{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n blissfulyoshi<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,755 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2008<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n blissfulyoshi<\/a>\n\n \n 2011-12-29T21:26:44+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Armin wrote:<\/h4>[Easy]<\/strong>00:13:967 (1) - This slider's start is not snapped properly with the second red section... If you fix this don't forget to snap the slider's end too Done. That is a large mistake on my part.<\/span>00:11:617 (x) - I'd add a break here anyway; the reason is quite fair, considering that this is the easiest difficulty, in order to prevent empty spaces where the HP Drain Bar would inevitably decrease its value. In addition, it not shows so bad At least... consider to add it only here 00:21:992? I added the 2 small breaks before and after this instrumental section.<\/span>01:05:307 (4) - Aww I expect its end always 1\/2 bpm early, just because you followed the vocal voice in the chorus >.< Hmm, the voice lands on the white tick from what I hear, and I did not try to follow too many holds in this diff.... Still I sort of see your point. I guess if someone else suggest the same thing I will change it.<\/span>01:14:612 (2,3,4) - Where is the clap-pattern that you followed here? 01:09:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - (<- in other words, I'd add a clap on (3)) Fixed.<\/span>[Easy^2]<\/strong>00:21:671 (3) - I'd make it end 1\/2 before if I were you... if you agree with me I suggest you to use the command scale of the editor (ctrl+shift+s) Done.<\/span>01:26:484 (4) - What if you add a finish here? :3 Done.<\/span>[Easy^4]<\/strong>01:27:045 (1) - A whistle at the end sounds just awful for my ears... consider to remove it please Removed.<\/span>01:04:505 (4,5) - What a weird jump o.o this kills the flows by the way, but if you like it in this way... well, I guess it's up to you xD I agree, the flow is weird, rearranged 4 and 5 to try to compensate for it.<\/span>Sexy map by the way ;P Thanks!<\/span><\/blockquote>Thanks a lot for the mod Armin, esp the snapping in Easy.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kirino Kousaka<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 655 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kirino Kousaka<\/a>\n\n \n 2011-12-30T05:56:02+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hello!~ Here's my guest diff finally finished~: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Kirino's Easy^3].osu<\/a>I hope you like it~ ><<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Anshi_old<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 103 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Anshi_old<\/a>\n\n \n 2011-12-30T06:15:36+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n [Generally]<\/strong><\/span><\/span>I found that my style in map is the same with urs, maybe similar ...<\/span><\/span>Easy<\/a>00:01:554 (2) - following the tone, i would make it higher(X 104, Y 80)00:07:630 (2) - ^ (X256,Y208)00:31:938 (4) - design a new pattern for suiting the tone 400,216,31938,2,0,B|456:232|376:272|304:288|376:304|392:328|376:312|416:312,1,160<\/pre>00:51:190 (2) - althought i dont think you would agree with me , i still wanna say that dont cover it .Especially in easy diff.<\/li><\/ul><\/div><\/div><\/span>Easy^2<\/a>is fine i think.<\/div><\/div><\/span>Easy^4<\/a>00:32:420 (6) ~ 00:32:420 - i would use two notes in the two points , rather than a 1\/2 slider.00:47:981 (3) - i would replace whistle with clap00:49:104 (6) - ^00:50:388 (3) - add clap00:51:029 (6) - ^00:56:323 (1,2,3) - add finish ?<\/li><\/ul><\/div><\/div>uh... would you mind having a look at my map....http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/s\/39729<\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kirino Kousaka<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 655 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kirino Kousaka<\/a>\n\n \n 2011-12-30T06:55:55+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Okay fixed the things you told me~ : Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Kirino's Easy^3].osu<\/a>I hope it's good now EDIT:<\/strong> Oopsy, I forgot to put :00:21:992 (4,6) - \"whistle\" at the start of these sliders.00:57:607 - NC here.Please put them for me XD<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n blissfulyoshi<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,755 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2008<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n blissfulyoshi<\/a>\n\n \n 2011-12-30T07:21:47+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Anshi wrote:<\/h4>[Generally]<\/strong><\/span><\/span>I found that my style in map is the same with urs, maybe similar ...