P A N wrote: 1x5927

LIAR

• 
  00:41:104 - add a note?

• 
  00:58:769 - add a note
  00:54:936 (1) - move this to (136,272)(maybe a little different) to make it looks in order
  00:57:269 (7) - this to (252,312)
  01:12:769 (6) - move this slider to01:12:936 - and end at01:13:103 - and add one note at01:12:769 -

• 
  maybe AR8.5 is better
  00:26:771 (3,4) - it's very difficult to read
  00:32:104 (3,4) - i thik it's better like this
  click

  http://puu.sh/ccVDV/08bd21bc78.jpg

Setsurei wrote: 4q164h

[Normal]
00:41:104 - thanks for pointing. well, density will be too high, so I'll delete 00:40:770 - for consistency
[Hard]
00:58:769 - added
00:54:936 (1) - on purpose because blanket 00:54:936 (1,4) - and DS consistency
00:57:269 (7) - diamond pattern at 00:56:603 (5,6,7,1) -
01:12:769 (6) - changed
[LIAR]
AR9 so when on reff it is suitable (actually I want this to be 9.5 but because of the slow opening, I decreased it to 9)
00:26:771 (3,4) - I'll change it to triplets
00:32:104 (3,4) - I can't open the puu.sh orz, anyway this is a parallelogram pattern here 00:32:104 (3,4,5,6) -

thanks for mod! updated

click

LucyAkuzumi wrote: 56x3z

Awesome! It would've been better with a video. I can give you an HD one if you like, I wouldn't mind.

kamikin wrote: 1z1229

NO KUDOSU
Consider adding 'opening' and '2' to your tags

Edit: Your default hitsound doesn't really go with the song and at the beginning of normal, consider making them quieter

1. Have a blank slider slide.. mainly since in the beginning the default sound is really annoying http://puu.sh/cdUpX/83e54e20a9.wav

1. AR 5 is too high.. doesnt fit this song. lower it a bit pls
2. 00:01:482 (1) - i suggest having a lower SV especially here(rest of the song as well) preferably around x1.10??; since this part of the song is really slow and the current SV really doesnt work well. x1.40 SV is the average SV for hard diffs
3. 00:07:082 (4) - add finish on body
4. 00:11:062 (1) - add finish
5. 00:23:937 (3,4) - maybe unstack? this stacking is kind of random since you didnt do it anywhere else up until here
6. 00:24:271 (4) - i really suggest changing this part so the strong beats on 00:24:604 - and 00:24:937 - are more emphasized
7. 00:29:604 (3) - finish on tail?
8. 00:42:937 (2) - change this part so the downbeat here is emphasized
9. 00:44:270 (1) - add finish; you can hear it in the music
10. 00:45:604 - add note? theres a sound here and it has an awkward pause right now//
11. 00:49:270 (3) - overlaps health bar; move it down
12. 00:50:270 (5) - slider is questionable.. is it really necessary ?the overlap can easily confuse beginners
13. 01:03:436 (2) - add finish on head
14. 01:04:936 (1,2) - maybe you can use 2 1/2 sliders here instead since there is the drum in the music..?
15. 01:04:936 (1,2) - i havent mentioned this much throughout the song but try to give notes a smoother transition/ flow, this is an example of an awkward flow.. doing something like this would be better
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    go through the diff and fix some of these
16. 01:09:269 (3) - slider shape doesnt really match music? put the red square on the slider tick for it to match the beat
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17. 01:28:269 (3) - you cannot silence notes according to the ranking criteria.. but silencing a spinner is ok :3

1. 00:02:282 (2) - make this a 1/1 repeat slider to follow the music better
2. 00:12:662 (1) - end this a bit earlier; for hard it is suggested to have 375ms of recovery time from a spinner to the next note; here you only have 300 t/241019
3. 00:15:438 (2,4) - remove; so you can have better consistency with 00:17:604 (1,2,3) - but its okay to have 00:22:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - since the music gets louder and more dominant
4. 00:30:271 (1) - not sure if this SV change is necessary...
5. 00:33:604 (1,2,3) - here you have two options from me. 1. remove 00:34:104 (2,3) - and add a repeat on 00:33:604 (1) - since there is a more dominant sound on 00:34:271 (3) - than 00:34:104 (2) - so it would only make sense. 2. delete 00:34:104 (2) - , same reasoning
6. 00:34:937 (5,6,7,8) - sound is all the same but 00:35:437 (8) - is a slider.. kind of random, make them all circles or 1/2 repeat sliders
7. 00:39:104 (4) - remove.. it serves no purpose
8. 00:40:770 (2,3,4) - when it comes to that you must map vocals please avoid mapping every single syllable; it becomes overmapped
9. 00:42:770 (2) - remove
10. 00:43:270 - - emphaisize this downbeat here by starting a note on it
11. 00:57:269 (7) - ovelaps (4) doesnt look so good..
12. 00:57:603 (1) - try this? matches music better imo
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13. 00:59:269 (3) - remove this and start (2) at 00:59:103 - to match the music
14. 00:59:603 (1,1) - flow is awkward here
15. 01:05:103 (2,4) - stack is off
16. 01:07:936 (2) - remove and make 01:07:603 (1) - a 1/1 slider since you map more than needed, theres no need to make the diff harder just because its a hard
17. 01:08:269 (3) - try this? to match the music better and ^
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18. 01:17:269 (3,4) - why this random distance change? nothing in the music is significant here
19. 01:29:353 (3) - same as normal

