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Nekomata Master - Beyond the Earth 353k6v

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Topic Starter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月27日 at 3:25:37

Artist: Nekomata Master
Title: Beyond the Earth
Source: pop'n music 10
Tags: beatmania IIDX 9th style IIDX9 BeatofIke ignorethis world/electronica
BPM: 140
Filesize: 3434kb
Play Time: 02:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 675 notes)
  2. BeatofIke's Beginner (1.55 stars, 108 notes)
  3. Hyper (4.33 stars, 218 notes)
  4. ignore's Lunatic (5 stars, 532 notes)
  5. Normal (3.67 stars, 166 notes)
: Nekomata Master - Beyond the Earth
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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BeatofIke's Beginner by BeatofIke
ignore's Lunatic by ignorethis

you can dl Mystica's diff from here

: Nekomata Master - Beyond the Earth (Muya) [Mystica's Hyper].osu
Why I still think tsuka if i watching this beatmap
NEKOMATA MASTER!! o.o
Topic Starter
<3
Reserve Hyper for me please :3
I can map an Easy difficulty if you don't mind. :3
Easy difficulty is so fun to map.
Topic Starter

2nnt wrote: 1x5sr

Reserve Hyper for me please :3
sorry I asked to Mystica. Easy or Normal diff please
Topic Starter

BeatofIke wrote: 68633

I can map an Easy difficulty if you don't mind. :3
Easy difficulty is so fun to map.
gogo :)
Normal is fine then~
Your Map Offset is a bit late btw. Try 360. :D

EDIT: I finished mapping easy difficulty.

HERE YOU GO! :)

[attachment=0:d9a68]Nekomata Master - Beyond the Earth (Muya) [BeatofIke's Easy].osu[/attachment:d9a68]
Can I add "CTB difficulty"?
Topic Starter
no thanks.
sorry for late response
finished. the difficulty name can be changed to anything you like

: Nekomata Master - Beyond the Earth (Muya) [Lunatic].osu
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[BeatofIke's Beginner]
Resnap All Notes in this diff.
Stack leniency is 0.2 and I think it makes no sense
00:08:931 (1,2,3,4) - try to make them symmetry?
00:31:217 (4) - make it a symmetry of 00:36:360 (1)?
01:38:074 (1) - add new combo here or it is unrankable

[Normal]
01:44:517 (5,6,1,2,3) - maybe this mix of circle and slider is difficult in Normal

[Hard]
00:15:589 (5) - nazi - 1 grid down and 1 grid left to make the flower looks better?
00:34:875 (2,3) - not parallel
01:42:374 (9) - spacing issue
02:09:267 (7,1) - stack them?

[脑爷]
00:00:375 - there are 2 same red timing section here
01:13:874 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - 不在直线上

[Another]
Fine for me.

That's all I can find. GL~
Thanks for the mod.
Also Muya, in case if I don't updated my map for a while, you have my permission to update it for me.

popner wrote: 2s73y

[BeatofIke's Beginner]
Resnap All Notes in this diff.
Stack leniency is 0.2 and I think it makes no sense
00:08:931 (1,2,3,4) - try to make them symmetry?
00:31:217 (4) - make it a symmetry of 00:36:360 (1)?
01:38:074 (1) - add new combo here or it is unrankable

general 4o4j2g


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. looks all fine

BeatofIke's Beginner 1p3v47


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. Stack Leniency is 2 now. you must change at least 3.
  2. 01:32:946 - you should end break at this way. It's unsnap break end now.
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:08:946 (1,2,3,4) - make it parallel. It's looks like a bit off. so you need left 1 grid (size 3) to 00:10:232 (4,5,6) - .

