JoJo wrote: 3e5513

[D.N.Angel]

1. 00:05:952 (1) - 这里加个note感觉更搭音乐而且会更好打一些~ 现在这样有点confused可能会按快. 唔，接快的話我是覺得不會，加個note會破壞平衡，要很大的調整，所以不改了
2. 00:22:723 (3,4) - 试试这样的？感觉好很多. fixed
   
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3. 00:30:223 (1) - 完全没有预见的减速! 所以STR+1吧? 會麼？我是覺得這個減速很合適:O
4. 00:38:139 (3) - CTRL+R更有flow~ 我這樣排列是故意的，不想一直繞圈圈-3-

Shana Aisaka wrote: 4a1j3k

[Fiya's Taiko]

Hitsounds :
00:06:889 = big katsu here This would be unrankable, note is in a stream.
00:13:556 = ^ Done
00:23:556 = ^ This would be unrankable, note is in a stream.
00:30:223 = ^ This would be unrankable, note is in a stream.
01:16:889 = big don here This would be unrankable, note is in a stream.

-Sekai- wrote: 1x592m

ok changed the taiko diff, because the old taiko diff is over mapped. sorry to say that ~

those wrote: 2f131h

[Fiya's Taiko Oni]
01:01:889 (1) - Don't find much need for slowing down the track; consider leaving sv at x1.00 If it's mentioned by enough people I will change it, but I like it so for now it stays.

yongtw123 wrote: 153k2b

[D.N.Angel]
00:00:223 ~ 00:05:848: this part is too quiet, please add some hitsounds, like soft-whistle no added
00:03:764 (2) - why put a finish here? shouldn't it be (1) who has a finish hitsound? fixed
00:23:556 (1,2) - two consecutive claps sound noisy, remove one fixed
00:24:181 (6) - clap at end? great idea ~ added
00:26:056 (5) - remove clap and put clap at (6)? no fixed
01:28:348 (7) - make this inherited timing section as quiet as possible ok,fixed

those wrote: 2f131h

[D.N.Angel]
01:16:056 (7) - x0.50 sv is too great of a difference from x1.00 during kiai time. If anything, you'd want to lower sv on 01:27:306 (6,7) - instead. no,I want to keep this pattern

Shana Aisaka wrote: 4a1j3k

[D.N.Angel]

Hitsounds :
00:03:556(1) = add finish here added
00:13:556(2) = ^ added
00:18:139(1,2,3) = add clap no fixed

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

[D.N.Angel]
why not use S:C1 to mute sliderslide in the beginning of song?

00:08:348 (7) - newcombo
00:15:014 (6) - newcombo
00:16:264 (1) - remove newcombo
00:16:889 (3) - newcombo
00:20:014 (5) - finish to the end
00:35:223 (5) - newcombo
00:38:556 (4) - ^
00:45:223 (5) - ^
00:46:889 (10) - hmm, i dont think this clap sounds good...
00:46:889 (10,1) - switch newcombos
00:48:556 (5) - newcombo
00:50:223 (9,1) - switch newcombos
00:51:889 (7) - newcombo
00:55:223 (3) - finish
00:58:348 (8) - finish to the end
00:58:348 (8) - newcombo
01:00:014 (3) - i'd suggest you to map the middle of this slider, its good place to add finish, isnt it?
01:08:348 (9) - newcombo
01:10:223 (1) - finish
01:11:681 (5) - newcombo
01:20:223 (2) - finish to the beginning
01:21:681 (7) - newcombo
01:23:556 (2) - finish to the beginning

nice hitsounds ! <3

1. Nothing wrong here Sir.

• -- Thiiink about it to reduce one tick in Approach Rate in my opinion.
  - 00:51:889 (1) - Ups, you forgot to add a finish here
  - 01:26:889 (1) - Perhaps you should to move this spinner here 01:26:889 and finish here 01:29:181

• - 00:48:556 (4) - Because i don't like this slider, much better if you try something like this
  - 01:13:139 (1,2,3) - Resnap those notes onto the center please

• -- Please specify the kind of difficulty on the difficulty name.