1. 00:03:082 (3,4) - this distance and the shape of (4) is inconsistent with 00:01:482 (1,2) - .. make it more consistent?
2. 00:20:271 (1) - your missing a chance here for a triplet! theres a sound on 00:20:271 - 00:20:437 - 00:20:604 - you should map
3. 00:26:771 (3,4) - remove these
4. 00:24:604 - should be emphasized and made into something clickable..
5. just a circle at 00:29:604 - is fine.. no need for the 1/2 slider 00:29:437 (3) -
6. 00:30:271 (1) - SV change imo isnt needed
7. 00:47:270 (4) - a 1/1 repeat slider would work better here to emphasize the beat at 00:47:604 -
8. 00:48:937 (2,3,4,1) - this distance inconsistency tho ;P
9. 01:00:269 (1) - ctrl+g for better circular flow
10. 01:01:936 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are too much.. lessen them a bit
11. 01:12:769 (6) - isnt needed make (5) a slider, try not to over complicate rhythms
12. 01:19:769 (4) - stack onto (3) since this is really hard to read
13. 01:29:353 (4) - same as normal and hard
    
    map still needs some work; mainly on insane and hard where you make rhythms harder and it doesnt really follow anything; and in insane; watch out for inconsistent spacing that i didnt point out

1. Difficulty curve may be too messy. Try making Normal harder or Harder easier.

Nozhomi wrote: 2x3oe

[General]
Disable Widescreen and Letterbox during breaks. ok, lol this was automatically assigned to it so I didn't notice that it was checked
Maybe disable Countdown too ? same case as above, removed
Why mp3 is so much cut at the end ? It's like this on original 'tv size' version ? I take the mp3 from this file

Ranking Criteria wrote: j1xb

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to an name. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

• 01:19:103 (1,2,3) - DS 1.5
  01:19:436 (3,4) - normal DS
  01:20:269 (1,2,3,4,5) - DS 1.5

1. 00:30:104 - tambah not deh disini
2. 00:58:603 - ^
3. 01:08:936 - ^
4. 01:10:269 (3) - dipendekin sampe 01:10:436 coba
5. 00:15:438 - tambah not , ada lirik nya disini
6. 01:25:269 (3,4) - Ctrl+G ?

• 
  Ubah HP Drain ke 6 ?
  []

1. 00:36:771 - tambahin not disini ?
2. 00:37:771 (5) - digeser ke 00:37:937 , terus 00:37:771 tambah not
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3. 00:30:771 - tambah not ? taruh di tempat 00:30:937 (1)
4. 01:05:769 (1) - hapus , (overnote)
5. 01:21:103 (1,2) - ubah ke slider aja mendingan ..
6. 01:25:103 (2,3) - Ctrl+G disini , biar dapet flownya

NoHitter wrote: 2p4m21

This song is actually in compound timing. That means you have to map it in 1/3.
Edit: At least for the first part

1. 00:22:271 (6,1) - You can improve this blanket while keeping a nice flow.
2. 00:32:937 (5,1) - ^^
3. 00:33:604 (1,2) - ^^
4. 00:50:270 (5) - God, this shape is quite nice.
5. I liked the Normal. Pretty sliders. \o/

1. 00:30:271 (1) - Hard players aren't fully used to SV changes, and by making one of this kind players would most likely lose combo by disrupting the flow they got used to. Better keep SV the same or don't use such a short value.
2. From 01:20:269 - until 01:21:603 - playability becomes ankward. I know it's because of the song and not of the map, but in this part you could use sliders to make an easier to read flow, since players won't be able to read sudden beats with song's "disrupted" rhythm.

