1. Easy old (1.56 stars, 129 notes)
2. Extra old (5.05 stars, 415 notes)
3. Hard old (3.32 stars, 294 notes)
4. Insane old (3.58 stars, 82 notes)
5. Normal old (2.1 stars, 182 notes)
6. Shooting Star (5.02 stars, 397 notes)

Thanks!

---Modders---
Janpai
100bit
Deppyforce
DeRandom Otaku
cheesiest
Hobbes2
Chibi Maruko
PolkaMocha
Sotarks
Monstrata
Sonnyc

Janpai wrote: 735d21

Placeholder
okay xD omg hi!

General

1. Seems fine =3=)b

Easy

1. 00:00:738 (1,2) - Are they intended to be like this or it's a blanket? if it's a blanket then exert it more but if not suggesting that put 00:02:166 (2) - a little bit lower on the tail of (1) it is supposed to blanket. fixed i think
2. 00:16:809 (4,1) - Fix blanket? blanket is fine already but i guess it looks a little weird because 1 is going in a little off direction. changed the direction of 1
3. 00:47:880 (2) - I think this downbeat still matters even the part is calm
4. 00:53:595 (2) - ^
5. 00:55:737 (1) - ^ I like to skip the beats here to make a difference in intensity between this and the harder sections
6. 01:00:737 (1) - Ctrl+H? so the direction of the slider will go to 01:01:809 (2) - yes fixed
7. 01:03:237 - add a note for drums? well it's kiai so...
8. 01:14:666 - ^ ;_; i like to have breaks in my lower diffs
9. 01:19:309 (1) - Putting spinner here likes kinda out of place well maybe it's just me its a good transition to the next part right? eh... i'll wait for more opinions on this lol
10. 01:23:595 (2) - about the downbeat thingy xD

Normal

1. 00:50:737 (2,3,4,5) - I think you should make this sliders like you did at the previous rhythm because they were following the same sound of drums and also this part is calm ;w; ok i used 1/2 reverse slider and circle
2. 01:19:309 (1) - Same as easy :3

Hard

1. 00:11:809 (4) - Ctrl+G? so 00:12:166 (1) - could have emphasis for guitars its a nice idea, but i want to use all ds for this diff so no change

Insane

1. 00:17:523 (4,5,1) - I think you can arrange their jumps like this http://puu.sh/p9Ho8/fbbe31deda.jpg so that the clap could have more emphasis well pretty sure what i have right now is emphasis on 4 for the clap and 1 for the new measure. 5 is also a clap sound but much weaker than 4 and 6 so i left it close by
2. 00:26:987 (2,3,1) - Why 2->3 has more distance than 3->1? well (1) has more stronger sound than (2) im not too worried about emphasis in this part because the section is easy in general, so i want to keep this symmetric design xd
3. 01:09:130 (3,4) - I think soft sample set clap fits more than normal here ok fixed for all diffs

I hope i could help a little bit goodluck eeezzzeee! =3=)b thanks for modding! c:

Gandalfr wrote: 72j3z

00:10:916 (2) - try x240 y224 not necessary imo
00:11:452 (1,2) - try control G
00:11:809 (3,4) - ^
00:12:166 (1) - ^ that ends up flowing a lot worse
00:12:166 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5284639 https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5284645 why?
00:13:416 (1,2) - to 00:13:059 (4) - tail https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5284662 wat i didnt even take your previous suggestion tho
00:14:666 (4) - try x256 y352 and that direction https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5284674
00:15:023 (1,2,3,4) - try this 00:15:023 (1) - x160 y224 00:15:202 (2) - x256 y352 00:15:380 (3) - x352 y224 00:15:559 (4) - rotate anti time 90 grade and x176 y 304 https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5284717
00:16:095 (5,1) - control H from 00:15:559 (4) - http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5284726
00:16:809 (2) - try sth like this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/5284743
00:17:702 (5) - x288 y320

OMG all another notes after is ok.


ok so what you basically did was change the entire first 20 seconds of my map into whatever you want and not even explain the reason for any of it... and then you got too lazy to mod anything after that lol. thanks but no thanks? wow great m4m >.>

100bit wrote: 14w1u

Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate. haha thats okay, hello!

