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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月5日 at 14:55:23

Artist: Itou Kanako
Title: The Moon is Not Alone (Short Ver.)
Source: Sora no Mukou de Sakimasu Youni
Tags: akatsuki works cRyo[iceeicee] Kiiwa opening
BPM: 163
Filesize: 15873kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. cRyo (4.96 stars, 287 notes)
  2. Easy (1.01 stars, 76 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 319 notes)
  4. Kiiwa (4.85 stars, 247 notes)
  5. Normal (3.77 stars, 144 notes)
: Itou Kanako - The Moon is Not Alone (Short Ver.)
: Itou Kanako - The Moon is Not Alone (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 19th Beatmap.
PC Game 『'&' - 空の向こうで咲きますように』
Mapset:
[Easy]-Done. me
[Normal]-Done. me
[Hard]-Done. (Mapped by Kiiwa)
[Hard+]-Done. (Mapped by cRyo[iceeicee])
[Insane]-Done me.
BGかわいいから☆あげる
Topic Starter

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

BGかわいいから☆あげる
ありがとー!!
ひ~な~く~る~ (~ ̄▽ ̄)~
アーアー(∩ ゚д゚∩)きこえなーい
irc mod \==/
SPOILER
19:46 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : irc mod !
19:46 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : www
19:46 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : 01:26:546
19:46 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : end kiai ?
19:47 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : + baka tags !
19:47 <Hinacle> : wwwww
19:47 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : + baka http://puu.sh/ggmL in [Easy] diff
19:48 <Hinacle> : ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
19:48 <Hinacle> : Thank you wwwwww
19:48 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : np wwww
19:49 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : 1 min mod wwww
19:49 <Hinacle> : wwww
19:49 <Hinacle> : kds~www
19:49 <Hinacle> : KD FOR YOU!!
19:49 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : www
19:50 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : Kiiwa diff
19:50 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : http://puu.sh/ggn8
19:50 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : !
19:50 <cRyo[iceeicee]> : resnap !
こんにちは ~ A request from Mod Queue ~ :D

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
some of the diff doesn't have this tag "akatsuki works cRyo[iceeicee] Kiiwa" please fix it.

[Easy]
Approach Rate + 1

[Normal]
Circle Size - 1 ?

[Kiwa]
00:56:546(6) = 2 grid down and 1 grid left

[cRyo]
HP Drain + 1
Overall Difficult + 1


[Insane]
Approach Rate + 1
Overall Difficult + 1


Okay.. That's all.. I didn't find any more problem.. ><"
Good Luck! Hinacle-san ! :3

Shana Aisaka wrote: 4a1j3k

[cRyo]
HP Drain + 1
Overall Difficult + 1

**************
6/6 is fine for me
Thx for mod~
:p

mod
suru tokoro nai!
Hi~
From my queue

[Normal]
00:44:951 (4) - Spacing error a little.put in x:76 y:196
01:29:491 (3,4,5,6) - I think it`s hard to beginner
How about like this?(just suggestion)

[Kiiwa]
00:14:767 (5) - This note interval is 0.06.Change interval is 0.00
00:32:988 (3) - This silder looks little ugly...
00:48:816 (3) - This note screened by 00:48:080 (2).
it is not insane diff.so change that.

[cRyo]
01:30:411 (5,6) - How about put in x:256 y:320?(Just suggestion)

[Insane]
Good diff! :)

that`s all
good map so i can`t find Special problem
Topic Starter

[Ranger] wrote: 4s3x5c

Hi~
From my queue

[Normal]
00:44:951 (4) - Spacing error a little.put in x:76 y:196
01:29:491 (3,4,5,6) - I think it`s hard to beginner
How about like this?(just suggestion)

[Kiiwa]
00:14:767 (5) - This note interval is 0.06.Change interval is 0.00
00:32:988 (3) - This silder looks little ugly...
00:48:816 (3) - This note screened by 00:48:080 (2).
it is not insane diff.so change that.

[cRyo]
01:30:411 (5,6) - How about put in x:256 y:320?(Just suggestion)

[Insane]
Good diff! :)

that`s all
good map so i can`t find Special problem
Thank you mod~!!
ひっひっひなくるマン!

