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Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe (TV Size) 531p2r

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ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月28日 at 21:56:50

Artist: Petit Rabbit's
Title: Daydream cafe (TV Size)
Source: ご注文はうさぎですか?
Tags: Gochūmon wa Usagi Desu ka Is the Order a Rabbit Ayane Sakura Inori Minase Risa Taneda Satomi Sato Maaya Uchida Okubo Kaoru
BPM: 150
Filesize: 17601kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.39 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Insane (4.11 stars, 302 notes)
  3. Loneight's Hard (3.35 stars, 248 notes)
  4. Normal (2.46 stars, 190 notes)
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きゅん
Last edited by ts8zs , edited 42 times in total.
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
= =
Deleted_3044645
Deleted_3044645
So kawaii
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hey, M4M request :)
*I believe BG should be between 1366x768 and 1024x768 in dimension.

Rabbit 1y1u1u

00:00:984 (2,3) - Try swapping these objects positions, so that it forms a forward and back sort of flow. Helps spice up the overall flow for these notes imo.

00:01:384 (4) - NC, since it's the first object to appear in the main timing offset.

00:08:184 (1) - Please un-stack from the tail of 00:06:984 (3) - . 00:06:984 (3,1) - Are 1 full beat apart, yet it has the similar stack as 00:08:584 (2,3) - . This may trick players into thinking that 00:08:584 (2,3) - is also a full 1 beat apart.

00:20:584 (3) - Add a finish?

00:28:384 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, because these notes in this rhythm are suddenly closer together. In addition to that, you can see that 00:28:784 (2,3) - are also spaced the same as well. This will surely trick players into thinking that it's also spaced 1 full beat apart.
Consider stacking it under 00:28:784 (2) - or making it a NC to help mark the sudden DS change here.

00:34:684 (2) - It sounds really extra here. One, is because like the previous stanza, you did not use a note at 00:28:284. Another reason is because this note itself does not hit any beat nor vocal whatsoever.
So, either remove this not, or add a note at 00:28:284, so the rhythm in both stanza's remain consistent.

00:58:984 (3) - NC, since it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

00:59:384 (4,6) - Move just a bit more part, so that 00:59:984 (6) - isn't attached to the remains of 00:59:384 (4) - 's head.

01:05:384 (1,2) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) please fix the blanket here.

Normal 6g3l6m

00:12:184 (3,4) - Consider adding a finish on both their tails.

00:25:384 (1,1) - These sliders are obviously too close together. In Normal/Easy diffs like this, keeping the DS consistent is a must. So please fix.

00:30:584 (4) - NC
00:36:984 (4) - ^
01:15:384 (5) - ^

Good luck!
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

10crystalmask01 wrote: a2i24

Hey, M4M request :)
*I believe BG should be between 1366x768 and 1024x768 in dimension. fogotten,fixed XD

Rabbit 1y1u1u

00:00:984 (2,3) - Try swapping these objects positions, so that it forms a forward and back sort of flow. Helps spice up the overall flow for these notes imo. nope,ko ko ro

00:01:384 (4) - NC, since it's the first object to appear in the main timing offset. fixed

00:08:184 (1) - Please un-stack from the tail of 00:06:984 (3) - . 00:06:984 (3,1) - Are 1 full beat apart, yet it has the similar stack as 00:08:584 (2,3) - . This may trick players into thinking that 00:08:584 (2,3) - is also a full 1 beat apart. fixed

00:20:584 (3) - Add a finish?fixed

00:28:384 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, because these notes in this rhythm are suddenly closer together. In addition to that, you can see that 00:28:784 (2,3) - are also spaced the same as well. This will surely trick players into thinking that it's also spaced 1 full beat apart. trying use some way to fix it
Consider stacking it under 00:28:784 (2) - or making it a NC to help mark the sudden DS change here.

00:34:684 (2) - It sounds really extra here. One, is because like the previous stanza, you did not use a note at 00:28:284. Another reason is because this note itself does not hit any beat nor vocal whatsoever.music have this so some small change
So, either remove this not, or add a note at 00:28:284, so the rhythm in both stanza's remain consistent.

00:58:984 (3) - NC, since it's the first object to appear in Kai time.fixed

00:59:384 (4,6) - Move just a bit more part, so that 00:59:984 (6) - isn't attached to the remains of 00:59:384 (4) - 's head. fixed

01:05:384 (1,2) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) please fix the blanket here. fixed:3

Normal 6g3l6m

00:12:184 (3,4) - Consider adding a finish on both their tails. fixed

00:25:384 (1,1) - These sliders are obviously too close together. In Normal/Easy diffs like this, keeping the DS consistent is a must. So please fix. miss a reverse XD

00:30:584 (4) - NC Fixed
00:36:984 (4) - ^Fixed
01:15:384 (5) - ^Fixed

Good luck!
Thanks:3
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ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter
wrong post
Maboyu
373 posts
ed November 2011
hi 包子我來了~

[Normal]
00:03:184 (3,4) - 沒包好
00:14:984 (2,3) - ^
01:11:184 (1) - 刪除NC?
01:14:184 (4,1) - 沒包好
01:25:584 (1) - 改成這樣?

[Hard]
00:23:984 (2,3) - 沒包好
00:36:584 (5) - nc?
00:37:984 (1) - 刪除nc?
00:31:784 (3) - nc?
00:37:184 (6,7) - 沒包好
00:19:584 (2,1) - ^
01:13:384 (6) - nc?

[Rabbit]
00:46:584 (4) - 拉下來一點?
>.<

就這樣了QAQ MOD不出什麼>.<
希望能對你有所幫助!!
good luck~
Wafu
1,703 posts
ed June 2011
Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

[General]

Move preview time on 00:58:984. Current preview time is not wrong, but it's better when it shows the most lively part of the song. Player should click on preview and say: "wow, much song, so cute", but the current part will not show that much. I personally think this kiai is less important than the ending one.
The song name is not "Daydream Cafe." Change title to "Daydream café" and romanised title to "Daydream cafe". Capitalization was wrong and "e" was supposed to be "é"
Add Okubo Kaoru to the tags since he composed the music.
I don't think you should use same CS for all the difficulties, might be mentioned in future mods and might be harder to get bubble with that, however it's nothing unrankable.

