OnosakiHito wrote: y4t4u

Taiko mod request from my queue~

[Taiko]

Generel: The kiai times has been placed wrong, but that's due to the hard finding climax parts in this song.
Kiai time should be places just here: 00:47:040~01:08:468
All other kiai's would take the effect or are just placed wrong because of no-climax part.

Hitcircles:
00:30:240~00:32:811 - You have used just one time kd dk. Because of this the following coming patterns dosen't fit anymore so well, especially the dk kd.
Try to use this: kkd kd dk d k d kd dk ddk d kkd - better to have 2x the pattern kd dk. done
00:41:554~00:43:954 - same problem as before ^
00:50:382 - k? nope ._.
00:51:582 - k nope ._.
00:52:611 (1) - move it one forward to 00:52:697 ok
00:53:554~00:55:440 - hm... dosen't sound that well I guess... how about this: ddk kkd ddk kdk d kkd k ? used ddk kkd dkd kdk d kkd k pattern
01:03:582 (1) - move one forward to 01:03:668 nope ._.
01:03:754 (2,1) - delete? nope ._.

Yes, that's it.
Hm. The map overall is okay, but there are some two-plets wrong placed which dosen't sound well. Look through all of them one more time to be sure everything is allright.

Good luck o/

Thx ono :3

Hi! Request from my queue.
Let's see what we can find here :3

[General]

Folder seems okay! All files are correct..
Apart from that, it seems that you Normal's kiai time is inconsistent with the rest of the diffs. It ends on 01:08:554 - when it should end on the previous red tick.

[Easy]

Very clean and nice diff. Nothing to say.

[Normal]

The diff is very good too, but I disagree with some combos. Just suggestions though.

00:18:240 (1) - In order to follow the previous combo pattern, this NC should be removed, and add new combo on 00:19:268 (7) -. Then remove NC from 00:19:611 (1) - , of course. It seems that you tried to make this new combo follow the piano-ish sound, but that makes it inconsistent with the previous combos.

Woow looking at it again I would like to see pretty much all NCs remade D: well I'm just trying to help. Just this: only put new combo when the music changes, when you feel like it's different from before. Also, most of the new combos land on big white ticks, because this is how the music is composed and made. All melodies and rhythms tend to follow and land on big white ticks. But sometimes they don't, of course.
I'll try to point out the NCs I would use:

00:26:982 (1) - Remove NC
00:27:497 (2) - Add NC
00:28:868 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:582 (4) - Add NC
00:31:955 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:982 (2) - Add NC
00:35:040 (1) - Remove NC
00:35:725 (3) - Add NC (this one is pretty much of a must, the music has a complete upbeat there with finish and stuff)
00:50:811 (8) - Add NC
00:51:154 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:039 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:554 (2) - Add NC
00:55:954 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:297 (2) - Add NC
00:59:383 (1) - Ooops, distance between this note and the previous should be a little longer~~ Also remove NC
01:00:754 (7) - Add NC
01:01:439 (1) - Remove NC
01:11:725 (1) - If you want this pattern to have 2 separate combos, remove NC here and add it to the previous note. If not, just remove it, but you must add NC here 01:12:754 (1) - and remove it from here 01:13:097 (1) -

Well that's all. Even though my suggestions are not "necessary omgomgomg unrankeable wtfffffffff" stuff, I think the map looks sightly better with them, and flows better as well. Please try them.

[Hard]

There are some weird NC too, and also weird inconsistent and unpolite spacings (and I don't mean jumps)

00:18:754 (5) - Here's and example of weird spacing. Why did you separate these notes a little bit more than the rest?
00:23:554 (2) - Same here
00:37:097 (8) - Add NC
00:37:268 (1) - Remove NC
00:38:468 (5) - Add NC
00:38:811 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:240 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:582 (2) - Add NC
00:45:325 (6) - Add NC
00:45:497 (1) - Remove NC
01:04:525 (8) - Add NC
01:04:868 (1) - Remove NC
01:09:840 (6,1,2) - This is confusing. Distance between these 3 notes is almost the same, but the first ones are 1/2 while the 2nd and the 3rd are 1/1 apart.
01:12:754 (2) - NC should be here instead of the previous note.
01:15:497 (2) - ^
01:18:239 (2) - ^

Meh.. sorry for so many NC stuff.. I'm just trying to help D:

[Lunatic]

Really nice n' clean. I'm not a fan of storyboarded hitsounds but I like the diff, well done. Wish I had something to say lol.

That's all. Really sorry for so many annoying NC stuff ;_;

Snepif wrote: 5o5wu

Hi! Request from my queue.
Let's see what we can find here :3

[General]

Folder seems okay! All files are correct..
Apart from that, it seems that you Normal's kiai time is inconsistent with the rest of the diffs. It ends on 01:08:554 - when it should end on the previous red tick. Missed that one D: fixed

[Normal]

The diff is very good too, but I disagree with some combos. Just suggestions though.

00:18:240 (1) - In order to follow the previous combo pattern, this NC should be removed, and add new combo on 00:19:268 (7) -. Then remove NC from 00:19:611 (1) - , of course. It seems that you tried to make this new combo follow the piano-ish sound, but that makes it inconsistent with the previous combos. Alright I got it, done

Woow looking at it again I would like to see pretty much all NCs remade D: well I'm just trying to help. Just this: only put new combo when the music changes, when you feel like it's different from before. Also, most of the new combos land on big white ticks, because this is how the music is composed and made. All melodies and rhythms tend to follow and land on big white ticks. But sometimes they don't, of course.
I'll try to point out the NCs I would use:

00:26:982 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:27:497 (2) - Add NC ^
00:28:868 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:30:582 (4) - Add NC ^
00:31:955 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:32:982 (2) - Add NC ^
00:35:040 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:35:725 (3) - Add NC (this one is pretty much of a must, the music has a complete upbeat there with finish and stuff) ^
00:50:811 (8) - Add NC ^
00:51:154 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:53:039 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:53:554 (2) - Add NC ^
00:55:954 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:56:297 (2) - Add NC ^
00:59:383 (1) - Ooops, distance between this note and the previous should be a little longer~~ Also remove NC ^
01:00:754 (7) - Add NC ^
01:01:439 (1) - Remove NC ^
01:11:725 (1) - If you want this pattern to have 2 separate combos, remove NC here and add it to the previous note. If not, just remove it, but you must add NC here 01:12:754 (1) - and remove it from here 01:13:097 (1) - ^ did the same thing to others to keep them consistent

Well that's all. Even though my suggestions are not "necessary omgomgomg unrankeable wtfffffffff" stuff, I think the map looks sightly better with them, and flows better as well. Please try them.

[Hard]

There are some weird NC too, and also weird inconsistent and unpolite spacings (and I don't mean jumps)

00:18:754 (5) - Here's and example of weird spacing. Why did you separate these notes a little bit more than the rest? Was done by mistake, fixed
00:23:554 (2) - Same here ^
00:37:097 (8) - Add NC Done
00:37:268 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:38:468 (5) - Add NC ^
00:38:811 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:42:240 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:42:582 (2) - Add NC ^
00:45:325 (6) - Add NC ^
00:45:497 (1) - Remove NC ^
01:04:525 (8) - Add NC ^
01:04:868 (1) - Remove NC ^
01:09:840 (6,1,2) - This is confusing. Distance between these 3 notes is almost the same, but the first ones are 1/2 while the 2nd and the 3rd are 1/1 apart. I'll keep it that way. Reason: 01:10:011 (1,2) are supposed to be an anti-jump. I was also trying to make the spacing to fit the music.
01:12:754 (2) - NC should be here instead of the previous note. Done
01:15:497 (2) - ^ Done
01:18:239 (2) - ^ Done

Meh.. sorry for so many NC stuff.. I'm just trying to help D:

[Lunatic]

Really nice n' clean. I'm not a fan of storyboarded hitsounds but I like the diff, well done. Wish I had something to say lol. There's no SB'd hitsound though, maybe because the tick uses normal-hitnormal sound sample (you can tell from how many inherited points in it)

That's all. Really sorry for so many annoying NC stuff ;_;

I find them pretty much helpful though, thanks!
Anyway updated.

o: Glad you accepted my suggestions! Oh and sorry, I thought they were sb'ed :3

Snepif wrote: 5o5wu

[Lunatic]

Really nice n' clean. I'm not a fan of storyboarded hitsounds but I like the diff, well done. Wish I had something to say lol.

Thank you for the compliment

EDIT = I do a pattern changing, and more inherited timing section to make the intro more authentic. http://puu.sh/F62B

wush hello
hmm Tsukasa... http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/24733
well one of few tou*ou arrangers that I "like" or at least dont hate 3: but I preffer Tsukasa like this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/72705

ikari_kyon wrote: 1z673m

wush hello
hmm Tsukasa... http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/24733
well one of few tou*ou arrangers that I "like" or at least dont hate 3: but I preffer Tsukasa like this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/72705

[General] 162k1y

1. Im not sure if SB images are oversized or not, well common size is 640x480, so I think you should use one of those max size, I mean use "XXX"x480 or 640x"XXX" Im not sure, tell me if Im wrong
   A plus of using 640x480 images is that you dont need to re-scale them Tried to rescale them down but only to find that the images were blurry so I keep them the way they were. Also the SB Load doesn't exceed 5.00x so I guess it should be fine.

[SB] 5c3q19

Im not so experienced on SBing but Ill try

1. 00:46:697 - the transition from SB\sanae to black bg is a bit sudden, maybe use your white effect or add a fade-out in this part Done
2. SB\marisa - well this image is ovesized, I mean you are not using all the image on SB scale, maybe use all the image on transition or crop it About 90% part of the image are used at the first place so I guess I'll keep the way it was. Not going to crop to prevent unwanted part of the black background showing up.
3. SB\reimu - same as avobe, also end the fade-in effect on 00:58:011? Tried and it faded in way too fast. I'll keep it the way it was.
4. SB\girls_c - not fully image used, again... Edited the SB a bit for this part so it uses the whole image.

[Hard] k6p2p

that custom hitsound 3:

1. 00:18:754 (5) - ctrl+h~ctrl+r this? current flow dont feels so good, 00:20:983 (3,4,5) - is good Done
2. 00:54:925 (1) - placement with 00:53:554 (5) - looks a bit dirty, can you clean it a bit? Done
3. 00:57:839 (4) - stack on 00:56:811 (4) - looks moar clean Done
4. 00:58:868 (7) - ↑ Done
5. 01:02:297 (2) - blanket can be better Done
   SPOILER

   

   188,204,62297,2,0,B|212:160|272:156|304:188|312:212,1,140,0|0

   you may refuse since Im not so good at blanketing stuffs
6. 01:06:068 (1) - 1 grid up for perfect blanket Done
7. 01:09:668 (5) - stack on 01:08:297 (7), your spacing is irregular anyways Done
8. 01:12:240 (5) - simmilar flow stuff as first pointed Done
9. 01:14:983 (5) - ↑ Done
10. 01:17:725 (5) - ↑ ~ 01:19:954 (3) - Done

[Normal] 2mh6e

1. 00:15:154 (4) - looks dirty with 00:13:440 (5), maybe place it over the previous slider, dunno why you like Placed it on 00:13:440 (5) and edited some of the objects nearby, done
2. 00:22:354 - dont move the break or simply dont use it? explained a bit on [Lunatic Lololololo] Removed break and done
3. 01:28:183 (1,1) - 2 looooong spinners in a row may be tyring and maybe booring to players, fill with some long sliders instead? Replaced the first spinner with slider art, done

I have no much to say here, but I personally dislike stack/backstacks on easiest diffs

Thanks~

ikari_kyon wrote: 1z673m

[Yasora \o/] 6f2j43

1. just wanna say one thing: asdfasdfasdflkjjlaskdf ;3

(〜￣▽￣)〜

ikari_kyon wrote: 1z673m

[Lunatic Lololololo] 3p3e2d

wait did I wrote the diff name bad? - Don't make me want to rape you.