00:58:387 (2) - new combo

うわああああ

がんばってください!!
Topic Starter

Cilvery wrote: u493f

ひっひっひなくるマン!

00:58:387 (2) - new combo

うわああああ

がんばってください!!
modありがとう!!!!!!!!!!!

がんばります!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(´・ω・`)

[Ranger] wrote: 4s3x5c

[cRyo]
01:30:411 (5,6) - How about put in x:256 y:320?(Just suggestion) i think its ok ...
Thx for mod!

NC change~

: Itou Kanako - The Moon is Not Alone (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [cRyo].osu
General
  1. make the tags consistent
  2. Source: '&' -Sora no Mukou de Sakimasu you ni-
cRyo
01:20:473 (1) - remove NC
01:21:209 (8) - NC
01:45:503 (4) - Finish instead?

Kiiwa
AR+1, much smoother and easier to read imo
01:16:055 (7,8) - Ctrl+R
01:45:503 (1) - soft custom 2 finish?
00:56:362 (5,6,7,8) - looks abit messy, try this? 01:39:062 (5) - this was rather surprising D:

Normal
Circle size 3?


That's all :3
thx reqs~

[Kiiwa] sorry,poor eng.

mmm...so many Ditance Spacing...
(this diff is Hard, not Insane)
Please give consistency.

0.14.767(5) - spacing(stack)
0.26.546(1) - don't stack(5)
0.29.491(1) - don't stack(4)
Easy:

00:33:540 (3) - This slider is just a tad unaligned with the one before it, 1 square down on the grid should do it (Tiny Size) Or was this on purpose? Looking at it again it looks like it's at an angle.

Normal:

00:23:233 (1) - remove new combo? To keep it consistant with your previous combos.


That's all I saw~
Nice set as usual Hinacle :3
Hello

General
* The blank hitsound file should be 44 bytes http://puu.sh/jh60
* Remove "-" in Source for title correction


Normal
00:23:233 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern


Kiiwa
00:29:491 (1,2) - Not stack correctly with tail slider
00:31:147 (2,3) - Bad rhythm. Remove (2) and move (3) to 00:31:147 for following vocal
00:41:822 (2) - Sudden slow slider are confusing, since this pattern is a jump
00:47:712 (1) - This note is almost offscreen
01:15:135 (5) - Snap the repeating slider to red tick for following vocal
01:25:812 (5) - Unsnapped note
01:25:996 (6) - ^
01:35:749 (6) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
01:40:536 (5) - Unsnapped note
01:40:720 (6) - ^


Ganbatte
Topic Starter

Leorda wrote: 6bp3m

Hello

General
* The blank hitsound file should be 44 bytes http://puu.sh/jh60
* Remove "-" in Source for title correction


Normal
00:23:233 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern


Kiiwa
00:29:491 (1,2) - Not stack correctly with tail slider
00:31:147 (2,3) - Bad rhythm. Remove (2) and move (3) to 00:31:147 for following vocal
00:41:822 (2) - Sudden slow slider are confusing, since this pattern is a jump
00:47:712 (1) - This note is almost offscreen
01:15:135 (5) - Snap the repeating slider to red tick for following vocal
01:25:812 (5) - Unsnapped note
01:25:996 (6) - ^
01:35:749 (6) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
01:40:536 (5) - Unsnapped note
01:40:720 (6) - ^


Ganbatte
Thank you mod~!!>w<//
[Kiiwa]
01:25:996 (6) - Unsnapped orz
01:40:536 (5) - Unsnapped orz
01:40:720 (6) - Unsnapped orz



meow :3







edit. okay
Topic Starter

arien666 wrote: x6o2n

[Kiiwa]
01:25:996 (6) - Unsnapped orz
01:40:536 (5) - Unsnapped orz
01:40:720 (6) - Unsnapped orz



meow :3





edit. okay
Thank you mod~><///
頑張ってください!
Be sure to fix the new combo bugs in cRyo's diff when a BAT checks this