• 
  00:08:662 (1,2,3) - a bit boring, try this
  
  and 00:10:262 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl + h
  00:15:493 (2,3,4,5) - move tp x:75 y:220
  00:19:493 (4,5,6) - move to x:308 y:134
  00:39:271 (2) - ctrl + g
  00:43:937 (2) - move to x:401 y:274
  00:46:937 (2,3) - try
  
  00:56:158 (5) - blanket well
  00:59:603 (1,2) - the flow here is bad, try
  
  01:25:269 (3) - move to x:356 y:173

• 
  00:34:937 (4,5,6) - its a little bit too hard to read in this diff, just replace 00:34:937 (4) - by two notes
  i think this diff can be more irregular
  try to adjust the distance between notes which are closed with each other.

• 
  00:08:662 (2,3) - ther are not paralle.
  01:06:936 (2,3,1) - adjust the location. 2: x:225 y:135 3: x:248 y:367 1: x:236 y:131

Nagi awa wrote: x6h42

看首页好像是懂中文的？一点点

1. the spread feel nice, sadly In my opinion your normal is too hard to be the easy diff of the set, since the spacing and SV make me feel that this set need a real easy diff
2. I guess the correct tittle is ¨Liar Mask as the video show:
   
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   maybe ask for some metadata check

1. HP 7 is better for this kind of map IMO
2. OD 8 pls, try to don't have OD -2 respect to AR
3. 00:03:882 (4) - add clap on tail (the whistle that are you using as clap) since I know that broke your hitsound pattern, but the sound in the music is really clear tho
4. 00:04:682 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above
5. 00:06:882 add a circle? since this is the place where the music is starting again
6. 00:12:662 add a circle and start the spinner 1/4 later? for better rhythm
7. 00:14:938 (1,2,3) - the spacing look the same, but in the timeline is different, this can be really confused to play, space 00:14:938 (1,2) - this a bit more, a easy solution can be just stacking 2 and 3
8. 00:16:271 (5,6,7) - same problem the spacing in 5 and 6 is too short compared to 6 and 7, this can be confused when playing, maybe make 5 and 6 a jump too?
9. 00:24:604 (8) - add clap (your fake whistle xD)
10. 00:31:382 probably adding a circle here can be a nice idea
11. 00:45:937 (6,1) - nazi, this is not stacked properly
12. 00:46:937 (2,3) - make this a slider? to fit the vocals better, since there is not a prominent sound at 00:47:104 (3) - and is a bit weird to me
13. 01:02:269 (3,6) - same as 00:45:937
14. 01:10:769 add finish or whistle? since the music need more IMO
15. 01:16:103 ^
16. 01:17:769 (1,2) - CTRL G the rhythm here? it will fit better the vocals and the active beats in the music
17. 01:26:103 (2,3,4) - really confused to play, 3 and 4 should have less spacing than 2 and 3
18. 01:27:436 (2,3,4) - ^
19. 01:29:353 (4) - is just me or this slider sound a lot better ending in 01:29:603 - this apply for every diff if you agree

1. OD and HP +1
2. Hitsounds suggestion from ¨LIAR¨ can apply here as well
3. 00:12:662 (1) - same suggestion as ¨LIAR¨, adding a circle and starting the spinner 1/4 later can improve the rhythm
4. 00:15:493 add a circle? will be really nice to play, like you did on your Insane
5. 00:21:271 (4,5,6) - nazi, this is not stacked properly
6. 00:22:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - just as my personal opinion, I don't like how the 1/2 beats get overlaped at this part, by using 1.2 spacing you can avoid this, and this will look totally better IMO: (if you agree this apply for other sections as well)
   
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7. 00:30:160 (4,1) - can be a nice idea if you stack them, will be more intuitive to play
8. 00:40:270 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:22:937 -, my main reason to suggest that, is cuz some of your overlapped 1/2, look kinda the same as the 1/3 pattern for example with this 00:34:604 (3,4,5,6,7) -
9. 00:43:270 (2,3,4,1) - this spacing can take some player down, mainly cuz they look visually the same, but they are different gaps in the timeline
10. 00:47:937 (5,1) - this blanket look really off
11. 00:52:270 same as 00:12:662
12. 01:29:353 (3) - same suggestion as LIAR

1. 00:14:938 (1) - too soon after a spinner, normal diff at this bpm, maybe need two beats of recovery
2. 00:54:936 (1) - ^
3. 01:22:269 (1) - ^
4. 01:28:269 (3) - same as other diff, also the last curve of this slider can be improved