Song and beatmaps 3aa3u

1. Add "ver" to Tags. yes added

Diffs y21m

Easy

1. 00:10:737 (2) - move to x=388 y=180 for better blanket. fixed blanket although with slightly different points lol
2. 00:37:880 (1,2) - make identical, it's more beautiful it is the same shape already just mirrored
3. 00:41:452 (2) - move to x=68 for better blanket fixed different points
4. 00:43:595 (1,2,3) - make 1 and 2 identical for better flow between 2 and 3 ok sure
5. 01:15:023 (1) - end-sliderpoint in x=320 y=132, also move 01:16:095 (2) to x=392 y=156 for better flow (it's just suggestion) i think both is similar so i'll just stay with what i have
6. 01:37:880 (1,2) - identical for better flow, also put like in 01:32:166 (1,2) i think the flow right now is fine lol
7. 01:42:166 (3) - move to x=116 y=344 (suggestion) yes thats better!

Normal

1. 00:11:452 (4) - make two sliders (like in 00:37:880 (1,2) ) because i hear 4 drum-sounds fixed
2. 00:18:773 (2) - move a bit up i moved 00:19:130 (3) - down instead
3. It's end. Really.

Hard

1. 00:05:380 (2) - move a bit up (suggestion) ok sure

Nice mapset!
Good luck!~
{end of mod}
thanks so much for the mod and stars!
and dont worry I understand all your english in this post c:

Extra 4z4146

1. 00:21:273 (4,1) - not stacked properly
2. 00:29:309 (1) - move to right or maybe try to make blanket ~ the sliderhead overlaping with 00:28:952 (4) - looks ugly to me x-x
3. 00:36:095 (5,3) - not stacked properly
4. 00:59:309 (1) - stack it with sliderend of 00:58:595 (4) -
5. 01:00:023 (4) - move right a bit so that it wont touch 00:59:487 (2) -
6. 01:04:487 (2) - stack it properly with slider end of 01:03:952 (2) -
7. 01:05:915 (2) - stack it properly with slider end of 01:05:380 (2) -

Insane 4w3z3d

1. 01:02:702 (2) - move right to x:200 for better blanket
2. 01:04:309 (1,1) - super nazi blanket
   Cant find much here

PolkaMocha wrote: 2l1h32

NM Requested via my queue~ hullo

massive mod gl gl

General:

The song's name in English could be implemented into the tags. not necessary though you'll find it anyway if you search that

The first kiai time isn't benefiting the map. Although it can help make the map more flashy, it is only to be used during choruses and special parts of the song. its a repeat of 01:29:309 - so i dont see why i cant kiai it..

Easy:

The slider to circle ratio is a bit off; try to keep things a little more balanced for varied play.

SV is a bit fast for easy. both of these are actually typical of easy diffs at this bpm... i dont know where you got your numbers from xd

00:00:738 (1,2) - Blanketing could use work. argh im sick of people complaining about this one it looks fine to me. can you suggest coords or something?

00:16:809 (4,1) - ^ shifted some angles

00:33:595 (3,1) - You could use (3)'s elbow to blanket (1). cant ds wont let me and i dont think thats worth changing the shape of the slider lol

00:38:595 (2,3) - Blanketing needs work. fixed

00:59:309 (4,5,1) - Easy players might try to skip to (1) before hitting (5) Consider making the path a bit more obvious.

01:03:595 (1,2,3) - ^ Be careful with triangle patterns.

01:15:023 (1,2,3) - ^ really? i dont think ive ever had issues with this but i guess ill keep that in mind lol

Normal:

00:12:166 (1) - Slider length is confusing. Consider ending it on 1/1 and adding a 1/2 circle after. why is this confusing? pretty normal pattern tbh

00:16:273 (5,6,7) - Normal players might jump to (7) before seeing (6). Make this path more obvious. again i dont think triangles are an issue. theres no stacking no overlaps just simple triangle

00:26:452 (1,2) - Blanketing is a wee bit off. its fine lol

00:44:845 (4) - Considering you map the music, this slider skips over a prominent part of the piano. Reduce the length of the slider and add a hit circle at the end to better accommodate for this. sure

00:57:880 (1,3) - Blanketing needs work. fixed

01:12:166 (1,3) - ^ this is 1 unit like 1/4 of one grid off lol. fixed

01:27:880 (1) - NC isn't any good here really. yeah removed

01:29:309 (1) - Again with the slider length. same as before

Hard:

OD should be bumped back to 5. but it is od 5 right now?

