{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Nymph<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,243 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Nymph<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-06T14:22:52+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \u58ef\u54c9\u6211\u5927\u975c\u6d41<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Skystar<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,628 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Skystar<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-06T15:26:44+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \u660e\u660e\u6731\u97f3\u6bd4\u8f03\u840c<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kotone<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,402 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2008<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kotone<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-06T23:49:34+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \u771f\u662f\u3002<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n banvi<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,793 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n banvi<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-10T05:45:41+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi~ :3[General]maybe need AudioLeadIn (2000ms)? [Normal]00:17:071 (3) - extend to 00:18:704 to follow the vocal?<\/li>00:39:928 (1) - add whistle at the beginning?<\/li>00:56:255 (2) - add finish at the beginning?<\/li>01:04:418 (3) - add whistle at the beginning?<\/li>03:23:193 (2) - add finish at the beginning?<\/li>03:29:724 (1) - ^<\/li><\/ol>[Hard]00:56:255 (1) - add finish at the beginning?<\/li>01:28:091 (3) - add finish at the end?<\/li>03:22:581 (2) - ^<\/li>03:34:622 (3) - add whistle?<\/li>04:04:010 - add a note?<\/li>04:05:642 (3) - add finish instead of whistle?<\/li>04:10:540 (2) - add whistle?<\/li>04:15:438 - move to 04:12:581 this green timing point like normal diff?<\/li><\/ol>Hmm, I can't suggest about hitsounds so much. >< Mapset is great! nice relax map~ <333<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kiiwa<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 928 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kiiwa<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-11T05:12:23+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi~General<\/strong>yanaginagi- is this Nagi Yanagi (or Yanagi Nagi)? orz If not, sorry XD~Maybe you can use different combo colour? o.oHard<\/strong>00:23:806 (1) - Dosen't sound like it ends in the right place... maybe if it can't be fixed, just make it the same as the one at the end of the map! : D01:29:316 (1) - Remove whistle02:04:826 (4,5,6) - Unexpected spacing, you don't use anthing like this anywhere else. Maybe decrese?03:26:459 (1) - Akward to end on blue tick, extend to white?Normal<\/strong>00:24:010 (1) - Same with Hard ^^00:34:622 - Add note?Sorry this mod kind of sucks LOLreally cool map : D~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Scorpiour<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,633 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Scorpiour<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-11T12:07:32+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi there~~~mod for request\u597d\u957f\uff5e\uff5e\uff5e\u597d\u7b80\u5355=v=[General]Audio Lead-in: 1500-2000ms<\/li><\/ol>[Normal]00:10:540 (4) - \u5514\u2026\u2026\u6211\u53ef\u4ee5\u8bf4\u4e0d\u5bf9\u79f0\u4e48\u2026\u2026<\/li>00:18:704 - \u611f\u89c9\u4e0a\u8fd9\u91cc\u53ef\u4ee5\u52a0\u4e2anote\uff0c\u6216\u8005\u628a\u524d\u9762slider\u5ef6\u957f\u4e00\u4e2a\u6298\u8fd4\uff0c\u5e76\u4e14\u52a0\u4e2awhistle\u97f3\u6548\uff5e<\/li>00:20:336 (2) - \u5934+whistle?<\/li>00:22:785 (3) - \u5c3e+whistle?<\/li>00:36:255 - \u8003\u8651\u52a0\u4e2anote\u548c\u540e\u9762\u7684\u8282\u594f\u4fdd\u6301\u4e00\u81f4\uff1f<\/li>00:52:989 (1,2) - \u8fd9\u91cc\u7684\u8bdd\uff0c\u97f3\u4e50\u4e0a\u542c\u8d77\u6765\u7684\u611f\u89c9\u4e0a\u66f4\u50cf\u662fslider\u5411\u4e0b\u5f2f\uff0c\u7136\u540enote\u5728\u4e0a\u9762\uff5e<\/li>00:56:255 (2,3) - \u8fd9\u91cc\u7684\u76f4\u7ebf\u53ef\u4ee5\u8003\u8651\u6539\u6210\u5f27\u7ebf\u2026\u2026\u8fd9\u4e48\u76f4\u89d2\u7684\u653e\u4e0b\u53bb\u611f\u89c9\u6709\u4e00\u70b9\u70b9\u4e0d\u591f\u67d4<\/li>01:15:847 (1,2,3) - \u8fd9\u6837\u8bd5\u8bd5\uff1f(1)\u7684\u8d77\u70b9\u4f4d\u7f6e\u4e0d\u53d8<\/li>01:38:704 (2) - \u8f6c\u4e2a180\u5ea6\u8bd5\u8bd5\u770b\uff1f<\/li>01:51:765 (3) - \u4e0b\u4e00\u7ec4NC\u8003\u8651\u4ece\u8fd9\u91cc\u5f00\u59cb\uff1f<\/li>02:02:377 (2) - \u5ef6\u957f\u5230\u524d\u9762\u7684\u84dd\u7ebf\u5f00\u59cb\uff1f\uff08\u538b\u4e00\u4e0bvocal\u7684\u8d77\u70b9\uff09\uff0c\u7ed3\u675f\u4f4d\u7f6e\u4e0d\u53d8\uff5e<\/li>02:17:479 (1,2) - NC\u653e\u5230(2)\u4e0a\uff1f\u4e00\u662f\u8ba9stack\u66f4\u660e\u663e\u4e00\u70b9\uff0c\u4e8c\u662f\u5229\u7528follow point\u6765\u505a\u51fa\u8fc7\u6e21\u6548\u679c~<\/li>03:36:051 (1) - \u8003\u8651\u4ece\u524d\u9762\u7ea2\u7ebf\u5f00\u59cb\uff1f\u6211\u89c9\u5f97\u4f1a\u66f4\u8212\u670d\u4e00\u70b9\uff5e\uff5e<\/li><\/ol>[Hard]00:04:010 (3) - (nazi)\u4e2d\u95f4\u7684\u4e24\u4e2a\u63cf\u70b9\u8c03\u6210\u5782\u76f4\u65b9\u5411\u80fd\u8ba9\u66f2\u7ebf\u66f4\u5e73\u6ed1\u5bf9\u79f0\uff5e73,285,4010,2,0,B|132:340|224:340|224:276|316:276|374:322,1,320,2|0<\/pre><\/li>00:16:255 (4) - \u8fd9\u91cc\u8bd5\u8bd5\u52a0\u4e2anote\u770b\u770b\u6548\u679c\uff1f<\/li>00:46:459 (4) - \u611f\u89c9\u65b9\u5411\u8f6c\u53cd\u4e86\u2026\u2026\u671d\u53f3\u4fa7\u4f1a\u4e0d\u4f1a\u597d\u4e00\u70b9\uff1f<\/li>00:51:765 (2,3) - \u628a(2)\u653e\u5230452:192\uff0c\u7136\u540e(3)ctrl+r\u4e00\u4e0b\uff0c\u8fd9\u6837\u505a\u6210\u4e00\u4e2a\u4e09\u89d2\u5f62\u7684\u5927\u4e00\u4e9b\u7684\u8df3\u6897\uff5e<\/li>02:03:193 - \u8fd9\u91cc\u8bd5\u8bd5\u52a0\u4e2anote\u770b\u770b\uff1f<\/li>02:17:479 - ^<\/li>02:25:234 (2) - ctrl+r\uff1f<\/li>03:27:479 (2) - \u611f\u89c9\u4e0a\u53ef\u4ee5\u505a\u62104\u4e2anote\uff5e<\/li>03:32:989 (1,2,3,4) - \u8fd94\u4e2a\u505a\u6210\u4e00\u4e2a\u4e94\u89d2\u661f\u8df3\u76844\u4e2a\u89d2\u5982\u4f55\uff1f<\/li><\/ol>\u5dee\u4e0d\u591a\u5c31\u8fd9\u4e9b\u5566\uff5e\uff5e\uff5e\u597d\u542c\uff5e\uff5e\u7ed9\u661f\uff5e\uff5eGL with rank =v=~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n kanpakyin<\/a>\n\n \n Global \n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,236 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n kanpakyin<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-11T18:29:41+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n banvi wrote:<\/h4>Hi~ :3[General]maybe need AudioLeadIn (2000ms)? [Normal]00:17:071 (3) - extend to 00:18:704 to follow the vocal? \/\/no because i don't hear any sound at 00:18:704 - <\/span><\/li>00:39:928 (1) - add whistle at the beginning?<\/li>00:56:255 (2) - add finish at the beginning?<\/li>01:04:418 (3) - add whistle at the beginning?<\/li>03:23:193 (2) - add finish at the beginning?<\/li>03:29:724 (1) - ^<\/li><\/ol>[Hard]00:56:255 (1) - add finish at the beginning? \/\/no because that accent isn't that strong.<\/span><\/li>01:28:091 (3) - add finish at the end? <\/li>03:22:581 (2) - ^<\/li>03:34:622 (3) - add whistle? \/\/weird for me.<\/span><\/li>04:04:010 - add a note? \/\/no because i can't hear any beat there.<\/span><\/li>04:05:642 (3) - add finish instead of whistle? <\/li>04:10:540 (2) - add whistle?<\/li>04:15:438 - move to 04:12:581 this green timing point like normal diff?<\/li><\/ol><\/blockquote>Kiiwa wrote:<\/h4>Hi~General<\/strong>yanaginagi- is this Nagi Yanagi (or Yanagi Nagi)? orz If not, sorry XD~ \/\/no sorry xD.<\/span>Maybe you can use different combo colour? o.oHard<\/strong>00:23:806 (1) - Dosen't sound like it ends in the right place... maybe if it can't be fixed, just make it the same as the one at the end of the map! : D01:29:316 (1) - Remove whistle02:04:826 (4,5,6) - Unexpected spacing, you don't use anthing like this anywhere else. Maybe decrese? \/\/decreased.<\/span>03:26:459 (1) - Akward to end on blue tick, extend to white? \/\/Added a note between the slider.<\/span>Normal<\/strong>00:24:010 (1) - Same with Hard ^^ 00:34:622 - Add note? \/\/I would say no to this because the vocal is too soft there.<\/span><\/blockquote>Scorpiour wrote:<\/h4>[Normal]00:10:540 (4) - \u5514\u2026\u2026\u6211\u53ef\u4ee5\u8bf4\u4e0d\u5bf9\u79f0\u4e48\u2026\u2026 \/\/\u6211\u89ba\u5f97\u6c92\u5fc5\u8981\u505a\u5230\u5b8c\u5168\u5c0d\u7a31.<\/span><\/li>00:18:704 - \u611f\u89c9\u4e0a\u8fd9\u91cc\u53ef\u4ee5\u52a0\u4e2anote\uff0c\u6216\u8005\u628a\u524d\u9762slider\u5ef6\u957f\u4e00\u4e2a\u6298\u8fd4\uff0c\u5e76\u4e14\u52a0\u4e2awhistle\u97f3\u6548\uff5e \/\/\u56e0\u70ba\u4e2d\u9593\u7684\u97f3\u6a02\u5e7e\u4e4e\u6d88\u5931\u4e86...