{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Hinsvar<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,826 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Hinsvar<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-04T07:14:33+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n ...Hi.Damn, I'm seriously bored.Saw this on #malay, so... I guess I'll just do a mod.*Bolded<\/strong> = Unrankable\/strongly suggested; red<\/span> = Highly suggested (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions\/rants.>GeneralNot sure if I'm crazy or everything's really off, but I got 93 as the correct offset. That means -27. Uh... might be just me.<\/span> (Timestamps are showing the time on offset 120.)<\/li><\/ol>>Easy00:08:115 (1) - Swap NC with 00:09:448 (2)? I'm sure enough the song 'demands' that (I still can't find a better explanation for this *sigh*).<\/span><\/li>01:17:448 (1) - Remove NC?<\/span> (Reason: ^)<\/li>01:22:781 (1) - ^<\/li><\/ol>>NormalI actually don't really like how almost all notes slightly overlap each other, but eh, whatever. Also, some notes' placements look... odd, but actually listing all of them will make this an epicly long nazi mod you that you (most likely) wouldn't want to accept, anyway, so let it be.<\/li>00:15:786 (4,1) - What's with the spacing inconsistency? I know you want to encircle (4) with (1), but...<\/span><\/li>00:42:453 (4,1) - ^ (Stuff about spacing; not sure if I missed more on the way.)<\/li>00:53:120 (4,1) - ^<\/li>01:13:453 (3,4) - ^ (Okay, I'll stop here since it looks like you're doing them intentionally, but I just want to say that these things are... not recommended.)<\/li><\/ol>>Hard00:41:453 (3) - Move the last anchor point to (88,240) and make one at (72,208)? It looks... weird, currently. Don't know how to explain; I'm really bad at explaining things...<\/li>01:14:286 (5) - Move the first anchor point to (128,280)?<\/li><\/ol>Insane looks fine.I actually want to rant about the jarring placements of the notes on all diffs... but eh, I think our mapping styles are just too different from each other Will shoot star when I have one since this is a good mapset, IMO, but for now...Feel free to call me an useless guy if you find this useless \\:D\/<\/span>Good luck on the way I swear, I'm not a stalker.<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,702 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-04T07:28:21+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n will check your mod in home hinsvar-kun lagi di warnet nich<\/span>thank you XD you're stalker!!!! wwwww *jk<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Miya<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,690 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Miya<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-04T12:03:41+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n I think the current offset need to be tune-up again. -8 from the current offset is more great <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,702 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-04T12:19:34+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n done~ makasih <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n Tarantino_old\n <\/span>\n \n \n \n \n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Tarantino_old<\/span>\n\n \n 2012-07-04T17:03:45+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n [Insane]00:22:036 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:22:120 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:29:370 (9) - Unsnapped circle. 00:29:453 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:29:453 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:32:703 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:32:786 (4) - Unsnapped circle.[Hard]00:29:370 (6) - Unsnapped circle. 00:29:453 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:29:453 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).00:06:112 (2) - Use 1.2x distance spacing on this note, like you did with the spacing here 00:02:112 (4,5,1,2) and here 00:04:112 (3,4,5).00:07:445 (4) - ^00:19:778 (6,1) - Don't make these notes overlap, maybe make it look like this?<\/a>00:24:112 (1) - Increase spacing on this slider, maybe like this?<\/a>00:37:445 (1,2) - Don't make these notes overlap.00:41:778 (4) - ^Good luck getting this ranked! <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,702 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-05T04:06:05+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n thank you ~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,082 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Chewin<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-05T16:22:25+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi yasora, from my queue ;3[General]Fine ~[Easy]00:04:778 (2) - Just nazi but move this circle to x:288 y:176 to center the blanket with 00:02:778 (1) .w.00:42:778 (1) - I think default soft finish fits much better here, what about to use it? ;300:49:445 (2) - 2nd waypoint 1 grid left to give a symmetry between 00:48:112 (1,2)00:53:445 (1) - Since the kiai time starts here, I suggest you again to use the default soft finish, it's better.Oh awesome. Just small suggestions ;p[Normal]I would use AR -100:05:445 (1,3) - Use finishes here instead of these whistles. Just for consistency with easy diff00:42:778 (1) - Same of easy ;p00:46:778 (3) - I think 2 grid up is better00:53:445 (1) - Same of easy plz01:22:445 (4) - This circle touches the hp bar and.. I don't think is good to see here. Consider to move it[Hard]00:42:778 (1) - You already know00:53:445 (1) - ^00:56:112 (1) - Bad blanket, improve it just moving the 3rd waypoint to x:480 y:100Nice >w<[Insane]I would increase the SV to 2.20 since this is really easy s: Almost like the hard one00:21:278 (8) - Move to x:132 y:284 plz to keep a spacing consistency with 00:20:945 (6,7)00:40:112 (1) - I'm not nazi here but this slider is ugly to see, since it's asymmetric D: Just improve it in this way: http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/362258<\/a>192,348,40112,6,0,B|240:320|288:344|288:344|308:292|376:292,1,200,2|8<\/pre>00:42:778 (1) - Sameee00:53:445 (1) - ^01:14:612 (8,1,2) - 1 grid up here for spacing consistency with 01:14:278 (6,7)Awesome maps really, just small suggestions to improve them -w-Go speedrank and.. have a star from me. Good luck ;3<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,702 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-05T17:25:30+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n arigatou~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n suzutsukikanade<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 653 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n suzutsukikanade<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-05T17:49:08+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Ow no this >w<<\/del> Yasora-chan u are sugoi desu >\/\/\/<<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,702 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yasora<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-06T00:41:04+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n suzutsukikanade wrote:<\/h4>Ow no this >w<<\/del> Yasora-chan u are sugoi desu >\/\/\/<<\/blockquote><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Snowy Dream<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,195 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Snowy Dream<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-07-06T08:38:12+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n 5s5y2j