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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年9月7日 at 21:39:47

Artist: nao
Title: Dimension tripper!!!! (TV Size)
Source: Choujigen Game Neptune
Tags: 超次元ゲイム ネプテューヌ The Animation opening cRyo[iceeicee] No_Gu Amamiya Yuko Eggache0 KanaRin climbb65588
BPM: 188
Filesize: 15607kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni (3.97 stars, 531 notes)
  2. cRyo's Hard (3.09 stars, 257 notes)
  3. Easy (1.51 stars, 109 notes)
  4. Eggache's hard (3.82 stars, 307 notes)
  5. Gu's Hard (3.48 stars, 262 notes)
  6. Insane (5.06 stars, 404 notes)
  7. Normal (2.25 stars, 202 notes)
  8. Skystar (5.54 stars, 446 notes)
  9. Taiko Muzukashii (3.17 stars, 410 notes)
: nao - Dimension tripper!!!! (TV Size)
: nao - Dimension tripper!!!! (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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0.0
x.....x!!!!
先占位
0,0
Fushimi Rio
o_o
0
Moe.

rrtyui wrote: 4r1w1a

skystar req

So fun lol
Wtf
期待~


can't defeat rrtman
im all for really really difficult maps i mean my 2 most played maps are Big Black and Airman but [Skystar] difficulty is retarded
[Insane]
00:08:594 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:39:552 (3) - move to 408,296
00:54:871 (4) - NC
[Hard]
00:35:084 - 这之前的N的Whistle都有点凌乱,应该想想怎样才能出来一个循环的节奏
00:54:872 (4) - NC
[Z]
有两个mp3让人怎么吐槽XD 连音效都没有!这diff什么情况XD
00:27:344 (3,4) - change to slider
[Skystar]
Flow 不错,就是三连有点……:3
我要挑战社科院!!!
我给chloe做的那图还没这个厉害呢XD
我看到了鬼畜的新境界!XD
[以下略]
quantum-rose
占坑等edit
[Easy]

  1. Please Add Hitsounds! You can copy hitsounds from Insane diff
  2. Your map seems to be unfinished
[Normal]
  1. Please Add Hitsounds! You can copy hitsounds from Insane diff
  2. 00:01:254 (1,2,3) - This beat is too hard for beginners. Better change to slider
  3. 00:03:967 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:06:520 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:11:467 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 00:14:179 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:16:733 (1,2) - ^
  8. 00:21:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  9. 00:23:435 (6,7) - Better unify this to a slider
  10. Make this diff easier!

\o/
The helpfulness of this mod is questionable...

Normal
  1. Combo colours
  2. Add kiai time! (Same issues for [Easy])

cRyo's Hard
  1. 00:38:116 (4,6) - Blanket?
  2. 00:52:477 (5,1) - Move these two sliders apart.

Eggache's Hard
Combo colours

Insane
  1. Combo colours
  2. 01:20:562 - 01:21:679. The claps sound really clustered and irregular in this section imo.

Skystar
o.O

Well that's all I can really say. Really nice!

☆ミ(o*・ω・)ノ
title change to Dimension tripper!!!! (TV Size)
( =`・ω・´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Very nice >w<

00:35:084 - Flash here maybe?
00:55:350 - KIAI start
01:05:562 - Flash
01:15:296 - KIAI off
01:15:775 - Flash
01:28:701 - Silence

[Easy]
Grid size?
Can be normal already though, many red ticks >w<
00:54:871 - Change to slider and ends at 00:55:030 -

[Normal]
Grid size?
00:01:254 (1,2,3) - Change to slider with bounce :)
00:11:467 (1,2,3) - ^
00:26:786 (3) - Make (3) stack with 00:25:190 (1) -

[Skystar]
o_o" skip

[cRyo's Hard]
Nice!

[Gu's Hard]
00:02:052 (1) - Hard to see this circle
00:22:796 - Add circle stack to head of 00:23:116 (4) -
00:57:264 - Circle?

