This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月28日 at 18:40:33

Artist: Ushirokara Haiyoritai G
Title: Taiyou Iwaku Moeyo Chaos (An-bootleg)
Source: Haiyore! Nyaruko-san
Tags: Remix opening terametis
BPM: 180
Filesize: 2440kb
Play Time: 01:10
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.39 stars, 89 notes)
2. Hard (4.97 stars, 232 notes)
3. Insane (4.87 stars, 354 notes)
4. tera's Normal (4.39 stars, 134 notes)

: Ushirokara Haiyoritai G - Taiyou Iwaku Moeyo Chaos (An-bootleg)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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mapset:
Insane 100%
Hard 100%
Normal by terametis 100%
Easy 100%

Advice:
osuplayer111 (BAT)

（」・ω・）」うー！（／・ω・）／にゃー！

As requested

[Normal]
AR+1
00:01:418 (1,1) - spacing
00:04:084 (1) - finishの方が合うと思います
00:09:418 (1,1) - spacingがちょっとNormalにしては遠すぎます
ある程度ならNormalでもspacingの変化は認められますが経験則上これは通らないと思います
00:12:084 (2,1) - ^
00:25:418 (1,1) - ^
00:30:751 (1,1) - ^
00:33:418 (1,1) - ^
00:41:418 (1) - finishっぽい音がなってるのでここもfinishでいいかと～
00:52:084 (1,1) - spacing
00:56:418 - add note
00:57:084 (5) - こっちはnoteなくてもいいかと
01:02:084 (1) - 折り返しにfinish
01:05:418 (1,1) - spacing

[Insane]
00:09:251 (3) - ここにnote置くよりは00:09:418 - の方が合うと思いますし違和感もないです
00:14:418 (3,4,1) - (3,4)が広めのspacingなのに対して(4.1)が一拍置いてるのでかなり読みにくいです
00:35:751 (2) - これは通らないですorz
00:40:834 (2,3) - 音にあってないです
00:41:251 (1) - 終点finish
00:46:418 (3) - ^

[Hard]
AR-1 Insaneが9なんで8でもよさそうなんですがNormalとのバランスを考えるとこっちの方がベターです
00:08:918 (4) - Insaneに同じ
00:57:084 (1) - 終点finish

Melophobia wrote: 3z2i5w

[Insane]
00:09:251 (3) - ここにnote置くよりは00:09:418 - の方が合うと思いますし違和感もないです
00:40:834 (2,3) - 音にあってないです

[Hard]
00:08:918 (4) - Insaneに同じ

すいません上記の事は、自分はあってると思うので not fix.
thank you advice!

(」・ω・)」うー！(／・ω・)／にゃー！

Potofu wrote: 354952

(」・ω・)」うー！(／・ω・)／にゃー！

(」・ω・)」うー！(／・ω・)／にゃー！

hi there~

General:

source: "Haiyore! Nyaruko-san"?

Normal:

00:02:751 (1) - maybe remove NC? since a combo with only 1 beat seems too short IMO
00:10:751 (1) - ^
00:11:751 (1) - ^
00:12:084 (2) - add NC
00:13:418 (1) - remove NC?
00:21:418 (1) - ^
00:26:751 (1) - ^
00:32:084 (1) - ^
00:34:751 (1) - ^
00:50:418 (4) - add NC?
00:53:418 (1) - remove NC?
01:06:751 (1) - ^

Hard:

00:01:418 (1) - might be a bit much for a hard, perhaps remove a repeat?
00:02:084 (1) - ^
00:22:751 (4) - add NC?
01:08:084 (1) - same as 00:01:418 (1)
01:08:751 (1) - ^

Insane:

00:05:418 (5) - add NC
00:14:751 (6) - add finish?
00:22:751 (4) - add NC?
00:36:418 (3) - add NC
00:40:751 (1) - remove NC
00:46:251 (1) - remove NC
00:46:918 (4) - add NC
00:47:418 (1) - remove NC
00:52:084 (1) - perhaps remove clap and add finish instead?
00:57:418 (1) - ^
01:02:751 (1) - ^
01:01:418 (4) - add NC?