[Insane]

AR -1, definitely. Firstly because the gap between other settings is too big. Second problem is that you use patterns which are making AR9 non-viable. Exactly I mean sliders under sliders and high ammount of stacks. This is much more readable with AR8 and also the BPM of this song is not supposed to fit such high AR. It's not "The Big Black", right :D
OD +1, currently it is really easy to SS first try, because it doesn't require player to be accurate, it's just like they played normal difficulty with insane patterns, so this is quite important to fix.
01:20:784 (1) - Probably only one thing I would really want to see changed here. What about moving it on 508;31 so you deny the flowbreaking anti-jump, which is here just to confuse player. Placement I recommended also makes nice jump to the next slider, so the kiai is still lively for whole time of the kiai.
00:12:184 (1,2,1,2) - Idea is fine, but more correct is if you remove both NCs and add only one on 00:12:384 (2), because the sound you followed starts on 00:12:384, not 00:12:184.
I would mention even more NCs, but I see you based it on vocal, what makes it really inconsistent, so I just wanted to say it is not that great idea to follow vocals when making new combos, however I'm not saying it is much wrong, but new combos based on downbeats mostly make more sense.
01:06:384 (2) - I think you should change this slider so the flow fits both 01:05:384 (1) and 01:06:984 (3). Currently the way it started was really weird, since the flow was natural before, but suddenly you just force the player to make unnatural movement. I think you should see the flow is different than rest of the pattern. Try something like this.
SPOILER

[Hard]

AR -1. Same reason as Insane, too high for the song and difficulty, also if you fixed it on insane, you shouldn't keep same on hard.
HP -1. It shouldn't be same as insane, also current was high for hard diff too.
OD +1. Same reason as insane.
00:15:784 (3,4,5,6) - Well.. this one is overmapped and doesn't even fit, simply because there are no notes in music and player might tend to keep following the vocals. Why don't you try something like this? (00:16:984 (6) is placed at the start of 00:17:184 (1))
SPOILER

00:22:184 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue as previous one
00:30:184 (1,2) - This also doesn't even follow the music well, meaning it's overmapped a bit. There's obviously easy way to deny it by making 1/1 note and then putting 3 circles. Like this.
SPOILER

00:39:784 (1,2,1,2) - Same issue as 00:15:784 (3,4,5,6). However this time 00:39:784 (1,2) fits well with violin sound, but 00:40:584 (1,2) seems to follow nothing. Consider remaking 00:40:584 (1,2) into one 1/2 slider and 2 circles like this.
SPOILER
00:47:584 (5,1,2) - ^. Always the same problem. Follow vocal or background music, but I really recommend you to change these patterns. To be honest, it's only thing that bothers me in hard difficulty.
00:49:384 (3) - Damn.. I trust you can map this better! Try pattern like this, using that much repeats, while music doesn't require it just says that mapper was boring, there's nothing creative about this.
SPOILER
01:02:184 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:15:784 (3,4,5,6) and others..
01:05:384 (1,2) - ^
01:14:984 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]

I recommend to use OD and AR +1, because now the settings fit for easy difficutly, while map is definitely normal. Also the difference of settings between normal and hard is much bigger than between hard and insane.
01:08:184 (1) - Definitelly, don't do this. Almost all circles in this slider are just out of the song, so it's again overmapped and also those repeats are just lazy. I trust you can find way to map this much better using 1/1 and 1/2 sliders/notes. Also it might be confusing for newbies.

Not much to mention here, there are some details obviously, but I just wanted to point out mainly the important things. Good luck with map :3
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

AliomLoung wrote: 3m4l6z

hi 包子我來了~

[Normal]
00:03:184 (3,4) - 沒包好
00:14:984 (2,3) - ^
01:11:184 (1) - 刪除NC?
01:14:184 (4,1) - 沒包好
01:25:584 (1) - 改成這樣?changed
All fixed
[Hard]
00:23:984 (2,3) - 沒包好
00:36:584 (5) - nc?
00:37:984 (1) - 刪除nc?
00:31:784 (3) - nc?
00:37:184 (6,7) - 沒包好
00:19:584 (2,1) - ^
01:13:384 (6) - nc?
all fixed
[Rabbit]
00:46:584 (4) - 拉下來一點?changed
>.<

就這樣了QAQ MOD不出什麼>.<
希望能對你有所幫助!!
good luck~
有需要的的时候随时找我 :3
Deleted_3044645
Deleted_3044645
OD 4 on Hard is really too low. Consider at least 5. but 6 would be better

Also on Insane, HP5 OD 6 .. I recommend raising both HP and OD to 7 and AR 8 fits this song.
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

No Dap wrote: g334y

OD 4 on Hard is really too low. Consider at least 5. but 6 would be better

Also on Insane, HP5 OD 6 .. I recommend raising both HP and OD to 7 and AR 8 fits this song.
I want player use HR to play this map to make Insane AR10...so...
Hard OD+1
Insane nope
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

Wafu wrote: 5v2o5v

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

[General]

Move preview time on 00:58:984. Current preview time is not wrong, but it's better when it shows the most lively part of the song. Player should click on preview and say: "wow, much song, so cute", but the current part will not show that much. I personally think this kiai is less important than the ending one. Fixed?
The song name is not "Daydream Cafe." Change title to "Daydream café" and romanised title to "Daydream cafe". Capitalization was wrong and "e" was supposed to be "é" fixed
Add Okubo Kaoru to the tags since he composed the music. do this later
I don't think you should use same CS for all the difficulties, might be mentioned in future mods and might be harder to get bubble with that, however it's nothing unrankable. Insane for hr Hard for jumping easier

[Insane]

AR -1, definitely. Firstly because the gap between other settings is too big. Second problem is that you use patterns which are making AR9 non-viable. Exactly I mean sliders under sliders and high ammount of stacks. This is much more readable with AR8 and also the BPM of this song is not supposed to fit such high AR. It's not "The Big Black", right :D I want player use HR to play AR10
OD +1, currently it is really easy to SS first try, because it doesn't require player to be accurate, it's just like they played normal difficulty with insane patterns, so this is quite important to fix. Same aboue
01:20:784 (1) - Probably only one thing I would really want to see changed here. What about moving it on 508;31 so you deny the flowbreaking anti-jump, which is here just to confuse player. Placement I recommended also makes nice jump to the next slider, so the kiai is still lively for whole time of the kiai. fixed
00:12:184 (1,2,1,2) - Idea is fine, but more correct is if you remove both NCs and add only one on 00:12:384 (2), because the sound you followed starts on 00:12:384, not 00:12:184. fixed
I would mention even more NCs, but I see you based it on vocal, what makes it really inconsistent, so I just wanted to say it is not that great idea to follow vocals when making new combos, however I'm not saying it is much wrong, but new combos based on downbeats mostly make more sense.
01:06:384 (2) - I think you should change this slider so the flow fits both 01:05:384 (1) and 01:06:984 (3). Currently the way it started was really weird, since the flow was natural before, but suddenly you just force the player to make unnatural movement. I think you should see the flow is different than rest of the pattern. Try something like this.
SPOILER
I want make a shift here

[Hard]