Normal 1we27


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line (It's not effect to player. but I suggest you should to remove it):
    00:01:660 -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:24:375 (1) - [arc issue] It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 00:24:375 (1) - like this↓ .try to move x420 y144 ((since you fixed this pattern. please check 00:24:375 (1,2) - spacing.
    photo

    420,144,24375,5,0
    364,76,24803,1,2

Mystica's Hyper 1sg1o



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:17:946 (3,6,2) - [nazi] let (3,6) full stack on the (2)'s slider end. It's have a kinda off
  2. 00:27:375 (4,1) - [nazi] please let those full stack. It's have a bit off
  3. 01:02:946 (2) - awkward slider~you can make the layout better~ 根本亂七八糟 隨手拉slider.弧度都不對了...
  4. 01:42:803 (1,6) - [nazi] please let those full stack. It's have a bit off
額...淚包阿 你真的最近作圖都沒什麼美感了= =
給人感覺 隨手拉slider阿...

Insane 5c475p



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:23:732 (4,1) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:00:482 (1,2,3) - It's covered by spinner text. it's will cause player more confuse. please avoid it.
  2. 00:38:946 (5,6,7,8) - lol it. super confuse pattern. but well~It's a good idea.
  3. 01:22:660 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - D: 沒辦法 這不吐嘲不行... 這個stream裡面你居然用了1/3 1/4還有1/6... 這樣以後誰還相信愛情QAQ
  4. 01:54:803 (4,1,2) -[nazi] please let those full stack. It's have a bit off
  5. 02:04:446 (5,6,7,8) - Idk which one do you want. but I think you should let this pattern straight.

Another 644m65



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:05:517 (1,2,3,4) - It's very confuse pattern since you used 1/6 and covered by 00:05:517 (1) - . I strongly suggest avoid it
  2. 01:22:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - eggpain
  3. 01:36:375 (17) - put NC? because it's a paragraph start with background.

red is unrankable issue. bule is recommended to fix. Black is just suggestion.

good luck~
Topic Starter
:) :) :)

popner wrote: 2s73y

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.


[Hard]
00:15:589 (5) - nazi - 1 grid down and 1 grid left to make the flower looks better?
00:34:875 (2,3) - not parallel 修改了下
01:42:374 (9) - spacing issue
02:09:267 (7,1) - stack them? no
That's all I can find. GL~

spboxer3 wrote: 21lg

Mystica's Hyper 1sg1o



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:17:946 (3,6,2) - [nazi] let (3,6) full stack on the (2)'s slider end. It's have a kinda off 哭了那個沒必要疊著啊
  2. 00:27:375 (4,1) - [nazi] please let those full stack. It's have a bit off ^
  3. 01:02:946 (2) - awkward slider~you can make the layout better~ 根本亂七八糟 隨手拉slider.弧度都不對了... 哭了爲什麽我覺得弧度挺正常只是不圓滑啊
  4. 01:42:803 (1,6) - [nazi] please let those full stack. It's have a bit off
^
額...淚包阿 你真的最近作圖都沒什麼美感了= = slider我承認我想用新的拉法試試所以出現了這種
給人感覺 隨手拉slider阿... 其實這是一種西域風情的感覺

good luck~
some design changed and fix some..Thank you guys

: Nekomata Master - Beyond the Earth (Muya) [Mystica's Hyper].osu
[General]
Uh... three 5,00 stars diffs... I looked trough mapset thought and spread is fine though.
If this song was featuring in different games, why won't you just put "pop'n music 10" in tags since this is not from only one game.
Add "ignore" to the tags.

[BoI's Beginner]
I suggest reducing AR by 1
One other thing, can you explain why this difficulty does have Stack Leniency set as 2? If this is not necessary then please set to default one.


