1. Easy (1.72 stars, 121 notes)
2. HabiHolic's Insane (4.99 stars, 413 notes)
3. Hard (4.76 stars, 371 notes)
4. Normal (3.39 stars, 187 notes)
5. POOOON (5 stars, 524 notes)

zorefire wrote: p2og

From queue

[Easy]

1. 00:51:678 (4) - maybe like this? This was very helpful.
   
   osu! Example

   
2. 02:34:078 (5) - maybe? I decided to go with this. Thanks
   
   osu! Example

   
   [Normal]
3. 00:56:278 (5,6,7) - do something different.Done!
4. 01:32:678 (5,6,7) - off-beat move the first note to the white line and the rest 1 note back. Yup.. Done!
   [Hard] This has been edited to become <Insane>
   Ok you need to consider revising this diff and looking at the way you mapped some notes are over each other and is hard to read.
5. For example 00:36:478 (3,4,5) . Done!
   Kinda like revise this difficulty and try to make it look neater. Did my best with shapes!
   over all it's rankable in my thought's idk about others though get some more modds .

All I heard here 01:17:278 was le POOOOOOON lmfao this is so funny xD!

osu!

osu!

1. Circle size 3 would be best for this diff :/
2. The notes are scattered around too much and are sloppy
3. To many circles need more sliders
4. Recheck the combo's

zorefire wrote: p2og

2nd modd
[New Hard]
please use 1.2 spacing
00:20:078 (2) - make it lay on top of 00:19:078 (10) perfectly - mmm.. OK!
00:30:878 (6) - new combo - So the chorus will be 8 parts instead of 4 now? NP!
00:34:078 (8) - new combo - Same as above!
00:42:678 (3,4) - - make it like this - With Distance snapping that is not possible unless the beats are closer Like (White-Blue-Red) not (White-Red-White)

osu!

00:46:078 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - too confusing do something different - I thought that too. I just got the idea from another ranked map.
00:52:378 (2,3,4) - spacing is too far from 00:51:678 (1) - move a tiny bit closer - It was a spacing issue. Moved from 1.4x to 1.2x
00:52:378 (2,3,4) - you might need to do something different - OK!
00:53:278 (1,2,3) - hard to get all 300 seems off beat - Make it easier?!
00:54:078 (4,5,6,1,2) - too tricky revamp this - make it Easier? Changed it but I can ace it every time 300s with ease!
00:58:278 (1) - too much of this try a slider pattern for some of these - Semi-Blanket Maybe?
01:17:278 - please add hit sounds - Hit sounds that match the guitar (Bass hits) are there.. Too low? Or do you mean "Drum sound"? The rhythm is matching the guitar riffs. Raised from 60% to 80% volume.
01:28:578 (4,5) - do something different maybe slider. Two notes changes with a slider. OK!
01:29:378 (1,2) - too much.. How is too much? Mapping the dubstep sound??! - Changed anyway!
01:32:678 (9,10,11) - off beat notes - Changed!
01:32:478 - something would sound better here ..Tried to offset a little bit!
01:33:378 (1,2,3) - do something different - OK!
02:20:478 (6,7) - do something different -OK again!
02:33:278 (10,11) - no :/ something different - NO again!
02:33:578 (12) - something different - You are so mean ..jking
if your gunu triple at least put them this close

osu!

Tip's:

1. Circle size 3 would be best for this diff :/ - 3 is big for a diff.
2. The notes are scattered around too much and are sloppy - Distance spacing was the problem
3. To many circles need more sliders . Tried as much as I could
4. Recheck the combo's. OK. Done!

CrazyErrorMan wrote: 3z4021

==Normal==
Thoughts that come to mind.
01:17:278 - 01:36:278
I think that the part between these points need to be redone.
The sliders are small but take a good amount of time to finish them.
If I changed it, I would have made the sliders look longer by distance and removed the circles between the points.

They seem fine to me. I am trying to make the missing notes with the song appear through doubling the ticks.

Kyx wrote: 485m7

Hello,
Random Mod~ Cuz of Boredom
I'm not an Experienced modder so don't expect much.

[General]
• According to the Ranking Criteria, Osu Mp3 files up for ranking must have 128 -192 Kbps (Image) - Just Temporary. Waiting for Alvin's mod
- I took the time to encode it for you: http://puu.sh/3QZ2A.mp3
• You have Inconsistency in your combo colors.
- Keep the Combo Colors the same for every difficulty.
• It Is recommended to use Distance Snap
- Difficulties like Easy and Normal Require Distance snap since newer players play on consistency.
• Your Kiai Times are not synced to together.
- Like Combo Colors, you want to keep these at the same time.