AR -1. Same reason as Insane, too high for the song and difficulty, also if you fixed it on insane, you shouldn't keep same on hard.
HP -1. It shouldn't be same as insane, also current was high for hard diff too.
OD +1. Same reason as insane.
00:15:784 (3,4,5,6) - Well.. this one is overmapped and doesn't even fit, simply because there are no notes in music and player might tend to keep following the vocals. Why don't you try something like this? (00:16:984 (6) is placed at the start of 00:17:184 (1))
SPOILER
This plays more silky
00:22:184 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue as previous one^
00:30:184 (1,2) - This also doesn't even follow the music well, meaning it's overmapped a bit. There's obviously easy way to deny it by making 1/1 note and then putting 3 circles. Like this.
SPOILER

vocal is moe so does this patten
00:39:784 (1,2,1,2) - Same issue as 00:15:784 (3,4,5,6). However this time 00:39:784 (1,2) fits well with violin sound, but 00:40:584 (1,2) seems to follow nothing. Consider remaking 00:40:584 (1,2) into one 1/2 slider and 2 circles like this.
SPOILER
same above above

00:47:584 (5,1,2) - ^. Always the same problem. Follow vocal or background music, but I really recommend you to change these patterns. To be honest, it's only thing that bothers me in hard difficulty. same above
00:49:384 (3) - Damn.. I trust you can map this better! Try pattern like this, using that much repeats, while music doesn't require it just says that mapper was boring, there's nothing creative about this.
SPOILER
vocal~~~
01:02:184 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:15:784 (3,4,5,6) and others..
01:05:384 (1,2) - ^
01:14:984 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]

I recommend to use OD and AR +1, because now the settings fit for easy difficutly, while map is definitely normal. Also the difference of settings between normal and hard is much bigger than between hard and insane.
01:08:184 (1) - Definitelly, don't do this. Almost all circles in this slider are just out of the song, so it's again overmapped and also those repeats are just lazy. I trust you can find way to map this much better using 1/1 and 1/2 sliders/notes. Also it might be confusing for newbies.[/color]

Not much to mention here, there are some details obviously, but I just wanted to point out mainly the important things. Good luck with map :3
Thanks for mod:3
If you need mod just pm me
I need to go to class,So this post was written in hurry XD
sjoy
1,032 posts
ed April 2012
[Normal]
00:29:384 (3) - whis
00:34:584 (2) - 00:34:784这里开始
00:52:584我觉得这里开始转圈到 00:55:184
01:25:584 (1) - 我觉得是1/2折返
圈太少了之前有人就是这样被BAT喷了
[Hard]
00:18:984 (1) - whis
00:22:184 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏莫名
00:33:384 (1) - FIN
00:49:384 (3) - ^
01:09:984 (1) - ^
还是很N一样想吐槽圈太少
[Insane]
OD+1
为啥都是CS3看起来好大
00:13:584 (1) - 感觉有点突兀，突然来这样一个滑条
00:39:184 (1) - ^
00:42:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - VOCAL是红线起音，这样摆对我来说有点难受
00:48:984 (1,2,3) - 挺变扭的
01:20:384 (4) - ctrl+g
01:25:584 (2) - 突兀
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

sjoy wrote: 35404l

[Normal]
00:29:384 (3) - whis 这个图whistle不是跟的 是按照某种规律来下的我记得是4白4红1白这样？ 撒._.
00:34:584 (2) - 00:34:784这里开始 思考一下
00:52:584我觉得这里开始转圈到 00:55:184 现在蛮好
01:25:584 (1) - 我觉得是1/2折返 折返感觉打起来怪怪的
圈太少了之前有人就是这样被BAT喷了……这个 是哪个bat说的 我绝对不会去找他
[Hard]
00:18:984 (1) - whis 这个图whistle不是跟的……
00:22:184 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏莫名 感觉打起来蛮流畅的就这么放了
00:33:384 (1) - FIN 这里确实少了4个finish 你说得对 ,三个diff全fixed thanks a lot
00:49:384 (3) - ^
01:09:984 (1) - ^
还是很N一样想吐槽圈太少
[Insane]
OD+1
为啥都是CS3看起来好大 其实这个是AR10
00:13:584 (1) - 感觉有点突兀，突然来这样一个滑条 ……follow music
00:39:184 (1) - ^
00:42:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - VOCAL是红线起音，这样摆对我来说有点难受 个人觉得还好
00:48:984 (1,2,3) - 挺变扭的 小改动 似乎鼠标移动没太大问题
01:20:384 (4) - ctrl+g nai 这一声 想做个shift
01:25:584 (2) - 突兀 ……
Thanks for finish
Flower
1,728 posts
ed August 2011
irc mod
15:20 Flower: .
15:20 ts8zs: 待我更新下:3
15:21 ts8zs: 嗯好了
15:21 Flower: np
15:22 *ts8zs is listening to [http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/406500 Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe (TV Size)]
15:31 Flower: 我先说音效
15:31 Flower: 24clap
15:32 ts8zs: 嗯我会试一下的
15:32 Flower: 不是试一下的, 这是基本吧
15:33 Flower: 我提供两种建议 一个是normal hitnormal当clap
15:34 ts8zs: 另一种呢？
15:34 Flower: http://puu.sh/8izaD.wav 这个
15:35 ts8zs: 这个很好,thx
15:36 Flower: 然后说一下Insane
15:36 Flower: 先说节奏
15:37 Flower: 00:13:584 (1) - 多了一个repeat
15:37 Flower: 00:26:384 (3) - 这个也是
15:39 ts8zs: 嗯 这个是故意的 少一个感觉结束有点快了？
15:39 Flower: 那就说明timing有问题
15:41 ts8zs: 呃 我是说有一个延长的尾音那种感觉
15:41 Flower: 你觉得是尾音明显还是00:13:784 - 的那声啪明显
15:42 Flower: 00:26:384 (3) - 这里也是的，背景明显的只有5声1/8
15:43 ts8zs: 嗯 你说得对 fixed
15:43 ts8zs: 这个放在将来也容易出问题
15:43 Flower: 00:49:584 (1) - 我认为这里00:49:784 - 的钢琴比较舒服，当然改不改还是看你
15:46 ts8zs: 改成 两个点加一个1/4短往返 如何
15:48 Flower: 也行
15:48 ts8zs: so,fixed
15:49 Flower: 01:10:784 (3) - 用这个滑条感觉塞得太满。建议改成一个单点，给玩家一个停顿
15:54 Flower: 。
15:54 Flower: 人美丽
15:54 ts8zs: 抱歉 掉线了ＸＤ　我说的最后一句是这个想表现出转音……拉长1/4如何
15:54 ts8zs: 我看到你说的最后一句是01:10:784 (3) -
15:55 ts8zs: 太满这条
15:55 Flower: 那就是吃电视
15:55 ts8zs: 十分抱歉 挂了vpn 现在应该没问题了……
15:56 Flower: 单点不行？非要塞满？
15:57 ts8zs: 呃……那就先改过来好了
15:57 Flower: 节奏部分书完了没了
15:57 Flower: 然后是细节了 排列我也看不太懂 就说些小的了
15:58 Flower: 00:06:984 (3) - 这个我建议拉的更圆润些
15:58 Flower: http://puu.sh/8iA8U.txt 我做了点微调，仅供参考
15:59 ts8zs: 嗯
15:59 Flower: 00:10:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里可以用ctrl+shift+d的快捷键做一个正六边形，当然如果你觉得麻烦的话就算了
16:00 ts8zs: 我会校准下的
16:01 Flower: 00:52:384 (1,2) - blanket；距离参照00:52:384 (1,3) -
16:02 ts8zs: 2上移1small gird,fixed
16:02 Flower: 01:00:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 窝成一团了
16:03 Flower: 还有01:00:784 (3,7) - 的对齐可以做一下
16:03 ts8zs: 窝成一团是？
16:03 Flower: 全都碰到一起了
16:04 ts8zs: fixed
16:04 Flower: k
16:04 Flower: 01:07:184 (4,5,6) - blanket和距离可以更精细一些
16:05 ts8zs: 6微调了下
16:05 Flower: 美丽
16:06 Flower: 关于这个hard我想批判一番
16:06 ts8zs: 请说
16:07 Flower: 00:15:784 (3,4,5,6) - 这个3/4根本不合曲
16:08 ts8zs: 剩下那些的也是，对吧
16:08 Flower: 队
16:09 ts8zs: 01:02:184 (1,2,3,4) - 那这种呢
16:09 Flower: 这个倒是我觉得没问题
16:10 ts8zs: 嗯好 这部分明白了 人声有在1/2的会修复的
16:11 Flower: 另外我觉得01:02:984 (3) - 改成1/2比较好
16:12 ts8zs: STR2能fix这个么
16:12 Flower: 我觉得不够
16:13 Flower: 而且我觉得str2有点吵
16:14 Flower: 00:25:384 (1) - 这里改成1/1比较舒服
16:16 ts8zs: 好
16:16 Flower: 美丽
16:17 Flower: normal
16:17 ts8zs: 好
16:18 Flower: 00:07:384 (5,1) - blanket
16:18 ts8zs: fixed
16:19 Flower: 美丽
16:19 Flower: 好
16:19 ts8zs: 好 Thanks a lot
16:20 Flower: 不客气
16:20 Flower: 那我post了