[Mystica's Hyper]
By the way... I misread it as "Mystearica's Hyper" , lol...
Well... 5.00 star Hard...
I suggest AR 7 and OD 6.
Finish hitsound it's overused a bit on:
00:01:875 - 00:28:446.
00:43:232 - 01:09:589
01:37:874 - 02:05:089
  1. 00:01:446 (1,2,3,4) - wided zigzag-streams on Hard?...imo I'd reduce distance snap there and make for example like this:
    Well but still unsure bout that... on Muya's diff this is as slider with repeats, in ignore's diff there spinner appears... what about you make it as slider with repeats too?
  2. 00:04:660 (3,4,5,6) - for Hard diff it's too confusing
  3. 00:05:517 (1) - this slider really could look better if you just move 2nd slider point a bit to middle of slider, like this:
  4. 00:08:089 (1,2,3,4) - again wided zigzag-streams...
  5. 00:21:803 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. 00:23:946 (6) - move slider end 1 grid left
  7. 00:26:089 (1,2,3,4) - they overlap each others and it looks ugly
  8. 00:30:589 (4) - ...no this is not how you make slider
  9. 00:36:160 (7,1) - things like this cannot appear on hard diff, jump is TOO big
  10. 00:37:660 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks confusing
  11. 00:40:017 (2,3,4) - ^
  12. 00:40:339 (3,4,2,3,4) - ^
  13. 01:02:946 (2) - this slider is really ugly, please remake it
  14. 01:45:589 (3,4,5) - i'd move this 1 grid up to make stack mixed with slider covering with the beginning of 01:44:410 (7)
  15. 01:45:803 (5,6,7,8) - unintuitive jump
  16. 02:02:089 (3) - this slider could be shaped better
  17. 02:02:517 (4) - same with this
  18. 02:02:946 (5,6,7) - ugly overlapping
[ignore's Lunatic]
  1. 00:27:589 (6) - how about moving it to the center ?
  2. 00:38:946 (5,6,7,8) - I kinda don't like this, just it's unexcepted and might cause that even experience player would miss at first try
  3. 01:00:160 (5) - move that 3 grids down?(on 4th grid level - writing that only because I've noticed you used 3rd level)
  4. 01:22:660 (4) - new combo as for 1/3 snap change?
  5. 01:35:625 (2) - kinda sounds weird and out of place and might cause confusion with rhythm, would be better if you added note on 01:35:478 to make it sound better
  6. 01:37:232 (7) - nc
[Another]
wow...1/6 streams :o
  1. 00:08:303 (3,4) - you shall move this 3 grids left(on 4th level)
  2. 00:25:017 (4) - 4 grids down then 3 grids right
  3. 00:53:089 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure about this... might cause confusion while playing
  4. 01:08:875 (9) - i'd rather put it on 1/4
  5. 01:35:517 (9) - nc
  6. 02:11:196 (6) - nc
That's all! Good luck.

E: Wow, that's my 1000th post :D .
Topic Starter
thanks <3

Bass wrote: 5o4i6e

[Mystica's Hyper]
By the way... I misread it as "Mystearica's Hyper" , lol... XD
Well... 5.00 star Hard...
I suggest AR 7 and OD 6. no.Cause AR7 just make it harder to read and play.
Finish hitsound it's overused a bit on: actually I feel finish fits there part.so sorry
00:01:875 - 00:28:446.
00:43:232 - 01:09:589
01:37:874 - 02:05:089
  1. 00:01:446 (1,2,3,4) - wided zigzag-streams on Hard?...imo I'd reduce distance snap there and make for example like this: I find some one else to test it they find np here...So sorry
    Well but still unsure bout that... on Muya's diff this is as slider with repeats, in ignore's diff there spinner appears... what about you make it as slider with repeats too? it depends mapper's design..So no change
  2. 00:04:660 (3,4,5,6) - for Hard diff it's too confusing actually not.
  3. 00:05:517 (1) - this slider really could look better if you just move 2nd slider point a bit to middle of slider, like this: ok changed some.
  4. 00:08:089 (1,2,3,4) - again wided zigzag-streams... ^
  5. 00:21:803 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. 00:23:946 (6) - move slider end 1 grid left
  7. 00:26:089 (1,2,3,4) - they overlap each others and it looks ugly I don't think so ummm.
  8. 00:30:589 (4) - ...no this is not how you make slider just wanna get it a little curve.So changed a bit.
  9. 00:36:160 (7,1) - things like this cannot appear on hard diff, jump is TOO big changed
  10. 00:37:660 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks confusing .....it seems clear.
  11. 00:40:017 (2,3,4) - ^
  12. 00:40:339 (3,4,2,3,4) - ^
  13. 01:02:946 (2) - this slider is really ugly, please remake it ok changed
  14. 01:45:589 (3,4,5) - i'd move this 1 grid up to make stack mixed with slider covering with the beginning of 01:44:410 (7) chaned to a note
  15. 01:45:803 (5,6,7,8) - unintuitive jump seems ok so no change
  16. 02:02:089 (3) - this slider could be shaped better k
  17. 02:02:517 (4) - same with this
  18. 02:02:946 (5,6,7) - ugly overlapping
Topic Starter
sorry updated
Hi
from Fang Team's queue
Let's mod