[Eggache's Hard]
00:03:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - Only this part is not nice for looking, others are ok :)

[Insane]
>.o b

I'm noob modder ;w;

bye bye!

hope it helps :)
offset: -1 from the original or 615
Kodora
As promised

[General]

  1. Change title to "Dimension Tripper!!!!", here is album pic as proof:
  2. Resize first bg? Looks a bit ugly honestly
  3. Your Easy and Normal missing kiai time
  4. You must have easiest diff below 3 stars :\
[Skystar]

sdfghwejuhwetjhbvdf i cant it aaaaa

*To everyone who will complain about AR10: AR 10 firs perfectly to Skystar's patterns, prevents a lot of unneeded overlaps and makes it much more readable. Keep it as it now please
* i dare you please decrease HP Drain aaa Up to you, if you want to keep it as a kind of challenge then dont change it. I just afraid of a lot of downvotes because of this :V

  1. 00:04:286 (3) - Add finish to the beginning of slider
  2. 00:03:887 (6,1,2) - MAYBE this is intentional or just i'm too noob but it very hard to notice this sudden jump from 1/4 to 1/2. To prevent it please remove jump between 00:03:887 (6,1). Trust me, this is already enough hard

  3. 00:05:642 (6,1) - Please make here 1.30 DS instead of 1.50 to make it more playable
  4. 00:08:195 (5,1) - Uh, not sure about this jump. Why so cruel ;_; As for me, it plays bad and i personally suggest dont break stream here, but looks like people SS'ed it, so dunno. Keep it if you want to have this as challenge, but i personally suggest dont break stream for overral playability
  5. 00:09:392 (1) - Add finish to the beginning of slider
  6. 00:13:860 (3,4,5,6) - Move them to x407 y181 to have spacing consistend and to make it more playable:

  7. 00:14:498 (2) - Add finish to the beginning of slider
  8. 00:15:775 (8,9,1) - Dont ruin this triple here without reason please.
  9. 00:18:967 (4,5,1) - Its a bit too confusing even with AR 10. Stack them please perfectly with (1) and move to x296 y376 to prevent it.
  10. 00:19:605 (1) - Add finish to the beginning of slider
  11. 00:24:392 (4) - How about add finish here and reduse volume a bit? Because here is soft finish sound in music.
  12. 00:54:073 (6,7,1) - Ahh this stack feels... weird. I dont know how to explain this, but everytime last note is confusing me a lot. Stack it perfect please or dont stack perfectly (6) and (7)
  13. 00:55:828 (3,4,1) - Its.. very hard to catch. I ed it, i played this part several times but i just feel it weird. Up to you to change it.
  14. 00:58:541 (6,7,1) - It playes a bit really weird because jump between (7) and (1) looks more like 1/2 than 1/4 and there is no way to catch it in first play. Instead of this, maybe try to do a spaced triple like this?

  15. 01:03:009 (7,8,1) - Probably same. This sudden jumps feels a bit weird.
  16. 01:06:679 (3,3) - Stack them perfectly?
  17. 01:07:557 (7) - This note isnt perfestly hidden - hide it perfect, please <3
  18. 01:12:025 (6,1) - It playes good, but just wondering why you dont stack them like at 01:11:387 (2,3) -
  19. 01:09:392 (3,4,5,6,7) - <3
  20. 01:13:381 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - maybe it is just me but i'm worrying very much about this stream because it looks like note + triple pattern due to spacing...
  21. 01:17:690 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Same as at the beginning
  22. 01:18:328 (3) - add finish to the beginning of slider maybe?
  23. 01:27:264 (2) - Add finish maybe emphazire ending?
Diff is objective playable and awesome as for me. All what i write is mostly suggestions, please tell me what do you think about it. Sorry if it was useless.

[Insane]


  1. 00:01:254 (1,2,3) - Since ends of sliders snapped to nothing at music maybe silence them? They sounds too noisy.
  2. Cool hitsounds, but i personally suggest you add more whistles, especially at the beginning. Try this: (and same goes to the repetitive part ofc)
    - 00:03:807 (5) - Try to add whistle to the end of slider to emphazire this sound
    - 00:06:520 (7) - ^ (to the beginning of slider)
    - 00:06:839 (1) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider
    - 00:08:913 (5,6) - whistles to those 2 notes?
    - 00:09:392 (1) - whistle to the beginning of slider and maybe to the end to emphazite this guitar sound?
    - 00:11:945 (1) - whistle to the beginning of slider
  3. 00:16:733 (7,8,1) - This overlap payes good but just estacialyy looks bad. Try something like this?

