mod request from my queue
[Taiko]
Generel:
At the beginning the different audio volumen is okay, but generelly we don't use any audio changes, like at 01:29:229 - This is more disturbing and dosen't fit really to the song/voice it self.
Hitcircles: (maybe you should first read what I said down below)
00:10:658 - this should be rather a pattern of
d d d d kkkkddd
00:36:229 - delete this note
00:38:087 (268,269) - should be deleted
00:38:372 (271) - ^
00:40:801 (291,292) - ^
00:43:087 (311) - ^
00:44:587 (325) - ^
00:45:015 (x) - there should be some notes, since you are still following the vocal
00:45:158 (333,334) - move one forward
01:07:372 - kkddkkddkdddk
01:09:801 - follow the beat here please (k k k k/d d d d)
01:13:229~01:28:944 - there should be way less notes
01:29:229 - this slider dosen't fit here. Also this use of audio volumen change just confuses players and is permited in taiko.
01:31:515 - here starts kiai and ends at 01:47:515 -
01:34:087~01:35:801 - please remap this part without following vocal.
01:35:944 (spinner) - delete the spinner please and you instead 01:36:087 - K and 01:37:229 - D or so
01:43:229~01:45:087 - same here, don't use vocal. It's too hard to map.
01:49:229~02:08:087 - delete the whole kiai here, try to use
less notes and then you are able to make here an SV changed of x0.75, since it's the quitest part in this song
02:08:087~02:26:372 - this one is even more quiet! Even more less notes are requierd. Those can be in a SV multiplier of x0.50 then.
02:26:372~02:44:658 - if you really used the SV multipliers I suggested you, then you may use here x0.75 again with more notes.
02:44:658 - here you can use SV multiplier x1.00 again with more notes. But kiai should be deleted since here is no climax part.
02:44:658~03:05:229 - the whole part should be remapped really.
03:05:515 - delete those please, they have nothing to do there.
Hm... where to start?
The main problem here is obviously: A huge use of the vocals, which has been tried to convert into taiko notes. This causes messi patterns, overlapping of the song itself by many notes; generelly no structure.
It's not a mistake of yours; it's the mistake of missing experience in vocal mapping. Generelly vocal mapping is really hard since following the vocals with notes is hard, especially when those vocals are not smooth, which is in this case the case. In your last kiai, there is even no constalation of patterns seeable anymore, it's really a huges mess, caused by following the vocal(or maybe not even that?).
Also another problem was the "overmapping" here. Many people have there own meaning for "overmapping", mine is that you used more notes then the song called for it. That's really a no-go. For example you put 1/4 notes in 1/1 or 1/2 sections.
Well, I think you know now what I mean.
Not every part was mapped in this way, there were one two parts really nice. But I would suggest you to remap this map one more time by following more the beat instead the vocal.
Oh, and don't worry. You are not the first one who made such mistakes. Everyone of us did it at the beginning and remapped his diff., so don't need to feel sad.

Looking forward to it.
ALso here the requested taiko BG:
http://puu.sh/CqNH