Ls wrote: 3u4351

ooh great

just a thought, how about making the slider at the end of the song faster? (in hardest diff)

1. 00:29:937 (3) - Change this to repeat slider (2)? Just personal opinion but feels weird since the vocals are more of extended from the previous word.
2. 00:56:269 (1,2) - Slider (1)'s end and (2)'s head didn't start on any prominent point in the song. End (1) slightly earlier(1/2 beat?) and start (2) at 00:56:103 and extend the end to current's end?
3. 00:58:936 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:06:269 (3) - Slider seems to end awkwardly, try half beat earlier?
5. 01:08:269 (1) - ^
6. 01:10:936 (4) - Start half beat earlier?
7. 01:12:936 (6) - Slider seems to end awkwardly here too.
8. 01:16:269 (1) - Start half beat earlier at 01:16:103 ?

-Iz wrote: 3q445j

I'm not sure if you're refraining from mapping on red ticks because it's an Easy, if that's the case you can probably disregard most of my mod, but it sounds really awkward (to me) because I don't feel it playing with the vocals, and there aren't a lot of other instruments to map to in those parts.

1. The distance snap between 00:07:482 (4) - and 00:07:862 (1) - is smaller than the distance snap before that (because you changed slider velocity on that slider). I'd suggest fixing that since easy maps look a lot better if they are uniform IMO.
2. 00:07:862 (1,2,3) - The distance snap between these also looks different, did you change (increase) it there?
3. 01:16:269 (1) - I had trouble with that when playing your map because starting that slider at a red tick seems more natural to me. The beat on the red tick is much more pronounced than the one on the white tick, where you started it on. I'd suggest maybe starting the slider at the red tick.

Setsurei wrote: 4q164h

01:22:936 (1,2) - I'm not sure where did the red one start

Amasuro wrote: 2pj2r

Setsurei wrote: 4q164h

01:22:936 (1,2) - I'm not sure where did the red one start

Oh, I started it at 01:22:769. Oops

1. Untuk Custom hitsound S:C2 kok suara whistle sama clap nya sama? engga didelete aja yang clapnya? berasa boros gitu XD

1. 00:04:282 (4) - Delete clap? Itu kayanya down beat deh lebih baik engga usah dikasih hitsound
2. 00:05:882 (2) - Sama
3. 00:12:662 (7) - Add finish di awal slider? biar sama kaya 00:09:462 (2) - 00:11:062 (5) -
4. 00:14:262 - Untuk yang itu kayanya lebih baik pake S:C1 deh, soalnya suara normal hit S:C2 terlalu keras, lagian di sana ga ada suara kaya drum di lagunya
5. 00:15:937 (2) - Yah kok suara vokal di big tick nya dilewat, padahal nadanya bisa dibuat gini http://puu.sh/coa5K/bc8e70b54c.jpg ; http://puu.sh/coamC/a13171b4d3.jpg
6. 00:18:604 (2) - Sama
7. 00:31:937 (2) - Sama
8. 00:27:271 (2) - Yang itu lebih baik diganti 1/1 aja deh http://puu.sh/coaMA/fe754e5d4c.jpg
9. 00:41:270 (2) - Entah kenapa aku engga terlalu suka sama bentuk S yang pendek gitu XD, mungkin bisa dirubah gini http://puu.sh/cobal/6f8102cd25.jpg
10. 00:57:603 (1,2) - Blanket bagian akhir bisa dirapihin lagi di sini http://puu.sh/cobSf/91e22f2b7c.jpg
11. 01:25:603 (3) - Aku kurang yakin sama slider itu, soalnya pas bagian bentuk melingkar kadang susah buat dibaca apalagi mungkin buat pemula
    
    Bentuk slidernya banyak yang aneeeh XD

1. 00:03:882 (2) - Delete clap di akhir slider? bagian itu berasa down beat deh
2. 00:04:682 (1) - Sama
3. 00:05:482 (2) - Sama
4. 00:12:662 (1) - Spinnernya lebih baik dipanjangin aja deh sampe big tick terus set C:S2 di 00:14:262 - Soalnya suara hit S:C1 terlalu gede
5. 00:53:936 (4) - Kalo itu dipindah ke x:344 y:128 bgmn? soalnya suara gitar yang ini 00:54:270 (5) - meninggi jadi menurut aku nada sebelumnya letaknya lebih baik lebih rendah biar kerasa efek pas di situ XD 00:54:270 (5) -
6. 01:04:269 (3) - Kalo rhythm yang itu kaya gini bgmn? http://puu.sh/cod2d/52d95251cc.jpg Terus ditambahin finish di bagian awal slider. Soalnya punya nada yang sama kaya ini 01:03:436 (2) -
7. 01:10:269 (5,6,1) - Entah kenapa buat aku nada yang itu kurang cocok