• - 00:31:889 (5) - Perhaps you should to add a new combo here to follow the rythm in my opinion
  - 00:35:223 (5) - ^
  - 01:27:723 (6) - Sounds loud to me but if you can to change a Soft Hitsound here,would be good

• -- Looks great

MoodyRPG wrote: 5ay4u

Angel

• - 00:31:889 (5) - Perhaps you should to add a new combo here to follow the rythm in my opinion
  - 00:35:223 (5) - ^
  - 01:27:723 (6) - Sounds loud to me but if you can to change a Soft Hitsound here,would be good

-Sekai- wrote: 1x592m

ok updated~ :3

Leorda wrote: 6bp3m

[D.N.Angel]
01:01:681 (9) - Clap? no added
01:07:827 (5) - Removing these notes would be having a good rhythm okay,delete this note
01:16:056 (7) - New combo for 0,5x slider yeah,fixed

HeatKai wrote: 5b401y

aleks will mod it and he say you baka.
good luck

Aleks719 wrote: 202q2v

HeatKai wrote: 5b401y

aleks will mod it and he say you baka.
good luck

I approve this message.
Especially "you are baka" part.

Will add my mod post here later

HeatKai wrote: 5b401y

Aleks719 wrote: 202q2v

I approve this message.
Especially "you are baka" part.

Will add my mod post here later

1. in Sekai's diff : ugly star pattern / one spacing issue with triple
2. in general : offset -5ms.

Aleks719 wrote: 202q2v

Weeeeeeee fixed

1. in Sekai's diff : ugly star pattern / one spacing issue with triple
2. in general : offset -5ms.

Saten : same suggestions as before + 00:19:702 (2) - this jump too hard imo. I don't really wanna change any of those

/me goes away

Kiddo-Kun wrote: 1f3u2z

[D.N.Angel]

*Tick rate 2 so that people can easily spot the slow downs.

• 00:24:697 (8) - This slider does not fit the music very well. I would re-arrange the pattern like so.
• 00:30:843 (2) - New combo on this note to illustrate the speed change.

nice catch,all fixed

[Overall]

This map seems pretty solid and well put together. I think there should be a hard difficulty between Normal and D.N.Angel, it's a pretty big difficulty jump. But, you already have too many difficulties here. This map could use more mods before it moves on though.

"Sekai" diff is "Hard" ! >< I think the map have good diff spread

Have a star.

1. 00:01:884 (3) - I guess, the whistle in the end should be removed into (4). like (1) and (2) before.
2. 00:04:801 (3) - add whistle in here. for following the piano sound and consistent hitsounding
3. 00:25:218 (3) - the clap sound in slider's end doesn't fit with the backsound. because, the clap should be in 00:25:634. move this clap into (4)'s beginning
4. 00:28:551 (4) - same as above
5. 00:37:301 (1) - hm, this slider is a bit untidy for me, I guess you should look at to this picture.
   

   224,88,37301,6,0,B|188:108|188:108|152:88|113:110|113:110|72:88,1,160,2|2

1. 00:36:468 (5) - I guess, should be new combo in here.
2. 00:56:051 (1) - remove this new combo, the new combo in here is unecessary since still in the same vocal imo

1. 00:05:218 (5) - add new combo for new rhythm
2. 00:12:092 (2) - add clap in the slider's end lol. seems not consistent if you aren't do this.
3. 00:12:717 (4) - from the mod above, you should remove the clap from beginning into the end.

1. 00:18:134 (1) - add clap?

1. Nothing to say again =w=

Yasora-chan wrote: 4e4m1s

D.N.Angel

1. 00:18:134 (1) - add clap?

ok

lovhin456 wrote: 5t4q36

[D.N.Angel]
- 00:26:676 ~ Remove whistle, I think that it's better if you start using whistles not here fixed
- 00:28:968 ~ Add whistle on start and remove on finish no fixed,I think it is ok


