I cleaned up some stuff in the end, but other than that, <3~.
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Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! [Osu|Taiko] 85f3q
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Shohei Ohtani
Lunah_old
Finished o_O
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Not done, but here is my Hard so far x:
Edit: I forgot to add in the custom clap. Just steal it off Parade of Liars or one of Krisom's songs.
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Kiddo's Hard].osu
Edit: I forgot to add in the custom clap. Just steal it off Parade of Liars or one of Krisom's songs.
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Kiddo's Hard].osu
Finished:
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: 24610 Hikasa Yoko - Listen!!.rar
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: 24610 Hikasa Yoko - Listen!!.rar
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Hi,I created a Normal for this map,if you like it you can use it for your map,and if you don't like my diff,never mind 
By the way,I star this,hoping it gets ranked soon!
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [-kevincela-'s Normal].osu
By the way,I star this,hoping it gets ranked soon!
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [-kevincela-'s Normal].osu
ok i see another map's and i need realy to say this ._.
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:14:801 (1) move the clap to 00:15:144
00:15:487 (2) move it to 00:15:830 (3)
00:17:201 (5) whistle
00:23:373 (3) Clap
00:27:830 (4) Move it to 00:27:658
00:34:001 ~ 00:36:744 Kai time smalls? you got to do a liitle big's
00:39:487 ~ 00:42:230 ^
[Collab]
Libydose:
Great~
Bass-chan:
...
Lilac:
...
My collab:
02:13:773 (5) i forget to put the clap... yeah i forget it srry~
Lunah:
Your part is great! :3~
Derekku:
...
CDFA:
>:3~
PD: i love my collab <3~!
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:14:801 (1) move the clap to 00:15:144
00:15:487 (2) move it to 00:15:830 (3)
00:17:201 (5) whistle
00:23:373 (3) Clap
00:27:830 (4) Move it to 00:27:658
00:34:001 ~ 00:36:744 Kai time smalls? you got to do a liitle big's
00:39:487 ~ 00:42:230 ^
[Collab]
Libydose:
Great~
Bass-chan:
...
Lilac:
...
My collab:
02:13:773 (5) i forget to put the clap... yeah i forget it srry~
Lunah:
Your part is great! :3~
Derekku:
...
CDFA:
>:3~
PD: i love my collab <3~!
Ok, I finished my diff and i fixed the things in the mod of Kurisuchianu~
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [-kevincela-'s Normal].osu
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [-kevincela-'s Normal].osu
Shohei Ohtani
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Ozzy's Taik-On!! (re-map [good luck update button])].osuYeah, re-name it to Ozzy's TaiK-On!!
Shohei Ohtani
HI THINGS STUFF AND WELL YA HI THINGS.
Edit: my part needs to be hitsounded.
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Collab].osu
Edit: my part needs to be hitsounded.
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Collab].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Sorry for the wait!
If you think that my part is too hard, then I can gladly scale it down a bit. Also, the .osu contains kiai (with love).
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Listen!! Derekku!!].osu
If you think that my part is too hard, then I can gladly scale it down a bit. Also, the .osu contains kiai (with love).
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Listen!! Derekku!!].osu
General
• Add "-kevincela-" to the tags please~
Easy
• 00:24:401 (2) - Neh, I feel as though newer players would get confused with the first tick on this slider and once they hear the custom slider tick they would think that they've reached the repeat already, thus risking a slider break. So I would change to normal hitsounds for this slider, like so (This applies for other sliders like this in the map):
• 01:40:515 (3) - This slider does not flow very well into (4) in my opinion. I would do something like this to force the flow into (4) making the game play a lot better:
• 03:23:372 (5) - I would make this slider curvier and flip it vertically (Ctrl + J). This would force the flow into the next note, thus enhancing game play.
-kevincela-'s Normal
♦ AR seems pretty low. Bring it to 4 or 5.
• 00:30:573 (4) - Move this one red tick earlier. It matches the lyrics much better that way. Also, I would stack (5) on (6)
• 00:36:058 (1) - I would remove the new combo on this note to match the parts ahead.
• 00:43:773 (1) - This spinner is too short. Have the spinner start on 00:42:230 and end on 00:44:630.
• 00:48:744 (2) - Stack this note on top of (3). The pattern flows better that way
• 01:50:801 (1) - Flip this note vertically so that it forces flow into (2). Like this:
• 02:42:915 - I would add a note here. The time length between (2) and (3) just feels weird.
impossiblexu's Hard
• 01:12:058 (7) - It's pretty hard to spot this swirrly slider on the first play through. Players would over jump it on their first go. I would put it a little more in the open, like this:
Collab
• 00:57:830 (1) - This spinner seems random and oddly placed to me. I say you should map through it.
• 01:59:544 (2) - I find this stacking strange and hard to catch. I would do something like this instead:
• 02:06:573 (6) - This note is way too close to (7). Players would think it's part of the stream.
• 03:08:800 (4,4) - I think you could do a lot more with these sliders. Nothing wrong with them technically, it's just boring.
Overall
Pretty nice map. I really love the Collab and the Hard diff. Keep up the good work :3
♪Star♪
• Add "-kevincela-" to the tags please~
Easy
• 00:24:401 (2) - Neh, I feel as though newer players would get confused with the first tick on this slider and once they hear the custom slider tick they would think that they've reached the repeat already, thus risking a slider break. So I would change to normal hitsounds for this slider, like so (This applies for other sliders like this in the map):
• 01:40:515 (3) - This slider does not flow very well into (4) in my opinion. I would do something like this to force the flow into (4) making the game play a lot better:
• 03:23:372 (5) - I would make this slider curvier and flip it vertically (Ctrl + J). This would force the flow into the next note, thus enhancing game play.
-kevincela-'s Normal
♦ AR seems pretty low. Bring it to 4 or 5.
• 00:30:573 (4) - Move this one red tick earlier. It matches the lyrics much better that way. Also, I would stack (5) on (6)
• 00:36:058 (1) - I would remove the new combo on this note to match the parts ahead.
• 00:43:773 (1) - This spinner is too short. Have the spinner start on 00:42:230 and end on 00:44:630.
• 00:48:744 (2) - Stack this note on top of (3). The pattern flows better that way
• 01:50:801 (1) - Flip this note vertically so that it forces flow into (2). Like this:
• 02:42:915 - I would add a note here. The time length between (2) and (3) just feels weird.
impossiblexu's Hard
• 01:12:058 (7) - It's pretty hard to spot this swirrly slider on the first play through. Players would over jump it on their first go. I would put it a little more in the open, like this:
Collab
• 00:57:830 (1) - This spinner seems random and oddly placed to me. I say you should map through it.
• 01:59:544 (2) - I find this stacking strange and hard to catch. I would do something like this instead:
• 02:06:573 (6) - This note is way too close to (7). Players would think it's part of the stream.
• 03:08:800 (4,4) - I think you could do a lot more with these sliders. Nothing wrong with them technically, it's just boring.
Overall
Pretty nice map. I really love the Collab and the Hard diff. Keep up the good work :3
♪Star♪
Shohei Ohtani
add collab mappers in your creators description? i ive suggested that
ok.all suggestion due to nice map...
collab
00:15:144 (3,4) - hm for insane, you may change the curve or the direction, now is a bit boring?
00:24:744 (10) - delete, i know it flows, but antijump the next note is a good style~
00:24:915 (11) - anti jump it, move it closer to 9
00:42:230 (1) - delay it a bit and add a note? it is strange when akiyama mio sing..and there isnt any note
00:53:715 (4) - it is obviously not symmetrical....not changing it? some mapper dont wanna change theses things
01:05:201 (5,6) - make the slider completely cover it? to terrify the plyaer and this avoid 01:06:058 (3)'s tail to touch the combo burst
01:11:715 (7) - jump this....i feel a little disappointed when the previous slider has no jump..
01:36:230 (10) - whistle!
01:41:715 (10) - ^
03:01:943 (6) - rotate it a bit? looks like porsche going offroad
the arrangement of the last sliderss doesnt make it like insane?
oh my...
im not going to continue...im exhausted
ok.all suggestion due to nice map...
collab
- lybydose:
00:12:058 (1) - move right and down a bit, could blanket the note and also better arrangement so that 00:12:058 (1,2,3,4) - give a better curve
00:26:630 (3,4,5,6) - suggestion: make 3,4,5 a pattern, then 6 stack on 3..whatever? cause current is even not anything - lizzehb:
00:48:915 (5) - stack with previous note 3?
00:49:258 (6) - more dots make better curve
00:53:373 (12) - add a repeat....?
00:57:830 (1) - this spinner has 1000 extra score in auto-mod
01:02:458 (6,7) - i dont see why you do this...