[Easy]
OD: -1
• 00:19:678 (1,2) - Use DS to separate these 2, If you do this continue with all the notes after those all the way to - 00:24:478 -
They are too close to each other for the spacing you added in between.
• 00:55:278 - Consider Adding a Spinner here, to - 00:57:678 - Done but only to 00:57:278. 00:57:678 doesn't sound right!
• 00:58:178 (1) - Snap this to the White tick - uhh. OK!
• 01:20:078 (3,1) - This might confuse newer players - Perhaps it does, but it won't sound right at all. I am following the guitar riffs here!
- The way to get around this is to use a slider from the White tick to the Red one.
• 01:20:678 (1,2) - Add some spacing between these 2 - DS ??!
• 01:22:078 (3) - Snap the end of this slider to the white tick - Done
• 01:26:478 (3,1) - Same thing as before with the jump from white to blue, Consider adding a slider. - KK!
• 01:31:978 (3) - Move this slider back 1 tick. - How did I miss that? Easy is too hard to map! lol
• 01:33:678 (1,2,3) - This is an example of the bad Spacing, Consider Using DS for the entire map. - I used DS but seems too close to each other?!
• 01:40:478 - I suggest adding a note here, and here - 01:42:078 - Added a slider from 3 to 4
- To keep the map fun.
• 01:43:078 - This break is too long. End it here - 01:55:678 - and continue mapping from there.- Want to keep it simple as possible!
• 02:32:878 (3,4) - Make this part like this maybe? - Click Here- Done my own way!
• 02:38:078 - Add a Spinner or Notes here. - OK!

[Normal]
• 00:31:678 (4,1) - Unstack these 2. - Done!
- Have Sliders on top of sliders is not pleasing to newer players.
• 00:50:878 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move all these notes away from each other, too close to stacked. OK!
• 00:57:278 (4,2) - Stacking Sliders no no, do this maybe? - Click Here
• 00:58:278 (1) - Remove 1 Repeat from this Slider - made it much simplier!
• 00:59:778 (1) - Move this Slider to the Red tick and Remove 2 Repeats - Simpler!
• 00:59:878 - Maybe do this? Click Here - Changed all of it!
• 01:19:578 - Snap this to the white tick. - Slow stuff is annoying
• 01:22:778 - Move this Slider end to the red tick. - Same complaint as above!
• 01:25:978 - Stack to white tick.- Again
• 01:28:078 (2,3,4) - Maybe change it to this Click Here - Removed the dubstep noise mapping. Replace with guitar riff mapping! Seems confusing.. Sigh!!

• 01:55:678 - Same as before, Long break needs to be shortened. Start mapping here. - Long Slider !
• 02:10:078 - Try adding a long slider here, and continue the pattern to - 02:20:878 - Nice one!
• 02:39:578 (9) - Stack to white tick. - OK!
• 02:40:678 (1) - I suggest moving this note to the white tick, keeping it as the pattern goes on. - Yup!

[Hard]
• 00:24:878 (10,11) - I don't feel this is necessary, move note 11 to red tick. - Dubstep mapping again?
• 00:38:078 (3,4) - Spacing? - A bit of it yup!
• 00:41:078 - Add a not here? I don'f feel it at all!
- Makes it go more with the song.
• 00:43:678 - Do the same here, like from - 00:40:478 - to keep a neat pattern going. - Worked on it
• 01:26:178 (6) - Move this slider to red tick, no need to start on blue. It just throws the player off. - Moving it will not sync with the guitar sound!


[Hyper]
• 00:52:078 (4) - I suggest making this slider end at the white tick. - OK
• 00:52:678 (5) - If you do this, move this note to red tick and remove 1 slider. OK
• 00:25:278 (7) - NC? OK
00:27:749 (7) - ^
00:30:878 (6) - ^
00:34:078 (6) - ^
00:37:278 (5) - ^
00:40:478 (6) - You get the point. OK
- In Harder Difficulties the combos don't have to go on for so long. It's not about making a new one at every downbeat, it's about making a new one when the notes shift placement which usually happens at down beats and up beats.




Not much to say about this Difficulty, I'm not too fully sure on how to fix Insane maps since they are to most freely Diff there is.
All I can say is you can use some more spacing between each note. I hope someone else can touch on the Insane Diff because I don't have many ideas xD


Overall you have some parts are mapped really well and then just go into messiness. Try keeping patterns a lot more in lower diffs and
USE DISTANCE SNAP, it's so useful! Also don't Stack in easy/normals unless necessary (which usually doesn't happen).