1. 00:03:882 (4) - Delete clap di akhir slider? soalnya bagian itu kaya downbeat
2. 00:04:682 (1) - Sama
3. 00:05:482 (2) - Sama
4. 00:11:062 (1) - Tambah finish
5. 00:12:762 (1) - Suara finish terlalu gede, terus kayanya agak ga coco kalo dikasih finish, soalnya di situ engga ada suara cymbal, Mending pake S:C2 terus engga usah dikasih finish
6. Kayanya yang ini dikasih circle deh biar lebih fit sama lagunya 00:35:826 - sama 00:35:826 - walaupun agak lemah di situ kedengeran suara drum
7. 00:41:104 (4) - Tambah whistle di akhir slider
8. 00:43:937 (4) - Tambah suara whistle di kepala slider

1. 00:03:882 (4) - Lebih baik delete deh whistle di akhir slider, soalnya bagian itu berasa down beat deh
2. 00:05:082 (2,4) - Sama
3. 00:41:270 (5) - Tambah suara whistle di awal kepala?
4. 00:43:937 (2) - Tambah suara whistle di kepala

1. I feel SV is very high for easy. (normal is same so, too)
2. 00:11:062 (5) - NC
3. 00:32:271 (3,4) - blanket correctly
4. 00:38:271 (3) - how about cuving rightside a little?
   
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5. 00:52:270 (1) - curve gently. not good flow
6. 00:57:603 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:10:936 (4) - NC
8. 01:09:269 (2,4) - too close?
9. 01:10:269 (3,4) - I prefer to follow vocal. just a suggetion~
   
10. 01:18:936 (1) - end at 01:21:603

1. 00:02:682 (3,1,2) - mmm, not good flow...
2. 00:20:271 (1,2,3) - round pattern is better
   
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3. 00:36:771 (2) - delete. too hard
4. 00:38:271 (1,2,3,4,5) - difficult... suggetion
   
5. 00:44:270 (1) - I recommend to keep 1/3 rhythm. change to slider: 00:44:270~00:44:604 ?
6. 01:10:269 (5,1) - I prefer to follow vocal
   

1. 00:15:493 (2,3) - stack
2. 00:21:271 (4,5) - it is better to avoid stack
3. 00:34:604 (3,4,5,6,7) - hard to find rhythm. how about this?
   
4. 00:58:769 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:59:603 (1) - ^
6. 01:21:353 (4) - the slider starting at blue line is avioded, imo. suggetion
   

1. 01:18:936 (5,1) - swap NC
2. 01:19:186- add a note
3. 01:21:603 (3,1) - swap NC
4. 01:23:269- I prefer to add a note
5. 01:24:603- ^

1. 00:09:462 (2,3) - having this setup would make the pattern more organized
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2. 00:18:937 (3,4) - imo this should be changed into a 2/1 slider to better represent the held vocal. theres also nothing on 00:19:271 -
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3. 00:29:271 (2,3) - switch these objects? so that the head of the slider is on the stongest vocal and new measure at 00:29:604 -
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4. 00:41:270 (2,3) - improve blanket a bit o3o the tail of 00:41:270 (2) - has a lot more space than the head
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5. 00:57:603 (3,4) - blanket bit better o3o
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6. 01:18:936 (1) - should end at 01:21:769 - imo since it is by far the strongest note there in that section. with that, you could change the polarity and have the sliders on 01:23:103 - and 01:24:436 - following the same strongest sound. following that would be a 3/2 spacing but that is allowed o-o itll be a bit harder but i really think that the sliders and spinner could follow the music waaay better otherwise easy players might click the sliders to the strongest notes that you arent representing.. you did it for 01:14:936 (5,1) - anyways o3o so 3/2 spacing shoudl be fine. as for the blanket:
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Sognux wrote: 2b51p

Hello!