nice map

pieguy1372 wrote: 5n6l

hi there~

Hard:

00:01:418 (1) - might be a bit much for a hard, perhaps remove a repeat? not,fix
00:02:084 (1) - ^ not,fix
01:08:084 (1) - same as 00:01:418 (1) not,fix
01:08:751 (1) - ^ not,fix

Insane:

00:22:751 (4) - add NC? not,fix

nice map

Thank you mod and star!!

hi >w<

request from you

[General]

●Song setup > Storyboarding > letterboxっていうやつチェックいらない
●Song setup > Audio > Lead-in 2000 ⇒ 3000　change?

[Normal]

●00:19:751 (4) - 前の（２）のサークルに重ねたほうがいいかな　見た目的に
●00:23:418 (2,3) - 重ねるのはあまりよろしくない　デフォの３００スキンでみえなくなるから

[hard]

●なんか難しい感じがするので、配置を変えることオヌヌメ　例：http://puu.sh/vXrm
●Hardにしては難しい感じがする(ﾟдﾟ)

[Insane]
●00:24:084 (1) - 前の連打とspacingを同じにしたほうがいい？
●00:40:751 (6,7,8) - このリズムは難しそうだ！
●00:46:918 (4) - にゅーこんぼ


これくらい！　ふぁいと～

少なくてごめんね

-Gamu- wrote: f5o2v

hi >w<

request from you

[hard]

●Hardにしては難しい感じがする(ﾟдﾟ) (´･_･`)

[Insane]

●00:24:084 (1) - 前の連打とspacingを同じにしたほうがいい？　このままでいいかな～綺麗だし
●00:40:751 (6,7,8) - このリズムは難しそうだ！ 難しくしてるの！

これくらい！　ふぁいと～

少なくてごめんね

mod and star ありがとおおお！

from queue
BGかわいい

[overall]:

1. Tagsに二文字はosuの仕様だと調べられないらしいので消しておいていいと思います

[Insane]:

1. 00:08:084 (1,2) - いきなりスローダウンしてて読みにくいと思います 短いスライダーだから大丈夫かもしれないけど他のmodderに指摘されたら変えた方がいいと思います
2. 00:29:084 (4) - spacing0.5くらいが綺麗に見えていいかも
3. 00:34:418 (6) - ^
4. 00:38:751 (1) - 始めfinish

[Hard]:

1. 00:08:918 (4) - 全部にwhistleは耳障りな感じがするから折り返しだけでいいかな
2. 00:38:584 (3) - 終わりfinish
3. 00:40:084 (1) - 始めfinish

[Normal]:

1. nice~

Fight~

S o r d a wrote: 2h1jz

from queue
BGかわいい

[Insane]:

1. 00:08:084 (1,2) - いきなりスローダウンしてて読みにくいと思います 短いスライダーだから大丈夫かもしれないけど他のmodderに指摘されたら変えた方がいいと思います 他の人にも言われたら直します

Fight~

このBGお気に入り
Thank you~~

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Normal]
00:23:418 (2) - change the direction of this slider a little like this? http://puu.sh/w7Au
00:41:418 (1) - change a slider pattern? it is similar to 00:36:084 (1)
01:00:084 (1,2) - nazi - not parallel

[Hard]
00:08:918 (4) - shorten it by 1/4 tick?
00:15:418 (4) - why jump here? jump at 00:14:918 (1) is better imo.
00:31:251 (3) - ^
00:32:084 (1,2) - exchange them(in time axis)?
00:58:751 - add a note?

[Insane]
Hmm..looks good, not much to say
00:56:418 (1,2,3) - ctrl+j?
01:06:418 (7) - ^
01:07:418 (3,1,2,3) - it is difficult, change direction of cursor 2 times in 1/2 tick

That's all I can find. GL~

popner wrote: 2s73y

Just suggestions:

[Normal]
00:23:418 (2) - change the direction of this slider a little like this? http://puu.sh/w7Au not,fixed.