00:18:816 (1) -
01:28:019 (1) -
Did IRC modding on the ENI

SPOILER
05:45 <Garven> : !
05:45 *Garven is editing (Itou Kanako - The Moon is Not Alone (Short Ver.))[http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/44187]
05:45 <Garven> : hima ga aru?
05:46 <Hinacle> : aru!!
05:46 <Garven> : ja
05:46 <Hinacle> : sure=w=
05:46 <Garven> : Easy
05:46 <Garven> : 00:55:626 (1) - end at 00:56:914 -
05:47 <Garven> : 00:57:835 (1) - This is a little too soon after the spinner still
05:47 <Garven> : Maybe just delete it?
05:47 <Garven> : sousite
05:47 <Garven> : 00:55:442 (1) - Spinner start here instead?
05:48 <Garven> : 01:25:810 (1) - This is a bit soon too
05:48 <Garven> : Maybe delete and add a note at 01:26:546 - ?
05:48 <Hinacle> : spinner end is 00:57:835 this point?
05:49 <Garven> : That would make it the same rhythm as before, and a little too soon for an Easy imo
05:49 <Hinacle> : ok~=w=
05:50 <Garven> : Also tick rate 2 fits the song better
05:50 <Garven> : I'd apply to all difficulties if you agree
05:51 <Garven> : Normal: 00:09:246 (1) - These short combos kind of disrupt the pattern you have with the rest of the song
05:51 <Garven> : I'd remove them
05:51 <Garven> : 00:12:190 (1) - ^
05:51 <Garven> : 01:33:172 (1) -
05:51 <Garven> : 00:19:184 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for a Normal.
05:51 <Garven> : 1 beat after is more of a Hard level rhythm post-spinner
05:52 <Garven> : Might be best to map through it like you did in Easy/Insane
05:53 <Garven> : 00:42:190 (1) - Kind of the same thing happening here
05:53 <Garven> : 00:40:718 - Maybe end that spinner here and adda note at 00:41:822 - ?
05:54 <Garven> : 00:54:154 (1) - End this at 00:56:914 -
05:56 <Garven> : Your custom normal-hitclap is super-loud
05:56 <Garven> : Try using this one: http://puu.sh/yxmi
05:56 <Garven> : I find it blends in better
05:56 <Garven> : Don't forget to make a backup of your current one before you add this one
05:56 <Hinacle> : wait~ x-x
05:56 <Garven> : Haha, don't worry. Just ask your questions as you get to them. We can review the chat whenever.
05:59 <Garven> : 01:25:074 (1) - This is also soon after a spinner.
05:59 <Garven> : No really easy solutions come to mind though
05:59 <Garven> : I guess you can end it at 01:24:338 -
06:01 <Garven> : 01:26:546 (3) - maybe end this at 01:27:098 - instead?
06:04 <Hinacle> : Please compressed. I cant it
06:05 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/yxr7
06:05 <Hinacle> : thx!!
06:14 <Garven> : Insane:
06:14 <Garven> : 00:15:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would really like to see a more uniform spacing amongst all these notes
06:14 <Garven> : Right now you have jumps for 1, 2, and 3, but not for 4-7
06:16 <Garven> : 00:34:644 (1) - This flowed better when it was stacked under 00:33:356 (4) -
06:16 <Garven> : 00:49:552 (1,2,3) - Not understanding this rhythm
06:17 <Garven> : 00:47:804 (7) - nor this one, really
06:17 <Garven> : 00:54:338 (2,3) - and 00:55:074 (5,6) - ^
06:18 <Garven> : 00:57:098 (1) - This feels... extra
06:19 <Hinacle> : I'm confused by Hard English wwwww
06:20 <Hinacle> : Please give me a little time~>M<
06:20 <Garven> : Sorry, sorry
06:20 <Garven> : Which are giving you problems?
06:21 <Hinacle> : maybe... no problem
06:22 <Garven> : Hehe, okay
06:22 <Garven> : Rest of insane is okay, I guess
06:22 <Garven> : I really don't like the 1/4 stacks
06:22 <Hinacle> : that fixed
06:22 <Hinacle> : oh...sorry ww
06:23 <Garven> : Anyway, I'll post the log of this and for the guest difficulties.