<\/span><\/span>Easy<\/a>00:01:554 (2) - following the tone, i would make it higher(X 104, Y 80) Want to I played around with making this one higher and flipping the next slider, but I didn't like how the 300s were pointing downward (made it slightly more distracting for later notes)<\/span>00:07:630 (2) - ^ (X256,Y208) Basically the same thing about the 300 being slightly more distracting if you move it up and if I move it up, I have a slight overlap with 4 that I really don't want to mess with. <\/span>00:31:938 (4) - design a new pattern for suiting the tone I edited my slider to have more of an S shape, but I did want to keep the elongated look.<\/span>400,216,31938,2,0,B|456:232|376:272|304:288|376:304|392:328|376:312|416:312,1,160<\/pre>00:51:190 (2) - althought i dont think you would agree with me , i still wanna say that dont cover it .Especially in easy diff. Until I can think of another way to make a nice looking pattern, I want to keep it. Also, the approach circle is perfectly visible, so I don't think it is too much of an issue. Still, I know it is not the easiest arrangement in the world, and will change it if others ask as well.<\/span><\/li><\/ul><\/div><\/div><\/span>Easy^2<\/a>is fine i think.<\/div><\/div><\/span>Easy^4<\/a>00:32:420 (6) ~ 00:32:420 - i would use two notes in the two points , rather than a 1\/2 slider.The current slider follows the lyrics, so it fits for me.<\/span>00:47:981 (3) - i would replace whistle with clap00:49:104 (6) - ^00:50:388 (3) - add clap00:51:029 (6) - ^ I see what you mean by the hitsounds, so I tried redoing the pattern of hitsounds here to include more claps<\/span>.00:56:323 (1,2,3) - add finish ? Doesn't fit as well for me, so no.<\/span><\/li><\/ul><\/div><\/div>uh... would you mind having a look at my map....http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/s\/39729<\/a> Sadly I am not accepting mod request right now, but if I do get some free time, I'll look at it... (please don't expect a mod basically)<\/blockquote>Thanks a lot for modding Anshi.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Aleks719<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,436 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Aleks719<\/a>\n\n \n 2011-12-30T08:10:55+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n General<\/strong><\/span>take al ook<\/a><\/div><\/div>remove audio from video please~also you have sections with custom hitsounds, but.. no custom hitsounds in your folder! Maybe you had forgot to make full submit or something like itEasy^4<\/strong>HP+1?00:13:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove these claps or make them a bit quiet. it sounds like a gun fire. (aaaaaaand to the end of diff)look : 01:07:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - stream without claps. and sounds good. Maybe you forgot them here, but i prefer this variant.01:10:441 (3) - huh, make end on white tick (01:10:762) as here : 01:13:008 (3) for consistence.01:28:730 [T] - make end of spinner more quiet? 10% is better for meEasy^2<\/strong>00:39:479 (7) - add clap to the end00:40:281 (8) - remove clap from the start, add to end.^ sounds better and softer for me, cuz you use this rhythm (clap every 2nd white tick) at next combo. 01:27:045 (1) - finish at the end? you use it only in this diff. Remove and make spinner end more quiet, imoEasy<\/strong>HP 5? Whyyyyy? Why not HP2 for consistence with other stats?00:09:908 (4) - imo sounds better<\/a>Also you said me that i should avoid sliders with more than one reverse in easy diffs 01:28:730 [T] - make end of spinner more quiet? 10% is better for meGood luck, yea <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kirino Kousaka<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 655 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kirino Kousaka<\/a>\n\n \n 2011-12-30T08:37:07+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Made changes, and still willing to make more. >:3Got rid of most of the stacked notes.<\/span>: Tamura Yukari - Endless Story (TV Size) (blissfulyoshi) [Kirino's Easy^3].osu<\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n u555j