I hope I helped and if you have any questions feel free to me via PM or Ingame
I'm online most of the time. ^.^

Good Luck~

EDIT: Updated Mod 8/1/2013 - 3:13am

1. Just saying, that encoding current mp3 won't help you to improve qality of the audio. I strongly recommend you to look for a new mp3!
2. According to rules your kiais and combo colours shoulb cnsistent through all diffs. (Guest diffs are exception, but you have no any)
3. I think that you shuld remove unused file (comboburst-0_2.png). There's no need to keep it here!
4. Remove rock and japanese from tags since they will be added by a BAT-member. le picture
5. Try to find 1024x768 BG. It's recommended size for background pictures.
6. Disable letterboxes during breaks. Video will conflict with letterboxes. :<

1. Try to avoid using slowdowns on the easiest diff. i think that beginners don't really understand how it works, so you should be gentle with them.
   Note: if you still want to keep slowdowns, use x0.75 velocity ultiplier to make velocity changes softer.
2. Try to use ApproachRate3 and Overall Diff 2. It will make diff more playable and understandable for beginners! Also, reduce HP Drain by one tick. Your rhythm is pretty hard, so reducing HP is a good idea to make diff more playable.
3. 00:11:144 (1) - I think it's should be snapped on white ticks. At least you snapped spinners n white ticks in [Normal], [Hard] and [Hyper].
   Note: finish spinner a bit earlier. So, beginners will have more time to get ready for next hitobject. example
4. 00:13:278 (1,2,1,2,1) - try to be more creative here. loooong straight sliders are boring for players, don't you think so? Try to make something interesting, for example you can create awesome circular sliders! example
5. 00:19:278 (2,2) - note on 00:20:478 (2) is too close to previous (2). So, beginners may mistakenly hit the wrong circle. Can you try to move it somewhere else to solve this problem?
   Note: kinda similar thing happens to 00:23:678 (6,7) - tail of (7) is too close, so bginners may hit it. And 00:48:478 (1,2) - 01:39:678 (1,3) - same again.
6. 00:28:078 (3,1) - nazi - this overlap is visible even during testplay. It's not a big deal, but I'd recommend you to avoid such things.
7. 00:51:278 (3,1) - whoops, I think that this jump is unnecessary here. Beginers are unable to read/play/understand jumps, so we should avoid using jumps.
8. 00:58:078 (1,2) - minor spacing mistakes. It's not a big problem, but it's better to fix it and keep spacing consistent!
9. 01:17:278 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing is inconsistent here. So, it's too hard to read your rhythm. Try to fix spacing here!
10. 01:28:478 (3) - I think it's should be smapped on white ticks. (both beginning and end). So, rhythm will be simple and consistent + it fits with music.
11. 01:26:378 (3,1) - 1/4 beats on [Easy] diff. I think you did something and it is a mistake. Please fix it because 1/4 beats are too difficult for beginners!
    
12. 02:08:478 (1,1) - nazi - oh, maaan! There's a feaure to create circular sliders like these two. You need to place just three points to get a cute slider. see?
13. 02:29:678 (3,1) - kinda the same as already mebtioned - (1) is too close, so beginners may hit it without even looking at (4). it's a bit confusing, so I'd move it somewhere else!
    
    Pretty good!

1. Some patterns are a bit overlapped. To solve this problem you can use Approach Rate 5. It's ok for a [Normal] diff and fits with slider velocity pretty good.
2. Since it's just a [Normal], you should be careful with slowdowns here. Personally, I think that using x0.75 Velocity multiplier is a good idea for this diff.
3. 00:19:678 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - non-stop clicking is really hard for players. try to add some sliders, clicking 11 circles in a row with perfect timing is too hard. :<
4. 00:24:878 (8) - how about placing a new combo here to warn us about that curvy-tricky shape of this slider. I think it's readable, but it's better to emphasize it.
5. 00:29:278 (1) - nazi - slider changes its direction too suddenly. Can't you make it look better? I'm sure you can!
6. 00:38:078 (6) - nazi - how about moving tail of this slider away from (4,5)? It flows a little bit strange, imo. Try my example, instead!
   Note: kinda the same happens to 00:56:478 (3,4). Try the same, too!
7. 00:41:278 (6,1) - whoops, spacing mistake here. You can make awesome patterns even with Distance Spacing enabled. For example, you can do this pattern
8. 00:47:678 (6,1) - (1)'s tail is too close to (6)'s tail. Players may mistakenly hit it. For a [Normal] diff it's not a big problem, but it flows a bit strange. THink of a better pattern? I think we can try something like this
9. 00:51:678 (1,1) - too short, players won't be able to notice 2nd, 3rd and 4th reverse-arrow. So, they will not know how many repeats should they do. Try to avoid such sliders in [Normal] diffs, please!
10. 00:58:478 (1,1,1) - nazi - minor spacing mistakes. What's more I don't really like overlap 01:01:478 (1,2) - here. USe that awesome feature tomake a cute circular slider!
11. 01:19:878 (5,1) - one of the HARDEST jumps I've ever seen. Please, tell me that it's a spacing mistake!
    Note: 01:17:278 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - whole part has weird and inconsistent spacing, try to fix it, please!
12. 01:30:178 (1) - should be snapped on [revious white tick, I think. It will fit with vocals better and make your rhythm more consistent and intuitive.
13. 01:39:678 (1,1,2) - some crazy jumps again! You're making a [Normal], not [Insane]! try to avoid ANY jumps, please! I don't mind creativity, but your "creative" patterns should be playable!
14. 01:55:678 (1) - McDonald's ♥. Just tryto place some beats instead of this long slider. Players will be bored of holding that sllider, imo.
15. 02:35:678 (2,1) - some overlaps are fine, but this one makes (1) unreadable. That's why I'd try to fix this overlap!
16. 02:39:678 (6,1,1) - spacing mistakes again. :<
    
    Actually, diff is nice. It looks a little bit mess and spacing should be more consistent. But it's a good diff!

