^
00:07:395 (3) - ^
00:08:195 (5) - ^
01:26:995 (1,3) - 是重合么

Hard
00:49:795 (6) - 改成slider到00:49:995 - ,这里空拍不舒服

Normal
fine

Easy
00:14:995 (2) - 放下来点
00:18:195 (4) - 建议换成slider+circle
00:34:195 (2) - ^
01:02:995 (4) - ^
01:18:995 (2) - ^

就这么多
Request by raririn~

[Collab]
00:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種遮擋真是太#*%(*$%*(了改掉吧
00:19:895 (2) - Remove clap
00:37:495 (9,10,11) - 遮擋 D:///
00:37:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 看起來好像不是直線啊..
第二部份collab是誰弄的Clap部份不一致 建議Hitsound重做吧...
00:39:395 (6,7,8) - 遮擋!!#&*($&(%&#*($
00:42:195 (1) - NC
00:44:995 (10) - NC
00:48:595 (7) - NC
00:49:795 (4,5,1) -弄成直線
00:50:195 (1,2) - 這個跳不覺得有點突然嗎...
00:50:995 (1) - 最少弄soft sampleset吧 ;__;
00:59:795 (8) - NC?
01:02:995 (7) - NC
01:02:995 (7) - 這個把01:02:795 (6)blanket掉
01:07:595 (3) - 感覺怪怪的啊 = =
01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - Overmap的pattern...

第二部分問題比較大,別的都挺好的...

懶了今天就先Mod這些吧
bakarin。噗= =虽然我很想做不过最近不行,这是要找7爷MOD?
Topic Starter

bx1989 wrote: 5w583y

bakarin。噗= =虽然我很想做不过最近不行,这是要找7爷MOD?
bx大侠。噗= =没事 等你有空了这图还没好在做
7爷送了个星而已

Edit:AmamiyaYuko's irc mod
SPOILER
AmamiyaYuko 23:51:47
没问题就来了... 首先lead in明显太短
AmamiyaYuko 23:52:03
这怎么看都要3000
AmamiyaYuko 23:52:45
话说sco说2000你还没改啊/ \
AmamiyaYuko 23:52:51
2000太短不信开dt一试就知道
AmamiyaYuko 23:53:09
我试了下3000比较正常
AmamiyaYuko 23:53:13
2500也行
AmamiyaYuko 0:00:44
00:28:595 (5,6,7) - 差评
AmamiyaYuko 0:00:51
这2连怎么得出来的o.o
AmamiyaYuko 0:01:06
00:32:595 (2,3,4) - ^
AmamiyaYuko 0:01:06
00:32:595 (2,3,4) - ^
AmamiyaYuko 0:01:53
00:39:995 (7) - overlap
AmamiyaYuko 0:02:54
00:18:795 (4,6,7) - 这里叠失误了吧...
AmamiyaYuko 0:05:01
01:00:995 (10,11,12,13,1) - 其实这里把5连换成单点会不会好点0.0

Regou wrote: 2l653b

Request by raririn~

[Collab]
00:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種遮擋真是太#*%(*$%*(了改掉吧 这种遮挡怎末了嘛。。
00:19:895 (2) - Remove clap thanks for remind.其实本意是下clap在(1)上面.fixed
00:37:495 (9,10,11) - 遮擋 D:/// 不认为有问题。。
00:37:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 看起來好像不是直線啊.. k.fixed
thanks for mod~热狗酱
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: 1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 38544
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38595,70995
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Electric Angel
Artist:Hatsune Miku
Creator:raririn
Version:Collab
Source:Yasuo-P
Tags:vocaloid vocaloid2 ts8zs Flask Strawberry Fionana

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"code1.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,51995,57445
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
595,400,4,1,0,40,1,0
6195,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
6595,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
11795,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
13195,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
22595,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
22795,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
25395,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
25795,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
29395,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
29795,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
30195,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
30595,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
31795,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
31995,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
36595,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
38995,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
41595,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
51395,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
58195,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
70595,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,50,0,0
77395,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
83795,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
95795,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 254,188,135
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 0,128,124