[Hard]
00:08:918 (4) - shorten it by 1/4 tick? not,fixed.
00:32:084 (1,2) - exchange them(in time axis)? not,fixed.
00:58:751 - add a note? not,fixed.

[Insane]
Hmm..looks good, not much to say
00:56:418 (1,2,3) - ctrl+j? not,fixed.
01:07:418 (3,1,2,3) - it is difficult, change direction of cursor 2 times in 1/2 tick not,fixed.

That's all I can find. GL~

thanks mod--

少しだけ。No kds plz

Patchouli wrote: 4z6j12

少しだけ。No kds plz

SPOILER

20:10 <Jupiter> : aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
20:13 <Patchouli> : よし
20:14 <Patchouli> : 00:09:251 (3) - これ要らなくないかなぁ
20:14 <Patchouli> : 消すなら前の1と2をかなりジャンプー
20:14 <Patchouli> : とか
20:16 <Jupiter> : いると思うんだよねー
20:16 <Patchouli> : 00:19:418 (1,2,3,4) -
20:17 <Patchouli> : http://puu.sh/w7Uf　
20:18 <Patchouli> : こんなのどうかなぁ単発スタック前にも使ってるからバリエーション欲しいかもと思ったけど
20:18 <Jupiter> : mirenai
20:18 <Patchouli> : http://puu.sh/w7Uf
20:20 <Patchouli> : 00:30:251 (2,3) -
20:20 <Patchouli> : ここCtrl+Rなど？
20:20 <Patchouli> : 上記と同じ理由でバリエーション増やす感じ
20:20 <Jupiter> : なおしたーー
20:21 <Patchouli> : 00:40:751 (6,7,8) - この配置は正直微妙かなと思う
20:22 <Patchouli> : 見辛い&ﾔﾘﾂﾞﾗｰｲ気が
20:22 <Jupiter> : スタック2連打にする
20:24 <Jupiter> : ok
20:25 <Patchouli> : 00:58:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
20:25 <Patchouli> : これはスルーでよい提案だけど
20:26 <Jupiter> : un
20:26 <Patchouli> : http://puu.sh/w7WY
20:26 <Patchouli> : こんな音取りはいかが
20:27 <Patchouli> : 最後よりは２の折り返しスライダー部分に連打が欲しいかなぁと少し思った
20:27 <Jupiter> : ほうほう
20:30 <Patchouli> : Insaneに関してはこんなもんですHitSoundとNCは好みだから指摘ﾅｼ
20:30 <Jupiter> : 最初以外全部なおしましたー

Thanks!

Hello, mod from my queue.

Normal:

00:09:084 (3): Add Finish.
00:11:751 (3): Move this some grids up, seems bad when a note touch a slider.
01:01:418 (3): Same here, but move it some grids down.
01:02:084 (1): Remove NC, and then try this, it fits a lot better with the music.

Hard:

00:08:918 (3): Remove Whistle at the repeat and add Finish instead.
00:19:751 (5): Remove repeat and add a note 00:20:084, fits better.
00:24:084 (1): Finish instead Clap.
00:29:918 (3): 2,14x spacing in a Hard diff?, try to move it to x:409 y:150 (Grid Snap off), so it will stack the end of 00:29:084 (4).
00:56:418 (2,3): Too much spacing, try to reduce it in both sliders.
00:57:918 (4): This is not perfectly stacked, move to x:159 y:243
00:58:084 (1): Reduce spacing.
01:03:418 (1): ^
01:07:084 (1,2,3): 2,99x and 2,85x spacing?, omg no, reduce them please, that is a "Hard" and not "Insane".
01:07:751 (1): Remove NC.

This diff is too much for being a Hard, you should work more on it reducing big spacings (2x+) and things like that.