1. 00:22:354 - hmm not move the break? the distance between the end of notes and start break is no so long I think and not so noticable - Okay, reduced...
2. 00:24:754 (1,2,3) - stack on end of sliders is not perfect, lets see if I can make it
   SPOILER

   - used
   

   77,80,24754,6,0,B|28:148|84:228,1,160,4|10
   242,229,25268,2,0,B|162:205|84:228,1,160,0|0
   85,306,25782,2,0,B|97:265|84:228,1,80

3. 00:26:640 (5) - stack where 00:25:268 (2) stars? - ( owo)b
4. 00:26:640 (5,6,1) - not perfect stack.. hmm Ill lose many time if I star to fix all your stack/sliders, can you take your time to fix them? also using 0,0x is not enough to having perfect stacks.. it just works sometimes - Eh? I think I've fix this part with other kind of variation.
5. 00:32:125 (5) - the hitburst of 00:30:754 (2,3) - makes (5) looks unsymmetrical, I cant think on a good suggest, maybe ctrl+r 00:31:611 (4) - since it start is almost good stacked on 00:30:754 (2)'s start and ctrl+r 00:32:125 (5) - having the end of slider covered by hitbursts will be less ehmm weird - Well it actually unsymmetrical, though it looks ugly, yeah. Fixed.
6. 00:32:982 (1,2,3) - take care of stacks, you wanna use them? use them better, is nice but make them perfect or they will looks weird - Actually idk what do you want to say, either make the stack perfect or remake the pattern, but for now I'll fix the stack first as you talk about stacks.
7. 00:37:097 (4) - ctrl+r this? the start currently is a bit covered by 00:36:240 (2) - and dont looks so good and this way there is no hitburst on 00:38:468 (1) - start - I prefer remake, but thank you for pointing this out.
8. 00:49:697 ~ use 70% for soft soundsets? the volume difference is pretty noticable with 00:47:725 (2), 00:48:411 (4) - ah, yes. Thank you for remind me.
9. 00:56:811 (8) - copy paste from 00:56:125 (6), shapes are different right now - Remake the slider shape so it will be easier to ctrl+r'ed.
10. 00:59:725 (3) - use normal soundset for repeat, sounds less weird than current clap - perhaps done? Not sure what are you saying though
11. 01:01:097 (5) - ↑ on start of slider - Again, done.
12. 01:04:868 (6) - new combo? my god what Im sayin >_< well combo is long and that way 01:04:868 (6,7,8,9,10,11) as they are jumping circles they will got the same colour and wwww - you're right. nc'ed.
13. 01:05:725 (11) - finish? - Strongly no since there's no cymbal sound at the music.
14. 01:08:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not a big jump instead anti-jump? the almost silent part and that hmm piano effect? will give a highlight to the jump and then back to your regular spacing before this and after it - I prefer anti-jump because it fits more to the music, imo. Plus, adding anti-jump will make a more variety of pattern instead of jumpy notes here and there. I'm pretty sure this all was based on personal taste but if you want me to make the spacing bigger, I will.
15. 01:20:982 (1) - normal soundset to slider start/body? to follow the previous sasdfas, and keep the finish the emphase that it have with that effect of song sounds interesting - Agree. Done.

http://puu.sh/FejV

Yahooo from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestions

[General]
Nothing found

[Yasora's Easy]
- 01:08:468 - Two inherit timing with different volume o m o

[Normal]
- 01:26:640 - consider using decreasing volume like hard diff .3.

[Hard]
- 00:32:486 - Trap distance .3.
- 01:03:154 - ^

[1811's Taiko Oni]
- consider using 70% volume at the beginning and at kiai using 80%
- consider using 1.10 slider velocity multiplier at kiai so like an oni taiko
- 00:18:411 - add d ?

[Lunatic Loli]
OD + 1 ?
- 00:22:011 - consider removing break since all diff didn't use break o v o
- 00:32:125 - combo 3 didn't overlap cutely o v o http://puu.sh/FhgP
- 01:09:497 (12) - add whistle?
Sweet overlap c:

thats all I can found ~ Good luck for the rank cx

omg

- t e n n y a - wrote: 1616s

[Lunatic Loli]
OD + 1 ? - I'll increase it once it pointed out again by another people.
- 00:22:011 - consider removing break since all diff didn't use break o v o - It won't allow me D: I've tried but even the drain is quite little I'm not sure it's comfortable, and plus it looks ugly because it's totally empty. (no notes, black background, what do we expect?)
- 00:32:125 - combo 3 didn't overlap cutely o v o http://puu.sh/FhgP - Changed.
- 01:09:497 (12) - add whistle? - k, and more for 2 next notes.
Sweet overlap c: - My thank you

http://puu.sh/FhzQ

- t e n n y a - wrote: 1616s

Yahooo from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestions

[General]
Nothing found Great

[Normal]
- 01:26:640 - consider using decreasing volume like hard diff .3. Done

[Hard]
- 00:32:486 - Trap distance .3. It's one of those accelerated spacing jumps :c
- 01:03:154 - ^ ^

thats all I can found ~ Good luck for the rank cx

Thanks~
And updated.

This priority system....

+39 (34 maps higher on the list)

makes me moar jeal-osu! lol~ good luck on ranking then

Hi~!
here's my mod~!


Hard

Normal

Yasora's Easy

good luck!~

-Baby Strawberry- wrote: 595i6i

SPOILER

Lunatic Loli
wow so many time lines lol - I like it >w<
00:11:039 (1) - its not that symmetrical, you may want to move the second tick 1 grid right and replace all the copied sliders. - Done'd but using my way
00:38:468 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/FsQk much better? - ( owo)b
nice - thank you >w<

http://puu.sh/FuZW

-Baby Strawberry- wrote: 595i6i

Hi~!
here's my mod~!

Hard

SPOILER

00:49:097 (5) - remove clap at the end Done
no other major problems~!

Normal

SPOILER

01:28:182 (1) - may be add a clap at the beginning? Done

good luck!~

Thanks~

no change
but thanks for mod =)

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203

- [Lunatic Loli] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 109,109,254
Combo4 : 128,85,186

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203

- [Yasora's Easy] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203


[Ysoras'Easy]
01:05:896 (1) - newcombo
01:16:868 (1) - newcombo
01:27:839 (1) - newcombo

[Normal]
01:10:011 (1) - newcombo
00:35:040 (5) - spacing
01:01:097 (2) - spacing

[Hard]
00:14:640 (3) - umm...spacing?
00:27:497 (3) - use 4 points to make this slider
00:44:640 (3) - not stack with 00:43:097 (3) completely
01:04:525 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - oh..it's not for a hard diff :<
01:26:811 (1) - spacing?
01:28:182 (1) - ^
01:29:554 (1) - ^
01:30:925 (1) - ^


[Lunatic Loli]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:19:776 - snap to 00:19:782
01:07:268 (1) - newcombo
00:21:497 (6) - a bit sharp here
01:17:897 (8) - move to x:252 y:224 (do a better effect)
--------------------------------------------------
OK that's all .Good song!
Excellent Mapset

Snowy Dream wrote: 746d

[Lunatic Loli]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:19:776 - snap to 00:19:782 - ( owo)b
01:07:268 (1) - newcombo - ( owo)b
00:21:497 (6) - a bit sharp here - I don't know what you mean. Sorry
01:17:897 (8) - move to x:252 y:224 (do a better effect) - I don't get it. I mean, do you want this to be stacked with 01:16:525 (4) - or what? If yes, then this pattern should have a remake.But since when this pattern begin, 01:16:525 (4) - has disappear. I prefer to make 01:17:897 (8) - end slider stack with 01:16:868 (5) - 's, but thank you for pointing this out.

http://puu.sh/FvAa

nothing change

no change on my diff too ._.
sounds good to play for me :3

Snowy Dream wrote: 746d

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203

- [Lunatic Loli] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 109,109,254 Fixed
Combo4 : 128,85,186

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203

- [Yasora's Easy] :
Combo1 : 216,208,219
Combo2 : 81,85,97
Combo3 : 128,85,186
Combo4 : 119,128,203

[Normal]
01:10:011 (1) - newcombo Um, it's NC already o.o
00:35:040 (5) - spacing Fixed
01:01:097 (2) - spacing Fixed

[Hard]
00:14:640 (3) - umm...spacing? Fixed
00:27:497 (3) - use 4 points to make this slider Done
00:44:640 (3) - not stack with 00:43:097 (3) completely Fixed
01:04:525 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - oh..it's not for a hard diff :< I see. Made the spacing constant, done.
01:26:811 (1) - spacing? Fixed
01:28:182 (1) - ^ ^
01:29:554 (1) - ^ ^
01:30:925 (1) - ^ ^

OK that's all .Good song!
Excellent Mapset

Thank you~

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

1. offset-8
2. sb\black.jpg is not used.
3. When you use pure color image, you'd better to use png. (change white.jpg to a png)
4. Pay attention on the shape of sliders: For example in Normal 01:00:069 (6) - http://puu.sh/FKl3 change to this: http://puu.sh/FKlt The final point should be at center of the slider end, and all points should be symmetric.

[Yasora's Easy]
01:05:896 (1) - add NC on spinner
01:16:868 (1) - ^
01:27:839 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:17:211 (3,6) - make them symmetric?
01:10:011 (1) - add NC after spinner

[Hard]
00:21:326 (4,6) - 1 grid down and it will looks much better
00:33:497 (6,3) - try to avoid the overlap?
00:46:354 (7,1) - not symmetric.
01:02:982 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a round?
01:04:525 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Insane]
00:30:240 (1,4) - stack their end?
00:30:240 (1,5) - stack their head?
00:41:211 (1) - make the slider symmetric? http://puu.sh/FK8g
00:41:725 (2,4,5) - ^
01:03:668 (3,5) - not symmetric. Use Ctrl+H to adjust them?
01:30:925 (7) - not looks so good. Use a note to adjust? http://puu.sh/FKax

That's all I can find. GL~

about nc in spinner p/1601041

Yasora wrote: 2t3d38

about nc in spinner p/1601041

I have read this weeks ago.


If you don't add NC, the NCs are not consistent. That's a normal NC suggestion so I didn't write it in red color.

popner wrote: 2s73y

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

1. offset-8 Done
2. sb\black.jpg is not used. Could've sworn I've removed it and did full-submission. Will full-submit again later.
3. When you use pure color image, you'd better to use png. (change white.jpg to a png)
4. Pay attention on the shape of sliders: For example in Normal 01:00:069 (6) - http://puu.sh/FKl3 change to this: http://puu.sh/FKlt The final point should be at center of the slider end, and all points should be symmetric.