[HitObjects]
256,192,595,1,0
256,192,795,1,8
184,136,995,2,0,B|136:128|96:148,1,90,0|0
80,156,1295,1,0
68,168,1395,2,0,B|84:216|64:268,1,90,0|8
84,268,1695,1,0
100,276,1795,2,0,B|148:284|188:264,1,90,0|0
352,336,2195,6,0,B|364:292|352:240,1,90,0|8
256,104,2595,2,0,B|244:148|256:200,1,90,0|8
268,204,2895,1,0
280,216,2995,2,0,B|328:212|376:220,1,90,0|0
228,316,3395,6,0,B|180:320|132:312,1,90,0|8
124,304,3695,1,0
108,292,3795,2,0,B|66:284|18:288,1,90,0|0
168,240,4195,2,0,B|135:213|91:192,1,90,0|8
76,188,4495,1,0
60,184,4595,1,0
124,120,4795,1,0
212,104,4995,2,0,B|244:130|288:151,1,90,0|8
380,152,5395,5,4
332,228,5595,1,0
420,228,5795,1,4
372,304,5995,1,0
460,304,6195,2,0,B|360:296|276:316,1,180,4|0
192,328,6795,1,0
192,328,6995,6,0,B|184:280|184:232,1,90,0|8
192,220,7295,1,0
200,204,7395,2,0,B|200:162|192:114,1,90,0|0
112,152,7795,2,0,B|64:164|16:164,1,90,0|8
288,172,8195,2,0,B|336:160|384:160,1,90,0|0
128,244,8595,5,0
284,260,8795,1,8
144,332,8995,1,0
288,384,9195,1,8
408,304,9395,2,0,B|428:216|416:116,1,180,0|0
412,108,9895,5,0
404,92,9995,1,8
392,76,10095,1,0
380,64,10195,2,0,B|332:68|284:80,1,90,0|8
340,152,10595,2,0,B|300:179|264:213,1,90,0|8
204,284,10995,2,0,B|116:248|88:148,1,180
84,52,11595,1,8
176,92,11795,6,0,B|256:144|356:112,2,180,4|4|4
188,116,12695,1,0
196,144,12795,1,0
200,172,12895,1,0
196,200,12995,2,0,B|144:204,4,45,0|0|8|8|8
284,220,13595,5,0
356,276,13795,1,8
272,304,13995,1,0
284,220,14195,2,0,B|304:132|300:32,1,180,0|8
212,20,14795,1,8
248,104,14995,2,0,B|336:92,1,90
392,164,15395,2,0,B|480:184,1,90,8|8
416,248,15795,2,0,B|324:268|252:328,1,180,0|8
180,376,16395,5,8
180,376,16595,2,0,B|116:308,1,90
92,176,16995,2,0,B|153:241,1,90,0|8
180,244,17295,1,0
208,248,17395,1,0
236,252,17495,1,0
264,256,17595,1,0
352,272,17795,2,0,B|413:337,1,90,0|8
436,252,18195,5,8
388,124,18395,1,0
500,200,18595,1,8
364,200,18795,1,0
476,124,18995,1,8
364,200,19195,1,0
364,200,19395,2,0,B|272:200,1,90,8|0
188,200,19795,5,8
176,228,19895,2,0,B|88:252,1,90,0|0
80,280,20195,2,0,B|248:340,1,180,8|8
376,296,20795,1,8
356,320,20895,1,0
340,348,20995,1,8
316,216,21195,1,0
208,132,21395,6,0,B|249:139|297:135,1,90,0|8
188,216,21795,2,0,B|140:220|98:212,1,90,8|8
24,100,22195,2,0,B|4:196|16:280,1,180,0|0
24,308,22695,1,0
32,340,22795,1,8
116,308,22995,6,0,B|204:296|300:316,1,180,0|8
384,324,23595,1,8
428,244,23795,1,0
372,176,23995,1,8
324,252,24195,2,0,B|276:228|232:216,1,90,8|8
152,196,24595,1,0
100,72,24795,1,8
64,204,24995,1,0
168,116,25195,1,8
32,124,25395,1,4
120,280,25795,6,0,B|124:372,1,90,0|8
196,316,26195,2,0,B|220:228|304:168,1,180
476,196,26995,2,0,B|452:284|368:344,1,180
340,256,27595,1,0
312,172,27795,5,0
284,84,27995,1,8
228,156,28195,1,8
180,232,28395,1,8
132,308,28595,1,0
112,332,28695,2,0,B|36:280,1,90
20,304,28995,2,0,B|72:228,1,90,8|0
124,156,29395,6,0,B|180:236|276:240,1,180,4|0
424,140,30195,2,0,B|368:60|272:56,1,180,4|0
272,148,30795,1,0
276,240,30995,2,0,B|332:316,1,90,0|8
356,328,31295,1,0
384,340,31395,2,0,B|472:340,1,90,0|8
432,260,31795,1,4
432,260,32195,6,0,B|340:260,1,90
252,260,32595,1,8
220,260,32695,2,0,B|172:184,1,90,0|0
140,184,32995,2,0,B|48:184,1,90,8|0
84,268,33395,2,0,B|144:344|240:360,1,180,0|0
232,200,34195,6,0,B|232:152|232:152|260:108,1,90,0|8
440,248,34595,2,0,B|440:296|440:296|412:340,1,90,0|8
308,192,34995,2,0,B|348:172|348:172|400:172,1,90,0|8
364,256,35395,2,0,B|324:276|324:276|272:276,1,90,0|8
188,272,35795,5,0
156,272,35895,1,0
124,280,35995,1,0
92,280,36095,1,0
56,280,36195,1,0
16,200,36395,1,0
88,148,36595,2,0,B|136:148,3,45
160,148,36995,2,0,B|256:116|308:44,1,180
312,76,37495,1,0
320,108,37595,1,0
328,140,37695,1,0
360,148,37795,5,0
348,176,37895,1,0
340,204,37995,1,0
328,232,38095,1,0
316,260,38195,1,0
112,188,38595,5,0
112,188,38695,1,0
112,188,38795,1,0
112,188,38895,1,0
112,188,38995,2,0,B|124:240|180:256,1,90,8|0
204,168,39395,2,0,B|244:188|290:165,2,90,0|0|8
268,104,39995,1,0
352,136,40195,1,0
416,200,40395,1,0
388,288,40595,6,0,B|375:333|323:345,1,90,8|0
160,272,40995,2,0,B|172:226|224:214,1,90
312,192,41395,2,0,B|272:96|144:72,1,180,8|0
88,92,41995,1,0
88,92,42095,1,0
88,92,42195,6,0,B|88:192,1,90,8|0
36,256,42595,2,0,B|64:296|112:308,1,90
192,280,42995,2,0,B|164:240|120:229,2,90,8|0|0
240,204,43595,1,0
300,272,43795,5,8
324,236,43895,1,0
328,192,43995,1,0
312,148,44095,1,0
276,120,44195,1,0
232,112,44295,1,0
192,128,44395,1,0
160,160,44495,1,0
148,204,44595,1,8
408,128,44995,6,0,B|408:38,2,90,0|0|8
332,172,45595,1,0
256,220,45795,2,0,B|256:320,2,90,0|0|8
180,172,46395,1,0
92,192,46595,2,0,B|88:136|148:100,1,90
196,176,46995,6,0,B|200:232|140:268,1,90,8|0
132,340,47395,2,0,B|36:340,2,90,0|0|8
304,292,48195,1,0
304,292,48295,1,0
304,292,48395,1,0
304,292,48495,1,0
304,292,48595,6,0,B|304:192,1,90,8|0
256,128,48995,2,0,B|220:80,2,45
348,128,49395,2,0,B|396:92,2,45,8|0|0
160,292,49795,1,0
124,212,49995,1,0
64,144,50195,6,0,B|72:96|116:76,1,90,8|0
356,204,50595,2,0,B|348:252|303:272,1,90
256,192,50995,12,0,51795
96,132,58195,5,8
96,132,58295,1,0
96,132,58395,1,0
96,132,58495,1,0
96,132,58595,2,0,B|188:132,1,90
236,208,58995,2,0,B|144:208,1,90,8|0
192,288,59395,2,0,B|128:288,2,45
276,324,59795,6,0,B|324:300|340:256,1,90,8|0
308,176,60195,2,0,B|321:137|369:113,2,90,0|0|8
136,124,60995,1,0
136,124,61095,1,0
136,124,61195,1,0
136,124,61295,1,0
136,124,61395,6,0,B|204:192,1,90,8|0
272,240,61795,2,0,B|324:240,2,45
244,324,62195,2,0,B|192:324,2,45,8|0|0
336,316,62595,1,0
356,276,62695,1,0
376,236,62795,1,0
416,156,62995,6,0,B|368:132|320:156,1,90,8|0
256,204,63395,2,0,B|216:223|168:199,1,90
192,112,63795,2,0,B|144:88|96:112,1,90,8|0
60,188,64195,1,0
60,232,64295,1,0
60,276,64395,1,0
236,312,64595,5,8
236,312,64695,1,0
236,312,64795,1,0
236,312,64895,1,0
236,312,64995,2,0,B|288:312|324:272,1,90
220,128,65395,2,0,B|168:128|132:168,1,90,8|0
172,244,65795,6,0,B|108:320,2,90,0|0|8
252,160,66395,1,0
328,72,66595,2,0,B|364:36,2,45
344,188,66995,2,0,B|380:224,2,45,8|0|0
456,292,67395,5,0
456,292,67495,1,0
456,292,67595,2,0,B|396:356|248:344,1,180
268,260,68195,2,0,B|224:232|148:264,1,90
36,144,68595,2,0,B|84:144,1,45,8|0
112,112,68795,2,0,B|68:112,1,45
36,80,68995,2,0,B|80:80,1,45
112,48,69195,2,0,B|64:48,1,45
164,144,69395,2,0,B|256:144|336:80,2,180,8|0|8
116,84,70595,1,2
116,84,70695,1,0
116,84,70795,1,0
116,84,70895,1,0
116,84,70995,6,0,B|84:148|108:224,1,134.999995976687,6|0
352,328,71795,2,0,B|384:264|360:188,1,134.999995976687,2|0
340,112,72395,1,0
264,160,72595,2,0,B|192:188,1,67.4999979883433,2|0
124,104,72995,2,0,B|192:96,1,67.4999979883433,2|0
88,184,73395,2,0,B|136:232|152:304,1,134.999995976687,0|2
228,344,73995,1,0
316,344,74195,6,0,B|331:274|379:226,1,134.999995976687,6|0
444,284,74795,1,0
379,226,74995,2,0,B|336:172,1,67.4999979883433,2|0
372,72,75395,2,0,B|415:126,1,67.4999979883433,0|0
337,173,75795,2,0,B|308:200|264:192,1,67.4999979883433,2|2
224,68,76195,2,0,B|256:76|280:112,1,67.4999979883433,0|0
200,148,76595,2,0,B|152:128|116:168|64:136,1,134.999995976687,0|0
112,60,77195,1,0
164,232,77395,6,0,B|188:276|180:328,1,90,4|0
304,232,77795,2,0,B|280:188|288:136,1,90,0|0
320,60,78195,2,0,B|400:108|496:80,1,180,8|0
488,172,78795,1,0
420,304,78995,6,0,B|380:336|332:320,1,90,8|0
264,228,79395,1,0
324,128,79595,1,0
264,228,79795,2,0,B|212:228|180:276,1,90,8|0
264,316,80195,1,0
168,168,80395,1,0
184,52,80595,6,0,B|92:72,1,90,8|0
56,152,80995,1,0
56,152,81195,1,0
72,240,81395,1,8
102,261,81495,1,0
137,268,81595,1,0
172,260,81695,1,0
205,246,81795,2,0,B|297:210|377:278,1,180,0|8
444,332,82395,1,0
476,248,82595,2,0,B|500:204|488:156,1,90
472,72,82995,1,0
472,72,83395,6,0,B|376:84,1,90
368,172,83795,2,0,B|304:168|264:76|308:28,1,180,4|0
384,84,84395,1,0
384,84,84495,1,0
384,84,84595,2,0,B|208:156,1,180,8|0
156,80,85195,2,0,B|252:40,1,90,0|8
128,164,85595,2,0,B|132:212|188:236,1,90
217,152,85995,1,0
156,316,86195,2,0,B|56:284|40:176,1,180,8|0
64,100,86795,1,0
216,152,86995,6,0,B|316:184|332:292,1,180,8|0
268,344,87595,1,0
330,279,87795,2,0,B|434:251|462:159,2,180,8|0|8
240,256,88795,1,0
204,144,88995,1,0
288,64,89195,1,0
288,64,89295,1,0
288,64,89395,2,0,B|384:64,1,90,8|0
460,100,89795,1,0
344,216,89995,1,0
344,216,90095,1,0
344,216,90195,6,0,B|240:248|176:168,1,180,4|0
68,180,90795,1,0
56,292,90995,2,0,B|160:260|224:340,1,180,8|0
308,340,91595,1,0
284,252,91795,2,0,B|252:212|208:196,1,90,8|0
144,140,92195,2,0,B|188:112|196:64,1,90
348,80,92595,2,0,B|304:108|296:156,1,90,8|0
360,216,92995,6,0,B|408:212|448:244,2,90,0|0|8
272,292,93595,1,0
184,216,93795,1,0
108,304,93995,1,0
184,216,94195,2,0,B|160:36,1,180,8|0
48,72,94795,1,0
100,144,94995,5,4
64,224,95395,1,0
108,304,95795,1,4
may i make taiko diff ?
Topic Starter