I suck at modding so please bare with me ;-; *I suck at modding so please bear with me (nazi grammar :>)

Also, try to stick mapping with only 1 Beat Snap Divisior per song, you used 1/3 and 1/4 for the LIAR diff. please listen carefully on the song, there are parts with 1/3 between 00:14:938 - and 00:36:271 - , the rest are all in 1/4 beats

Normal
01:22:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe you can do this part in another way? Didnt like how it sounded with the music. like the objects are less? well I don't want to go on instrument beat detailed (because this is Normal diff)

Hard
00:21:271 (4,5,6) - Either move the first note or the two other notes. I prefer stack, easier to read

LIAR
00:30:937 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the timing of the 2 and 4. this is 1/3 beat
00:33:604 (1,2,3) - Maybe end the slider 1 tick earlier then put the 2 1 tick earlier aswell. this is empty here 00:33:937 - , also I want to focus it ends at strong beat 00:34:271 -

This was a good beatmap, good luck on getting it ranked. thanks for the mod! no change

• 1. I like the song, mungkin nyisip nyisip diff (HAREZ PLZ NO)
  2. Gw lebih menikmati diff Hard daripada diff LIAR, sorry
  
  [Easy]
  • 1. ... Overmapped, kebanyakan note 1/1 buat dipencet, butuh lebih banyak 2/1, soalnya ini bakal bikin beginner susah nahan slidernya
    2. 00:07:882 (1) - better check this note, unsnapped
    3. 01:22:937 (1,2) - I really hate this, it's so random, meanwhile di kiai penuh note di white line || diff normal aja lebih gampang kok realize-nya ;_;
    
    [Normal]
    • 1. 00:54:603 - ketika semua diff berhenti disini, kenapa Normal malah overmapped?
      
      [Hard]
      • 1. 00:21:271 (4,5,6) - I'd not recommend this, stack terus ganti beat itu susah
        2. 00:52:353 (1) - kenapa ga geser ke 00:52:436 - aja, more easy to read, more neat the map is
        
        [LIARRRRRR, SANGAT LIAR]
        • 1. well, nothing much to say here... but, again, gw lebih menikmati diff Hard daripada diff ini
          2. also, diff ini kurang kerasa "over"map nya ketimbang Normal-Hard gap, especially di part Kiai
          3. 00:12:762 (1) - same as Hard diff case
          4. 00:22:271 (9,1) - this is good
          5. 01:22:769 (7,1) - this is so confusing for me, walaupun lumayan kebaca alurnya
          
          sorry can't find more, this piece of gold map is ready for rank
          
          good luck

Senritsu wrote: 695x66

bug more bat pls

1. 00:01:462 objects are inaudible at 10% volume, up it to 40% atleast
2. 00:07:862 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - your comboing in this section is a bit weird to me, mainly cuz you are not following the music with them, try this:
3. 00:07:862 add NC, 00:08:662 remove NC, 00:09:462 add NC, 00:10:262 remove NC, 00:11:062 add NC
4. 00:19:437 (4,5,6) - this should be snapped in 1/4
5. 00:20:382 (2,3,4) - use normal sampleset?
6. 00:23:437 (2,3,4) - your spacing is really confused to play here, 3 and 4 need more distance, due to the big gap in the timeline
7. 00:24:215 I feel that this circle is not following nothing in the song, is not better to remove it and keep just the one with vocals, 00:24:160 (5) - 00:24:271 (7) -
8. 00:45:270 add whistle? your fake clap ^^
9. 00:47:270 ^
10. 00:59:603 remove NC
11. 01:04:269 ^
12. 01:29:353 5% is too low use atleast 30% or 40% to make this rankable

1. I feel more comfortable with AR 7.5, it avoid a lot of overlaps in kiai part, also the last jumpy part feel better as well
2. Hitsounds suggestion in Liar may apply here as well
3. 00:01:462 objects are inaudible at 10% volume, up it to 40% atleast
4. 00:14:662 your spinner is not supposed to end here like Liar diff?
5. 00:21:271 (4,6) - blanket is off, also the stack 00:21:493 (5,6) -
6. 00:43:604 (3,4,1) - use the same spacing between them
7. 00:56:936 this need 1 or 2 grids to the left, since is overlaping with 00:56:103 (5) - (In game)
8. 01:29:353 5% is too low use atleast 30% or 40% to make this rankable

1. 00:01:462 objects are inaudible at 10% volume, up it to 40% atleast
2. Hitsounds suggestion in Liar may apply here as well
3. 00:12:662 add a circle with finish and start the spinner 1/2 later in 00:12:862
4. 00:36:771 remove this circle is not following nothing or almost inaudible in the music
5. 00:46:604 (1,2,3) - maybe use a repeat slider instead?
6. 01:29:353 same as Liar