[Normal]
00:17:211 (3,6) - make them symmetric? Done
01:10:011 (1) - add NC after spinner Done

[Hard]
00:21:326 (4,6) - 1 grid down and it will looks much better Done
00:33:497 (6,3) - try to avoid the overlap? Done
00:46:354 (7,1) - not symmetric. Done
01:02:982 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a round? Changed them to back-and-forth
01:04:525 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

That's all I can find. GL~

Thanks

popner wrote: 2s73y

[Insane]
00:30:240 (1,4) - stack their end? - Done.
00:30:240 (1,5) - stack their head? - Done.
00:41:211 (1) - make the slider symmetric? http://puu.sh/FK8g - I'm afraid that I can't do it. So code, maybe?
00:41:725 (2,4,5) - ^ - ^~
01:03:668 (3,5) - not symmetric. Use Ctrl+H to adjust them?
01:30:925 (7) - not looks so good. Use a note to adjust? http://puu.sh/FKax - Make it (quite) bigger so it won't look messy.

http://puu.sh/FNmr

Hi there


[Yasora's Easy]
01:05:889 (1) - New combo for spinner. You seems forgot to something?
01:16:860 (1) - I feel this spinner is doesn't following anything. Remove this spinner and remap that part? Also, new combo for spinner. You seems forgot to something?
01:20:974 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them
01:27:832 (1) - Same issue as 01:05:889 (1)


[Normal]
00:18:574 (6) - Flip horizontally (ctrl+H) for better flow?
00:31:945 (4) - Extend this slider to white tick. You seems miss this part, I guess....
00:36:402 (2) - This spacing doesn't looks right...
00:37:431 (5) - ^



That's all I got, sorry

Leorda wrote: 6bp3m

Hi there

[Normal]
00:18:574 (6) - Flip horizontally (ctrl+H) for better flow? Done
00:31:945 (4) - Extend this slider to white tick. You seems miss this part, I guess.... Done
00:36:402 (2) - This spacing doesn't looks right... Done
00:37:431 (5) - ^ Done



That's all I got, sorry

Thanks

bored with people who talking about nc in spinner

updated

Hi~ mod from my queue~

General
Great map and SB. deserve a star.

Timing Section
01:37:346 - make the section to 01:37:432

Easy
oblivious different DS's in different sections. choose a comfortable one. maybe turn the grid snap will help.
00:43:946 (1) - silence the spinner end?

Normal
this level sounds boring with just don-pa-don-pa, I suggest you change note arrangement to make it less boring.
00:44:288 (1) - silence the spinner end?

Hard
00:48:231 (3) - can be easily misread. put a bit further.
00:49:774 (1) - DS.
00:51:317 (1,2) - DS. No need snapping the previous note because even you do so it will be stacked.
01:02:802 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit too messy.
01:07:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a sudden DS increasing will just make it feel awkward. try to make the arrangement look better.
01:10:002 (1) - This final jump is easy to miss. maybe use a slider here?
01:15:831 (2) - DS?
01:24:745 (8,9,10) - ^

Taiko
00:13:089 (1) , 00:18:574 (1) - maybe delete these notes
00:53:546 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - do not sound so good. since you place the dons for main rhythm, you can arrange the notes in a better way.

Lunatic
mmm the level is not so lunatic... FC at first try. but really a perfect map. (nazi: try to use more 1/4 notes)
HP ->8
Delete break at 00:21:832 .
00:42:574 (4,5) - slider shape
00:46:346 (1,2,3,4) - a bit tricky. maybe make a jump instead stack?
00:48:917 (5,6,1) - suggest a manual-stack (use small DS instead of stack)
00:52:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - just more separate. this is too 'compact' lol
01:08:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe a bit higher DS? this could make people misunderstand as 1/4 notes.

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

•Correct size pics SB >.< size should be 800x600 and less

Lunatic

00:20:974(3,4,5,6,7,8) - make so http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/362139 looks better
00:30:746(2,3) - stack better
00:43:089(5,6,1) - stack it better
00:49:689(2,5) - remove claps
01:05:717 - remove whistle
01:06:917(spin) - remove clap/ not sound here

Hard

00:30:403 - i think better add note here
00:47:032(1,3) - stack better

Normal

fine~~

Easy

fine~~

good luck~~

[Easy]
What about custom tick sounds for claps?
First 20 sec plays strange, but I don't know why :/
[Normal]
00:28:859 (3,4,5) - spacing
[Hard]
Fine~~
[Lunatic Loli]
GREAT HITSOUNDS /o/
but new combos feels strange.

So short mod :/
GO GO GO RANKED

Katty Pie wrote: 5p4938

Lunatic

00:20:974(3,4,5,6,7,8) - make so http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/362139 looks better - I'm making a spiral with no overlapping notes here. In other words, fixed but not this way,
00:30:746(2,3) - stack better - Okay.
00:43:089(5,6,1) - stack it better - How's now?
00:49:689(2,5) - remove claps - Absolutely, no. It's perfect just now D:
01:05:717 - remove whistle - Nope, hitsound pattern.
01:06:917(spin) - remove clap/ not sound here - Again, hitsound pattern. Plus, I like the way it sounds, rather than empty.

Marcin wrote: 1u1j

[Lunatic Loli]
GREAT HITSOUNDS /o/
but new combos feels strange. - I'm sorry

http://puu.sh/G6FG

iroseka wrote: 12683y

Hi~ mod from my queue~

General
Great map and SB. deserve a star. Thanks~

Timing Section
01:37:346 - make the section to 01:37:432 Tried this and it no longer silences the spinner end so no.

Normal
this level sounds boring with just don-pa-don-pa, I suggest you change note arrangement to make it less boring.
00:44:288 (1) - silence the spinner end? Done

Hard
00:48:231 (3) - can be easily misread. put a bit further. For the sake of spacing, no
00:49:774 (1) - DS. Done
00:51:317 (1,2) - DS. No need snapping the previous note because even you do so it will be stacked. Done
01:02:802 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit too messy. Arranged them to something else
01:07:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a sudden DS increasing will just make it feel awkward. try to make the arrangement look better. The pattern is already as good as it is however I made the spacing increases much less sudden
01:10:002 (1) - This final jump is easy to miss. maybe use a slider here? No but I arranged it a bit, should be better now
01:15:831 (2) - DS? Done
01:24:745 (8,9,10) - ^ Done

Katty Pie wrote: 5p4938

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

•Correct size pics SB >.< size should be 800x600 and less
Pretty sure it's okay if it's above 800x600. I'll ask around.

Hard

00:30:403 - i think better add note here Done
00:47:032(1,3) - stack better Done

good luck~~

Marcin wrote: 1u1j

[Normal]
00:28:859 (3,4,5) - spacing Done

So short mod :/
GO GO GO RANKED

Thanks everyone and for the stars too

edited the taiko
changed some notes mentioned...

Updated

from Mod Req

Lunatic Loli:
00:34:346 (4) - This anti jumps feels off, maybe a bit larger spacing (to like 1.1 or something instead of .9).
00:35:374 (6) - You'll prob get yelled at by some Bats for this, I would put the end of this slider on the end of 5.
01:18:231 (1) - Please stop stacking slider underneath other sliders. This is hard to read and again will probably get yelled at by a BAT.
01:30:917 (7) - Spacing. It's too close to 6 considering the spacing between all of 01:29:717 (4,5,6,7) - is the same, people are going to think this is also 1/2 like 4-5-6.


Hard:
Hard is harder than Lunatic and has more notes.. Is this intended? This throws the spread off, you might want to consider toning Hard down a bit or making Lunatic a bit harder... Or switching the diff names.
01:01:945 (1) - Spacing, seems a lot similar to how 00:47:717 (2,3) - and 00:53:888 (6,7) - are spaced for example.. makes the map feel off.

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
Fine

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote: 1u2fm

Lunatic Loli:
00:34:346 (4) - This anti jumps feels off, maybe a bit larger spacing (to like 1.1 or something instead of .9). - But there are jump after this, If I'm using even 1.0x, doesn't it will make the jump bigger?
00:35:374 (6) - You'll prob get yelled at by some Bats for this, I would put the end of this slider on the end of 5. - Done.
01:18:231 (1) - Please stop stacking slider underneath other sliders. This is hard to read and again will probably get yelled at by a BAT. - Actually, I'm a bit agree, but you may want to suggest me some pattern instead of bragging it. It will be more helpful. Really. For now no changes. I don't know what to do because after this slider it has a pattern. Instead, I rotate 01:17:546 (7,8) - . I actually scared of that 'yelled at by a BAT' but meh, you know that word is sometimes not a good thing to put at mod.
01:30:917 (7) - Spacing. It's too close to 6 considering the spacing between all of 01:29:717 (4,5,6,7) - is the same, people are going to think this is also 1/2 like 4-5-6. - How about stack?

feel free to ignore whatever you don't like

◘ btw i read Katty Pie's mod, and no the max. size is not 800x600, 1024 x 768 is max. js xD

Yasora's Easy
00:12:746 (2) - place at x: 324 y: 184 (so that 1 blankets neatly around it)

nice diff. ~

Normal
00:43:602 (6) - one grid down, might look neater next to 5

Hard
00:13:259 (5) - move last point of slider 2 grids up to look a bit neater?
00:56:288 (3) - try making the beginning of the slider stack with the end of 00:57:488 (3) -

Lunatic Loli
01:28:346 (7) - new combo here (so that it will match similar patterns like 01:25:089 (5,1) - ) ..but i guess no change works too now that i triple checked..

that's all from me :< sry i couldn't find much, seems like a solid map to me

tsukasa ~~ good luck <3

from queue

[Yasora's Easy]

• how about add hitsounds to slidertick?

[Normal]

• AR -1 or -2
  00:58:517 (3,4) - I think these notes are too hard for beginner player. replace with reverse slider.
  01:05:974 (1) - I think you shouldn't to silent here.
  01:11:031 (3,3) - I guess newbie player will miss these note, because they are covered with hitburst.

[Hard]

1. first of all, is this really Hard?
   continual circles looks so hard. reduce some of them.
   for example, in 00:12:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6), you should remove 2 and 6.
   whole the map, I think you need to recheck of them.
2. I wonder why you put notes so randomly.
   for example, 00:12:745 (3,4) and 00:13:259 (5,6). these note have same rhythm.
   if you want to blanket a circle, you should do it perfectly. it is a trivial thing, but it will give your map looks very well.
   00:33:488 (5,6,1) - keep a certain distance

[Lunatic Loli]

• 00:35:717 (1) - upside down to make a good flow
  00:36:232 (2) - ^
  00:45:831 (5,1) - I don't like this stacking
  01:08:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I don't like this distance. more farther
  01:25:089 (5,2) - same as 00:45:831
  01:26:460 (3,4) - ^
  01:30:917 (7) - how e this one
  SPOILER

  

  200,96,90917,2,2,B|260:52|368:60|456:192|368:324|260:332|200:288,1,480,2|4

that's all. gl

asdf

[Yasora's Easy]
00:13:774 (1) - I feel it should be look like this. http://puu.sh/HnEB
Very solid Diff, well done as always, Yasora!

[Normal]
00:40:859 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:545 (2) - NC
00:58:517 (3,4) - Could irritate the new players.
01:01:088 (2) - Place it at x:204 y:180
01:01:431 (3) - Place it at x:152 y:228 (This small curve looks pretty and gives more flow instead of a straight line)
01:28:174 (1) - Set the last Sliderpoint at x:284 y:256, looks a bit better.

[Hard]
00:23:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - This Part is really awful to map. IMO I don't hear a good rhythm out and it would be hard to follow, especially if people play with Hidden.
Diffs seems fine, but the Kiai Time Part is hard to read. The Positions and the many overlap let it looks like I said. This is my opinion, however, I just want let you know this.