Good luck~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
ed July 2011
hi 美丽


Hard

  1. 00:38:584 - 我觉得空着这里不太好
  2. 00:42:184 (3) - 这个滑条换成两个叠着的单点比较好吧o.o
  3. 00:52:384 (1) - 往右上方移一点和下面配合比较好看o.o
  4. 我觉得唱的是pyon而不是kyun啊 233
Normal

  1. 00:26:984 (1) - 间距..?
Rabbit

  1. 官网美丽
  2. 00:09:784 (5) - https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1548701
  3. 00:12:984 (2) - https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1548710
  4. 00:20:184 (3) - 在3这里new combo比较好吧.. 莫名感觉这样
  5. 00:39:784 (5) - 最后那里的间距要拉大点
  6. 00:41:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 请放成传说中的七角星
好多人做这个 蜡烛
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote: 6vr

hi 美丽


Hard

  1. 00:38:584 - 我觉得空着这里不太好no
  2. 00:42:184 (3) - 这个滑条换成两个叠着的单点比较好吧o.ono
  3. 00:52:384 (1) - 往右上方移一点和下面配合比较好看o.owhy
  4. 我觉得唱的是pyon而不是kyun啊 233不要在意细节
Normal

  1. 00:26:984 (1) - 间距..?fixed
Rabbit

  1. 官网美丽
  2. 00:09:784 (5) - https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1548701no
  3. 00:12:984 (2) - https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1548710no
  4. 00:20:184 (3) - 在3这里new combo比较好吧.. 莫名感觉这样前面有一个example
  5. 00:39:784 (5) - 最后那里的间距要拉大点修不动
  6. 00:41:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 请放成传说中的七角星修不动，等回头re一下这部分，整个谱面finish乱死了……
好多人做这个 蜡烛我一定是里面评分最低的！（如果能rank的话……）
自摸了一下发现修不动
Chloe
1,162 posts
ed April 2011
m4m

[Normal]
00:07:384 (5,1) - 你们为何都喜欢开GS... 一眼就看得出spacing差异 不好看
00:15:784 (3) - 建议跟VOCAL拆成1/1+红线NOTE
00:58:584 (4) - 我觉得提前1/2比较好 并取消NC
01:11:184 (4) - 去掉NC
01:18:984 (2) - 没包好

[Hard]
00:02:184 (2,3) - 相信我 这个比较难看而且影响质量.. 直接堆在2上即可
00:10:184 (3) - ctrlg
00:11:784 (1) - ^
00:11:784 (4) - remove nc
00:12:384 (1) - ^
00:13:184 (3) - ^
00:12:184 (5) - nc
00:14:984 (2) - ctrlg 因为这种长度slide不管来回几次其实都是按住头就可以了 所以还是top靠近00:15:784 (3) - 的top比较好接
00:28:984 (2) - 这种绝对没有包好 太扁了 和别的blanket形成鲜明对比 太难看了 而且这里和00:29:784 (4) - 比起来间距也是一看就不一样 我觉得没啥理由 说起间距 00:32:584 (3,4) - 包括这些也是 这可是hard 我觉得总体来说有点太近了
00:28:384 (1,3) - overlap到了 移开一点吧
00:45:984 (1) - 既然00:46:184 (2) - 才是拉开间距为何这个要NC 而且是红线 我觉得NC不能这么用

[兔子]
00:08:984 (3,5) - 也是间距问题 一看非常明显 其实我现在摸图都是开着播放键直接放下去 有问题才停下来 足以说明我的摸图很有水分 但是这样我都看出来了
00:29:584 (2,3) - CTRLG之后FLOW较好 毫无疑问 但是不知道你会不会觉得毁了pattern
00:35:784 (5,6,7,8) - 这FLOW一般 也不是很好看 主要你前面都是方形三角几何 这里突然来2组00:35:784 (5,6) - 而且排的比较靠近 有一点anti jump的感觉 所以打起来比较别扭
00:37:384 (3) - 低一点 大概140 112这个位置比较好
00:40:984 (8) - 431 294？
00:45:584 (5,6) - 这俩都remove nc
00:47:384 (5) - ^
00:48:984 (3) - ^
00:58:384 (4) - ^
00:46:184 (1) - nc
00:58:384 (4) - 搞成这样比较好 http://puu.sh/8xdAA.jpg
01:00:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这梗不太好 不如继续三角四方
01:07:184 (4,5) - 有点antijump 不太爽 毕竟你不是一直在用 而且你是相同节奏类似型style 建议保持前后一致

