{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Loneight<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,332 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Loneight<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-02-17T13:45:19+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Here are just suggestion ~OAOIf you do not like , you can skip it .[General]I think that sliders can pull much pretty , you can refer other's map .[Normal]00:30:826 (3) - add NC ?!00:33:267 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) add NC ?!00:37:453 (5,6,1) - (5) 1 grid left , 1 grid up , (6) 1 grid left , add NC and removed (1) NC !? like this http:\/\/puu.sh\/hfK7<\/a>452,96,37453,1,0400,60,37802,5,2<\/pre>[Collab]00:23:451 (6,1) - (6) add NC and remove (1) NC ?!00:36:058 (6) - add NC ?!00:43:384 (8) - add NC ?!00:50:012 (9,1) - (9) remove NC and (1) add NC ?!sorry to my poor Englishgood song~ and expect it to be ranked.[Easy] I think it is ok beacaus I can't find any suggestion<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Shana Aisaka<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 467 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Shana Aisaka<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-02-18T02:33:57+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>Frostmourne wrote this ~<\/a>Frostmourne wrote:<\/h4>Hi Hi ~ >w<\"<\/span>Easy<\/u><\/span>00:21:009 (4) - new combo? Fix ~<\/span>00:27:288 (1) - move to x:104 y:36 ? I think overlap with 00:24:497 (1) - is not good may be Fix?<\/span>00:27:288 (1) - remove new combo ? Fix ~<\/span>00:30:826 (1,2,3,4) - try using same slider and use ctlr+< and ctrl+r I think it's better hmm.. Fix??<\/span>00:36:407 (5) - spacing Fix ~<\/span>00:41:988 (3) - you should new combo at the start of kiai time Okay ~ Fix ~<\/span>00:42:686 (1) - remove new combo it if you did ^ Fix ~<\/span>Normal<\/u><\/span>I think you should add more whistle on single note , it can make better sound for example : 00:03:218 (2,3,4) - , 00:03:218 (2,3,4) - at the start of the slider , 00:15:427 (4,6) - , 00:18:916 (1) - , around this :300:31:523 (1) - new combo here Fix ~<\/span>Collab<\/u><\/span>00:08:102 (2) - up 1 grid look better Fix ~<\/span>00:09:497 (4) - left 3 grid ^ Fix ~<\/span>00:19:265 (1) - not overlap with 3 is better :3 okay ~ Fix~<\/span>00:44:430 (1) - in my opinion , this is very near the last note Yeah, Fix ~<\/span>good luck Thanks.<\/span> <\/blockquote><\/div><\/div>Thank you !! >w<\"<\/span>l1106188 wrote this ~<\/a>l1106188 wrote:<\/h4>Here are just suggestion ~OAOIf you do not like , you can skip it . This mod is helpful ~ >w<\"<\/span>[General]I think that sliders can pull much pretty , you can refer other's map . @w@\"<\/span>[Normal]00:30:826 (3) - add NC ?! Okay ~<\/span>00:33:267 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) add NC ?! Fix ~<\/span>00:37:453 (5,6,1) - (5) 1 grid left , 1 grid up , (6) 1 grid left , add NC and removed (1) NC !? like this http:\/\/puu.sh\/hfK7<\/a> Fix ~<\/span>452,96,37453,1,0400,60,37802,5,2<\/pre>[Collab]00:23:451 (6,1) - (6) add NC and remove (1) NC ?! Fix ~<\/span>00:36:058 (6) - add NC ?! Fix ~<\/span>00:43:384 (8) - add NC ?! Fix ~<\/span>00:50:012 (9,1) - (9) remove NC and (1) add NC ?! Fix ~<\/span>sorry to my poor Englishgood song~ and expect it to be ranked. Thanks ! >w<\"<\/span>[Easy] I think it is ok beacaus I can't find any suggestion<\/blockquote><\/div><\/div>Arigatou! Okay! All is Fixed!!<\/span><\/strong>UPDATE!!<\/span><\/strong><\/span> <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n hillaryzx<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 363 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n hillaryzx<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-02-18T09:00:44+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi~ my mod for this map~(but short... T.T)Nyan.... :3General<\/strong><\/span>- disabke letterbox in break to all diff....Easy<\/strong><\/span>AR -1Normal<\/strong><\/span>00:23:799 - add a circle here?00:40:244 - add a note here..Collab<\/strong><\/span>Seems good... Now, I'll give star and take my leave....