[1811's Taiko Oni]
00:41:203 (1) - d instead of k

[Lunatic Loli]
00:57:317 (9) - Strg+J it for a better transition from (9) to (10).
00:59:717 (3) - Err.. I would make like this. http://puu.sh/Ho7O (Also add at 01:00:232 a Circle) and remove Whistle and set Clap there.
01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to make the Distance of the Circles bigger.
01:20:117 (8,9,10,11) - ^

orz

meiikyuu wrote: 1t524m

feel free to ignore whatever you don't like

◘ btw i read Katty Pie's mod, and no the max. size is not 800x600, 1024 x 768 is max. js xD

Normal
00:43:602 (6) - one grid down, might look neater next to 5 Done

that's all from me :< sry i couldn't find much, seems like a solid map to me

tsukasa ~~ good luck <3

h-728 wrote: 312r60

from queue

[Normal]

• AR -1 or -2 Set to AR4
  00:58:517 (3,4) - I think these notes are too hard for beginner player. replace with reverse slider. Done
  01:05:974 (1) - I think you shouldn't to silent here. Done
  01:11:031 (3,3) - I guess newbie player will miss these note, because they are covered with hitburst.

that's all. gl

TheNutritiousGuy wrote: 6p4x33

asdf

[Normal]
00:40:859 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:41:545 (2) - NC Done
00:58:517 (3,4) - Could irritate the new players. Done
01:01:088 (2) - Place it at x:204 y:180 Done
01:01:431 (3) - Place it at x:152 y:228 (This small curve looks pretty and gives more flow instead of a straight line) Done
01:28:174 (1) - Set the last Sliderpoint at x:284 y:256, looks a bit better. Done

orz :3

Thanks. I'm currently changing loadsa things for Hard and most of its mods will still apply.

Hi ^w^

Here I am from my modding queue


General :

delet .osb file in beatmap foler and full submit


I am only making suggestion and when you like some , than I did a good job ^^

Easy

00:13:431 suggestion for better spacing http://puu.sh/HGJI even for a newbe this is makeable and looks better ^^
00:15:489 after you made 00:13:431 put bomco 2 on middle line , both together would look good ^^

That is it for Easy


Normal

00:14:117 make the slider a bit nicer like this http://puu.sh/HGSe
00:26:974 I think a jump like that isn`t allowed , or is it ? But may change that ^^ ?
00:45:917 Why not put timeing point at the end of spinner at 00:46:003 ?
00:49:260 maybe new combo ?
01:03:146 you can put it like spacing is near to combo 6 befor and than make it like this http://puu.sh/HH4u than spacing is correct at every combo at that moment and it looks good =)
01:26:117 stack it correctly in the end of 3
01:37:346 Why not put the timeing point exactly at the end 01:37:432 ^^ ?

That is it for Normal


Hard

00:30:232 put it correctly into the end of slider 6
00:42:232 put it correctly into the end of slider 1
01:02:289 try to put end of slider 2 exactly into slider 7 from befor

That is it for Hard


Lunatic Loli

00:25:774 put end of 3 it exactly into the end of slider 2
00:53:546 new combo ? Looks better to me
01:12:232 put it exactly into the slider end of 6
01:16:174 put it exactly into end of slider 1
01:17:546 ^ start of slider 1

And that is it =D

Like the song and the beatmap ^^ Star ~
Good Luck =D

TheNutritiousGuy wrote: 6p4x33

[Lunatic Loli]
00:57:317 (9) - Strg+J it for a better transition from (9) to (10). - Done.
00:59:717 (3) - Err.. I would make like this. http://puu.sh/Ho7O (Also add at 01:00:232 a Circle) and remove Whistle and set Clap there. - I want to follow the piano here >_<
01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to make the Distance of the Circles bigger. - If it's because it has a smaller spacing than other pattern, I reject.
01:20:117 (8,9,10,11) - ^ - ^

Mikarunoel131 wrote: g3j3d

Lunatic Loli

00:25:774 put end of 3 it exactly into the end of slider 2 - I do.
00:53:546 new combo ? Looks better to me - Done.
01:12:232 put it exactly into the slider end of 6 - Done.
01:16:174 put it exactly into end of slider 1 - Done.
01:17:546 ^ start of slider 1 - That was on purpose

Mikarunoel131 wrote: g3j3d

Hi ^w^

Here I am from my modding queue


General :

delet .osb file in beatmap foler and full submit It seems I missed that, fixed

I am only making suggestion and when you like some , than I did a good job ^^

Normal

00:14:117 make the slider a bit nicer like this http://puu.sh/HGSe Can't see the slider points but I tried to make it as close as it is, done
00:26:974 I think a jump like that isn`t allowed , or is it ? But may change that ^^ ? I accidentally missed that D: thanks for noticing, done
00:45:917 Why not put timeing point at the end of spinner at 00:46:003 ?Doesn't really matter though but done
00:49:260 maybe new combo ? Um, it's NC already
01:03:146 you can put it like spacing is near to combo 6 befor and than make it like this http://puu.sh/HH4u than spacing is correct at every combo at that moment and it looks good =) I don't really get it but if you mean putting 01:03:146 (1) inline with 6 then done
01:26:117 stack it correctly in the end of 3 Done
01:37:346 Why not put the timeing point exactly at the end 01:37:432 ^^ ? Same as 00:45:917 but then again, done

That is it for Normal


Hard

00:30:232 put it correctly into the end of slider 6 Done
00:42:232 put it correctly into the end of slider 1 Done
01:02:289 try to put end of slider 2 exactly into slider 7 from befor Done

That is it for Hard

Like the song and the beatmap ^^ Star ~
Good Luck =D

Thanks for the mod and star

nothing change '~'
but thanks for mod guys

Hi! Mod Request from my Queue.

[General:]

- Epilepsy Warning: Are you sure about the use of this option? Because I can't see any kind of weird flash lights to be added, really. You should ask to a BAT about that.
- Break Time: 00:22:003 (B): On Loli's diff. you have a break time in this position but on the other difficulties you didn't add it. For consistency, it's better if you Remove this Break time from Loli's diff. or if you want you can add a Break Time on the other difficulties.
- Tags: Yasora, it's already on Yasora-Chan, so this make the tag Yasora useless, with Yasora-Chan in tags is more than enough because you can find him/her adding Yasora on the web, etc.For example you can check this map (that only has Yasora-Chan in tags), and I could find her/him without any kind of problem. So, Remove Yasora from tags.

[Yasora's Easy:]

Settings:
--> Would be good if you Increase the Overall Difficulty by 1 Tick in this difficulty, to increment a bit more the Star difficulty because is very low comparing with the Normal diff. (OD+1)
--> Looking the BPM (That it's a bit high), it's better if you increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick here (AR+1)

• 00:11:032 (T): At the beginning (in this section) the Hitsounds sounds a bit low in General. In my opinion and to be more consistent with the other difficulties it's better if you increase the Sample Volume by 10%.
• 00:21:660 (4): Following the things that you are following in the music, this Slider doesn't fit at all with your previous patterns, especially at the end. Fit better if you Reduce the lenght of this Slider by 1/2 (To finish on 00:21:832). Also works preety fine with the stroyboard, finishing before than the change of image, the SB looks better in this case.
• 00:27:489 (1): This Slider doesn't fit at all with the music, at the end sounds kinda off-Rhythm. Listening the music, this Slider should finish 1/2 before (Red Tick, 00:28:003) and after that sounds preety fine with the music if you add a Whistle on the end of this Slider. Try it, you can make a better variety of Rhythm and not just make patterns in 1/1 because it's an Easy.
• 00:29:889 (4,1): This pattern sounds kinda the position of Notes in the Timeline is exchanged, because at the beginning there are kind a 'long' thing in the Instrumental and after that start the Simple Claps in the music. For this Reason it's better if the Slider Starts on 00:29:889 and finish on 00:30:232 and after that the Note is going to be on 00:30:574. Here an Screenshoot to avoid any doubt:
• 00:46:003 (T): The low of Volume in the music is not to big like you showed lowering the Volume to 10%. I think that if you increase the Volume to 20 or 25% is enough to show the Volume low in the music.
• 00:56:974 (3,4): Since you come from patterns based on Sliders, this change to Notes can produce confusion in New Players, on another hand the music doesn't need a separation here, all of the things in the music (in this section) sounds like an unity. For all these reasons, it's better if you replace these 2 Notes to a Slider (The Slider is going to Start in (3) and finish in (4))
• 01:05:203 (x): You have music to add something here. I thought in delete the Next Note (3) and then add an Slider that start here and finish on (3), it's a good idea and make a good variety in the sound in my opinion.
• 01:05:889 (Spin): To prevent a bug, you must to add a New Combo on this Spinner
• 01:08:460 (T): Same as 00:46:003, you lower the Volume more than the necesary. It's better if you increase it at least to 20 or 25%
• 01:16:860 (Spin): Add a New Combo on this Spinner, to prevent a bug again.
• 01:27:832 (Spin): (^)

[Normal:]

• 00:22:003 (5): This finish doesn't fit fine here, sounds really low and this is the highest reason to say that it sounds bad. If you want to add a Finish in this Note is better if you add a Normal Finish custom 1 like you did on your Hard difficulty.
• 00:27:317 (x): Sounds a bit empty here, in General is a Normal diff. so a Note in 1/2 could be Ok. So, try to add a Note here
• 00:29:546 (4): Two Things in this Slider:
1- I think that it's ok where is it the Slider, but can work better with the music if you move this Slider 1/2 back (Red Tick, 00:29:374) and then you have to make it bigger on 1/2 to finish with this Slider on 00:30:232. Is more benefit to the Rhythm, really.
2- (NAZI)- A bit nazi, but in general your Sliders are curve (you only make stright Sliders when it's a short Slider), so for consistency, would be better if you do a Simple Curve in this Slider. Nothing Hard, just a simple curve to follow with your previous Slider.
• 00:35:374 (3): This Whistle on this note sounds very alone around a lot of Claps. To mantain the consistency and because sounds better in my opinion, would be better if you Replace the Whistle to a Clap in this Note.
• 00:46:003 (T): As I said on Easy, this change in the Volume is too high and to be sincere the music doesn't need that. It's better if you increase the Volume at least 20/25 %
• 00:49:260 (1): You have to consider to add a Clap at the beginning of this Slider. Plays preety fine and it's consistent with your previous Clap's Patterns.
• 01:05:889 (5, Spin): It's a Normal difficulty, and I also think that the Rhythm doesn't need a high emphatisize like you gave with the Note (5). On another hand, this kind of things can cause confusion in Normal players because the Spinner appear too sudden after the Note. In this case is better if you Remove the Note (5), and then the Spinner should start where was (5).
• 01:08:460 (T): Same as 00:46:003
• 01:24:746 (3): To keep consistency on Hitsounds, it's better if you add a Normal Hitsound on the end of this Slider. You have to add a Inherited Timing Point (Green Line) with Normal Hitsounds on 01:25:089

[Hard:]

• 00:23:374 (1): There is no music here, the music start on the next note. You can listen better that if you listen the music on 25/50%. So, to follow the music properly, it's better if you remove this Note.
• 00:26:289 (x): Feels kinda empty, and also it's a Hard difficulty. So, would be a good idea if you add a Note here.
• 00:32:632 (7,8): (NAZI)- To stack these Notes properly with (3,4,5) you should move these Notes to x: 273 y: 250. To make that you have to disable the option Grid Snap.
• 00:35:203 (7): To be sincere, this Note feels unnecesary and sometimes this diff. becomes difficult to a Hard difficulty. For this reason, is better if you delete this Note
• 00:43:089 (5,6,7,8,9): This pattern looks preety bad at the hour to play the map because is very overlaped by hitbursts, especially the Notes (8,9). Try this formation for a better flow and better visual. I'll give you the Screenshoot and the Code if you want to fix it easily
• 00:50:803 (1): There is a Stop in the music, so you have to remark that and not only follow a simple pattern. Would be better if you move this Slider to 00:50:974 to remark this Stop and then this Slider should finish on 00:51:146
• 00:58:174 (2): Well, this Slider looks very overlaped by hitburst. This is preety bad at the hour to play the map, anyways I can't find a good suggestion here, so if you can make a better thing would be great
• 01:05:889 (7): Seriously, do you listen any sound in the music? there is no sound here, it's better if you Remove this Note and then move the Spinner to here where appear the long sound in the Instrumental. After that make the Spinner bigger to finish on 01:08:460
• 01:25:432 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3): You could strive a bit more with the Rhythm and not just copy/paste the same things. But ok, this is a personal opinion.