01:10:344 (1) - same stuff...curve it better - lilac:
01:30:744 (2) - didnt you stack it properly
01:34:344 (1,2) - if you want a different curve i suggest you to do a contrast, one flatter, one curvier, i see you copy and pasted, but the position make it like a different slider with ruined curve ( maybe grid 2 left in smallest grid size) - kurisuchianu:
02:13:944 (6) - lol-ed
02:15:658 (11) - hm.bad arrangement with note 9 , looks messy a bit? (maybe stack with 10 and roll over note 9) - lunah
02:38:115 (6) - make it a straight one at the middle
02:53:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe use a rotating rectangle? thats pretty . and why not raise the volume from note 1 to 9 - derekku
03:08:800 (4,4) - you are the only mapper who slacks.....why dont map other thing, long repeats ....yer
03:25:257 (2) - you put it there...i missed ahhhahhhhh - CDFA
03:28:857 (1,2,3,4) - soften it a bit? to create a dramatic effect..sorry for my english
03:36:058 (6) - copy and paste slider 3?
00:15:144 (3,4) - hm for insane, you may change the curve or the direction, now is a bit boring?
00:24:744 (10) - delete, i know it flows, but antijump the next note is a good style~
00:24:915 (11) - anti jump it, move it closer to 9
00:42:230 (1) - delay it a bit and add a note? it is strange when akiyama mio sing..and there isnt any note
00:53:715 (4) - it is obviously not symmetrical....not changing it? some mapper dont wanna change theses things
01:05:201 (5,6) - make the slider completely cover it? to terrify the plyaer and this avoid 01:06:058 (3)'s tail to touch the combo burst
01:11:715 (7) - jump this....i feel a little disappointed when the previous slider has no jump..
01:36:230 (10) - whistle!
01:41:715 (10) - ^
03:01:943 (6) - rotate it a bit? looks like porsche going offroad
the arrangement of the last sliderss doesnt make it like insane?
oh my...
im not going to continue...im exhausted
Shohei Ohtani
All fixed :3
PS: since my diff is REALLY old i could remap it,I'll see later on this week. :3
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [-kevincela-'s Normal].osu
PS: since my diff is REALLY old i could remap it,I'll see later on this week. :3
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [-kevincela-'s Normal].osu
ya' go
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I changed some stuff.
I don't what.
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Collab].osu
Contains every part.
I don't what.
: Hikasa Yoko - Listen!! (CDFA) [Collab].osu
Contains every part.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
wow, I saw a yellow star on this thread
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue
[General]
00:21:315 (7) - move this a bit left&up
00:23:030 (1) - finish?
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
slider tick rate can't be 0.5
fine
[impossiblexu's Hard]
02:44:287 (4) - no need to NC here
good diff, need some arrangement on NC imo
[Insane]
00:36:058 (11,12,13,14,15) - errr..make this a rhombus rather than an irregular figure. and you used NC at 01:45:315 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) so why not NC them here
00:38:630 (6) - add clap as well
[Collab]
01:02:458 (6,7) - what were you following here?
01:30:744 (2) - stack
why still W.I.P?
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue
[General]
- set a unified lead-in please, like 1000
- ^and the countdown
- ^and the LetterboxInBreaks
- ^and the timing sections
- you'd better to move kiai time to downbeat
- Source should be K-ON!!
00:21:315 (7) - move this a bit left&up
00:23:030 (1) - finish?
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
slider tick rate can't be 0.5
fine
[impossiblexu's Hard]
02:44:287 (4) - no need to NC here
good diff, need some arrangement on NC imo
[Insane]
00:36:058 (11,12,13,14,15) - errr..make this a rhombus rather than an irregular figure. and you used NC at 01:45:315 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) so why not NC them here
00:38:630 (6) - add clap as well
[Collab]
01:02:458 (6,7) - what were you following here?
01:30:744 (2) - stack
why still W.I.P?
unyu~
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[General]
Y u no change your combo colours? D: at least delete the double reds, I get annoyed by those. ;~;
Also, shouldn't the Kiai times between each diff be consistent?
[Timing]
It was pretty spot-on in the beginning but some parts were a bit off... I managed to get an off-set of 1075. Might not be perfect, but fixes some areas. So that's -12ms.
[Easy]
00:37:773 (2) - You should totally move this up so it's on the blue (3) looks better. >w<
00:40:515 (4) - I'm concerned with this being so far on the bottom, the slidertrack that is... redo?
00:42:573 (1) - You don't give les newbies enough time to react for the green (1)! Shorten the slider to the white tick before the one it's currently on. Sounds fine still, maybe even a bit better!
01:12:058 (8) - This looks fine, but might not be good for an Easy. You can just ignore this point if you want.
01:53:887 (1) - Again, shorten to white tick before it?
02:57:315 (1) - Slider is not moe. ;_; Make just a normal curve?
03:18:915 (1) - RNC?
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:07:944 (3) - Adjust this to the start of one? You can defy distance spacing slightly if it's for enatness. Just resnap (4) to a convenient position after.
01:00:573 (5) - I wouldn't stack this after (2) and (3) has a 1/2 distance, you probably should distance snap this normally.
02:09:144 (3) - Yeah, you shouldn't stack these.
02:12:744 (2) - Make symmetrical? :/
03:17:715 (4) - Looks awkward not directly stacked. Delete & replace the note and hold the cursor under the slider end so it perfectly snaps onto the slider.
[impossiblexu's Hard]
I would recommend CS -1 because of the streams and jump, but this map is already pretty modded. So I guess you wouldn't. ;/
I'm confused as to why there's no Kiai from 00:44:973 - 1:12:401 or from 01:56:287 - 2:18:401. Maybe add?
00:54:401 (7) - RNC?
00:55:430 (1) - NC?
00:55:944 (6) - RNC?
01:44:630 (3,4,5,6) - Might be a bit hard to read. I'd recommend finding some other way to keep the jumps.
02:46:858 (1) - RNC?
02:48:058 (10) - NC?
02:48:230 (1) - RNC?
02:49:601 (1) - RNC?
02:50:801 (8) - NC?
02:51:144 (1) - RNC?
02:52:344 (1) - RNC?
02:53:544 (9) - NC?
02:53:715 (1) - RNC?
Sorry only gave combo suggestions... ;_;
[Insane]
Phew... lotta diffs... =3=
00:30:915 (10) - NC?
00:31:258 (1) - RNC?
00:34:001 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Nice pattern, ^o^
00:44:973 (1) - Finish on the start of this!~
01:52:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looks messy and not moe... D:
02:37:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ...swaq
02:40:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ... double swaq
03:25:172 (3,4,1,2,3,2,3,4,2,3,4,5,6) - These are unreadable! Try to find some way to make them stack and not cluster... ;_;
03:30:743 (5) - NC?
[Collab]
LAST DIFF! \o/
00:42:230 (5,6) - I feel the placement of these hitcircles is a bit awkward. Relocate and maybe stack?
Aaaaand at this point I have to get off the computer, school tomorrow. Will finish later. Probably. :3
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[General]
Y u no change your combo colours? D: at least delete the double reds, I get annoyed by those. ;~;
Also, shouldn't the Kiai times between each diff be consistent?
[Timing]
It was pretty spot-on in the beginning but some parts were a bit off... I managed to get an off-set of 1075. Might not be perfect, but fixes some areas. So that's -12ms.
[Easy]
00:37:773 (2) - You should totally move this up so it's on the blue (3) looks better. >w<
00:40:515 (4) - I'm concerned with this being so far on the bottom, the slidertrack that is... redo?
00:42:573 (1) - You don't give les newbies enough time to react for the green (1)! Shorten the slider to the white tick before the one it's currently on. Sounds fine still, maybe even a bit better!
01:12:058 (8) - This looks fine, but might not be good for an Easy. You can just ignore this point if you want.
01:53:887 (1) - Again, shorten to white tick before it?
02:57:315 (1) - Slider is not moe. ;_; Make just a normal curve?
03:18:915 (1) - RNC?
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:07:944 (3) - Adjust this to the start of one? You can defy distance spacing slightly if it's for enatness. Just resnap (4) to a convenient position after.
01:00:573 (5) - I wouldn't stack this after (2) and (3) has a 1/2 distance, you probably should distance snap this normally.
02:09:144 (3) - Yeah, you shouldn't stack these.
02:12:744 (2) - Make symmetrical? :/
03:17:715 (4) - Looks awkward not directly stacked. Delete & replace the note and hold the cursor under the slider end so it perfectly snaps onto the slider.
[impossiblexu's Hard]
I would recommend CS -1 because of the streams and jump, but this map is already pretty modded. So I guess you wouldn't. ;/
I'm confused as to why there's no Kiai from 00:44:973 - 1:12:401 or from 01:56:287 - 2:18:401. Maybe add?
00:54:401 (7) - RNC?
00:55:430 (1) - NC?
00:55:944 (6) - RNC?
01:44:630 (3,4,5,6) - Might be a bit hard to read. I'd recommend finding some other way to keep the jumps.
02:46:858 (1) - RNC?