1. Approach Rate 7 and Overall Diff/ Hp Drain 6. Please! It's a [Hard] diff, therefore it should be hard! Take a look at already ranked maps, usually they use Approach rate 7 or even 8 for a [Hard] diffs.
2. 00:24:878 (3,4) - try to make more understandable shapes for these objects. I'm sure that it will improve your flow a lot!
3. You're overusing Nw Combos a bit. Try to remove NCs (New Combos) from beat like 00:27:678 (1) - 00:30:878 (1) - 00:34:078 (1) - 00:37:278 (1) - and so on. Your combos will be ~7-8 hitobjects long. It will make patterns a bit more understandable!
4. 01:10:878 (1,2,3,4,1) - reduce their volume a bit, they are too loud, imo. :<
5. 01:17:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this part is really hard tounderstand. there's no any chance to read/guess how many repeats will this or that slider have. Try to keep the same number of repeats for each slidere. What's more, jumps 9and sometimes random spacing) make this part too hard to understand. Try to re-work it a bit!
6. 01:55:678 (1,1) - nazii - I complain about same things on every diff. this thread!
7. 02:22:278 (3,4,5,6) - nazi - Honestly, I don't really like the overlap here. How about something different here? example
   Note: oh, and 02:21:278 (1,2) - spacing mistake here. :<
8. 02:35:278 (5) - you didn't use anything like this before. It looks a littl bit strange and unexpected here. How about making (4) end on 02:35:278 - and removing (5)?
   
9. 02:37:678 (1,1) - too early after spinner. Please, remove 02:40:678 (1) - to give players some time to recover!
   
   Not bad, but needs more work on spacing!
   
   [Hyper]
   
   1. Hyper? It's a really weird name for a diff. usually, we use [Hyper] when we map songs from Beatmania. Just rename it to [Insane]!
   2. Try Approach Rte 9, it makes your flow more readable and understandable.
   3. 00:32:078 (5) - have you missed a beat here? Sounds kinda empty without it.
   4. 00:22:878 (1,2,3,4) - are jumps here reasonable? Do they fit with music? Actuall, ALL of these sliders should end on red ticks. What's more those crazy jumps don't really fit here, try to re-work this part, please!.
   5. 00:31:278 (3,4,5) - it's not even jump..it's a spacing mistake! There's no way to read that 1/4 jump, try to avoid such things or at least emphasize them with new combos or something!
      
      Actually, rhythm here is pretty good. but it needs A LOT of work on spacing. Jumps should reflect music, not randomness!

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

1. 00:11:144 (1) - Detele hitsound, resnap spinner end
2. 01:21:878 (3) - Delete this?
3. 01:32:478 (5,6,7) - Hard to read, delete 01:32:678 (6) - please

1. 00:11:144 (1) - Detele hitsound
2. 00:24:878 (3) - This slider is ugly

1. 00:11:278 (1) - Delete hitsound
2. 02:39:778 (9,10,11,12) - Try this http://puu.sh/3TodW.jpg

-Bakari- wrote: 1r12o

Yo.

[General]
01:23:278 - weirdest PONPON I've ever heard. Seriously o_o √ √ √ √ √ √ .. lol

1. Just saying, that encoding current mp3 won't help you to improve qality of the audio. I strongly recommend you to look for a new mp3! √
2. According to rules your kiais and combo colours shoulb cnsistent through all diffs. (Guest diffs are exception, but you have no any) √
3. I think that you shuld remove unused file (comboburst-0_2.png). There's no need to keep it here! √
4. Remove rock and japanese from tags since they will be added by a BAT-member. le picture √
5. Try to find 1024x768 BG. It's recommended size for background pictures. √ .. It was just a couple of pixels below 1024
6. Disable letterboxes during breaks. Video will conflict with letterboxes. :<

√

[Easy]
Making Easy diffs for such songs is hard, but this one is pretty good.