  4. 00:22:158 (1,2) - Try to make perfect blanket here
  5. 00:23:435 (1) - Try to make this slider a bit more pretty? Like this: (just move firs anchorpoint at x304 y200)

  6. 00:28:381 (4) - Add whistle maybe?
  7. 00:29:020 (4) - ^? (to the end of slider)
  8. 00:38:116 (3) - Whistle to the beginning of slider to emphazire lyrics
  9. 00:41:307 (1) - ^to the beginning of slider for same reason
  10. 00:42:105 (5) - ^
  11. 00:52:797 (1) - Change form a bit maybe? Like this:
  12. 00:54:871 (4) - nc due to new part at music?
  13. 01:27:344 (1) - add whistle maybe?
Still awesome

[Eggache's Hard]

*Would be nice if you add more whistles at vocal part like it was done in other diffs.

  1. 00:03:089 (6,7,1,2) - Too clamped. Also looks like spacing error. Can you please use 1.4 distance between 00:03:169 (7,1)? It will helps to prevent it
  2. 00:05:243 (3,3) - Estetical thing, but maybe stack them perfectly?
  3. 00:06:679 (7,1) - You can make curved slider here with blanket to make it estetically better (just suggestion)
  4. 00:15:456 (3) - nazi: move it to x260 y96 to make perfect blanket here. Also, you can raise a bit spacing with second two notes.
  5. 00:35:084 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider
  6. 00:41:786 (6) - Move it please to x300 y164 to make it flows better
  7. 00:51:520 (5) - Add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here?
  8. 00:54:872 (4) - NC due to new part in music?
  9. 00:57:903 (1) - remove NC maybe?
  10. 01:05:562 (1) - Add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here
  11. 01:06:679 (4,5) - Almost offscreen, move them a bit higher please
  12. 01:27:424 (1) - add whistle maybe?
Still good

[cRyo's Hard]

*You not added kiai. Forgor or special?
*Snapping problems: 00:24:073 (1) - unsnapped repeat and 00:24:073 (1) - unsnapped end of slider wcx are you kidding about applying 1 ms offset suggestion?
*OD +1 maybe?

  1. 00:06:839 (1) - This NC seems quite useless. Remove it maybe?
  2. 00:17:052 (1) - ^
  3. 00:19:605 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider maybe?
  4. 00:24:392 (2) - add low volume section to this slidertick too and consider make it soft :3
  5. 00:45:296 (5) - add finish maybe?
  6. 01:22:158 (1) - quite useless curving imo /me runs
  7. 01:23:435 (1) - add finish at slider head?
  8. 01:27:424 (1) - Whistle maybe?

    Awesome whistle usage. Очень хорошая диффа, мне нравится, молодец :3

    [Normal]

    *OD +1 please

    1. 00:01:254 (1,2,3) - Hmm.. May be a bit too hard for a normal diff. Suggesting replace with 1/2 reverse-slider
    2. 00:06:520 (1,2) - Same. Probably replacing with slider will works better.
      I dont mentiore this notes at repetitive part because i want to see nice difficulty progression
    3. 00:23:435 (6) - new combo
    4. 00:48:488 (5,6) - Not sure if it acceptable for a Normal diff, note + 1/2 slider + long slider may be too hard to follow for beginners.
    5. 00:58:701 (3,4) - ^
    6. 01:08:913 (3,4) - ^
    7. 01:27:424 (1) - whistle maybe?
    A bit too challenging for a regular Normal diff but i think its ok.

    [Easy]

    *OD +1 please
    *...Seems work in progress ._.

    1. 00:03:488 (3,1,2) - Very nazi thing, but spacing please.
    2. 00:59:658 (3,2) - Try to avoid such overlaps on easiest diff in mapset, it may confuse beginners a lot.
    3. 01:27:424 (1) - whistle maybe?
Simple, good and creative, i dont get why star rating so mad here.

Pretty awesome mapset. Star and good luck with rank!
Topic Starter
updated
thanks for modding :3
为什么没有tags 现在最低难度可以不用3星以内了吗

clap太多啦 好吵

\wcx/
Sorry for the late mod.

Make the "h" from hard of "Eggache's hard" in capital.

[Easy]
00:18:807 (2) - Ctrl+G for a flow.

[Skystar]
00:11:945 - The kiai time is necessary here?

[cRyo's Hard]
00:53:116 (1) - Try to move it far to 00:52:477 (5) . They'll think that it's a 1/4 beat.