[Lunatic Loli:]

• 00:23:546: Since it's the Hardest difficulty on the mapset, it's better if you start to map since here like the Hard difficulty. Consider that, please
• 00:30:060 (x): It's an Insane diff. it's a good idea if you strive with the Rhythm a bit more. Since sounds empty this section, would be better if you add a Note here
• 00:32:117 (5): Meh, 1/1 doesn't fit at all here, and plays on awkward form to this difficulty. In this case I prefer to Reduce the length of this Slider by 1/2 (so will finish on White Tick, 00:32:289) and then add a Note on the blank space in 00:32:460. Just broke a bit the symetry, the Rhythm is the most important thing.
• 00:32:803 (x): Add a Note here too.
• 00:38:460 (1,2,3): This pattern can have a better flow if you Unstack (3) from these Sliders (1,2). Something like that would look great:
• 00:39:832 (4,5,6): (^)
• 00:43:774 (x): I'm preety sure that you need a Note here. Sounds preety good in my opinion.
• 00:58:174 (2,3,4): (NAZI)- You can make a better edge to (2) if (3,4) are Curve instead of Stright Sliders. Try to make something like that, I'll provide you the Code too.
• 01:08:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1): In my opinion, there is no a Stop to add an antijump in this place, so would be better if you increase the Spacing between these Notes (maybe 1,20 it's Ok) and at the end you can add a little jump between (7,1). You can try something like that
• 01:19:603 (7): You can add a New Combo here, looking 2 Reasons. The first one because it feels a change in the music so you can remark that with a New Combo and the second one is to avoid 12 Notes on a Combo.

- Sometime I would like to see more variety in the Rhythm and not just some 1/1 + Claps on the SliderTicks. It's an Insane, so you can use more 1/2 patterns. But, it's Ok.

Well, I'm tired to mod the Taiko but in General aspects looks fine.
That's all, Good Luck with your map

Hi n.n)/

General:
In the diff "Lunatic Loli" there is a combo colours different from the other diff, please check it~

Yasora's Easy:
Fine

Normal:
00:53:888 (2) - (nazi) move to x:180 y:340

Hard:
00:43:774 (9) - Remove finish, add whistle

Lunatic Loli:
01:30:917 (7) - in my opinion, this is not symmetrical D:

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~

Fenya wrote: 3d3o9

Hi n.n)/

General:
In the diff "Lunatic Loli" there is a combo colours different from the other diff, please check it~ Fixed

Normal:
00:53:888 (2) - (nazi) move to x:180 y:340 Done

Hard:
00:43:774 (9) - Remove finish, add whistle Sounds better, done

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~

mancusojuanmattos wrote: 71692h

Hi! Mod Request from my Queue.

[General:]

- Epilepsy Warning: Are you sure about the use of this option? Because I can't see any kind of weird flash lights to be added, really. You should ask to a BAT about that. Will ask around
- Break Time: 00:22:003 (B): On Loli's diff. you have a break time in this position but on the other difficulties you didn't add it. For consistency, it's better if you Remove this Break time from Loli's diff. or if you want you can add a Break Time on the other difficulties.
- Tags: Yasora, it's already on Yasora-Chan, so this make the tag Yasora useless, with Yasora-Chan in tags is more than enough because you can find him/her adding Yasora on the web, etc.For example you can check this map (that only has Yasora-Chan in tags), and I could find her/him without any kind of problem. So, Remove Yasora from tags. Removed

[Normal:]

• 00:22:003 (5): This finish doesn't fit fine here, sounds really low and this is the highest reason to say that it sounds bad. If you want to add a Finish in this Note is better if you add a Normal Finish custom 1 like you did on your Hard difficulty. Done
• 00:27:317 (x): Sounds a bit empty here, in General is a Normal diff. so a Note in 1/2 could be Ok. So, try to add a Note here Added
• 00:29:546 (4): Two Things in this Slider:
1- I think that it's ok where is it the Slider, but can work better with the music if you move this Slider 1/2 back (Red Tick, 00:29:374) and then you have to make it bigger on 1/2 to finish with this Slider on 00:30:232. Is more benefit to the Rhythm, really.
2- (NAZI)- A bit nazi, but in general your Sliders are curve (you only make stright Sliders when it's a short Slider), so for consistency, would be better if you do a Simple Curve in this Slider. Nothing Hard, just a simple curve to follow with your previous Slider. All done
• 00:35:374 (3): This Whistle on this note sounds very alone around a lot of Claps. To mantain the consistency and because sounds better in my opinion, would be better if you Replace the Whistle to a Clap in this Note. Agreed and done
• 00:46:003 (T): As I said on Easy, this change in the Volume is too high and to be sincere the music doesn't need that. It's better if you increase the Volume at least 20/25 % Was supposed to silence the spinner end but okay
• 00:49:260 (1): You have to consider to add a Clap at the beginning of this Slider. Plays preety fine and it's consistent with your previous Clap's Patterns. Done
• 01:05:889 (5, Spin): It's a Normal difficulty, and I also think that the Rhythm doesn't need a high emphatisize like you gave with the Note (5). On another hand, this kind of things can cause confusion in Normal players because the Spinner appear too sudden after the Note. In this case is better if you Remove the Note (5), and then the Spinner should start where was (5). Done
• 01:08:460 (T): Same as 00:46:003 Done
• 01:24:746 (3): To keep consistency on Hitsounds, it's better if you add a Normal Hitsound on the end of this Slider. You have to add a Inherited Timing Point (Green Line) with Normal Hitsounds on 01:25:089 Done

[Hard:]

• 00:23:374 (1): There is no music here, the music start on the next note. You can listen better that if you listen the music on 25/50%. So, to follow the music properly, it's better if you remove this Note. Done
• 00:26:289 (x): Feels kinda empty, and also it's a Hard difficulty. So, would be a good idea if you add a Note here. Done
• 00:32:632 (7,8): (NAZI)- To stack these Notes properly with (3,4,5) you should move these Notes to x: 273 y: 250. To make that you have to disable the option Grid Snap. Done
• 00:35:203 (7): To be sincere, this Note feels unnecesary and sometimes this diff. becomes difficult to a Hard difficulty. For this reason, is better if you delete this Note Done
• 00:43:089 (5,6,7,8,9): This pattern looks preety bad at the hour to play the map because is very overlaped by hitbursts, especially the Notes (8,9). Try this formation for a better flow and better visual. I'll give you the Screenshoot and the Code if you want to fix it easily Done

SPOILER

[352,68,43089,1,0
432,92,43260,1,0
436,176,43432,1,8
364,216,43603,1,8
308,148,43774,1,4

• 00:50:803 (1): There is a Stop in the music, so you have to remark that and not only follow a simple pattern. Would be better if you move this Slider to 00:50:974 to remark this Stop and then this Slider should finish on 00:51:146 Replaced 00:50:632 (6) with a slider that ends at 00:51:146 since it sounds better for me
• 00:58:174 (2): Well, this Slider looks very overlaped by hitburst. This is preety bad at the hour to play the map, anyways I can't find a good suggestion here, so if you can make a better thing would be great Done
• 01:05:889 (7): Seriously, do you listen any sound in the music? there is no sound here, it's better if you Remove this Note and then move the Spinner to here where appear the long sound in the Instrumental. After that make the Spinner bigger to finish on 01:08:460 Done
• 01:25:432 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3): You could strive a bit more with the Rhythm and not just copy/paste the same things. But ok, this is a personal opinion. Remapped that part so done

Well, I'm tired to mod the Taiko but in General aspects looks fine.
That's all, Good Luck with your map

Thanks everyone

Hello ~
sorry for my bad English. If something is not clear, me.
[Storyboard]

All pictures that are participating in the storyboards (girls_a,girls_b, girls_c, marisa, reimu, sanae and white) - to do the same size. such as BG.

Colours - there are shades of gray ... it would be better to replace them with more colorful.

[Kiai Mod]

I propose to do so ...
00:47:031 (1) - start kiai
00:57:574 (x) - end kiai
00:57:660 (1) - start (and add a flash (white.png))
01:08:460 (4) - end
01:10:003 (1) - start and 01:10:089 (x) - end

so...

[Yasora's Easy]

00:52:174 (3) - new combo
01:00:403 (3) - ^

Maybe Lunatic Loli rename Insane?!

good job.

hi there~

Yasora's Easy:

00:52:174 (3) - add NC?
01:00:403 (3) - ^

Normal:

01:28:174 (1) - (nazi) maybe it would look a bit better if you made it like this http://puu.sh/IUdQ

Hard:

00:55:089 (2) - remove clap to be consistent with others?
00:58:860 (4) - IMO this rhythm doesn't really fit very well, perhaps try extending it 1/2 or add a note at 00:59:374?

Lunatic Loli: fine

nice map, good luck

mancusojuanmattos wrote: 71692h

[Lunatic Loli:]

• 00:23:546: Since it's the Hardest difficulty on the mapset, it's better if you start to map since here like the Hard difficulty. Consider that, please - Spinner added instead of notes because it fits better.
• 00:30:060 (x): It's an Insane diff. it's a good idea if you strive with the Rhythm a bit more. Since sounds empty this section, would be better if you add a Note here - Added notes.
• 00:32:117 (5): Meh, 1/1 doesn't fit at all here, and plays on awkward form to this difficulty. In this case I prefer to Reduce the length of this Slider by 1/2 (so will finish on White Tick, 00:32:289) and then add a Note on the blank space in 00:32:460. Just broke a bit the symetry, the Rhythm is the most important thing. - I would like to, but I have no idea what should I make.
• 00:32:803 (x): Add a Note here too. - ^
• 00:38:460 (1,2,3): This pattern can have a better flow if you Unstack (3) from these Sliders (1,2). Something like that would look great:

SPOILER

- Er, like what o_o
• 00:39:832 (4,5,6): (^) - I don't see any picture D:
• 00:43:774 (x): I'm preety sure that you need a Note here. Sounds preety good in my opinion. - Added stacked circle.
• 00:58:174 (2,3,4): (NAZI)- You can make a better edge to (2) if (3,4) are Curve instead of Stright Sliders. Try to make something like that, I'll provide you the Code too. - Do want.