其实INSANE还有点提升空间 我觉得总体做的不错 不过细节太差
Oyatsu
1,908 posts
ed December 2012
IRC moded!
Good luck!
IRC log
10:16 Oyatsu: Hard and Rabbit CS +1 plz
10:17 ts8zs: no,I want make rabbit AR10
10:17 ts8zs: so AR9+HR=AR10
10:17 Oyatsu: CS not AR
10:17 Oyatsu: also sorry but this map isn't allowed AR 10
10:17 Oyatsu: you should know
10:17 ts8zs: Yes，If rabbit CS+1 most people will not open HR
10:18 Oyatsu: you're crazy
10:18 Oyatsu: HP+2
10:18 Oyatsu: up to you, if you didn't want it is rankble
10:18 ts8zs: ok
10:18 Oyatsu: open Rabbit
10:18 ts8zs: CS3 is rankable I think
10:18 Oyatsu: HP +2
10:19 ts8zs: ok
10:19 Oyatsu: 00:09:184 (4,5) - you can make stack perfectly be like 00:08:584 (2,3) -
10:19 Oyatsu: current one, can make player understand it is 1/4 rhythm
10:20 Oyatsu: 00:20:384 (1,3) - remove NC at 1 and NC at 3
10:20 ts8zs: ok
10:20 ts8zs: 00:20:384 - "fu" start here
10:21 Oyatsu: NC often follows strong beat
10:21 Oyatsu: not vocal
10:21 Oyatsu: 00:28:584 - there is srum beat here, why do you ignore?
10:21 Oyatsu: 00:32:984 (1) - Re move NC. 00:33:384 (4) - NC
10:21 ts8zs: show vocal
10:22 Oyatsu: 00:40:584 (6) - if you say you follow vocal, so NC this
10:23 ts8zs: fixed
10:23 Oyatsu: 00:55:584 (1) - middle point is at 136/352
10:24 Oyatsu: 00:58:784 (2) - try to stack it with 00:57:184 (1)'s head
10:24 Oyatsu: 00:57:184 (1) 's head
10:24 Oyatsu: 01:05:284 - add note
10:25 Oyatsu: 01:21:284 - ^
10:26 Oyatsu: 01:04:784 (1) - Remove NC
10:27 Oyatsu: 01:10:784 (3,4) - I really don't like 1/4 rhyhm here, distance is also wrong, players are difficult to understand them
10:27 Oyatsu: 01:10:784 (3,4) - add note
10:28 Oyatsu: 01:18:084 - * sorry ^
10:28 ts8zs: why
10:28 Oyatsu: you don't hear beat?
10:29 Oyatsu: ok Hard
10:30 Oyatsu: 00:18:984 (1,2,1) - I really don't understand these distance, blanket them plz
10:31 Oyatsu: 00:26:384 (1) - How ing 1/4 slider and add repeat?
10:31 Oyatsu: 00:26:384 (1) - add note
10:32 Oyatsu: 00:43:784 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:44:384 (3) -
10:33 Oyatsu: 01:07:584 (7) - move to 466/255
10:35 ts8zs: oh,sry XD
10:35 Oyatsu: =w=
10:36 Oyatsu: I can only say errors
10:36 Oyatsu: about fixing, you still can fix slowly
10:36 Oyatsu: 01:07:584 (7) - move to 466/255
10:37 ts8zs: ok
10:38 Oyatsu: ok normal
10:40 Oyatsu: 00:41:384 (3) - tail is at 56/160
10:41 Oyatsu: ok
10:41 Oyatsu: The end!!~
10:41 ts8zs: oh:3
10:41 ts8zs: Thx
10:41 Oyatsu: Good luck! ^^
CET 6
365 posts
ed August 2012
包子~~

moe

Normal

挺好的 发现是走包路线的 而我倾向flow路线所以提出的一些建议可能不适合风格
00:23:184 (4) - 放在00:22:184 (3) - 尾端左侧flow
00:36:984 (1) - 放在00:35:784 (3) - 右侧flow 然后00:37:384 (2) - 放在00:36:984 (1) - 左下弄成三角形或者相应调整


Hard

大圈圈 突然觉得音量有点小
00:20:584 (1,2,3,4) - 觉得弄成和00:14:184 (1,2) - 也不错 前后对称什么的
还是风格问题- - 比如00:25:984 (2) - 我觉得放在00:25:384 (1) - 的尾巴偏做比较顺 不过你用包也不错
00:33:384 (1) - 觉得可以放在和00:32:584 (3) - 的头在同一个y轴
00:51:984 (2) - 觉得用ctrl h + j + g的方向比较顺


Rabbit

好玩 觉得比前两个diff好 好不习惯最高diff圈圈这么大 音量嗯 觉得可以大点
00:40:584 (6) - 不和00:40:984 (7) - 一样吗？
01:17:384 (4) - 要不要换个颜色提示下
01:25:184 (1) - 是想放在之前的3和5之间吧不过间距突变···强迫症- -


好啦~GL包子 :)
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

CET 6 wrote: 3s5261

包子~~

moe

Normal

挺好的 发现是走包路线的 而我倾向flow路线所以提出的一些建议可能不适合风格 所以是包子嘛
00:23:184 (4) - 放在00:22:184 (3) - 尾端左侧flow nope
00:36:984 (1) - 放在00:35:784 (3) - 右侧flow 然后00:37:384 (2) - 放在00:36:984 (1) - 左下弄成三角形或者相应调整 nope


Hard

大圈圈 突然觉得音量有点小dont mind
00:20:584 (1,2,3,4) - 觉得弄成和00:14:184 (1,2) - 也不错 前后对称什么的 你说得对
还是风格问题- - 比如00:25:984 (2) - 我觉得放在00:25:384 (1) - 的尾巴偏做比较顺 不过你用包也不错[/color]
00:33:384 (1) - 觉得可以放在和00:32:584 (3) - 的头在同一个y轴 你说得对
00:51:984 (2) - 觉得用ctrl h + j + g的方向比较顺no


Rabbit

好玩 觉得比前两个diff好 好不习惯最高diff圈圈这么大 音量嗯 觉得可以大点其实是在逼你开hr
00:40:584 (6) - 不和00:40:984 (7) - 一样吗？不一样
01:17:384 (4) - 要不要换个颜色提示下ok
01:25:184 (1) - 是想放在之前的3和5之间吧不过间距突变···强迫症- -ok


好啦~GL包子 :)
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
ed July 2010
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Rabbit 1y1u1u

  1. 00:28:184 (1,4) - swap nc setting
  2. vocal track's not ur only choice, some parts like 01:17:984 (4,1) - or other places have really obvious beats that can be mapped with interesting rhythms and patterns, as a insane diff u can hardly skip those imo lol
  3. other stuffs r fine, thou don't u think there're too much triangle composing?