1. Try to avoid using slowdowns on the easiest diff. i think that beginners don't really understand how it works, so you should be gentle with them.
   Note: if you still want to keep slowdowns, use x0.75 velocity ultiplier to make velocity changes softer. √
2. Try to use ApproachRate3 and Overall Diff 2. It will make diff more playable and understandable for beginners! Also, reduce HP Drain by one tick. Your rhythm is pretty hard, so reducing HP is a good idea to make diff more playable. √
3. 00:11:144 (1) - I think it's should be snapped on white ticks. At least you snapped spinners n white ticks in [Normal], [Hard] and [Hyper]. √
   Note: finish spinner a bit earlier. So, beginners will have more time to get ready for next hitobject. example √
4. 00:13:278 (1,2,1,2,1) - try to be more creative here. loooong straight sliders are boring for players, don't you think so? Try to make something interesting, for example you can create awesome circular sliders! example √
5. 00:19:278 (2,2) - note on 00:20:478 (2) is too close to previous (2). So, beginners may mistakenly hit the wrong circle. Can you try to move it somewhere else to solve this problem? √
   Note: kinda similar thing happens to 00:23:678 (6,7) - tail of (7) is too close, so bginners may hit it. And 00:48:478 (1,2) - 01:39:678 (1,3) - same again. √
6. 00:28:078 (3,1) - nazi - this overlap is visible even during testplay. It's not a big deal, but I'd recommend you to avoid such things. √
7. 00:51:278 (3,1) - whoops, I think that this jump is unnecessary here. Beginers are unable to read/play/understand jumps, so we should avoid using jumps. √
8. 00:58:078 (1,2) - minor spacing mistakes. It's not a big problem, but it's better to fix it and keep spacing consistent! √
9. 01:17:278 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing is inconsistent here. So, it's too hard to read your rhythm. Try to fix spacing here! √
10. 01:28:478 (3) - I think it's should be smapped on white ticks. (both beginning and end). So, rhythm will be simple and consistent + it fits with music. √
11. 01:26:378 (3,1) - 1/4 beats on [Easy] diff. I think you did something and it is a mistake. Please fix it because 1/4 beats are too difficult for beginners!
    √
12. 02:08:478 (1,1) - nazi - oh, maaan! There's a feaure to create circular sliders like these two. You need to place just three points to get a cute slider. see? √
13. 02:29:678 (3,1) - kinda the same as already mebtioned - (1) is too close, so beginners may hit it without even looking at (4). it's a bit confusing, so I'd move it somewhere else! √
    
    Pretty good!

[Normal]

1. Some patterns are a bit overlapped. To solve this problem you can use Approach Rate 5. It's ok for a [Normal] diff and fits with slider velocity pretty good. √
2. Since it's just a [Normal], you should be careful with slowdowns here. Personally, I think that using x0.75 Velocity multiplier is a good idea for this diff. √
3. 00:19:678 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - non-stop clicking is really hard for players. try to add some sliders, clicking 11 circles in a row with perfect timing is too hard. :< √
4. 00:24:878 (8) - how about placing a new combo here to warn us about that curvy-tricky shape of this slider. I think it's readable, but it's better to emphasize it. √
5. 00:29:278 (1) - nazi - slider changes its direction too suddenly. Can't you make it look better? I'm sure you can! √
6. 00:38:078 (6) - nazi - how about moving tail of this slider away from (4,5)? It flows a little bit strange, imo. Try my example, instead! √
   Note: kinda the same happens to 00:56:478 (3,4). Try the same, too!
7. 00:41:278 (6,1) - whoops, spacing mistake here. You can make awesome patterns even with Distance Spacing enabled. For example, you can do this pattern √
8. 00:47:678 (6,1) - (1)'s tail is too close to (6)'s tail. Players may mistakenly hit it. For a [Normal] diff it's not a big problem, but it flows a bit strange. THink of a better pattern? I think we can try something like this √
9. 00:51:678 (1,1) - too short, players won't be able to notice 2nd, 3rd and 4th reverse-arrow. So, they will not know how many repeats should they do. Try to avoid such sliders in [Normal] diffs, please! √
10. 00:58:478 (1,1,1) - nazi - minor spacing mistakes. What's more I don't really like overlap 01:01:478 (1,2) - here. USe that awesome feature tomake a cute circular slider! √
11. 01:19:878 (5,1) - one of the HARDEST jumps I've ever seen. Please, tell me that it's a spacing mistake! √
    Note: 01:17:278 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - whole part has weird and inconsistent spacing, try to fix it, please! √
12. 01:30:178 (1) - should be snapped on [revious white tick, I think. It will fit with vocals better and make your rhythm more consistent and intuitive. √
13. 01:39:678 (1,1,2) - some crazy jumps again! You're making a [Normal], not [Insane]! try to avoid ANY jumps, please! I don't mind creativity, but your "creative" patterns should be playable! √
14. 01:55:678 (1) - McDonald's ♥. Just tryto place some beats instead of this long slider. Players will be bored of holding that sllider, imo. √ ..May you invite me to a Big Mac Beef Large Combo please? I'll pay you later
15. 02:35:678 (2,1) - some overlaps are fine, but this one makes (1) unreadable. That's why I'd try to fix this overlap! √
16. 02:39:678 (6,1,1) - spacing mistakes again. :< √
    
    Actually, diff is nice. It looks a little bit mess and spacing should be more consistent. But it's a good diff!