[kiiwa]
Tick rate 2 works better with this song.
00:25:810 (4) - This was kind of a weird spot to suddenly use a stack instead of the prior patterns.
00:27:651 (1,2,3,4) - Not really feeling these jumps considering the music...
00:44:215 (2,3) - eeh not really into this rhythm. Also makes your tick off. There are a lot of these rhtyhms in the map though. Meh.
01:15:135 (5) - This feels better on the red tick at 01:15:319 -

[Cyro]
Tick rate 2 works better with this song.
01:28:019 (1,2) - Not really feeling this jump at all.

Garven wrote: 3w455y

[Cyro]
Tick rate 2 works better with this song. it was 2 when i updated..
01:28:019 (1,2) - Not really feeling this jump at all. removed
http://puu.sh/yxFl

VLOB ==/ thx for mod Graven
Topic Starter

Garven wrote: 3w455y

Did IRC modding on the ENI

SPOILER
05:45 <Garven> : !
05:45 *Garven is editing (Itou Kanako - The Moon is Not Alone (Short Ver.))[http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/44187]
05:45 <Garven> : hima ga aru?
05:46 <Hinacle> : aru!!
05:46 <Garven> : ja
05:46 <Hinacle> : sure=w=
05:46 <Garven> : Easy
05:46 <Garven> : 00:55:626 (1) - end at 00:56:914 -
05:47 <Garven> : 00:57:835 (1) - This is a little too soon after the spinner still
05:47 <Garven> : Maybe just delete it?
05:47 <Garven> : sousite
05:47 <Garven> : 00:55:442 (1) - Spinner start here instead?
05:48 <Garven> : 01:25:810 (1) - This is a bit soon too
05:48 <Garven> : Maybe delete and add a note at 01:26:546 - ?
05:48 <Hinacle> : spinner end is 00:57:835 this point?
05:49 <Garven> : That would make it the same rhythm as before, and a little too soon for an Easy imo
05:49 <Hinacle> : ok~=w=
05:50 <Garven> : Also tick rate 2 fits the song better
05:50 <Garven> : I'd apply to all difficulties if you agree
05:51 <Garven> : Normal: 00:09:246 (1) - These short combos kind of disrupt the pattern you have with the rest of the song
05:51 <Garven> : I'd remove them
05:51 <Garven> : 00:12:190 (1) - ^
05:51 <Garven> : 01:33:172 (1) -
05:51 <Garven> : 00:19:184 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for a Normal.
05:51 <Garven> : 1 beat after is more of a Hard level rhythm post-spinner
05:52 <Garven> : Might be best to map through it like you did in Easy/Insane
05:53 <Garven> : 00:42:190 (1) - Kind of the same thing happening here
05:53 <Garven> : 00:40:718 - Maybe end that spinner here and adda note at 00:41:822 - ?
05:54 <Garven> : 00:54:154 (1) - End this at 00:56:914 -
05:56 <Garven> : Your custom normal-hitclap is super-loud
05:56 <Garven> : Try using this one: http://puu.sh/yxmi
05:56 <Garven> : I find it blends in better
05:56 <Garven> : Don't forget to make a backup of your current one before you add this one
05:56 <Hinacle> : wait~ x-x
05:56 <Garven> : Haha, don't worry. Just ask your questions as you get to them. We can review the chat whenever.
05:59 <Garven> : 01:25:074 (1) - This is also soon after a spinner.
05:59 <Garven> : No really easy solutions come to mind though
05:59 <Garven> : I guess you can end it at 01:24:338 -
06:01 <Garven> : 01:26:546 (3) - maybe end this at 01:27:098 - instead?
06:04 <Hinacle> : Please compressed. I cant it
06:05 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/yxr7
06:05 <Hinacle> : thx!!
06:14 <Garven> : Insane:
06:14 <Garven> : 00:15:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would really like to see a more uniform spacing amongst all these notes
06:14 <Garven> : Right now you have jumps for 1, 2, and 3, but not for 4-7
06:16 <Garven> : 00:34:644 (1) - This flowed better when it was stacked under 00:33:356 (4) -
06:16 <Garven> : 00:49:552 (1,2,3) - Not understanding this rhythm
06:17 <Garven> : 00:47:804 (7) - nor this one, really
06:17 <Garven> : 00:54:338 (2,3) - and 00:55:074 (5,6) - ^
06:18 <Garven> : 00:57:098 (1) - This feels... extra
06:19 <Hinacle> : I'm confused by Hard English wwwww
06:20 <Hinacle> : Please give me a little time~>M<
06:20 <Garven> : Sorry, sorry
06:20 <Garven> : Which are giving you problems?
06:21 <Hinacle> : maybe... no problem
06:22 <Garven> : Hehe, okay
06:22 <Garven> : Rest of insane is okay, I guess
06:22 <Garven> : I really don't like the 1/4 stacks
06:22 <Hinacle> : that fixed
06:22 <Hinacle> : oh...sorry ww
06:23 <Garven> : Anyway, I'll post the log of this and for the guest difficulties.
easy and normal is All Fixed. Insane diff is 70% Fixed. I like this 3burst...