Cuvelia wrote: 3mp4m

may i make taiko diff ?
Sure :3 if you want

raririn wrote: 2a5t1o

Cuvelia wrote: 3mp4m

may i make taiko diff ?
Sure :3 if you want
thx raririn !! :3

http://puu.sh/PqS7
From forum pm.



[General]



[Ts8zs' Easy]
没啥可吐槽的...



[Flask's Normal]
  1. 00:41:395(5) - 这个Slider好猎奇
  2. 00:44:995 - 这里节奏有些诡异 建议这么摆
  3. 01:16:195(4) - NC 否则后面combo太长


[Hard]
  1. 00:15:795(8) -建议换成一个1/1Slider
  2. 00:18:995(8,9) - 建议调换个位置...
  3. 00:38:195(4) - 把finish放在00:38:995?
  4. 01:17:395(1,2,3) - 弄成关于y轴对称?
  5. 01:29:795(4,5,6,7,8) - 这连打摆的略违和...
  6. 01:32:595(1) - 这里NC干什么...删了吧
  7. 01:33:995(3) - 这个clap应该在01:34:195


[ 神麻婆Collab]
  1. 00:19:795 - 建议这么下节奏
  2. 01:07:395 -
  3. 01:09:195(10,11) - 逆天的spacing


mod完毕...进步还是不小的,继续努力吧 stared~
渣mod 其实我就是骗kds来的
._.槽点略多(我:喂我也是新人)

[Hard]
00:32:595 (1)、 01:23:795 (1)、 01:30:195 (8) - finish 音效?
01:04:395 (7) - 和⑤stack怎么样._.
01:10:995 (1) - x=260,y=204,后面的跟着做微调

[Normal]
这normal不让新手活
OD=3(?)
00:41:395 (5) - 好的我会自重的._.

[Collab]
因为不会做insane难度所以这里不mod hitobj了
每个 麻婆的部分最好用SB标注一下 ,这样可以让玩的人吐槽对人吧(雾)。

[Easy]
呃反正做得比我好就是了233

gl~
Oh hi there

[Flask's Normal]
00:40:595 (4) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so beginners are able to click the next note easier?
01:13:795 (1) - Why new combo?


[Hard]
00:37:395 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying
00:48:995 (3,4) - Why jump? This jump seems suprising for me


[Collab]
* Please add the SB name for knowing who is make the part of this diff


That's all I got, good luck

a3272509123 wrote: 73t4m

From forum pm.



[General]
[Flask's Normal]
  1. 00:41:395(5) - 这个Slider好猎奇 改了
  2. 00:44:995 - 这里节奏有些诡异 建议这么摆 行w
  3. 01:16:195(4) - NC 否则后面combo太长
我覺得還好o3o

Leorda wrote: 6bp3m

[Flask's Normal]
00:40:595 (4) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so beginners are able to click the next note easier? Okay :3
01:13:795 (1) - Why new combo? Ohhh I forget that orz

384059043 wrote: 3l336t

[Normal]
这normal不让新手活
OD=3(?)我覺得4就夠了:\
00:41:395 (5) - 好的我会自重的._. 改了QAQ竟然被兩個人同時吐槽
Thanks~~~
http://puu.sh/Rc5W
Great map!! not much changes~

[General]
Your audio lead in is not consistent across difficulties, I dont know if this is intentional or not :o

[Collab]
00:19:795 - http://puu.sh/RRtc rhythm like this fits the music better imo
00:46:995 - x180 y172

[Hard]
00:15:795 (8) - x144 y192
00:43:795 - nc
01:20:595 (1) - x240 y 56

[Normal]
01:14:595 (1) - Remove nc

[Easy]
Looks good!

Good luck in rankings! well done!
req from QQ grouprandomly

[General]

  1. 删蓝线书签
[Easy]

  1. 00:19:795 (1) - 结尾clap
[Normal]

  1. 00:16:195 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 00:16:595 (2) - +NC
  3. 00:18:195 (1) - -NC
  4. 00:25:395 (5) - clap
  5. 00:30:995 (1) - -NC
  6. 00:33:395 (3) - 开头clap
  7. 00:34:195 (1) - -NC
  8. 00:34:995 (1) - -NC
  9. 00:35:795 (1) - clap
  10. 00:49:795 (1) - -NC
  11. 01:02:995 (1) - -NC
  12. 01:07:395 (1) - -NC
  13. 01:07:795 (3) - +NC
  14. 01:09:395 (1) - -NC
  15. 01:10:195 (3) - clap
  16. 01:14:595 (1) - ^
  17. 01:18:995 (1) - ^
  18. 01:32:995 (1) - ^
  19. 01:33:395 (7) - +NC
  20. 01:35:395 (6) - 去掉clap
[Hard]

  1. 00:26:195 (1) - 和(9)挨太近 改一下位置会好看
  2. 00:27:795 (1) - 去掉NC
  3. 00:32:595 (1) - ^
  4. 00:35:795 (1) - 三个音都whistle吧
  5. 00:36:595 (3) - 结尾whistle
  6. 00:37:395 (4) - 可以考虑0.5x+NC
  7. 00:38:595 - +note
  8. 00:43:795 (8) - +NC
  9. 01:10:795 (9,1) - 挨太近 改一下位置会好看
  10. 01:12:995 (4) - +clap
  11. 01:13:195 (5) - 结尾clap
  12. 01:13:795 (1) - -NC
  13. 01:14:195 (3) - +NC
  14. 01:20:595 (1) - 同把中间加whistle
  15. 01:21:395 (3) - 同把结尾加whistle
  16. 01:22:195 (4) - 开头whistle
  17. 01:22:195 (4) - 可以考虑0.5x+NC
  18. 01:25:395 (5) - +NC;和01:24:595 (3) - 挨太近 改位置
  19. 01:26:395 - +note
  20. 01:30:195 (8) - +NC
  21. 01:32:595 (1) - -NC
  22. 01:32:995 (1) - -NC
  23. 01:33:395 (2) - +NC
  24. 01:33:795 (3) - 改成normal-normal-clap这样
  25. 01:34:595 (3) - +NC
  26. 01:34:995 (1) - -NC
[Collab]

