{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n jossieP<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,875 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n jossieP<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-05-20T02:31:21+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Leorda wrote:<\/h4>My poor mod, sorry orz<\/blockquote>hi bumper\/me dl witouth video[General]<\/h2>please use a empty file to silence sliderslide, dont use a 0 byte file, the rules are giving this file: http:\/\/up.ppy.sh\/files\/blank.wav<\/a>dont know if you have changed this since I ed before that leorda pointed this<\/li><\/ol><\/div>[Easy]<\/h2>00:03:100 (2) - please add a whislte to this note, the guitar accord make it sounds pretty low and senseless<\/li>00:03:850 (3) - finish to start of slider? you are using finish on 00:06:850 (1) that have a simmilar sound like pointed<\/li>00:18:850 (4) - place it a bit moar down, or change a bit shape of previous slider, this way the 2 sliders will get a better flow between of them <\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>also the whistle on repeat have no much sense witouth whistle on start and end, use whistle on start or end of slider o dont use it on repeat<\/li>00:24:850 (3) - flow problem... ok Ill supose that is your style, also simmilar suggest about whistleing of slider<\/li>00:27:100 (4) - maybe a finish on end of slider, a section of the song is clearly here and plus the violin have a long pull up here<\/li>00:30:850 (3) - code geass FTW, also maybe finish or whistle to end of slider, this slider sounds already pretty empty<\/li>00:36:850 (3) - the finish on repeat is not so good, add whistle to start, end and maybe change the sample of the repeat by a whistle<\/li>00:46:600 (1) - finish on repeat, a finish pattern here the ri part of the song, plus the previous and next finish<\/li>01:02:350 (4) - maybe a finish on end of slider, this is a personal prefference<\/li>01:14:350 (3) - finish on repeat and end, yes the rise down part of song also sounds nice with finish pattern<\/li>01:31:600 (3) - check spacing Ovo<\/li><\/ol>simple [Easy] just as I like<\/div>[Normal]<\/h2>00:21:850 (1) - finish? section ends, so..<\/li>00:27:100 (6) - finish to end of slider: section ends, violin...<\/li>00:38:725 - nice hitsounding change<\/li>00:47:350 (3) - finish? ri part, also<\/li>00:48:850 - if you added the finish from up add a dircle with finish here and move the spin 1\/1 snap forward oh also shorten it 1\/1 snap for end it corretly<\/li>01:03:850 (4) - finish to start<\/li>01:04:600 (5) - finish<\/li>01:27:850 (1) - finish instead whistle?<\/li><\/ol><\/div>[Nich]<\/h2>00:13:787 (5) - maybe add a new combo here?, the follow point that exist between this and previous may be a bit confusing with the follow point that exist with the next circle, also make it a bit moar readable than currently<\/li>00:27:193 (6,7) - hmmmmmmmmm maybe make a manual stack leniency, just like 00:26:162 (1,2)there are not significative problems with patterns, rhythm and flow here, just some extreme jumps for a [Hard] diff, and some confusing patterns because ar, dont mind me a lot since I use to make pretty simple [Hard] diffs >_<<\/li><\/ol><\/div>[Insane]<\/h2>nice symmetry, dont need to point nothing here, just a suggest, maybe in future maps, try to make some no symmetrical jumps, just maybe, currently the symmetry is something that I really love, I use this a lot lately <v<<\/div>hey you dont want a taiko diff?<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n BeatofIke<\/a>\n\n \n Beatmap Nominator\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/a>\n\n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,176 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n BeatofIke<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-05-20T02:33:08+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Quick reponse: Thanks for the mod.EDIT: Bumper meets Stalker. <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n jossieP<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,875 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n jossieP<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-05-20T02:37:42+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \/3\/<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Melophobia<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,230 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Melophobia<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-05-20T07:03:49+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Chata <3[General]volume is too boring and should be more intoned imo. try these volume to make more exciting in all diffs.00:00:850 - 60%00:15:850 - 50%00:36:662 - 60%00:53:350 - 70%[Easy]00:18:850 (4) - felt empty, how about whistle at the repeat of this slider?00:42:100 (3) - add finish at the end?00:48:850 (2) - sounds weird and doesnt fit here, end this at 00:49:412 - instead, because accent is there.01:02:350 (4) - end this at 01:03:662 - instead01:18:100 (1) - try this http:\/\/puu.sh\/vIH4<\/a>01:31:600 (3) - 1.5 rhythm may be hard for beginner, delete this note and add a repeat to previous spinner? and it will look better because it'll be symmetricalnice, but too easy and boring imo. and difficulty gap between Easy and Normal is too huge.also about putting whistle pattern, i disagree with you. you should put them at 1st white tick (downbeat)[Normal]00:38:350 (3,5) - remove claps, they start suddenly and doesnt fit here. if you remove them, next part will be emphasized a lot01:01:975 (1,2,3) - they dont fit music well, try something like thishttp:\/\/puu.sh\/vIKO<\/a>01:18:100 (3,4,5,6) - ^ same reason. http:\/\/puu.sh\/vILn<\/a>[Nich's Hard]* shouldnt name be \"nich's Hard\" ?AR+1. the current one is really slow and hard to read some pattern.00:02:912 (9) - change rhythm to put clap constantly?00:10:037 (1) - start this at 00:09:943 - 00:10:037 (1) - remove clap. if not, you should add it to 00:13:225 (3) - and 00:13:975 - as well for consistency00:24:287 (8,9,10) - spacing is too huge for a Hard diff.00:28:975 (5,6) - ^ same. \u2606 is fine but (5,6,1)'s spacing should be lower00:39:568 (4) - overmapped. delete this note please00:46:975 (3,4,5) - spacing is too huge.. and it doesnt make sense imo00:47:912 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^00:49:975 (1) - felt empty, add whistle or finish? whistle is better to me but up to you.01:04:975 (4,5,6,7) - overmapped, these are not suitable for a Hard diff01:06:287 (2,3,4) - flow is nice, but spacing is too huge.01:08:162 (8) - x:176 y:192? this jump is destroying your nice flow. so i'd suggest unstacking01:11:537 (1) - start this at 01:11:443 - 01:13:225 - add note to put clap consistently01:14:537 (1) - start this at 01:14:443 - and add whistle01:16:225 (1) - add clap instead of whistle01:16:975 (4) - ^01:18:662 (4) - add finish01:19:225 (6) - ^ instead of whistle01:25:975 (8,9,1) - spacing is huge01:29:537 (2,2,2,2) - add finishes[Insane]00:09:850 (1) - this clap is not suitable here, since you dont add clap in next part00:42:850 (1) - add finish at the beginning01:18:662 (4) - ^01:19:975 (7) - add clap at the beginning01:29:537 (2,2,2,2) - add finishes01:31:975 (5,6) - add finish to 6 and remove it from 5that's all~ good luck!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Melophobia<\/a> 2012-05-20T07:06:44+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n BeatofIke<\/a>\n\n \n Beatmap Nominator\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/a>\n\n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,176 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n BeatofIke<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-05-20T07:04:22+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n lol wtf? XD That was fast. Thanks for the mod. Here is your well-deserved kudosu.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n BeatofIke<\/a>\n\n \n Beatmap Nominator\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/a>\n\n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,176 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n BeatofIke<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-05-20T08:12:17+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Melophobia wrote:<\/h4>Chata <3[General]volume is too boring and should be more intoned imo. try these volume to make more exciting in all diffs.00:00:850 - 60% fixed<\/span>00:15:850 - 50% fixed<\/span>00:36:662 - 60% fixed<\/span>00:53:350 - 70% fixed<\/span>[Easy]00:18:850 (4) - felt empty, how about whistle at the repeat of this slider? fixed<\/span>00:42:100 (3) - add finish at the end? meh, i guess<\/span>00:48:850 (2) - sounds weird and doesnt fit here, end this at 00:49:412 - instead, because accent is there. fixed<\/span>01:02:350 (4) - end this at 01:03:662 - instead fixed<\/span>01:18:100 (1) - try this http:\/\/puu.sh\/vIH4<\/a> fixed<\/span>01:31:600 (3) - 1.5 rhythm may be hard for beginner, delete this note and add a repeat to previous spinner? and it will look better because it'll be symmetrical fixed hopefully<\/span>nice, but too easy and boring imo. and difficulty gap between Easy and Normal is too huge. Yeah, that would be a problem wouldn't it?<\/span>also about putting whistle pattern, i disagree with you. you should put them at 1st white tick (downbeat) I might try it to see if it's better.<\/span>[Normal]00:38:350 (3,5) - remove claps, they start suddenly and doesnt fit here. if you remove them, next part will be emphasized a lot fixed<\/span>01:01:975 (1,2,3) - they dont fit music well, try something like thishttp:\/\/puu.sh\/vIKO<\/a> Nah, It will mess up my pattern.<\/span>01:18:100 (3,4,5,6) - ^ same reason. Same as above<\/span>http:\/\/puu.sh\/vILn<\/a>[Insane]00:09:850 (1) - this clap is not suitable here, since you dont add clap in next part lol wow. How did that get there? XD<\/span>00:42:850 (1) - add finish at the beginning fixed<\/span>01:18:662 (4) - ^ fixed<\/span>01:19:975 (7) - add clap at the beginning It sounds weird to me.<\/span>01:29:537 (2,2,2,2) - add finishes fixed<\/span>01:31:975 (5,6) - add finish to 6 and remove it from 5 fixed<\/span>that's all~ good luck!<\/blockquote>I might need to remap Easy difficulty due to difficulty gap or make another difficulty between Easy and Normal.<\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Nichiyouki<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,579 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Nichiyouki<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-05-20T10:03:02+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n ikari_kyon and Melophobia, thanks for mod~ Some fixed, but mod is many useful<\/span> : Chata - Precious Wing (Short Ver.) (BeatofIke) [Nich's Hard].osu<\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Star Stream<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n 3z3o4