02:48:058 (10) - NC?
02:48:230 (1) - RNC?
02:49:601 (1) - RNC?
02:50:801 (8) - NC?
02:51:144 (1) - RNC?
02:52:344 (1) - RNC?
02:53:544 (9) - NC?
02:53:715 (1) - RNC?
Sorry only gave combo suggestions... ;_;
[Insane]
Phew... lotta diffs... =3=
00:30:915 (10) - NC?
00:31:258 (1) - RNC?
00:34:001 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Nice pattern, ^o^
00:44:973 (1) - Finish on the start of this!~
01:52:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looks messy and not moe... D:
02:37:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ...swaq
02:40:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ... double swaq
03:25:172 (3,4,1,2,3,2,3,4,2,3,4,5,6) - These are unreadable! Try to find some way to make them stack and not cluster... ;_;
03:30:743 (5) - NC?
[Collab]
LAST DIFF! \o/
00:42:230 (5,6) - I feel the placement of these hitcircles is a bit awkward. Relocate and maybe stack?
Aaaaand at this point I have to get off the computer, school tomorrow. Will finish later. Probably. :3
Shohei Ohtani
Very helpful mod . The kiai times don't have to really be consistent throughout guest diffs, so I left it a bit as is (Although I added it in impossibruxu's diff and deleted the extra kiai in kevin's diff since I didn't really like it :>)
Also, I'll consider raising the circle size. I personally thing that the way the map is created, the size is fine, but I'll get some more opinions~
. The kiai times don't have to really be consistent throughout guest diffs, so I left it a bit as is (Although I added it in impossibruxu's diff and deleted the extra kiai in kevin's diff since I didn't really like it :>)Also, I'll consider raising the circle size. I personally thing that the way the map is created, the size is fine, but I'll get some more opinions~
m4m! big big yeah! /o/
[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server.
Not all diffs have the same combo colours - was this intentional (bar Taiko, of course)?
AudioLeadIn is inconsistent across all difficulties.
Kiai Time is inconsistent across all difficulties.
Timing sections inconsistent across all difficulties.
Perhaps add some of the "traditional" K-On! tags, too?
[Easy]
00:17:544 (4) - Looks messy even though you wanted it to be symmetrical... try this one:
02:56:287 - iirc this needs to be at least 5% Volume.
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:07:944 (3) - Remove the clap, replace on 00:08:973 (4).
00:08:201 - the slidertick here needs a sound. Ask CDFA to show you how to change the hitsounds, since it's really lacking in this diff. These sliders, for example, are missing sounds: 00:13:430 (3) - 00:16:173 (4) - 00:18:915 (4) - and on.
00:53:201 (1) - Points at x:132 y:164 and x:132 y:140 aren't needed. Select the slider, right click the points.
02:12:401 (1,2,3,4) - These four objects intergrate two different stacking paces, which newer players may get confused about (they may click (1,2) too quickly, or (3,4) too slowly, etc.) Look through your diff and see that you mainly stick to one pace of stacking.
[Ozzy's Taik-On!!]
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[impossiblexu's Hard]
00:33:487 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is overmapped; only (5,6,7) are to the music. You should delete (8,9) and replace 00:34:001 (1) - for spacing.
00:41:201 (3) - Reason for this particular slider shape? Not quite sure it fits.
02:42:915 (1) - Surely there's a better option to make this match the music?
02:55:258 (1) - Make this end the same time as this does in the other diffs.
[Insane]
02:49:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - music gets more dramatic here; increasing spacing for every two notes might be a good idea (ignoring the fact that you may want to keep your hexagon pattern).
03:37:086 (1) - Since this is Insane, you may want this to be mapped as circles and sliders instead of a spinner...
[Collab]
00:46:858 (7) - Since you had this here and 00:52:344 (10) - , it's kinda weird not to have it at 00:49:258 (6)'s end.
00:55:087 (3,4) - Spacing decreases by over half. Maybe bring (2) closer or place (4) further, or a combination of both?
Kurisuchianu's section has some really awkward spacing; most of the map follows around 0.9x spacing, but this section gets really tight. Though I don't know if there are any rules about this, it would be better if all the people doing the collab decided on a set distance spacing to make it more uniform as opposed to parts of people's mapping just slapped together.
03:37:086 (1) - See Insane.
Also, I feel the scale in and out can be done a bit better. I'll come back to this.
Good luck :3
[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server.
Not all diffs have the same combo colours - was this intentional (bar Taiko, of course)?
AudioLeadIn is inconsistent across all difficulties.
Kiai Time is inconsistent across all difficulties.
Timing sections inconsistent across all difficulties.
Perhaps add some of the "traditional" K-On! tags, too?
[Easy]
00:17:544 (4) - Looks messy even though you wanted it to be symmetrical... try this one:
256,320,17544,2,0,B|232:352|208:320|208:320|184:352|160:320,2,120.00000119209301:12:058 (8) - Not sure if suitable for Easy. Same with 03:07:943 (10) -
02:56:287 - iirc this needs to be at least 5% Volume.
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
00:07:944 (3) - Remove the clap, replace on 00:08:973 (4).
00:08:201 - the slidertick here needs a sound. Ask CDFA to show you how to change the hitsounds, since it's really lacking in this diff. These sliders, for example, are missing sounds: 00:13:430 (3) - 00:16:173 (4) - 00:18:915 (4) - and on.
00:53:201 (1) - Points at x:132 y:164 and x:132 y:140 aren't needed. Select the slider, right click the points.
02:12:401 (1,2,3,4) - These four objects intergrate two different stacking paces, which newer players may get confused about (they may click (1,2) too quickly, or (3,4) too slowly, etc.) Look through your diff and see that you mainly stick to one pace of stacking.
[Ozzy's Taik-On!!]
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[impossiblexu's Hard]
00:33:487 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is overmapped; only (5,6,7) are to the music. You should delete (8,9) and replace 00:34:001 (1) - for spacing.
00:41:201 (3) - Reason for this particular slider shape? Not quite sure it fits.
02:42:915 (1) - Surely there's a better option to make this match the music?
02:55:258 (1) - Make this end the same time as this does in the other diffs.
[Insane]
02:49:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - music gets more dramatic here; increasing spacing for every two notes might be a good idea (ignoring the fact that you may want to keep your hexagon pattern).
03:37:086 (1) - Since this is Insane, you may want this to be mapped as circles and sliders instead of a spinner...
[Collab]
00:46:858 (7) - Since you had this here and 00:52:344 (10) - , it's kinda weird not to have it at 00:49:258 (6)'s end.
00:55:087 (3,4) - Spacing decreases by over half. Maybe bring (2) closer or place (4) further, or a combination of both?
Kurisuchianu's section has some really awkward spacing; most of the map follows around 0.9x spacing, but this section gets really tight. Though I don't know if there are any rules about this, it would be better if all the people doing the collab decided on a set distance spacing to make it more uniform as opposed to parts of people's mapping just slapped together.
03:37:086 (1) - See Insane.
Also, I feel the scale in and out can be done a bit better. I'll come back to this.
Good luck :3
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
'Sup dude. As per request on #modhelp.
General
Combo colors are inconsistent.
Easy
00:17:544 (4) - This slider is butt...
00:20:630 (5, 6) - I don't think you should stack notes under slider ends on Easy. (This is done a few more times throughout the map so I don't need to put it out any more.)
02:43:258 (2) - Curve this slider a bit more?
Although I couldn't find much, work on the patterns here...
impossiblexu's Hard
HP Drain Rate +2
01:00:230 (2, 3) - Spacing.
02:06:744 (4, 5, 6) - Kind of confusing placement.
02:15:830 (2) - Ctrl+R this.
02:18:573 - Extend to 02:19:944
Insane
a.k.a DEATHSTREEEAAAAAMMMM
01:12:401 - Unhearable hitsounds are not allowed.
Pretty solid diff, really.
Collab
I don't know if I should be modding a collab but whatevs. I just won't mess with any patterns or timeline patterns too much.
00:51:658 (7) - New combo.
00:56:115 (7, 8) - Combo placement is kind of confusing here. I think you should move (7) to x:408 y:344 and (8) to x:472 y:296.
Rest seems fine.
Insane and Collab are very very good difficulties, but work on the others more.
General
Combo colors are inconsistent.
Easy
00:17:544 (4) - This slider is butt...
00:20:630 (5, 6) - I don't think you should stack notes under slider ends on Easy. (This is done a few more times throughout the map so I don't need to put it out any more.)
02:43:258 (2) - Curve this slider a bit more?
Although I couldn't find much, work on the patterns here...
impossiblexu's Hard
HP Drain Rate +2
01:00:230 (2, 3) - Spacing.
02:06:744 (4, 5, 6) - Kind of confusing placement.
02:15:830 (2) - Ctrl+R this.
02:18:573 - Extend to 02:19:944
Insane
a.k.a DEATHSTREEEAAAAAMMMM
01:12:401 - Unhearable hitsounds are not allowed.