  1. 00:12:695 (2) - clap
  2. 00:16:395 (1) - 结尾clap
  3. 00:24:595 (6) - NC
  4. 00:38:195 (5) - clap
  5. 00:39:395 (6) - 整形 至少让它和(7)不挨着
  6. 00:50:995 (1) - clap or fin
  7. 01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - 在这张图里显得有点略坑了 试着别摆那么遮
  8. 01:22:995 (11) - clap
  9. 01:34:995 (1,2,3) - 可以考虑再摆近一点或者做成大跳 这种spacing不怎么爽(被打
早灣 >w<
Request from flask醬.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general] 5x5m35

  1. DaXia's BG.jpg的規格怪怪的噢;w; 800x600 或 1024x768 ~
  2. osb.刪掉它吧!

[Ts8zs' Easy] 183h67

  1. 嘛...因為後面的是copy加翻轉的 所以前面mod不出什麼後面也跟著mod不出什麼 ;w; ...個人不喜歡copy一大串的
  2. 對了~那個bookmark可以刪掉~(被打

[Flask's Normal] 6s5s5u

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:26:395 -

  2. 咱發現咱不吐槽那bookmark會很難過 ;w; (被打
  3. 00:23:795 (3) - 第2個點在x:232 y:152 ?~ 若有改00:24:595 (4) - 最後1個點移到x:196 y:304
  4. 00:30:995 (1) - 第2個點在x:40 y:224 最後1個點在x:68 y:284 然後把00:31:795 (2) - 移到x:152 y:324 ,第2個點移到x:184 y:280
  5. 00:44:995 (1) - 第2個點在x:448 y:188 紅點在x:400 y:236
  6. 00:47:395 (5) - 本身移到x:56 y:232 , 第2個點 x:24 y:276
  7. 01:06:195 (5) - 第2個點x:48 y:96

[Hard] k6p2p

  1. bookmark >w<!!!!
  2. 00:18:995 (8) - ctrl+R ? 有改的話 00:19:395 (9) - 也ctrl+R 感覺flow比較順暢?~
  3. 00:25:995 (9,1) - 嘛 雖說這邊開始緩速 但咱覺得這的間距可以用沒緩速前的 >w<
  4. 00:43:795 (8) - NC~ 因為00:46:995 (1) - 這NC了 ;w;
  5. 01:04:595 (1) - 拉好看一點吧?~;w;
  6. 01:10:795 (9,1) - 同00:25:995 (9,1) -
  7. 01:19:795 (8) - 突然的大跳 NC ?~
  8. 01:30:195 (8) - NC

[collab] 1f5s58

  1. 無用的綠線:
    00:41:595 -

  2. 咱覺得可以加名字進SB來顯示哪部分是誰做的~

  3. 00:03:395 (1,3) - 交換NC
  4. 00:27:595 (4,1,2,3,4) - lol! 弄點彎曲或變化吧 ;w;
  5. 00:38:995 (5) - 咱kiai time的開始都習慣設置成NC
  6. 00:46:595 (5,1) - 讓(1)重疊在前面的(4)上吧?! 然後(5)移到x:80 y:124 ,咱感覺比較好看
  7. 01:02:995 (1) - x:424 y:156
  8. 01:22:995 (11,1) - 交換NC 然後01:23:795 (2) - NC
good song & good luck~
加油 >w<!

l1106188 wrote: 4l4u33

[Ts8zs' Easy] 183h67

  1. 嘛...因為後面的是copy加翻轉的 所以前面mod不出什麼後面也跟著mod不出什麼 ;w; ...個人不喜歡copy一大串的
  2. 對了~那個bookmark可以刪掉~(被打
哼哼他对本来的不满意哼 叫我remap个1星的哼
raririn你快update啦
[bx1989]
- tag bx1989 in all diffs
00:16:195 - according to the clap like sound in the music use k here?
00:22:595 - ^
00:34:995 - there're only 1/2 vocal notes so the transition in the 3rd/4th notes doesn't sound very well, try kkddd
00:36:595 - kkddk?
00:54:195 - ^
00:56:595 - the first triplet should go up and the second one goes down as indicated by the music, ddk kkd fits better
01:26:195 - the stream should stop here like the vocal
01:32:995 - you don't need to stream this too much
- Is it really necessary to put so many finishes in the middle?

[Lia's Taiko]
- tag Lia in all diffs
well made, good job
算了= = 就这样吧...把我名字去掉好么...去掉就送你颗kd= =
來囉~raririn我已經把bx1989上進Tags裡了 不用幫我調了>w<

Code
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: 1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38544
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 144,58195,96144
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Electric Angel
Artist:Hatsune Miku
Creator:raririn
Version:Flask's Normal
Source:Yasuo-P
Tags:vocaloid vocaloid2 ts8zs Flask Strawberry Fionana Cuvelia bx1989

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"code1.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,51795,56995
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 ()
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
595,400,4,1,0,60,1,0
13395,-100,4,1,0,39,0,0
26195,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
32595,-100,4,1,0,55,0,0
38995,-100,4,1,0,65,0,1
51395,-100,4,1,0,39,0,0
70995,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
77395,-100,4,1,0,55,0,0
83795,-100,4,1,0,65,0,1
95795,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 254,188,135
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 0,128,124