√√√√√


[Hard]
AR4 D: √

1. Approach Rate 7 and Overall Diff/ Hp Drain 6. Please! It's a [Hard] diff, therefore it should be hard! Take a look at already ranked maps, usually they use Approach rate 7 or even 8 for a [Hard] diffs. √
2. 00:24:878 (3,4) - try to make more understandable shapes for these objects. I'm sure that it will improve your flow a lot! √
3. You're overusing Nw Combos a bit. Try to remove NCs (New Combos) from beat like 00:27:678 (1) - 00:30:878 (1) - 00:34:078 (1) - 00:37:278 (1) - and so on. Your combos will be ~7-8 hitobjects long. It will make patterns a bit more understandable! √
4. 01:10:878 (1,2,3,4,1) - reduce their volume a bit, they are too loud, imo. :< √
5. 01:17:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this part is really hard tounderstand. there's no any chance to read/guess how many repeats will this or that slider have. Try to keep the same number of repeats for each slidere. What's more, jumps 9and sometimes random spacing) make this part too hard to understand. Try to re-work it a bit! √
6. 01:55:678 (1,1) - nazii - I complain about same things on every diff. this thread! √
7. 02:22:278 (3,4,5,6) - nazi - Honestly, I don't really like the overlap here. How about something different here? √ example
   Note: oh, and 02:21:278 (1,2) - spacing mistake here. :< √
8. 02:35:278 (5) - you didn't use anything like this before. It looks a littl bit strange and unexpected here. How about making (4) end on 02:35:278 - and removing (5)? √
   
9. 02:37:678 (1,1) - too early after spinner. Please, remove 02:40:678 (1) - to give players some time to recover! √
   
   Not bad, but needs more work on spacing!
   
   
   [Hyper]
   
   1. Hyper? It's a really weird name for a diff. usually, we use [Hyper] when we map songs from Beatmania. Just rename it to [Insane]! √
   2. Try Approach Rte 9, it makes your flow more readable and understandable. √
   3. 00:32:078 (5) - have you missed a beat here? Sounds kinda empty without it. √
   4. 00:22:878 (1,2,3,4) - are jumps here reasonable? Do they fit with music? Actuall, ALL of these sliders should end on red ticks. What's more those crazy jumps don't really fit here, try to re-work this part, please!. √
   5. 00:31:278 (3,4,5) - it's not even jump..it's a spacing mistake! There's no way to read that 1/4 jump, try to avoid such things or at least emphasize them with new combos or something! √
      
      Actually, rhythm here is pretty good. but it needs A LOT of work on spacing. Jumps should reflect music, not randomness!

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Really good for your fitsr mapset! Don't give up and get it ranked! Feel free to ask m is something isn't clear or if you want any help!
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Have a Star! ~

Good luck!

emmy wrote: 66592g

hi~ from mod queue

Colour-coded modding:

Red is unrankable. You must fix this.
Orange is highly suggested. These are things we think you should really fix, and if you do not we want to know why you didn't.
Everything in normal black is personal opinion. You are free to take this advice or ignore it.

[General]

1. tags: don't think japanese is required ww

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[Hyper]

[box=hitsound stuff]00:21:678 (2) - forget a whistle here?
00:22:878 (1,2,3,4) - nice! i'd try to alternate the volumes for each by 5%
00:26:078 (1) - finish to head
00:29:278 (1) - ^
00:32:478 (1) - ^
00:35:678 (1) - ^
00:38:878 (1) - ^ err...actually, just at the all the bookmarks in the first minute would work
02:08:478 (1) - ^
02:11:678 (1) - ^
02:14:878 (1) - ^
02:18:078 (1) - ^
02:21:278 (1) - ^
02:27:678 (1) - ^
02:30:878 (1) - ^
02:34:878 (4) - ^
02:39:778 (9) - ^
02:46:078 (1) - i wouldn't add a finish at this end, i think the spinner should be quieter to fit with the sudden end more[/box √]
00:31:578 (4) - this 3/4 slider just doesn't sound well, i think you should just shorten it a little and make it start on the white tick √
00:43:878 (2) - make like this for corrected spacing and a little cleaner look √
01:10:078 (4) - could you make this symmetrical? it'd look a little better √
01:15:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - huge spacing for a 150 bpm stream, shape this in a more condensed way √
02:39:778 (9,10,11,12) - super hard to read orz, arrange differently please! √
cs+1 please! √ hehehe