<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Shana Aisaka<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 467 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Shana Aisaka<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-02-18T09:20:51+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n hillaryzx wrote:<\/h4>Hi~ my mod for this map~(but short... T.T)Nyan.... :3 Nyaan !! >w<\"<\/span>General<\/strong><\/span>- disabke letterbox in break to all diff.... Opps ~ I forgot about that . >.<\" Fix ~<\/span>Easy<\/strong><\/span>AR -1 okay ~<\/span>Normal<\/strong><\/span>00:23:799 - add a circle here? Nice idea~<\/span>00:40:244 - add a note here.. okay ~ >w<\"<\/span>Collab<\/strong><\/span>Seems good... Arigatou<\/span> Now, I'll give star and take my leave....<\/blockquote>Arigatou hillaryzx-kun ~ and for the star as well >w<\"Alright! Fixed!!<\/span><\/strong>UPDATE!!<\/span><\/strong><\/span> <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n LaceWingfield<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 392 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n LaceWingfield<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-02-19T03:27:30+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n hi ~mod request via in-game PM~[Easy]<\/strong>00:12:637 (4): 1 grid up seems better?00:16:823 (4,1): 1 grid right?00:32:221 (2): 1 grid left?00:35:112 (4,5): 1 grid right?[Normal]<\/strong>00:07:753 (4): 1 grid left?[Collab]<\/strong>00:03:218 (4~6): spacing is different from the earlier notes.00:13:382 (4): like this? http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/246280<\/a>00:25:544 (4): spacing00:27:985 (3): 2 grid up, 1 grid right?00:32:570 (6): 1 grid down?00:36:058 (1): spacing00:50:709 (3): 1 grid rightnice map overall!have star >w<~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Niva<\/a>\n\n \n Global \n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,190 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Niva<\/a>\n\n \n 2012-02-19T04:18:22+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi, Shana Aisaka~I'm here for mod4mod again, if you don't mind >_<[General]<\/span><\/strong><\/span>-> I wonder, the song is only 00:57, and ing with the video only costs ~3MB, so why not use a 192kbps audio instead<\/u> (if any)? It won't greatly affect file size, but greatly affect sound quality :3-> As this song is actually a sad-paced one, you might want to add a silver (or gold) slider border<\/u>. Open the .osu file manually, and add these codes below \"Combo4 : 0,128,255\":Silver:SliderBorder : 211,211,211Gold:SliderBorder : 254,239,114<\/pre>This is fully optional, though.-> Another thing worth mentioning is a new timing section should be placed on 00:14:730 with 85.90 BPM<\/u>. Yep, the piano gets slower there, and keep using 86.00 there will result in an incorrect timing.-> Oh, and Nicol Armarfi<\/u> to the tags, just in case.[Easy]<\/span><\/strong><\/span>00:02:171 (1,2,1,2,3) - I don't quite get your whistle pattern here, although they sounds fine. The piano hits high note every 2\/1<\/u>, so in my opinion, it's better to keep the whistling consistent at 2\/1 here<\/li>00:07:055 (3) - Definitely moved way too up imo. Move it ~5 grids down and right, and it will flow better with the previous (2) (:<\/li>00:12:637 (4,1,2,3) - (optional)<\/em> Although it's not a thing you must do, but it's better to arrange them in an arc like below, to build up more flow and avoid (2) touching the next (4):<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:21:009 (1) - (optional)<\/em> This one also, consider moving this few grids up to prevent touching 00:20:311 (3)<\/li>00:24:497 (1,3) - Woah, ugly overlap imo. Just be creative with your slider shapes though<\/u> - this won't be hard to fix xD<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>Also whistle on (1)'s end, if you want to (:<\/li>00:32:221 (2) - (optional)<\/em> You could easily make a blanket pattern as you did on 00:33:616 (3,4) with (2)'s end being stacked to (6) though, it will play more beautiful imo :3<\/li> 656v4