Pretty solid diff, really.
Collab
I don't know if I should be modding a collab but whatevs. I just won't mess with any patterns or timeline patterns too much.
00:51:658 (7) - New combo.
00:56:115 (7, 8) - Combo placement is kind of confusing here. I think you should move (7) to x:408 y:344 and (8) to x:472 y:296.
Rest seems fine.
Insane and Collab are very very good difficulties, but work on the others more.
From my Q~
[General]
[Ozzy]
[General]
- delete .osb
- fix Lead-in
- fix red timing sections
- fix combo colours
- fix Easy and Insane's kiai time?
- 00:19:601 (5) - distance 1.0x?
- 00:17:544 (4) - to separate the long combo.. NC here and 00:20:630 (6) -
- 01:01:087 (6) - ^
- 01:09:658 (5) - ^
- 01:42:573 (6) - ^
- 02:10:001 (3,7) - ^
- 03:05:886 (6) - ^
...
- 00:14:115 - delete clap and add at 00:14:458 (4) -
- 00:16:173 (4) - delete head clap
- 00:19:944 (5) - delete clap and add at 00:20:630 (6) -
- 00:41:544 (3) - delete clap and add at 00:41:887 (4) -
- 01:09:658 (3) - NC to separate the combo
- 01:39:487 - add a circle here? feels empty ._.
- 01:53:544 (5) - NC same as 01:09:658 (3) -
- 02:40:173 (1,2) - reduce 1 arrow and add a circle instead
- 02:42:915 (3) - NC to keep combo rhythm
- 02:53:887 (6) - ^
- 03:30:915 (2) - move to 03:30:743 - and add a circle on the end
- CS-1.. too hard to play now imo
.. Insane diff? lol
- 02:40:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ..seriously recommend to reduce distance
- 00:57:830 (1) - end point here 00:58:344 - and start from 00:57:701 - due to bonus score
- 01:45:315 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - make moe star shape :<
- 02:03:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped
- 02:05:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - at least use ctrl+r each 2 circles
- 02:16:858 (1) - spinner start from 02:18:230 - , replace with some notes before
- 02:42:230 (3,4) - switch 3,4
- 02:45:315 (1) - still stream note, start combo from 02:45:830 (2) -
- 02:53:201 (4) - NC to keep your combo rhythm
- 03:11:543 (4) - hidden arrow imo, find other way?
[Ozzy]
- resnap the unsnapped circles :
- 01:27:231 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:27:831 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:29:031 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:29:974 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:30:231 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:30:574 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:30:831 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:31:431 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:31:774 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:32:631 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
Shohei Ohtani
For collab stuff, I changed the stuff that I personally had a problem with. I'll talk to the collabers that are still active and see if they want to change anything.
Also, I'll have kevvie change his stuff, because I'm not sure if he's re-mapping his diff or not.
Thanks for the mod! >3<~. Stuff will be submitted in a bit.
Also, I'll have kevvie change his stuff, because I'm not sure if he's re-mapping his diff or not.
Thanks for the mod! >3<~. Stuff will be submitted in a bit.
Hello~ I'm here to mod~
Collab
00:28:516 (2,3) - delete finish?
00:33:315 - add circle here? and NC?
00:38:287 (6) - add whistle on whole slider?
00:43:773 (5) - NC?
00:50:458 (4) - add finish on head?
00:52:858 (5,6) - this is little weird.. how about fixing like this?
00:55:944 (6) - NC?
01:02:458 (6) - add finish on tail?
01:02:801 (7) - delete finish?
01:14:458 (8) - NC?
01:34:344 (1) - add finish on head?
01:36:915 (1,2,3) - it's bit hard when i'm playing this
01:39:830 (1) - add finish
01:48:058 (3) - ^
01:53:544 (3) - add finish on head
01:55:601 (1) - delete NC
01:56:287 (1) - add finish on head
02:02:115 (3,4,5,6) - too weird to read
02:04:515 (8) - NC
02:05:715 (1) - delete NC
02:05:887 (2) - NC
02:12:744 (3) - add finish on head
02:13:944 (6) - ^
02:15:487 (10) - NC
02:45:315 (5) - add finish on tail
03:30:572 - add a circle here
03:31:086 - ^
03:31:600 (1) - add finish on head
[Insane]
00:23:030 (1) - add finish on head
00:50:459 (5) - ^
00:55:944 (1) - add finish
01:01:430 (4) - add finish on head
01:02:630 (8) - ^
01:23:373 (2) - ^
01:42:058 (10) - NC
01:56:287 (1) - add finish on head
02:01:773 (5) - ^
02:07:258 (1) - add finish
02:12:744 (4) - add finish on head
02:13:944 (8) - ^
02:15:487 (4,1) - how about delete a circle and make spinner 02:15:487 to 02:16:687 ?
02:34:687 (1) - add finish on head
03:13:772 (4) - ^
03:14:972 (3) - ^
03:30:572 - add a circle here
03:31:086 - ^
03:31:600 (1) - add finish on head
[impossiblexu's Hard]
why combo colors are different from the other diffs?
How about setting finish more properly?
Other things in this diff are good
Good luck~
Collab
00:28:516 (2,3) - delete finish?
00:33:315 - add circle here? and NC?
00:38:287 (6) - add whistle on whole slider?
00:43:773 (5) - NC?
00:50:458 (4) - add finish on head?
00:52:858 (5,6) - this is little weird.. how about fixing like this?
00:55:944 (6) - NC?
01:02:458 (6) - add finish on tail?
01:02:801 (7) - delete finish?
01:14:458 (8) - NC?
01:34:344 (1) - add finish on head?
01:36:915 (1,2,3) - it's bit hard when i'm playing this
01:39:830 (1) - add finish
01:48:058 (3) - ^
01:53:544 (3) - add finish on head
01:55:601 (1) - delete NC
01:56:287 (1) - add finish on head
02:02:115 (3,4,5,6) - too weird to read
02:04:515 (8) - NC
02:05:715 (1) - delete NC
02:05:887 (2) - NC
02:12:744 (3) - add finish on head
02:13:944 (6) - ^
02:15:487 (10) - NC
02:45:315 (5) - add finish on tail
03:30:572 - add a circle here
03:31:086 - ^
03:31:600 (1) - add finish on head
[Insane]
00:23:030 (1) - add finish on head
00:50:459 (5) - ^
00:55:944 (1) - add finish
01:01:430 (4) - add finish on head
01:02:630 (8) - ^
01:23:373 (2) - ^
01:42:058 (10) - NC
01:56:287 (1) - add finish on head
02:01:773 (5) - ^
02:07:258 (1) - add finish
02:12:744 (4) - add finish on head
02:13:944 (8) - ^
02:15:487 (4,1) - how about delete a circle and make spinner 02:15:487 to 02:16:687 ?
02:34:687 (1) - add finish on head
03:13:772 (4) - ^
03:14:972 (3) - ^
03:30:572 - add a circle here
03:31:086 - ^
03:31:600 (1) - add finish on head
[impossiblexu's Hard]
why combo colors are different from the other diffs?
How about setting finish more properly?
Other things in this diff are good
Good luck~
[Easy]
Most of this is a bit on the hard side of easy
02:46:173 (1) - feels wonky
03:13:772 (2,1) - messy overlap
overall well done, the hitsounds are exquisite, i just worry about the ability of beginner players to follow it
[kevincela]
a lot of your patterns are kind of messy
00:01:773 (2,4,5,6) - messy
00:06:058 (6,7,2) - ^
00:06:573 (1,3) - ^^^^^^^
00:26:801 (3,4,1,2) - ^
00:44:973 (1) - too soon after spinner end for a normal
00:58:344 - feels like there should be a note here
01:09:658 (3) - new combo maybe
01:39:487 - feels like it needs a note
01:52:858 (3,4,5) - stack
02:37:430 (1,4) - line up with 2
02:55:430 (1) - the sound ends on a white tick (play it several times starting on blue and several times starting on white and red, you will see)
03:30:229 (1,2) - kind of a wtf place to stop
[Ozzy]
00:14:030 (1,1) - funky. every time this pattern comes up it throws me off a bit
02:40:173 (1,2,3) - no 1/8 notes above 100 bpm.
02:40:858 (1,2,3) - ^
etc for all of them
03:41:029 (1) - kind of wtf
[impossiblex]
00:40:858 (1) - move out from under 5
00:42:230 (1) - ^ 4
01:24:744 (1) - ^
01:31:601 (1) - ^
01:44:630 (3,4,5,6) - the jump is unintuitive and the way you placed the notes is messy on top of it
01:53:030 (4) - fit this to 3
02:06:401 (3,4,5,6) - wtf??
02:55:258 (1) - as noted before this does actually end on the white tick
03:00:057 (3,4) - messy overlap
03:03:143 (2,5) - ^
the hitsounds were a bit...random...and you have serious overlap issues, but besides that its a pretty good map.