[HitObjects]
368,96,13395,2,0,B|400:148|368:196,1,100,0|8
312,272,14195,1,0
232,332,14595,2,0,B|180:360|132:332,1,100,8|0
180,244,15395,2,0,B|132:216|84:246,1,100,8|0
44,152,16195,1,8
44,52,16595,6,0,B|96:24|148:56,1,100,4|8
220,112,17395,2,0,B|276:136|332:104,1,100,0|8
416,104,18195,6,0,B|416:152,2,50,0|0|8
500,156,18995,2,0,B|500:106,2,50,0|0|8
440,236,19795,6,0,B|332:236,1,100,0|8
344,336,20595,2,0,B|244:336,1,100,0|8
148,360,21395,1,0
48,360,21795,1,8
4,268,22195,2,0,B|-12:212|12:152,1,100,0|8
44,72,22995,5,0
140,40,23395,1,8
188,128,23795,2,0,B|232:152|232:220,1,100,0|8
132,212,24595,2,0,B|136:280|196:304,1,100,0|8
256,360,25395,1,0
352,360,25795,6,0,B|400:380|448:360,1,100,8|4
416,164,26995,1,2
232,84,27795,1,2
352,244,28595,1,2
252,252,28995,6,0,B|196:276|140:248,1,100,0|2
140,152,29795,1,0
68,80,30195,2,0,B|36:92|8:104,2,50,2|0|0
68,180,30995,6,0,B|40:224|68:284,1,100,2|0
152,324,31795,2,0,B|180:280|152:220,1,100,2|0
252,224,32595,6,0,B|360:224,1,100,4|8
400,224,33195,1,0
448,224,33395,2,0,B|464:176|444:116,1,100,0|8
404,36,34195,6,0,B|368:72,1,50
320,72,34595,1,8
296,168,34995,2,0,B|236:168,1,50
260,216,35395,2,0,B|208:240,1,50,8|0
256,192,35795,12,0,38195
72,308,38995,6,0,B|72:204,1,100,4|8
116,184,39595,1,0
164,168,39795,2,0,B|216:156|272:168,1,100,0|8
364,168,40595,2,0,B|400:184|428:156,2,50,0|0|8
348,268,41395,2,0,B|364:320|364:320|364:320|340:372|340:372,1,100,0|8
252,332,42195,6,0,B|200:356|152:332,1,100,0|8
204,248,42995,2,0,B|204:144,1,100,0|8
256,56,43795,2,0,B|336:56,1,50
296,104,44195,2,0,B|352:120,1,50,8|0
328,164,44595,1,0
424,184,44995,6,0,B|472:184,2,50,8|0|0
356,260,45795,2,0,B|304:284,1,50,8|0
268,304,46195,1,0
192,368,46595,1,8
144,280,46995,1,0
56,232,47395,2,0,B|24:276|52:326,2,100,8|0|8
124,160,48595,6,0,B|184:120,1,50
212,112,48995,2,0,B|276:112,2,50,8|0|0
292,176,49795,6,0,B|336:228|336:228,1,50,8|0
356,252,50195,2,0,B|328:320|276:336,2,100,0|8|4
120,136,58195,6,0,B|160:132|196:76|196:76|232:136|276:140,1,200,4|0
348,204,59395,1,8
300,292,59795,2,0,B|280:352|224:368,1,100,0|8
140,344,60595,1,0
48,308,60995,6,0,B|0:268|0:192,1,100,8|0
92,176,61795,2,0,B|140:216|140:292,1,100,8|0
224,212,62595,2,0,B|268:172,1,50,8|0
308,160,62995,6,0,B|340:212|320:272,1,100,0|8
416,292,63795,2,0,B|396:236|416:180,1,100,0|8
452,104,64595,5,4
372,44,64995,1,8
280,84,65395,1,0
192,40,65795,2,0,B|140:68,1,50,8|0
100,52,66195,2,0,B|48:96|72:180,2,100,0|8|0
164,128,67395,5,8
192,168,67595,1,0
212,212,67795,2,0,B|204:280|164:324,1,100,0|8
88,348,68595,2,0,B|16:348,1,50
16,304,68995,1,8
72,220,69395,6,0,B|56:160,1,50
108,176,69795,2,0,B|116:124,1,50,8|0
160,148,70195,1,0
200,56,70595,2,0,B|256:16|320:16,1,100,8|0
424,168,71795,5,2
280,308,72595,1,2
160,148,73395,1,2
228,224,73795,6,0,B|140:280,1,100,0|2
84,196,74595,5,0
136,108,74995,1,2
220,52,75395,2,0,B|272:84|344:44,1,100,0|2
400,112,76195,1,0
400,112,76395,1,0
400,112,76595,1,2
480,180,76995,2,0,B|496:236,1,50
508,276,77395,6,0,B|444:272|368:240,1,100,4|8
316,224,78195,1,0
216,224,78595,1,8
148,148,78995,6,0,B|40:148,1,100,0|8
80,244,79795,1,0
4,312,80195,1,8
256,192,80595,12,8,82995
236,276,83795,6,0,B|196:328|136:332,1,100,4|8
116,296,84395,1,0
124,248,84595,2,0,B|60:232|8:272,1,100,0|8
44,160,85395,2,0,B|84:80,1,50
104,148,85795,2,0,B|148:104,1,50,8|0
184,136,86195,1,0
252,52,86595,6,0,B|320:72|344:136,1,100,8|0
244,160,87395,2,0,B|288:216|348:212,1,100,8|0
412,160,88195,1,8
484,228,88595,1,0
424,308,88995,1,8
348,244,89395,1,0
324,148,89795,6,0,B|252:136|212:172,1,100,8|4
220,260,90595,2,0,B|164:260,2,50,8|0|0
284,340,91395,2,0,B|348:360|392:336,1,100,8|0
448,264,92195,1,8
384,184,92595,1,0
336,96,92995,5,8
264,24,93395,1,0
164,20,93795,2,0,B|100:16|60:68,1,100,8|0
152,116,94595,2,0,B|184:144|176:180,1,50,8|0
196,204,94995,1,0
168,300,95395,1,8
264,280,95795,1,4
hey there :3 you Flask requested a mod in my modqueue

General:
> delete unused .osb
> DaXia's BG.jpg has a strange size which is not perfectly 4:3, and there are bars at the edges. on the right side is also a icon from some... picture edit program? this tiny little icon with the arrows in 4 directions.. :0

[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:19:795 (1) - add clap on the end of the slider?
00:46:995 (2) - 1 more reverse arrow? would fit to the music..

[Flask's Normal]
00:18:195 (1) - delete NC (a 2-combo is even for normal kinda short)
00:34:995 (1) - ^
00:47:395 (6) -
SPOILER
you did it like this:

but it would look better if you adjust it perfect to the circle :3
00:49:795 (3) - delete NC
01:13:795 (1) - ^
nice diff!

[Hard]
( finally a diff from the creator himself :) )
00:38:995 (1) - add clap?
00:40:995 (3) - ^
00:41:595 (1) - delete note?
00:49:795 (6) - clap?
00:50:995 (3) - hold shift and replace this circle till he is in a straight line under (2)
01:00:995 (9,10,1) - spacing is weird there..
01:05:995 (4) - 1 tiny grid down
01:10:995 (1) - add clap on the sliderstart?
01:11:795 (2) - ^
01:12:595 (3) - ^
01:13:195 (5) - add clap on the sliderend
01:31:795 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - please change this, if you play this one with the classic osu! skin you won't be able to not miss!
01:32:595 (1) - i know you set this NC for better reading, but if you change that part anyways remove NC!
01:33:795 (3) - remove clap from the reverse arrow
nice diff, really fun to play!

[Collab]
00:38:195 (5) - clap or finish?
00:48:995 (2,3) - you could mirror them perfect *nazi*
01:07:395 (1,2,3) - this slider (3) starts on a red tick and is a downbeat slider. It doesn't really fit to the music, i suggest to make a triple out of this and then add a slider (4) on the next white tick:
>needs a collab SB! :D




really nice mapset :3 take star ~*
好我路过打酱油

SPOILER
[Collab]
00:20:895 (5) - x:360 y:320
00:20:995 (6) - x:344 y:344
00:22:795 (5) - x:32 y:336
00:24:795 (7) - x:98 :72
00:25:395 (10) - x:32 y:128
01:07:595 (3) - orz感觉这个节奏好怪
嘿嘿你让我mod我就只能搞出点这些哈哈哈- -

[Hard]
00:25:995 (9,1) - 这俩拉开点?
00:39:595 (2) - x:164 y:144
00:47:395 (3) - x:192 y:240
00:47:595 (4) - x:288 y:240
01:01:395 (1) - x:168 y:268
01:05:995 (4) - x:276 y:156 跟01:05:195 (2) - 重合一下如何
01:10:795 (9,1) - 还是拉开一点? 是不是DS的原因。。
01:19:595 (7) - x:212 y:148
哈哈你看我天天一直都这样挑刺- -