Good overall

1st

21:50 <-Sekai-> : can you mod my hikari map
21:50 <-Sekai-> :
21:50 <Miya> : why? it's bubbled right?
21:51 <-Sekai-> : ._.
21:51 <-Sekai-> : kiddo said it's needs more mods
21:51 <Miya> : orz
21:51 <Miya> : he pop it?
21:51 <-Sekai-> : it's never been bubbled xD
21:51 <Miya> : o.o
21:51 <Miya> : lol, i must be wrong
21:51 <-Sekai-> : http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/46520
21:51 <-Sekai-> : this
21:51 <Miya> : o.o
21:52 <Miya> : hey, i thought it's bubbled
21:52 <-Sekai-> : lol
21:52 <-Sekai-> : ;_; i wish
21:53 <Miya> : hmm, okay, i will mod it :3
21:53 <-Sekai-> : :3
21:53 <-Sekai-> : thanks
21:53 <Miya> : btw
21:53 <Miya> : you deleted the sekai diff?
21:53 <-Sekai-> : no
21:53 <-Sekai-> : renamed it to hard
21:53 <-Sekai-> : ._.
21:53 <Miya> :
21:53 <Miya> : that's why
21:55 <-Sekai-> : he thought Sekai is insane
21:55 <-Sekai-> : and D.N.A's is hard
21:55 <Miya> : >.<
21:55 <-Sekai-> : lol
21:55 <Miya> : yes, it can be confusing
22:00 <Miya> : sekai
22:00 <Miya> : irc?
22:00 <Miya> : i want an irc mod now, since it's more comfortable
22:00 <-Sekai-> : :3
22:00 <-Sekai-> : sure
22:01 <Miya> : ok, call me when you ready :3
22:01 <-Sekai-> : :3
22:01 *-Sekai- is editing (Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size))[http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/46520]
22:01 <Miya> : sure let's start
22:01 <Miya> : first
22:02 <Miya> : i think the volume here is too low
22:02 <Miya> : 00:06:884
22:02 <Miya> : 00:06:884-
22:02 <Miya> : you lowering too much >.<
22:02 <Miya> : if you want the volume to be lowered dont lower by 20%
22:02 <-Sekai-> : in easy?
22:02 <Miya> : lower by 10% or 5%
22:02 <Miya> : yup
22:03 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:03 <Miya> : i prefer to set the volume to 65% rather than 50%
22:03 <Miya> : good :3
22:03 <-Sekai-> : maked it 60%
22:04 <Miya> : 00:13:551 (1) - i think it can be more blanket, so move the slider end one grid up?
22:05 <-Sekai-> : end point?
22:05 <Miya> : yes
22:05 <-Sekai-> : sure fixed
22:05 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:05 <Miya> : 00:16:884 (3) - miss a finish?
22:05 <-Sekai-> : lol oh yes
22:06 <Miya> : >.<
22:06 <Miya> : hmm, make this slider shape more M shape?
22:06 <Miya> : 00:17:301 (4) -
22:07 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:07 <-Sekai-> : how
22:08 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:08 <-Sekai-> : idk if i can fix this
22:09 <Miya> : maybe like this > http://puu.sh/uiTj
22:09 <Miya> : ?
22:09 <-Sekai-> : yeah
22:09 <-Sekai-> : code
22:09 <Miya> : i don't know how to give you a code
22:09 <Miya> : ;_;
22:10 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:10 <-Sekai-> : hmm~
22:10 <-Sekai-> : 17301 <--- search this in notepad
22:10 <Miya> : hoo i see
22:10 <-Sekai-> :
22:11 <Miya> : 100,248,17301,2,0,B|100:212|144:184|180:184|180:184|204:148|308:148|332:184|
22:11 <Miya> : rawwr it can't be copy pasted
22:12 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:12 <Miya> : here i pm forum you
22:12 <Miya> : done please check your inbox message :3
22:13 <-Sekai-> : :3
22:13 <Miya> : oh yes, don't forget to reallign the note next to it
22:13 <Miya> : like 00:19:801 (1,2,3) -
22:15 <Miya> : call me when you're done :3
22:17 <-Sekai-> : orz
22:17 <Miya> : done/
22:17 <Miya> : ?
22:17 <-Sekai-> : i dont know why it's not workign
22:17 <-Sekai-> : working
22:17 <-Sekai-> : *
22:17 <Miya> : still same?
22:18 <-Sekai-> : no it's says there is an error
22:18 <Miya> :
22:18 <-Sekai-> : it's seems you dont copy the whole line
22:18 <Miya> : just add it on the bottom if the line
22:18 <Miya> :
22:18 <Miya> : let me see
22:19 <Miya> : try the new one
22:19 <Miya> : check your inbox
22:19 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:20 <-Sekai-> : yeah it's works now
22:21 <Miya> : :3
22:22 <-Sekai-> : ok is there something else wrong with easy?
22:22 <Miya> : yes
22:22 <Miya> : let's continue
22:24 <Miya> : 00:50:634 (1,2) - i can be more blanketed
22:24 <Miya> : so move 00:51:884 (2) - 2 grid up
22:24 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:24 <-Sekai-> : done
22:25 <Miya> : 01:11:884 (1,4) - miss a finish again? >.<
22:25 <Miya> : 01:11:884 (1) - at it's start
22:25 <-Sekai-> : 4?
22:25 <Miya> : yes
22:25 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:25 <Miya> : add on it too
22:26 <Miya> : hmm, let me retest it again
22:26 <-Sekai-> :
22:28 <Miya> : 00:43:551 (5,1) - make more blanket please >.<
22:29 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:29 <Miya> : 00:56:051 (3) - this one too, it's touch 4, doesn't good to see, better to move the center point 1 grid away from 4