Hard 575l21

  1. 00:37:984 (1) - ctrl+g?
  2. 00:39:184 (1) - remove nc
  3. 00:40:584 (1) - ^
  4. 00:43:784 (1) - ^
  5. 00:44:384 (3) - nc, and ur nc work's really following those patterns and vocal tracks, thou just set at long white lines' better in ur diff normally imo
  6. 01:06:784 (4) - arrange ds by moving 01:06:184 (3) - a bit
  7. 01:23:184 (1,2) - blanket perfect

Normal 6g3l6m

  1. 00:01:384 (1,2) - blanket perfect
  2. 00:14:984 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:40:584 (2,3) - ^
cute song

good luck
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

Hollow Wings wrote: 2b62y

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Rabbit 1y1u1u

  1. 00:28:184 (1,4) - swap nc setting no,this will not remind 00:28:384 (3,4) -
  2. vocal track's not ur only choice, some parts like 01:17:984 (4,1) - or other places have really obvious beats that can be mapped with interesting rhythms and patterns, as a insane diff u can hardly skip those imo lol 01:17:384 (1,2,3) - I think now is a partten too
  3. other stuffs r fine, thou don't u think there're too much triangle composing?I didn't see any problem:D

Hard 575l21

  1. 00:37:984 (1) - ctrl+g?bad flow to two
  2. 00:39:184 (1) - remove ncfixed
  3. 00:40:584 (1) - ^no
  4. 00:43:784 (1) - ^no
  5. 00:44:384 (3) - nc, and ur nc work's really following those patterns and vocal tracks, thou just set at long white lines' better in ur diff normally imofixed
    NC reseted
  6. 01:06:784 (4) - arrange ds by moving 01:06:184 (3) - a bit fixed
  7. 01:23:184 (1,2) - blanket perfect fixed

Normal 6g3l6m

  1. 00:01:384 (1,2) - blanket perfect
  2. 00:14:984 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:40:584 (2,3) - ^
    Where._.?
cute song

good luck
Thanks for mod:D
注意身体啊:D
buhei
567 posts
ed February 2012
from my queue
SPOILER
10:02 ts8zs: 嗯嗯:D
10:02 buhei: ;w;
10:03 buhei: 00:01:784 -
10:03 ts8zs: 等摸完也行:D
10:03 buhei: ..
10:03 buhei: ;w;
10:03 buhei: 现在irc?
10:03 *buhei is editing [http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/408348 Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe (TV Size) [Normal]]
10:03 ts8zs: 你方便的话:D
10:03 buhei: OK
10:04 buhei: 00:01:784 - 00:04:184 (4) -
10:04 buhei: 这一段的这个clap
10:04 buhei: 要么别放，要放就把sliderwhistle也放上
10:05 ts8zs: slidertick?
10:05 buhei: 00:02:584 - 00:03:384 -
10:05 buhei: sliderslide或者slidertick
10:05 buhei: 刚刚口误
10:06 buhei: 这个真心听着不舒服。。
10:06 ts8zs: osu崩了XD
10:06 buhei: ;w;
10:06 ts8zs: 求savelog
10:07 buhei: 00:02:584 - 像这里就是在slidertick上面加
10:07 buhei: 00:03:384 - 这里是sliderslide
10:07 buhei: 你干脆都加到sliderslide上去吧
10:07 buhei: 00:16:184 - 00:22:584 - 这些地方也是
10:08 buhei: 00:25:384 (3) - 这个就不用了
10:08 ts8zs: 我没这种习惯诶XD
10:08 buhei: 中间漏clap听着难受
10:08 buhei: 勤快点加上呗
10:08 ts8zs: 我个人不是很喜欢加那个XD
10:08 buhei: 。
10:09 buhei: 那是你懒。。
10:09 buhei: 你这个clap选的音比较突出 漏掉一个都很明显;w;
10:09 ts8zs: 不是我觉得那显得我节奏没选好Orz
10:09 buhei: 。。
10:09 buhei: NM和EZ这种情况挺常见的啊
10:10 ts8zs: 我一直都没加那个啊Orz
10:10 buhei: 00:57:184 (1) -
10:10 buhei: 改一下
10:10 buhei: 00:57:184 - 这里放一个note
10:10 buhei: 00:57:584 - 这里折返短滑条
10:11 ts8zs: 嗯
10:12 buhei: 哇塞你从头到尾只有spinner加绿线变音量了
10:12 ts8zs: 嗯嗯:D
10:12 buhei: 00:12:184 - 从这里往前的这一段音量调小
10:13 buhei: 你的clap本来就少了音而且选音比较突出
10:13 buhei: 如果音量再那么大就真的难受了
10:13 ts8zs: 是这样么XD
10:13 buhei: 是的。。
10:14 buhei: 其他没什么问题
10:14 *buhei is editing [http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/442001 Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe (TV Size) [Hard]]
10:14 buhei: 00:06:984 (3) - 这实在是
10:14 ts8zs: 嗯嗯:D
10:14 ts8zs: 怎么了:D
10:15 ts8zs: 我觉得挺好的啊:D
10:16 buhei: http://puu.sh/bnltW/177e0cab15.jpg
10:16 ts8zs: Orz
10:16 buhei: 你玩滑条形状我没意见
10:16 buhei: 这里的节奏不适合那么长的滑条
10:16 buhei: 在这个形状的基础上改短，像我给你的图一样
10:16 buhei: 感觉好些
10:17 buhei: 00:07:384 - 而且这里还能补上clap
10:17 ts8zs: 这里有节奏么Orz
10:18 buhei: 00:07:384 - 一个是因为这里漏了clap
10:18 ts8zs: 没有漏
10:18 ts8zs: 这是跟音乐的
10:18 ts8zs: 我不是24clap
10:18 buhei: 还有一个是00:07:784 - 这里的重音，最好不要以滑条尾结尾
10:18 ts8zs: 00:08:184 (1) - 你删掉听听？
10:19 buhei: 你的clap选音比较突出，补上一个clap会好很多
10:19 buhei: 00:15:584 (4) - 这里加个whistle
10:20 ts8zs: ._.
10:20 ts8zs: 嗯其他的呢:D
10:21 buhei: 01:09:984 - finish
10:22 buhei: 01:10:784 - ^
10:23 buhei: 01:22:784 - ^
10:23 buhei: 01:24:384 - ^
10:24 buhei: 01:24:784 (2) - 头和尾都加上finish
10:24 ts8zs: 和其他finish不一样._.
10:24 buhei: 01:25:784 - 去掉clap
10:24 buhei: 你按我的改一下听一听是不是好些
10:25 buhei: 你前面这段加了finish
10:25 buhei: 00:12:384 (1,2,3) - 这段你加了
10:26 *buhei is editing [http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/b/409800 Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe (TV Size) [Rabbit]]
10:26 ts8zs: fixed
10:26 buhei: 00:06:984 (3) - same as Hard
10:27 buhei: 稍微弄短一点
10:27 buhei: 00:07:784 - 这里的重音最好还是放个note
10:28 buhei: 00:10:984 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个比后面的那段还难啊
10:28 buhei: 间距调小一点
10:29 ts8zs: 开头难一点很正常Orz
10:29 ts8zs: 后面难才是鬼畜Orz
10:29 buhei: 00:08:984 (3,4) - 这里间距也调小
10:29 buhei: 这首曲子开头部分比后面soft很多
10:30 buhei: 我没要你毁梗，间距小一点就OK
10:30 buhei: 00:09:984 (6) - 这个也是，移到00:10:584 (1) - 的左边多好
10:31 ts8zs: 哦
10:31 buhei: 00:52:384 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这段处理的就不错啊
10:31 buhei: 00:57:184 (1) - 不过这里得改一下
10:32 buhei: 这里的音比前面那些要重
10:32 buhei: 和我之前说的一样
10:32 buhei: 00:57:584 - 这个重音的地方得放一个note
10:32 buhei: 滑条弄短一点就行
10:32 buhei: 如果你要保持原长可以给他加个速
10:33 buhei: 然后把00:57:584 - 的位置空出来放个note
10:33 buhei: 00:57:784 (2,3) - 这里就可以稍微跳一点了
10:34 buhei: 01:09:984 - 01:10:784 - 和Hard一样，加finish
10:34 buhei: 后面一些finish的问题都和Hard一样
10:34 buhei: 01:17:584 (2,3) - 不明白这里摆成这样的意义
10:35 ts8zs: vocal
10:35 buhei: 也许你是想用这种读图梗，但是感觉这里不太适合
10:35 buhei: 而且全图就出现这一次
10:35 buhei: 01:28:384 (3) -
10:35 buhei: 这个真心丑了
10:35 buhei: 重新摆一下吧
10:35 ts8zs: 00:01:384 (1,2) -
10:35 buhei: 你其他的都是滑条啊
10:36 buhei: 而且你滑条用这个梗的时候出现的位置是固定的
10:36 ts8zs: 没差._.
10:36 buhei: 都是副歌的第一句
10:36 buhei: 但是你刚刚note叠放的地方很突然
10:36 ts8zs: 01:04:784 (1,2) -
10:37 buhei: 这个间距非常小而且是两个 可以当作stack忽略掉
10:37 buhei: 01:17:584 (2,3) - 这两个没问题
10:37 buhei: (1)拉远一点
10:37 buhei: 就可以了
10:38 buhei: 01:06:384 (2) - 这个感觉还是一个1/2Slider+note好一点
10:40 buhei: http://puu.sh/bnmUS/a768b0b1ec.jpg
10:40 ts8zs: 嗯
10:40 buhei: 最后的滑条改成这样好看点
10:40 buhei: 你也可以自己改改
10:40 buhei: 反正原来的确实有点难看
10:40 buhei: 没了
10:42 buhei: 之前那些clap你自己看看要不要加
10:42 buhei: 音效我调小一点也不是很明显
10:43 buhei: 怕的是有人把音效调的声音比较大
10:43 buhei: 你要是想弄的完美一点就加上吧
10:43 ts8zs: 嗯