[Hard]
please raise the ar, most normal difficulties even have ar5. i'd recommend 6 or 7 here. √
try to rearrange the patterns so the spacing is a little less difficult √
suggest the same hitsounds like in hyper √
00:25:478 (4) - i think you should just remove this and repeat (3), it currently plays awkwardly. √
01:10:878 (1,2,3,4) - i know these are in the music but i think you could just go with a short break instead. ✗ - That has been done for [Easy] and [Normal]
01:41:278 (1) - nice~ color=#00FF00]√[/color]

[Normal]
why different combo colours in this than other difficulties? color=#00FF00]√[/color]
00:23:278 (5) - nc here, normal difficulties require new combos a lot more often color=#00FF00]√[/color]
00:33:278 (2,3,4) - please try to arrange this pattern differently so the notes don't overlap (1), it can overwhelm newer players color=#00FF00]√[/color]
01:21:878 - the .50x sv was a good idea here but because of the lack of spacing it creates it easily brings a bunch of notes together which i've seen make newer players panic, i think you could either double the spacing or just remove the sv.color=#00FF00]√[/color]
01:34:278 - no note here? it sounds similar to 01:32:478 (5,6,7) - color=#00FF00]√[/color]
01:39:678 (1,1) - i don't know how else to do this but the second slider feels like it comes off really sudden. maybe you could rework this a little. color=#00FF00]√[/color]
02:30:878 (1) - repeat here and remove 02:31:678 (2) - ✗ - Not possible to delete the whistle hit-sound on the repeat which makes the whistle too long

[my thoughts] fun song, i really love the second kiai, rhythm was really well done in hyper! call me back if you add an insane~ good luck

alvinheriadi wrote: e5365

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

[Normal]

1. 00:11:144 (1) - Detele hitsound, resnap spinner end √
2. 01:21:878 (3) - Delete this? √ - You should have mentioned why
3. 01:32:478 (5,6,7) - Hard to read, delete 01:32:678 (6) - please

it has been changed from the previous mods

[Hard]

1. 00:11:144 (1) - Detele hitsound √
2. 00:24:878 (3) - This slider is ugly

I don't like that by just saying it is ugly. Explain why

[Insane]

1. 00:11:278 (1) - Delete hitsound [/b] √
2. 02:39:778 (9,10,11,12) - Try this http://puu.sh/3TodW.jpg

Sorry, GD denied.

sheela901 wrote: 3n562

[General]
Remove "MuryokuP vin nano" because it's already in the artist. Try to add something.
In "Easy", you forgot to enable "Letterbox in breaks".

[Easy]
00:51:678 (1) - The last little square, put it at x:468 y:220 so the slider could be a perfect curve.
00:53:678 (2) - x:464 y:132.
00:58:078 (1,2) - Copy 00:51:678 (1,2) (the patterns that you change) and paste them and do Ctrl+J to flip vertically.
01:02:078 (1,2,3,4) - Try to do a clean triangle or do a triangle.
01:18:878 (2) - Why not copy and paste 01:17:278 (1) and Ctrl+H?
01:26:978 (1) - Distance problem to 01:26:478 (3) .
01:20:578 (1) - ^ to 01:21:678 (2) .
01:42:878 (4) - The note is too close to 01:41:278 (3) . Put it more in the up.
02:11:678 - A slider here to 02:13:278 ?
02:32:078 (3) - If you put a note here, it won't be a clean triangle with 02:31:678 (2,4) . Maybe put it at x:320 y:204.

[Normal]
01:02:878 (3) - x:280 y:160 and 01:04:478 (4) - x:356 y:240?
01:39:678 (1) - The curve is kind of ugly. Try to make it perfect.
01:41:278 (1) - The little square in the middle, the third one, move it at x:244 y:332 so it could perfect (I think)

[Insane]
00:47:978 (5) - x:256 y:204

I think that is it. Good Luck!

Thank for all the nazi mods

vahn10 wrote: 59675d

This one is best with Tick rate 2 so please change the tickrate 2 - TR2 will mess up the 0.75x SV in the song. Sorry.. Nope

offset:13272 (-6 from all offsets) - I don't see why??
then resnap all notes

1. How about adding "Kyary Pamyu Pamyu" for Tags?
2. I recommend to change offset -5~-8

1. 00:10:878 (1) - start at 00:10:078 and end at 00:12:878
2. 00:20:078 (2) - How about changing to symmetrical one to 00:18:078 (3) -
3. 01:20:578 (1) - start at 01:20:478- For Easy-diff, 1/4 rhythm is difficult
4. 01:26:978 (1) - start at 01:26:878- ^
5. 01:35:678 (4) - not reverse
6. 01:36:878 (1) - start at 01:36:478 and end at 01:38:878
7. 02:01:678 (1) - start at 02:02:078
8. 02:26:478 (5) - move to x:208 y:136

1. 00:10:878 (1) - start at 00:10:078 and end at 00:12:878
2. 00:38:878 (1,2) - uniform DS to 0.8x
3. 00:47:278 (5,6,1) - ^
4. 00:55:078 (1) - start at 00:54:878
5. 01:14:878 (1) - start at 01:14:078
6. 01:30:078 (1,2) - Simply, the following is better
   