22:30 <Miya> : ok, maybe that's all for easy :3
22:30 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:30 <-Sekai-> : sure
22:30 <Miya> : move to normal?
22:31 <-Sekai-> : sure :3
22:31 <Miya> : ok :3
22:33 <Miya> : umm same problem as easy
22:33 <Miya> : 00:06:884-
22:33 <-Sekai-> : oh
22:33 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:33 <Miya> : 00:18:551 (4) - this one too
22:34 <-Sekai-> : ?
22:34 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:34 <Miya> : you miss a finish there >.<
22:34 <Miya> : at it's end
22:34 <Miya> : ups start
22:34 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:35 <-Sekai-> : added it
22:35 <Miya> : 00:30:634 (1) - move 1 grid right, doesn't centered properly, not good to see ;_;
22:35 <-Sekai-> : oh
22:36 <-Sekai-> : i thought it's already in the center
22:36 <-Sekai-> : xD
22:36 <Miya> : >.<
22:36 <Miya> : 00:30:634 (1) - you must be miss a whistle at it's end
22:37 <-Sekai-> : there is already a whistle at the end
22:37 <-Sekai-> :
22:37 <Miya> : really? not in here
22:37 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:37 <Miya> : ok, then move on
22:37 <-Sekai-> : really?
22:37 <Miya> : yes really >.<
22:37 <Miya> : ok, next
22:38 <Miya> : 00:59:384 (3) - why not copy & paste 00:58:134 (1) - and then ctrl+h?
22:38 <Miya> : 00:58:134 (1) -
22:38 <Miya> : it's more good imo
22:38 <Miya> : ctrl+h then ctrl +r
22:39 <Miya> : it will become like this then > http://puu.sh/ujaF
22:40 <-Sekai-> : hmm~ ok :3
22:40 <-Sekai-> : done
22:40 <Miya> : 01:00:634 (1) - this spinner could be extended, thus making player easier to it
22:40 <Miya> : but you must delete 01:00:217 (4) - to do so
22:40 <-Sekai-> : hmm~
22:41 <-Sekai-> : nah i
22:41 <-Sekai-> : i'll keep it =3=
22:41 <Miya> : in other word, i think that spinner is too short >.<
22:41 <-Sekai-> : no it's not D:
22:41 <-Sekai-> : it's normal
22:41 <Miya> : hmm, ok then
22:41 <Miya> : wmf told me that 3/4 spinner is still short on 140 bpm
22:42 <Miya> : so that's why i said that >.<
22:42 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:42 <Miya> : well, it's okay if you dont want to do it
22:42 <Miya> : next
22:42 <Miya> : 01:12:301 (5) - disrupts my vision, please move 1 grid up sekai >.<
22:43 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:43 <-Sekai-> : :3
22:43 <Miya> : 01:16:467 (2) - how about adding a clap on it, thus making the clap rythim start here?
22:44 <-Sekai-> : sure =3=
22:44 <Miya> : ok, let me recheck it again :3
22:47 <-Sekai-> : now hard? o.o
22:47 <-Sekai-> : btw brb
22:47 <Miya> : nope
22:47 <Miya> : 00:57:717 (3,1) - switch comboes?
22:47 <Miya> : i think the new combo should start on 3
22:47 <Miya> : not 1
22:48 <Miya> : ups
22:48 <Miya> : lol
22:48 <Miya> : i mean start here
22:48 <Miya> : 00:58:967 (2) -
22:48 <Miya> : not 00:58:134 (1) -
22:48 <-Sekai-> : =3=
22:49 <-Sekai-> : sure
22:49 <Miya> : 01:13:134 (1) - i don't think you need a new combo
22:50 <Miya> : it's still on the same stanza
22:50 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:50 <-Sekai-> : but where to add the nc then
22:50 <Miya> : nope
22:50 <Miya> : just remove the nc there
22:51 <-Sekai-> : but
22:52 <-Sekai-> : it's gonna be till 11 D:
22:52 <Miya> : ??
22:52 <-Sekai-> : if i removed the NC
22:52 <-Sekai-> : ._.
22:52 <Miya> : remove nc here sekai 01:13:134 (1) -
22:52 <Miya> : orz
22:52 <Miya> : >.<
22:52 <-Sekai-> : 01:12:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
22:52 <-Sekai-> : it's gonna be like this
22:53 <Miya> : ??
22:53 <-Sekai-> : 11 combos D:
22:53 <Miya> : what is your diff?
22:53 <Miya> : im still on normal
22:53 <Miya> : orz
22:53 <-Sekai-> : no
22:53 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:53 <-Sekai-> : ....
22:53 <-Sekai-> : ..
22:53 <Miya> : >.<
22:53 <-Sekai-> : orz
22:54 <Miya> : >.<
22:54 <Miya> : please revert back about new comboes on hard, and goes to normal and do the same thing
22:55 <-Sekai-> : lol done
22:55 <-Sekai-> : xD
22:55 <Miya> : ok, that's means mod on normal is finished
22:55 <Miya> : :3
22:55 <Miya> : now, move to hard >.<
22:55 <Miya> : don't move to other diff until i say so lol
22:57 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:57 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:57 <Miya> : orz
22:57 <Miya> : i almost got ss
22:57 <Miya> : >.<
22:58 <Miya> : well, very solid for the rythim , good :3
22:59 <Miya> : oh yes the only thing i make got 100 is here
22:59 <Miya> : 01:16:051 (2) -
22:59 <Miya> : i thought it's 1/2
22:59 <Miya> : look at the spacing, orz >.<
22:59 <Miya> : you should move it further away
23:23 <Miya> : sekai is dc'ed, continue on the next irc chat