好图
lit120
3,272 posts
ed August 2013
yo

[General]
  1. BG, where are you? D:
[Insane]
  1. 00:20:584 (3) - remove clap
  2. 00:28:384 (3) - use 1/2 slider
  3. 01:07:184 (5,7) - blankets~~~
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:384 - 00:07:784 - u might want to remove claps on this calm part
  2. 00:25:384 (1) - remove clap on tail
  3. 00:43:584 (2,1) - blanket it properly =w=
that's it

GL!
SeaRasp
693 posts
ed August 2014
Hi M4M

Insane
00:05:584 (4) - Place a circle or somthing on this beat, like you did in Hard.

00:28:184 (1) - Think it's better to remove NC here and add it at 00:28:384 (3) - for the square.

00:12:184 (8,9) - Would be nice if you increased the spacing for this jump to emphasize higher pitched vocals

00:26:984 (3,4,5) - You use sliders here and jumps here 00:33:384 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - but it's the same vocals so don't know why you want to use jumps.

00:38:784 (6,7) - Reason for immense jump here ? doesn't seem like it should be this big.

01:07:184 (5,6,7) - You should definitely increase the spacing here as it is a lot more important than 01:06:984 (4,5) - Maybe do about the same spacing as 01:19:984 (2,3,4) -

01:09:784 (6) - Replace slider by a jump, it's covering pretty strong vocals

01:22:584 (7) - ^

01:11:784 (3,4) - Use almost same spacing as 00:58:984 (1,2) - , it's the same.

01:15:784 (3,4) - Why do you this make such a bigger jump than 01:02:984 (3,4) - ? at least explain

I'll just mod this diff, cause I'm not good at modding anything under Insane plus they don't seem to have many problems.
Good Luck !
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

SeaRasp wrote: 15163x

Hi M4M

Insane
00:05:584 (4) - Place a circle or somthing on this beat, like you did in Hard.

00:28:184 (1) - Think it's better to remove NC here and add it at 00:28:384 (3) - for the square.

00:12:184 (8,9) - Would be nice if you increased the spacing for this jump to emphasize higher pitched vocals nope

00:26:984 (3,4,5) - You use sliders here and jumps here 00:33:384 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - but it's the same vocals so don't know why you want to use jumps.

00:38:784 (6,7) - Reason for immense jump here ? doesn't seem like it should be this big.

01:07:184 (5,6,7) - You should definitely increase the spacing here as it is a lot more important than 01:06:984 (4,5) - Maybe do about the same spacing as 01:19:984 (2,3,4) -

01:09:784 (6) - Replace slider by a jump, it's covering pretty strong vocals nope

01:22:584 (7) - ^ nope

01:11:784 (3,4) - Use almost same spacing as 00:58:984 (1,2) - , it's the same.