\u9019\u6a23\u7684\u8a71\u6211\u89ba\u5f97\u6709\u9edeovermap.<\/span><\/li>00:20:336 (2) - \u5934+whistle? \/\/\u4e0d\u592a\u559c\u6b61\u9023\u7e8cwhistle.<\/span> <\/li>00:22:785 (3) - \u5c3e+whistle? \/\/\u4e0d\u52a0\u611f\u89ba\u6bd4\u8f03\u597d \/ \\<\/span><\/li>00:36:255 - \u8003\u8651\u52a0\u4e2anote\u548c\u540e\u9762\u7684\u8282\u594f\u4fdd\u6301\u4e00\u81f4\uff1f\/\/\u4e2d\u9593\u59b9\u97f3, \u52a0\u4e86\u6703\u9055\u548c<\/span><\/li>00:52:989 (1,2) - \u8fd9\u91cc\u7684\u8bdd\uff0c\u97f3\u4e50\u4e0a\u542c\u8d77\u6765\u7684\u611f\u89c9\u4e0a\u66f4\u50cf\u662fslider\u5411\u4e0b\u5f2f\uff0c\u7136\u540enote\u5728\u4e0a\u9762\uff5e \/\/\u6309\u7167\u81ea\u5df1\u7684\u60f3\u6cd5\u4fee\u4e86\u4e0b.<\/span><\/li>00:56:255 (2,3) - \u8fd9\u91cc\u7684\u76f4\u7ebf\u53ef\u4ee5\u8003\u8651\u6539\u6210\u5f27\u7ebf\u2026\u2026\u8fd9\u4e48\u76f4\u89d2\u7684\u653e\u4e0b\u53bb\u611f\u89c9\u6709\u4e00\u70b9\u70b9\u4e0d\u591f\u67d4<\/li>01:15:847 (1,2,3) - \u8fd9\u6837\u8bd5\u8bd5\uff1f(1)\u7684\u8d77\u70b9\u4f4d\u7f6e\u4e0d\u53d8<\/li>01:38:704 (2) - \u8f6c\u4e2a180\u5ea6\u8bd5\u8bd5\u770b\uff1f\/\/\u9019\u500b\u9084\u662f\u7b97\u4e86..<\/span><\/li>01:51:765 (3) - \u4e0b\u4e00\u7ec4NC\u8003\u8651\u4ece\u8fd9\u91cc\u5f00\u59cb\uff1f<\/li>02:02:377 (2) - \u5ef6\u957f\u5230\u524d\u9762\u7684\u84dd\u7ebf\u5f00\u59cb\uff1f\uff08\u538b\u4e00\u4e0bvocal\u7684\u8d77\u70b9\uff09\uff0c\u7ed3\u675f\u4f4d\u7f6e\u4e0d\u53d8\uff5e \/\/\u6211\u89ba\u5f97\u73fe\u5728\u7684\u9084\u597d..<\/span><\/li>02:17:479 (1,2) - NC\u653e\u5230(2)\u4e0a\uff1f\u4e00\u662f\u8ba9stack\u66f4\u660e\u663e\u4e00\u70b9\uff0c\u4e8c\u662f\u5229\u7528follow point\u6765\u505a\u51fa\u8fc7\u6e21\u6548\u679c~ \/\/2\u7a2e\u984f\u8272\u758a\u8d77\u4f86\u597d\u96e3\u770b...<\/span><\/li>03:36:051 (1) - \u8003\u8651\u4ece\u524d\u9762\u7ea2\u7ebf\u5f00\u59cb\uff1f\u6211\u89c9\u5f97\u4f1a\u66f4\u8212\u670d\u4e00\u70b9\uff5e\uff5e \u4e0d\u8981<\/span><\/li><\/ol>[Hard]00:04:010 (3) - (nazi)\u4e2d\u95f4\u7684\u4e24\u4e2a\u63cf\u70b9\u8c03\u6210\u5782\u76f4\u65b9\u5411\u80fd\u8ba9\u66f2\u7ebf\u66f4\u5e73\u6ed1\u5bf9\u79f0\uff5e73,285,4010,2,0,B|132:340|224:340|224:276|316:276|374:322,1,320,2|0<\/pre><\/li>00:16:255 (4) - \u8fd9\u91cc\u8bd5\u8bd5\u52a0\u4e2anote\u770b\u770b\u6548\u679c\uff1f\/\/\u540cN<\/span><\/li>00:46:459 (4) - \u611f\u89c9\u65b9\u5411\u8f6c\u53cd\u4e86\u2026\u2026\u671d\u53f3\u4fa7\u4f1a\u4e0d\u4f1a\u597d\u4e00\u70b9\uff1f\/\/\u4e0d= = \u5c0f\u8df3\u5f88\u5feb\u4e86\u7684<\/span><\/li>00:51:765 (2,3) - \u628a(2)\u653e\u5230452:192\uff0c\u7136\u540e(3)ctrl+r\u4e00\u4e0b\uff0c\u8fd9\u6837\u505a\u6210\u4e00\u4e2a\u4e09\u89d2\u5f62\u7684\u5927\u4e00\u4e9b\u7684\u8df3\u6897\uff5e \/\/X = = \u624d\u4e0d\u8981\u5462..<\/span><\/li>02:03:193 - \u8fd9\u91cc\u8bd5\u8bd5\u52a0\u4e2anote\u770b\u770b\uff1f\u540c\u6c92\u97f3\u6a02...<\/span><\/li>02:17:479 - ^ \/\/\u9019\u500b\u53ef\u4ee5\u52a0<\/span><\/li>02:25:234 (2) - ctrl+r\uff1f...