[kiiwa]
Tick rate 2 works better with this song.
00:25:810 (4) - This was kind of a weird spot to suddenly use a stack instead of the prior patterns.
00:27:651 (1,2,3,4) - Not really feeling these jumps considering the music...
00:44:215 (2,3) - eeh not really into this rhythm. Also makes your tick off. There are a lot of these rhtyhms in the map though. Meh.
01:15:135 (5) - This feels better on the red tick at 01:15:319 -
All Fixed!! I Fixed kiiwa diff. I am taking permission from the kiiwa

[Cyro]
Tick rate 2 works better with this song.
01:28:019 (1,2) - Not really feeling this jump at all.
Thank you mod~!!>w<//
[Easy]
00:58:571 (1) - The problem with how you fixed this is that now it's back to the same amount of time for recovery that it was before. I thin kit' dbe best to end the spinner at 00:56:914 - and leave it at that.

[Insane]
00:57:098 (1) - Still think this is extra. There's nothing in the music to it. It'd be best to delete it.
Topic Starter

Garven wrote: 3w455y

[Easy]
00:58:571 (1) - The problem with how you fixed this is that now it's back to the same amount of time for recovery that it was before. I thin kit' dbe best to end the spinner at 00:56:914 - and leave it at that.

[Insane]
00:57:098 (1) - Still think this is extra. There's nothing in the music to it. It'd be best to delete it.
All fixed~

Thank you mod~><//
Rebubbled!
Topic Starter

Garven wrote: 3w455y

Rebubbled!
Thank you mod~><//
Hi ~ Hinacle ~ :)

Random check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y


  1. Add 'opening' in tags.

[cRyo] eo46


  1. 01:04:828 - Maybe change whistle sound much better.
  2. 01:08:878 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 01:08:509 (1).
  3. 01:45:503 (4) - Remove whistle and Add finish.

[Kiiwa] 662u56


  1. 01:45:319 (4) - Add new combo and Remove 01:45:503 (1).

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Hi ~ Hinacle ~ :)

Random check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y


  1. Add 'opening' in tags. Fixed!!

[cRyo] eo46


  1. 01:04:828 - Maybe change whistle sound much better.
  2. 01:08:878 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 01:08:509 (1).
  3. 01:45:503 (4) - Remove whistle and Add finish.

[Kiiwa] 662u56


  1. 01:45:319 (4) - Add new combo and Remove 01:45:503 (1).Fiexd!!
That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Thank you mod~!!

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

[cRyo] eo46


  1. 01:04:828 - Maybe change whistle sound much better. nope...
  2. 01:08:878 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 01:08:509 (1). this NC dont fit with pattern
  3. 01:45:503 (4) - Remove whistle and Add finish. dont like finish here..
Thx for mod~
OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Rebubbled ~


Ranked!
Topic Starter

Garven wrote: 3w455y

Ranked!
Thank you~T-T
yay ^^
Congraz!
おめでとうー!
おめでとうー :)
おめでと~!えっちひなくるさん :P
Congrats Hinacle.

PS:Slider break! :o
いえーいw
おめでとう ;)
Topic Starter
Thank you everyone!!

ありがとうござます!
Rankedおめですー(*´ω`*)
moe Hinacle wwww
:>!
grats!
:)
Good map!!
:)
congrats on ranked map! I liked it
Congratz~ :)
Topic Starter
Thank you everyone!!><//
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