01:15:784 (3,4) - Why do you this make such a bigger jump than 01:02:984 (3,4) - ? at least explain

I'll just mod this diff, cause I'm not good at modding anything under Insane plus they don't seem to have many problems.
Good Luck !
other fixed thx
zosanfc
152 posts
ed November 2014
like i said, on week :D
M4M:
[General]
Normal diff is Easy diff? Read this: https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements
This map need Normal diff
[Normal]
00:47:784 (3) - remove NC
01:00:384 (1) - ^
01:25:584 (1) - move it to 01:25:784 (compact the slider too)
[Hard]
00:19:584 (2,1) - nearly further?
00:26:384 (3) - NC
00:30:184 (1,2) - i think you should move it to red or white tick?
00:45:584 (1) - remove NC
00:45:984 (1) - ^
00:46:184 (2) - NC
00:50:584 (4) - ^
00:57:584 (3) - ^
00:58:384 (4) - ^
[Insane]
00:00:984 (2) - remove overlap
00:25:384 (1) - what about this?
SPOILER
01:26:784 (4) - NC
01:27:384 (5) - ^
01:28:384 (3) - this slider look weird, change it
Good luck ;)
-NanoRIPE-
2,079 posts
ed October 2013
Hey ~ M4M Request :3

[General]
- Turn off Letterbox during breaks (i think TV size mapset doesnt need this option)
- Turn off countdown ~
- hmm i think the "Pink" color combo is not suitable with the BG ~ try to add "Orange" Instead ~ (preference from Cocoa's maid clothes)

[Normal]
00:08:584 (2,3) - move slider (2) to (264,136) and the next slider move to (392,16) for better placement
00:26:984 (1) - make this slider curve for blanket with the next slider *for better flow
00:47:784 (1) - remove NC *for consistent NC
00:51:184 (1) - ^ *because they start singing new lyric on the next slider
00:52:784 - NC * ^same reason as before
00:52:584 until 00:58:184 - why u skip all downbeat around here? i think u add something on downbeat it will be better rhythm
01:00:384 (1) - remove NC *same reason as before
01:08:184 (1) - i think 1 circle and 1/2 repeat slider is better like this http://prntscr.com/bjw1kf

this diff looks like a easy diff imo ~

[Hard]
00:09:184 (4) - remove NC
00:16:984 (4,2) - overlap
00:29:384 (3,1) - bad overlap
00:35:784 (3,1) - overlap (not really bad at all but i suggest u to try another way ~ )
00:37:984 (1) - remove NC
00:40:584 (1) - ^ *because they said "watashi wa" twice,i think its doesnt mean for NC ~
00:43:784 (1) - ^ *same reason as before
00:45:584 (1) - ^
00:45:984 (1) - ^ and then NC the next one
01:09:184 (1,3) - overlap
01:16:984 (1) - move to (392,48) for better flow
01:18:184 (1,2,3) - hmm i'm not sure about this pattern,how about this? http://prntscr.com/bjw6od
01:23:184 (1) - ^ try this http://prntscr.com/bjw7im *i'm follow cocoa's vocal here
01:29:184 (1) - i think end of slider must be white tick ~

[Insane]
00:01:384 (1,2) - i think overlap isn't right choice
00:13:184 - add 1/2 slider here *follow vocal
00:43:584 (3,4) - swap
00:45:984 (1) - finish
01:00:784 (3,4) - remove and add a 1/2 slider instead
01:29:184 (1) - same as hard

the Gap stars between Hard and Insane too far ~ maybe make hard diff a little bit harder or try to reduce Insane's Stars ~

GL ~ and sorry for my terrible english and short mod ;w;
ts8zs
2,124 posts
ed May 2011
Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- wrote: 3n6ev

Hey ~ M4M Request :3

[General]
- Turn off Letterbox during breaks (i think TV size mapset doesnt need this option)
- Turn off countdown ~
- hmm i think the "Pink" color combo is not suitable with the BG ~ try to add "Orange" Instead ~ (preference from Cocoa's maid clothes)

[Normal]
00:08:584 (2,3) - move slider (2) to (264,136) and the next slider move to (392,16) for better placement
00:26:984 (1) - make this slider curve for blanket with the next slider *for better flow
00:47:784 (1) - remove NC *for consistent NC
00:51:184 (1) - ^ *because they start singing new lyric on the next slider
00:52:784 - NC * ^same reason as before
00:52:584 until 00:58:184 - why u skip all downbeat around here? i think u add something on downbeat it will be better rhythm
01:00:384 (1) - remove NC *same reason as before
01:08:184 (1) - i think 1 circle and 1/2 repeat slider is better like this http://prntscr.com/bjw1kf

this diff looks like a easy diff imo ~

[Hard]
00:09:184 (4) - remove NC
00:16:984 (4,2) - overlap
00:29:384 (3,1) - bad overlap
00:35:784 (3,1) - overlap (not really bad at all but i suggest u to try another way ~ )
00:37:984 (1) - remove NC
00:40:584 (1) - ^ *because they said "watashi wa" twice,i think its doesnt mean for NC ~
00:43:784 (1) - ^ *same reason as before
00:45:584 (1) - ^
00:45:984 (1) - ^ and then NC the next one
01:09:184 (1,3) - overlap
01:16:984 (1) - move to (392,48) for better flow
01:18:184 (1,2,3) - hmm i'm not sure about this pattern,how about this? http://prntscr.com/bjw6od
01:23:184 (1) - ^ try this http://prntscr.com/bjw7im *i'm follow cocoa's vocal here
01:29:184 (1) - i think end of slider must be white tick ~

[Insane]
00:01:384 (1,2) - i think overlap isn't right choice
00:13:184 - add 1/2 slider here *follow vocal
00:43:584 (3,4) - swap
00:45:984 (1) - finish
01:00:784 (3,4) - remove and add a 1/2 slider instead
01:29:184 (1) - same as hard

the Gap stars between Hard and Insane too far ~ maybe make hard diff a little bit harder or try to reduce Insane's Stars ~

GL ~ and sorry for my terrible english and short mod ;w;
wait,where is your map...
-NanoRIPE-
2,079 posts
ed October 2013

ts8zs wrote: 552536

wait,where is your map...
oops ~
here : https://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/445845
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,108 posts
ed April 2013
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:14:584 (5,6,1) - flow可以改一下 這flow超級不好打 可以把00:14:984 (1,2) - 跟00:15:384 (3,4) - ctrl + g
  2. 00:28:184 (1,2,3) - 這有點overmap了.. 音樂完全聽不出來有3連打
  3. 00:28:784 (4) - 可nc在這
  4. 00:37:784 (4) - 建議改成2個note 因為vocal音很ˋ重 尤其是00:37:984 - 很不建議用滑條尾 正常來說00:37:984 - 是要nc的但你用滑條尾帶過了
  5. 01:04:784 (1,2) - kiai不建議stack 而且這邊stack感覺很奇怪啊.. 配合vocal的話這邊應該擺跳
  6. 01:08:584 (2,3) - ^
  7. 01:09:784 (6) - 同00:37:784 (4) -
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