Insane:

00:01:751 (1): Remove NC.
00:02:168 (2): NC.
00:02:418 (1): Remove NC.
00:02:918 (2): NC.
00:03:584 (1): Remove NC.
00:08:918 (1,2,3): You are following instrumental here, like the previous pattern, so remove NC.
00:13:668 (2,3): This notes are not perfectly stacked, move them to x:383 y:135 (Grid Snap off)
00:19:001 (2,3): ^ x:125 y:133
00:25:751 (2,3): These notes touching the slider doesn't looks good, do this instead.
00:40:834 (7): This doesn't fit music. Delete this note and add a note at 00:40:918, then stack it with (8,9).
01:08:168 (4): NC.
01:08:418 (1): Remove NC.
01:08:834 (2): NC.
01:09:084 (1): Remove NC.
01:10:084 (1): Delete Clap at the end of slider.

That's all for me. Good luck~

Darksonic wrote: 515a16

Hello, mod from my queue.

Normal:

01:02:084 (1): Remove NC, and then try this, it fits a lot better with the music.　not fixed.
　
Hard:

00:19:751 (5): Remove repeat and add a note 00:20:084, fits better.　not fixed.
00:56:418 (2,3): Too much spacing, try to reduce it in both sliders.　not fixed.
00:58:084 (1): Reduce spacing.　not fixed.
01:03:418 (1): ^　not fixed.
01:07:084 (1,2,3): 2,99x and 2,85x spacing?, omg no, reduce them please, that is a "Hard" and not "Insane".　not fixed.

This diff is too much for being a Hard, you should work more on it reducing big spacings (2x+) and things like that.
hmm, Normal diff will be add or Hard Remake. Before long

Insane:

00:25:751 (2,3): These notes touching the slider doesn't looks good, do this instead. not fixed.


That's all for me. Good luck~

thanks Darksonic!

Hello!~ Here's my mod~ (a voluntary mod, which was supposed to be from my queue XD)

• [General]

1. Add "opening" to the tags even though its a remix XD
   
   [Easy]
2. 00:45:418 (3) - Add finish on the start and end of this slider.
   
   [Hard]
3. 00:13:918 (3) - I found a hard time reading this, maybe move it here?
   
   pic

   
   
   [Insane]
   it's perfect for me~ >w<

That's all, your map is too good OAO I wasn't able to point out that many things, I like your map and the song! Go and have this ranked! OAO Take a star~ Good luck!~

request from my queue
title:Taiyou Iwaku Moeyo Chaos (An-bootleg)

[easy]
00:50:418 (1,3) - a little overlap
01:09:418 (3,4,5,6) - finishs are noisy for me
orz why you add all notes clap

[hard]
00:08:918 (4) - I prefer remove one repeat and add note at 00:09:418
00:33:751 (2) - change 2nd point to whitle point
00:37:918 add note
00:47:418 (3) - this shape isn't good here

[insane]
00:09:251 (6) - remove it
00:23:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why you changed spacing here

why you skiped normal?...this song can be made for normal imo

No_Gu wrote: 5al65

request from my queue

[hard]
00:08:918 (4) - I prefer remove one repeat and add note at 00:09:418 not,fix
00:33:751 (2) - change 2nd point to whitle point not,fix
00:37:918 add note not,fix

[insane]
00:09:251 (6) - remove it not,fix
00:23:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why you changed spacing here it is not interesting if common.

why you skiped normal?...this song can be made for normal imo sorry...Now, normal diff is made.

thanks modding!

and thank you star Kirino Kousaka~

[General]

Fine

[Easy]

00:05:418 (3) - Finish
00:06:751 (1) - ^
00:57:418 (1) - ^
00:43:418 (2) - Clap?

[Insane]

00:04:751 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:084 (1) - ^
00:32:751 (1) - Clap?
00:37:918 (5) - Clap at the end
00:56:418 (1,2,3) - This position look more interesting. http://puu.sh/wJxc

[Hard]

00:58:084 (1) - Finish?
01:03:418 (1) - ^

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

That's it.