------

后面的我就不管了我肯定挑不出什么orz
把我diff名字去掉好么...去掉就送你颗kd= =
:?:
..........2KD位。。。
坏蛋;_;.....orz
一听就先想到了哲学。 我已经坏掉了
SPOILER
这是我的mod
[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:20:595 - 好多clap,这里也加上把
00:58:195 (1,3) - 开头的copy最容易被人体验出来,1,3也竖起来把。会感觉不同 (我就经常那么干)
01:18:995 (2) - 完全在中间会更好,不只是一个slider的开头
[Flask's Normal]
00:28:995 (1) - 结尾+finish
00:35:395 (4) - 是刻意的放在最中间?(是的话没对齐)。看起来没问题,玩起来给我这个4向右移动的不舒适感,向左移动点或者ctrl+r平行3
01:13:795 (4) - 找个更好的位子把,孤零零的一个回跳,可以改成01:16:995 (7,1)这样的两个slider
[hard]
00:18:995 (8,9) - ctrl+r
00:26:195 (1) - 前面6,7,8,9已经是一个不错5角星,奇怪的一个ds出现个1 浪费了不错的梗
00:46:795 (6) - 扔到00:47:795 (5)位子叠加?,移动路线太不顺手了 把5角星从2或3的位子开始转
00:48:995 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 依旧奇怪的移动路线,改变了三次鼠标方向,00:49:995 (7,1) - ctrl+r
01:10:995 (1,2) - :roll: 比之前的好点,但是还是好明显的copy痕迹 (旋转下就看不出了,我也经常那么干的)
[Collab]
;) good jb
01:34:195 (5) - 奇怪的回跳,去和2,3,4做个四边形啊,刚好6是升调 多个不错的跳(越到结尾越要用心,给人印象最深刻)
Topic Starter

wantuole wrote: 525w37

一听就先想到了哲学。 我已经坏掉了
SPOILER
这是我的mod
[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:20:595 - 好多clap,这里也加上把
00:58:195 (1,3) - 开头的copy最容易被人体验出来,1,3也竖起来把。会感觉不同 (我就经常那么干)
01:18:995 (2) - 完全在中间会更好,不只是一个slider的开头
[Flask's Normal]
00:28:995 (1) - 结尾+finish
00:35:395 (4) - 是刻意的放在最中间?(是的话没对齐)。看起来没问题,玩起来给我这个4向右移动的不舒适感,向左移动点或者ctrl+r平行3
01:13:795 (4) - 找个更好的位子把,孤零零的一个回跳,可以改成01:16:995 (7,1)这样的两个slider
[hard]
00:18:995 (8,9) - ctrl+r
00:26:195 (1) - 前面6,7,8,9已经是一个不错5角星,奇怪的一个ds出现个1 浪费了不错的梗
00:46:795 (6) - 扔到00:47:795 (5)位子叠加?,移动路线太不顺手了 把5角星从2或3的位子开始转
00:48:995 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 依旧奇怪的移动路线,改变了三次鼠标方向,00:49:995 (7,1) - ctrl+r
01:10:995 (1,2) - :roll: 比之前的好点,但是还是好明显的copy痕迹 (旋转下就看不出了,我也经常那么干的)
[Collab]
;) good jb
01:34:195 (5) - 奇怪的回跳,去和2,3,4做个四边形啊,刚好6是升调 多个不错的跳(越到结尾越要用心,给人印象最深刻)
谢mod:3
T_T
Topic Starter

Flask wrote: 5l1l4k

T_T
拉出来了 周末更新:3
現在title是不是該改成Yasuo-P啊 / \
Excellent map, keep it up n 3 n ~
Topic Starter

Rin Okumura x3 wrote: 2826n

Excellent map, keep it up n 3 n ~
thank you :3

wantuole wrote: 525w37

一听就先想到了哲学。 我已经坏掉了
SPOILER
[Flask's Normal]
00:28:995 (1) - 结尾+finish 略吵 不適合
00:35:395 (4) - 是刻意的放在最中间?(是的话没对齐)。看起来没问题,玩起来给我这个4向右移动的不舒适感,向左移动点或者ctrl+r平行3 不是刻意的 也沒太大問題 所以不修改
01:13:795 (4) - 找个更好的位子把,孤零零的一个回跳,可以改成01:16:995 (7,1)这样的两个slider 沒有太大的必要就是
Normal

先留上,等回复www

歌曲总体声音大,音效40%的话有些小H&I

Hard
Hard
00:17:595 (4) - 滑条变成两个note然后和00:17:995 (6) - 弄个3小跳?
00:27:595 - 缺个note的感觉
00:29:995 (4) - http://puu.sh/1cEZ0 这样排列好些
00:39:795 (3) - spacing
00:41:395 (5,1) - 这两个note换成一个滑条试试
00:42:995 (6) - spacing
00:45:995 (4) - ^
01:00:995 (9) - nc
01:01:395 (1) - remove nc
01:01:395 (1) - spacing
01:10:995 - 到01:11:395 - 换成一个0.5减速的滑条试试?
01:12:395 - 缺个note的感觉
01:26:995 (2) - spacing


Insane

Insane
00:32:595 (2,3) - 不符合节奏啊
00:35:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里连打总感觉不适合的样子,怪怪的
00:38:595 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是
00:41:395 (3) - 喂喂,滑条的节点过分了啊
00:48:195 (3,4,5,6) - 这里也有些违和...
01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - 总感觉很坑...
01:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不适合连打吧...
01:34:995 (1,2,3) - 这个ds大一些吧...和上面太像了,会坑人..



真不知道为啥你们的跳安排的那么好,求解OTZ.....
From my mod queue!

[Geral]

Great map
I like yours Hitsounds sytle^^

i did my best to mod

[Collab]

01:09:195 (8) - A circle here instead of a slider make smore sense to me IMO
01:12:595 (1) - NC here because white tick, and song feels like a new melody, makes sense a NC to me
01:15:795 (1) - NC here for the same reasons
01:15:795 - Hitsound volume 60% here why? More feeling xD
01:16:595 - Back to 50% volume here
01:26:195 (9) - its fine! but maybe make the slider end 01:26:395? and add circle or slider in 01:26:595?
01:25:395 - Its fine! but if was me i change a little just to put a new combo new here
01:31:795 - NC here?
01:34:995 - hitsounds volume 70% for help player feel the spacing

[Hard]

00:14:995 (1) - New combo in my opinion. I think not wrong your combo colors (your style) but i gonna leave here my
suggestion about the New combos.
00:18:195 (1) - New combo
00:24:595 (1) - New combo
00:35:795 - add hitsounds volume to 60 - 65%?
00:37:395 - back to 55% volume
01:04:395 (7) - this circle dont get a BIG overlap because of 01:03:595 (5)?
Put 01:05:195 (2) in same placement of 01:05:995 (4)
01:09:395 (5) - New combo
01:18:995 (4) - New combo here? And remove new combo here 01:19:795 (1) ?
01:20:595 (1) - 00:35:795 - add hitsounds volume to 60 - 65%?
01:22:195 (4) - back to 55% volume
01:34:996 - hitsounds volume 65% for help player feel the spacing

[Flask's Normal]

00:28:595 (4,1) - Line them, same you did in 00:25:395 (5,1)
00:28:995 (1) - start the slider in center GRID line (vertical line)
00:29:795 (2) - in line with the end of the slider 00:28:995 (1). Why?? for space between 00:29:795 (2,1) be equal as 00:30:195 (3,1).
(ofc you need to fix the spacing in 00:30:195 (3) after that)
00:31:795 (2) - this slider seems weird comparative to 00:30:995 (1)
00:43:795 (1) - New combo Imo
01:10:595 (1) - IN my opinion a NC here, and remove new combo here 01:11:795 (2)
01:25:395 (1) - new combo

[Ts8zs's Easy]

00:46:995 (2,3) - this is how you have http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/455931. THis is how i think it should be http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/455933
01:30:195 (1) - this slider 1 grid up?
01:31:795 (2) - This sldier 1 grid up?
01:31:795 (2,3) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/455937 make like this again

R e d wrote: 41131d

[Flask's Normal]

00:28:595 (4,1) - Line them, same you did in 00:25:395 (5,1) Nope
00:28:995 (1) - start the slider in center GRID line (vertical line) ^
00:29:795 (2) - in line with the end of the slider 00:28:995 (1). Why?? for space between 00:29:795 (2,1) be equal as 00:30:195 (3,1).
(ofc you need to fix the spacing in 00:30:195 (3) after that) That's nothing with the spacing, and I think it's good now. Nope
00:31:795 (2) - this slider seems weird comparative to 00:30:995 (1) Nothing~~
00:43:795 (1) - New combo Imo no
01:10:595 (1) - IN my opinion a NC here, and remove new combo here 01:11:795 (2) k
01:25:395 (1) - new combono