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[General]

you have .osb file. if you don't use SB, can you remove it?
Uncheck Letterbox during breaks?

[BeatofIke's Beginner]

00:41:946 - can you stuff this space?
02:05:517 (1) - Finish?
Yeah~ that's good

[Normal]

01:51:375 - add a note?
02:00:375 (4,5) - can you try make symmetry?
good~ :3

[Mystica's Hyper]

oh... can you stoped overused Finish...? that's noisy
00:23:946 (6) - why don't you try Ctrl+R?
00:37:232 (6,7) - parallel?
01:23:946 (1) - if use default skin, some players can't see this note. coverd by hitbuster.
02:11:946 (3) - NC or adjust Distance?

[Another]

1/6 stream... lol :3
HP -1?
OD -1?
00:14:017 (9) - Remove a note?
01:08:875 (9) - ^
02:11:839 (11) - ^

[ignore's Lunatic]

OD -1?
00:38:946 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern made some players confusion. don't stack
02:11:839 (3) - Remove a note?


sorry... my mod is not helpful
your map is good..

Star~
Topic Starter
thanks :)
also, S o r d a and Jupiter thanks for stars :)

Dark Fang wrote: 6k5l28

[Mystica's Hyper]

oh... can you stoped overused Finish...? that's noisy I think it's well for this song and I haven't overused it.00:23:946 (6) - why don't you try Ctrl+R? I just make a little jump here
00:37:232 (6,7) - parallel? actually I see it's parallel
01:23:946 (1) - if use default skin, some players can't see this note. coverd by hitbuster. I think most of player will not meet that question
02:11:946 (3) - NC or adjust Distance? no

Thanks for mod but no changes.
Update for some bass' mod
: Nekomata Master - Beyond the Earth (Muya) [Mystica's Hyper].osu
Topic Starter
sorry removed Mystica's diff
From my queue, everything is a suggestion based on playing your maps ^_^

General:

  1. Another and ignore's could do with a break imo.
BeatofIke's Beginner:

  1. Please raise the stacking leniency to 0.3 or 0.4.
00:08:946 (1) - Finish
00:22:660 (1) - Finish the start
01:10:660 (1) - to 01:22:660 (1) - After playing the other difficulties I think it would be cool if you used the same custom hitsounds here too!
02:05:517 (1) - to 02:11:946 (4) - Same as above.

Normal:

00:22:660 (3) - New combo?
00:24:375 (1) - Remove new combo if you do ^
00:26:089 (4) - New combo here if you do ^

Hyper:

00:28:875 (5) - Maybe align this with 00:27:803 (4) - or place it in the centre? It seems odd where it is.
02:06:803 (3) - Move to 1/4 (02:06:696 -) 1/1 doesn't seem to follow the song. You could use a slider here.
02:08:517 (6) - Move to 1/4 (02:08:410 -) ^
02:08:732 - Add note?