7. 01:41:278 (2) - end at 01:42:478
8. 01:55:678 (1) - Good!
9. 01:57:278 (2) - move to x:408 y:120
10. 02:00:478 (2) - it is better to make this slider more symmetrically
11. 02:33:278 (6) - reverse -1
12. 02:34:678 (3) - the following is better
    

1. 00:18:878 (5) - move to x:220 y:240
2. 00:24:678 (1) - end at 00:25:678
3. 00:27:678 (7) - NC
4. 01:01:678 (1,5) - stack
5. 01:15:278 (1) - start at 01:15:678
6. 02:19:278 (4) - move to x:296 y:56
7. 02:22:878 (5) - NC
8. 02:29:278 (6) - ^
9. 02:32:478 (8) - ^
10. 02:37:678 (1) - start at 02:37:478

1. Accoerding to AI-Mod, objects are not snapped
2. 00:28:478 (6) - end at 00:28:678
3. 02:22:278 (2,3) - it is better to change DS smaller

1. 00:16:678- add a note
2. 00:47:978 (5) - move to x:256 y:183
3. 00:49:778 (6,7) - uniform DS to 1.2x
4. 01:22:178~01:22:278- add a slider
5. 02:20:478- add note
6. 02:27:278 (5,1) - avoid overlap
7. 02:38:878 (7) - NC

RandomEffect wrote: 3yh3c

From my queue~

[General]

1. How about adding "Kyary Pamyu Pamyu" for Tags? - I already added it before then removed it. Time to add it back √
2. I recommend to change offset -5~-8

- ✗ . Nope, this offset is right
[Easy]

1. 00:10:878 (1) - start at 00:10:078 and end at 00:12:878 - ✗ It is OK to start at this time, but I can't end it at that time. Too short time for [Easy] players to react!
2. 00:20:078 (2) - How about changing to symmetrical one to 00:18:078 (3) - Eeh, nazi mistakes √
3. 01:20:578 (1) - start at 01:20:478- For Easy-diff, 1/4 rhythm is difficult ✗ Slow down the music and listen carefully. It is tricky and I don't blame you
4. 01:26:978 (1) - start at 01:26:878- ^ ✗ Same as above
5. 01:35:678 (4) - not reverse ✗.. Follow "Pon.. Way Way"
6. 01:36:878 (1) - start at 01:36:478 and end at 01:38:878 .. Stretched it to 01:38:878 √
7. 02:01:678 (1) - start at 02:02:078 - Changed it
8. 02:26:478 (5) - move to x:208 y:136

✗ - it doesn't look well plus it won't go well with DS here
[Normal]

1. 00:10:878 (1) - start at 00:10:078 and end at 00:12:878 - Again short time to react?
2. 00:38:878 (1,2) - uniform DS to 0.8x √
3. 00:47:278 (5,6,1) - ^
4. 00:55:078 (1) - start at 00:54:878
5. 01:14:878 (1) - start at 01:14:078
6. 01:30:078 (1,2) - Simply, the following is better √
   
7. 01:41:278 (2) - end at 01:42:478 √ Nazi mistakes again xD.
8. 01:55:678 (1) - Good!
9. 01:57:278 (2) - move to x:408 y:120 √
10. 02:00:478 (2) - it is better to make this slider more symmetrically √ Did my best
11. 02:33:278 (6) - reverse -1 √
12. 02:34:678 (3) - the following is better √
    

[Hard]

1. 00:18:878 (5) - move to x:220 y:240 √.. I don't know why, but it looks cool! lol
2. 00:24:678 (1) - end at 00:25:678 √
3. 00:27:678 (7) - NC √
4. 01:01:678 (1,5) - stack √
5. 01:15:278 (1) - start at 0115:678
6. 02:19:278 (4) - move to x:296 y:56 √
7. 02:22:878 (5) - NC √
8. 02:29:278 (6) - ^ √
9. 02:32:478 (8) - ^ √
10. 02:37:678 (1) - start at 02:37:478

[HabiHolic's Insane]

1. Accoerding to AI-Mod, objects are not snapped
2. 00:28:478 (6) - end at 00:28:678
3. 02:22:278 (2,3) - it is better to change DS smaller

[POOOON]

1. 00:16:678- add a note √ Nice catch ..
2. 00:47:978 (5) - move to x:256 y:183 √
3. 00:49:778 (6,7) - uniform DS to 1.2x √
4. 01:22:178~01:22:278- add a slider ✗ A slider then a stream of notes then a slider again doesn't seem to be a good idea
5. 02:20:478- add note √
6. 02:27:278 (5,1) - avoid overlap √
7. 02:38:878 (7) - NC

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I'm not really sure about offset-suggestion, sorry
~Good Luck~