@raririn: 01:10:595 (4,1) - 幫我switch nc 就不附code了
Topic Starter
changed some and ed~
too lazy to reply , orz
From my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:18:195 (4) - can you just stick to use 3-hit slider? sudden 4-hit slider would be confusing for noob players
  2. 00:34:195 (2) - ^
  3. 01:02:995 (4) - ^
  4. 01:12:595 (2) - 1grid right, move it to center
  5. 01:15:795 (4) - well 2 grid left ^
  6. 01:18:995 (2) - maybe you know what i'll mention with it
  7. 01:34:995 (4) - your copying style is too boring, remove the arrow and add a 2/1 slider for better mood instead


[Normal]
  1. 00:26:995 (2,3,4) - add finish instead, whistle is not that strong to empgasize the music imo
  2. 00:28:995 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^ for same points, or at least finish at 00:29:395 - . because you added at 00:26:195 -
  3. 00:32:595 - use soft finish here or increase the volume
  4. 00:38:995 - ^
  5. 01:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:26:995 (2,3,4) - and 00:28:995 (1,2,3,1,2) -
  6. 01:17:395 (1) - you know what i'll mention with it
  7. 01:35:795 (7) - add a 2/1 slider from here or 1/1 with an arrow
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:795 (8) - 1grid left,up for perfect stack
  2. 00:18:995 (8) - it's a bit hard for a Hard diff, ctrl+g plz
  3. 00:19:395 (9) - ^, if you did
  4. 00:30:195 - no sound here? add at least clap but i recommend to add finish here
  5. 00:36:995 - whistle
  6. 00:38:195 - ^
  7. 01:10:795 (9) - move it to (360,244), keep ur distance till 01:10:995 (1) - . and overlapped note sucks
  8. 01:21:795 - whistle
  9. 01:22:195 (4) - whistle for head and body
  10. 01:33:795 (3) - remove clap from arrow, add at tail
[Collab]
  1. 00:38:195 (5) - whistle
  2. 01:22:995 (11) - ^
Good luck with rank
?结尾为可考虑
*结尾为强烈建议


[General]
标出collab哪部分是谁做的(例如xx:xx:xxx-xx:xx:xxx by xxx)
虽然我知道哪部分是谁做的,但其他人第一眼看下来可能会搞混

[Ts8zs'Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - 来回4次打起来不是很舒服...
01:02:995 (4) - ^
01:18:995 (2) - ^

[Flask's Normal]
OD4→3
00:35:395 (4) - 放左下好点
00:35:795 (1) - whistle
00:48:995 (2,3) - 间距问题,3拉远点
01:01:795 (2) - 尾巴漏了clap
01:35:795 (7) - 用soft的finish

[Hard]
HP6→5
00:18:595 (7) - 尾巴漏clap
00:29:395 (3) - ^
00:37:395 (4) - 尾巴的finish换成whistle
01:10:995 (1) - 间距?
01:35:795 (3) - 用soft的finish

[Collab]
音效听起来好乱@ @
统一一下2/4clap吧

00:20:195 (3) - 蓝线停,白线加个note?
00:38:195 (5) - whistle
01:22:995 (11) - ^
01:35:795 (3) - 用soft的finish

;)
Mod Request from my queue~ <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[bx1989's Taiko]

00:02:995 - k
00:05:995 - k

[Lia's Taiko]

00:22:795 - k

sorry i just can found this...
raririn大>.<
極短mod(?) go~~~
collab
這圖打起來很舒服,因為OD是6的緣故,所以1pc差点ss了...
http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/474578
00:10:595 (5) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/474580 試試這樣放?
00:20:195 (3) - 我總覺得這slider放得怪怪的...試試用1/2的代替 8-)
00:35:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放直一点 http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/474581
00:38:195 (5) - clap比whistle好一点...如果保留whistle,建議40%

給力好圖 :)
good luck :D

mintong89 wrote: 4y5840

[Lia's Taiko]

00:22:795 - k - done
thx for modding ~

update ~ http://puu.sh/1kt8L

and new BG ~ http://puu.sh/1kt8U
Hi

[General]
You must change the Artist. Since the Guideline got changed, the Maker (Yasuo-P) must be set as Artist (and add Hatsune Miku as Tags).

[bx1989's Taiko]
00:00:595 - Set the Volume of the red Line at 85%.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:02:995 (1) - k
00:29:795 - Remove this green Line.
00:30:158 - ^
00:53:595 (1) - k
01:15:595 (3) - d
01:15:155 - Remove the green Lines here.
01:17:195 - The Kiai comes very sudden, start it at 01:23:795.
01:23:795 (1) - D
01:23:895 (2) - Remove it.
01:26:295 (2) - Remove it, the long stream isn't neccessary and this d sounds too much.
01:28:595 - Remove the three green Lines here, they are unused (and the Kiai Flash is not rankable)
01:34:295 (3) - Same like 01:26:295 (2).
01:34:495 (2) - ^

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:36:695 - Circle with k
00:36:795 (1) - k
00:50:595 (1) - k
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume.
01:22:595 (3) - k

Nice Taiko Diffs :)
Good Luck ^^

Stefan wrote: 72304b

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
If volume control had not considered for ranked,I would remove green line
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume. - no change
00:00:595 (1) - D - no change
00:36:695 - Circle with k - done
00:36:795 (1) - k - done
00:50:595 (1) - k - done
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume. - no change
01:22:595 (3) - k - done
thx for modding ~ >.<

update ~ http://puu.sh/1kJip
Here's my mod request~only suggest

Ts8zs'Easy
最开头不放一个spinner么?
01:35:795 (5) - finish

Flask's Normal
同easy,前面空太多了,最好有个spinner
00:27:795 (3) - clap
01:12:595 (3) - clap

Hard
最前面同上两个难度,我就不多说了
00:32:595 (1) - remove NC
00:34:195 (4) - 如果你按照上面做了,这里加NC
00:41:595 (1) - remove
01:32:595 (1) - remove NC

Collab
00:50:195 (1) - remove NC
01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - 这里感觉改成4个NOTE的JUMP更好点


恩,基本上没啥大问题了,打起来还是挺顺手的,Good map。
先占坑补星我错了(跪
Topic Starter

Mystica wrote: 165z3a

先占坑补星我错了(跪
跪了三个
其实不用星啊真的
Hi~ Hi~
Let's mod!

[General]

why don't you add "bx1989" in tags?
why don't you add some Finish follow music ? like Easy mod

[Ts8zs' Easy]

00:34:195 (2) - add Clap at both of slider ?
00:38:995 (1) - add Finish at start of slider ? and adjust DS
01:02:995 (4) - same as 00:34:195 (2) -
01:17:395 (1) - same as 00:38:995 (1) -
01:18:995 (2) - same as 00:34:195 (2) -
01:23:795 (1) - add Finish at start of slider ?