2nd

15:15 <Miya> : Sekai >.<
15:16 <Miya> : you dissapear last night
15:16 <-Sekai-> : o.o
15:16 <-Sekai-> : lol
15:16 <-Sekai-> : my net crashed
15:16 <-Sekai-> : xD
15:16 <Miya> : let's continue >.<
15:16 <-Sekai-> : o.o
15:16 <-Sekai-> : o.o
15:16 <Miya> : yes, continue on the hard diff
15:17 <-Sekai-> : lovhin456 modded it
15:17 <-Sekai-> : lol wait
15:17 <Miya> :
15:18 <-Sekai-> : btw
15:18 <-Sekai-> : - 00:02:093 ~ Move (4) here that way it follows the music more
15:18 <-Sekai-> : D:
15:18 <-Sekai-> : i dont understand this
15:18 <Miya> : wait
15:19 <Miya> : hoo, it means
15:19 <Miya> : 00:02:301 (4) - move to 00:02:093-
15:19 <-Sekai-> : slider end?
15:19 <-Sekai-> : or all of the slider
15:19 <Miya> : nope, the circle
15:20 <Miya> : 00:02:301 (4) - this circle
15:20 <-Sekai-> : ohh
15:20 <-Sekai-> : yeah
15:21 <Miya> : it's more good yes
15:21 <Miya> : but i think it will need a whistle here 00:02:718 (6) -
15:23 <Miya> : 00:04:176 (2,3) - and i think you should switch whistle here too
15:23 <Miya> : from slider 3 start to circle 2
15:24 <Miya> : 00:11:884 (1) - aww miss a finish again >.<
15:24 <Miya> : 00:11:884 (1) - this too >.<
15:24 <Miya> : at it's end
15:25 <Miya> : 00:18:551 (1) - this one too, at it's start
15:25 <-Sekai-> :
15:25 <-Sekai-> : ok added
15:26 <Miya> : 00:43:967 (1) - miss a whislte at it's start? it feels empty >.<
15:27 <Miya> : 00:51:052 (3) - an awkward whistle sound, it's not consistant with your whistle rythim imo
15:27 <Miya> : instead add whistle here 00:50:634 (2) - at it's start
15:27 <Miya> : and here 00:51:468 (5) -
15:28 <Miya> : sekai
15:28 <Miya> : 01:16:051 (2) - spacing
15:29 <Miya> : makes the flow break because the spacing
15:32 <Miya> : sekai is dced again, but my mod is finished >.<

1. 00:07:509 (4) - Could you make it stack properly with 00:06:051 (1) - . Partly overlapped is always not good to see.
2. 00:53:134 (4) - This one too, i think you can stack it with 00:51:884 (1) - because it's partly overlaped by slider 1. Also i think you need a whistle at this sldier start because i fell there's a gap between your whistle rythim and it's feel empty.
3. 01:26:468 (3) - Add clap here to close your clap rythim?