SPOILER

216,264,58689,2,0,B|256:272|256:272|296:264,1,80,10|2
176,336,59031,2,0,B|256:352|256:352|336:336,1,160,0|10

• 01:08:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1): In my opinion, there is no a Stop to add an antijump in this place, so would be better if you increase the Spacing between these Notes (maybe 1,20 it's Ok) and at the end you can add a little jump between (7,1). You can try something like that - I'll think twice.

SPOILER

• 01:19:603 (7): You can add a New Combo here, looking 2 Reasons. The first one because it feels a change in the music so you can remark that with a New Combo and the second one is to avoid 12 Notes on a Combo. - Added.

- Sometime I would like to see more variety in the Rhythm and not just some 1/1 + Claps on the SliderTicks. It's an Insane, so you can use more 1/2 patterns. But, it's Ok. - Seriously, I focused on slider because that's my plan on the first time. This to proves that even we can make a lot of variation with 1/1, not just random stream like we pretend don't know how to map. Plus, my opinion says that 1/1 fits on most places, so I reduce using 1/2.

For Fenya, I'm not going to make 01:30:917 (7) - symmetrical but neat circle.

http://puu.sh/IXTp

sorry, nothing fixed

Loli Cjj wrote: 3c3a5g

mancusojuanmattos wrote: 71692h

[Lunatic Loli:]
• 00:38:460 (1,2,3): This pattern can have a better flow if you Unstack (3) from these Sliders (1,2). Something like that would look great:

SPOILER

- Er, like what o_o
• 00:39:832 (4,5,6): (^) - I don't see any picture D

Whoops, I don't know what's happend here. I thought in something like that

Sorry for the inconvenience, Loli! Hope it fixed the problem with the BG now

mancusojuanmattos wrote: 71692h

Whoops, I don't know what's happend here. I thought in something like that

SPOILER

Sorry for the inconvenience, Loli! Hope it fixed the problem with the BG now

I like that slider, super saiyan mancusojuanmattos. It's neat and sexy. Can you give me the code?

from modding queue:

[Normal]
00:26:974 (4) - change this to a reverse slider...
...and delete this note 00:27:317 (5) -
else is ok

[Hard]
00:25:089 (2) - move this note in another place, like this http://puu.sh/Kt5B
01:05:889 (1) - move the end of this spinner here 01:08:289 -

[Insane]
01:11:031 (4) - normal slider instead of reverse...
...and add a note here 01:11:374 (5) - like this http://puu.sh/Ktam

Good Luck :3

p.s. very nice map

palinus mod request queue

[Easy]

Looks good to me

[Normal]

01:20:974 (1) - Is possible to make the slider look proper
couldn't find any major unmentioned thing

[Hard]

00:49:260 (1) - wouldn't that hitcircle fit better at x:84 y:292
01:09:831 (4) - ^ x:324 y:64
01:18:574 (2,4) - a similiar part earlier had end and start point ''reverted'' do the same here like this.
01:19:603 (1,3) - ^

[Insane]

To perfect to me

I hope it was useful

For Genshin, that's was on purpose, and at least it won't break the flow so bad. Plus, I like how it was.
In other words, no changes.

nothing change on my taiko diff i guess ._.
rly late reply >.>...

Genshin wrote: 2a6t72

from modding queue:

[Normal]
00:26:974 (4) - change this to a reverse slider...
...and delete this note 00:27:317 (5) - Done
else is ok

[Hard]
00:25:089 (2) - move this note in another place, like this http://puu.sh/Kt5B Done
01:05:889 (1) - move the end of this spinner here 01:08:289 - The current one fits the music so no. Just try to play it at 25% playback rate and you'll find that it fits pretty well Also the kiai time ends there as well.

Good Luck :3

p.s. very nice map

palinus wrote: 655vj

palinus mod request queue

[Normal]

01:20:974 (1) - Is possible to make the slider look proper Edited it a little, done anyway
couldn't find any major unmentioned thing

[Hard]

00:49:260 (1) - wouldn't that hitcircle fit better at x:84 y:292 The current one flows better imho, since it'll move in arc instead of straight line
01:09:831 (4) - ^ x:324 y:64 Done
01:18:574 (2,4) - a similiar part earlier had end and start point ''reverted'' do the same here like this. Done
01:19:603 (1,3) - ^ Done with minor edits

I hope it was useful

Thanks everyone Updated now :3

mod from queue

[Storyboard]

1. The max size of SB images is 800x600, so u have to resize all ur images except white, and recalculate your SB codes
2. Seems you changed your timing but forget to fix the SB's, click "design" menu and choose "Move all elements in time...", then fix the timing of sb.

[Yasora's Easy]

1. 00:49:431 (1) - maybe you can start this slider from the second white line(00:49:774 - ) to follow the beats prev.
2. 01:16:860 (1) - it's sudden a bit....i'd like to move it to 01:18:232 - ,stop at 01:20:632 - , 01:16:860 - could be another note+slider like 01:15:489 (1,2) - .

[Normal]

1. HP-1 at least
2. to be honest, put nearly all drum-claps on tickpoints is not a good idea because clap has the sense of "click" but not drag.
3. 00:47:717 (1,2,3,1) - claps here is confusing....

[Hard]

1. 00:24:574 (4,1,2,3) - this shape make a bad flow because of the spacing between 00:24:574 (4,1,2) - : same spacing with different time-distance, which will cause player confusing. To myself, i choose rather to stack (1,2) to current shape.
2. 01:24:232 - add a note here?
3. 01:31:945 (1) - don't be lazy to add green lines like Lunatic plz :>

[Lunatic Loli]

1. 00:11:889 (1) - the nc here make no sense...imo
2. 00:34:860 (5,6) - this kinda shape also may ruin the flow
3. 00:45:831 (5,1) - bad stack...
4. 01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - er...what the shape here...

that's all, general a good mapset good luck with rank~

Scorpiour wrote: 2pj3z

[Lunatic Loli]

1. 00:11:889 (1) - the nc here make no sense...imo - Fix nc here and nearby.
2. 00:34:860 (5,6) - this kinda shape also may ruin the flow - Yeah, I believe. On the other side, ctrl+r this may a bit confusing people. If you like if it's ctrl+r'ed, I will. No changes at this part atm.
3. 00:45:831 (5,1) - bad stack... - It's well made I think. If you think it's bad because it's stacked, well then. No changes at this part atm.
4. 01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - er...what the shape here... - srsly why people? I think this part have been asked many times. This picture may explain , perhaps. http://puu.sh/LvWW

http://puu.sh/LvY4

Mod Queue Request! Sorry for long wait.

General
-> Nothing found! Congrats!

Easy
-> HP Drain +1.

Normal
-> Overall Difficulty +1.

Hard
-> Good!

Insane
-> Good!

Excellent Map Overall. Should find a MAT now. No kudosu please!

PS: 888th Post! XD

Sorry for late reply, been busy lately and hardly had time to touch osu! for a while.
I'll get back to it again today. Also just read wiki and it is confirmed that maximum allowed sprite size is 800x600 so I have to redo the SB a bit.

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

Mod Queue Request! Sorry for long wait.

General
-> Nothing found! Congrats!

Normal
-> Overall Difficulty +1. Done

Excellent Map Overall. Should find a MAT now. No kudosu please! Oh crap I accidentally gave kds D:

PS: 888th Post! XD

Scorpiour wrote: 2pj3z

mod from queue

[Storyboard]

1. The max size of SB images is 800x600, so u have to resize all ur images except white, and recalculate your SB codes All done
2. Seems you changed your timing but forget to fix the SB's, click "design" menu and choose "Move all elements in time...", then fix the timing of sb. All done too

[Hard]

1. 00:24:574 (4,1,2,3) - this shape make a bad flow because of the spacing between 00:24:574 (4,1,2) - : same spacing with different time-distance, which will cause player confusing. To myself, i choose rather to stack (1,2) to current shape. Fixed with my own way
2. 01:24:232 - add a note here? Done
3. 01:31:945 (1) - don't be lazy to add green lines like Lunatic plz :> Done

that's all, general a good mapset good luck with rank~

All good to go, updated.

Thanks those, quick-update for now.

those wrote: 2f131h

irc

12:54 those: : Alright, you free to talk for a bit?
12:54 Frizz925: : Yup
12:54 those: : Alright. I try to be as unbiased as possible, due to having played the ranked Mirage of the Rain as my most played beatmap
12:55 those: : I'll go through all diffs, even if they are guests; I'll leave it to you to tell it to the mapper
12:55 those: : Starting with Lunatic Loli:
12:57 those: : 00:26:289 - The many, many occurrences of this hitsound pattern are too loud. They all happen on the slider tick (not sure if intentional), but because
12:57 those: : it's a slider tick, it really should not be as loud as a "hit" sound.
12:57 those: : Change: for S:C2 slidertick, change volume to 15-20% lower than the hitsounds around it
12:58 Frizz925: : Alright
12:58 those: : For example: 00:26:289 - should be lowered to 40-45%. - Done.
12:58 those: : 00:45:831 (5,1) - This stack is very, very difficult to read. - Changed.
12:59 those: : Furthermore, 00:46:346 (1,2,3,4) - should be a 5-stream as opposed to just 4. - Together with this, but still 4 stream as I follow beat on the song. It's not a big problem, so I'll change it to repeat.
13:00 those: : 00:59:546 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this, play and hitsounds feel like there isn't much going on. - I'm not sure, I'm lack of ideas here because I think it's better if it was like this, unless you gives me ideas for hitsounds ofc.
13:00 those: : Rotation and symmetry seem to be overused throughout the whole map; try to tone it down a bit to bring out more creative patterns, especially in the
13:00 those: : Kiai. - I think as long as it creates non-boring copypasta pattern here and there, it's okay. Instead of mapping 3 minutes map with 1/2 map copypasta'ed, I prefer to map symmetry and rotation pattern. Second, It's how I map. (At least how I map long time ago!)
13:01 those: : 01:25:089 (5,1,2) - Stacking here creates a hanging, stalling feeling, and is not appropriate here. - Nope.
13:01 those: : Same goes for 01:26:460 (3,4,5) - Nope.
13:02 those: : and the next two sets.
13:02 those: : 01:30:917 (7) - Can be made circular by adjusting nodes. Give it some time. - Done.