1. Hitsounds suggestion in Liar may apply here as well
2. 00:01:462 objects are inaudible at 10% volume, up it to 40% atleast
3. 01:29:353 same as Liar
   
   call me back after you reply to this

General 6t6a34

Easy 3c1s6b

Normal 6g3l6m

Hard 575l21

LIAR 5z1q64

The difficulty's arrangement is so nice. Good luck

scanter wrote: 476h6t

Hi o3o/ \owo hi

General 6t6a34

1. Please add the White Fox to tag. This is a animation of the publisher. added, and added Square Enix too
2. This song hasn't unique or harsh sound. I think it is soft song. so I recommend add muted sliderslide on. http://puu.sh/czS5D/eff7543ce6.wav because some people suggested this too, then I'll add it

Easy 3c1s6b

1. 00:07:862 (1) - What about makes more gentle curve? it is a little tricky. like this? http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/2196301 I love this spiky slider lol
2. 01:25:603 (3) - Turn down volume the slider's end? it is not fit song's end. if I decrease the sound again it will not be hearable

Normal 6g3l6m

1. 00:34:937 (3) - What about change just 2 circle? drum sound are outstanding. this one I want to preserve slider
2. 00:36:937 (2,3) - Following vocals? http://puu.sh/czSOI/dc48211230.jpg ok, changed to that
3. 00:50:270 (5) - wow.. good :3

Hard 575l21

1. 00:12:862 (1) - Sound has is gradually raised, so what about try to gradually raise volume here? it will be too loud on the spinner end
2. 00:23:437 (2) - Not 1/2 tempo, but 1/3. 00:23:493 put this place is right. if you dunno where to place, just stack is fine. moved and fixed the distances
3. 00:24:104 (4) - ^ same. ^ same
4. 00:30:160 (4) - Not 1/3 tempo, but 1/2 lol. right place is 00:30:937 here. lol I am so confused with this being brought up like 1/3 then 1/6 then 1/3 again and now back to 1/6. changed anyway
5. 00:44:270 (1) - Why distance suddenly down? it is strange. 2.0 focusing on violin there, after that going back to normal distance
6. 01:01:103 (2,3,4) - You followed vocals almost. so I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/czSbI/4b85aee63d.jpg ok changed
7. 01:29:353 (3) - Volume down is not here, but 01:29:603 here. and add deceleration here is suitable. moved all green line on every diff, and about the deceleration I think its ok like this, because accelerating it too is also suitable, so I prefer a constant one rather than making them decel or accel

LIAR 5z1q64

1. Overall, NC seems strange. If you want please tell me 1:1 pm. I can assist NC pattern.
2. 00:12:862 (1) - Same as Hard. same
3. 00:24:215 (6) - I'm confident this is over-mapping. how about to erase this note? 00:19:549 (5) - this is okay. followed vocals well. deleted on previous mod
4. 01:01:269 (5,6) - Rhythm is a little strange. I recommend this. http://puu.sh/czKcq/1b9fd3c317.jpg changed
5. 01:04:019 - Add 1 circle? ok, and changed pattern too for easy play
6. 01:17:436 (4,5,1) - Just I want to say it seems most notes are followed vocal. so I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/czKoc/3213b790a2.jpg this one its ok as it is
7. 01:29:353 (4) - Same as Hard. same

The difficulty's arrangement is so nice. Good luck thanks for mod!

pishifat wrote: 641v53

not really sure why 00:19:493 (4) - is on the 1/3 tick

Setsurei wrote: 4q164h

00:19:493 (4) - if I put it on the red tick, the sound is too early

Natsu wrote: 1f6re

00:19:437 (4,5,6) - this should be snapped in 1/4

Setsurei wrote: 4q164h

00:19:437 (4,5,6) - snapped to 1/4 and fix distance too

pishifat wrote: 641v53

pishifat wrote: 641v53

not really sure why 00:19:493 (4) - is on the 1/3 tick

Setsurei wrote: 4q164h

00:19:493 (4) - if I put it on the red tick, the sound is too early

Natsu wrote: 1f6re

00:19:437 (4,5,6) - this should be snapped in 1/4

Setsurei wrote: 4q164h

00:19:437 (4,5,6) - snapped to 1/4 and fix distance too

maybe i should start typing in pink. it seems more effective

1. looking for metadata, I found this: http://www.mayamarika.com/artist/mayama ... /DFCL-2098
2. Liar Mask anime size

1. 00:19:437 (4,5,6) - use a repeat slider instead? since I'm not a fan of having 1/6 and 1/4 beats at the same section, mainly cuz is really confused to play