1. 00:16:051 (1) - This 1/8 kick slider will be surprising much people. If they encounter it in the first time, many people will think this as a 1/4 kick slider. Then they play it, and they surprised because it's 1/8 slider, then people will mess and got a lot of 100 in the next stream 00:16:572 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - because you suddenly change the ryhtim into 1/4. My suggestion is to make the next stream into slider. So people won't have a problem with the rythmic change so suddenly. Or just delete this sldier, and change into 1/4 kick slider.
2. 00:33:551 (1) - Please change this whistle at the start into finish. Not consistant with finish sound at 00:46:676 (6) - end.
3. 01:02:718- Because the drum sound start here, it will be good if you add a normal hitsound timing point with 60% volume here so it will be cover up the drum sound. If the whistle at the stream become awkward, then it's a good idea to delete the whistle.
4. 01:23:551 (1) - At least makes this finish sound into normal one. It's not consistant with your finish sound at the kiai.

Miya wrote: 4g494n

D.N.Angel

1. 00:07:509 (4) - Could you make it stack properly with 00:06:051 (1) - . Partly overlapped is always not good to see. //uh... It had been stacked completely
2. 00:53:134 (4) - This one too, i think you can stack it with 00:51:884 (1) - because it's partly overlaped by slider 1. Also i think you need a whistle at this sldier start because i fell there's a gap between your whistle rythim and it's feel empty.
   //it is fine because the thing you want me to stack is the slider's head
   //added whistle
3. 01:26:468 (3) - Add clap here to close your clap rythim? //no

lovhin456 wrote: 5t4q36

[Saten]
- 00:33:134 ~ Maybe use 1/8 here too like you did on 00:30:009 ? will give it a try

Miya wrote: 4g494n

Saten

1. 00:16:051 (1) - This 1/8 kick slider will be surprising much people. If they encounter it in the first time, many people will think this as a 1/4 kick slider. Then they play it, and they surprised because it's 1/8 slider, then people will mess and got a lot of 100 in the next stream 00:16:572 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - because you suddenly change the ryhtim into 1/4. My suggestion is to make the next stream into slider. So people won't have a problem with the rythmic change so suddenly. Or just delete this sldier, and change into 1/4 kick slider. I had complaints ing 1/8 & 1/4 kick-sliders right after each-other, so I'm sticking with this for now.
2. 00:33:551 (1) - Please change this whistle at the start into finish. Not consistant with finish sound at 00:46:676 (6) - end. I can't hear any finish sound in the music here
3. 01:02:718- Because the drum sound start here, it will be good if you add a normal hitsound timing point with 60% volume here so it will be cover up the drum sound. If the whistle at the stream become awkward, then it's a good idea to delete the whistle. done
4. 01:23:551 (1) - At least makes this finish sound into normal one. It's not consistant with your finish sound at the kiai. done

Saturos-fangirl wrote: 6c1m5f

[D.N.Angel]
00:01:051 (6) - not so soon on the jumps please, build up expectations for them first //hmm...I feel the jump should be here,I want to keep this pattern
00:47:926 (3) - the placement of this bothers me and I can't figure out why //no change because I like this part lol
00:50:842 (2) - why not just move 2 farther away from 1 to make the next spacing more obvious? //It is to be consistent
01:21:259 (5) - you are EVIL. EVIL i say. //T.T,I like this kind of overlap

Saturos-fangirl wrote: 6c1m5f

First of if you are trying to reference Satan the enemy of God and all that, you spelled it wrong

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

[D.N Angel] 1t95d

1. 00:33:551 - Remove clap,sound bette to me.
2. 00:36:884 - ^
3. 00:46:884 - ^
4. 00:50:218 - ^
5. 01:14:592 (7) - Add new combo.

Miya wrote: 4g494n

Wow, another ranked map by moe Sekai <3
Congratz~