[Insane]
00:20:630 (5) - slider shape is kinda wonky
00:25:687 (2) - don't really understand the point of this note...
00:48:915 (4) - ~.~ i c wut u did there
01:37:001 (2) - again, not really a good point for this note...
01:50:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - D: evillll
02:53:887 (1) - end on white (again)
03:25:429 (1) - line this up with 2
03:26:800 (1) - ^
you like failing people, don't you
[Collab]
00:42:401 (6) - wtf?
00:46:515 - this feels like a hiccup
00:48:915 (5) - stack
01:55:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - verrrry messy
01:57:487 (4) - ^
02:09:830 (6,1,2) - ^
02:13:601 (4,5,6) - line these up please
02:40:344 (2,3,4) - feels weird
02:43:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you make this quieter so that it doesnt crush the music?
02:55:344 (1) - ends on white
03:18:057 (2) - hidden under 1
03:19:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is this supposed to follow a coherent pattern or did you just put down circles wherever your mouse landed?
03:22:172 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
honestly a lot of this section is messy
Good map and good luck!
Most of this is a bit on the hard side of easy
02:46:173 (1) - feels wonky
03:13:772 (2,1) - messy overlap
overall well done, the hitsounds are exquisite, i just worry about the ability of beginner players to follow it
[kevincela]
a lot of your patterns are kind of messy
00:01:773 (2,4,5,6) - messy
00:06:058 (6,7,2) - ^
00:06:573 (1,3) - ^^^^^^^
00:26:801 (3,4,1,2) - ^
00:44:973 (1) - too soon after spinner end for a normal
00:58:344 - feels like there should be a note here
01:09:658 (3) - new combo maybe
01:39:487 - feels like it needs a note
01:52:858 (3,4,5) - stack
02:37:430 (1,4) - line up with 2
02:55:430 (1) - the sound ends on a white tick (play it several times starting on blue and several times starting on white and red, you will see)
03:30:229 (1,2) - kind of a wtf place to stop
[Ozzy]
00:14:030 (1,1) - funky. every time this pattern comes up it throws me off a bit
02:40:173 (1,2,3) - no 1/8 notes above 100 bpm.
02:40:858 (1,2,3) - ^
etc for all of them
03:41:029 (1) - kind of wtf
[impossiblex]
00:40:858 (1) - move out from under 5
00:42:230 (1) - ^ 4
01:24:744 (1) - ^
01:31:601 (1) - ^
01:44:630 (3,4,5,6) - the jump is unintuitive and the way you placed the notes is messy on top of it
01:53:030 (4) - fit this to 3
02:06:401 (3,4,5,6) - wtf??
02:55:258 (1) - as noted before this does actually end on the white tick
03:00:057 (3,4) - messy overlap
03:03:143 (2,5) - ^
the hitsounds were a bit...random...and you have serious overlap issues, but besides that its a pretty good map.
[Insane]
00:20:630 (5) - slider shape is kinda wonky
00:25:687 (2) - don't really understand the point of this note...
00:48:915 (4) - ~.~ i c wut u did there
01:37:001 (2) - again, not really a good point for this note...
01:50:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - D: evillll
02:53:887 (1) - end on white (again)
03:25:429 (1) - line this up with 2
03:26:800 (1) - ^
you like failing people, don't you
[Collab]
00:42:401 (6) - wtf?
00:46:515 - this feels like a hiccup
00:48:915 (5) - stack
01:55:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - verrrry messy
01:57:487 (4) - ^
02:09:830 (6,1,2) - ^
02:13:601 (4,5,6) - line these up please
02:40:344 (2,3,4) - feels weird
02:43:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you make this quieter so that it doesnt crush the music?
02:55:344 (1) - ends on white
03:18:057 (2) - hidden under 1
03:19:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is this supposed to follow a coherent pattern or did you just put down circles wherever your mouse landed?
03:22:172 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
honestly a lot of this section is messy
Good map and good luck!
Shohei Ohtani
Saturos-fangirl wrote: 6c1m5f
03:18:057 (2) - hidden under 1 really only an issue of looking pretty; overlaps like that are completely fine for Insane diffs
03:19:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is this supposed to follow a coherent pattern or did you just put down circles wherever your mouse landed? whaaaaat that's my favorite part ): they're square jumps which are a bit closer to the overall difficulty of the Collab as opposed to the chorus section (which I made easier to flow better with the music)
03:22:172 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
honestly a lot of this section is messy point out exactly what's "messy", please! i don't think that anyone else has really complained about my part save for aesthetics; the playability should be fine :s
Shohei Ohtani
-kevincela- wrote: 1l4y5l
Finally, I finished my remapped diff! Here it is :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?1i4aibi9cjwzgda
Collab
00:46:858 (8) - looks Wonky
00:52:344 (4) - ^
01:40:515 (5) - [NAZI] make symmetrical and place on the y-axis
01:55:601 (1) - is this new combo needed?
01:59:544 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really see the reason for decrease the spacing here. Make the spacing normal?
02:29:201 (1) - remove finish D:
Insane
00:21:830 (6) - new combo?
00:52:687 (1) - remove new combo?
01:12:401 (timing section) - raise the volume on this section?
03:08:285 (1) - remove new combo and is the re-kiai necessary?
Impossiblexu's Hard
00:40:687 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) instead of (1)
00:54:744 (2,3) - swap two and three?
03:23:200 (1,2,3) - it would be nice to make these where they don't touch each other >w<
Normal - SV kinda fast for a Normal
00:20:973 (Break) - Is this break really need
02:11:544 (3,4) - stack normally?
02:35:715 (1) - remove new combo
02:36:744 (4,5) - I wouldn't stack these because all the stacked previously were 1/2s
03:00:057 (1,2) - looks kinda ugly D:
Easy
01:12:058 (4) - I wouldn't put this in an easy diff
02:49:773 (1) - ^
03:00:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - break this up into smaller combos by placing a new combo on (6)
03:07:943 (10) - I don't recommend put this in an easy diff
00:46:858 (8) - looks Wonky
00:52:344 (4) - ^
01:40:515 (5) - [NAZI] make symmetrical and place on the y-axis
01:55:601 (1) - is this new combo needed?
01:59:544 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really see the reason for decrease the spacing here. Make the spacing normal?
02:29:201 (1) - remove finish D:
Insane
00:21:830 (6) - new combo?
00:52:687 (1) - remove new combo?
01:12:401 (timing section) - raise the volume on this section?
03:08:285 (1) - remove new combo and is the re-kiai necessary?
Impossiblexu's Hard
00:40:687 (6,1) - put the new combo on (6) instead of (1)
00:54:744 (2,3) - swap two and three?
03:23:200 (1,2,3) - it would be nice to make these where they don't touch each other >w<
Normal - SV kinda fast for a Normal
00:20:973 (Break) - Is this break really need
02:11:544 (3,4) - stack normally?
02:35:715 (1) - remove new combo
02:36:744 (4,5) - I wouldn't stack these because all the stacked previously were 1/2s
03:00:057 (1,2) - looks kinda ugly D:
Easy
01:12:058 (4) - I wouldn't put this in an easy diff
02:49:773 (1) - ^
03:00:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - break this up into smaller combos by placing a new combo on (6)
03:07:943 (10) - I don't recommend put this in an easy diff
hello thar, suggestions ofc.
[Easy]
00:27:144 (3,4) - space these up or change the position of the end of the slider; it's a bit hard to read.
02:12:744 (2,3) - change this pattern so 3 isn't even close to being looked at by the hitburst of 02:12:401 (1) -
02:14:629 (1) - remake with 4 points instead of 3 so it's prettier
02:49:773 (1) - remove, replace with 1/1 sliders
03:17:200 (2,3) - unstack to ease readability or turn into a slider from 2 to 3
03:22:000 (4) - nc
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
AR +1
00:22:173 - imo this break is unneccesary even iNiS authentic songs don't include breaks in small time lapses
00:33:444 - ^
00:38:630 - ^
00:42:230 (1) - finish at 00:44:287 - instead for allowing newbie to readjust aim
00:47:715 (1,2) - ugly overlap - perhaps change the first slider to a 1/2 length slider and add hitcircle on stacking on top of 2 when the end of (1) was.
02:07:258 (1,2) - this looks ugly as well - try remaking a bit this, even adding a bit of space will do
03:00:057 (1,2) - ^
[impossiblexu's Hard]
hnnnng grid level 1
00:12:058 (2,3) - ugly overlap
00:12:744 (4,5) - try changing to this http://puu.sh/zr6r
00:18:915 (1,2) - try changing to this http://puu.sh/zr6S
02:16:515 (4) - move slightly up so it doesn't have overlaps with either of 02:16:173 (3,1) -
[Insane]
00:36:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be more interesting if it were arranged so that (1) was stacked on top of 00:35:715 (5) -
00:38:973 (7) - hnng remake this slider please
00:41:544 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as previous pattern
00:42:401 (1) - end on downbeat
00:50:973 (6) - ctrl+c 00:50:459 (5) - ctrl+v 00:50:973 (6) - ctrl+h ctrl+r
00:51:658 (8) - align on vertical axis
03:19:257 (2) - previous time, you added a nc here so I'd say nc for consistency
(not done yet)
[Easy]
00:27:144 (3,4) - space these up or change the position of the end of the slider; it's a bit hard to read.
