{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,061 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-05-31T05:16:47+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Leorda wrote:<\/h4>Hi there[General]* Because this was short song, you need more diff right now....hm.. i think we alreasy have enough<\/span>[Fun!]00:06:055 (2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object., so this possibly hidden for themfix<\/span>00:26:469 (5) - The tail slider is almost offscreen it's ok ><<\/span>00:35:635 (1) - For easier diff, this object is too far from spiner. So beginners are hard to reach this while gameplay fix<\/span>[Fun! Fun! Fun!]00:29:385 (2) - Reverse this slider? (Ctrl+R) For making a better jump? no way!<\/span>00:29:385 (2) - Add slider or object here? Feels empty for me..... wut? D: (added 00:31:885 (7) )<\/span>That's all I got..... Friday + Glee Cast + Nightcore'd = Are you serious?hmm i like this song<\/del> why not?<\/span><\/blockquote>Frostmourne wrote:<\/h4>Hi , from my queueFun!<\/span><\/u>fine YEAH!<\/span>Fun! Fun! Fun!<\/span><\/u>00:31:469 (x) - add note here at 00:31:260 (5) - , very empty without this note. also it doesn't make a huge jump so this is good choice to do. fix<\/span>00:32:927 (x) - ^ , I will add at 00:33:135 (1) - head if I were you fix<\/span>oh end, really fast mod \/o\/Good Luck <\/blockquote>thank you! meow ;3ikari_kyon wrote:<\/h4>Leorda wrote:<\/h4>Friday + Glee Cast + Nightcore'd = Are you serious?<\/blockquote>grumd wrote:<\/h4>OH FUCK<\/strong><\/blockquote>xD<\/blockquote>lol. i'm not going to stop mapping song like this \/<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n -Nothing-To-Do-Here-\n <\/span>\n \n \n \n \n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n -Nothing-To-Do-Here-<\/span>\n\n \n 2012-06-01T10:27:11+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \u041f\u0440\u0438\u0432\u0435\u0442.Fun! Fun! Fun!00:50:424 (5) -whistle \u0442\u0443\u0442 \u043d\u0435 \u0437\u0432\u0443\u0447\u0438\u0442 \u043c\u043e\u0436\u0435\u0442 \u043b\u0443\u0447\u0448\u0435 \u043a\u043b\u044d\u043f? 00:57:506 (6) - \u0438\u043c\u0445\u043e \u043b\u0443\u0447\u0448\u0435 \u0437\u0432\u0443\u0447\u0430\u0442\u044c \u0431\u0443\u0434\u0435\u0442 \u0442\u0430\u043a : http:\/\/puu.sh\/y5YI<\/a>01:02:714 (2,3,4) - \u043d\u0435 \u0442\u043e , \u043c\u043e\u0436\u0435\u0442 \u043b\u0443\u0447\u0448\u0435 \u0447\u0442\u043e \u043d\u0438\u0431\u0443\u0434\u044c \u0432\u0440\u043e\u0434\u0435 \u044d\u0442\u043e\u0433\u043e? (http:\/\/puu.sh\/y5Zg<\/a>)P.S. \u0423\u0434\u0430\u0447\u0438 \u0441 \u043a\u0430\u0440\u0442\u043e\u0439 , \u043d\u0435 \u0434\u0443\u043c\u0430\u044e \u0447\u0442\u043e \u043c\u043e\u0439 \"\u043c\u043e\u0434\" \u0447\u0435\u043c \u043d\u0438\u0431\u0443\u0434\u044c \u043f\u043e\u043c\u043e\u0436\u0435\u0442 \u043a\u0440\u043e\u043c\u0435 \u043b\u0438\u0448\u043d\u0435\u0433\u043e \u043f\u043e\u0441\u0442\u0430 <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,061 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-01T10:56:55+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n EvilElvis wrote:<\/h4>\u041f\u0440\u0438\u0432\u0435\u0442.Fun! Fun! Fun![fix]<\/span> 00:50:424 (5) -whistle \u0442\u0443\u0442 \u043d\u0435 \u0437\u0432\u0443\u0447\u0438\u0442 \u043c\u043e\u0436\u0435\u0442 \u043b\u0443\u0447\u0448\u0435 \u043a\u043b\u044d\u043f?[add]<\/span> 00:57:506 (6) - \u0438\u043c\u0445\u043e \u043b\u0443\u0447\u0448\u0435 \u0437\u0432\u0443\u0447\u0430\u0442\u044c \u0431\u0443\u0434\u0435\u0442 \u0442\u0430\u043a : http:\/\/puu.sh\/y5YI<\/a>[fix]<\/span>01:02:714 (2,3,4) - \u043d\u0435 \u0442\u043e , \u043c\u043e\u0436\u0435\u0442 \u043b\u0443\u0447\u0448\u0435 \u0447\u0442\u043e \u043d\u0438\u0431\u0443\u0434\u044c \u0432\u0440\u043e\u0434\u0435 \u044d\u0442\u043e\u0433\u043e? (http:\/\/puu.sh\/y5Zg<\/a>)P.S. \u0423\u0434\u0430\u0447\u0438 \u0441 \u043a\u0430\u0440\u0442\u043e\u0439 , \u043d\u0435 \u0434\u0443\u043c\u0430\u044e \u0447\u0442\u043e \u043c\u043e\u0439 \"\u043c\u043e\u0434\" \u0447\u0435\u043c \u043d\u0438\u0431\u0443\u0434\u044c \u043f\u043e\u043c\u043e\u0436\u0435\u0442 \u043a\u0440\u043e\u043c\u0435 \u043b\u0438\u0448\u043d\u0435\u0433\u043e \u043f\u043e\u0441\u0442\u0430 <\/blockquote> thanks<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Mara<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,907 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Mara<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-02T06:40:20+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Here's a quick opinion.In my opinion the map could end at 00:55:632 instead of 01:05:630. That fade out doesn't... sound cool. It's like you are having an amazing party and THEN suddenly police patrol comes and stops your party.