{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n [CSGA]Ar3sgice<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,298 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n [CSGA]Ar3sgice<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-03-11T09:29:38+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi, from my queue<\/a>Hate<\/span><\/span>00:14:030 (2,2) - 1\/2 earlier<\/li><\/ol>Hurt<\/span><\/span>01:21:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - the sliders in this part is a little hard to see @.@<\/li>01:41:967 (4) - imo it's better to move this note to 01:42:061<\/li>01:47:030 (1) - this spinner should end on white tick...<\/li>03:24:530 (1) - ^<\/li>03:19:467 (4) - I think it's better to move this note to 03:19:561<\/li>04:02:780 (1,2,3,4) - here? http:\/\/up.ppy.sh\/files\/screenshot267-0.jpg<\/a><\/li><\/ol>Eikka's Heart<\/span><\/span>this bg ._.<\/li>00:42:530 (1,2,3) - this part like this? http:\/\/up.ppy.sh\/files\/screenshot268-0.jpg<\/a><\/li>01:22:655 (6,7) - ctrl+r?<\/li>01:23:030 (1,2) - ctrl+r?<\/li>01:32:405 (3,4) - ^<\/li><\/ol>that's allGood luck~<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sirjuyt<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 172 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sirjuyt<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-03-11T09:38:03+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hinsvar wrote:<\/h4>Hi there. Time to begin the mod, I suppose?*Usual note: Gold<\/span> ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red<\/span> are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.>GeneralI think it's fine to say that everything's fine here... <\/li><\/ol>>Hate03:29:780 (4) - Add Whistle at the beginning of the slider? no change due to sound parrten<\/span><\/li><\/ol>>HurtIMO, it sounds pretty quiet here. Make things a bit louder, maybe? 0 0 I think ther're loud enough<\/span><\/li>01:47:030 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too fast? Maybe make this and the next spinner into one long note? OK<\/span> ;_; too many modder referred to<\/span><\/li>03:24:530 (1) - ^ ^<\/span><\/li><\/ol>>eikka's HeartAR -1?<\/li>This one sounds pretty quiet, too, overall.<\/li>01:30:530 (1,2,3,4) - ...This distance snap, even for a jump, is ridiculous. Are you sure with this?<\/li>01:51:905 (8) - Stack below the end of the previous slider instead of the beginning?<\/li><\/ol>Okay, that was pretty good. Song was pretty nice, too.Good luck on the way <\/blockquote>yay~ thank you for mod eikkaleyd wrote:<\/h4>Yes it sounds quiet, but we have used 100\uff05 volume._.So, maybe we can change the MP3 file instead.<\/blockquote>._. \u771f\u7684\u807d\u4e0d\u5230\u55ce\uff0c\u6211\u9019\u88e1\u80fd\u807d\u5f97\u51fa\u4f86<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sirjuyt<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 172 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sirjuyt<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-03-11T09:48:21+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n [CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:<\/h4>Hi, from my queue<\/a>Hate<\/span><\/span>00:14:030 (2,2) - 1\/2 earlier \u561b \u4e4b\u5f8c\u90fd\u5b9a\u578b\u6210\u9019\u500b\u6a21\u5f0f\u4e86 \u6539\u6703\u5f88\u5947\u602a<\/span><\/li><\/ol>Hurt<\/span><\/span>01:21:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - the sliders in this part is a little hard to see @.@ \u5176\u5be6\u5c31\u662f\u56db\u65b9\u90fd\u7e5e\u4e00\u6b21\uff0c\u6eff\u5bb9\u6613\u8b80\u7684<\/span><\/li>01:41:967 (4) - imo it's better to move this note to 01:42:061 \u611f\u89ba\u6539\u4e86\u7834\u58deflow 0 0<\/span><\/li>01:47:030 (1) - this spinner should end on white tick... fixed.<\/span><\/li>03:24:530 (1) - ^ ^<\/span><\/li>03:19:467 (4) - I think it's better to move this note to 03:19:561 \u540c01:41:967 <\/span><\/li>04:02:780 (1,2,3,4) - here? http:\/\/up.ppy.sh\/files\/screenshot267-0.jpg<\/a> o o \u6bd4\u8f03\u559c\u6b61\u73fe\u5728\u9019\u7a2e\u6392\u6cd5<\/span><\/li><\/ol>Eikka's Heart<\/span><\/span>this bg ._.<\/li>00:42:530 (1,2,3) - this part like this? http:\/\/up.ppy.sh\/files\/screenshot268-0.jpg<\/a><\/li>01:22:655 (6,7) - ctrl+r?<\/li>01:23:030 (1,2) - ctrl+r?<\/li>01:32:405 (3,4) - ^<\/li><\/ol>that's allGood luck~<\/span><\/blockquote>~\u9084\u6c92\u4e0a\u50b3\u5c31\u4f86\u4e86 XDthanks mod <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n p3n<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 947 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n p3n<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-03-11T21:06:33+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n [General]<\/strong>The mp3 seems to be not normalized. It is extremely loud. Maybe you can change that without altering the offset. But you should find someone who knows the tools to do it first.[Hate]<\/strong>00:14:217 (2) - don't leave out the downbeat on 00:14:030. At this point the player will not have picked up the beat by playing. Generally you should map the downbeats that start a new phrase or new chord. Maybe use a short 1\/2 slider to cover it: http:\/\/puu.sh\/knUN<\/a>00:17:217 (2) - ^00:20:217 (3) - ^00:50:217 (2) - ^00:53:217 (2) - ^00:56:217 (2) - ^01:51:717 (2) - ^01:54:717 (2) - ^01:57:717 (3) - ^Other than that pretty solid map. A bit repetitive but the song is very long so it should be ok. Plays nice on DT\/HR\/HD.