00:10:023 (3) - Move this to x:108 y:184 moving this stuff instead 00:08:952 (3,1) -

00:39:130 (1,5) - The overlap here is unsightly. I've notice you target appearance over flow. Remapping this part to aid that would do you more good than harm. no dude i like this overlap

00:46:095 (5,1) - Blanketing could use some work. just so you know i measure most of my blankets and when its within .1 ds on 1/4 timing i consider that acceptable. but fine ill fix it >.>

01:12:880 (3,1) - ^ fixed

01:33:416 (1,2,3) - Players will see (3) before (2). Consider making the pattern a bit more clear. should be fine this is hard after all

01:37:166 (4) - The music does not call for this many repeats. Dial the repeat number back one and respace. its for the guitar riff here

01:40:380 (5,1,2) - Flow is unclear here. Make the pattern more direct in of what comes next. same as 01:33:416 (1,2,3) -

Insane:

00:20:023 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream is not called for by music. guitar riff

00:24:666 (3,1) - Blanketing needs work. fixed

00:29:309 (1,2) - ^ fixed

01:00:380 (5) - Make this into a 1/2 slider to avoid the awkward pause right in the heart of the chorus. fits well imo cuz theres actually nothing here in the music. the next part of the chorus 01:11:987 - features more constant drum that ends up playing a beat here so i did add a note there

01:03:416 (5) - A bit overdone. A triplet would do this part better. why this is easier tbh

01:08:237 (1) - No NC

01:08:952 (4) - ^ both are fine imo

01:14:845 (5) - Triplet does better here. same

01:23:595 (1,2) - Blanketing. fix

01:29:309 (1,2) - ^ nothing wrong with this one, not even tiny lol

01:36:095 (3,1) - Spacing is a bit close compared to that before it. lowered spacing a little

01:50:737 (1) - Bend this at 1:51:095 to match the song better. cant that doesnt blanket the previous slider anymore lol. and at best its a minor detail

Extra:

HP could benefit more at 7. i had it at 7.2 originally but that was too hard xd

00:27:702 (1,2) - Blanketing needs an ounce of work. fixed

00:42:880 (1,2) - Blanketing could be better. looks ok to me

00:56:452 (1) - This jump could be bigger. not necessary since the previous slider was going in the other direction anyway it is a noticeable jump

01:01:095 (2,4) - Blanketing needs a bit of work. fix

01:03:416 (6) - Triplet would do better. dont want triple

01:03:595 (1,2) - Consider ctrl + g on (2) to allow players to know this is to be played as a 1/4 combo. i think its alright. contrary to popular belief this is an extra lol. there is an insane difficulty that does stuff like this so it should be fine

01:04:666 (3,4) - Too close. well yeah this one actually doesnt have any vocal here so i wanted to make it less strong

01:05:023 (1,2) - Consider ctrl + g on (2) to allow players to know this is to be played as a 1/4 combo. same

01:37:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream is not called for by music. same

01:41:987 (1) - Slider feels odd to be put here. Shorten it. changed some flow stuff here

Interesting style. I liked that you didn't over use jumps in extra for the sake of pp/star rating. Good luck on the rank. thanks for modding! c:

Sotarks wrote: 2v643

Hi! queue~. heya!

General 6t6a34

1. Tbh the first Kiai and the last one don't need to be kiai at all, i'll suggest you to remove them.. You might want to use chorus in particulary for this song. aaa maybe i think about it

Extra 4z4146

• 
  Hey the AR9.2/HP6.2/CS4.2/OD8.2 is my meme meh lel didnt know that, which map? xd