Another:

  1. Lots of streams here, at times I felt it was too clustered and difficult to read.
00:13:660 (8,9) - The spacing here confuses me. I keep reading it as 1/6 instead of 1/4. Maybe increase the distance here, or do something like 00:20:517 (8,1) -
00:15:374 (4) - Whistle?
00:53:089 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - This looks too clustered and confusing. Space it out some more?
00:53:946 (5,6) - ^
01:16:018 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:22:660 (1,2,3,4) - I think sliders would be better for the sudden change to 1/3.

ignore's Lunatic:

  1. There's lots of places where this uses 1/4 instead of 1/6, it works in some parts but others not so much...
00:05:839 (2,3) - Should be 1/6?
00:06:696 (6,7) - ^
00:27:160 (3,4,5) - ^
00:38:946 (5,6,7,8) - Didn't like this, plays bad imo <_<
01:22:660 (4,5,6) - I think a slider would be better here for the sudden change to 1/3.
01:35:625 (2) - Move to 1/1 (01:35:517 -) to follow the song?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
thanks :D
[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
00:07:660 – sounds empty, add a note here, http://osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org/ss/326195
02:11:946 (5) – nazi: make this slider symmetrical. 1st point, x:260 y:264. 2nd point, x:312 y:300. 3rd point, x:364 y:264
No major problem

[Hyper]
Nice hyper imo :3

[Another]
Sorry, this diff is too hard for me to mod/testplay ;w;

[ignore's Lunatic]
00:38:946 (5,6,7,8) – I think this is a little confusing
01:55:232 (1,2) – these two are not stack properly. Did you do this on purpose ?

That’s all.
Good luck ;)
Topic Starter
thanks :D
Hi there~~mod from Wmf's Modding/Taiko Queues

[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in may be too long for Beginner & Normal...i'd like to choose 1000ms as well.
  2. Change the diff name from ignore's Lunatic to ingore's Extra or ignore's Extreme may be more suit for IIDX :)
  3. And also consider to change diff name from Normal to Standard ?
[BeatofIke's Beginner]
  1. 00:24:375 (4) - NC here for new chorum?
  2. 00:27:375 (2) - try to change the beat here?
  3. 00:42:378 - add a note here?
[Normal]
  1. 00:37:446 (3) - i suppose it's better to start from prev white line, so move it to there ( 00:37:232 - ) and extend a repeat?
[Hyper]
  1. Everything looks fine
[Another]
  1. 01:25:660 (7,8) - change to a slider here?
[ignore's Lunatic]
  1. I'd like to choose AR9 for this diff~
  2. 01:35:625 (2) - move to next red line? emm....actually i suppose move (4) to 01:36:267 - and stack with (5) may be better XD
that's all, awesome map~~

but i suppose Beginner may need to find more mods....

anyway, good luck with rank :)
Topic Starter
thanks :D
oooooooooooo
go
impressive
Hi ~ Muya ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[ignore's Lunatic] 1i2y3b


  1. 01:22:660 (4,5,6) - 1/3 suddenly here,so i suggestion change slider much better.

[Another] w155r


  1. 01:22:660 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Lunatic.

[Hyper] p3t3k


  1. AR+1,HP+1 much better with play.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset and cool music ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Topic Starter
yes it's suddenly. but spacing has been changed.
I like these pattern, so I want to keep it.

Hyper is fixed! thanks :)
OK ~ everything looks fine now ~

Good luck with rank ~


Yeeessss.
良譜面 :D
なんで翠星石XD
Topic Starter
曲の雰囲気に合ってると思ったのでこれをBGにしました ;)
Bubble: Tue May 29, 2012 5:22 pm (over 1 month ago)

We should fix this. Almost 2 months...
Mercurial


10 days to 2 months old.
Topic Starter
t/67776





my best record ^-^v
Everything looked good.

Just had 1 minor issue with a pattern.

[ignorethis]
01:23:803 (10,11,12) - Move these closer together since they look more like they are mapped to 1/4 instead of 1/6.

That's it.
Topic Starter
done~
Alright, great.

Ranked!
Congratulation ~
Sweet! My first guest difficulty rank! XD
IkkiMinami
Very Good Muya :)
(ノ^^)ノ―――――――※※☆★congratulations!!★☆
grats~
gratz~
Ilysm, Muya.
yey
ranked ome!
Topic Starter
thanks everyone!
oops late, grats~
bg looks like Holo from Spice and Wolf somehow
Hm...
More like Suiseiseki to me
^That's what it is
Also, loving this so hard, woah~ <3
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