: Ushirokara Haiyoritai G - Taiyou Iwaku Moeyo Chaos (An-bootleg) (Jupiter) [tera's Normal].osu

terametis wrote: 4sq5i

:)

! Thanks terametis!

Starry wrote: 243z1h

[General]

Fine

[Easy]

00:57:418 (1) - ^ not, fix
00:43:418 (2) - Clap? not, fix

[Insane]

00:04:751 (1) - Remove new combo? not, fix
00:06:084 (1) - ^ not, fix
00:32:751 (1) - Clap? not, fix
00:56:418 (1,2,3) - This position look more interesting. http://puu.sh/wJxc not, fix.

[Hard]

00:58:084 (1) - Finish? not, fix
01:03:418 (1) - ^ not, fix

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

That's it.

thank you

\:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. 00:46:751 - Is this kiai flash/fountain intentional? I recommend you to make one solid kiai time section rather than a fountain, by the way.

>Easy

1. 00:53:418 (2,3) - Slightly overlapped. Looks weird, IMO.

>Hard

1. God, I just can't seem to even go over 20x max combo here. Must be me that sucks at notes placed on blue ticks, though...

>Insane

1. 00:23:751 (5,6,7,8) - What's with the sudden spacing change? Keeping it compressed should be fine, IMO.

Eh... I think this mapset is very good already. I can't really find any obvious mistakes.

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote: 683k34

\:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. 00:46:751 - Is this kiai flash/fountain intentional? I recommend you to make one solid kiai time section rather than a fountain, by the way.

>Easy

1. 00:53:418 (2,3) - Slightly overlapped. Looks weird, IMO.

>Hard

1. God, I just can't seem to even go over 20x max combo here. Must be me that sucks at notes placed on blue ticks, though...

>Insane

1. 00:23:751 (5,6,7,8) - What's with the sudden spacing change? Keeping it compressed should be fine, IMO.

Eh... I think this mapset is very good already. I can't really find any obvious mistakes.

Good luck on the way

All keep~
Thanks advice--

Hi ~ Jupiter ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions



That's all ~ Really cool mapset i can't find more issue ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Hi ~ Jupiter ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General] 162k1y

1. Change AudioLeadIn for 2500(3000 a bit long).

[Easy] 83e4o

1. 00:44:751 (2) - Maybe change a circle on 00:44:751 much better.
2. 01:09:418 (3) - Add new combo looks better.

That's all ~ Really cool mapset i can't find more issue ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

All done!

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

EDIT : Added guest diff creator name in tags ~

Rebubbled ~

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

Thanks Rika-chan!

yeahhhhh ~~<3
add tag terametis lol

terametis wrote: 4sq5i

yeahhhhh ~~<3
add tag terametis lol

完全に忘れてた

thank you rika-chan <3

Good luck~

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote: 681b5o

Good luck~

Thank you!
Sorry,mod queue was requested.

Pretty good.

Ranked~

osuplayer111 wrote: 602o2e

Pretty good.

Ranked~

Thanks osuplayer!!! <3

Omedeto :3

Kawayi Rika wrote: 2t2g1t

Omedeto :3

Arigato :3

Gratz nyan

いえーいおめでとー

ありがとーいえーい

grats

omedetou!

Thank you!

いえええええええええええええええええええ

bootleg ;o
can i get the to 320k plox?

terametis wrote: 4sq5i

いえええええええええええええええええええ

yeah!

djpleiades wrote: 5f3y5w

bootleg ;o
can i get the to 320k plox?

Sorry ><
It is impossible to obtain 320k.

HARD please [AR8] pleeeeeeeeeez

tottori wrote: 3e4t24

HARD please [AR8] pleeeeeeeeeez

HAHAHAHA XD

You can just unrank it... "Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks." Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule. :3