Sorry if it's just three things here. Good Luck and star!
Shut up and Take my Star!!!!!!! XD
(# ゚Д゚) オラオラオラオラオラオラー!!!

then, there's no taiko-?
其實要是不介意的話我可以來做太鼓
Topic Starter

KanaRin wrote: 5k3967

其實要是不介意的話我可以來做太鼓
好啊好啊
做完了!
http://puu.sh/4Buzz.7z

C & K Taiko Oni Lv. 9*

Muzukashii Lv. 7*
From the queue~

[Skystar]

Uhhhh.... I can't even the triplets.

[cRyo's Hard]

00:52:796 (5) - Might just be me but I tend to mistime it because it's so close to the next beat.

[Gu's Hard]

00:40:020 (1,2,3) - Probably just space it slightly further apart.

[Eggache's Hard]

00:26:626 - A beat here would be nice, smoother flow imo.
00:46:733 (2) - Change to slider? Sounds so empty.
01:27:105 (2) - NC here for emphasis.


[Insane]

Might just be because I suck really bad :o But I find some of the doublets a bit unnecessary and not fitting with the song.
Hi wcx ! ;)

As requested from Kanarin san :3

[Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:24:153 - add d ? i want to put 3 hits ,i feel kinda empty.
  2. 00:29:658 (35) - i think k is better. try to put different patterns here. 00:26:786 (21,22,23,24,25) - ,00:30:616 (38,39,40,41,42) -
    will be more interesting imo :3
  3. 00:44:179 (101) - this is too hard ... orz I recommend you to use k.
  4. 00:44:818 (104,105,106,107) - Kddk ? Because you put k at previous part here. 00:44:179 - and 00:44:498 -
  5. 01:26:945 - add d ? it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing.
[Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:39:392 (226) - delete this note ? it fits better to vocal.
  2. 00:41:945 (240,241,242) - kkd ? ddd is a little boring =w=
  3. 00:44:818 (262) - try to change k ? i can hear same sound at here.00:44:498 -
  4. 00:49:764 (291) - ^ same as here. if you follow the guitar.
  5. 01:05:403 (385) - same reason. 00:39:392 (226) -
  6. 01:17:291 - add a note ? it is better to put 5 hits !
Taiko mod is too difficult :? :? :?

T-T both really good diff !

Good Luck with the rank ~~

alacat wrote: 1qva

Hi wcx ! ;)

As requested from Kanarin san :3

[Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:24:153 - add d ? i want to put 3 hits ,i feel kinda empty. make sense!
  2. 00:29:658 (35) - i think k is better. try to put different patterns here. 00:26:786 (21,22,23,24,25) - ,00:30:616 (38,39,40,41,42) -
    will be more interesting imo :3 Yes, you're right. Actually I do the same at Oni.
  3. 00:44:179 (101) - this is too hard ... orz I recommend you to use k. Sure, sure.
  4. 00:44:818 (104,105,106,107) - Kddk ? Because you put k at previous part here. 00:44:179 - and 00:44:498 - I want to make something different, so I will keep it here.
  5. 01:26:945 - add d ? it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing. Okay.
[Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:39:392 (226) - delete this note ? it fits better to vocal. No, I'm following drums here, we can hear the bass drum obviously.
  2. 00:41:945 (240,241,242) - kkd ? ddd is a little boring =w=
    Very nice.
  3. 00:44:818 (262) - try to change k ? i can hear same sound at here.00:44:498 - I will keep here as I think it sounds better now. Also it is ed by the drums. (Bass drum)
  4. 00:49:764 (291) - ^ same as here. if you follow the guitar. ^
  5. 01:05:403 (385) - same reason. 00:39:392 (226) - Same as above.
  6. 01:17:291 - add a note ? it is better to put 5 hits ! Not bad but it's not necessary.
Taiko mod is too difficult :? :? :?

T-T both really good diff !

Good Luck with the rank ~~
http://puu.sh/4Xwbj.7z

Thanks for mod! :)
taiko mods as wcx requested :)

Muzukashii
  1. 00:16:732 (75) - kat here, to follow the instrument sound there like 00:16:093 (72,73) -
  2. 00:35:084 (58) - finisher here too? i think it's for the new part comes
  3. 00:44:179 (101,103) - remove the finsihers here. there's not any reason to use them ;w; and then, those two notes have same pitch sounds too like 00:44:020 (100) - , and it's just normal kat
  4. 00:44:818 (104) - remove the finisher too here
  5. 00:52:796 (140) - finisher here? to follow the finishers sound like 00:51:839 (135,138) -
  6. 00:56:626 (160) - and 00:57:903 (167) - add finsihers here. it should be consistent like the next patterns which are ended by finsihers, like 00:59:179 (175,182,189) - etc
  7. 01:06:679 (216,217) - kat and big don here? the reason same like above too ^
  8. 01:08:116 (225) - big don, the reason same like above too ^
  9. 01:11:945 (244) - and 01:13:222 (250) - finsihers too
    nice muzu~ but, is it not too much finsihers? o,o