02:12:744 (2,3) - change this pattern so 3 isn't even close to being looked at by the hitburst of 02:12:401 (1) -
02:14:629 (1) - remake with 4 points instead of 3 so it's prettier
02:49:773 (1) - remove, replace with 1/1 sliders
03:17:200 (2,3) - unstack to ease readability or turn into a slider from 2 to 3
03:22:000 (4) - nc
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
AR +1
00:22:173 - imo this break is unneccesary even iNiS authentic songs don't include breaks in small time lapses
00:33:444 - ^
00:38:630 - ^
00:42:230 (1) - finish at 00:44:287 - instead for allowing newbie to readjust aim
00:47:715 (1,2) - ugly overlap - perhaps change the first slider to a 1/2 length slider and add hitcircle on stacking on top of 2 when the end of (1) was.
02:07:258 (1,2) - this looks ugly as well - try remaking a bit this, even adding a bit of space will do
03:00:057 (1,2) - ^
[impossiblexu's Hard]
hnnnng grid level 1
00:12:058 (2,3) - ugly overlap
00:12:744 (4,5) - try changing to this http://puu.sh/zr6r
00:18:915 (1,2) - try changing to this http://puu.sh/zr6S
02:16:515 (4) - move slightly up so it doesn't have overlaps with either of 02:16:173 (3,1) -
[Insane]
00:36:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be more interesting if it were arranged so that (1) was stacked on top of 00:35:715 (5) -
00:38:973 (7) - hnng remake this slider please
00:41:544 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as previous pattern
00:42:401 (1) - end on downbeat
00:50:973 (6) - ctrl+c 00:50:459 (5) - ctrl+v 00:50:973 (6) - ctrl+h ctrl+r
00:51:658 (8) - align on vertical axis
03:19:257 (2) - previous time, you added a nc here so I'd say nc for consistency
(not done yet)
Shohei Ohtani
[General]
-Why your name is in the Tags ? I see no use of that because you’re the creator already
[Easy]
00:34:344 (1,2) – maybe don’t stack them
01:04:858 (2,3) – I think you should turn these to a slider, I don’t think beginners can read them well. Perhaps, 02:16:172 (2,3) shares the same idea. So maybe change this and make the map less difficult.
01:12:058 (4) & 03:07:943 (5) – not sure if this slider is allowed in the easiest diff (somehow this makes the map harder too)
01:45:058 – I believe this is an useless green line
02:53:887 (3) – move to x:404 y:236, looks better
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
Fine
[impossiblexu's Hard]
-I think there’s big gap between Normal and Hard because this Hard is too hard (streams) Orz
Other than that, nothing is found
[Insane]
01:47:373 (1,2,3,4,5) – this star looks … not that pretty. 01:47:544 (2) – move to x:316 y:260 (everything is in Grid Level 4). 01:47:715 (3) – x:164 y:148. 01:47:887 (4) – x:352 y:148. 01:48:058 (5) – x:200 y:260
Everything else is good
[Collab]
-The name SB is … so big lol
Fine here too
Sorry for my poor, late mod
-Why your name is in the Tags ? I see no use of that because you’re the creator already
[Easy]
00:34:344 (1,2) – maybe don’t stack them
01:04:858 (2,3) – I think you should turn these to a slider, I don’t think beginners can read them well. Perhaps, 02:16:172 (2,3) shares the same idea. So maybe change this and make the map less difficult.
01:12:058 (4) & 03:07:943 (5) – not sure if this slider is allowed in the easiest diff (somehow this makes the map harder too)
01:45:058 – I believe this is an useless green line
02:53:887 (3) – move to x:404 y:236, looks better
[-kevincela-'s Normal]
Fine
[impossiblexu's Hard]
-I think there’s big gap between Normal and Hard because this Hard is too hard (streams) Orz
Other than that, nothing is found
[Insane]
01:47:373 (1,2,3,4,5) – this star looks … not that pretty. 01:47:544 (2) – move to x:316 y:260 (everything is in Grid Level 4). 01:47:715 (3) – x:164 y:148. 01:47:887 (4) – x:352 y:148. 01:48:058 (5) – x:200 y:260
Everything else is good
[Collab]
-The name SB is … so big lol
Fine here too
Sorry for my poor, late mod
[Collab]
00:42:058 (4,5,6) - The pattern takes an awkward turn in here, i think it would be better if you moved (6) more in between (2) and (3) to form a triangle than the awkward jump between (5) and (6).
02:05:715 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These back and forth notes are breaking the map flow, could you try something else?
[Insane]
00:15:487 (4) - This slider's just begging to be more symmetrical.
00:20:630 (5) - I assume you attempted this to be symmetrical, but it isnt, move the first red control point 2 grids to the left to make it symmetrical.
00:35:715 (5,1) - This antijump here looks kinda awkward specially because you arent centering the star pattern, tbh i think a jump instead of an anti- jump would make more sense, hence reversing the star would look better.
00:51:658 (8) - Could you move the middle control point a liiiitle bit more down?.
00:54:401 (6) - Make this slider more symmetrical.
00:59:887 (6) - This slider could be improved, use only 3 control points instead of 5 and make it more symmetrical and will look better.
01:04:344 (1) - Use jump double stacks (or non stacks) instead of this spinner?
01:13:773 (1) - I think some notes and a couple triple/quads on the 1/4s would feel more appropiate.
01:30:401 (9) - Once again, this slider could be better shaped with just 3 control points instead of 5.
01:33:144 (6) - Like this would look better
01:41:373 (9) - 3 control points instead of 5 >_<
01:49:430 (1) - This one looks... meh let's see, try this?
01:59:029 (1) - Try to make a better semi-circle like the one in the picture above.
02:00:229 (4) - Symmetrical slider please >_<
02:02:972 (8) - Move the middle control point a liiitle bit down.
02:11:201 (6) - Symmetry?
02:12:744 (4) - ^
02:14:629 (1) - 3 control points (why are u using 4 in this slider?)
03:00:572 (6,8) - Symmetry on these?
03:02:800 (5,6) - This cross would look better if the sliders had a better shape, so could you try to prettify them?
03:11:542 (6,8) - You probably know what im gonna say here right?
[impossiblexu's Hard]
01:12:058 (7) - Kinda hard to see the wigglyness.
[Easy]
00:17:544 (1) - This looks pretty bad since the slider is overlapping itself and showing no borders, try to separate more the repeat and the start, the slider ends up in the same spot anyways, so you should be able to alter the shape without much problem.
00:40:515 (4) - Might as well make this slider straight, it's too short to look good with a curve. (There are multiple of this, dont wanna point each one out like on Insane)
01:03:315 (1) - Make the slider not look so... pointy?
01:12:058 (4) - Not sure about this, the repeat is almost inside the start of the slider, plus kick sliders arent a good idea on easy difficulties.
02:14:629 (1) - Make this less pointy as well.
02:49:773 (1) - No this is too bad for an easy diff, it's a pretty long kick slider, and the arrow is inside the start of it.
03:07:943 (5) - Again, not good for an easy diff.
That's about it, keep working hard~
00:42:058 (4,5,6) - The pattern takes an awkward turn in here, i think it would be better if you moved (6) more in between (2) and (3) to form a triangle than the awkward jump between (5) and (6).
02:05:715 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These back and forth notes are breaking the map flow, could you try something else?
[Insane]
00:15:487 (4) - This slider's just begging to be more symmetrical.
00:20:630 (5) - I assume you attempted this to be symmetrical, but it isnt, move the first red control point 2 grids to the left to make it symmetrical.
00:35:715 (5,1) - This antijump here looks kinda awkward specially because you arent centering the star pattern, tbh i think a jump instead of an anti- jump would make more sense, hence reversing the star would look better.
00:51:658 (8) - Could you move the middle control point a liiiitle bit more down?.
00:54:401 (6) - Make this slider more symmetrical.
00:59:887 (6) - This slider could be improved, use only 3 control points instead of 5 and make it more symmetrical and will look better.
01:04:344 (1) - Use jump double stacks (or non stacks) instead of this spinner?
01:13:773 (1) - I think some notes and a couple triple/quads on the 1/4s would feel more appropiate.
01:30:401 (9) - Once again, this slider could be better shaped with just 3 control points instead of 5.
01:33:144 (6) - Like this would look better
01:41:373 (9) - 3 control points instead of 5 >_<
01:49:430 (1) - This one looks... meh let's see, try this?