[Hurt]<\/strong>02:05:967 (4) - maybe Ctrl + R for better flow04:02:592 (5,1,2) - the difference in jump distance doesn't flow\/play very nice here imo. Maybe try altering the pattern to have a consistent jump distance for the last 2 combos: http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/263789<\/a>256,248,242030,5,0256,168,242217,1,0256,88,242405,1,0256,72,242499,1,0256,56,242592,1,8424,120,242780,5,0256,160,243061,1,088,120,243342,1,0256,56,243530,1,4<\/pre>Very nice map. Even with the long song it is not boring at all.[eikka's Heart]<\/strong>00:41:780 (1,2) - this jump seems a bit huge here, especially when there is nothing in the song to indicate it. Maybe just use the same sliders as before 00:41:030 (1,2) and just reverse them (Ctrl + R)00:42:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - \u266500:52:936 - add a note here to make it consistent with all the previous beatplacementsSome really unique patterns. I like it. Some things are not very \"logical\" but are still playable.I couldn't find very much. Maybe I'm just tired today Solid mapset if you can fix the volume of the mp3. Have this <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sirjuyt<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 172 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sirjuyt<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-03-11T22:10:27+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n p3n wrote:<\/h4>[General]<\/strong>The mp3 seems to be not normalized. It is extremely loud. Maybe you can change that without altering the offset. But you should find someone who knows the tools to do it first. ok.. I'll try to fix.<\/span>[Hate]<\/strong>00:14:217 (2) - don't leave out the downbeat on 00:14:030. At this point the player will not have picked up the beat by playing. Generally you should map the downbeats that start a new phrase or new chord. Maybe use a short 1\/2 slider to cover it: http:\/\/puu.sh\/knUN<\/a>00:17:217 (2) - ^00:20:217 (3) - ^00:50:217 (2) - ^00:53:217 (2) - ^00:56:217 (2) - ^01:51:717 (2) - ^01:54:717 (2) - ^01:57:717 (3) - ^ They're hard to fix due to distance, and it would exceed 3.00 star I think ? <\/span> Other than that pretty solid map. A bit repetitive but the song is very long so it should be ok. Plays nice on DT\/HR\/HD. [Hurt]<\/strong>02:05:967 (4) - maybe Ctrl + R for better flow yes fixed.<\/span>04:02:592 (5,1,2) - the difference in jump distance doesn't flow\/play very nice here imo. Maybe try altering the pattern to have a consistent jump distance for the last 2 combos: http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/263789<\/a>256,248,242030,5,0256,168,242217,1,0256,88,242405,1,0256,72,242499,1,0256,56,242592,1,8424,120,242780,5,0256,160,243061,1,088,120,243342,1,0256,56,243530,1,4<\/pre> changed by another way <\/span>Very nice map. Even with the long song it is not boring at all. [eikka's Heart]<\/strong>00:41:780 (1,2) - this jump seems a bit huge here, especially when there is nothing in the song to indicate it. Maybe just use the same sliders as before 00:41:030 (1,2) and just reverse them (Ctrl + R)00:42:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - \u266500:52:936 - add a note here to make it consistent with all the previous beatplacementsSome really unique patterns. I like it. Some things are not very \"logical\" but are still playable.I couldn't find very much. Maybe I'm just tired today Solid mapset if you can fix the volume of the mp3. Have this <\/blockquote>yeah~ thanks your mod and star <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Barney Stinson<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 298 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Barney Stinson<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-03-12T13:11:46+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n From my queueEasy:00:14:217 (2,3) - Hard rhythm for newbies. Delete and make like (1). Do this to all pattern like that Hurt: Find someone who does guest diff (on this queue too) or do a normal to reduce gap between this diff and easy, CheesusnothingInsane:Nazi, 00:29:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it like.... http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/264111<\/a>00:42:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nonsense antijump01:35:780 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - Not a good choise. If you stack a stream, notes will go down, and later you put a stream that goes up. This is wrong and ugly01:48:905 - Add a breakThat's all. Good luck!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sirjuyt<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 172 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n sirjuyt<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-03-12T14:18:31+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Barney Stinson wrote:<\/h4>From my queueEasy: ._. It's practically a normal diff.<\/span>00:14:217 (2,3) - Hard rhythm for newbies. Delete and make like (1). Do this to all pattern like that mah I don't think<\/span> Hurt: Find someone who does guest diff (on this queue too) or do a normal to reduce gap between this diff and easy, Cheesusnothing now the gap is reduced <\/span>Insane:Nazi, 00:29:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it like.... http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/264111<\/a>00:42:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nonsense antijump01:35:780 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - Not a good choise. If you stack a stream, notes will go down, and later you put a stream that goes up. This is wrong and ugly01:48:905 - Add a breakThat's all. Good luck!<\/blockquote>ok. thank mod~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n 1e4m1f