Oni
  1. 00:19:286 (119) - kat here, because the electric guitar sound becomes higher at this part. it's different like 00:18:009 (112) - which isn't higher there
    00:20:881 (128) - and 00:22:158 (135) - finishers here?
  2. 00:23:435 (139) - big kat i think it's better than big don, because the electric guitar sound becomes higher here too c:
  3. delete 00:33:807 - , because there's not any sounds at this part ;w; it's empty. much better to follow it
  4. 00:49:844 - delete this too. it's not fit well to use ooooo notes there. try to use ddd triplet there
  5. 00:51:520 - and 00:52:796 - add finsihers here. because it should be consistent like 00:46:413 - and 00:47:690 - which used finsihers there. and then, they have a same part of song too
  6. add finishers at 01:06:839 - and 01:08:116 - . the reasons are same like above, because it should be consistent with the pattern. i looked that you used finsihers at the end of the notes before they have a little break, like 01:09:392 - ; 01:10:669 - ; etc. i think you should follow that pattern too, to make it consistent :c
  7. 01:11:945 - and 01:13:222 - add finishers too? but, if you think that's too hard to add finishers there, just ignore this
  8. 01:24:711 - finisher again here

that's all~ goodluck :3
Very delayed from Lions' Modding Queue lol :X

Muzukashii

00:53:594 - add a small don here, I think that blank space there stops the flow which you made with your initial pattern that follows the music
01:05:084 (208) - change to small don, it's at a lower tone that what is to come next, as well as:
01:05:403 (209) - shift to 01:05:243 - sounds better with that pause that is in sync with the vocals

Oni

00:52:637 (306,307) - dk instead of kd?

That's about it from me :\
Hi c:

[General]

  1. Please snap the timing sections that aren't purposely unsnapped because of your hitsounding. Lots are unsnapped for no reason.
[Insane]

  1. 00:50:323 - Try adding a note to make a triplet. You'd have to rearrange the pattern but I think it would be more fitting that the rhythm you have now.
[Eggache's Hard]
  1. Lots of unused green lines in this diff. Check them and remove them if that matters to you.
  2. 00:02:530 (4,5) - Try to make more spacing between them. The .9 is really noticeable and feels awkward.
  3. 00:24:871 - 100% volume seems a bit much orz. Try 80% sounds way better for me.
  4. 00:27:504 (2) - Not seeing the reason for the triplet here. It feels totally unnecessary, I'd delete the 2 if I were you.
  5. 01:15:615 (6) - This plays really awkward. Since there is no sound in the music for this to follow. I suggest you delete the 6 here. If you want, you can replace 01:15:456 (5) with a 1/2 slider, but just a pause would fit the music the best.
  6. 01:27:105 (2) - NC here would be consistent your pattern with 01:26:147 (1,1).
[Gu's Hard]

  1. 00:30:775 (2,1) - The jump is more fitting between the 2 and 1 here imo because of the NC and vocals hold on the 1. Try it.
  2. 01:13:621 (2,3,4,5) - Unfitting rhythm imo. This pause at 01:13:780 is awkward since the music is still streaming and no pause at 01:14:419 is unfitting. Try more like this:
[Cryo's Hard]

  1. 00:15:935 (6,1) - I'd like to switch the NC's here, seems nicer and more consistent to me.
[Normal]

  1. 01:20:881 (1) - Seems too covered. Try moving it more left. (168,112)
  2. 01:20:881 (1,2) - I think you could combine these into one slider like 00:06:839 (3). It would make this section easier. Same for 01:22:158 (4,5) - 01:23:435 (4,5) - 01:24:711 (7,8).
[Easy]

  1. 01:01:254 (2,3,4) - Try not to use a placement like that in an Easy diff. Imagine how easy it would be for a beginner to hit the 4 before the 3 here because flow from 2 leads directly onto its head.
I don't have much to say. The set is great, but as much as I love the Insane, I won't be bubbling because I can't Skystar. You'll have to find a different BAT that is willing to do so.
skystar: 01:15:296 (1,2) - please change the speed to 2.0x and use this http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/1076854

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good beatmap :D
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