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,061 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-02T07:00:43+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n LunaticMara wrote:<\/h4>Here's a quick opinion.In my opinion the map could end at 00:55:632 instead of 01:05:630. That fade out doesn't... sound cool. It's like you are having an amazing party and THEN suddenly police patrol comes and stops your party.<\/blockquote>yea, thanksno time to explain! cops here!<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Mystica<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 798 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Mystica<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-03T05:27:03+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n seems all fine for me..So just star for it<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,061 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-03T06:12:03+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n o.o thanks<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n haha5957<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,433 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n haha5957<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-06-04T15:01:57+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n RED = Probably Must Thing. You better fix it. <\/span>ORANGE = It is Must thing, but I'm not sure about my solution. you might not follow me, but you have to do something with it.<\/span>BOLD = Not a Must thing, but I strongly suggest you to fix about this<\/strong>Regular = Just Suggestions. might improve your map, but not quite important. First of all, I don't like to point out everything out, I usually point out about general ideas about how the map can improved. <\/strong>[General]- You need star rating Under 3 no matter what. (3.24 according to F5 should be fine) <\/span>Plus, 2 standard difficulty on 50 seconds song is just too lazy. please map easy, I hope you don't try to drop your Fun! difficulty to under 3.24.<\/span>- The BPM of this music is 144.00 as the offset goes too off by the end of the song. <\/span>- ] Offset is slightly off even after that. I would say 652 as offset <\/span>- As you change the Offset and BPM, you must resnap your green lines (timing sections) to the ticks.<\/span>- I think this Miku-ish Background isn't related to the song. I don't think having unrelated chracter as BG is a good idea 'o' well, since it looks like having fun, this might be fine.[Easy (Fun!)]- Generally I don't think using too many 1\/2 streams on the easiest difficulty is a good idea.- You can work more on locating sliders and circles. the beats might be fine, but some of them looks weird especially when 1\/2 circles comes after slider.for example, I would suggest to curve 00:24:608 (1) - this a little bit to make it nicer. it's just these small things, no big problem overall.00:12:929 (2,3) - These goes through under previous (3), and I don't think this \"feels\" good when you actually play it.[Hard (Fun! Fun! Fun!)] - I think you can curve some sliders \"slightly\" to make the map better. for example : 00:15:651 (1,3) this is much better when curved like http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/333738<\/a> This. <\/strong>nothing is a serious problem as it is (BPM and Offsets are the problems but excluding that), but it can improve more by doing some small works 'o'\/ good luck with the map~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,061 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n 2u3v3b