1. 00:11:452 (1,1) - You could reduce the volume of those kicksliders end could be cool. And also curve them to make a perfect flow. changed the volume thing no change to shape
2. 00:23:237 (4) - This is a bit too far spaced; try put it x144 y245 nerfed some stuff here
3. 00:37:166 (1,2,3) - nice doritos xd
4. 00:47:880 (1,2) - unstack them, there's no reason to stack here
5. 00:53:595 (1,2) - same yeah im going to delete that second circle entirely
6. 01:04:487 (2) - the stack is off here those are intentional
7. 01:09:845 (3) - could be cool if u blanket it with 01:09:309 (1) - ayy sure
8. 01:16:452 (1,2) - idk if u wanted to blanket or not but this is completly off lo its ok lol
9. 01:50:737 (1) - silent the end of this slider there is a sound there though

Insane 4w3z3d

1. Consider maybe lowering HP to 5.8. ok
2. 00:14:398 (2) - Do you hear a sound on this note ? I don't. Please don't overmap triples.
3. 00:17:255 (2) - I still don't hear hear any sound..
4. 00:22:970 (2) - I still don't hear hear any sound.. its for the shuffling sounds between the drums here
5. 00:47:880 (1) - Why a clap on this slider head? This is not really necessary.
6. 00:53:595 (1) - Same yeah removed from all diffs
7. 01:21:452 (3,1) - missing a note between those two, try stacking a circle on the reverse yellow changed the rhythm here entirely
8. 01:50:737 (1) - same try silent this slider end

GL~ thanks for the mod!ill try to do yours today or tomorrow

eeezzzeee wrote: 1j3b2g

Sotarks wrote: 2v643

Hey the AR9.2/HP6.2/CS4.2/OD8.2 is my meme meh lel didnt know that, which map? xd

Deppyforce wrote: 6o2o2m

all his maps tbh

1. 00:10:737 (1,2,3,4) - I would arrange them like this to emphasize the vocals on the white ticks over the reds. It would create a spacing variance that leads into the livelier section too.
   
   ~

   
2. 00:14:398 (2) - This sounds overmapped to me... I don't think you need a triplet here either, just do two circles?
3. 00:20:112 (2) - Sounds overmapped here too.
   
   This rhythm sounds better to me

   
4. 01:03:595 (1,2) - Can you keep this closer together? I don't think you need such a large jump for a 1/4 that isn't emphasizing much.
5. 01:19:130 (4) - There's nothing to qualify this being a circle imo... I would make this 01:18:952 (3,4) - a 1/2 slider instead since it fits the vocals and instruments a lot better.
6. 01:31:541 (2) - Sounds overmaped too, same reasons as earlier.
7. 01:37:256 (2) - Same as earlier

1. 00:14:398 (2) - Same as Extra about overmaps, same with 00:20:112 (2) - .
2. 00:23:237 (4,5) - I would Ctrl+G it to improve flow. When the spacing is like this, with 3 circles being a similar spacing, and one being different, it creates an imbalance in structure. Like, visually you'll see that 00:23:059 (3) - is the odd one out.
3. 00:28:952 (3,1) - Hmm, its 1/1, but this is quite a large spacing still, can you reduce it?
4. 01:26:452 (1,2,3) - I would put the jump from 2>3 instead of from 1>2 to emphasize the vocals.
5. 01:35:559 (2,3,1) - Same, structurally, 3>1 should have a larger spacing.

1. 00:14:309 (3) - Etc... overmaps.
2. 00:55:559 (2) - Spacing is rather inconsistent here.
3. 01:11:987 (5,1,2,3,4) - You could improve the blankets here.
4. 01:25:023 (1,3) - If this is a blanket, make it better.

Monstrata wrote: 5o4w3u

Maaan. Remind me if I haven't returned an m4m within a week xD. lol i was planning to remind you if you started a new round of your queue without doing it but seems like that wasn't needed

[Extra]

1. 00:10:737 (1,2,3,4) - I would arrange them like this to emphasize the vocals on the white ticks over the reds. It would create a spacing variance that leads into the livelier section too. ok nice idea
   
   ~

   
2. 00:14:398 (2) - This sounds overmapped to me... I don't think you need a triplet here either, just do two circles? seems like nobody likes the triple lol. ok fixed
3. 00:20:112 (2) - Sounds overmapped here too. ok someone else suggested this before too, I'll use that rhythm instead
   