If you still having a big problem with my gd, please post it here, I quite confused reading irc mod. Second, please post all the things you think ugly and not necessary. I would gladly read your suggestion on most parts, because that helps more.
http://puu.sh/Q3m6

diff here

normal-slidertick2 here

Re- Mod

General

Your spinnersound have blank wav right? delete unused grass when spinning

Lunatic Loli

00:22:003 - add spinner here end it at 00:23:289 - , look fit and work hehe
00:29:889 (6) - clap is enough, i dont think whistle not work here because im totally can hear whistle at (7)
dont say u want make a huge Blue circle in taiko mode, if u want, ignore this

00:35:374 (6) - ctrl + R better imo
00:42:574 (4,5) - this flow look broke
00:59:717 (3) - clap in blue tick
01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern look awful, why u not making star jump here, it will look pretty
01:20:117 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ maybe
01:25:432 - add note, this for previous white tick too
01:32:289 - why u need a lot of timing point here, u already used blank wav for spinner spin

Hard

00:33:489 (2,4) - this note need symetric
00:39:832 (4) - very bad in play view

i like you to move (4) from (2)slider's body ,maybe use this pattern

01:30:917 (1,2) - use whistle, dont clap , sound weird with low volume sound imo

Normal

00:25:774 (3) - i think this will confusing newbie when this note stacked with (2) imo
short mod due too nazi :
- too many stacked notes, i suggest make a space about it

Yasora's Easy

00:11:031 (1) to previous slider like this - i just dont like slider tick sound, if 0.5 slider tick is rankable.. it will look nice
00:48:403 (3) - remove clap, too much clap sound weird imo
00:48:060 - this downbeat tick so alone
short mod due too lazy and nazi
- dont overused hitsound, use it wisely and use different flow because song not always looping beat (this why nightcore mod very usefull , just hear the beat by yourself im too lazy modding nazi hitsound)

Taiko

00:22:003 - reduce volume hitsound , too noisy here
00:57:660 (1) - big katu look better imo


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last sound i heard is tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk brak in taiko mode for someone map
/me run

hahahahahaha laughing so hard when look it sorry

someone not get the point what i said
lazy to improve or just confident

zeroclover wrote: 6e8p

Yasora's Easy

00:11:031 (1) to previous slider like this - i just dont like slider tick sound, if 0.5 slider tick is rankable.. it will look nice humm, that's unrankable right
00:48:403 (3) - remove clap, too much clap sound weird imo following 'tak' sound in bg music
00:48:060 - this downbeat tick so alone but i don't think so-
short mod due too lazy and nazi
- dont overused hitsound, use it wisely and use different flow because song not always looping beat (this why nightcore mod very usefull , just hear the beat by yourself im too lazy modding nazi hitsound) no have idea for this, but imo the current hitsound is already fine

thank you

new page as always

zeroclover wrote: 6e8p

Taiko

00:22:003 - reduce volume hitsound , too noisy here no need actually, i think ._.
00:57:660 (1) - big katu look better imo big don "sounds" better :3

no change ._.
but thx for modding the taiko :3

zeroclover wrote: 6e8p

Lunatic Loli

00:22:003 - add spinner here end it at 00:23:289 - , look fit and work hehe - Since the music is trimming down, nope.
00:29:889 (6) - clap is enough, i dont think whistle not work here because im totally can hear whistle at (7) - Actually it's hitsound pattern, I know you hear most of clap includes whistles. Not all of them, though!
dont say u want make a huge Blue circle in taiko mode, if u want, ignore this

00:35:374 (6) - ctrl + R better imo - Totally agree.
00:42:574 (4,5) - this flow look broke - Many people commented about this so, changed 00:41:203 (1,2,3,4) -
00:59:717 (3) - clap in blue tick - yep.
01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern look awful, why u not making star jump here, it will look pretty - Nope, until someone point this again, and again. I like this pattern though.
01:20:117 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ maybe - Nope, until someone point this again, and again. I like this pattern though.
01:25:432 - add note, this for previous white tick too - Nope, I have no plan to put notes there to follow percussion.
01:32:289 - why u need a lot of timing point here, u already used blank wav for spinner spin - Really? My folder has no blank spinner. Seems I need to redl.

Also, remade 01:07:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern. http://puu.sh/VwVZ

zeroclover wrote: 6e8p

Re- Mod

Hard

00:33:489 (2,4) - this note need symetric Fixed that
00:39:832 (4) - very bad in play view

SPOILER

i like you to move (4) from (2)slider's body ,maybe use this pattern Looks nice, done

SPOILER

01:30:917 (1,2) - use whistle, dont clap , sound weird with low volume sound imo Done

Normal

00:25:774 (3) - i think this will confusing newbie when this note stacked with (2) imo Moved that out, done
short mod due too nazi :
- too many stacked notes, i suggest make a space about it

Thanks, updated for now.

[General]

*add "NOSTALGIA" (album) and "A Shadow in the Blue Sky" (original title name) in the tags?
*Epilepsy warning? o_O'
*your sidertick rate value... does not really fit with the song, but I bet you used it for the custom-slidertick thingy D:

[Easy]
ok, just some advices for your spinners, add new combos on them:

[Normal]

00:32:632 (4,5) - I'd say, use the same spacing that you used on the previous patterns (reduce the distance in other words)
01:01:432 (3) - unexpected jump o.o
01:28:174 (1) - I'm not sure that a repeat on a blue tick (that doesn't follow anything) is a good idea S:

[Hard]

Okay

[Taiko]

okay

[Lunatic]

01:07:260 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner
00:49:689 (2,3,4,5) - unintuitive pattern.. i suggest you to add doublets here (in other words add a hitcircle here 00:49:603 and so on)

Armin wrote: 1k6918

[General]

*add "NOSTALGIA" (album) and "A Shadow in the Blue Sky" (original title name) in the tags? Will do, done
*Epilepsy warning? o_O' I asked a BAT about this before. He said that either way is fine but I guess I'll disable it now.
*your sidertick rate value... does not really fit with the song, but I bet you used it for the custom-slidertick thingy D: Well yes, that's because most of these use tick-hitsound except for Hard

[Normal]

00:32:632 (4,5) - I'd say, use the same spacing that you used on the previous patterns (reduce the distance in other words) Err, missed that one. Fixed.
01:01:432 (3) - unexpected jump o.o Missed that one too D: fixed
01:28:174 (1) - I'm not sure that a repeat on a blue tick (that doesn't follow anything) is a good idea S: I guess so, done

[Hard]

Okay

Thank you very much, Armin

Armin wrote: 1k6918

[Lunatic]

01:07:260 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner - yep.
00:49:689 (2,3,4,5) - unintuitive pattern.. i suggest you to add doublets here (in other words add a hitcircle here 00:49:603 and so on) - Once I make doublets, but the hate it, and I delete it. Now you approve it, and I'll put it again.

I'm not sure for 00:49:689 since it's now sounds overmapped, but I don't care. http://puu.sh/WuDs

Alright updated

OK akhirnya wa bisa mod mapnya

[Yasora's Easy]

1. 00:17:889 (1) - Remove NC

[Normal]

1. Combo Mod

   1. 00:19:260 (5) - Seeing the prev combo placement, this should NC
   2. 00:20:632 (1) - The NC should be removed
   3. 00:33:317 (5) - The prev down beat is occupied by the slider repeat but still, this object have to be NC'ed (according to your combo placement)
   4. 00:34:346 (1) - Remove NC then NC 00:35:717 (6)
   5. 00:37:432 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:38:460 (6)
   6. 00:43:946 (5) - NC this (also try to make it so this slider is centered in y axis)
   7. 00:49:774 (6) - ^
   8. 00:50:803 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 00:52:174 (6)
   9. 00:53:546 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:55:260 (7)
   10. 00:56:803 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:58:003 (5)
   11. 01:03:147 (6) - NC
   12. 01:05:032 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 01:05:032 (1)
2. 00:26:460 (4) - This mini jump is unnecessary. There isn't any change in the music whatsoever anyway. Try to make the pattern more neat without changing the spacing, something like this
   
3. 00:59:546 (6,7) - I have to say that this rhythm is quite unexpected. From the rhythm you used so far, I expected this part to be similar with 00:37:432 (1,2). I suggest to stay following the beat instead of the piano here, it'll be easier to follow in this case
4. 01:28:174 (6) - Umm you should just separate the repeat arrow and the slider head all together, the overlap looks bad. Try a different shape, like this maybe (sorry lost the code xD)
   

[Hard]

1. SPOILER

   1. 00:12:403 (1) - Remove NC
   2. 00:15:146 (1) - ^
   3. 00:17:889 (1) - ^
   4. 00:20:632 (1) - ^
   5. 00:49:260 (1) - ^ the NC on 00:49:432 (6)
   6. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
   7. 00:59:546 (1) - ^ then NC on 01:00:403 (10)
   8. 01:01:774 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:27:145 (10,1,2,3,4) - Nothing wrong here, but I just want to say that this is kinda cramped. Next time you can try to spread the object more by not making them overlap with the previous objects
3. 00:50:632 (6) - The beat on 00:50:803 is very conspicuous. It's better if you use similar rhythm with 00:53:374 (4,5)
4. 00:35:374 (7) - Hmm maybe unstack this?
5. 01:30:917 (1,2,3) - You're using whistle instead of clap just like on the previous objects, this make the object to be inaudible. I suggest to use clap in these objects too

[Lunatic Loli]

1. Maybe increase OD & HP by 1?
2. 00:27:146 (6,7,1) - Hmm I don't see why this should be 1.0 spacing
3. 00:41:032 (7,1) - ^
4. 00:43:603 (8,9,1) - Stack error. Move these objects 2 grid right and 2 grid down (LV 4 grid)
5. 00:43:946 (1,2) - The overlap looks bad. Try to make it into a simple cutting slider or an end cutter slider like on 00:27:489 (1,2)
6. 00:45:317 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:46:603 (7) - This should start on 00:46:689 while the previous slider should end on 00:46:603 (add one more repeat to the slider)
8. 00:47:717 (2,3,4,5) - 1.2 spacing is better here
9. 00:59:032 (4) - Hmm try to move this 1 grid up. The gap is to wide compare to the previous blanket
10. 01:08:460 (1) - Try to make the curve on this slider to follow the direction of the next objects (in this case move the 4th anchor point to x: 220 y: 352)
11. 01:02:803 (3) - Why 1.0 spacing? The prev and next spacing is 1.2 so this 1.0 spacing comes out of nowhere
12. 01:19:603 (1) - The direction of this slider brake the flow from the prev objects (01:17:546 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) -). I'm not saying you have to fix it cause it'll be too much too fix
13. 01:20:803 (6,7,1) - The stack is kinda tricky to read because of those overlap with the score burst. Try to reposition it so it'll be more conspicuous
14. 01:08:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing is too close for an anti - jump try 0.4 or 0.6 instead
15. The map have some interesting pattern and flow but you're sometime use 1.0 without any reason at all. Please try to be consistent
    

That's all for now. Poke me after the fix for re-check.

o3o

Sallad4ever wrote: 7222n

[Lunatic Loli]

1. Maybe increase OD & HP by 1? - ok...
2. 00:27:146 (6,7,1) - Hmm I don't see why this should be 1.0 spacing - Instead of stack I prefer triangle. It's not that bad there.
3. 00:41:032 (7,1) - ^ - Give me suggestion orz, but I like it so I'll leave it.
4. 00:43:603 (8,9,1) - Stack error. Move these objects 2 grid right and 2 grid down (LV 4 grid) - err, this maybe is okay?
5. 00:43:946 (1,2) - The overlap looks bad. Try to make it into a simple cutting slider or an end cutter slider like on 00:27:489 (1,2) - done.
6. 00:45:317 (4,5) - ^ - done.
7. 00:46:603 (7) - This should start on 00:46:689 while the previous slider should end on 00:46:603 (add one more repeat to the slider) - I think I've point this out maaaaaaaaany times. I'm following the beat. No changes on this rhythm, ever.
8. 00:47:717 (2,3,4,5) - 1.2 spacing is better here - Done.
9. 00:59:032 (4) - Hmm try to move this 1 grid up. The gap is to wide compare to the previous blanket - Err, yep!
10. 01:08:460 (1) - Try to make the curve on this slider to follow the direction of the next objects (in this case move the 4th anchor point to x: 220 y: 352) - I LOVE IT <3
11. 01:02:803 (3) - Why 1.0 spacing? The prev and next spacing is 1.2 so this 1.0 spacing comes out of nowhere - Okay. lol time breaker.
12. 01:19:603 (1) - The direction of this slider brake the flow from the prev objects (01:17:546 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) -). I'm not saying you have to fix it cause it'll be too much too fix - After thinking about so much complain, move whole triangle part.
13. 01:20:803 (6,7,1) - The stack is kinda tricky to read because of those overlap with the score burst. Try to reposition it so it'll be more conspicuous - Since things are moved, this should be leaved in peace. Second, I like the stacks.
14. 01:08:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing is too close for an anti - jump try 0.4 or 0.6 instead - I'm afraid it's not okay, but It's 0.4x at least for now.
15. The map have some interesting pattern and flow but you're sometime use 1.0 without any reason at all. Please try to be consistent - Point me more, I'll fix it.
    

