05:45 <Garven> : !
05:45 *Garven is editing (Itou Kanako - The Moon is Not Alone (Short Ver.))[http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/s/44187]
05:45 <Garven> : hima ga aru?
05:46 <Hinacle> : aru!!
05:46 <Garven> : ja
05:46 <Hinacle> : sure=w=
05:46 <Garven> : Easy
05:46 <Garven> : 00:55:626 (1) - end at 00:56:914 -
05:47 <Garven> : 00:57:835 (1) - This is a little too soon after the spinner still
05:47 <Garven> : Maybe just delete it?
05:47 <Garven> : sousite
05:47 <Garven> : 00:55:442 (1) - Spinner start here instead?
05:48 <Garven> : 01:25:810 (1) - This is a bit soon too
05:48 <Garven> : Maybe delete and add a note at 01:26:546 - ?
05:48 <Hinacle> : spinner end is 00:57:835 this point?
05:49 <Garven> : That would make it the same rhythm as before, and a little too soon for an Easy imo
05:49 <Hinacle> : ok~=w=
05:50 <Garven> : Also tick rate 2 fits the song better
05:50 <Garven> : I'd apply to all difficulties if you agree
05:51 <Garven> : Normal: 00:09:246 (1) - These short combos kind of disrupt the pattern you have with the rest of the song
05:51 <Garven> : I'd remove them
05:51 <Garven> : 00:12:190 (1) - ^
05:51 <Garven> : 01:33:172 (1) -
05:51 <Garven> : 00:19:184 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for a Normal.
05:51 <Garven> : 1 beat after is more of a Hard level rhythm post-spinner
05:52 <Garven> : Might be best to map through it like you did in Easy/Insane
05:53 <Garven> : 00:42:190 (1) - Kind of the same thing happening here
05:53 <Garven> : 00:40:718 - Maybe end that spinner here and adda note at 00:41:822 - ?
05:54 <Garven> : 00:54:154 (1) - End this at 00:56:914 -
05:56 <Garven> : Your custom normal-hitclap is super-loud
05:56 <Garven> : Try using this one:
http://puu.sh/yxmi
05:56 <Garven> : I find it blends in better
05:56 <Garven> : Don't forget to make a backup of your current one before you add this one
05:56 <Hinacle> : wait~ x-x
05:56 <Garven> : Haha, don't worry. Just ask your questions as you get to them. We can review the chat whenever.
05:59 <Garven> : 01:25:074 (1) - This is also soon after a spinner.
05:59 <Garven> : No really easy solutions come to mind though
05:59 <Garven> : I guess you can end it at 01:24:338 -
06:01 <Garven> : 01:26:546 (3) - maybe end this at 01:27:098 - instead?
06:04 <Hinacle> : Please compressed. I cant it
06:05 <Garven> :
http://puu.sh/yxr7
06:05 <Hinacle> : thx!!
06:14 <Garven> : Insane:
06:14 <Garven> : 00:15:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would really like to see a more uniform spacing amongst all these notes
06:14 <Garven> : Right now you have jumps for 1, 2, and 3, but not for 4-7
06:16 <Garven> : 00:34:644 (1) - This flowed better when it was stacked under 00:33:356 (4) -
06:16 <Garven> : 00:49:552 (1,2,3) - Not understanding this rhythm
06:17 <Garven> : 00:47:804 (7) - nor this one, really
06:17 <Garven> : 00:54:338 (2,3) - and 00:55:074 (5,6) - ^
06:18 <Garven> : 00:57:098 (1) - This feels... extra
06:19 <Hinacle> : I'm confused by Hard English wwwww
06:20 <Hinacle> : Please give me a little time~>M<
06:20 <Garven> : Sorry, sorry
06:20 <Garven> : Which are giving you problems?
06:21 <Hinacle> : maybe... no problem
06:22 <Garven> : Hehe, okay
06:22 <Garven> : Rest of insane is okay, I guess
06:22 <Garven> : I really don't like the 1/4 stacks
06:22 <Hinacle> : that fixed
06:22 <Hinacle> : oh...sorry ww
06:23 <Garven> : Anyway, I'll post the log of this and for the guest difficulties.