   This rhythm sounds better to me

   
4. 01:03:595 (1,2) - Can you keep this closer together? I don't think you need such a large jump for a 1/4 that isn't emphasizing much. ok fixed
5. 01:19:130 (4) - There's nothing to qualify this being a circle imo... I would make this 01:18:952 (3,4) - a 1/2 slider instead since it fits the vocals and instruments a lot better. hmm i tried changing it to a slider but that played weirdly to me, being that the instruments were very similar in 01:17:880 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these two combos i wanted to map with the same style between them. i guess i can change it if its necessary but id like to keep it the way it is right now as i think it plays better with a more intense jump section here as well
6. 01:31:541 (2) - Sounds overmaped too, same reasons as earlier.
7. 01:37:256 (2) - Same as earlier fixed both

[Insane]

1. 00:14:398 (2) - Same as Extra about overmaps, same with 00:20:112 (2) - . yesh
2. 00:23:237 (4,5) - I would Ctrl+G it to improve flow. When the spacing is like this, with 3 circles being a similar spacing, and one being different, it creates an imbalance in structure. Like, visually you'll see that 00:23:059 (3) - is the odd one out. ok fixed
3. 00:28:952 (3,1) - Hmm, its 1/1, but this is quite a large spacing still, can you reduce it? lol originally i had this ctrl+g'd but someone recommend i ctrl+g and idk ;_; ok fixed
4. 01:26:452 (1,2,3) - I would put the jump from 2>3 instead of from 1>2 to emphasize the vocals.
5. 01:35:559 (2,3,1) - Same, structurally, 3>1 should have a larger spacing. fixed both

[Hard]

1. 00:14:309 (3) - Etc... overmaps. yesh
2. 00:55:559 (2) - Spacing is rather inconsistent here. fixed to 1.39
3. 01:11:987 (5,1,2,3,4) - You could improve the blankets here. i tried lol
4. 01:25:023 (1,3) - If this is a blanket, make it better. changed the shape to not blanket

[]

Do you have metadata for this song by any chance? (Links, etc...) I can provide if you don't have anything. how about this? its track no.5 https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Launcher
Anyways, call me back when you're ready. I can bubble this. yayyy, thanks so much! c:

1. 00:38:595 - Imo it was pretty weird to leave this vocal empty. I know you are following the drums here, but if you look at the rhythm of 00:37:880 (1,2), you can see it not only fit the drums but also the vocals. Not every player will interprete this rhythm as a drum, and there will be people finding this awkward to play. Think of a better rhythm here please.
2. 00:44:309 - Similar here.
3. 01:17:702 (6) - This note feels pretty redundant towards to transition of 01:17:880 (1). Removing it will feel better imo.

1. 00:11:273 (2,3) - Minor spacing issue.

1. 00:10:737 (1,2,3) - This pattern feels quite forced since you seemed to place (2,3) according to the blankets, which resulted in an inconsistent spacing. I think you can place (2) somewhere like (240,224) for a smoother flow and a less forced pattern.

Sonnyc wrote: 491l5w

~Normal~

1. 00:38:595 - Imo it was pretty weird to leave this vocal empty. I know you are following the drums here, but if you look at the rhythm of 00:37:880 (1,2), you can see it not only fit the drums but also the vocals. Not every player will interprete this rhythm as a drum, and there will be people finding this awkward to play. Think of a better rhythm here please.
2. 00:44:309 - Similar here.
3. 01:17:702 (6) - This note feels pretty redundant towards to transition of 01:17:880 (1). Removing it will feel better imo.

~Hard~

1. 00:11:273 (2,3) - Minor spacing issue.

~Insane~

1. 00:10:737 (1,2,3) - This pattern feels quite forced since you seemed to place (2,3) according to the blankets, which resulted in an inconsistent spacing. I think you can place (2) somewhere like (240,224) for a smoother flow and a less forced pattern.

Easy was good. Lower diffs rather had a fine quality, but the higher diffs wasn't as much as those imo. Perhaps the flow wasn't good enough. Anyways personally I feel this set needs more work.

eeezzzeee wrote: 1j3b2g

Agree and fixed everything, i'm going to be remapping some parts of insane and extra (keeping same hs, rhythm, etc. just changing the aesthetics and flow) so not updated yet. Thanks for your mod! c:

Deppyforce wrote: 6o2o2m

is that even a valid reason to pop cool