\u4e0d\u559c\u6b61= =<\/span><\/li>03:27:479 (2) - \u611f\u89c9\u4e0a\u53ef\u4ee5\u505a\u62104\u4e2anote\uff5e 233..<\/span> <\/li>03:32:989 (1,2,3,4) - \u8fd94\u4e2a\u505a\u6210\u4e00\u4e2a\u4e94\u89d2\u661f\u8df3\u76844\u4e2a\u89d2\u5982\u4f55\uff1f\/\/\u592a\u8df3\u4e86= =<\/span><\/li><\/ol><\/blockquote><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Melophobia<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,230 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Melophobia<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-08-12T13:12:32+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n hello~ kpy![General]consider \"yanagi nagi\" in tags. since many ranked maps have it as tags[Hard]00:18:704 (1,2) - since (1) doesnt follow anything, it would be better to replace them with a slider00:20:336 (3) - kinda dislike how this slider flows, rotate by -25\u00b0 for a natural flow?00:22:785 (5) - i'd add hitsound to the end of this, maybe finish would sound great00:29:724 (1) - because background music disappears, remove this note or use lower volume for it?00:40:336 (1,2,3,4) - looks messy to me, adjust spacing a bit so that they can make a perfect diamond shapehttp:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/400141<\/a>00:44:826 (5,1) - i'd start the jump from (5) instead in order to follow vocal and piano better00:52:989 (1,2) - move these sliders a bit so that (2,3,1) can make a triangle? (nvm the messy placement in the SS ><http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/400146<\/a>01:14:826 - since slider tick exsists on weird place (blue tick), consider muting it. i dont think it sounds great01:17:479 (4) - feels empty cuz (1), (3) and (4)'s end have whistle but the beginning doenst have. so whistle here?02:10:540 - add 1\/2 slider here?02:37:479 (1,2) - add whistles at the beginning of both? o.o kinda empty here imo02:41:765 (1) - end this at 02:43:193 - and start break at 02:44:010 - ? spinner llength is enough and fits the music very well imo03:36:459 (1) - mute the end of spinner because it follows nothing[Normal]AR-1 for consistency with hard diff? also AR5 is too fast for such a calm song imo00:22:785 (3) - same reason as hard, add finish at the end?00:29:724 (1) - same as hard02:09:316 (2) - sounds odd to me end this on white tick?02:34:622 (5) - this combo is quite long compared with others, so newcombo here?02:40:336 (1) - same suggestion as hard03:13:398 (4,5) - i prefer something like this. this one fits music better imohttp:\/\/puu.sh\/QZyK<\/a>03:19:928 (3,4) - i think (3) should be more curved to make blanket betterhttp:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/400162<\/a>03:26:459 (4) - add newcombo cuz the combo is kinda long03:39:520 (3) - newcombo here too due to change of melodythat's all from menice song and map. i think it deserves 2stars~ good luck with ranking!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 5k1f2c