01:59:029 (1) - Try to make a better semi-circle like the one in the picture above.
02:00:229 (4) - Symmetrical slider please >_<
02:02:972 (8) - Move the middle control point a liiitle bit down.
02:11:201 (6) - Symmetry?
02:12:744 (4) - ^
02:14:629 (1) - 3 control points (why are u using 4 in this slider?)
03:00:572 (6,8) - Symmetry on these?
03:02:800 (5,6) - This cross would look better if the sliders had a better shape, so could you try to prettify them?
03:11:542 (6,8) - You probably know what im gonna say here right?
[impossiblexu's Hard]
01:12:058 (7) - Kinda hard to see the wigglyness.
[Easy]
00:17:544 (1) - This looks pretty bad since the slider is overlapping itself and showing no borders, try to separate more the repeat and the start, the slider ends up in the same spot anyways, so you should be able to alter the shape without much problem.
00:40:515 (4) - Might as well make this slider straight, it's too short to look good with a curve. (There are multiple of this, dont wanna point each one out like on Insane)
01:03:315 (1) - Make the slider not look so... pointy?
01:12:058 (4) - Not sure about this, the repeat is almost inside the start of the slider, plus kick sliders arent a good idea on easy difficulties.
02:14:629 (1) - Make this less pointy as well.
02:49:773 (1) - No this is too bad for an easy diff, it's a pretty long kick slider, and the arrow is inside the start of it.
03:07:943 (5) - Again, not good for an easy diff.
That's about it, keep working hard~
Shohei Ohtani
General
Easy
You shouldn't start off the hitsound pattern on a slider tick. Players should learn the hitsound pattern by clicking. Most of your hitsounds for the start appear on slider ticks. also this really feels like a Normal to me. Although those notes are on white ticks, it all looks and reads like one continuous stream that keeps changing what sounds it wants to follow. Easy's are supposed to be consistent to some degree and this map doesn't have a remote degree of pattern consistency in the whole song apart from some similar sliders.
00:12:058 (1) - I don't think you should start off the beat on a strange slider. The notes after also look odd, being so focused towards one side of the screen. This is why most maps start on the left side of the screen and move right with their patterns. It makes for a balanced distribution of notes on the screen.
00:19:601 (2) - I really dislike how this sounds. Perhaps try a gap pattern you've used previously, slight adjusted may work better IMO. http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/342961 < timeline
00:49:773 (4) - I don't really hear any sound behind this. It's unnecessary and you should delete.
01:24:744 (3) - Unnecessary move points
01:26:115 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for an Easy. I suggest simplifying or spacing differently.
01:28:858 (1) - Make symmetrical? Also reduce by 1/1 and add note where it ended? It would better match the slider/note pattern through here
01:31:944 (5,6) - I don't suggest stacking under slider ends in an Easy. If you break it up into two sliders it would play a lot more intuitively. http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/342969
02:43:258 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Too hard for an Easy IMO. I suggest you make it easier. (Reason: it's awkward to play)
02:51:487 - Add note?
03:35:715 (3,4) - Don't stack notes under slider ends in an Easy
Normal
I am really offput by how badly off the singer is to the music. I mean when it gets to the point that the difficulties have to make their own beat just to be playable, the singer has failed as an artist.
00:16:515 (5) - I don't really care for this.A single slider doesn't seem like the most ideal way to portray this section.
00:20:287 (6) - ^ (sounds like a note section to me) It's the same section as 00:31:258 (5,6) -
03:15:143 (3) - What is this even mapped to?
02:56:287 - Hitsound volume must be at least 5%
Hard
Lots of improper hitsound placements throughout. Some areas have too few hitsounds and other areas have too much. There's a lot of random clap spam that just sounds bad. There's other issues. I probably didn't find nearly all the issues with this difficulty.
00:46:173 (1) - Whistle on start?
00:47:373 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This sounds bad IMO.I would rearrange the hitsounds here IMO.
00:54:401 (1) - whistle on start?
01:44:630 (3,4,5,6) - I swear these parts sound nothing like the beat.
01:46:001 (3) - Add whistle?
01:47:030 (2) - ^
01:48:744 (4,5) - Whistle on the start of both of these. It would sound so much better.
01:51:144 (2) - Whistle
01:51:487 (4) - whistle on start
01:52:001 (1) - whistle on end
01:52:515 (3) - whistle on start
01:54:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hitsounds here are just random. Please change.
01:57:487 (1) - Whistle on start
02:06:401 (3,4,5,6) - This is so confusing. It's hard to tell the jumps are half spaced in length. also the spacing between 3,4 shouldn't be different than the spacing of 1,2,3
02:57:315 (1) - Remove clap. It sounds awful.
02:57:829 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Is this hitsounding pattern even following the song?
03:00:572 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -^^^
Insane
This diff still needs some polishing here and there. Most of the beat was well executed through the notes, and the sweeping streams were really fun to play. Good job on this difficulty.
00:21:830 (1,2) - sound continues, but flow stops. Having a stack here just doesn't seem right because of this. I feel that we need to be moving into that next note.You did so here 00:24:573 (8,9) -
00:54:401 (6,1) - Perhaps you could line this transition up a little better?
02:04:001 (1,2) - I feel like these sections are isolating these random drums in the song unnecessarily. This goes for all of the parts in the song where you map it like this. I think you should find notes that actually form a rhythm. These drums do not form a proper rhythm. (And they play best stacked IMO)
02:37:858 (6,7) - 1.0 to 1.13 is quite a large jump in the middle of a stream. FIX
02:56:287 - Hitsound volumes must be at least 5%
02:59:715 (2,3,4,5) - This transition doesn't look that good. I recommend you fix the curve here.
03:10:685 (2,3,4,5) - ^
03:12:229 (8,1,2,3,4) - Not aligned?
03:18:915 (1) - Remove clap- sounds bad.
03:19:086 - Add note?
03:19:257 (3) - clap to start?
03:24:743 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those stacks are out of control. Try manually adjusting where the stacks are to fix the stack positioning.
Collab
A lot of different mapping styles in this. Different doesn't mean good though. Most were decent, but there were things I had to mention. And really there's one part that makes absolutely no sense at all. Please fix a lot of what I said here.
00:28:345 (1,2,3,4) - Change combo color of this. The blackish combo is blending in with her hair on the screen, making this really hard to read for me.
00:33:744 - Why isn't there a note here?
01:08:287 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Okay I think there should be more pattern consistency here. There's a gap in the beat that appears for no reason and it doesn't sound good, or look good. It should be fixed.
01:10:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is an ugly pattern IMO.
01:24:573 (4,5,6,7) - I think the curves could match better here.
01:36:487 - Add note?
01:59:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - OMG this is awkward. The singer does not slow down her speech, so why is this half spaced? Space it 0.9 like the previous spacing.
Okay all through here the spacings make no sense to me (to 02:06:573 - ). The pacing doesn't change in the song, so the spacing shouldn't vary so widely. It's random, it's bad, fix it.
02:03:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Stack is stacking out of reach for the snap. Move it to a spot that places the top of the stack in the right position
That half at the bottom seems confusing. I don't suggest you do it.
02:04:515 (1,2) - This is ugly.
02:16:687 (3) - Is this centered in the pattern?
02:16:858 (1) - End here 02:19:858 -
02:34:687 (1,2,3) - Something about this doesn't sound right. The song sounds so weird here >.< How about just removing that clap. It sounds better without it.
02:42:230 (3,4) - It would be more intuitive if you flipped these horizontally. Although I'm unsure what you would do with the next combo. hmph
02:56:287 - Hitsound volumes must be at least 5%
03:26:115 (1,2,3) - This is awkward for me. May not be for someone else. It's also difficult to see that hitcircle.So that's my opinion, don't have to change.
Conclusion
This mapset still needs a lot of TLC. Please focus on polishing your difficulties. I don't think myself alone could get this mapset flawless by pointing out everything that needs to be pointed out, so please get more mods for this, and see what other people say. I don't really suggest you go for a bubble until you get more opinions on pattern improvement and overall quality of your beatmaps. Finally if you want a star from me, the hitsounds in Hard need to be a lot more consistent, Easy needs to be easier, and the problem areas in the Collab need to be largely ironed out. When you think you've done all of these, call me back for a recheck and I'll check this map again for a star.
Good luck~!
Easy
You shouldn't start off the hitsound pattern on a slider tick. Players should learn the hitsound pattern by clicking. Most of your hitsounds for the start appear on slider ticks. also this really feels like a Normal to me. Although those notes are on white ticks, it all looks and reads like one continuous stream that keeps changing what sounds it wants to follow. Easy's are supposed to be consistent to some degree and this map doesn't have a remote degree of pattern consistency in the whole song apart from some similar sliders.