[Flask's Normal]

unused inherited points
  1. 01:26:395 -
00:15:395 (4) - Ctrl + G and adjust next notes? just suggestion
00:24:595 (4) - ^
00:29:795 (2) - move to (136,156)
01:00:595 (4) - move to (136,356)
01:16:995 (7) - keep DS
01:26:595 (1) - ^
01:30:595 (2) - 1 grid right

[Hard]

Unsnapped inherited point:
SPOILER
01:25:404 -
00:21:195 (4) - 2 grid down?
00:22:995 (2) - I think ctrl + G is better good. consider pattern
01:23:395 (5) - remove this note ? consistent
01:25:395 (1) - NC
01:29:895 (5) - move to (352,304)

[Collab]

AR +1 ? I think AR 9 is more fit with this diff's pattern
00:19:895 (2) - use 2 hit circle instead slider
01:08:595 (1) - NC ? cuz notice for heterogeneous pattern



P.S : Taiko diff's sound is lower than music. That's so unplayable. Souond volume up pls. for example, KIAI Time's volume 95%

:OO sorry for poor mod.

wmfchris wrote: 1d5f1w

[bx1989]
- tag bx1989 in all diffs
00:16:195 - according to the clap like sound in the music use k here?
00:22:595 - ^
00:34:995 - there're only 1/2 vocal notes so the transition in the 3rd/4th notes doesn't sound very well, try kkddd
00:36:595 - kkddk?
00:54:195 - ^
00:56:595 - the first triplet should go up and the second one goes down as indicated by the music, ddk kkd fits better
01:26:195 - the stream should stop here like the vocal
01:32:995 - you don't need to stream this too much
- Is it really necessary to put so many finishes in the middle?

[Lia's Taiko]
- tag Lia in all diffs
well made, good job
thx for modding~> <

Stefan wrote: 72304b

Hi

[General]
You must change the Artist. Since the Guideline got changed, the Maker (Yasuo-P) must be set as Artist (and add Hatsune Miku as Tags).

[bx1989's Taiko]
00:00:595 - Set the Volume of the red Line at 85%.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:02:995 (1) - k
00:29:795 - Remove this green Line.
00:30:158 - ^
00:53:595 (1) - k
01:15:595 (3) - d
01:15:155 - Remove the green Lines here.
01:17:195 - The Kiai comes very sudden, start it at 01:23:795.
01:23:795 (1) - D
01:23:895 (2) - Remove it.
01:26:295 (2) - Remove it, the long stream isn't neccessary and this d sounds too much.
01:28:595 - Remove the three green Lines here, they are unused (and the Kiai Flash is not rankable)
01:34:295 (3) - Same like 01:26:295 (2).
01:34:495 (2) - ^

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:36:695 - Circle with k
00:36:795 (1) - k
00:50:595 (1) - k
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume.
01:22:595 (3) - k

Nice Taiko Diffs :)
Good Luck ^^
thanks very much~
[Ts8zs's Easy]
你这密度……你确定不要在白线上放多几个Circle之类的么?
00:18:195 (4) - 这个多加一个折返箭头?配合以相同频率发出来的“NaI”,并增加和下一个滑条的连接性
00:34:195 (2) - 这个为啥不做成和y轴平行的呢?或许让1和2的鼠标轨迹成一个椭圆?
以上建议同样适用于后半截……反正你的物件都是几乎一样的……好懒啊~

[Flask's Normal]
一看你这个星星数……无力吐槽……到底哪里出错了?
其实这个图还OK啦~只是或许注意下光标的轨迹会更好。
e.g. 00:23:795 (3) - 这个可以往右上方移动一下,让2在3头部的切线上,使光标轨迹成为一个完整的弧。
00:28:995 (1) - 这个也是,让4在它的切线上
etc.

[Hard]
00:41:595 (1) - 这个的话或许NC会好些?不然会习惯等下一句开始的时候才点的
01:02:595 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这个能不能像前面00:18:195 (6,7,8,9) - 这样弄成4个短滑条?

[Collab]
这个真没啥问题……
遲來的mod></最近病了...抱歉

[Lia's Taiko]
00:18:595 - k
00:20:195 - k
01:34:995 - K

[bx1989's Taikoni]
無聊吐糟 : 那bx is so happy是什麼鬼;w;"
00:12:795 - remove...不然不要finish
00:25:995 - k
00:31:795 - k
00:42:395 - d
01:31:995 - k
...修改的時候別忘了把new combo做好啦...不然錯的colour比不做還討厭

NewibornCLivee wrote: 4e2p6q

遲來的mod></最近病了...抱歉

[Lia's Taiko]
00:18:595 - k done
00:20:195 - k done
01:34:995 - K sorry , no change ...

...修改的時候別忘了把new combo做好啦...不然錯的colour比不做還討厭
thx for modding !! :3

update ~ http://puu.sh/1x2uU
MOD from PM

紧急
推荐
建议

[Easy]
全部用滑条略显单调,可以在空拍适当下几个Circle
01:02:995 (4) - 摆成水平吧

[Normal]
没问题

[Hard]
00:29:995 (4) - 往上摆一点:
00:18:195 (6,7,8,9) - 这种直弯的滑条我觉得不太好看..至少弯折的角度不要太厉害吧 120°左右最好
00:24:395 (5) - 摆在上面漂亮一点:
01:10:195 (8,9,1) - 排列不是很美观..建议把01:10:795 (9) 放到前后两个滑条中间,或者直接做成这样的对称滑条 挺漂亮的:
01:31:595 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 有点迷惑性..01:31:595 (4,1,2)这三个就别折返了,直接和后面统一,顺时针绕一圈吧。



[collab]

前半段的Flow做的有点别扭 我也提出了一些自己的建议(当然并不一定更好)
从01:10:595开始的后半段做的貌似比前半段好...
另外我觉得cRyo和DarknessAngel的图Flow做得很棒 不如去参考一下

00:12:995 (5,1,2,3) - 这段有点overmapping了 为了契合人声的话我的建议是改成这样
去掉00:12:995 (5)和00:13:595 (1,2,3),直接在00:12:995加一个Circle,再拉个滑条加个单点:
00:19:795 (1) - 去掉,把后面的滑条00:19:895 (2)延长到这个音
00:28:595 (5) - 这样改 节奏会好一点(滑条在前,单点在后 另外把滑条弄弯好看一点)
00:32:595 (2) - 和上面差不多 不过这里改不改不算很重要
00:36:995 (8) - 缩短一点,再在后面加一个Circle,好让重音落在Circle上。另外后面的两串连打最好别错开
00:49:795 (4,5,1,2) - 从这儿开始的一串Flow我觉得这样摆能流畅一点
01:04:195 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这两串连打安排成这样可以流畅一点:前三个遮挡 后四个移动
01:08:595 (1,2,3,4) - 略微鬼畜 安排成这样舒服一点(要是你采纳这条的话01:08:195 (4)和01:09:395 (1)也要转成竖直的使flow更流畅)
01:34:995 (1,2,3) - 如果感兴趣的话可以做成跳。
Topic Starter
这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd

raririn wrote: 2a5t1o

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd
我去..怎么Deny掉剩下的? 我只要1 kd啊...
Topic Starter

Autumn wrote: 2d2863

raririn wrote: 2a5t1o

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd
我去..怎么Deny掉剩下的? 我只要1 kd啊...
反正草莓给过10kd╮(╯▽╰)╭...
General
建议把combo color 3和4的顺序互换 让两个相近的颜色分开

Easy 看不出什么了=。=

Normal also found nothin =。=

Hard
00:13:395 (1) - 或许把尾巴改成soft sampleset
00:41:595 (1) - 这种主要节拍以外的散点最好也改成soft hitsound音量不大的时候还好 像这样紧凑的打击声音让人觉得不太舒服
01:07:195 (9) - ^
01:32:795 (2) - ^
01:09:195 (4) - 或许和note2放在一起?
01:07:395 (10) - 把new combo加在这里 而不是它后面的滑条?
01:35:395 (2,3) - 最好给它们两个都加new combo 这样不容易误导玩家

[/color]
00:49:795 (4,5,1) - 这里感觉不太好看 或许把4和5的位置往左下调整一些让它们和滑条1的弧度保持一致?
01:13:395 (3) - 开头加whistle?尾巴上的whistle或者就去掉 或者就连01:13:995 (4) - 一起加whistle
01:25:595 (7) - 或许CTRL+G? 这个随意吧

这么多mod了来找我……我个新人真是给你挑不出啥东西来诶
感觉也没什么unrankable的 估计可以找MAT了?
好运吧~
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply 3p1g1j