1. 00:23:493 this one should be snapped in 00:23:437 like you did on liar, also make more sense with the music, the vocal is not really clear at this part tho, so is better if you follow the instruments
2. 00:30:271 - after some testing and opinions, this slider is really hard to read for a hard diff, mmm try 0.50 sv? the one at insane is fine, but this one is a combo breaker tho

1. 00:13:862 will be nice if you reduce volume at spinner end

• 1. Liar Mask
  2. 蜃気楼
  3. Liar Mask anime size
  4. Liar Mask instrumental

1. changed the LIAR diff to Liar because it was before caps-ed title, back to normal
2. removed TV Size from tags

Natsu wrote: 1f6re

All seems good to me

wendao wrote: 56f6j

anime size after song's name just, weird... even it's the real song's name, I'd change it to Mayama Rika - Liar Mask -anime size- or Mayama Rika - Liar Mask (anime size)
I don't know why rules nowadays is suck

also why delete TV Size from Tags? It's still a TV Size beatmap anyway (since it's an opening song for anime)

for diff name, LIAR is far moooooore better than Liar, imho

Natsu wrote: 1f6re

1 - well that's is the correct tittle of the song
2 - about the tag, I think it is useless, also there is already an ¨anime size¨ in the song name
3- Setsurei told me tht he was using LIAR cuz the previous tittle was in caps

wendao wrote: 56f6j

1. but still, it's weird
2. only to make consistency with old beatmap / new beatmap with TV Size on tags
3. Liar looks so soft, vice versa

Senritsu wrote: 695x66

1. rule. and need further--
2. --metadata check
3. mapper's preference

1133rd post. epic number of my post always placed on this thread lol

wendao wrote: 56f6j

o gitu ya

1. 00:20:271 (1) - ugly slider. where does your creativity run to? I expected more things like 00:22:937 (3) - or 00:12:662 (3) - both are good slider. here's my suggestion (click spoilerbox below). having a 'L' slider looks good and there's 'Liar' diff so I think this will fit.
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2. 00:44:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - here's a pattern suggestion.
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1. 00:08:662 (2,3) - just my preference, these slider does not look good. however I don't know how it should be, sorry. would you change this?
2. 00:25:604 (1) - I think it's better to copy 00:24:271 (4) - instead of making a new one. some symmetry doesn't hurt I suppose. here's a pattern suggestion if you change this *ignore DS when placing 00:25:271 (1) - just copy-paste and flip horizontally. (3) is placed under 00:24:271 (4) - and 00:26:937 (4) stacked with 00:27:604 (5)
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3. 01:22:269 - maybe add 3/2 slider here? feels too empty here.

1. 00:18:937 (3) - hmm...I don't like this slider and the flow tbh. how about this?
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2. 00:23:437 (2,3) - oh, you broke it. please stay with 00:21:493 (5,6) rhythm. make it all same on this part. the vocal was not 00:23:437 (2) - btw. it's here 00:23:493 - check it by using 25% playback.
3. 00:37:271 (2) - I would flip horizontal this slider (ctrl + h). I think you use too much uh...what should I say? circular flow to the center maybe. I hope you understand.
4. 00:59:103 (4) - uh..change this to 2 notes maybe? plays better that way imo
5. 00:59:936 (6) - this doesn't have to be that far I think. it causes inconsistency with previous pattern. I mean this pattern 00:56:103 (5,6) . here's my suggestion
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6. 01:04:936 (1) - ctrl + g? fits better with current pace and move (3) to x:220 y:72 if you applied that.
7. 01:19:103 (1,2,3) - why sudden jump? I don't think this is appropriate. try this. it should be better, perhaps
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8. 01:20:603 (2,3) - use 1.00x DS here.
9. 01:22:103 (3,4,5,6) - not appropriate because you use normal spacing here 01:21:603 (1,2) - and now there's a sudden jump. I missed some notes here. you may doing fine but not with the other player, especially with those whose skill is still not good enough to play insane map. if you want to set a jump, you should make something noticeable before but these 01:19:103 (1,2) - won't do. some jumping slider should be good for it. another note, if you keep this I think reading this slider 01:23:436 (1) - would be hard because after a sudden jump there is normal spacing here. the player already carried away with jumping pattern and you broke it xD. no, I am serious here.
10. 01:24:436 (5,1,2,3,4) - here too ^ it's quite confusing to play. it's not fun tbh at least for me. the rest is fine.

1. 00:56:103 (5) - I would ctrl + g this. feels more natural
2. 01:08:436 (2,3) - ^

Natsu wrote: 1f6re

you didn't change too much, so everything seems fine to me. Rebubbled

wendao wrote: 56f6j

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