That's all for now. Poke me after the fix for re-check.

http://puu.sh/16AQM

Sorry for late reply, been occupied with other things lol

Sallad4ever wrote: 7222n

[Normal]

1. Combo Mod

   1. 00:19:260 (5) - Seeing the prev combo placement, this should NC
   2. 00:20:632 (1) - The NC should be removed
   3. 00:33:317 (5) - The prev down beat is occupied by the slider repeat but still, this object have to be NC'ed (according to your combo placement)
   4. 00:34:346 (1) - Remove NC then NC 00:35:717 (6)
   5. 00:37:432 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:38:460 (6)
   6. 00:43:946 (5) - NC this (also try to make it so this slider is centered in y axis)
   7. 00:49:774 (6) - ^
   8. 00:50:803 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 00:52:174 (6)
   9. 00:53:546 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:55:260 (7)
   10. 00:56:803 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:58:003 (5)
   11. 01:03:147 (6) - NC
   12. 01:05:032 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 01:05:032 (1)
2. 00:26:460 (4) - This mini jump is unnecessary. There isn't any change in the music whatsoever anyway. Try to make the pattern more neat without changing the spacing, something like this
   
3. 00:59:546 (6,7) - I have to say that this rhythm is quite unexpected. From the rhythm you used so far, I expected this part to be similar with 00:37:432 (1,2). I suggest to stay following the beat instead of the piano here, it'll be easier to follow in this case
4. 01:28:174 (6) - Umm you should just separate the repeat arrow and the slider head all together, the overlap looks bad. Try a different shape, like this maybe (sorry lost the code xD)
   

[Hard]

1. SPOILER

   1. 00:12:403 (1) - Remove NC
   2. 00:15:146 (1) - ^
   3. 00:17:889 (1) - ^
   4. 00:20:632 (1) - ^
   5. 00:49:260 (1) - ^ the NC on 00:49:432 (6)
   6. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
   7. 00:59:546 (1) - ^ then NC on 01:00:403 (10)
   8. 01:01:774 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:27:145 (10,1,2,3,4) - Nothing wrong here, but I just want to say that this is kinda cramped. Next time you can try to spread the object more by not making them overlap with the previous objects
3. 00:50:632 (6) - The beat on 00:50:803 is very conspicuous. It's better if you use similar rhythm with 00:53:374 (4,5)
4. 00:35:374 (7) - Hmm maybe unstack this?
5. 01:30:917 (1,2,3) - You're using whistle instead of clap just like on the previous objects, this make the object to be inaudible. I suggest to use clap in these objects too

That's all for now. Poke me after the fix for re-check.

Did everything suggested with some self-fix, thanks. Updated now.

Re-check time~~


[Normal]

1. 00:59:546 (4,5) - Still quite tricky to read. I suggest to move 00:59:546 (4) to 00:59:374 (the clap sound is very conspicuous here so player will expected a note here). then use custom slider tick for 5
2. 01:08:460 - Instead of 30% volume how about 60%/70% volume with soft-whistle here? The current volume is kinda low I can't hear the feed back of the slider end
3. 01:28:174 (6) - This slider should end on 01:31:603. The blue tick repeat doesn't follow anything and even if it almost inaudible it still play awkward. As for the slider shape, I try fixing it here
   

   308,201,88174,2,0,B|308:141|256:113|256:113|308:89|340:33|340:33|372:89|

4. 01:31:946 (1) - The spinner bonus might not sound very good here, but the spinner spin can actually fit here. So it's better to remove the blank spinnerspin.wav. Beside silencing both spinner bonus & spinner spin doesn't make sense here. Also increase the volume a bit so it have goo fade out effect, I suggest to change the last 4 timing section volume to 50%, 30%, 10%, and 5%

[Hard]

1. 00:35:374 (7) - Hmm I guess 1.2 spacing work better here
2. 00:39:832 (4,5) - Use 1.0x spacing here. I don't see any reason why it should change spacing mid combo
3. 01:10:003 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The overlap make this pattern Hard to read. I suggest to make the overlap more neat, my idea is
   
   1. Try reposition these object so 01:10:346 (2) can be more visible, kinda like this
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. Stack 01:11:203 (5) under 01:10:346 (2) then move 01:11:374 (1) to x:324 y:68
   3. Move 01:11:032 (4) to x:304 y:304 this will make 01:11:032 (4,5,1) into jumps with equal distance and neater position
   4. The mini jump on 01:12:060 (4) is quite surprising imo, I suggest to use normal spacing here or maybe stack it under 01:11:889 (3)
4. 01:31:945 (1) - Same issue as Normal, I suggest to use the same volume setting too

That's all for now
I feel kinda sick, so I'll continue with Lunatic Loli diff later. G usah buru-buru betulin nya wa pasti usahain nih map bisa wa bubble dengan selamat

Sallad4ever wrote: 7222n

Re-check time~~


[Normal]

1. 00:59:546 (4,5) - Still quite tricky to read. I suggest to move 00:59:546 (4) to 00:59:374 (the clap sound is very conspicuous here so player will expected a note here). then use custom slider tick for 5 Done
2. 01:08:460 - Instead of 30% volume how about 60%/70% volume with soft-whistle here? The current volume is kinda low I can't hear the feed back of the slider end Done
3. 01:28:174 (6) - This slider should end on 01:31:603. The blue tick repeat doesn't follow anything and even if it almost inaudible it still play awkward. As for the slider shape, I try fixing it here Done
   

   308,201,88174,2,0,B|308:141|256:113|256:113|308:89|340:33|340:33|372:89|

4. 01:31:946 (1) - The spinner bonus might not sound very good here, but the spinner spin can actually fit here. So it's better to remove the blank spinnerspin.wav. Beside silencing both spinner bonus & spinner spin doesn't make sense here. Also increase the volume a bit so it have goo fade out effect, I suggest to change the last 4 timing section volume to 50%, 30%, 10%, and 5% Done

[Hard]

1. 00:35:374 (7) - Hmm I guess 1.2 spacing work better here Done
2. 00:39:832 (4,5) - Use 1.0x spacing here. I don't see any reason why it should change spacing mid combo Already fixed before you're posting this xD
3. 01:10:003 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The overlap make this pattern Hard to read. I suggest to make the overlap more neat, my idea is Remade these parts with my own way, should be much more easier to read now
   
   1. Try reposition these object so 01:10:346 (2) can be more visible, kinda like this
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. Stack 01:11:203 (5) under 01:10:346 (2) then move 01:11:374 (1) to x:324 y:68
   3. Move 01:11:032 (4) to x:304 y:304 this will make 01:11:032 (4,5,1) into jumps with equal distance and neater position
   4. The mini jump on 01:12:060 (4) is quite surprising imo, I suggest to use normal spacing here or maybe stack it under 01:11:889 (3)
4. 01:31:945 (1) - Same issue as Normal, I suggest to use the same volume setting too Done

That's all for now
I feel kinda sick, so I'll continue with Lunatic Loli diff later. G usah buru-buru betulin nya wa pasti usahain nih map bisa wa bubble dengan selamat

[Lunatic Loli]

1. 00:27:146 (6,7) - It's not bad but the spacing change is quite big for experienced player to notice. Not to mention on similar place on 00:29:889 (6,7,1) you're using jump which imo played better. The decision is still in your hand though
2. 00:41:032 (7) - Same as before I still think this should 1.2x spacing but for this one my other reason is because the next objects are on 1.2x
3. 00:45:317 (4,5) - Can you make the overlap more neater? You can move 00:45:317 (4) to x:70 y:244 (this will make the slider end to stack to previous slider) or move 4 to x:148 y:245 (it'll turn like this) be careful to not stack 6 & 7 under the slider end cause the stack will be messed up
4. 00:46:603 (7) - I see what you mean about the beat, but that's hard to listen as the sound of piano? is more conspicuous there. So rather than following he beat I strongly suggest to follow the more obvious sound, in this case just like I said before it's more appropriate that 7 start 1/4 beat later while 6 should have 1 more repeat
5. 01:25:774 (2) - The slider arrow almost hidden by the score burst of the previous slider. Just to be safe you should reposition the slider repeat try making it into blanket instead of stacking it the under the slider end, kinda like this?
6. 01:32:289 (1) - Same as the previous mod on Hard & Normal diff, this spinner sounds better with the spin sound on it. If you want to make the spinner almost inaudible make so on the end of it not on the spinner it self

That's it, I've recheck all the other diff and I think they are ready.This should be the last one I hope

Sallad4ever wrote: 7222n

[Lunatic Loli]

1. 00:27:146 (6,7) - It's not bad but the spacing change is quite big for experienced player to notice. Not to mention on similar place on 00:29:889 (6,7,1) you're using jump which imo played better. The decision is still in your hand though - Reducing the spacing here will make an ugly overlapped triangle circle. I prefer to keep this pattern, but if you have suggestions, feel free to tell me.
2. 00:41:032 (7) - Same as before I still think this should 1.2x spacing but for this one my other reason is because the next objects are on 1.2x - Moved.
3. 00:45:317 (4,5) - Can you make the overlap more neater? You can move 00:45:317 (4) to x:70 y:244 (this will make the slider end to stack to previous slider) or move 4 to x:148 y:245 (it'll turn like this) be careful to not stack 6 & 7 under the slider end cause the stack will be messed up - Followed your first suggestions. It came out nicely!
4. 00:46:603 (7) - I see what you mean about the beat, but that's hard to listen as the sound of piano? is more conspicuous there. So rather than following he beat I strongly suggest to follow the more obvious sound, in this case just like I said before it's more appropriate that 7 start 1/4 beat later while 6 should have 1 more repeat - I said bass sound, not piano. You're right that piano has 5 beat. However, I follow bass that has 4 beats. Actually I want to keep this note as I freaking love this. Changed before people point this lovelybye part again.
5. 01:25:774 (2) - The slider arrow almost hidden by the score burst of the previous slider. Just to be safe you should reposition the slider repeat try making it into blanket instead of stacking it the under the slider end, kinda like this? Moved slider repeat but following 01:26:460 (3) - 's approach circle.
6. 01:32:289 (1) - Same as the previous mod on Hard & Normal diff, this spinner sounds better with the spin sound on it. If you want to make the spinner almost inaudible make so on the end of it not on the spinner it self - But, they said it has a silent spinner sound... My whole greenfield was once here. ONCE. AND NOW TWICE.

That's it, I've recheck all the other diff and I think they are ready.This should be the last one I hope

http://puu.sh/18LPn

Thanks, all updated now.

Someone might be worried about 00:49:346 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) but I'm fine about them. Let's do this BUBBLE!!

wow this beatmap is finally bubbled :3

Congrats and nice work guys!

Hey frizz you should get a rankage for the map soon

Thanks but I don't want to rush it though

Oh finally this is bubbled. Gl~