00:12:058 (1) - I don't think you should start off the beat on a strange slider. The notes after also look odd, being so focused towards one side of the screen. This is why most maps start on the left side of the screen and move right with their patterns. It makes for a balanced distribution of notes on the screen.
00:19:601 (2) - I really dislike how this sounds. Perhaps try a gap pattern you've used previously, slight adjusted may work better IMO. http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/342961 < timeline
00:49:773 (4) - I don't really hear any sound behind this. It's unnecessary and you should delete.
01:24:744 (3) - Unnecessary move points
01:26:115 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for an Easy. I suggest simplifying or spacing differently.
01:28:858 (1) - Make symmetrical? Also reduce by 1/1 and add note where it ended? It would better match the slider/note pattern through here
01:31:944 (5,6) - I don't suggest stacking under slider ends in an Easy. If you break it up into two sliders it would play a lot more intuitively. http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/342969
02:43:258 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Too hard for an Easy IMO. I suggest you make it easier. (Reason: it's awkward to play)
02:51:487 - Add note?
03:35:715 (3,4) - Don't stack notes under slider ends in an Easy
Normal
I am really offput by how badly off the singer is to the music. I mean when it gets to the point that the difficulties have to make their own beat just to be playable, the singer has failed as an artist.
00:16:515 (5) - I don't really care for this.A single slider doesn't seem like the most ideal way to portray this section.
00:20:287 (6) - ^ (sounds like a note section to me) It's the same section as 00:31:258 (5,6) -
03:15:143 (3) - What is this even mapped to?
02:56:287 - Hitsound volume must be at least 5%
Hard
Lots of improper hitsound placements throughout. Some areas have too few hitsounds and other areas have too much. There's a lot of random clap spam that just sounds bad. There's other issues. I probably didn't find nearly all the issues with this difficulty.
00:46:173 (1) - Whistle on start?
00:47:373 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This sounds bad IMO.I would rearrange the hitsounds here IMO.
00:54:401 (1) - whistle on start?
01:44:630 (3,4,5,6) - I swear these parts sound nothing like the beat.
01:46:001 (3) - Add whistle?
01:47:030 (2) - ^
01:48:744 (4,5) - Whistle on the start of both of these. It would sound so much better.
01:51:144 (2) - Whistle
01:51:487 (4) - whistle on start
01:52:001 (1) - whistle on end
01:52:515 (3) - whistle on start
01:54:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hitsounds here are just random. Please change.
01:57:487 (1) - Whistle on start
02:06:401 (3,4,5,6) - This is so confusing. It's hard to tell the jumps are half spaced in length. also the spacing between 3,4 shouldn't be different than the spacing of 1,2,3
02:57:315 (1) - Remove clap. It sounds awful.
02:57:829 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Is this hitsounding pattern even following the song?
03:00:572 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -^^^
Insane
This diff still needs some polishing here and there. Most of the beat was well executed through the notes, and the sweeping streams were really fun to play. Good job on this difficulty.
00:21:830 (1,2) - sound continues, but flow stops. Having a stack here just doesn't seem right because of this. I feel that we need to be moving into that next note.You did so here 00:24:573 (8,9) -
00:54:401 (6,1) - Perhaps you could line this transition up a little better?
02:04:001 (1,2) - I feel like these sections are isolating these random drums in the song unnecessarily. This goes for all of the parts in the song where you map it like this. I think you should find notes that actually form a rhythm. These drums do not form a proper rhythm. (And they play best stacked IMO)
02:37:858 (6,7) - 1.0 to 1.13 is quite a large jump in the middle of a stream. FIX
02:56:287 - Hitsound volumes must be at least 5%
02:59:715 (2,3,4,5) - This transition doesn't look that good. I recommend you fix the curve here.
03:10:685 (2,3,4,5) - ^
03:12:229 (8,1,2,3,4) - Not aligned?
03:18:915 (1) - Remove clap- sounds bad.
03:19:086 - Add note?
03:19:257 (3) - clap to start?
03:24:743 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those stacks are out of control. Try manually adjusting where the stacks are to fix the stack positioning.
Collab
A lot of different mapping styles in this. Different doesn't mean good though. Most were decent, but there were things I had to mention. And really there's one part that makes absolutely no sense at all. Please fix a lot of what I said here.
00:28:345 (1,2,3,4) - Change combo color of this. The blackish combo is blending in with her hair on the screen, making this really hard to read for me.
00:33:744 - Why isn't there a note here?
01:08:287 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Okay I think there should be more pattern consistency here. There's a gap in the beat that appears for no reason and it doesn't sound good, or look good. It should be fixed.
01:10:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is an ugly pattern IMO.
01:24:573 (4,5,6,7) - I think the curves could match better here.
01:36:487 - Add note?
01:59:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - OMG this is awkward. The singer does not slow down her speech, so why is this half spaced? Space it 0.9 like the previous spacing.
Okay all through here the spacings make no sense to me (to 02:06:573 - ). The pacing doesn't change in the song, so the spacing shouldn't vary so widely. It's random, it's bad, fix it.
02:03:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Stack is stacking out of reach for the snap. Move it to a spot that places the top of the stack in the right position
That half at the bottom seems confusing. I don't suggest you do it.
02:04:515 (1,2) - This is ugly.
02:16:687 (3) - Is this centered in the pattern?
02:16:858 (1) - End here 02:19:858 -
02:34:687 (1,2,3) - Something about this doesn't sound right. The song sounds so weird here >.< How about just removing that clap. It sounds better without it.
02:42:230 (3,4) - It would be more intuitive if you flipped these horizontally. Although I'm unsure what you would do with the next combo. hmph
02:56:287 - Hitsound volumes must be at least 5%
03:26:115 (1,2,3) - This is awkward for me. May not be for someone else. It's also difficult to see that hitcircle.So that's my opinion, don't have to change.
Conclusion
This mapset still needs a lot of TLC. Please focus on polishing your difficulties. I don't think myself alone could get this mapset flawless by pointing out everything that needs to be pointed out, so please get more mods for this, and see what other people say. I don't really suggest you go for a bubble until you get more opinions on pattern improvement and overall quality of your beatmaps. Finally if you want a star from me, the hitsounds in Hard need to be a lot more consistent, Easy needs to be easier, and the problem areas in the Collab need to be largely ironed out. When you think you've done all of these, call me back for a recheck and I'll check this map again for a star.
Good luck~!
03:26:115 (1,2,3) - This is awkward for me. May not be for someone else. It's also difficult to see that hitcircle.So that's my opinion, don't have to change.I totally agree. I've been wanting to change it but couldn't think of anything at the time. Also, I'll change 03:25:257 (2,4) since they're kinda hard to see.
@CDFA: Remove 03:25:257 (2,3,4,1,2) in my part and replace it with this:
68,224,205257,1,0
216,224,205429,2,0,B|232:320|384:344,1,210,4|8
444,224,205943,1,0
336,124,206115,6,0,B|280:92|256:56|256:56|232:92|176:124,1,210,4|8
256,224,206629,1,0
requested taiko mod from my queue~
[Ozzy's Taiko-On!]
01:06:915 - How about d d k k d d k k...? Ii confuses a bit with those kdd.
02:20:201 - are you sure about those audio changes?
02:40:173 - It's playable, but really, you should delete those 1/6 since it dosen't appear even one more time in the map. The other streams are allready hard enough for the other people.
02:40:858 - ^
02:56:973 - x0.90?
03:19:257 - this sounds better now.
Weeell, that's all I could find. Map is really good made.
Good job~
[Ozzy's Taiko-On!]
01:06:915 - How about d d k k d d k k...? Ii confuses a bit with those kdd.
02:20:201 - are you sure about those audio changes?
02:40:173 - It's playable, but really, you should delete those 1/6 since it dosen't appear even one more time in the map. The other streams are allready hard enough for the other people.
02:40:858 - ^
02:56:973 - x0.90?
03:19:257 - this sounds better now.
Weeell, that's all I could find. Map is really good made.
Good job~
Shohei Ohtani
hi~
[Timing]
There are 4 offsets on Collab diff, make them the same as the other diffs
[Collab]
Lizzehb
01:02:458 (6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/CDgH
Kurisuchianu
02:01:773 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - didn't like the triplets here, sound out of place
Lunah
02:55:344 (1) - finish the spinner at 02:56:630 -
[impossiblexu's Hard]
01:12:058 (7) - the slider is hard to see with the prev hit burst, try to make it more visible
[Easy]
00:14:801 (1) - Wrong spacing
[Timing]
There are 4 offsets on Collab diff, make them the same as the other diffs
[Collab]
Lizzehb
01:02:458 (6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/CDgH
Kurisuchianu
02:01:773 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - didn't like the triplets here, sound out of place
Lunah
02:55:344 (1) - finish the spinner at 02:56:630 -
[impossiblexu's Hard]
01:12:058 (7) - the slider is hard to see with the prev hit burst, try to make it more visible
[Easy]
00:14:801 (1) - Wrong spacing